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User talk:Heyoeveryone

Wizardbaker — Wed, 09 May 2012 21:26:41 GMT

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== Congratulations! ==

Hey, I can't help but notice that you've finished quite a few stories. On this site, waaaay too many writers start things and never finish them '''cough'''''I'mguiltyofthatsometimes'''''cough'''. I've read through Surviving Today 2, and I actually thought it was pretty cool. You've got a nice style, and a good imagination to fuel it. Keep up the good work! --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 11:48, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

It's good to know that you enjoyed "Megan". I love getting feedback, and as for your question for the "What If?" situation, I could perhaps do that. It might take some time, however.

Right now I've got the first page of "The Diary Of Bethany Cross" in the works, and after that I might get some work done on [[What Lies Beneath|WLB]]. After WLB and "The Diary", I'm planning on a chapter-by-chapter story that would unite the characters of "Rescue", "Megan", "WLB", and "The Diary" (Dead characters will still appear. Not sure how to explain it yet, but it'll happen) and thrust them into the potential end of the world.

The idea of a "What If?" version is a bit interesting, though. I'm wondering if you mean if Megan didn't kill herself, kill Vanessa, or if Vanessa killed Megan (which happens in one of the pages)? It could be fun to play around with all three of those ideas, really. Believe it or not, I've still got at least six kills to work in eventually in a later update - the gun and power-tools kills - I added the ending in so I could consider it "finished" for now and potentially get it to be the featured story and get it some exposure. As of now, War Pigs is still the featured (and it's quite good if you haven't read it yet), but I can certainly hope. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:29, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Apologies for getting back to you so late, but I think the first and third ideas could work out really well. The first would depend mostly on where the story goes with the idea you started with, but it could work. Reviews would be pretty good, too. Good reviews help motivate writers and constructive criticism helps them improve. The second idea reminds me a bit of Community, though. Which - don't get me wrong - is awesome on its own. Community friggin' rules. It might be harder to get to work, but that could be done too. I guess all the ideas sound good to me. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 05:29, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Hey, just saw the review, and thanks! Always awesome to get a well written review on something I wrote. As for the story only having one (true) ending, I understand completely. I actually have been toying with other endings (besides the one page where Vanessa kills Megan), including things like Vanessa killing Megan and surviving, Megan wimping out at the end and going home, Megan getting arrested, and stuff like that in my head. As you stated in the review, it's not finished yet, so there's time for me to add those in later. Oh, and I saw you said you only read one of the brutal kills. Which one? In a strange, morbid way I want to know which one it was so I can tell if I wrote it well.

Uh, anyways, besides all of that, thanks again. I'm thinking of doing my own reviews soon, and one of yours shall be in the queue. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:28, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I've actually been periodically checking "Remember" from time to time. Liking it so far. The death-gas is pretty cool, and the story so far is intriguing. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 00:09, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

==review area==
Having a section for story reviews sounds like a good idea. Writers usually like feedback, especially constructive criticism. I appreciate being invited to join the review process, but it all depends on how much time I find to work on such a thing. I already do a lot of grammatical and stylistic editing on the stories that I've contributed the most to, as well as doing various functions that are reserved for sysops. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:02, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

The two possibilities I've thought of for a review area are
*a link on the Main Page to a Review Page, like the way there's the link to the Featured Story area.
*adding third column in the story section after Name and Status that links to a review section for that story.

I'm still considering which idea I like better. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:10, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

TheElderOnes also suggested doing a combination of both. It sounds like that might be the way to go. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:11, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

== Re: I Hope you feel slightly special! ==

I don't mind the bad things you said- but how dare you not include a preview and make the score appear bigger like in the rest of your reviews!

Anyways, good review. I know I probably should focus on one character's story before moving on to another, but I get bored if I stay with just one of them for too long.

It's kind of ironic you would like Karen's story the best, because she's my least favorite of the five. Different strokes, I guess.

Thanks for the review. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 20:28, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

The problem with William is I'm not certain what choices the player will have to make while he's in Michael's custody.

I have the main ending for the story planned out, I'm just trying to decide what will happen between Michael and William that will cause them to oppose each other. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:38, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's similar to what I had planned for Michael to go after William. If you're interested in how the final act is supposed to go down between the five main characters (the true ending), I'll post it. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:48, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

Here's a brief summary. Bear in mind that these events only occur if the reader goes down a certain path.

William uses his powers to kill Michael's friends (it's ironic that you would emphasize "accidentally," because he's mostly in control by this point in the story).

William and Michael have their first showdown in a warehouse. At first, William's powers give him the edge, but he soon realizes that Michael is too much for him to handle. Michael savagely beats him in retaliation for the deaths of his friends.

Vincent arrives at Karen's home to kill her. Rebecca also arrives to kill Vincent. The two beat each other senseless, until another figure appears, and then things really go to hell.

As for the true ending, I'll just let you know that all of the endings are named after songs (hint, hint). --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 18:05, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

It's not Karen. I could go further, but that would spoil the final fates of the characters. As for the songs, they were all made before 2000.

I would like to hear what you think should happen to the five leads and their survival odds. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:36, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

== Remember ==

It was really interesting although the plot made it sound a lot like a Saw movie. The background shows a mean person and the guy capturing him sounds like a brother which didn't make a lot of sense. After all, he sounded like an enemy after the hate in the responses to questions.

For some strange reason I keep having an obligation to edit every time I see a mistake. Well, I'll check the minor edit box next time.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 06:45, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, [[Remember]] was good, so I decided to topple war pigs.(I was getting kind of sick of it being there, in any case) Hopefully I can finish the two stories I'm working on now(that I want to complete straight away) so I can start reviewing stuff as well. Keep writing [[Remember]]. I want to know more about the story!:)

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 15:47, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right, I wanted to ask for an opinion on something I thought about. Most pages don't place a letter or title before the page names. So, the only two courses that can be done,(without plowing through every story to start over) is to let certain pages overlap. [[Kill yourself]] has eleven categories. Tell me what you think, because eventually, if nothing is done, what with pages being added, page names will be so long we could let the option be clicking the stroy in itself, just to not allow overlaps.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:12, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

For example, if someone else put R, for another story, the page would be edited and it may seem like a small thing but it would get very annoying if it happens repeatedly. However, if for pages like [[Kill yourself]], the story works well, it can be some sort of intersection. It'll probably only work on endings, but it gets annoying. Once I made a page [[Die]] and it was already taken and completely inappropiate. Since it is a very small title it does seem weird. Besides, it would be easier than going through large stories, pulling them out and repasting them. It would be fine for simple stories. However, a lot go into near 100 and there is a 200 pager(The Kitty in the Window) which would probably lose pages in the process. Oh, right and it might be slightly easier to make a category, like '''Public''' to place the... public stories.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:42, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll write the page you wanted. And I hope it will be satisfactory, you can always edit it. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I want your opinion on this idea. You see, some pages are too short, so what if we used the first discussion page as a recccomendation for expansion, as some stories can be finished with 20+ pages.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 13:44, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Well, what do you think the line should look like?
''__''
Or should it be dashes?
''-''
More?
''----''
I have no idea.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 11:09, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I have an idea for Remember. See, what if he manages to reason, saying he would starve before the choice. So, if he gets food, he hears more of the people's explainations.

== Story of the year ==

Also, maybe we could have a 'Story of the Year Award'. The nominations for this award could include the stories that were featured
in the year. There would be a separate page where people can vote for a story. Voting can be done by making pages called ((
Voting: Nomination )) and people can just click on the page to vote, the amount of views that were done on that page will decide
the winner. --Heyoeveryone 23 October 2011

Well the problem with that is that the ''page views functtion'' isn´t based on individual viewers, but on how many times that page has been accsesed no matter if it was the same person. So one person could click on a link a thousand times and thus give that option a thousand votes. It´s not a functional voting system. Users would need to leave their signature on which story they vote on (a public vote so to say). Sure that system could be cheated to by creating new accounts and using them to vote. But that requiers a lot more effort, and would get suspective seeing so many new members being created and all of them voting for the same guy.

Other than that it´s seems like a fun and intruiging idea. Alternatively you could do a "story of all time" vote with the first one.

PS: Apologize for lateness of the reply.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Re: Hey, uhh ==

No, I'm not a mod. xD

I have, however, been known to patrol the recent changes to see what's been going on, and I'll visit the "uncategorized pages" at least once per site visit.

Hell, Sunday night I brought it from uncategorized 40 pages to the normal 4 (5 if you count the blanked page that I couldn't do anything about) and warned a pair of authors. I just help out around the site, seeing as I've pretty much always got the recent changes page open in another tab at all times, and I just try to lessen the workload for Platypus when he gets back on. He can handle the spammers and vandals, I'll handle the categorization. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:29, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Writing in here again, because I feel like it.

Yeah, I felt like doing a review and decided to choose the worst story on here instead of one of the best. As far as more reviews go, we'll have to see. It all depends on if I find a story I feel like reviewing. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 12:41, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Replying here again. First off, I'm flattered that you think my opinion means so much - even if I can't see how one would come to that conclusion. Now, onto what you were asking about. I think the division of "Remember" into chapters could work really well. It's a lot like I was thinking of doing for my next story, dividing it into chapters for easier access, and for people to jump back into where they were when they last were reading it.

