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DD44 Canteen D-Day

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 20:21:57 GMT

Reer: Created page with '"I'll see ya later lads, I'm a bit hungry" You say and they say their farewells and walk off to their tents. You walk across the camp to the canteen, you stomach is rumbling. You…'

"I'll see ya later lads, I'm a bit hungry" You say and they say their farewells and walk off to their tents. You walk across the camp to the canteen, you stomach is rumbling. You enter the canteen.

Do you:

*[[DD44 Canteen Grub|Head over to the counter and get some grub]]
*[[DD44 Canteen Americans D-Day Launch|Head over to the Americans and talk with them]]
*[[DD44 Camp D-Day Launch|Head back out onto the camp]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Tent Brits

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 20:20:35 GMT

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You head with them and stop off in your tent right beside theirs. You look down at your equipment, all laid out neatly. Your rifle, pistol and all your camping gear, spare clothes and even a gas mask along with water and a few tins.

*[[DD44 Load bag|Load up your bag and get it ready for going]]
*[[DD44 Leave bag|Decide to leave your stuff for later and head back out]]
*[[DD44 Rifle clean|Pick up the rifle and start to clean it out]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Tent Brits

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 20:16:35 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You head with them and stop off in your tent right beside theirs. You look down at your equipment, all laid out neatly. Your rifle, pistol and all your camping gear, spare clothe…'

You head with them and stop off in your tent right beside theirs. You look down at your equipment, all laid out neatly. Your rifle, pistol and all your camping gear, spare clothes and even a gas mask along with water and a few tins.

*[[Load up your bag and get it ready for going]]
*[[Decide to leave your stuff for later and head back out]]
*[[Pick up the rifle and start to clean it out]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Silent Prison

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 02:02:00 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You remain silent and continue staring at the ground, the general fumes, his face turning bright red. "Aren't you something?" He screams at you. "When I say something I expect yo…'

You remain silent and continue staring at the ground, the general fumes, his face turning bright red. "Aren't you something?" He screams at you. "When I say something I expect you to answer me! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?" It looks like he is about to hit you as he roars at you. You only have a short amount of time to contemplate.

*[[DD44 Silent You Remain|Remain silent and probably face punishment]]
*[[DD44 Silent Reasonable|Reply to the General "Yessir"]]
*[[DD44 Prison Fight Officer|Punch him in the face]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Silent Reasonable

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:57:59 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You stand up and ready yourself, "Yessir!" You reply and wait for his response. "Finally you got to your senses soldier, DISMISSED" He says as he turns and walks out of the priso…'

You stand up and ready yourself, "Yessir!" You reply and wait for his response. "Finally you got to your senses soldier, DISMISSED" He says as he turns and walks out of the prison cell. You are free to go, thanks to your "friend" in hospital. Maybe you should thank him.

What will you do next?

*[[DD44 Tent Prepare Prison|Head off to your tent and prepare your gear]]
*[[DD44 Hospital Apologise|Head into the hospital and apologise to your friend]]
*[[DD44 Canteen Prison|Head to the canteen, you're hungry]]
*[[DD44 Airstrip Prison|Head to the airstrip and watch some planes]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Prison Quiet

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:55:10 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You sit down on the bed and contemplate your actions, you decide that you will remain silent. An officer walks in and you stay sitting on the bed, he looks down at you angrily "W…'

You sit down on the bed and contemplate your actions, you decide that you will remain silent. An officer walks in and you stay sitting on the bed, he looks down at you angrily "What do you have to say for you outburst, Private Johnson?" He shouts at you. You remain silent and he fumes inside but lets it pass "Well lucky for you your friend in the hospital has vouched for you so you're being let go, but I will have my eye on you! Do I make myself clear soldier?" His tone was a slight bit calmer but you stay silent. "DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?" He roars in your face.

*[[DD44 Silent Prison|Stay silent and staring at the ground]]
*[[DD44 Silent Reasonable|Reply to him "Yessir"]]
*[[DD44 Prison Fight Officer|Punch him in the face]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Prison Trash Cell

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:48:59 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'Your anger fit climaxes, you flip the small bed that was in the room and start kicking in anything you can find. Ripping at the sheets of the bed and tearing the pillows to feath…'

Your anger fit climaxes, you flip the small bed that was in the room and start kicking in anything you can find. Ripping at the sheets of the bed and tearing the pillows to feathers, you scream as you kick at the door. Shouting cusses at the guy who punched you, about the people who locked you in here. You get even angrier and start cussing the Queen and England.

Guards storm into the room and hold you down as you kick and scream. An officer walks in "You are being sent to a military detention camp, you will leave immediately." You are hauled out of the cell kicking and screaming and thrown into the back of a van handcuffed with two armed guards watching over you. ((If anyone wants to continue in the prison camp they may))

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Too much pain

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:22:32 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You are in too much pain to talk and you just put the thumbs up to him as you pass, this calms his nerves slightly. You are helped to the hospital where the doctors examine your …'

You are in too much pain to talk and you just put the thumbs up to him as you pass, this calms his nerves slightly. You are helped to the hospital where the doctors examine your arm. It is a bad break and you are forced to wear a cast for three months, you break down because you know you will miss the invasion.

Due to your injury you miss out on the Normandy Invasion, you are sent home to rest and heal, while at home you hear off the reports on the war and how they are doing on the front. By the time you've fully healed they have pushed through into Germany and are on their last legs, moving in on Berlin. You are shipped out to the front with supplies and later during the fighting on the streets of Berlin you are gunned down. ((If anyone wants they can add more options to this and continue it))

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Fight Broken Arm

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:18:54 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You try and take a swing at his head when you get the opportunity, you glance off his forehead and cut his eyebrow. The guys helping you calm you down as they help you to the hos…'

You try and take a swing at his head when you get the opportunity, you glance off his forehead and cut his eyebrow. The guys helping you calm you down as they help you to the hospital. You find out you didn't break your arm "that bad" and have to wear a cast for a month.

Due to your injury you miss out on the Normandy Invasion, you are sent home to rest and heal, while at home you hear off the reports on the war and how they are doing on the front. By the time you're back in action they have already captured France and are pushing into Germany, you return to the front lines but are later gunned down. ((If anyone wants they can add more options to this and continue it))

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Hospital Consoled

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:16:29 GMT

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When the others get you on your feet you walk over to him holding your arm and tell him that it wasn't his fault. It calms his nerves slightly, he and the other guys you were hanging out with help you to the hospital. Luckily it wasn't a bad break and you'll only be in a cast for a month.

Due to your injury you miss out on the Normandy Invasion, you are sent home to rest and heal, while at home you hear off the reports on the war and how they are doing on the front. By the time you're back in action they have already captured France and are pushing into Germany, you return to the front lines but are later gunned down. ((If anyone wants they can add more options to this and continue it))

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Hospital Consoled

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:16:13 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'When the others get you on your feet you walk over to him holding your arm and tell him that it wasn't his fault. It calms his nerves slightly, he and the other guys you were han…'

DD44 Prison Calm

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 01:11:53 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You sit in the cell alone contemplating your actions, "I really shouldn't have done that.." you think to yourself. Before you can finished thinking you see an officer open the ce…'

You sit in the cell alone contemplating your actions, "I really shouldn't have done that.." you think to yourself. Before you can finished thinking you see an officer open the cell. "Soldier, I don't know what the fuck got into you!" He shouts "What do you have to say for yourself Private Johnson!" You have decided on your answer "I apologise sir, I'm a bit edgy since we got the news." He believes your answer "Well your one lucky motherfucker, your "friend" in hospital has vouched for you, you'll be under watch. Anything else happens and your off this base. Do you hear me?" You hold a smile, "Yessir!" You reply back and stand to attention. "Dismissed soldier" The officer replies walking out leaving the cell door open.

