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Spank party after the bath

Ragnax — Sun, 04 Feb 2018 06:25:22 GMT

Ragnax:

arrives like a naked girl shaved with shoes and socks

amy: please, do not force me to be in this state

vanilla: better you share or this party will be published

amy: ok

blaze: quiet and you're denuda (gives a pellisco in his injured buttocks) and we all saw everything

amy is forced to enjoy her party is her current status

cream: we play a game

blaze: we play (ragnax: this is a game from my country but they all hit on the head not on the butt). all spanking no one was

cream: how to play

rouge: it's easy we throw amy to the floor with the ass in the air and we give him several hits

amy: why

blaze: quiet if you find out who was the last to hit you, we leave you and continue to the next

sonic wakes up: it sounds like a painful game

amy at least could feel the hands of sonic reluctantly: a vote

most say that if

rouge pulls amy to the ground this falls face down with the butt up, thousands of blows are received in the back of amy and before it gets up

amy: is cream

A.new spanked[[new child victim]]

error

another pair of spanks on the floor

amy desperate: is rouge

B.new spanked[[the new sexy victim]]

rouge: error

history repeats itself

amy very sore: it's blaze

C.new spanked[[new kitten to hit]]

blaze: error again

amy crying: it's vanilla

D.new spanked[[victim milf]]

Amy is out of energy on the floor and receives another pair of spankings in her ass when the time comes to guess. Who was the last? Amy was not saying anything anymore, she was sobbing

rouge: I think that amy ran out of energy

Vanilla: it's time to blow out the candles

Vanilla takes Amy from the floor without energy and leaves it on the table with a cake and candles lit

his friends sing him the happy song compleaños plus another verse '' ahead ''

friends: ask your wish

Seeing no energy amy rogue crouches and makes a kancho (kancho meaning "enema" is a Japanese game where fingers are intertwined in the private orficios, is the Asian wedgie) making amy release a powerful scream by turning off the candles

blaze: what energy

vanilla cut the cake for the guests, amy sees the cake discouraged, blaze and rouge carry amy from the hands

vanilla: where they take the cumplañera still deserves his spanking birthday

rouge: we take it outside, it has a little heat

blaze: yes and I want to smoke, know that you do not have to smoke in closed spaces

vanilla: ok

outside of the house

rouge: you have that ...

blaze: 2 bottles of the miraculous

amy tired, (I remember that this depila of feet until the neck dressed with slippers and socks and with so many blows in the rear that was left without energy to mourn) says: of that they speak take me inside to finish this hell

rogue and blaze: it's not fun if you stay quiet

rouge grabs her waist and flies leaving her butt open, blaze stuffs a bottle in her mouth and anus de may spicy sauce

blaze: this will give you energy

rouge keeps flying keeping amy in that uncomfortable situation while the bottles empty their contents

rouge: a bottle ready

blaze takes the bottle out of my mouth

amy: this stings a lot ... (blaze covers his mouth)

blaze: quiet my girl just missing the other bottle

rouge: that smoother skin you have shaved, you know that the coat will take weeks to grow

blaze: but it does not matter you do not have anything to hide (the bottle empties and free amy)
amy: it is very hot ('' runs without consolation ne circulos '')

blaze and rouge enter amy

vanilla: you seem to be more animated

amy: burn my butt a lot

Vanilla: and it will be hotter

rouge: each guest will have his breech time with the birthday girl

amy: that's unfair ... ('' receiving the first spanking '')

vanilla: it's time to count the spanking

amy: demons hurt a lot, burn even more

It's been 30 minutes since the first guest hit my butt

cream: my hands hurt, I can not finish giving it

rouge: quiet I will give them

blaze: but your hands look pretty hurt

rouge: here I have a ping pong paddle will finish the work

the last 3 hits

rouge: tell my girl ('' gives him a very strong blow, your tits bounce on his shaved and sweaty body '')

amy: one

second blow and amy says: you're a damn daughter of ... ('' interrupted by a flurry of blows '')

rouge: that is not a number

blaze: in what number are we

Cream: two

Vanilla: not from the beginning

amy counts without making a mistake before the number two hit, rouge sticks a finger in her ass which causes amy to say bad words

another burst of blows are given on his bright red backside

Vanilla: from the beginning

After 15 minutes, Amy finishes counting and is released, giving the guests a dance of rubbing her butt

the guests leave slowly, rouge says: I recorded everything, you listened to my depiladito and silly hedgehog

blaze: as you have all the dirty clothes I offer to clean them, I will take them, I will bring them to you when they are lipias, also your curtains and bedclothes

rouge: what a pity it seems that you have nothing to cover for a few days, what luck

amy: I am very clean, leave my clothes where I was

rouge: we just want to help

amy: but my modesty

blaze: we saw you completely naked and humiliated if you see more people who give more

rouge: you have more shame than to give us, I know ('' giving him a very hard pinch on his scarlet red background '')

amy could not anymore and falls exhausted on the ground: I will avenge

blaze laughs madly: clear

rouge and blaze go slowly

amy walks to her bed and falls as lead face soba her butt and falls asleep (thought: '' tomorrow I worry '')

continue the story[[the next morning, the new day ENF amy rose]]

end 4 special bath adn game 1

[[Category: Sonic Girls ENF]][[Category: Amy_Rose]]

User talk:Ragnax

Ragnax — Sun, 04 Feb 2018 05:30:52 GMT

Ragnax:

{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:15, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you still must comply with the site rules and categorize your pages. This is your second warning. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:47, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
categorize you mean to say what kind of history it is.