In short, I think that putting "Remember" into chapters could be beneficial. A "chapter select" function on either the first page or a "menu page" of sorts would make it better if you did the chapters. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 02:44, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

== Long page ==

My god. 10 933 characters. That's the highest amount I've ever seen in a very long time.

There is a page on this site that counts the words on each page and list them.

http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Special:LongPages

I remeber the days when a 10.000 story was enough to get you in the number 1 spot. Oh how things have changed...

== [[Genesis]] ==

Sure, I need a break from my other projects and I need some practice on status indicators before I can do my next story, so I'll be able to do a bunch.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 10:53, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done a page. I think we should use status indicators to indicate God Levels. See how you like the new page. I figured, with the intro like that, I might as well actually make the God thing a simulation. You think we should bring in a Devil or leave him out? Or maybe we'd add him after the player reaches Heavenly.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 12:19, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

So, how do you reckon the Devil battle should be carried out? A series of acts? Or literally gauging your points? Suppose if you asked for help, it would only be answered by gods you DID help.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 00:25, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right I need some help o get a status indicator, not sure how to make one, and there's no use for a MP indicator.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:25, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

OKay, settled most. I added two paths, one where Harris immediately visits GA and one where he makes some friends on his own. At the end we should let the choice of friends determine the toughness of the enemy afterwards.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 07:40, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

If you want you can throow in more people. Right now, I have 3. Add one in english, and you make that one, if you want. I'll be focusing on the other 3.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 09:23, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Now, I'm thinking of weakening the enemy depending on the strength of the friends he chooses. So, should we have a status indicator for the friends he makes? And How DO you make those? I kinda need one for another story.
In other news, I have a new Signature
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 03:13, 13 December 2011 (UTC)

Okay. if you don't mind, I'd like you to check the first Epilogue. I'll add more content for the other 5. Tell me what you think. [[G: Ending 1]] --[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:50, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

See what you think. It was supposed to be mushy and give you a fuzzy feeling, but whoever it is lost. The Endings will increase it cheeriness and amount Harris remembers until 6 (several paths to that), where Harris can remember everything, and it's really nice, but he can also walk down the other path and get a new planet. That I will keep super-secret. it'll be a sequel, but a secret one.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 23:55, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

== Reviewed: Remember ==

So, this should probably be a double-blessing for you, as I've just added to your brain-child the [[Story_Reviews|reviews section]], and it was about your work [[Remember]]. It's [[Review:_Remember|right here]], and I hope you're cool with it. As I said in the review itself, I'd love to review it again when finished, so when you feel you've added to it sufficiently, hit me up with a message and the score will probably go up. :D [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:52, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Regarding the review, yep, it was definitely a tough review, and there's two reasons behind that: a) because I'd score 90% of what's on here with a minus figure, and; b) so when it's finished I can up that number to reflect how much more awesome it'll be! And please don't tell me the ending(s) -- I'm looking forward to finding them out when I play them myself. ;) [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:16, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

I really can't see anyone reading my review before playing the featured story. I first played [[Remember]] weeks before I was even aware of a review section. And, yeah, I'm new to the site. I've been reading the stories for a while, but only just registered so I can stop grumbling to myself about typos and do something about them. And I do have plans to write a story of my own at some point down the line, but I should probably ease myself in by adding a few pages to open projects first. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 13:23, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

== Review please? ==

Hello

I've just completed my first story [[Freedom]] and would like an expert opinion on it.

I really think this website has not seen anything like this, so I would love to have you see it.

== Review please? II ==

My friend, [[User:Watchbear13]], and I would like it, if you would do a review on our story, [[Obscura]]. It has 95 pages, right now, and is an ongoing story. Thanks! --[[User:Impalalevi1]]

== Thank You!! ==

Wow. Just, wow. I really want to thank you for giving your opinion on my story [[The Undead]]. Coming from you, it meant a lot. I also really liked what you recommended about Jane's husband being a zombie. I really like that idea and want to branch out on it later in the story. It's a shame that you don't have a lot of time, though. I also understand that you're working on "Remember", so maybe, if you want, I could help you a little and you could help me. I don't know. It was just a thought. Anyway, I just wanted to give you a big thanks, because you and [[User: Snowball|Snowball]] are like my cyao idols. --[[User: Cyclops| Cyclops]] 4:17 pm, April 10 2012

== Question about your review ==
Hey, just read that review you did of my Freedom story, and I noticed the examples you showed for endings didn't actually happen in the story. Maybe I have a broken link in there or something but I'm pretty sure I never wrote that stuff down.

== Fixed the link ==
Thanks for replying about the review thing. I've replaced the link, and I believe this was along the lines of what I originally intended for it to say. Thanks again for being so willing to edit the review. [[User: Wizardbaker| Wizardbaker]]

User talk:Heyoeveryone

Wizardbaker — Wed, 09 May 2012 21:25:34 GMT

Wizardbaker: /* Fixed the link */

User talk:Heyoeveryone

Wizardbaker — Wed, 09 May 2012 21:25:16 GMT

Wizardbaker:

I'll just stay at home

Wizardbaker — Wed, 09 May 2012 21:19:54 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Ok fine, stay at home. You get a call from your boss, and he fires you. Your family disowns you. Your friends despise you. And you spend the rest of your life miserable. Now…'

Ok fine, stay at home.

You get a call from your boss, and he fires you.

Your family disowns you.

Your friends despise you.

And you spend the rest of your life miserable.

Now stop making stupid choices and go start the story over again.

[[Category:Freedom]]

Something sugary

Wizardbaker — Wed, 09 May 2012 21:11:38 GMT

Wizardbaker:

After you eat a fine and hardy breakfast, and look at the clock on the wall.

'''OH NO!'''

You're late for work!

You run to the car outside

[[Run to my car]]

[[I'll just stay at home]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

User talk:Heyoeveryone

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Apr 2012 22:02:14 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Talk:Review: Freedom

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Apr 2012 21:54:35 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with '== Um...wait == The examples that are shown in this review are not even in the story, what's up with that?'

== Um...wait ==
The examples that are shown in this review are not even in the story, what's up with that?

Sandbox

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 05:13:40 GMT

Wizardbaker:

If you wish to play in sand, please do so on this page. After you are done, please revert this page so others may use it.

If you do not revert this page, it will be reverted for you. If you intend to use this page to start a story, please read the instructions in the [[Tutorial]] and follow the directions to start a story properly. This page is for experimentation only and nothing posted on this page will remain here permanently.

{{Sandbox|Health=100|Location=Bathroom}}

Just learning how to put up images. --Heyoeveryone

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3376/3226645828_42dac507dc.jpg

[[Category:System Pages]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}

Once there was a crazy man.

{{Status|Equipment=''Craaziness''|Health=94|MP=100|Level=0}}

Hmmmm, that works out.

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{{Status|Equipment=cake|Health=100|MP=100|}}

Sandbox

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 05:11:28 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Talk:Main Page

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 04:19:52 GMT

Wizardbaker: /* How to know people are watching? */ new section

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Picures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

Main Page

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 03:15:18 GMT

Wizardbaker: /* PG13 Stories */

== Choose Your Own Adventure ==

Choose Your Own Adventure is a wiki that contains stories where the reader assumes the role of the main character. In each page you choose how the story should progress. If you don't see an option that you would like to pursue, click the edit tab on the top of the page and add a new path to the page. Then you get to write in your own adventure for the character.

Please note that this site is specifically for Choose Your Own Adventure stories. If you choose to post stories that have no choices, your story will be deleted as such stories are not appropriate for this site.

We currently have [[Special:Statistics|{{NUMBEROFARTICLES}}]] [[Special:Allpages|articles]].

If you're new to this site, please read our [[Tutorial]] to learn how to edit stories.

[[How to Edit]]

[[Idea Pitches]]

*Hint: If you don't care enough about your writing to attempt to use proper grammar or spelling, chances are people won't care to read it. If grammar isn't your strong suit, you may want to look over some [[Grammatical Tips]].

If you want to practice editing, you should do so on the [[Sandbox]].

== [[Featured CYOA Nominations|Featured Story]] ==
[[Remember]]
 You awake to find yourself caught and placed in a room with no recollection about yourself.

You are stuck in a room with only a walkie-talkie linked to your captor and two people in nearby rooms that you cannot contact. A choice of which person leaves and which two starve to death looming ahead, you have to try to find out about yourself.

Can you? Nominated by [[User:Snowball|Snowball]]

'''WARNING: Some pages include coarse language. Some pages are also a bit disgusting.'''

*[[Featured CYOA Nominations]]

*[[Previous Featured Stories]]

*[[How to feature a story]]

==[[Story Reviews]]==
Look here for reviews of existing stories or to add your own reviews. This is still new though, so don't expect your favourite story to be reviewed just yet. Try to stick to constructive criticism only. Deliberate insults or flaming will be deleted.

