User talk:Mike bzen
From Create Your Own Story
If you are going to add to one of my stories, such as Rampage, you will keep to the same style as the rest of the story. Do other pages in the story have periods surrounding the page title? No. A page title with an incomplete sentence, starting with an ellipsis, is acceptble. A framework of periods is not. Do other pages ignore rules of English grammar, punctuating randomly and leaving people's names uncapitalized? No. Pages with poor grammar will be deleted. If you find my restrictions too strict, then please find another story to contribute to, or start your own.
And always remember to include the category and the status bar. --Platypus 11:23, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
Much better, but try to keep grammatical rules in mind. Sentences end in periods. And remember that this story is written in second person. You cannot hear what other characters are thinking and if your face is buried between your sister's boobs, you can't tell that she's smiling. --Platypus 13:53, 10 July 2012 (UTC)