I am watching the tutorial but I find it cumbersome I hope to do it well and I modify the others that are bad

User talk:Platypus

Ragnax — Sun, 04 Feb 2018 05:29:04 GMT

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Hey platipus. I did add a title. What are you talking about?
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@Platypus Thank You for correcting it. I may be an English major, but I'm certainly no Grammar Nazi, so I tend to miss things fairly often. I usually correct it if I notice. Sorry bout that. Looking forward to working with you!
- [[User:Durzan]] replied 11:23PM MST; Jan 21st, 2018

Could you delete the following link? The address was changed, thanks. http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Go_into_the_next_room [[User:Kanin452|Kanin452]] 9/6/17

@Platypus, Thanks lad! --[[User:YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis|YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis]] 21:12, 22 May 2017 (UTC) // Reply was at 5:12 pm, Boston Time

@Platypus, I apologize for making my first entry here so sloppy. I occasionally write, but not all the time, resulting in a wobbly mess of a entry. With Sincerest Apologies, [[User:YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis|YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis]] // Reply was at 1:41 pm, Boston Time.

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my ([[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]) addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

@Platypus, understood. I will attempt my own story at some point. Thanks for the tips and the criticism. I'll aim to improve in future. --[[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]

@Platypus, really sorry and ashamed about my mistakes on editing your stories. I'll get right on reading the reccomendations you gave me. English is kind of my third language, but I promise it will get better. The story was so massive I didn't expect you minded if I filled up some of the blanks. If you believe my writting skills to be poor - as in, the situation I'm presenting is unappealing -, that I would also like to hear. -- [[User:AvengerOstrich|AvengerOstrich]]

== Problems with links ==
Hey Platypus. I'm having a problem with the links to other pages on my story '''120 Minutes Remain'''. When I'm signed in, the main Category shows me the full 66 pages that I have already completed, but when I'm signed out it only shows the first 37 pages and no others. However, when I read through the story normally, the full 66 pages are present. I know that I haven't explained this very well, but if you could visit the Category: 120 Minutes Remain while signed out, you will see what I mean. <br>
I tried to report this bug, but the page doesn't load when I do this, for whatever reason. If you could check it out yourself/ give me any tips on how to fix it, that would be much appreciated. <br>
Thanks, [[User:Adam02oc|Adam02oc]] 11:29, 19 November 2017
P.S Sorry if my grammer is a bit all over the place.

== Fredhot16 ==
Is there a way to change the name of a story without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

Is it O.K to delete stories that have a few pages and that nobody has worked on for what seems like forever? Or at least move it to the pit? Update: Can I have permission to move stories to the Pit? And how do I that, if you're willing to give me permission?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:14 (Louisiana Time), 20 May 2017

Hey, do you mind fixing the Main Page? --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:49 (Louisiana Time), 24 May 2017

Hey, do you have any suggestions for where I should put a section where people can put plot suggestions for the "Dungeons and Dragons" Adult Story?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2017

Could you please fix the category errors on "Jojo's Choose Your Own Bizarre Adventure" in the Mature Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:13 (Louisiana Time), 17 October 2017

Could you please fix Teejay's discussion page?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:00 (Louisiana Time), 30 November 2017

== Moving project ==

Hi Platypus,

Would you be interested in moving the project to its own domain and server? It's become painfully clear EditThis is not capable of supporting the project's infrastructure and is hindering the continued growth of the project. I've noticed several issues which are causing problems for CYOS:

* The throttling is disrupting both readers and writers from fully enjoying the stories.
* Excessive abuse filters are causing administrative issues for you.
* Lack of anti-abuse tools makes it extremely inefficient to counter abuse.
* Extremely outdated MediaWiki installation which hasn't been updated in nearly 8 years.

We can fix all of the above problems and implement a mass undo feature, a mobile version of the website, and do much more to create a modern CYOS-type website once we move to a new domain and server. Since CYOS doesn't allow user to user emails, could you perhaps contact me at floatingspace@protonmail.com to discuss specifics? Thanks. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 21:47, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

:Ya, it's just the actual lead administrator isn't reachable and appears to have abandoned the project years ago for you to run. There's really nothing stopping the members of the community from getting up and moving their stories and content to a new website that's actually managed and has the features CYOS needs. For example, I think an actual notification system (see the Echo extension available for MediaWiki) would be helpful for writers to keep track of new story developments. There are lots of useful features available to newer versions of MediaWiki. I think also thinking of a client-side story customization tool, which would allow readers to customize the names and other parameters of stories without changing the story for everyone else. In short, there's great potential in the project, but EditThis is hindering progress. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 16:27, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

::So what's your verdict on moving? Individuals can of course move stories, but a mass organized effort would probably be better and help build an actual community on a new platform that's actually maintained. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 17:04, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

== DirtyMeStoryTime ==

Sorry Platypus, but I will let you deal with [[User talk:John Smith]] and his new SSR pages [[You must be mistaken]] and [[Rip open the Peace Corps girl's shirt]]. I thought about adding the category to those pages and sending him a warning, but since that is your story, I thought it would be better to just let you know and decide if you wanted to just fix them or delete them, and how you wanted to warn him. Anyways, just letting you know. Feel free to stop by my story and let me know what you think if you have the time ^.^ Working hard on it, but not sure if it is good to go into the details that I am. btw, the story is [[Masochist me]]. Well, the one I am working on currently. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:55, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have asked Teejay, but, he isn't really that strong in critiquing. I have been trying to write my Masochist me, and been hung up on my training. I am enjoying writing it alot, and trying to make sure that the reader actually understand sex, as opposed to some of the stuff that ends up in the stories on here. But, I was thinking. I am wondering, should I even bother writing this? I mean, the entire story, while it will have some vanilla sex in it, and might use a little of the current material I am writing as fodder, it is not really "the story". I realize that there are many stories here that have inconsistencies, and go off on some side thing that have nothing to do with the plot, but I am wondering if there is any use in all this research and writing. It helps, slightly, to highlight the main character, show the reader what she is like, what she is experiencing, and compares and contrasts some of the differences between her and a normal, vanilla woman, so I know it isn't completely pointless. I am also having fun researching the different steps in sex, and trying to teach the reader about human sexuality, but it is not an educational story either. Can you let me know your thoughts? Is my The teacher part of the story pointless, a waste of time, etc? Will readers even care about this part, since they are probably coming to the story to read about a woman being slapped and hit, tied and bound, tortured and humiliated? I mean, to me, this feels needed, just to get the users to think about the world she is living in, and about who she is herself. But, well, I am not the other readers on this site. Am I going to far, and should stick to simple, "I moaned as the paddle fell across my ass, red welt left behind. He grabbed my hair, forcing my head up from across his knee, and held my gaze to his. "Are you going to be good now, or do you need more?" I shot him my best defiant look. "Well, in that case," with that, he stopped talking, shoved me back over his knee and brought the belt down over and over and over again. My ass was on fire, which only make me wetter, and forced me to moan and scream, cry and kick harder. God, I was about to climax from the sheer sweetness of the pain, mind wrapped in a blissful haze."