You walk out of the cell, they have taken your knife off you just in case and all your other gear is still in your tent. You walk outside and look around you have a few places you could go.

*[[DD44 Tent Prepare Prison|Head off to your tent and prepare your gear]]
*[[DD44 Hospital Apologise|Head into the hospital and apologise to your friend]]
*[[DD44 Canteen Prison|Head to the canteen, you're hungry]]
*[[DD44 Airstrip Prison|Head to the airstrip and watch some planes]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Fight Brits

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 00:12:49 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You fist connects with your shoulder lightly and he laughs, you turn around in a fit of anger and pummel him with your fists. Your friends tackle you to the ground after you got …'

You fist connects with your shoulder lightly and he laughs, you turn around in a fit of anger and pummel him with your fists. Your friends tackle you to the ground after you got the third blow in, badly bruising his face. All the while you are screaming at him saying "You don't fucking touch me you prick!". You can't tell if he is upset or not because his face is starting to swell.

You are hauled off into a prison cell and are told to calm down and you might be released.

*[[DD44 Prison Calm|Calm down and apologise for your outbreak]]
*[[DD44 Prison Trash Cell|Trash up the cell and scream out cuss words]]
*[[DD44 Prison Quiet|Keep quiet]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Broken Arm

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 00:07:45 GMT

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As he punches your arm a loud crack is hurt, he broke your arm! You fall over onto the ground not expecting the blow and grab your arm, it doesn't make it any better. One of your friends runs off to get a doctor while the others help you up, the guy who punched you just stands there in shock wondering what he has just done.

What'll you do to him?

*[[DD44 Hospital Consoled|Tell him it's alright and head off to the hospital]]
*[[DD44 Fight Broken Arm|Try and punch him with your free hand]]
*[[DD44 Too much pain|You're in too much pain to talk!]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Broken Arm

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 00:06:57 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'As he punches your arm a loud crack is hurt, he broke your arm! You fall over onto the ground not expecting the blow and grab your arm, it doesn't make it any better. One of your…'

As he punches your arm a loud crack is hurt, he broke your arm! You fall over onto the ground not expecting the blow and grab your arm, it doesn't make it any better. One of your friends runs off to get a doctor while the others help you up, the guy who punched you just stands there in shock wondering what he has just done.

What'll you do to him?

*[[Tell him it's alright and head off to the hospital]]
*[[Try and punch him with your free hand]]
*[[You're in too much pain to talk!]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

DD44 Tease Brits

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 00:03:54 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You playfully push his shoulder and laugh "I know... I know" You say. "But now we have to prepare, we're invading fucking France!". They all cheer and nothing serious happens. Th…'

You playfully push his shoulder and laugh "I know... I know" You say. "But now we have to prepare, we're invading fucking France!". They all cheer and nothing serious happens. They decide to head back to their tent to pack their gear it is 1800 and you're leaving at 2000.

*[[DD44 Tent Brits|Your tent is right beside theirs, head with them]]
*[[DD44 Canteen D-Day|You decide to head to the canteen to get a bite]]
*[[DD44 Airstrip D-Day|You part ways with them and head down to the airstrip]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Follow your friends out of the mess hall

Reer — Wed, 04 Nov 2015 00:00:13 GMT

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You follow your English friends out of the mess hall, they are all extremely excited after the Generals speech and are preparing for what is to come mentally. "I fucking told you Johnny!" One of them shouts punching you lightly in the shoulder.

*[[DD44 Fight Brits|Nobody touches you! Punch him right in the jaw]]
*[[DD44 Tease Brits|Tease him back]]
*[[DD44 Broken Arm|He broke your arm!]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Follow your friends out of the mess hall

Reer — Tue, 03 Nov 2015 23:59:14 GMT

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You follow your English friends out of the mess hall, they are all extremely excited after the Generals speech and are preparing for what is to come mentally. "I fucking told you Johnny!" One of them shouts punching you lightly in the shoulder.

*[[Nobody touches you! Punch him right in the jaw]]
*[[Tease him back]]
*[[He broke your arm!]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Follow your friends out of the mess hall

Reer — Tue, 03 Nov 2015 23:58:58 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You follow your English friends out of the mess hall, they are all extremely excited after the Generals speech and are preparing for what is to come mentally. "I fucking told you…'

You follow your English friends out of the mess hall, they are all extremely excited after the Generals speech and are preparing for what is to come mentally. "I fucking told you Johnny!" One of them shouts punching you lightly in the shoulder.

*[[Nobody touches you! Punch him right in the jaw]]
*[[Tease him back]]
*[[He broke your arm!]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Look him in the eye and say, ”I'm always hungry for sausage.”

Reer — Tue, 03 Nov 2015 20:11:37 GMT

Reer: Created page with '"I'm always hungry for sausage" You say staring into his eyes and licking your lips, you can feel your nipples harden under the tight business suit and your pussy is getting mois…'

"I'm always hungry for sausage" You say staring into his eyes and licking your lips, you can feel your nipples harden under the tight business suit and your pussy is getting moist. The pudgy man looks you up and down, "I could get you some fine sausage.." he says laughing and asks you to follow him over to a small alley.

You follow him over to the alley, your pussy getting wetter as the tight business suit brushes against your hard nipples. When you get into the alley he turns around and starts fondling your breasts with his pudgy fingers, you gasp. "I'll show you a fucking sausage" He says as he zips down his pants revealing a nine inch member. You look on startled and he grabs your head and shoves it onto his dick, all you can do is gag as he shoves it down your throat.

Your hands reach out and start feeling his balls, he stuffs his nine inches further down your throat. You start to gurgle and then he stiffens, grunts and shoots his load down your throat. In a desperate attempt you try and suck it all up but it keeps coming, he pulls his dick out and shoots a waft on your suit and into your hair. With that he zips up his pants and runs off.

*[[Sexy gangbang in the alley|It looks like some other bums have noticed what's happening!]]
*[[Sexy Chinese restaurant with cum in your hair|Lick the cum off your face and proceed into the Chinese restaurant.]]
*[[Apartment of a sexy woman|It seems you've had enough head home]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''Harbor District''|Health=Horny & Hormonal|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

D-Day Canteen

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 19:12:54 GMT

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You walk over to the canteen, it is a large building meant to accomodate the needs of over three hundred soldiers. As you walk inside you notice a few groups around the place, who will you head over to talk to?

*[[D-Day Americans|You see a group of American troops and head over]]
*[[D-Day British|You notice a few British soldiers and head over]]
*[[D-Day Launch|They are actually heading outside because the General has called everyone]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Watch as the plane takes off

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 19:12:18 GMT

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You watch as the plane is fully loaded with men, all in combat fatigues. The pilot shuts the door closed and climbs into the cockpit, the plane is a bomber plane but sometimes used as a paratrooper transport. "Maybe they are going out on a drill" You think to yourself as the plane taxis onto the runway. The engines power up sucking in air, the roar comforting you. The plane rockets down the runway and takes off, flying out east.

*[[Keep looking around at other planes]]
*[[D-Day Canteen|Head over to the canteen]]
*[[D-Day Launch|It seems everyone is heading to the mess hall, follow along]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Chat the pilot D-Day 1944

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 19:09:49 GMT

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You stroll up to the plane and rest against the side "Fine bird you got here" You say to the young American pilot. "It sure is, served me well in France and even a run on Berlin" he says enthusiastically. "To Berlin?" You reply in awe, "Yessir!" He replies "Bombed those Gerry's to hell!" You both laugh and then he says "I've an important flight, you better get on your way."

What will you do?