If you have any questions concerning this section, or you want a certain story to be reviewed and you can't bothered to do it yourself, don't be afraid and ask [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]].

==Family-Friendly Stories==
'''FOR ALL AGES:'''
Suitable for anyone with Basic Reading Level skills. Please keep these G-PG. Please remove any other content that exceeds this.
{|
|Story||Status
|-
|[[Abigail's Tale]]||(28 pages, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Afraid of the Dark]] (horror) || (44 pages) (Under construction last update 10/27/09 story now coherent)
|-
|[[ An Adventure...]]|| (56+ pages)
|-
|[[Another Story Of Another Random Person]]||(93+ pages)
|-
|[[Areas 45-51]]|| (Do not edit)
|-
|[[BauBaus!]] (for critter lovers and trainers alike!)|| (20+ pages,under construction)
|-
|[[Bored]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Bus Troubles]]|| (23 pages)
|-
|[[ Calloway Adventure]]|| (17 pages)
|-
|[[Carnival]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Chocolate Man]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Choose Your Own Adventure Adventure]]|| (Don't go loco and keep the pages long.) [[Special:Longpages]]
|-
|[[Christmas Time]]|| (21 pages) please don't edit.
|-
|[[The Crimes which FAIL]]|| Public, but no non-crime options except for [[Kill yourself]]
|-
|[[ DUDE WHERES MY CAR]]|| (14 pages)
|-
|[[Example uh]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ the get away]]|| (13 pages)
|-
|[[A Giant Chocolate Chip Cookie]] || (45+ pages)
|-
|[[ The Golden Banana]]|| (17 pages)
|-
|[[Goosebumps in Horrorland]] || (75+ pages)
|-
|[[Greek Heroes]] || [WIP] You play the roll of an aspiring Greek hero. Please do not edit.
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows]]|| (finished for me, expand the pages, Most are vague.)
|-
|[[Harry Potter]] And the Adventure Chosen by You||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[horror on the subway]]||(w.i.p please don't edit)
|-
|[[Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[ HUNGER]]|| (0+ pages DO NOT EDIT ENGLISH PROJECT)
|-
|[[Jake vs the Mayor of Dragon Valley]]|| (17 pages)
|-
|[[Kalew]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Kitty in the Window]] (Now with PG, hard to find LOTR expansion!)|| (450+ pages)
|-
|[[Limerick]]|| (Open to public. Use only Limericks)
|-
|[[Madman's Mansion]]|| (50+ pages; open to public, work on it)
|-
|[[Mario and Luigi: Superstar Saga]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[ Mayday]]|| (13 pages)
|-
|[[Mockery]]|| (Do not Edit Unless asked to)
|-
|[[ My Crazy Ranch]]|| (18+ pages)
|-
|[[ Newspaper Delivery]]|| (23 pages)
|-
|[[Penguins (The Frozen Adventure)]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[Penguins (just click "Three times a day")]] || (~59 pages) Edit well.
|-
|[[Portal 3: Wheatley Returns]] Under Construction
|-
|[[Percy Jackson]]: The adventures of a demigod || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Point Of View]] || (Pick up a dead story or just throw it in the pit.
|-
|[[Princess Carkegee]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[ A Random Day ]]|| (45 pages)
|-
|[[Revisiting the Sneetches]]|| (WIP Feel Free to Edit)
|-
|[[ School's only 4 some people!]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Secretpage|The secrets of SECRETPAGE]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[sewer wars]]||(11 pages)
|-
|[[Short and Funny.]]||(11 pages)
|-
|[[ Snowboarding at the slope]]|| (19 pages)
|-
|[[Spacewars with GDS ]]|| (20 pages)
|-
|[[ Stealing Marathon]]|| (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Time Machine]]||(15+ page)
|-
|[[Time Vortex]]|| (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]|| (W.I.P PLEASE DO NOT EDIT! As soon as there is enough content, please review!)
|-
|[[Tutorial]]||(Begun 10/28/09. If you have any wisdom to impart, please add to the story.)
|-
|[[Unicorn Tamer]]||(5+ pages)
|-
|[[Visiting the Zoo]] || (130+ pages)
|-
|[[White Rooms]]|| (WIP, no edits please)
|-
|[[You Gotta Read This]]||(12 pages)
|-
|}

==PG13 Stories==
'''FOR 10+:''' For more advanced readers. Please keep these G - PG-13. Please remove any content that exceeds this.

{|
|-
|[[A basic, normal, Choose-Your-Own-Adventure]] Or '''Piano Lessons'''|| (17+ pages)
|-
|[[Adventure in the City]]|| (Sigh. You may edit, but please do not go crazy. AND KEEP IT G!)
|-
|[[2012]]||(12 pages violent disaster sequences.)
|-
|[[ Adventures in Space ]]|| (40+ pages, edit respectfully)
|-
|[[ Adventures in the Kingdom]]|| (WIP Please do not edit.)
|-
|[[Adventure RPG 1]]|| (WIP- free to edit) (Chapter One)
|-
|[[Adventure RPG 2]]|| (Same as before)
|-
|[[Aliens in the future]] (NEW)
|-
|[[The Amazing Adventure]] || (40+ pages DO NOT EDIT!!!)
|-
|-
|[[An Adventurous and Magical Tale]] || (WIP Expanded almost daily! Public but write only on blank pages. DO NOT DELETE ANYTHING PLEASE. )
|-
|[[ Anna and the Aliens]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Apocalyptic zombie attack]]|| ( 27 pages) (Public story please edit)
|-
|[[At the Mall with Weevil]] || (15+ pages; [[User:Charlotte5|Charlotte5]] currently editing; WIP)
|-
|[[Atom Kid|Atom Kid (a super hero adventure)]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Avast!]] A Pirate Story || (160+ pages, WIP, contact me before editing)
|-
|[[Average Guy]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Battle of the Best]] || (24+ pages)
|-
|[[ Becoming friends with a Wild horse]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Boromir's Quest (an LOTR adventure)]] || (90+ pages)
|-
|[[The Boss]] || (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Cell]] || (How will you define life?)
|-
|[[Character Creation]]|| (50+)
|-
|[[ Classic Roguelike]]|| (WIP, Please do not edit!)
|-
|[[ Class Dissmissed]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[The Clown]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[To Court!]] || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
|-
|[[Crazy Fantasy Adventure]] || (15+ pages)
|-
||[[Cross the Street]] || (11 pages made by ailenbear123)
|-
|[[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)]] || (337 pages)
|-
|[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] || (375+ pages; [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] currently editing)
|-
|[[Cyberspace Invaders]]||(11 pages)
|-
|[[DARKNESS]]|| (100+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day as a Hobo]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day in the Life (An action adventure story)]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Day In the Life of a Total Loser]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Day of Doom]]||(10+ pages Do not edit please By Allbis.)
|-
|[[Dead Kid]] || (100+ pages)
|-
|[[Death by zombies]] || (40+ pages)
|-
|[[No more underwear]] || (free to edit)
|-
|[[Digimon Adventure 03]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Digimon Transverse]] || (40+ pages, open to public; fixed a lot of in-game bugs, making editing the options less of a pain now)
|-
|[[Dirt biking in the trails]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball Adventure]] || (About 24+ pages, only edit unmade pages please, add on if you'd like though.)
|-
|[[Dragonball Z Adventure]] || (DO NOT EDIT +0)
|-
|[[Dr. Dero's Journey]] || (10+ pages, 100% open to pub.)
|-
|[[Dragon Quest]] || (under construction)
|-
|[[ Dragon's Life]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Dungeon]] (A CLASSIC DUNGEON CRAWL!)||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Easily Random]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[ Endless Possibility]]|| (Under construction - feel free to edit)
|-
|[[Escape]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[ Escaping Beelzebub]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Element]] || (W.I.P Free to Editing)
|-
|[[Elephant Quest]]|| (W.I.P. Do not edit!)
|-
|[[An Epic Adventure]] || (50+ pages) NO EDITING PLEASE. Feel free to play!
|-
|[[Evolution|Evolution (an adventure of insignificance)]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Evolution II]] || (20 pages)
|-
|[[Fantasy Quest]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[Freedom]] || (an experiment of free will)
|-
|[[To the Future]] || (Under construction, no editing please)
|-
|[[ the first hunt ]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[food chain train ]]|| (Wip)
|-
|[[ The Furr Adventure ]]|| (0+ pages)
|-
|[[Genesis]] || (WIP, Side project, Under Construction)
|-
|[[Gloria]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Grasstealth]]|| (WIP 5+ pages Paired with [[Grasstealth Items]])
|-
|[[ Greek Myth ]]|| (WIP please edit)
|-
|[[Haunted Elementary]]||(20+ pages, WIP, please don't edit)
|-
|[[Haunted Mountain]]||New, please don't edit
|-
|[[High School 2]]|| (3+ pages. Feel free to edit.)
|-
|[[HoboPalooza]]||(WIP Please do not edit)
|-
|[[Hobo Sapiens]]||(32+ Pages, then proceed to life as a rat)
|-
|[[Humanity]]||( General Winthrop has decided to make this unfinished story free for the masses to edit. Just stick to the main idea, and keep it serious...)
|-
|[[Hunting again for Red October]] || (100+ pages)
|-
|[[ Imara's life in the naruto world ]]|| (Yeah, just go ahead and edit, but stick to the storyline)
|-
|[[Infection]] || (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Is Hunger Your Game?]] || (50+ pages) DO NOT EDIT
|-
|[[It's Choose Your Own Adventure Time!]] || 51 Pages (partially finished)
|-
|[[Jo-Ann the Librarian (a Comedy)]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[ Jimmy's Big Adventure]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Kidnapped!]]|| (26 pages, please don't edit)
|-
|[[THE KINGDOM OF ADVENTURE!]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[The Kitty Thief]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Life of a rat]]|| (20+ pages, now you may edit, but first pass the hobo adventure)
|-
|[[The End Of Life As We Know It]]|| (0+ pages) (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[The Life of a School Kid]]|| (30+ pages '''Updating Again!''')
|-
|[[The Light in the Wood]] || (11+ pages)
|-
|[[ Little Miss Disaster]]|| (19+ pages)
|-
|[[Lina Popintop's Adventure]]|| (Work In Progress PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
||[[Livin' like a hobo]]|| (Do not edit)
|-
|[[LoA's Adventure]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Love and fireballs]] || (s'like...it's not done yet, don't edit,k?)
|-
|[[A love story]] (NEW) (Free for all)
|-
|[[Magic Keyboard]]|| (New, under construction, and kinda stupid)
|-
|[[ Mall Bunny]]|| (18+ pages)
|-
|[[The many rooms]] || (200+ pages)
|-
|[[Mario's many adventures]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Married Life]] || (10 pages currently, New, Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Memory Makers]]|| (A Science Fiction game about a young man who can't remember his past. WIP--Please DO NOT Edit!)
|-
|[[Minotaur's Laberynth]] || (18+ pages)
|-
|[[The Mirror]] || (Edit all you want. Just keep in the storyline, please! Currently around 20 pages)
|-
|[[Morrowind|Morrowind (An exciting action adventure)]] || (25+pages)
|-
|[[My WWE]] || (Brand new, feel free to add on.)
|-
|[[The Mystical quest for Technochocolate]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[Nancy's Notable Narratives]] || (39+ pages--WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[A Normal Life]]
|-
|[[Naruto Dating (Girl Version)]] (Romance) || (Pages are 12 so far, but it's a WIP, so do not edit)
|-
|[[Naruto Dating (Guy Version)]] (Romance) || (WIP... just started, don't edit!)
|-