Also, is what I am writing on the teacher page any good? Is it redundant? Too long? Does it captivate, or just bore? Is the writing style okay? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:44, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, finished changing the ages in Hot & Horny on the Jessica path. All her pages should show her as 21 now. I was going to start the Miranda path, and I changed a few of the ages, but not up for reading them, and stopped making the changes. Some of the story lines just sound too much like the 6 year old that it originally was, and I find it creepy. Guess I will let you or someone else change her stuff. Sadly, the Josh stuff with Jessica was okay, but I didn't like the part where she goes into her parents bedroom. Not really something I am interested in, not with the tone and way the writer made it. I sort of lost it when I saw the "I'm about to pop an egg". Stopped reading and just edited the age only. I mean, I have seen stupid lines, but really? wtf is that? Wish the writers could at least try to "imagine" what a real woman might say... I mean, "Cum inside my womb and impregnate me" is bad enough, but really, "I'm about to pop an egg" I think may be the single, stupidest thing I have ever heard. I think it may have done permanent brain damage... I already feel stupider for having read it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

Sorry Platy, I will leave you to correct [[Special:Contributions/Mudcraft12]]'s stuff. I don't have enough time to add the category to every page he created... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:21, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

A new spammer: [[Special:Contributions/Wannaparty006]]. Since I cannot block him/her/it/them/things, not much I can do. Same since I can't really delete pages either. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

== Simple Question ==

Hey, Platypus, I seem to be having a rather strange issue, and since you seem to get around in this site, figured I would ask you. I'm working on my story [[Fallout: New Vegas]], and having a small issue with the category pages. More specifically, the page counter. On the "F" page, I tried to configure it like other stories to count the number of pages in the category "FNV". When I am logged out, the counter says one page. When I am logged in, it says the actual amount (still small, just starting), but I would like to figure out why this is and how to fix it. Anyways, whenever you get a chance if you could look at it or give me an answer it would be greatly appreciated.

Well, thank you anyways for the help, it would have bugged me for a while.

Hola i need help creating a story but i dont know how to make a you choose story plz help me-Elementor11234
p.s. sorry for editing out your stuff.

== CREATING YOUR STORY ==

HELLO I NEED HELP ON CREATING MY OWN STORY WITHOUT JUST EDITING SOMEONE ELSES STORY NEED HELP IMMEDIATLY
--[[User:Elementor11234|Elementor11234]] 19:30, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234

== Wolfskin75 ==

Thank you for the heads up. I thought I had done it right. I don't want to mess up anyone's story. I will read up before adding stuff.

[[User:Wolfskin75|Wolfskin75]]

== ForgotPassword ==

I'm working on the pages I left as incomplete. I don't write often and, when I do, I'm battling a horde of technical issue with my computer, so I'm forced to leave the work unfinished until I'm back in the mood to write. I am, slowly, getting the pages done, so don't worry about it too much. Besides, I'm not the first person to leave pages unfinished. There's a few stories on here like that, just minus the [in progress] part I added... I just need some time to get around to writing pages again, so it won't be an issue for long. Honest. [[User:ForgotPassword|ForgotPassword]]

== Thanks ==

I noticed you went through and reorganised my character pages. Thanks for that. I'd been putting off fixing that myself for a while. --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 13:17, 3 August 2017 (UTC)

== THIS is Very important,please help me with this==

Ok so I'm making this story based on a book (warriors 'in to the wild' by Erin Hunter)
And I was thinking about useing a prologue,
It would look something like this

----
Prologue text

*[[Adventure/Option 1]]>your adventure starts in 5/4/3/2/or 1
<nowiki>[[Category: WARRIORS Into the wild]]</nowiki>

----
Ok thanks 😀 :)

== Alison ==

Hi,

I created a story titled [[A Story]] in the All Family-Friendly Stories section yesterday. There were only two stories, the other one was called pokemon 64 or something. Today, I went to All Family-friendly Stories again, and there were alot of stories, but I couldn't find mine. I ended up using the link in [[User:Alison| my user page]]. (I put a link to my story there.) What's going on?

Help please,

--[[User:Alison|Alison]] 00:52, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

Okay, so I put my story link in the All Family-Friendly Stories page, (in the correct format, so don't worry) but I still don't know what's happening with the two-stories thing. I would totally appreciate it if you told me what was happening.

--[[User:Alison|Alison]] 03:41, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

I really need help with the status indicator page in the tutorial. All that coding doesn't make sense. I've been trying to make a 'template' for my adventure stories and my user page, but it's so confusing. Can you help make one for me or explain to me please? Thanks.

--[[User:Alison|Alison]] 07:40, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

==THE PROBLEM OF MAGIKARP7297==
Hey, Platypus, I figured it out. I'm gonna be known as The Guy Who Really Screwed Up, but at the same time, be the guy who's tries to fix it. (crossing my fingers I don't screw it up more, replacing the stories one by one, sadly.) I'm gonna leave a message to tell everyone to tell me the titles of PG-13 stories they have seen, as well as the Family-Friendly ones. (Was taking a stab at those, but... meh. So unless someone adopts my Mario 64 story or whatever the hell i named it within the next week, then move it to the fucking Pit please.) But anyways, I'm gonna fix my problem. MAGIKARP7297. P.S. the message will be in Idea Pitches so dont freak out.