*[[Attack the pilot|You lung at the pilot with your combat knife]]
*[[Stowaway D-Day 1944|You pretend to walk away but actually jump inside]]
*[[Watch as the plane takes off|Stand back and watch the flight take off]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

"Just looking around" you say unconvincingly

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 19:07:45 GMT

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"I was just looking around" You say unconvincingly, before you know it the man punches you in the jaw and you fall backwards. "Fucking Gerry spy!" He shouts and a group gathers around the plane, you are carried out dazed. People start shouting insults at you and spitting at you, armed guards are brought in to protect you while they bring you to the jail.

While in your cell you hear a group of people outside, having been friends with the guards they get to "visit" you. You are beat up by a group of soldiers for being a spy and later next day are convicted of treason against the Monarch.

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

"Just looking around" you say unconvincingly

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 19:07:11 GMT

Reer: Created page with '"I was just looking around" You say unconvincingly, before you know it the man punches you in the jaw and you fall backwards. "Fucking Gerry spy!" He shouts and a group gathers a…'

Attack him before he alerts anyone else

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 19:03:28 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You feel you have no choice but to take out the witness, you lung at him with your combat knife, trying to slash at him. Your first attempt misses and he dodges kicking you out o…'

You feel you have no choice but to take out the witness, you lung at him with your combat knife, trying to slash at him. Your first attempt misses and he dodges kicking you out of the door and onto the cold tarmac. You hit your head and start bleeding but you brush it off as you climb to your feet, the pilot has screamed for help and a group of men has assembled to take you down, when any of them approach you slash out at them.

Eventually due to the blood loss you fall unconscious and you are pounced on by four tough men. The doctors bandage your head and you kept in restraints. Luckily no one was injured but you've been charged with attempted murder and are being kicked from the army along with treason against the Monarch because you were trying to hide inside the plane.

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Surrender on plane D-Day 1944

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:52:37 GMT

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You climb out from behind the supply crates to a startled pilot "What the hell!" He says taken off guard, "What are you doing in here!" He frowns and looks at you deep in thought. Your mind is racing as you think of what to do.

What will you do?

*[[Attack him before he alerts anyone else]]
*[["Just looking around" you say unconvincingly]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Surrender on plane D-Day 1944

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:51:56 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You climb out from behind the supply crates to a startled pilot "What the hell!" He says taken off guard, "What are you doing in here!" He frowns and looks at you deep in thought…'

You climb out from behind the supply crates to a startled pilot "What the hell!" He says taken off guard, "What are you doing in here!" He frowns and looks at you deep in thought.

*[[Attack him before he alerts anyone else]]
*[["Just looking around" you say unconvincingly]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Stowaway D-Day 1944

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:32:42 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'When the pilot isn't looking you slide open one of the door and creep in silently. You find a place to hide in the back surrounded by supplies, just as you rest you hear the door…'

When the pilot isn't looking you slide open one of the door and creep in silently. You find a place to hide in the back surrounded by supplies, just as you rest you hear the door slide open, have they caught you?

What do you do?

*[[Surrender on plane D-Day 1944|You climb out from hiding and announce "You got me"]]
*[[Stay hiding]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Chat the pilot D-Day 1944

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:29:23 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You stroll up to the plane and rest against the side "Fine bird you got here" You say to the young American pilot. "It sure is, served me well in France and even a run on Berlin"…'

You stroll up to the plane and rest against the side "Fine bird you got here" You say to the young American pilot. "It sure is, served me well in France and even a run on Berlin" he says enthusiastically. "To Berlin?" You reply in awe, "Yessir!" He replies "Bombed those Gerry's to hell!" You both laugh and then he says "I've an important flight, you better get on your way."

What will you do?

*[[Attack the pilot|You lung at the pilot with your combat knife]]
*[[Stowaway|You pretend to walk away but actually jump inside]]
*[[Watch as the plane takes off|Stand back and watch the flight take off]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Watch as the plane takes off

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:17:34 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You watch as the plane is fully loaded with men, all in combat fatigues. The pilot shuts the door closed and climbs into the cockpit, the plane is a bomber plane but sometimes us…'

You watch as the plane is fully loaded with men, all in combat fatigues. The pilot shuts the door closed and climbs into the cockpit, the plane is a bomber plane but sometimes used as a paratrooper transport. "Maybe they are going out on a drill" You think to yourself as the plane taxis onto the runway. The engines power up sucking in air, the roar comforting you. The plane rockets down the runway and takes off, flying out east.

*[[Keep looking around at other planes]]
*[[Head over to the canteen]]
*[[It seems everyone is heading to the mess hall, follow along]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day Airstrip

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:17:03 GMT

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You head out to the airstrip, the sound of planes taking off and people barking orders at one another had always calmed you. Soon you notice that there is a lot more activity than usual and that some of the planes are being loaded. "Could you rumours be true?" You think to yourself as you remember the discussion about a planned invasion.

You notice a plane is about to take off.

*[[Watch as the plane takes off]]
*[[Chat the pilot D-Day 1944|Approach the pilot and strike up chat]]
*[[Stowaway D-Day 1944|Hide aboard the plane]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day Airstrip

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:13:17 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You head out to the airstrip, the sound of planes taking off and people barking orders at one another had always calmed you. Soon you notice that there is a lot more activity tha…'

You head out to the airstrip, the sound of planes taking off and people barking orders at one another had always calmed you. Soon you notice that there is a lot more activity than usual and that some of the planes are being loaded. "Could you rumours be true?" You think to yourself as you remember the discussion about a planned invasion.

You notice a plane is about to take off.

*[[Watch as the plane takes off]]
*[[Approach the pilot and strike up chat]]
*[[Hide aboard the plane]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

Run towards the General

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:09:17 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You don't know what is coming over you, you just want to kill! You see the General stepping down from the stage and you sprint at him as fast as you can, men stop and stare wonde…'

You don't know what is coming over you, you just want to kill! You see the General stepping down from the stage and you sprint at him as fast as you can, men stop and stare wondering what the hell you are doing. Some try to catch you but you dodge them easily, people start shouting as you barge through them heading straight for the General.

You draw your combat knife and slash anyone who is in the way, you injure four people before the guards open fire on you. You drop dead on the spot, everyone wonders what the hell just happened.

'''THE END'''

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

The Brits D-Day

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 18:05:52 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You walk over to your old pals "How's it doing!" You say as you exchange hugs with them. "You hear what's been going around?" They ask expectantly, "That we're taking the fight t…'

You walk over to your old pals "How's it doing!" You say as you exchange hugs with them. "You hear what's been going around?" They ask expectantly, "That we're taking the fight to France?" You reply, wondering if they have any fresh information. Before they can answer the General steps up onto the makeshift stage.
Everyone goes dead silent as he leans forward to speak. "Men" He roars, "Tomorrow we will be half way to Berlin!" The men cheer and then he hushes them. "At 2000 we will all be heading to the coast where we will make preparations for our voyage. At 0600 we will set sail for France, do or die." He steps down from the stage as you and everyone else in the mess hall cheer him on.

*[[Follow your friends out of the mess hall]]
*[[Leave the mess hall alone]]
*[[Run towards the General]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:59:55 GMT

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The day is July 5th, you are Private Johnson stationed in a British Military base on the outskirts of London. The past week there has been talk of an invasion of France and in the last month there have been many beach assault drills.
You are in the British side of camp and are wondering what to do.

*[[D-Day Canteen|Head into the canteen]]
*[[D-Day Airstrip|Head out to the airstrip]]
*[[D-Day Launch|The General is calling all the men to the mess hall]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day Launch

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:56:44 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You decide to head to the mess hall, a lot of people seem to be heading towards there too and soon you are part of a small group of people. They are all talking about what they t…'

You decide to head to the mess hall, a lot of people seem to be heading towards there too and soon you are part of a small group of people. They are all talking about what they think the General is going to talk about. When you arrive in the mess hall it is already packed with people, there are many groups of different people.