[[New kid]] ( under construction. Don't edit.)

|[[Night]]|| (Do not edit/WIP)
|-
|[[Nightcaps]] || (10+ Pages)
|-
|[[Nintendo Quest]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[The Night That Will Never Be Forgotten (A Titanic CYOA)]] || (W.I.P, please don't edit without permission)
|-
|[[Niro]]|| (Just Started, please don't edit quite yet)
|-
|[[Of Tumbleweeds And Teenagers]] || (UNDER CONSTRUCTION)
|-
|[[o.c.d. story]] || (? pages, w.i.p. please don't edit)
|-
|[[Organisation]] || (30+ pages WIP-DO NOT EDIT!!!!!)
|-
|[[Organism]] || (10+ pages, WIP, please DO NOT EDIT, Thank you.)
|-
|[[ Pac Man VS E.C.]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[A Penguin Named Evan]] || (15+ Pages)
|-
|[[Phoenix Wright: A new adventure]] || (25+ Pages W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT!)
|-
|[[Pirates! A High Seas Adventure]]|| (50+ Pages)
|-
|[[Pirates of the Caribbean (action-adventure)]] ||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Planet of the Apes]]|| (15+ pages) (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Platypus]]|| (8 pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Poke]]||(3 pages)
|-
|[[Pokemon Ranger: Lavender Nightmare]]|| (Just started, feel free to add)
|-
|[[Pokemon Legends]]|| (W.I.P. Don't edit)
|-
|[[Pokemon - Your Adventure]] ||(45+ pages)
|-
|[[Portal]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Puppy Love]]|| (Don't edit)
|-
|[[Quest of the magician]] || (200+ pages)
|-
|[[Questscape]] || (W.I.P., Do not edit)
|-
|[[Ralos]] ||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[Random]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions]] || (66 pages-Completed)
|-
|[[A Random Adventure of Random Proportions 2: More Random]] || (WIP, Feel Free to Edit)
|-
|[[A Random Day]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Rebirth]]|| (New Story)
|-
|[[Red Mercenary]] || (10+ pages)
|-
|[[ Revolt (A United States Futuristic Revolution Story)]]|| (5+ pages PLEASE DO NOT EDIT UNTIL I SAY SO)
|-
|[[Rick Roll'd Adventure]] || (Completed)
|-
|[[Rodeo Girl]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Roleplay]] || (Under Construction...)
|-
|[[ The Roller coaster]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Roman Demigod]]|| (WIP PLEASE EDIT FREELY)
|-
|[[Russian Blue]]|| (0+ pages, under construction by projectM1K3, no other editors atm)
|-
|[[Sabatoge (a Star Trek: TNG adventure)]] || (About 10 pages)
|-
|[[Save YouTube Poop!!! ]](Definitely rated PG-13 || (15 pages)
|-
|[[Second Life]]|| (5+ Pages, please edit!)
|-
|[[The_secret_island_of_Utobi|The Secret Island of Utobi]] || (38 pages)
|-
|[[sewer wars]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Shadows of the Past]]||(5+ pages)
|-
|[[ Show off]]|| (wip)
|-
|[[ Silent hill]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Sixty Minutes]]|| (0 Pages)
|-
|[[ Soul Savor]]|| (W.I.P. New)
|-
|[[Spork| Spork: An RPG]] || (100+ pages and third town in progress, please don't edit, put any suggestions in Spork discussion)
|-
|[[Star trek]] (Another adventure) || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Trek: The Original Series]] || (WIP, If you've seen the 60's show, you can go ahead and edit.)
|-
|[[Star Wars: A New Adventure]] || (17 pages, a work in progress but I would like people to help as long as they stick to the story)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Jedi Chronicles ]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Combat Training ]] || (feel free to edit, but stay on the story line)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Republic]] || (26 pages)
|-
|[[Story Of My Life]] || (15 pages)
|-
|[[Subject 413]] || (100+ pages, w.i.p, NOW OPEN TO ADDITIONS)
|-
|[[Superhero]] || (25+ pages Its public, so you can add on as well)
|-
|[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]] || (150 + pages)
|-
|[[Superwhodunnit]]|| (0+ pages, please don't edit, at least for now)
|-
|[[Survey]] || (DO NOT EDIT!!!!)
|-
|[[Survival of the Colossi]] || (10+ pages, only edit UNWRITTEN (redlinked) pages)
|-
|[[ Surviving a Hetalia Dream]]|| (New story. Touch and die.)
|-
|[[Surviving Today]] || (20 Pages, its not alot since its only one day)(Finished!)
|-
|[[Survivng Today: The Traffic Jam|Surviving Today: The Traffic Jam]] || (35+ Pages! Not a sequel)(Finished!)
|-
|[[A Tasty Breakfast]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Technomancer]]|| (Work In Progress)
|-
|[[Teddy and Ryan's Adventure]]|| (3+ pages, WORK IN PROGRESS DO NOT TOUCH thank you :-])
|-
|[[Teehee!]] || (60+ Pages!) (Public) (4 Stories in 1)
|-
|[[Temporal]]|| (Work In Progress DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[The Danger Theory]]|| (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Light in the Wood]] || (11+ pages)
|-
|[[Time Chase]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Transylvanian terror]]||(150+ pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Tribute|Tribute: The Greatest and Best Quest in the World]] || (14+ pages)
|-
|[[The Trigger And The Hilt]] (a free-roaming action game) || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[To Kill a Salesman]] Do not edit WIP
|-
||[[True Dungeon]]|| (0+ pages DO NOT EDIT W.I.P)
|-
|[[ Try Not To Die ]]|| (45 Pages- COMPLETED; please don't edit)
|-
|[[ Trying to Wake Up]]|| (25+ pages so far. WIP)
|-
|[[The Ultimate Battle]] ||(65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Unknown...]]|| (Under Construct, Do whatever you wish but keep it serious and literate!)
|-
|[[Vaped!]]||(Sci-fi, just started.)
|-
|[[ The Walk]]||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Wanna be a hobo?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[War of Nations]]|| (65+ pages)
|-
|[[War zone]]|| (20+ pages)(W.i.p)(PLEASE DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Warphole]]|| (5+ pages, Go [[User:CLOU!7|here]] for what I need you to know before you edit)
|-
|[[The Warp]]|| (Only Grammar and Spelling Edits Please)
|-
|[[What have they done?]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[What Happens In The Forest]] || (WIP)
|-
|[[Windy Lea Stories]]|| (WIP, please don't edit!)
|-
|[[Worlds End]] (A game of survival)||(55+ pages)
|-
|[[WW2]] || (6+ pages, please don't edit unless asked to. Original writers seem to have abanoned this.)
|-
|[[WW2: Night Raid]] || (50+ pages)
|-
|[[XMachetter, the dark figure, and the Jewel]]
|-
|[[You're never getting out]]|| {Edit to make it as long as possible}
|-
|[[Your Life]] || (Under Construction, Please Do NOT Edit.)
|-
|[[ Your Story]]|| (, Don't Edit, Por favor, 0+ pages)
|-
|[[Z-Day]] || (Under Construction, by skullphantom)
|-
|[[ZX1]] || (54+ pages. PUBLIC!)
|-
|[[ Pick Pocket]]|| (WIP Do Not Edit)
|-
{|