==GlitterSticky==

Yeah hey idk you seem like the person to ask about this, because I haven't seen anything on the google group or on editthis.info proper I'd like to ask... What happened? Do you know? The site was just completely down the past few days, I was starting to think the owner dropped it or it got taken down for something, I was getting ready to go looking for another site when I saw it was back up today. I guess it's none of my business really I'm just confused and curious as to what went wrong? -GlitterSticky

Ah, right, thanks anyway! -GlitterSticky

==ragnax==

sorry bro I try to write as best I can. the fact is that I do not speak English
I am Latin American and I speak English neutral helped me with Google
at least I'm pretty creative and evil with my victims

part2
categorize you mean to say what kind of history it is.

I am watching the tutorial but I find it cumbersome I hope to do it well and I modify the others that are bad

Amy cries and rubs her butt

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 19:46:07 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'amy starts to cry and rubs her ass while taking small little jumps in circles around the scene Black guard: as you suspected you are not one of our girls amy rubbing her ass an…'

amy starts to cry and rubs her ass while taking small little jumps in circles around the scene

Black guard: as you suspected you are not one of our girls

amy rubbing her ass and the guard takes her from the waist like a damsel in distress, leaving her head looking at the entrance of the bar and her naked butt towards the street

amy: please release me

black guard: what are you doing naked in the street you are a pervert

amy: an eggman robot left me in this state, please release me

black guard: hell, if you're looking for that eggmanrobot can be dangerous to the local, miss rouge would be angry with me

amy: wait i am friend of rouge

Black guard: how does it look?

amy: rouge the bat always wears latex clothes with a long botal, always painted as an ordinary and when he has the opportunity to embarrass me he does not hesitate a second to do it.
sometimes it comes out with a red brute called knuckles

Black guard: sounds possible

amy: it's the truth

the guard hits him on the backside: silence I'm thinking

[[it frees and helps]]

to be continue...

She still can't move, she's too embarrassed!

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 17:53:16 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'amy keep doing the dance do not take me photos do not look at me, it's very embarrassing (comments from people: look at that pink hedgehog is naked, my daughter has the biggest …'

amy keep doing the dance do not take me photos do not look at me, it's very embarrassing

(comments from people: look at that pink hedgehog is naked, my daughter has the biggest breasts of that silly exhibitionist, look how she tries to cover that ass, she is so tender and funny, where is the police when you need to punish a spoiled girl )
although nervous, her shame continued to grow and her anger against the robot also.

amy: damn perverted robot

amy jumps to the robot the robot throws a network
[[amy is caught with the net being left with her hands tied to her head]]

Amy dodges the net in the air and grabs the robot's head, rips it off by jumping motor fluid into his body, grabs the wires from his head and steers the robot out of the crowd.

in the flight he takes the memory of the photos, he stays stuck in his body for the motor oil amy says: maltito eggman occupies new oil, damn stingy

the robot loses energy

[[falls in a pool]]

[[falls on top of a train]]

Amy entering a strip club

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 16:56:32 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'enter the strip club When entering thousands of lights of various colors impact his face and other parts of the body. leave disoriented a tall guard dressed in black stops her: …'

enter the strip club
When entering thousands of lights of various colors impact his face and other parts of the body.
leave disoriented

a tall guard dressed in black stops her: who are you?

amy nervous: I am one of the girls

Black guard: I had never seen you

amy: perhaps not once am I of the new girls, giant stupid (trying to seem safe and dominant)

Black guard: It could be true, but you should not undress inside, you also do not have good tits, although you get saved by that ass

amy: it's so normal to go without clothes that I forget (trying to make him believe that he did not catch her and call the police) and they call me '' little ass '', I will not have nice tits but look that ass (inside his mind '' what the hell have I said '')

Black guard: let's see if it's true, do not let go of a tear

amy: why?

Black guard gives him a big spanking on her butt that almost falls to the ground

[[Amy feels pain but does not cry]]is not caught

[[Amy cries and rubs her butt]]is caught

Spank party after the bath

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 06:21:42 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'arrives like a naked girl shaved with shoes and socks amy: please, do not force me to be in this state vanilla: better you share or this party will be published amy: ok blaze…'

Primero un baño

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 05:26:32 GMT

Ragnax:

amy is taken against her strength by vanilla

amy: please I'm not a little girl

vanilla: silence small naughty girl (washing her body with a sponge)

blaze and rouge: we'll help the little whore to transform into a nice little naughty spanking

rouge takes out his poster: cute little girl do not cry that we still do not spank

blaze: or look at those ribbon crosses (he pulls out the cross-shaped ribbons from her tits) my cute little damaged tits

rouge gives a touch to your soft and smooth skin: or now shaved your peel is very smooth like a baby's skin

blaze pulls out the tape from his kitten: look at that damaged kitten

amy: they are damn

vanilla: do not say those bad words (take it and give it a good spanking SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK)

amy: please no more

rouge sticks a soap bar: now you will not say anything

blaze: I will treat your tits with this cream (while rubbing your small breasts) nice little nipples

rouge: to get that cheap paint you have to apply hot water

after 10 minutes amy is clean, spanking

Vanilla: Now to the corner, I'll look for some clothes

rouge: I will look for your clothes

come back after a minute

rouge: I'm sorry vanilla this girl besides naughty is a slut

amy: it's a ...

amy: it's a ... (blaze applies to spank with some fire)

blaze: small silence spanked

rouge: at least I found shoes and socks (putting it on by force)

amy:somehow having only socks and shoes is more embarrassing

rouge: and fast do not forget

[[spank party after the bath]]

rouge: I have work suits

vanilla: you decide it amy

Amy says: yes

[[A: bunny suit]]

[[B: cat suit]]

[[other ending ???]]