Who do you want to talk to?

*[[The Americans D-Day|You decide to head over to the Americans]]
*[[The Brits D-Day|You see some old friends from the before the war]]
*[[The Canadians D-Day|You decide to tag along with the Canadians]]
*[[The Irish D-Day|There is a group of Irish and you decide to join them]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day Canteen

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:51:49 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You walk over to the canteen, it is a large building meant to accomodate the needs of over three hundred soldiers. As you walk inside you notice a few groups around the place, wh…'

You walk over to the canteen, it is a large building meant to accomodate the needs of over three hundred soldiers. As you walk inside you notice a few groups around the place, who will you head over to talk to?

*[[D-Day Americans|You see a group of American troops and head over]]
*[[D-Day British|You notice a few soldiers from your homeland and head over]]
*[[D-Day Launch|They are actually heading outside because the General has called everyone]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:48:13 GMT

Reer:

The day is June 27th, you are Private Johnson stationed in a British Military base on the outskirts of London. The past week there has been talk of an invasion of France and in the last month there have been many beach assault drills.
You are in the British side of camp and are wondering what to do.

*[[D-Day Canteen|Head into the canteen]]
*[[D-Day Airstrip|Head out to the airstrip]]
*[[D-Day Launch|The General is calling all the men to the mess hall]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

D-Day

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:47:08 GMT

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The day is June 27th, you are Private Johnson stationed in a British Military base on the outskirts of London. The past week there has been talk of an invasion of France and in the last month there have been many beach assault drills.
You are in the British side of camp and are wondering what to do.

*[[Head into the canteen]]
*[[Head out to the airstrip]]
*[[The General is calling all the men to the mess hall]]

[[Category: D-Day 1944]]