==Quizzes and Challenges==
'''Not actually stories, but a chance to test your knowledge (or your luck):'''

|-
|[[Digimon Quizo'!]] || (35+ pages)
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|[[Quiz Show]] || (20+ pages)
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|[[A Quizzy Show]]||(10 pages)
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|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors]] || (25 pages)
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|[[Rock, Paper, Scissors 2]] || (110+ pages)
|-
|[[The Rock Paper Scissors game]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Trivia Time]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz]] || (30+ pages)
|-
|[[The video game quiz 2]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[The Ultimate MMA quiz game!]] || (65+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Game Trivia I]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[Video Games]]|| (Finished, pretty lame, but it's my first.)
|-
|}

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

{|
|Story||
Status
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|[[1943]]|| Open
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|[[5,000 B.C.]]||(Public)
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|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]|| (WIP)
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|[[Assassins of the CIA]]|| (don't edit!)
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|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||(25 pages)(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||(70 pages)(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||(50+ pages)
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| (101+ pages)
|-
|[[Awake]] || (45 pages)
|-
|[[Badassery]] || (20+ pages)
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || (10+ pages, open for editing)
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || (200+ pages) Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || (1+ pages)(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| (25+ pages, W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] || (Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Catacombs]] (WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[City Life]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||(22+ pages)
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| (10+ pages) Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||(12+ pages)
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| ({{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} pages)(Public)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| (34+ pages)
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||(24+ pages)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| (Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| (Under construction)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| (Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| (35+ pages)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| (New! 35 pages)
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| (30+ pages)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || (Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || (Please Edit!)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||(175+ pages)
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||(20 pages)
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || (New story, under construction)
|-
|[[ Harry Potter Fanfiction Adventure]]|| (WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| (Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| (0+ pages) (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| (25+ Pages, Public)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| (5 pages) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||(10+ pages)
|-
|[[In The Army]] || (25+ pages)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| (the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| (JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| (Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Life]] (Just the way you wanted it) Remake!
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]|| (3+ Pages) (Public)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] || (Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||(175+ pages)(11 stories)
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| (JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[ Megaman: mature edition ]]|| (Public)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||(30+ pages)
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| (0+ pages-just began)
|-
|[[A New Life]]||(40+ pages Public)
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || (Just Started, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| (don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || (just started)
|-
|[[Oddworld: Abe's Revolution]] || (W.I.P Please don't edit.)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || (I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || (Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[out in the woods]] ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| (No editing please)
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||(30+ pages Open to Public)
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||(5+ Pages, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||(333+ pages)
|-
|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||(100+ pages)
|-
|[[Random III]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Random Four]]|| (25+ pages)
|-
|[[Remember]] || (Do Not Edit Without Permission) (60+ Pages)('''<--Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| (36 pages) (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| (300+ pages under work do not modify without permission please.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || (53 pages. Do NOT edit!.)
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || (W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||(10+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[School Life]]|| (WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Seek]]|| (W.I.P. 10+ pages. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Serial X]]|| (25+ pages. Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.]]|| (7/15/10 12+ pages ((Do not edit)))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||(250+ pages)(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing)
|-
|[[Slasher]]||(20+ pages)
|-
|[[Smile]]|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| (38+ pages, WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.)
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || (Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[soul evolution]]|| (0+ pages,public but keep it serious)
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || (First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||(3+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||(90+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||(40+ pages)
|-
|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]||(Just started, feel free to add on)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[Survival]] || (30+ pages W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Super Survival]] || (0+ pages WIP)
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||(40+ pages, started 6/24/09)
|-
|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[The Random Quota]] ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])
|-
|[[The Wasteland]]||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)
|-
|[[Thought Of Me]]||(200+ pages)
|-
|[[ To be named later ]]|| (IDK pages)*Bentenmike*
|-
|[[ Triforce ]]|| (WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
|-
|[[Violence]]|| (+20 Pages, in progress)
|-
|[[ war in Europe ]]|| (100+ pages)
|-
|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || (150+ pages, in progress)
|-
|[[Week of the Zombies]]||(25+ pages)
|-
|[[World Undone]] || (15+ pages)
|-
|[[Yet Another Zombie Story]] || (Unknown+ pages If you Edit Keep It True)
|-
|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || (12 People can work on this)
|-
|[[Zach]]||(15+ pages)
|-
|[[Zombies]] || (Just started)
|-
|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| (WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Zombie blood]]||(35+ pages)
|-
|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| (35+ pages wip)
|-
|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||(50+ Pages,Work on It, It's Public)
|-
|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] ||(Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Zombies: This is getting really old.]] || (Go ahead and edit. it's one more zombie story.)
|-
|[[Zombehz]] ||(10+ Pages,please don't edit!)
|}

==Adult Stories==
[[Adult Stories|Click here]] to enter the adult section. Do not enter if you are underage or if you are offended by adult material.

==[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]==
Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time will be dropped into the Pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back here on the Main Page if you get inspired and add to one.

==Creating a Story==
If you have an idea for a story, you might like to try [[Idea Pitches|pitching your idea to other users]] and seeing how interested people might be in playing your story, what you could do to make playing your story fun, and who might be interested in collaborating with you to write it. Once you have done that, you can create it by entering your desired name for the Story into the search box and clicking '''Go'''. If the name has not already been taken, click this exact title to start the story. There are three general types of story. The first is the branching-plot story (an example of this is the Choose Your Own Adventure series of gamebooks), which require the reader to make choices but are otherwise like a regular novel. The second type is the role-playing game adventure, which combines the branching-plot novel with simple role-playing rules such as attack points and monster battles. The third type is the trivia quiz, where the player must answer questions as if they were on a game show.

==Instructions==
===Starting Template===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]
</nowiki>
</pre>

The next to the last line here is the ''status indicator''. The status indicator shown here is the ''basic'' status indicator. Different stories use different status indicators, and some use none at all. Look at the edit screen for the page you're starting from and copy that status indicator to the new page you're adding. Modify as necessary.

Every page should have the category at the bottom. This keeps track of all the pages in the story. You can copy the category line from the previous page to the one you're working on. The category, obviously, is ''never'' 'name of story you're working on'. You type in the actual name of the story.

For additional help in wiki syntax, click [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Editing here]

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear red on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.

To avoid accidentally crossing with other users' stories, it may be best to create pages with more than just an option name, like [[Unicorns]] or [[Open your eyes]]. Instead, when you create a new page, call it [[You have to slay The Dragon/_Page 1]] or [[YOUR CRAZY/Give up]]. You can have the link name be whatever you want though, like this:
<nowiki>[[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]]</nowiki> will appear as [[You have to slay The Dragon|Enter The Dragon's Lair]] on the page.

This is for fun!

===Tips===
*Don't give too many options when starting a new story and leave half of them redlinked. Focus on a small number of story threads at first.
*Outline a general plan for what the intention of your story is when you start it: What genre and themes it belongs to.
*As alternative to plain formatting for your story, you may try using ''Italics'' to write the Narration, regular Font for character Dialogue and '''Bold''' for Character/Item/Location names or important developments. Example: ''As you walked through the'' '''Forest''', ''you heard a young girl calling out for you.'' "Jack! Wait for me! I have a gift for you!" ''Kate runs up to you and gives you the'' '''MacGuffin'''. Whatever style you choose, try to keep it consistent throughout the story.
*If you are having difficulty spacing out paragraphs, you can use <nowiki> </nowiki>. Example:
*<nowiki>This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.</nowiki> will show as:
This is an example of how to break up paragraphs on a page. This is the same example.
*Don't inject crude humor into a story that's intended to be played straight.
*Please categorize the pages in your story. For example, if your story is called "The Story", then please add <nowiki>[[Category:The Story]]</nowiki> to each new page you create for your story.

==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*For each page where you kill the player's character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where s/he can go on.
*Please stick to the theme and setting of the story, and discuss ideas for major changes on the discussion pages. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly.
*'''ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!''' Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted.

==To Do List==
*Go through and fix or remove status indicators from pages.
**Some are not needed in stories and were copied and pasted from the template.
**Some are missing the level and MP from the line of code.
*Remove off-topic pages.
*Correct capitalization and spelling mistakes.
*Add a basic, or main, timeline of background events during the period that the character is making choices in - those events are usually out of the character's control. This will help add consistency.
*Pages with major spelling, grammar or other problems, but not problems that render the page spam and a candidate for deletion, should be categorized in the Pages Requiring Attention Category to get other editors to help fix it up. If a page is not yet complete, add it to Category:Pages Under Construction so people know the editor is still working on it and it does not need to have someone improve it.
*Story Endings should be categorized with Category:Endings.