Primero un baño

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 05:25:05 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'amy is taken against her strength by vanilla amy: please I'm not a little girl vanilla: silence small naughty girl (washing her body with a sponge) blaze and rouge: we'll help…'

amy is taken against her strength by vanilla

amy: please I'm not a little girl

vanilla: silence small naughty girl (washing her body with a sponge)

blaze and rouge: we'll help the little whore to transform into a nice little naughty spanking

rouge takes out his poster: cute little girl do not cry that we still do not spank

blaze: or look at those ribbon crosses (he pulls out the cross-shaped ribbons from her tits) my cute little damaged tits

rouge gives a touch to your soft and smooth skin: or now shaved your peel is very smooth like a baby's skin

blaze pulls out the tape from his kitten: look at that damaged kitten

amy: they are damn

vanilla: do not say those bad words (take it and give it a good spanking SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK)

amy: please no more

rouge sticks a soap bar: now you will not say anything

blaze: I will treat your tits with this cream (while rubbing your small breasts) nice little nipples

rouge: to get that cheap paint you have to apply hot water

after 10 minutes amy is clean, spanking

Vanilla: Now to the corner, I'll look for some clothes

rouge: I will look for your clothes

come back after a minute

rouge: I'm sorry vanilla this girl besides naughty is a slut

amy: it's a ...

amy: it's a ... (blaze applies to spank with some fire)

blaze: small silence spanked

rouge: at least I found shoes and socks (putting it on by force)

amy:somehow having only socks and shoes is more embarrassing

rouge: and fast do not forget

[[spank party after the bath]]

ouge: I have work suits

vanilla: you decide it amy

Amy says: yes

[[A: bunny suit]]

[[B: cat suit]]

[[other ending ???]]

User talk:Platypus

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 04:51:15 GMT

Ragnax:

Spank party 4

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 04:13:32 GMT

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Amy screams: My God!

knuckles: oh hell I did not know this party would have a whore

cream: whore?

Tails explains the meaning of whore

Sonic has blood coming out of his nose and faints

shadow: or amy you look good in like a whore (laughs)

rouge: I think we should follow the tradition now that you need your birthday blows in your ass (comments) some spanking but not killing anyone (looking at your red butt)

blaze: you can not resist hitting that tied butt without being able to resist (it gives you pinch)

amy: it hurts I can not defend myself I'm tied

rouge: or what poblema

Amy: but it's not my birthday

Mom cream: happy birthday (while bringing a cake)

rouge: we can not waste this opportunity (comments) we already bought the cake

mom cream: it can be a birthday in advance (angry comments) you also deserve a beating for being like a whore

blaze: let's decide by vote

end party[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/No_party]

[[spank party 4 part 2]]

[[primero un baño]]

Surprise birthday party 2 of ...

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 04:06:01 GMT

Ragnax:

amy screams: oh my for god

knuckles: oh hell did not know that this party would have his birthday boy in his birthday suit

cream: birthday suit

Tails explains the meaning of birthday suit

Sonic has blood coming out of his nose and faints

shadow: or amy you look good in your suit (laughs)

rouge: I think we should follow the tradition now you need your birthday blows in it's ass (comments) some spankings but not kill anyone (watching his red butt)

blaze: you can not resist hitting that butt, look tied and with that sign (it comes back from amy and re write '' hit my cute butt is my birthday '' and gives a pinch)

amy: it hurts I can not defend myself I'm tied

rouge: or what poblema

Amy: but it's not my birthday

cream mom: happy birthday (while bringing a cake)

rouge: we can not waste this opportunity (comments) we already bought the cake

cream mom: it can be a birthday in advance (comments angry) you also deserve a spanking for being naked

amy: more than 20 people hit me please no more (while trying to escape)

blaze: let's decide by vote

end party[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/No_party]

[[party spank 2]]

[[other ending 2]]
[[Category: Sonic Girls ENF]][[Category: Amy_Rose]]

Manages to take the tape out of his mouth

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 03:51:25 GMT

Ragnax:

lograr soltar a boca ahora abre la puerta con la boca(ragnax: Déjà vu)

Your friends: happy ....

amy: demons

[[spank party 4]]

Manages to take the tape out of his mouth

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 03:50:04 GMT

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lograr soltar a boca ahora abre la puerta con la boca(ragnax: Déjà vu)

Your friends: happy ....

amy: demons

[[spank party 4]]

The wagon makes a sudden movement losing control and the moored amy escapes near his house

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 03:42:44 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'random girl: oh, poor thing amy unable to speak she thinks she will be helped random girl: this is wrong, with lip paint the letters will disappear when you get spanked (he put…'

random girl: oh, poor thing

amy unable to speak she thinks she will be helped

random girl: this is wrong, with lip paint the letters will disappear when you get spanked (he puts a sign that says '' give me a good spanking to my cute and bad ass)

amy angry thinks shaved all over her body painted like a whore, naked, with ribbons on her nipples, kitten and tied hands with her sign thinks '' damn you I hope you give ''

random girl: now to walk (motivating her walk with a big spanking)

runs and runs is stopped by several people who take advantage of the poster to have fun with their backs.

SMACK SMACK SMACK and hard grabs on its red meat

this is repeated several times

Amy is very tired and weak her butt burns red hot.

he arrives at his house ( that old bastard deserves me that spanking with him but not this sign and my hands tied as 30 people stopped me to hit me now I must open the door with my mouth )

he tries to rub his butt more he does not achieve is his state

[[manages to take the tape out of his mouth]]

can not do it, rouge comes out of amy's house and smokes a cigarette, blaze accompanies her

blaze: look is amy what the hell happened to you

rouge: it's time to have fun

come in amy in this state [[party spank 3]]

You wish it had never happened failed in the matrix 2

Ragnax — Sat, 03 Feb 2018 03:37:09 GMT

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she is naked in her house everything has been a nightmare
[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Amy_Rose]

surprise ending was all part of his imagination [http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/B.-_enter_rich_evil_ladies]

[[other ending]]

A: failure in the matrix the wish is fulfilled 2

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 20:19:01 GMT

Ragnax:

she is asleep in her bed, wakes up without marks in her butt is happy, looks around and decides what time to start her day A: everything is in your imagination and go back to the party [[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Party_spank_2]]

B: menu of amy[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Amy_Rose]]

C:[[other ending suprise]]

A: failure in the matrix the wish is fulfilled 2

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 20:17:52 GMT

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she is asleep in her bed, wakes up without marks in her butt is happy, looks around and decides what time to start her day A: everything is in your imagination and go back to the party [[editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Party_spank_2]]

B: menu of amy[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Amy_Rose]]

C:[[other ending suprise]]