All Mature Stories

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:39:14 GMT

Reer: /* Mature Stories */

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''
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|Title||Pages||Notes
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|[[ Awakened World: 7yrs Later]]|| 43 || Private WIP, Please Don't Edit
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|[[Alorias Glory]]|| WIP || public
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|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)
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|[[1943]]||35||Open
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|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)
|-
|[[A D&D Adventure]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please don't edit.)
|-
|[[A New Persona]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)
|-
|[[The Unsuspecting Adventurer]]|| 1 ||(Just starting it, please don't edit for now.)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Adventure through Mythology]]||20+||(WIP; Public; Please Don't Edit; First Story)
|-
|[[The Touch Of Fear]]|| WIP || (Private, Please do not edit)
|-
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 10+ || please do not edit
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
|-
|[[Aleron]]||16+ ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||50+
|-
|[[Am I Dreaming?]]|| 13+ || (WIP. Private)
|-
|[[Another Naruto Story]]|| 7+|| Private: My first attempt so please refrain from editing
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
|-
|[[Apocolyptia]]|| 4+ || (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)
|-
|[[Awake]] || 45
|-
|[[ Back To Freddy's]]|| 0 || private
|-
|[[Badassery]] || 20+
|-
|[[Batman vs Joker]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Batman vs Joker}} || W.I.P Private, Do NOT edit!
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 13+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Bio Wars]]|| WIP|| Public (Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit
|-
|[[Bleach: An RPG]]|| W.I.P || Public -Do NOT Edit!
|-
|[[ The blood disease]]|| 3 || (Please don't edit the story! I'm hopeless when it comes to coding though so if someone could help me with that, it would be great! I'm keeping an open mind though, and welcoming new ideas please ask before you add though!
|-
|[[Bloodshed]]||16+
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.
|-
|[[The Book of Darkness]]||0||(WIP- '''DO NOT EDIT.''' I am the writer so I make the story.)
|-
|[[Book of Satan]]||13+||WIP- Do not edit please
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Carnage]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Cartoonish Chronicles]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| 16 ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[Choice of Arms]]||5||(Public)
|-
|[[Choose your own Naruto Adventure]]|| 200+ || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
|-
|[[Choosing a Fiancé has never been so fun ]]|| 0 || (OPEN NO EDIT)
|-
|[[Chronicle]]||0|| Work in Progress (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[City Life]]|| 12 ||
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress
|-
|[[ Collapse]]|| W.I.P. || private
|-
|[[College Wars]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Wars}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''
|-
|[[College of Killings]]||{{PAGESINCAT: College of Killings}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+
|-
|[[Critical Control]]|| 5 (WIP) || Private Don't Edit [updated every weekend]
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| 11 ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Chronicles of Strange I.]]||200+||(W.I.P please do not edit)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+
|-
|[[ A day at high school]]|| 0 || Under construction.
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+
|-
|[[D-Day|D-Day 1944]]|| WIP || (Just started do not edit.)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| 8 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Dead Town]]|| 0 || Under Construction/DO NOT EDIT PLEASE
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| 25+ ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| 5 ||(Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| 8 ||(Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| 49 ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Dishonored]]||WIP||('''SPECIFIC EDITING RULES TO BE FOUND INSIDE.''')
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| 35 ||
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| 2 ||(WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| 5 ||(Public)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || 4 ||(Please Edit!)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball: your very own story]]||3+ ||(Do not edit, only play)
|-
|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 19+ ||WIP, NO EDITING
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+
|-
|[[Elder Scrolls]] || 10+ || WIP Feel free to add a branch
|-
|[[Encounter With Your Ex]]|| 3+ || Under Construction. Do Not Edit. Private
|-
|[[Escape from Syria]]|| 160+ || WIP, please don't edit
|-
|[[Faction (Gay)]]|| WIP || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[F.R. Theory]]||20+||(WIP, for a school project. Please don't edit pages that are already up)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| 8 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Flu]]|| W.I.P. || (Please don't edit the story without consulting first)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+
|-
|[[ Game of Thrones]]|| 0 || (WIP, Private)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || 50+ ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || 7 ||(New story, under construction)
|-
|[[The Grey Manor]]|| 5+ || Under Construction. Please do not edit!
|-
|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )
|-
|[[Harry Potter: New Adventures at Hogwarts]]|| WIP || private
|-
|[[Hero's or Villains]] || 10 ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| 5 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[ Hetalia Days]]|| 0 || (WORK IN PROGRESS. Please Do NOT Edit!)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| 30+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
||[[High School Drama and Romance is Stupid]]|| 10+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hitman]]|| 11+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public
|-
|[[The horrors]]||10+||Work in progress. DO NOT edit or add new pages (but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| 4 ||(Under Construction)
|-
|[[Hunteria's Rising ]]||10+ ||Collaboration with Rwenmax and Michaltheanhur (Still Editing)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Identity Gun]]|| W.I.P|| (DO NOT EDIT please)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||10+
|-
|[[Immortal You]]||W.I.P|| Under construction, please do not edit.
|-
|[[In The Army]] || 25+
|-
|[[In The Beginning]]||3+||Closed
|-
|[[Infectional Survival]] || 13+ || (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| 4 ||(the under construction epic)
|-
|[[ Inside the Big Brother House ]]|| (W.I.P) || public
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| 2 ||(JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[An Interactive Game Of Thrones Story]]|| WIP || Please Do Not Edit Unless You Are Authorized by [[User:Potato King|me]]
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| 5 ||(Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[It's Only Wednesday]]|| 5+ || WIP
|-
|[[James Baxter is Idle]]|| 0 || private - (Do Not Edit Without Permission)
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || 15+
|-
|[[July 5-6, 1944]]||6|| Private, Do not edit.
|-
|[[Katarina's Adventures]]||20+ || WIP, please do not edit
|-
|[[Kemp]]|| 10 ||(Under Construction ) [PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]
|-
|[[A KlAksakAR's adventures in the Empire of MikkoMMM]]|| 10 || Discontinued
|-
|[[Kidnapped]]|| 31 ||(Under Construction ) [DO NOT edit without my permission(but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors) ]
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||20+
|-
|[[Krime or Kop King]]||7+ ||(No Editing.)
|-
|[[Life of a Legend]]||2+ ||(No Editing.)
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|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]||3+ || (Public)
|-
|[[Life Of a Rouge]] || 2+ ||(WIP, don't edit without my permission. Warrior Cats BTW)
|-
|[[ Life of Rayne]]|| 0 || (Under Construction)
|-
|[[Life of Who?]]|| 2+ ||(WIP, do not edit without my permission, thanks.)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] (Romance) || 12 ||(Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||175+ ||(11 stories)
|-
|[[ Magical World of Hetalia ]]|| 25+ || Private DO NOT EDIT. ( Any pages added will be immediately removed. SO DON'T WASTE TIME MAKING SOMETHING THAT WILL BE REMOVED. )
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| 8 ||(JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| 8 ||(Public)
|-
|[[The Martyred]]|| WIP ||(BASED OFF AN ORIGINAL WORK DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| 11 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| 50+ ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Machine of Magic]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Machine of Magic}} || Private, please do not edit.
|-
|[[moon light]]||8+
|-
|[[ My Little Pony Love is Magic]]|| 0 || Private WIP
|-
|[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] || 0||(Work in progress.)
|-
|[[Naruto's Friend, you]]|| 25+||(Private, no editing)
|-
|[[Nation Building]]||W.I.P||private please dont edit
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||15+ ||
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| 7 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||30+
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| 12 ||just began
|-
|[[A New Life]]||40+ ||Public
|-
|[[The New Overmind]]|| 10+ || public (I reserve the right to delete and/or edit pages)
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || 3 ||Just Started, Do Not Edit
|-
|[[the night at home]] || 14 ||(just started)
|-
|[[Nikon Academy]] || (Just Started please don't edit)
|-
|[[Nothing Hidden]] || 0 || In progress
|-
|[[Nudisma Terena]]|| 0 || WIP, Edits are Welcome
|-
|[[Obelisk]] || WIP || Private, please do not edit.
|-
|[[Office Lady]] || 5 ||(just started, public)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || 9 ||(I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || 7 ||(Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[One Princess, Four Princes, Choices|'''One Princess''', ''Four Princes?'' '''Choices'''.]]|| 15 || (Public)
|-
|[[The Only One]]
|-
|[[Our Way]] || 7+ ||(Private, To be taken seriously)
|-
|[[out in the woods]]|| 6 ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| 7 ||(No editing please)
|-
|[[Perverticus]]|| 4 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Piggy's Day]]|| 373 || (WIP) (open)
|-
|[[ Points of Light]]|| 0 || private
|-
|[[Politica]]||4 ||(Spanish) (No editing please)
|-
|[[Poke]]|| 5 || (first time so please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Powers That Be]]|| 2 || don't edit.
|-
|[[Prom]]|| W.I.P|| private - please don't edit!
|-
|[[Psychodude]]||30+ ||Open to Public
|-
|[[quest to kill tutorial genie]]|| 6 ||(Its Your Call)
|-
|[[Rebellion]]||5+ || Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A random story]]||333+
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|[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]]||100+
|-
|[[Random III]]||25+
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|[[Random Four]]|| 25+
|-
|[[The Random Quota]] || 5 ||(Private: Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Kincaid]])
|-
|'''[[Remember]]''' ||70 ||(Do Not Edit Without Permission) ('''<--Previously Featured!''')
|-
|[[Rescue]]|| 36 || (Complete, Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Resident evil]] || 53 || Abandoned, therefore public
|-
|[[Resident Evil RPG]] || 3 ||(W.I.P. Please don't edit)
|-
|[[Run From The Mob]]||10+ || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[Say Goodbye]]|| 11+ || WIP PRIVATE
|-
|[[School Life]]|| 6 ||(WIP) (Please do not edit until I take it out of WIP)
|-
|[[Seek]]|| 10 ||(W.I.P. pages. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Segon]]|| 103 ||(W.I.P. No editing please!)
|-
|[[Sengoku Basara: Romance]]|| 24 ||(Under Construction - No editing)
|-
|[[Serial X]]||25+ || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[Shit Happens, in Your Town.|Sh*t Happens, in Your Town.]]|| 12+ ||((Do not edit))
|-
|[[Short And Random Stories]]||250+ ||(25 stories)
|-
|[[The Short But True Story of The Secret Passage]]||25+
|-
|[[Short of Darkness]]|| 2 ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Sisters Love]]|| 15+ || (W.I.P) (please don't edit)
|-
|[[Silent Hill: Distorted Fantasies]]|| 80+ ||(W.I.P. Please refrain from editing) ('''Previously Featured''')
|-
|[[Skyrim Adventures]]||W.I.P|| private
|-
|[[ Sleepless Night ]]|| 0 || Private
|-
|[[Smile]]|| 180+ ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Sniper]]|| 38+ || WIP, two story arcs so far, do NOT edit.
|-
|[[Sonic 1]] || 10 ||(Just started I need help so who ever likes sonic please edit)
|-
|[[Sonic & Shadow]] || 26
|-
|[[soul evolution]]|| 6+ ||public but keep it serious
|-
|[[Space Ship Excalibur]] || 14 ||(First Mission complete, more to come!)
|-
|[[Spirit Warp]] || 40+ ||(50% finished and is NOT public, please leave it to me. feel free to play though!)
|-
|[[ splinter cell]]||3+
|-
|[[Spongebob's Day Off]]||90+
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|[[Spongebob the apocalypse]]||25+
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|[[Spongebob VS Patrick]]||40+
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|[[Spongebob Squarepants: A Dish Served Cold]]|| 8 ||(Just started, feel free to add on)
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|[[Spongebob Gone Wrong]]||5+||(Edit, sure, but please use proper grammar and spelling!)
|-
|[[Star Wars: Dawn of the New Republic]] || 13 ||(Just started)
|-
|[[ Stay Away From The Rebel ]]|| 0 || private
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|[[Survival]] || 30+ ||W.I.P.
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|[[Survivor: Zombie Apocalypse]]|| 4 || (Just started. Please DO NOT edit)
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|[[Super Self-Help Survival Guide]]|| WIP || No editplz!
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|[[Super Survival]] || 17+ ||WIP
|-
|[[Swimming Pools]] || (Work In Progress)
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|[[the sword of death]]|| 0 ||(w.i.p do not edit)
|-
|[[Team Fortress 2: RED vs BLU]] || 30+ ||Under Construction, only editable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
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|[[Team Fortress 2: Spy vs. Sniper]] ||40+ || started 6/24/09
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|[[Tesco Midnight Run]]||25+
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|[[Thought Of Me]]||200+
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|[[Tres_Coetus_Coloris]]|| 50 ||WIP DO NOT EDIT)
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|[[ Triforce ]]|| 30+ ||(WIP-please don't edit the story!!!)
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|[[The Twin Empires]]||10+ (W.I.P)||(Ask for permission)Continuing the main storyline, seeking other writers to help grow the story by adding their own characters
|-
|[[The War Fighter Program]]||W.I.P ||Collaboration with Michaltheanhur
|-
|[[The Undead]] || 50+ ||(WIP. Help Wanted!)
|-
|[[UNITY: The fall of humanity]]|| 7+ ||under work do not modify without permission please.)
|-
|[[University Secrets!]] || 14 ||(Public but don't add any pages but the ones that are unwritten )
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|[[Unknown Tales]] ||2+ ||edit freely)
|-
|[[ Urban Explorer: A Descent Into Madness ]]|| 30+ || In Progress
|-
|[[Violence]]|| 20 || in progress
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|[[AMC's The Walking Dead]]|| WIP|| Based on the Walking Dead show by AMC. This is a fan story, I do not own Walking Dead or it's content. Written by Alex Brownstone
|-
|[[The Ward]]|| 0 || Private: my first time so refrain from editing
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|[[ war in Europe ]]|| 100+
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|[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || 150+ || in progress)
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|[[ Warhammer 40,000: Renegade]]|| 6 || in progress (public)
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|[[The Wasteland]]|| 11 ||(WIP - Feel free to add new pages)
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|[[Week of the Zombies]]||25+
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|[[Welcome, Governor: A tale of the Terran Commonwealth]]|| 0 || (Semi-private. PM for details.)
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|[[ Whodunit?]]|| 0 || (WIP do not edit)
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|[[With Great Power Comes Great Girls]]|| 0 || work in progress, please don't edit!
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|[[ Wolverine Adventure]]|| 10+ || public
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|[[A World Blooms]]|| 88 || WIP; please ask before editing
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|[[World of Warcraft: Paths of Destiny]] || 0
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|[[World Undone]] || 15+
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|[[ Xozen Infection ]]|| 34+|| A zombie Story, (Sensible editing is welcomed but please contact me before you)
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|[[YOUR CRAZY]] || 18 ||(People can work on this)
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|[[ Your Own Game of Life]]|| 1 || WIP, Edits are Welcome
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|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private
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|[[Zach]]||15+
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|[[Zed Day]] ||3||| (WIP. Please don't edit) !!
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|[[Zombies]] || 6 ||(Just started)
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|[[ Zombie Apocalypse]]|| 8 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
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|[[Zombie blood]]||35+
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|[[ Zombie Judgement Day ]]|| 35+
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|[[Zombie Overlord]] (Mmmm...Brains)||50+ || (Work on It, It's Public)
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|[[Zombies NOT AGIAN]] || 13 ||(Just Started please don't edit)
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|[[Zombies city]] || 3 ||(Just Started please don't edit)
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|[[Zombehz]] ||10+ ||edit freely)
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|[[Zombies 2.0]] || || |Edit I don't care about grammar||
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|[[Zombie Apocalypse: Reverse Harem?!]]||(Please don't edit without permission)
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[[Category:System Pages]]

