User talk:SkylaTruffles - Revision history

Intheworstways at 07:20, 25 May 2016

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	Okay. Not trying to sound like I am judging. I was just surprised by that ending, since it seemed like you were trying to force some set type of behavior. Not that it is good or bad. I wish more stories on here had people exhibiting good behavior, rather than bad, but was just a surprise. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 25 May 2016 (UTC)		Okay. Not trying to sound like I am judging. I was just surprised by that ending, since it seemed like you were trying to force some set type of behavior. Not that it is good or bad. I wish more stories on here had people exhibiting good behavior, rather than bad, but was just a surprise. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
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		+	== [[User:Intheworstways\|In The Worst Ways]] ==
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		+	Not being nitpicky but I noticed that your recent addition is hidden as a link at the end of another link. I went back to the previous page and noticed that since I hadn't been to the other page, the link to the Easter egg was purple while the link to the option proper was still blue.
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		+	I don't know if you know this or not, but if you want to hide Easter egg links better, you can change the color of the link text itself by putting the code for the color change inside the code for the link [[User:Intheworstways\| <font color=black>like so.</font color>]]
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		+	"Like so" in the previous sentence is a link. Otherwise someone going back to that page would see the blue unvisited easter egg link next to the purple visited link for the option. If you do know that, then I'm sorry for bothering you. If you don't then I hope this information is helpful :v. I've used it quite a few times. Good luck. --[[User:Intheworstways\|In The Worst Ways]] 07:20, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

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	Hmm, okay, one strange question. I do find it rather odd that your story allows for bad behavior development, but you abruptly end the story when someone chooses to just be selfish to one of the girls of interest. "Hey, you can have a bad personality, see, it shows your personality, but if you do, I will just end you." I mean, it is your story, and your direction, but just wanted to note that it seems like you want to force the reader to make "good" choices, even if they want to make bad choices. What if you want to be the villain of the story? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 06:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)		Hmm, okay, one strange question. I do find it rather odd that your story allows for bad behavior development, but you abruptly end the story when someone chooses to just be selfish to one of the girls of interest. "Hey, you can have a bad personality, see, it shows your personality, but if you do, I will just end you." I mean, it is your story, and your direction, but just wanted to note that it seems like you want to force the reader to make "good" choices, even if they want to make bad choices. What if you want to be the villain of the story? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 06:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
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		+	Okay. Not trying to sound like I am judging. I was just surprised by that ending, since it seemed like you were trying to force some set type of behavior. Not that it is good or bad. I wish more stories on here had people exhibiting good behavior, rather than bad, but was just a surprise. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* DirtyMeStoryTime's talk */ Just me 2 cents worth.

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DirtyMeStoryTime's talk: Just me 2 cents worth.

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	lol, now for negative criticism. You should leave a message on my talk page. Only reason I know you responded is I saw you post in your user talk in the recent changes. If I hadn't seen that, I would never have known you replied. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 06:00, 23 May 2016 (UTC)		lol, now for negative criticism. You should leave a message on my talk page. Only reason I know you responded is I saw you post in your user talk in the recent changes. If I hadn't seen that, I would never have known you replied. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 06:00, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
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		+	Hmm, okay, one strange question. I do find it rather odd that your story allows for bad behavior development, but you abruptly end the story when someone chooses to just be selfish to one of the girls of interest. "Hey, you can have a bad personality, see, it shows your personality, but if you do, I will just end you." I mean, it is your story, and your direction, but just wanted to note that it seems like you want to force the reader to make "good" choices, even if they want to make bad choices. What if you want to be the villain of the story? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 06:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* DirtyMeStoryTime's talk */ Note

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	Oh, thanks! ^^' I've been told by my peers that I play a pretty good foreplay game when it comes to erotic writing, and I suppose that's quite apparent in this story, too. Aside from that, I'm glad I managed to make my first criticism here a positive one! :3 --[[User:SkylaTruffles\|Skyla]] 03:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC)		Oh, thanks! ^^' I've been told by my peers that I play a pretty good foreplay game when it comes to erotic writing, and I suppose that's quite apparent in this story, too. Aside from that, I'm glad I managed to make my first criticism here a positive one! :3 --[[User:SkylaTruffles\|Skyla]] 03:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
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		+	lol, now for negative criticism. You should leave a message on my talk page. Only reason I know you responded is I saw you post in your user talk in the recent changes. If I hadn't seen that, I would never have known you replied. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 06:00, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

SkylaTruffles at 03:31, 23 May 2016

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	I do like that you do not start a story out with adult content, and make it seem a bit more story like than "Oh, how will we run our never ending sex marathon next". Anyways, that is all xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 03:11, 23 May 2016 (UTC)		I do like that you do not start a story out with adult content, and make it seem a bit more story like than "Oh, how will we run our never ending sex marathon next". Anyways, that is all xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 03:11, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
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		+	Oh, thanks! ^^' I've been told by my peers that I play a pretty good foreplay game when it comes to erotic writing, and I suppose that's quite apparent in this story, too. Aside from that, I'm glad I managed to make my first criticism here a positive one! :3 --[[User:SkylaTruffles\|Skyla]] 03:31, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Leave your messages here ^-^ */ No, I will leave it at == DirtyMeStoryTime's talk ==

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Leave your messages here ^-^: No, I will leave it at == DirtyMeStoryTime's talk ==

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	==Leave your messages here ^-^==		==Leave your messages here ^-^==
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		+	== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|DirtyMeStoryTime's talk]] ==
		+	Well, you mentioned you are looking for how well received your story is.
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		+	I do like that you do not start a story out with adult content, and make it seem a bit more story like than "Oh, how will we run our never ending sex marathon next". Anyways, that is all xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime\|Dirty Me]] 03:11, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

SkylaTruffles at 18:53, 21 May 2016

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	B-baka...it's not like I wanted to talk to you, or anything...		B-baka...it's not like I wanted to talk to you, or anything...

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SkylaTruffles at 18:53, 21 May 2016

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	B-baka...it's not like I wanted to talk to you, or anything...		B-baka...it's not like I wanted to talk to you, or anything...
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SkylaTruffles: Created page with 'Oh...you have a message? B-baka...it's not like I wanted to talk to you, or anything...'

2016-05-15T07:14:01Z

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