Party spank 2

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 20:15:22 GMT

Ragnax:

wins the party vote

amy celebrates her cumleaños advance in her costume

cream: if it were me I would die of shame (comments) (ragnax: when I have time it will touch you cute bunny)

amy crying

blaze: enjoy the experience is a unique day (while watching his hot ass)

amy: this is the worst fake birthday? · "# !!!

mom cream: behave or I'll take you out and give you spanking outdoors (ragnax: I know it's not your mother but it's higher and has authority I think it's called vanilla but I'm not sure)

amy obeys reluctantly dances receiving pinch from the guests (ragnax: blaze and rouge will also have their moment) it's time to turn off the candles

friends: happy birthday (song and final comment of rouge: many spankings too)

amy blows: I wish this never happened

[[A: failure in the matrix the wish is fulfilled 2]]

mom cream: that will not happen (he takes it on his knee and gives him the numbers of years fulfilled in spanking they all count)

rouge: it's my turn

amy: I already received them

blaze: the number of spanking is per guest

mom cream: excellent idea you will receive your punishment bad girl

amy: oh no please

tries to resist but is tied so it is easy to give the following spanking

ouge takes off his gloves: I tell my darling my skin ( receive the spanking and the counting of these )

blaze: my moment

amy: no more no more (cries)

blaze puts a cold hand and another client: this will be fun ( receive the spanking and counting of these )

the next guests spank him. sonic wakes up amy: no more porfavor (go to sonic) well I think it would be unfair that sonico does not enjoy my traserito

he gives his spanking and counts

Amy is without power

cream: and the piñata

mom cream: it's true there's no piñata

blaze: no party without piñata (ragnax: reference to a story from there)

amy: leave me alone please

rouge grabs the moored amy flies and leaves her hanging from the ceiling: now if we have piñata

Amy: come down (no energy)

blaze: it's not fun if the piñata is sad (takes something out of his pocket and puts it in his mouth in a bottle of hot sauce)

amy: ahhhhhhhh itchy (recovers all its energy and bounces the bottle is a bit of content rouge flies and puts the bottle in the private hole)

amy: itches more

vanilla (mom cream): here you have daughter the palette for the piñata

amy: they should not put on a bandage (while hanging sore)

cream: but and the sweets do not want to hit amy it hurts

rouge ('' think for the girl there will be no motivation if there is no reward '') Blaze comes up with an idea

blaze says an idea to the ear to rouge

rouge: perfect

amy is glued with candy to her body so that the blows on her butt release her

cream: if rich sweets

amy: demons (receives many blows of cream)

cream: 20 sweets

blaze: my moment

rogue: I can accompany you there are 2 fat little buttocks

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

all the guests receive their moment and give their sweets

the party ends and amy still hung

rogue takes a picture of her naked red butt, blaze asks for the picture and gives a pinch to rouge one day could touch your fat butt the one of amy is well cute but you me is something else

rouge: although you are thin, you would not be bad, but if we talk about tender we have a cream look that ass

blaze: if you're right until another amy

The guests are left alone in their house with confetti rest

amy: finally free

[[Do you fall asleep and wake up on the last day? 2]]

[[end ??? 2]]

[[other end for other... no my ragnax]]

ragnax:love the spank , enf , naked embarrassed girl and is awesome sorry but mi inglish neutro. i am speak spanish

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Party spank 2

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 20:14:06 GMT

Ragnax:

wins the party vote

amy celebrates her cumleaños advance in her costume

cream: if it were me I would die of shame (comments) (ragnax: when I have time it will touch you cute bunny)

amy crying

blaze: enjoy the experience is a unique day (while watching his hot ass)

amy: this is the worst fake birthday? · "# !!!

mom cream: behave or I'll take you out and give you spanking outdoors (ragnax: I know it's not your mother but it's higher and has authority I think it's called vanilla but I'm not sure)

amy obeys reluctantly dances receiving pinch from the guests (ragnax: blaze and rouge will also have their moment) it's time to turn off the candles

friends: happy birthday (song and final comment of rouge: many spankings too)

amy blows: I wish this never happened

[[A: failure in the matrix the wish is fulfilled
]]
mom cream: that will not happen (he takes it on his knee and gives him the numbers of years fulfilled in spanking they all count)

rouge: it's my turn

amy: I already received them

blaze: the number of spanking is per guest

mom cream: excellent idea you will receive your punishment bad girl

amy: oh no please

tries to resist but is tied so it is easy to give the following spanking

ouge takes off his gloves: I tell my darling my skin ( receive the spanking and the counting of these )

blaze: my moment

amy: no more no more (cries)

blaze puts a cold hand and another client: this will be fun ( receive the spanking and counting of these )

the next guests spank him. sonic wakes up amy: no more porfavor (go to sonic) well I think it would be unfair that sonico does not enjoy my traserito

he gives his spanking and counts

Amy is without power

cream: and the piñata

mom cream: it's true there's no piñata

blaze: no party without piñata (ragnax: reference to a story from there)

amy: leave me alone please

rouge grabs the moored amy flies and leaves her hanging from the ceiling: now if we have piñata

Amy: come down (no energy)

blaze: it's not fun if the piñata is sad (takes something out of his pocket and puts it in his mouth in a bottle of hot sauce)

amy: ahhhhhhhh itchy (recovers all its energy and bounces the bottle is a bit of content rouge flies and puts the bottle in the private hole)

amy: itches more

vanilla (mom cream): here you have daughter the palette for the piñata

amy: they should not put on a bandage (while hanging sore)

cream: but and the sweets do not want to hit amy it hurts

rouge ('' think for the girl there will be no motivation if there is no reward '') Blaze comes up with an idea

blaze says an idea to the ear to rouge

rouge: perfect

amy is glued with candy to her body so that the blows on her butt release her

cream: if rich sweets

amy: demons (receives many blows of cream)

cream: 20 sweets

blaze: my moment

rogue: I can accompany you there are 2 fat little buttocks

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

all the guests receive their moment and give their sweets

the party ends and amy still hung

rogue takes a picture of her naked red butt, blaze asks for the picture and gives a pinch to rouge one day could touch your fat butt the one of amy is well cute but you me is something else

rouge: although you are thin, you would not be bad, but if we talk about tender we have a cream look that ass

blaze: if you're right until another amy

The guests are left alone in their house with confetti rest

amy: finally free

[[Do you fall asleep and wake up on the last day? 2]]