User:Reer

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:13:57 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'Hey, it's Reer. I'm new to the site!'

Hey, it's Reer. I'm new to the site!

Talk:Main Page

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:13:33 GMT

Reer: /* Still seeing if people are around */

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

==Removed pedo stories==
I created a filter for the story pedo__romp (with only 1 underscore, but used 2 underscores to get through my own filter). After a little research this content would be considered illegal as obscene even though it was only in text form.
[http://law.justia.com/cases/federal/appellate-courts/ca11/13-14350/13-14350-2015-03-12.html Reference]
I don't monitor the content on the site, but this was pointed out to me by a user. If you find any content explicitly related to sex with a minor, please remove it or edit it. --[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 20:00, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Removing these pages is impossible. If the wrong word is in the page title, the page can't be moved or deleted, only edited. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

To quote another user, who was unable to reply here for technical reasons:

"You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet www.asstr.org would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving."

This is very much a sentiment I share. '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 08:08, 27 September 2015 (UTC)'''

You realize that anyone who had said pages on their watch list is now totally hosed, right?

You mean because that renders their watch lists totally inaccessible? Yes, and it also blocks access to various index pages. I'd like to remove the pages rather than have the site littered with blockages, but that's not currently possible. I've left feedback at the main site, but we'll see if and when anything is done about it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:42, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

I implore you to look at Section 230 of the Communications Decency Act - I'd link to it, but keeps preventing me from posting external links.

''No provider or user of an interactive computer service shall be treated as the publisher or speaker of any information provided by another information content provider.''

Section 230 applies to intermediaries of third-party content. When content is simply hosted and not moderated by a web site then there is no liability for the provider. ---[[User:Privitude|Privitude]] 22:45, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Here we go: https://www.eff.org/issues/cda230

''Section 230 says that "No provider or user of an interactive computer service shall be treated as the publisher or speaker of any information provided by another information content provider" (47 U.S.C. § 230). In other words, online intermediaries that host or republish speech are protected against a range of laws that might otherwise be used to hold them legally responsible for what others say and do. The protected intermediaries include not only regular Internet Service Providers (ISPs), but also a range of "interactive computer service providers," including basically any online service that publishes third-party content. Though there are important exceptions for certain criminal and intellectual property-based claims, CDA 230 creates a broad protection that has allowed innovation and free speech online to flourish.'' --[[User:Privitude|Privitude]] 23:03, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

== An Idea For A Perfect Game Of Thrones Story ==
Hello dear users of C.Y.O.A, I know how our precious site works and I would like to announce you that I am about to write a big and great story, in the Universe of A Song Of Ice And Fire book series. Anyone who would like to help me in this story, please contact me via Skype (sarp.kaya12) or [[User talk:Potato King|edit my talk page]].

== Why are there no cows in the story Furry World? ==
-- Jasper --

I hope I can find some friends and even get help with my story. Looking forward.

Edit: Check it Out! [[An Interactive Game Of Thrones Story]]

-- [[User:Potato King|Potato King]] , 05.08.2015, 15:03 (GMT+2)

== How to start my own ==
I'm new and I have no idea how to start my own story.

==HELP==
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]

==Rules?==
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r

==Just some trouble==

Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.

Thank you in advance
--Xuan Tian Shang Ti

Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page. Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012

Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.
-AlexCW

I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r

I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea.
- [[KateFleet]] [[ YouTube : FleetGaming ]]

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Pictures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

I have a "Mature" (R rated) story I am writing. I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen. Is that too intense for "Mature"? Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]

I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section. At least the Mature section, certainly. It depends on how much detail you put in. You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active. It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

The interaction between users does seem unusual (profile page->discussion...) There can be a better way surely?
Also, clicking on a user's name is not easy. For one, the pages don't have a author's link. Also, the person who wrote the last page in a story might be different from the author of the current page.
A link to the profile of the creator should be there on each page so one can easily click on it...
-[[User:BenchWarmer|BenchWarmer]]

A link to the profile of the creator ''is'' there on each page. Just click the History tab. There's a link to the profile page and to the discussion page of every user who's edited the page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:43, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==

I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in "Recent Changes". Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the "Adult Section" in the side-bar? --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content. Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

How extreme is the majority? As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen? As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children. People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.
[[User:UZ9|UZ9]] 21:52, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

== Issues With the Site ==
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go. Is there any particular reason for this? Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

== Lag of site and page load limits ==
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a "Uncached page load rate limit reached -> 3 per second;" message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: "Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:"

It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.

*There is indeed a problem: link spammers. RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone. The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second. It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second. Do I like this solution? Not really. It's frustrating. Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.

***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?

: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==

Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: "You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period". Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.

Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.

Please give me some assistance in this regard, I do not want to lose the function of placing links in my stories.

I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

== Hiya! Are people still active? ==

Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody

== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==

Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the "reload page" button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that "Page hits per hour" message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]

I don't like it either, but "throttling" the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.
And i just got it when i tried to add here....

lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4

How does one "frustrate" a bot? If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away. There has to be a better way to do this.

== Image linking ==

Every time I try to link an image, it gives me:
"You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period."
This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.

Any help would be very much appreciated.
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)

== Chat Concept ==

Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive: '''editthischat.chatango.com''' 
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

== Mermaid games? ==

Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.

And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.

Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.

And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.

Thanks.

==New here==

So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.