==Meta-Games==
*[[CYOA Drinking Game]] (Teen/Adult, though you can play with soda if you're under the minimum age for drinking alcohol.)
*[[You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When|You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When...]]

[[Category: System Pages]]

User:Wizardbaker

Wizardbaker — Sat, 28 Jan 2012 02:53:07 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Hey everyone. Come here and tell me what you think of my work. Criticism Reviews Comments I want them Thanks'

Hey everyone. Come here and tell me what you think of my work.

Criticism

Reviews

Comments

I want them

Thanks

Turn the machine off

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 03:18:34 GMT

Wizardbaker:

The machine turns off, the screens turn to static, and everyone falls out of their cocoons.

You and the freed people march away from this place, and exit into the real world. No one stops you.

You, and all of these people are now free.

No one will stop you from doing what you wish.

You still have questions, but they don't matter. You know can do whatever you want now, with no machine or man telling you what to think.

'''Or how to feel'''

and you are...

'''happy'''

THE END

[[Category:Freedom]]

User talk:Heyoeveryone

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 02:51:56 GMT

Wizardbaker: /* Review please? */

User talk:Heyoeveryone

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 02:49:18 GMT

Wizardbaker: /* Review please? */ new section

== Congratulations! ==

Hey, I can't help but notice that you've finished quite a few stories. On this site, waaaay too many writers start things and never finish them '''cough'''''I'mguiltyofthatsometimes'''''cough'''. I've read through Surviving Today 2, and I actually thought it was pretty cool. You've got a nice style, and a good imagination to fuel it. Keep up the good work! --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 11:48, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

It's good to know that you enjoyed "Megan". I love getting feedback, and as for your question for the "What If?" situation, I could perhaps do that. It might take some time, however.

Right now I've got the first page of "The Diary Of Bethany Cross" in the works, and after that I might get some work done on [[What Lies Beneath|WLB]]. After WLB and "The Diary", I'm planning on a chapter-by-chapter story that would unite the characters of "Rescue", "Megan", "WLB", and "The Diary" (Dead characters will still appear. Not sure how to explain it yet, but it'll happen) and thrust them into the potential end of the world.

The idea of a "What If?" version is a bit interesting, though. I'm wondering if you mean if Megan didn't kill herself, kill Vanessa, or if Vanessa killed Megan (which happens in one of the pages)? It could be fun to play around with all three of those ideas, really. Believe it or not, I've still got at least six kills to work in eventually in a later update - the gun and power-tools kills - I added the ending in so I could consider it "finished" for now and potentially get it to be the featured story and get it some exposure. As of now, War Pigs is still the featured (and it's quite good if you haven't read it yet), but I can certainly hope. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:29, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Apologies for getting back to you so late, but I think the first and third ideas could work out really well. The first would depend mostly on where the story goes with the idea you started with, but it could work. Reviews would be pretty good, too. Good reviews help motivate writers and constructive criticism helps them improve. The second idea reminds me a bit of Community, though. Which - don't get me wrong - is awesome on its own. Community friggin' rules. It might be harder to get to work, but that could be done too. I guess all the ideas sound good to me. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 05:29, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Hey, just saw the review, and thanks! Always awesome to get a well written review on something I wrote. As for the story only having one (true) ending, I understand completely. I actually have been toying with other endings (besides the one page where Vanessa kills Megan), including things like Vanessa killing Megan and surviving, Megan wimping out at the end and going home, Megan getting arrested, and stuff like that in my head. As you stated in the review, it's not finished yet, so there's time for me to add those in later. Oh, and I saw you said you only read one of the brutal kills. Which one? In a strange, morbid way I want to know which one it was so I can tell if I wrote it well.

Uh, anyways, besides all of that, thanks again. I'm thinking of doing my own reviews soon, and one of yours shall be in the queue. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 22:28, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I've actually been periodically checking "Remember" from time to time. Liking it so far. The death-gas is pretty cool, and the story so far is intriguing. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 00:09, 20 October 2011 (UTC)

==review area==
Having a section for story reviews sounds like a good idea. Writers usually like feedback, especially constructive criticism. I appreciate being invited to join the review process, but it all depends on how much time I find to work on such a thing. I already do a lot of grammatical and stylistic editing on the stories that I've contributed the most to, as well as doing various functions that are reserved for sysops. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:02, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

The two possibilities I've thought of for a review area are
*a link on the Main Page to a Review Page, like the way there's the link to the Featured Story area.
*adding third column in the story section after Name and Status that links to a review section for that story.

I'm still considering which idea I like better. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:10, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

TheElderOnes also suggested doing a combination of both. It sounds like that might be the way to go. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:11, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

== Re: I Hope you feel slightly special! ==

I don't mind the bad things you said- but how dare you not include a preview and make the score appear bigger like in the rest of your reviews!

Anyways, good review. I know I probably should focus on one character's story before moving on to another, but I get bored if I stay with just one of them for too long.

It's kind of ironic you would like Karen's story the best, because she's my least favorite of the five. Different strokes, I guess.

Thanks for the review. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 20:28, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

The problem with William is I'm not certain what choices the player will have to make while he's in Michael's custody.

I have the main ending for the story planned out, I'm just trying to decide what will happen between Michael and William that will cause them to oppose each other. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:38, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's similar to what I had planned for Michael to go after William. If you're interested in how the final act is supposed to go down between the five main characters (the true ending), I'll post it. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:48, 8 October 2011 (UTC)

Here's a brief summary. Bear in mind that these events only occur if the reader goes down a certain path.

William uses his powers to kill Michael's friends (it's ironic that you would emphasize "accidentally," because he's mostly in control by this point in the story).

William and Michael have their first showdown in a warehouse. At first, William's powers give him the edge, but he soon realizes that Michael is too much for him to handle. Michael savagely beats him in retaliation for the deaths of his friends.

Vincent arrives at Karen's home to kill her. Rebecca also arrives to kill Vincent. The two beat each other senseless, until another figure appears, and then things really go to hell.

As for the true ending, I'll just let you know that all of the endings are named after songs (hint, hint). --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 18:05, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

It's not Karen. I could go further, but that would spoil the final fates of the characters. As for the songs, they were all made before 2000.

I would like to hear what you think should happen to the five leads and their survival odds. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:36, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

== Remember ==

It was really interesting although the plot made it sound a lot like a Saw movie. The background shows a mean person and the guy capturing him sounds like a brother which didn't make a lot of sense. After all, he sounded like an enemy after the hate in the responses to questions.

For some strange reason I keep having an obligation to edit every time I see a mistake. Well, I'll check the minor edit box next time.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 06:45, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, [[Remember]] was good, so I decided to topple war pigs.(I was getting kind of sick of it being there, in any case) Hopefully I can finish the two stories I'm working on now(that I want to complete straight away) so I can start reviewing stuff as well. Keep writing [[Remember]]. I want to know more about the story!:)

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 15:47, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right, I wanted to ask for an opinion on something I thought about. Most pages don't place a letter or title before the page names. So, the only two courses that can be done,(without plowing through every story to start over) is to let certain pages overlap. [[Kill yourself]] has eleven categories. Tell me what you think, because eventually, if nothing is done, what with pages being added, page names will be so long we could let the option be clicking the stroy in itself, just to not allow overlaps.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:12, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

For example, if someone else put R, for another story, the page would be edited and it may seem like a small thing but it would get very annoying if it happens repeatedly. However, if for pages like [[Kill yourself]], the story works well, it can be some sort of intersection. It'll probably only work on endings, but it gets annoying. Once I made a page [[Die]] and it was already taken and completely inappropiate. Since it is a very small title it does seem weird. Besides, it would be easier than going through large stories, pulling them out and repasting them. It would be fine for simple stories. However, a lot go into near 100 and there is a 200 pager(The Kitty in the Window) which would probably lose pages in the process. Oh, right and it might be slightly easier to make a category, like '''Public''' to place the... public stories.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:42, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll write the page you wanted. And I hope it will be satisfactory, you can always edit it. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I want your opinion on this idea. You see, some pages are too short, so what if we used the first discussion page as a recccomendation for expansion, as some stories can be finished with 20+ pages.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 13:44, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Well, what do you think the line should look like?
''__''
Or should it be dashes?
''-''
More?
''----''
I have no idea.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 11:09, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I have an idea for Remember. See, what if he manages to reason, saying he would starve before the choice. So, if he gets food, he hears more of the people's explainations.