[[end ??? 2]]

[[other end for other... no my ragnax]]

ragnax:love the spank , enf , naked embarrassed girl and is awesome sorry but mi inglish neutro. i am speak spanish

spank party 2 search more ending

B.- enter rich evil ladies

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 20:10:20 GMT

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amy acts natural, receives furtive glances while high society girls notice the situation

lady 1: oh I had never read that magazine you lend me (take the magazine revealing the low part of amy)

amy: no please (cover as you can)

Lady 2: What a bad girl

Lady 3: is so bad

Lady 4: wait for girls maybe it's the girl you hire online for private parties

amy worried says: its soy me miss

Lady 4 knew that it was a lie but I would not disapprove this opportunity

lady: it's time to have fun

Lady 2: time of the party (closes the door)

lady 3: what the contract says, my friend

Lady 4: everything we want

amy: oh my god

the 4 high society girls grab her and finish undressing her

amy: if it's good to be able to serve you

Lady 3: first a depilzacion (takes out a shaver and removes the hair from her pubis by pulling a bit of pink fur)

amy: ehhh (embarrassed)

Lady 4: finish what you started

(you cut the hair from her butt, legs, lower part, the upper part stopping at her neck) lady: let's leave her head with hair

Lady 2: now makeup (silver makeup like a whore)

amy: it's fun (while I was inside '' hell, hell, this is very ridiculous)

Lady 3 gives her some silver boots: she looks very cute

Lady 2 puts a black cross ribbons on her breasts and another in her kitten

amy: this is too sorry to say that the time you hired already expired

Lady 4: ridicule never hire a silly exhibitionist girl but this is very funny

Amy: I'm leaving

The ladies of high society grab her, tie her up, naked without fur with ribbons in private parts

Lady 4: spanking time

amy: hel ... (the girls grab and put a tape in his mouth)

Lady 2: you will not say anything anymore (she writes with lipstick on her ass "give me a lot of spanking")

smack smack smack smack SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

for the 4 evil and rich ladies

[[the wagon makes a sudden movement losing control and the moored amy escapes near his house]]

[[you wish it had never happened failed in the matrix 2]]

[[the evil girls take the spanking party to a private residence]]

Party spank 2

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 19:34:02 GMT

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wins the party vote

amy celebrates her cumleaños advance in her costume

cream: if it were me I would die of shame (comments) (ragnax: when I have time it will touch you cute bunny)

amy crying

blaze: enjoy the experience is a unique day (while watching his hot ass)

amy: this is the worst fake birthday? · "# !!!

mom cream: behave or I'll take you out and give you spanking outdoors (ragnax: I know it's not your mother but it's higher and has authority I think it's called vanilla but I'm not sure)

amy obeys reluctantly dances receiving pinch from the guests (ragnax: blaze and rouge will also have their moment) it's time to turn off the candles

friends: happy birthday (song and final comment of rouge: many spankings too)

amy blows: I wish this never happened

A: failure in the matrix the wish is fulfilled

mom cream: that will not happen (he takes it on his knee and gives him the numbers of years fulfilled in spanking they all count)

rouge: it's my turn

amy: I already received them

blaze: the number of spanking is per guest

mom cream: excellent idea you will receive your punishment bad girl

amy: oh no please

tries to resist but is tied so it is easy to give the following spanking

ouge takes off his gloves: I tell my darling my skin ( receive the spanking and the counting of these )

blaze: my moment

amy: no more no more (cries)

blaze puts a cold hand and another client: this will be fun ( receive the spanking and counting of these )

the next guests spank him. sonic wakes up amy: no more porfavor (go to sonic) well I think it would be unfair that sonico does not enjoy my traserito

he gives his spanking and counts

Amy is without power

cream: and the piñata

mom cream: it's true there's no piñata

blaze: no party without piñata (ragnax: reference to a story from there)

amy: leave me alone please

rouge grabs the moored amy flies and leaves her hanging from the ceiling: now if we have piñata

Amy: come down (no energy)

blaze: it's not fun if the piñata is sad (takes something out of his pocket and puts it in his mouth in a bottle of hot sauce)

amy: ahhhhhhhh itchy (recovers all its energy and bounces the bottle is a bit of content rouge flies and puts the bottle in the private hole)

amy: itches more

vanilla (mom cream): here you have daughter the palette for the piñata

amy: they should not put on a bandage (while hanging sore)

cream: but and the sweets do not want to hit amy it hurts

rouge ('' think for the girl there will be no motivation if there is no reward '') Blaze comes up with an idea

blaze says an idea to the ear to rouge

rouge: perfect

amy is glued with candy to her body so that the blows on her butt release her

cream: if rich sweets

amy: demons (receives many blows of cream)

cream: 20 sweets

blaze: my moment

rogue: I can accompany you there are 2 fat little buttocks

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK

all the guests receive their moment and give their sweets

the party ends and amy still hung

rogue takes a picture of her naked red butt, blaze asks for the picture and gives a pinch to rouge one day could touch your fat butt the one of amy is well cute but you me is something else

rouge: although you are thin, you would not be bad, but if we talk about tender we have a cream look that ass

blaze: if you're right until another amy

The guests are left alone in their house with confetti rest

amy: finally free

[[Do you fall asleep and wake up on the last day? 2]]

[[end ??? 2]]

[[other end for other... no my ragnax]]

ragnax:love the spank , enf , naked embarrassed girl and is awesome sorry but mi inglish neutro. i am speak spanish

spank party 2 search more ending

A: failure in the matrix the wish is fulfilled

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 18:59:16 GMT

she is asleep in her bed, wakes up without marks in her butt is happy, looks around and decides what time to start her day

A: everything is in your imagination and go back to the party[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Party_spank]]

B: menu of amy[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Amy_Rose]]

C:[[other ending suprise]]

Party spank

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 18:53:27 GMT

Surprise birthday party 2 of ...