-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

==I have questions==
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?
[[User:Blitzbear93|Blitzbear93]] 14:01, 14 September 2014 (UTC)Blitzbear93
:Hi,
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

== Linking to outside sites ==

So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.

Oh, and hitting submit and being told you have to wait ALSO counts, so if you misjudge by one minute, you have to wait EVEN MORE.

EDIT: After another 40 minutes of trying, I have given up and removed the link. This Kraken shall be wrestled another day.

== Is this websites community still active? ==

A few years back I used to frequently use this website a lot, I never had an account though.
Now I want to contribute stories and etc.
But I'm worried the hay day of this website is over.
How active is this community?

Tapdancingfish- 2/19/2015
I'm still around and a few others, dunno how active the site is as I don't see updates very often.

== New here! Started a story! "My Worlds" ==

I'm new here so I don't know if the site is still very active.
If yes then help if you want with my story, My Worlds.
I suck at grammar so help with that too.

==Still seeing if people are around==
Site seemed dead for awhile but you never know if people are lurking around out there. If you are give a shout out, if not, well then you can't read this.

-[[User:Noseknows|Noseknows]] 8:31, 19 May 2015 (UTC)

Oh man, this site was much busier back in the day. I really hope the website's community bounces back again, it'd probably motivate me to write once more and finish Remember. If not, i'll just return to checking in every few months.

-[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 16:17, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
: Seems there is great interest in reviving this site, or one that is similar, but perhaps at a site that is better maintained? If enough project participants were interested, you could request CYOS.wiki at Wiki.wiki (that's the URL) and have it hosted there for free. You could either start from scratch or migrate over any content of interest. -[[User:JOR|JOR]] 21:06, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

I want so bad, but I simply don't have the time to maintain it, I have a tonne of responsibilities I have to attend and I can really only check on this site once every few months. If this site got revamped or a new one was made sure I can definitely contribute and add more to my story(ies), but until then I'll wait till something happens.

-[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 15:10, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

I'm new to the site and I'm thinking about writing a story but I wouldn't know if I should since the site looks like it is pretty inactive at the moment. It would be nice to hear from anyone who is active XD
-[[User:Reer|Reer]] 17:15, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

== How do I delete my account? ==

Don't think I'm ever coming back here.

Talk:Main Page

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 17:12:17 GMT

Reer: /* Still seeing if people are around */

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

==Removed pedo stories==
I created a filter for the story pedo__romp (with only 1 underscore, but used 2 underscores to get through my own filter). After a little research this content would be considered illegal as obscene even though it was only in text form.
[http://law.justia.com/cases/federal/appellate-courts/ca11/13-14350/13-14350-2015-03-12.html Reference]
I don't monitor the content on the site, but this was pointed out to me by a user. If you find any content explicitly related to sex with a minor, please remove it or edit it. --[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 20:00, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

Removing these pages is impossible. If the wrong word is in the page title, the page can't be moved or deleted, only edited. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:42, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

To quote another user, who was unable to reply here for technical reasons:

"You are totally wrong about written descriptions of underage sex being illegal. The fact that the material could be considered obscene, and thus illegal (in the US) would actually apply equally to any story with any extreme sexual activity. It can be applied to rape, bestiality, and just about ANY story that contains sexual descriptions. It is based on a remnant of a struck down child protection law that was unconstitutional, which is why it is sited for material directly related to children. The law is laughable, and you may have found one of the few cases where it was actually used, and the only one that I am aware of that actually made it through successfully. The user who pointed it out to you must be a free speech hating Nazi to bring up such an unlikely and remote senario as based on such a law. If this law were actually a problem, the largest sex story site on the internet www.asstr.org would not exist. No reasonable court would rule that you are guilty of transporting obscenity for something someone else wrote on your website. I'm not trying to tell you how to run your site, but if the "no pedo stories" rule stands; I will be leaving."

This is very much a sentiment I share. '''--[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 08:08, 27 September 2015 (UTC)'''

You realize that anyone who had said pages on their watch list is now totally hosed, right?

You mean because that renders their watch lists totally inaccessible? Yes, and it also blocks access to various index pages. I'd like to remove the pages rather than have the site littered with blockages, but that's not currently possible. I've left feedback at the main site, but we'll see if and when anything is done about it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:42, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

I implore you to look at Section 230 of the Communications Decency Act - I'd link to it, but keeps preventing me from posting external links.

''No provider or user of an interactive computer service shall be treated as the publisher or speaker of any information provided by another information content provider.''

Section 230 applies to intermediaries of third-party content. When content is simply hosted and not moderated by a web site then there is no liability for the provider. ---[[User:Privitude|Privitude]] 22:45, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Here we go: https://www.eff.org/issues/cda230

''Section 230 says that "No provider or user of an interactive computer service shall be treated as the publisher or speaker of any information provided by another information content provider" (47 U.S.C. § 230). In other words, online intermediaries that host or republish speech are protected against a range of laws that might otherwise be used to hold them legally responsible for what others say and do. The protected intermediaries include not only regular Internet Service Providers (ISPs), but also a range of "interactive computer service providers," including basically any online service that publishes third-party content. Though there are important exceptions for certain criminal and intellectual property-based claims, CDA 230 creates a broad protection that has allowed innovation and free speech online to flourish.'' --[[User:Privitude|Privitude]] 23:03, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

== An Idea For A Perfect Game Of Thrones Story ==
Hello dear users of C.Y.O.A, I know how our precious site works and I would like to announce you that I am about to write a big and great story, in the Universe of A Song Of Ice And Fire book series. Anyone who would like to help me in this story, please contact me via Skype (sarp.kaya12) or [[User talk:Potato King|edit my talk page]].

== Why are there no cows in the story Furry World? ==
-- Jasper --

I hope I can find some friends and even get help with my story. Looking forward.

Edit: Check it Out! [[An Interactive Game Of Thrones Story]]

-- [[User:Potato King|Potato King]] , 05.08.2015, 15:03 (GMT+2)

== How to start my own ==
I'm new and I have no idea how to start my own story.

==HELP==
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]

==Rules?==
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r

==Just some trouble==

Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.

Thank you in advance
--Xuan Tian Shang Ti

Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page. Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012

Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.
-AlexCW

I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r

I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea.
- [[KateFleet]] [[ YouTube : FleetGaming ]]

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Pictures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

I have a "Mature" (R rated) story I am writing. I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen. Is that too intense for "Mature"? Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]

I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section. At least the Mature section, certainly. It depends on how much detail you put in. You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active. It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

The interaction between users does seem unusual (profile page->discussion...) There can be a better way surely?
Also, clicking on a user's name is not easy. For one, the pages don't have a author's link. Also, the person who wrote the last page in a story might be different from the author of the current page.
A link to the profile of the creator should be there on each page so one can easily click on it...
-[[User:BenchWarmer|BenchWarmer]]

A link to the profile of the creator ''is'' there on each page. Just click the History tab. There's a link to the profile page and to the discussion page of every user who's edited the page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:43, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==

I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in "Recent Changes". Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the "Adult Section" in the side-bar? --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content. Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

How extreme is the majority? As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen? As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children. People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.
[[User:UZ9|UZ9]] 21:52, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

== Issues With the Site ==
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go. Is there any particular reason for this? Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

== Lag of site and page load limits ==
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a "Uncached page load rate limit reached -> 3 per second;" message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: "Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:"

It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.

*There is indeed a problem: link spammers. RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone. The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second. It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second. Do I like this solution? Not really. It's frustrating. Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.

***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?

: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==

Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: "You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period". Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.

Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.

Please give me some assistance in this regard, I do not want to lose the function of placing links in my stories.

I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

== Hiya! Are people still active? ==

Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody

== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==

Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the "reload page" button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that "Page hits per hour" message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]

I don't like it either, but "throttling" the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.
And i just got it when i tried to add here....

lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4

How does one "frustrate" a bot? If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away. There has to be a better way to do this.