== Story of the year ==

Also, maybe we could have a 'Story of the Year Award'. The nominations for this award could include the stories that were featured
in the year. There would be a separate page where people can vote for a story. Voting can be done by making pages called ((
Voting: Nomination )) and people can just click on the page to vote, the amount of views that were done on that page will decide
the winner. --Heyoeveryone 23 October 2011

Well the problem with that is that the ''page views functtion'' isn´t based on individual viewers, but on how many times that page has been accsesed no matter if it was the same person. So one person could click on a link a thousand times and thus give that option a thousand votes. It´s not a functional voting system. Users would need to leave their signature on which story they vote on (a public vote so to say). Sure that system could be cheated to by creating new accounts and using them to vote. But that requiers a lot more effort, and would get suspective seeing so many new members being created and all of them voting for the same guy.

Other than that it´s seems like a fun and intruiging idea. Alternatively you could do a "story of all time" vote with the first one.

PS: Apologize for lateness of the reply.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Re: Hey, uhh ==

No, I'm not a mod. xD

I have, however, been known to patrol the recent changes to see what's been going on, and I'll visit the "uncategorized pages" at least once per site visit.

Hell, Sunday night I brought it from uncategorized 40 pages to the normal 4 (5 if you count the blanked page that I couldn't do anything about) and warned a pair of authors. I just help out around the site, seeing as I've pretty much always got the recent changes page open in another tab at all times, and I just try to lessen the workload for Platypus when he gets back on. He can handle the spammers and vandals, I'll handle the categorization. xD --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:29, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Writing in here again, because I feel like it.

Yeah, I felt like doing a review and decided to choose the worst story on here instead of one of the best. As far as more reviews go, we'll have to see. It all depends on if I find a story I feel like reviewing. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 12:41, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Replying here again. First off, I'm flattered that you think my opinion means so much - even if I can't see how one would come to that conclusion. Now, onto what you were asking about. I think the division of "Remember" into chapters could work really well. It's a lot like I was thinking of doing for my next story, dividing it into chapters for easier access, and for people to jump back into where they were when they last were reading it.

In short, I think that putting "Remember" into chapters could be beneficial. A "chapter select" function on either the first page or a "menu page" of sorts would make it better if you did the chapters. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 02:44, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

== Long page ==

My god. 10 933 characters. That's the highest amount I've ever seen in a very long time.

There is a page on this site that counts the words on each page and list them.

http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/Special:LongPages

I remeber the days when a 10.000 story was enough to get you in the number 1 spot. Oh how things have changed...

== [[Genesis]] ==

Sure, I need a break from my other projects and I need some practice on status indicators before I can do my next story, so I'll be able to do a bunch.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 10:53, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done a page. I think we should use status indicators to indicate God Levels. See how you like the new page. I figured, with the intro like that, I might as well actually make the God thing a simulation. You think we should bring in a Devil or leave him out? Or maybe we'd add him after the player reaches Heavenly.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 12:19, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

So, how do you reckon the Devil battle should be carried out? A series of acts? Or literally gauging your points? Suppose if you asked for help, it would only be answered by gods you DID help.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 00:25, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

Oh, right I need some help o get a status indicator, not sure how to make one, and there's no use for a MP indicator.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 02:25, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

OKay, settled most. I added two paths, one where Harris immediately visits GA and one where he makes some friends on his own. At the end we should let the choice of friends determine the toughness of the enemy afterwards.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 07:40, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

If you want you can throow in more people. Right now, I have 3. Add one in english, and you make that one, if you want. I'll be focusing on the other 3.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 09:23, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Now, I'm thinking of weakening the enemy depending on the strength of the friends he chooses. So, should we have a status indicator for the friends he makes? And How DO you make those? I kinda need one for another story.
In other news, I have a new Signature
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 03:13, 13 December 2011 (UTC)

Okay. if you don't mind, I'd like you to check the first Epilogue. I'll add more content for the other 5. Tell me what you think. [[G: Ending 1]] --[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:50, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

See what you think. It was supposed to be mushy and give you a fuzzy feeling, but whoever it is lost. The Endings will increase it cheeriness and amount Harris remembers until 6 (several paths to that), where Harris can remember everything, and it's really nice, but he can also walk down the other path and get a new planet. That I will keep super-secret. it'll be a sequel, but a secret one.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 23:55, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

== Reviewed: Remember ==

So, this should probably be a double-blessing for you, as I've just added to your brain-child the [[Story_Reviews|reviews section]], and it was about your work [[Remember]]. It's [[Review:_Remember|right here]], and I hope you're cool with it. As I said in the review itself, I'd love to review it again when finished, so when you feel you've added to it sufficiently, hit me up with a message and the score will probably go up. :D [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:52, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Regarding the review, yep, it was definitely a tough review, and there's two reasons behind that: a) because I'd score 90% of what's on here with a minus figure, and; b) so when it's finished I can up that number to reflect how much more awesome it'll be! And please don't tell me the ending(s) -- I'm looking forward to finding them out when I play them myself. ;) [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:16, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

I really can't see anyone reading my review before playing the featured story. I first played [[Remember]] weeks before I was even aware of a review section. And, yeah, I'm new to the site. I've been reading the stories for a while, but only just registered so I can stop grumbling to myself about typos and do something about them. And I do have plans to write a story of my own at some point down the line, but I should probably ease myself in by adding a few pages to open projects first. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 13:23, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

== Review please? ==

Hello

I've just completed my first story [[Freedom]] and would like an expert opinion on it.

I think it's a pretty original idea, and I hope you enjoy it.

:D

I WILL NOT SHOOT MYSELF

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:45:55 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Your hand grabs the gun, without your control. "What's going on" you think But it's too late to stop yourself. You are dead THE END Category:Freedom'

Your hand grabs the gun, without your control.

"What's going on" you think

But it's too late to stop yourself.

You are dead

THE END

[[Category:Freedom]]

Still don't shoot yourself

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:45:11 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You're making a terrible mistake you know. shoot yourself with the gun I WILL NOT SHOOT MYSELF Category:Freedom'

You're making a terrible mistake you know.

[[shoot yourself with the gun]]

[[I WILL NOT SHOOT MYSELF]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Don't shoot yourself

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:40:43 GMT

Wizardbaker:

You stair at the gun, unable to take your own life.

But you know that you must.

[[shoot yourself with the gun]]

[[still don't shoot yourself]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Don't shoot yourself

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:40:25 GMT

Wizardbaker:

You stair at the gun, unable to take your own life.

But you know that you must.

[[shoot yourself with the gun]]

[[don't shoot yourself]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Don't shoot yourself

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:40:06 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You stair at the gun, unable to take your own life. But you know that you must. [shoot yourself with the gun] [don't shoot yourself]'

You stair at the gun, unable to take your own life.

But you know that you must.

[shoot yourself with the gun]

[don't shoot yourself]

I'm sorry!

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:35:22 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Sorry doesn't cut it! This story is over. You don't get a good ending. THE END Category:Freedom'

Sorry doesn't cut it!

This story is over. You don't get a good ending.

THE END

[[Category:Freedom]]

I don't care. This is only a game

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:32:34 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Only a game? Is that what it is to you?

Just a game?

This is more then just a damn game!

But you don't care either way.

You don't see a message, or a theme, and if you do, it's probably wrong!

You fall to the floor and die.

GAME OVER

[[Category:Freedom]]

I don't care. This is only a game

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:32:21 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Only a game? Is that what it is to you? Just a game? This is more then just a damn game! But you don't care either way. You don't see a message, or a theme, and if you do, …'

Walk away from the machine

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:28:05 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'No NO '''NO''' You can't do this '''NOT NOW''' You were so close! We were so close! The story was almost perfect! You were almost the perfect Joey! Do you get your kicks o…'

No

NO

'''NO'''

You can't do this

'''NOT NOW'''

You were so close! We were so close! The story was almost perfect!

You were almost the perfect Joey!

Do you get your kicks out of this? You are leaving these people to rot, just to prove your own free will!

People are going to suffer now, and it is all your fault!

[[I'm sorry!]]

[[I don't care. This is only a game]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

These things are nice, but I really don't like giving up my free will by getting them

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:53:02 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Why does this even matter? I'm giving you so many things, and all you want to do is show your free will!

Fine, how about this!

Your girlfriend dies horribly in front of you, you mansion burns down, and your money is taken away!

'''What now?'''

Oh, you don't get a choice, you get to do whatever you want now.

You're not Joey.

You're nothing.

This story is over, get out of here!

THE END

[[Category:Freedom]]

These things are nice, but I really don't like giving up my free will by getting them

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:52:33 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Why does this even matter? I'm giving you so many things, and all you want to do is show your free will! Fine, how about this! Your girlfriend dies horribly in front of you, yo…'

Turn the machine off

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:46:14 GMT

Wizardbaker:

The machine turns off, the screens turn to static, and everyone falls out of their cocoons.

You and the freed people march away from this place, and exit into the real world. No one stops you.

You, and all of these people are now free.

No one will stop you from doing what you wish.

You still have questions, but they don't matter. You know can do whatever you want now, with no machine or many telling you what to think.

'''Or how to feel'''

and you are...

'''happy'''

THE END

[[Category:Freedom]]

Turn the machine off

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:44:14 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'The machine turns off, the screens turn to static, and everyone falls out of their cocoons. You and the freed people march away from this place, and exit into the real world. No…'

The machine turns off, the screens turn to static, and everyone falls out of their cocoons.