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 18:18:17 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'amy screams: oh my for god knuckles: oh hell did not know that this party would have his birthday boy in his birthday suit cream: birthday suit Tails explains the meaning of b…'

amy screams: oh my for god

knuckles: oh hell did not know that this party would have his birthday boy in his birthday suit

cream: birthday suit

Tails explains the meaning of birthday suit

Sonic has blood coming out of his nose and faints

shadow: or amy you look good in your suit (laughs)

rouge: I think we should follow the tradition now you need your birthday blows in it's ass (comments) some spankings but not kill anyone (watching his red butt)

blaze: you can not resist hitting that butt, look tied and with that sign (it comes back from amy and re write '' hit my cute butt is my birthday '' and gives a pinch)

amy: it hurts I can not defend myself I'm tied

rouge: or what poblema

Amy: but it's not my birthday

cream mom: happy birthday (while bringing a cake)

rouge: we can not waste this opportunity (comments) we already bought the cake

cream mom: it can be a birthday in advance (comments angry) you also deserve a spanking for being naked

amy: more than 20 people hit me please no more (while trying to escape)

blaze: let's decide by vote

[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/No_party]

[[party spank 2]]

[[other ending 2]]

No party

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 18:14:17 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'Amy is left in peace and remembers that day the end? more other day by ragnax for other result'

Amy is left in peace and remembers that day

[[the end?]]

[[more other day by ragnax]]

[[for other result]]

Surprise birthday party

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 17:58:28 GMT

amy screams: oh my for god

knuckles: oh hell did not know that this party would have his birthday boy in his birthday suit

cream: birthday suit

Tails explains the meaning of birthday suit

Sonic has blood coming out of his nose and faints

shadow: or amy you look good in your suit (laughs)

rouge: I think we should follow the tradition now you need your birthday blows in it's ass (comments) some spankings but not kill anyone (watching his red butt)

Amy: but it's not my birthday

cream mom: happy birthday (while bringing a cake)

rouge: we can not waste this opportunity (comments) we already bought the cake

amy: it's not my birthday (when it comes to cubrise)

cream mom: it can be a birthday in advance (comments angry) you also deserve a spanking for being naked

amy: no more spank (while covering her butt with fear)

[[no party]]

[[party spank]]

[[other ending]]

The former soldier ties Amy's arms and puts a sign "I'm a bad girl spank me" while he frees her near his house

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 17:45:50 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'runs and runs is stopped by several people who take advantage of the poster to have fun with their backs. amy: please i am a good girl random peolpe: being naked in public says…'

runs and runs is stopped by several people who take advantage of the poster to have fun with their backs.

amy: please i am a good girl

random peolpe: being naked in public says otherwise

SMACK SMACK SMACK and hard grabs on its red meat

'' this is repeated several times ''

Amy is very tired and weak her butt burns red hot.

he arrives at his house ('' that old bastard deserves me that spanking with him but not this sign and my hands tied as 20 people stopped me to hit me now I must open the door with my mouth '')

he tries to rub his butt more he does not achieve is his state

open the door with his mouth (ragnax: Déjà vu)

friends: happy suit... oh my god

rouge: i win the bet

[[Surprise birthday party 2 of ...]]

ragnax:look for the other end parties

The wagon makes a sudden movement and amy manages to escape and is close to home

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 17:33:26 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'runs and runs without stopping several looks, whistles, spank, laughs, etc. it is without power only a few meters from your house you think "or this is the worst day of my life I…'

runs and runs without stopping several looks, whistles, spank, laughs, etc.
it is without power only a few meters from your house you think "or this is the worst day of my life I can not wait to take a bath, that old man hits very hard" he rubs his butt and opens the door.

feel this situation as a déjà vu open the door with fear ('' ragnax: many stories end like this and I love this kind of end you know what's coming if you've seen the other endings '')

friends: suprise amy happpy birthday suit...

[[surprise birthday party]]

ragnax do you like?

Some thief steals her bottoms right off of her! She's exposed and naked in public!

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 17:24:22 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'a teasing thief takes the lower part away from him and turns to stop him, but is beaten on the butt this is lost by losing the thief. his face turns red he runs faster [[A: run …'

a teasing thief takes the lower part away from him and turns to stop him, but is beaten on the butt this is lost by losing the thief.
his face turns red he runs faster

[[A: run and climb to the train]]

[[B: the train disappears and he runs off the tracks]]

[[C: trapped by 2 female policemen]]

The ex-military man grabs amy

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 17:16:57 GMT

Ragnax: Created page with 'the former soldier carries amy on his knee and begins to spank him. amy: do not hit me. auch there are many people ex military: you are a bad girl and exhibitionist SMACK !!! …'

the former soldier carries amy on his knee and begins to spank him.

amy: do not hit me. auch there are many people

ex military: you are a bad girl and exhibitionist

SMACK !!!

SMACK !!!

SMACK !!!

amy: I'm sorry no more(cries)

(people start arriving and recording the scene)

the ex-soldier hits the butt until he has a nice red color

[[the wagon makes a sudden movement and amy manages to escape and is close to home]]

[[The former soldier ties Amy's arms and puts a sign "I'm a bad girl spank me" while he frees her near his house]]

by:ragnax do you like?

A.- In his vagon an old strict ex-military man enters

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 17:01:45 GMT

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Amy nervously tries not to move her magazine from her place so as not to show her lower part. A sudden movement of the wagon makes the magazine fly and Amy falls face to face with her naked butt in the air. She gets up and starts running (she is now completely naked)

[[the ex-military man grabs amy]]

[[amy manages to escape and jump out of the moving vagan falling into the field]]

Many rich, well dressed people arrive onto the train

Ragnax — Fri, 02 Feb 2018 16:52:34 GMT

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Amy acts natural by covering her bottom with her magazine. while many people of high society pass by the vagons.

[[A.- In his vagon an old strict ex-military man enters]]

[[B.- enter rich evil ladies]]