== Image linking ==

Every time I try to link an image, it gives me:
"You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period."
This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.

Any help would be very much appreciated.
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)

== Chat Concept ==

Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive: '''editthischat.chatango.com''' 
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

== Mermaid games? ==

Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.

And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.

Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.

And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.

Thanks.

==New here==

So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.

-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

==I have questions==
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?
[[User:Blitzbear93|Blitzbear93]] 14:01, 14 September 2014 (UTC)Blitzbear93
:Hi,
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

== Linking to outside sites ==

So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.

Oh, and hitting submit and being told you have to wait ALSO counts, so if you misjudge by one minute, you have to wait EVEN MORE.

EDIT: After another 40 minutes of trying, I have given up and removed the link. This Kraken shall be wrestled another day.

== Is this websites community still active? ==

A few years back I used to frequently use this website a lot, I never had an account though.
Now I want to contribute stories and etc.
But I'm worried the hay day of this website is over.
How active is this community?

Tapdancingfish- 2/19/2015
I'm still around and a few others, dunno how active the site is as I don't see updates very often.

== New here! Started a story! "My Worlds" ==

I'm new here so I don't know if the site is still very active.
If yes then help if you want with my story, My Worlds.
I suck at grammar so help with that too.

==Still seeing if people are around==
Site seemed dead for awhile but you never know if people are lurking around out there. If you are give a shout out, if not, well then you can't read this.

-[[User:Noseknows|Noseknows]] 8:31, 19 May 2015 (UTC)

Oh man, this site was much busier back in the day. I really hope the website's community bounces back again, it'd probably motivate me to write once more and finish Remember. If not, i'll just return to checking in every few months.

-[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 16:17, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
: Seems there is great interest in reviving this site, or one that is similar, but perhaps at a site that is better maintained? If enough project participants were interested, you could request CYOS.wiki at Wiki.wiki (that's the URL) and have it hosted there for free. You could either start from scratch or migrate over any content of interest. -[[User:JOR|JOR]] 21:06, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

I want so bad, but I simply don't have the time to maintain it, I have a tonne of responsibilities I have to attend and I can really only check on this site once every few months. If this site got revamped or a new one was made sure I can definitely contribute and add more to my story(ies), but until then I'll wait till something happens.

-[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 15:10, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

I'm new to the site and I'm thinking about writing a story but I wouldn't know if I should since the site looks like it is pretty inactive at the moment. It would be nice to hear from anyone who is active XD
-[[User:Reer|Reer]] 2 November 2015

== How do I delete my account? ==

Don't think I'm ever coming back here.

Walk in and sit down for a drink

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 16:50:49 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You stroll into the bar casually, Ashoka is sitting in a corner by herself and doesn't notice you. You sit down at the bar and order a drink, while you wait for the drink you dec…'

You stroll into the bar casually, Ashoka is sitting in a corner by herself and doesn't notice you. You sit down at the bar and order a drink, while you wait for the drink you decide what to do next.

*[[Walk over to Ashoka]]
*[[Wait for you drink]]
*[[She has spotted you!]]

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CW:The Night Sisters destroyed you flee to the Coruscant Underworld

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 16:48:27 GMT

Reer:

The droids attacked and slaughtered the Night Sisters all because of you, you manage to escape Dathomir and make your way to Coruscant. You flee to the underbelly of the city planet, what is known as the Underworld. Without a home to go back to you arrive in the Underworld, all you have with you are your two lightsabers, some credits and the clothes on your back.

What will you do next?

*[[Train your Dark powers]]

*[[Visit a local bar]]

*[[Become a bounty hunter]]

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Kill him and leave no traces

Reer — Mon, 02 Nov 2015 01:10:07 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You kill him and dump his body in the trash, all that is left is a cum stain on the ground. You continue into the bar after Ashoka. Inside the bar you notice Ashoka in a corner b…'

You kill him and dump his body in the trash, all that is left is a cum stain on the ground. You continue into the bar after Ashoka. Inside the bar you notice Ashoka in a corner by herself supping at a drink, your pussy moistens again at the thought of turning the young padawan into your own servant but the idea is dismissed.

You sit beside her and she looks up at you wondering what's going on. "Hello my darling" you say and she jumps back in shock "Ventress!" she gasps. You quickly grab her lightsaber and aim your pistol at her, she can't stop you now. You can feel the heat building up in your nether regions as you watch the shock in her face.

What will you do with her?

*[[Screw the bounty, you want her as your own]]
*[[She is better off dead]]
*[[I'll take her in]]

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Continue sucking his member

Reer — Sun, 01 Nov 2015 23:21:45 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You continue sucking on his nine inches, you push it as far as it can go back your throat. His hands grip the back of your head and shove it down further, you start to gag and sp…'

You continue sucking on his nine inches, you push it as far as it can go back your throat. His hands grip the back of your head and shove it down further, you start to gag and splutter when with a grunt he blows his load down your throat. You gulp up all his semen and he falls down against the wall, finished. You take his clothes from the ground and put them on.

*[[Continue into the bar after Ashoka and forget about him]]
*[[Kill him and leave no traces]]

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Cum onto his dick

Reer — Sun, 01 Nov 2015 23:18:41 GMT

Reer:

You cum onto his dick and collapse into his arms, with three more thrusts he empties his load into your small tight pussy. You fall onto the ground feeling like a whore with cum dripping from your pussy. "That was nice" he laughs. Before you know it he slips cuffs around your nimble hands and knocks you out.

He brings you back to his small dingy apartment, you are chained to the wall. "You thought you could trick me?" He laughs as he chains you up against the wall. The smell of cum, sweat and blood fills your nostrils. With his anger your dark powers florish and you feel yourself getting wet. "Want another go don't you" He whips out his nine inches and sticks it up your ass. "It's too big" you try to say as it tears at your inner walls. You scream, your pussy is dripping. With a grunt he fills your tight ass with his load.

"I noticed you had these" he says holding out your lightsabers, "Maybe we could put them to good use". He takes out your light sabers and shoves one up your dripping wet tight pussy. You start to moan as it wriggles around inside. He sticks the other lightsaber inside your abused asshole, it slowly gets sucked in. He pushes and pulls the lightsabers in and out of your holes, just before you cum he pulls out the lightsabers and shoves them into your mouth. The taste pf your juices is intoxicating.

You have become his cum whore, every time he comes home from a bounty you please him with your abused holes.

'''The End'''

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Cum onto his dick

Reer — Sun, 01 Nov 2015 21:51:20 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You cum onto his dick and collapse into his arms, with three more thrusts he empties his load into your small tight pussy. You fall onto the ground feeling like a whore with cum …'

You cum onto his dick and collapse into his arms, with three more thrusts he empties his load into your small tight pussy. You fall onto the ground feeling like a whore with cum dripping from your pussy. Before you know it he slips cuffs around your nimble hands and knocks you out.

You wake up in the dark chained to a wall. The last few days have been chaotic. The bounty hunter brought you back to his place and fucked you like the whore you are. He invited over his squad members and they abused every one of your holes until you were covered in cum.
You now are his property and he fucks you whenever he feels like it.

'''The End'''

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Push him onto the ground and fuck him

Reer — Sun, 01 Nov 2015 21:47:29 GMT

Reer: Created page with 'You push him onto the ground and mount his cock. His hands reach up and feels your small perky nipples, you rise and fall on his nine inches and you can feel it fill your tight l…'

You push him onto the ground and mount his cock. His hands reach up and feels your small perky nipples, you rise and fall on his nine inches and you can feel it fill your tight little pussy. You are really starting to like this.

*[[Cum onto his dick]]
*[[Wait for him to cum]]

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