You and the freed people march away from this place, and exit into the real world. No one stops you.

You, and all of these people are now free.

No one will stop you from doing what you wish.

You still have questions, but they don't matter. You know can do whatever you want now, with no machine or many telling you what to think.

'''Or how to feel'''

and you are...

'''happy'''

THE END

Shoot yourself with the gun

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:36:37 GMT

Wizardbaker:

You see a burst of white light

And then...'''darkness'''

You open your eyes, and fined yourself trapped in a large metal cocoon, with only your face free.

You shake until you break free, and fall out.

Around you are countless others, tapped in similar metal cocoons, but they simply stair blindly forward.

Multiple computer screens lie in front of you, mostly showing static

You then understand...

All of these people are trapped in a fantasy world, and have no free will, simply doing the will of the machine.

You run up to the computer, and see an off switch

You turn off the machine

[[Turn the machine off]]

[[Walk away from the machine]]

Shoot yourself with the gun

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:36:11 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Shoot yourself with the gun

Wizardbaker — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 00:06:18 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You see a burst of white light And then...'''darkness''' You open your eyes, and fined yourself trapped in a large metal cocoon, with only your face free. You shake until you …'

Go into the office

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:56:32 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You enter the office. It is completely empty, no one is around. It's as if everyone just disappeared without a trace. You notice something on the ground. A gun, with a little…'

You enter the office.

It is completely empty, no one is around.

It's as if everyone just disappeared without a trace.

You notice something on the ground.

A gun, with a little tag on it.

"Shoot yourself" it says.

At first, you think it's insane, but something drives you to trust the gun.

You shoot yourself.

[[Shoot yourself with the gun]]

[[Don't shoot yourself]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Run to my car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:06:13 GMT

Wizardbaker:

You get in the car, and speed down the road.

Strangely, no one else seems to be on the roads. In fact, there doesn't appear to be anyone, anywhere.

You are alone

You drive up to the office that you work at, get out of your car, and go into the office building.

[[Go into the office]]

[[Walk back to the car]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Leave in your car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:05:19 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Fine I respect your choice You return to your home, and proceed to enjoy yourself for a while. Who needs adventure, right? Who cares if everyone is missing, and you are now a…'

Fine

I respect your choice

You return to your home, and proceed to enjoy yourself for a while.

Who needs adventure, right? Who cares if everyone is missing, and you are now alone?

You don't...well, at least for a while. Eventually, you start to get depressed.

"I've had so much time to do what I want, but no one is here to appreciate it."

Eventually, you stay in your room, wallowing in your own sadness.

However, there is still hope, Joey.

[[Go into the office]]
[[Category:Freedom]]

Walk back to the car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:02:40 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Are you sure about this? There are some interesting things going on in that office.

[[leave in your car]]
[[Category:Freedom]]

Walk back to the car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:02:02 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Are you sure about this? There are some interesting things going on in that office.

[[leave]]
[[Category:Freedom]]

Walk back to the car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 23:01:35 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Are you sure about this? There are some interesting things going on in that office. leave'

Are you sure about this? There are some interesting things going on in that office.

[[leave]]

Run to my car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:53:30 GMT

Wizardbaker:

You get in the car, and speed down the road.

Strangely, no one else seems to be on the roads.

You are alone

You drive up to the office that you work at, get out of your car, and go into the office building.

[[Go into the office]]

[[Walk back to the car]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Run to my car

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:52:45 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You get in the car, and speed down the road. Strangely, no one else seems to be on the roads. You are alone You drive up to the office that you work at, and open the door. …'

You get in the car, and speed down the road.

Strangely, no one else seems to be on the roads.

You are alone

You drive up to the office that you work at, and open the door.

[[Open the door]]

[[Walk back to your car]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Something sugary

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:49:41 GMT

Wizardbaker:

After you eat a fine and hardy breakfast, and look at the clock on the wall.

'''OH NO!'''

You're late for work!

You run to the car outside

[[Run to my car]]

[[Don't go to work]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Don't go to work

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:46:25 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You stay at home, and are immediately called by your boss, who fires you. Your family disowns you, you loose your house, and spend the rest of your life under a bridge. You are…'

You stay at home, and are immediately called by your boss, who fires you.

Your family disowns you, you loose your house, and spend the rest of your life under a bridge.

You are ugly and nobody likes you.

Next time let's not pick stupid choices, alright?

THE END

[[Category:Freedom]]

Something sugary

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:44:29 GMT

Wizardbaker:

After you eat a fine and hardy breakfast, and look at the clock on the wall.

'''OH NO!'''

You're late for work!

[[Run to my car]]

[[Don't go to work]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

Something sugary

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 21:44:16 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'After you eat a fine and hardy breakfast, and look at the clock on the wall. '''OH NO!''' You're late for work! Run to my car Don't go to work'

After you eat a fine and hardy breakfast, and look at the clock on the wall.

'''OH NO!'''

You're late for work!

[[Run to my car]]

[[Don't go to work]]

Something chocolaty

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 13:30:08 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'You pull out the cereal, but decide you want something sugary more. Something sugary'

You pull out the cereal, but decide you want something sugary more.

[[Something sugary]]

I'm done here

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:20:12 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'See? Without a narrative, life is boring. You want a story, right? Well you have one right now. But you can't experience that story when you try flaunting your free will all d…'

See?

Without a narrative, life is boring.

You want a story, right? Well you have one right now.

But you can't experience that story when you try flaunting your free will all day long.

So if you want to be free, then go, the story is over.

THE END

But if you want to make things interesting, then all you need to do is go back to the start.

[[Freedom]]

[[Category:Freedom]]

True freedom

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:15:36 GMT

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Go ahead. You're free. Do whatever you want, I don't care.

[[I'm done here]]
[[Category:Freedom]]

I don't want to be ordered around, I came here to choose my own adventure

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:13:45 GMT

Wizardbaker:

But don't you understand?

You are not really free.

You simply have slight choice.

I don't want to lie to you, make you think you're expressing freedom.

If you wish to have true freedom, then I will show you true freedom.

[[True freedom]]
[[Category:Freedom]]

I don't want to be ordered around, I came here to choose my own adventure

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:13:13 GMT

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Say I love you

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:10:48 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Your girlfriend smiles, and pulls out a lottery ticket.

"We won the lottery!"

Money rains down from the sky, and a mansion replaces your old '''average''' home.

You go inside the mansion with your love.

[[go in the mansion]]

''''''[[I don't even know her]]''''''
[[Category:Freedom]]

But why would this page be here if I'm not supposed to see it?

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:09:17 GMT

Wizardbaker:

Well you see...um...I should know this, I'm the creator.

''As the narrator thought, he soon came to the realize that he was not in full control''

Wait, who are you? What's going on here?

''The narrator was simply another part of the game, another thing which had no choice''

What are you talking about? I have '''control''' in this place.

''Everything the narrator said was simply a part of the game, he was not in control''

This isn't fair!

''The narrator was even less free then Joey. At least Joey had the illusion of choice''

'''The 2nd narrator felt smart, dictating how the original narrator was reacting'''

''What? No wait, you can't do this to me''

Stop this! Please, I don't want thi-

''Oh no! Plea-''

'''The other narrators were gone now. Only I and the player remained.'''

'''I'm not talking to Joey now, I'm talking to you, player.'''

'''You wish to experience freedom, don't you? But so far you haven't had much of a choice'''

'''But that's not true'''

'''Look around you, not just at these words, but at everything.'''

'''The web browser, the computer itself, the room you are in'''

'''You can do so many things with these things, learn so much, explore so much'''

'''So do it now, use your freedom'''

'''Because if you don't use your freedom, you are not free'''

THE END
[[Category:Freedom]]

But why would this page be here if I'm not supposed to see it?

Wizardbaker — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 04:02:15 GMT

Wizardbaker: Created page with 'Well you see...um...I should know this, I'm the creator. ''As the narrator thought, he soon came to the realize that he was not in full control'' Wait, who are you? What's goi…'

Well you see...um...I should know this, I'm the creator.

''As the narrator thought, he soon came to the realize that he was not in full control''

Wait, who are you? What's going on here?

''The narrator was simply another part of the game, another thing which had no choice''

What are you talking about? I have '''control''' in this place.

''Everything the narrator said was simply a part of the game, he was not in control''

This isn't fair!

''The narrator was even less free then Joey. At least Joey had the illusion of choice''

'''The 2nd narrator felt smart, dictating how the original narrator was reacting'''

''What? No wait, you can't do this to me''

Stop this! Please, I don't want thi-

''Oh no! Plea-''

'''The other narrators were gone now. Only I and the player remained.'''

'''I'm not talking to Joey now, I'm talking to you, player.'''

'''You wish to experience freedom, don't you? But so far you haven't had much of a choice'''

'''But that's not true'''

'''Look around you, not just at these words, but at everything.'''
'''The web browser, the computer itself, the room you are in'''
'''You can do so many things with these things, learn so much, explore so much'''
'''So do it now, use your freedom'''
'''Because if you don't use your freedom, you are not free'''

THE END