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Lie him on his back and ride his big pole, cowgirl, while he sucks your breasts

Nighshade586 — Sat, 05 Dec 2015 08:28:17 GMT

Nighshade586:

You quit teasing him and roll over onto him and kiss him passionately, using the element of surprise and aggressive thrusts with your tongue to gain dominance and show him who'll be leading this little dance. As he pulls out and gasps for air, you tell him in a half-sensual purr, half-predatory growl, "Let's see whether that big cock of yours fits in my sweet little pussy, boy." He's too stunned by your assault and dirty talk to respond so you push off his chest so your upper body is vertical and arch your back, emphasizing your breasts. "Come and get 'em, sweetie."

He rises up after you, his inexperienced but talented mouth caressing your melons. Kissing your nipples, licking your cleavage, tracing the outlines with his tongue... You enjoy it until you feel your juices flowing again. Time for the main event.

Reaching down and grabbing his dick, you get it in line with your dripping pussy, and slowly lower yourself onto it. There's less resistance than expected. Maybe his licking from before loosened you up a bit.

He gasps in ecstacy. You've fucked plenty before, but for his age he's damn impressive. You wonder what he'll be like when he's a few years older. Something to possess and keep as an investment, perhaps?

You take him in as far as you can, and you're rewarded by the feeling of his ballsack touching your ass. You raise and lower yourself, and it's your turn to gasp. Your pussy clings to him like a vice now, but it's worth the effort as you pick up the pace.

The boy's been licking your tits but as your movements become more energetic, he finds it harder to hit his target. You seize the back of his hair and thrust his face roughly into your bosom, at the same time wrapping your free arm around his back. He starts to reciprocate your thrusts and soon the two of you are going as hard as you can, the rhythm of wet flesh on flesh punctuated by moans.

You feel a climax coming, and feel the boy's close too. Do you:
*[[Let him cum inside you]]
*[[Dismount and try a new position]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Chiyo Kawaguchi|Naked Hottie]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

To invite more friends over.

Nighshade586 — Sun, 01 Nov 2015 00:03:35 GMT

Nighshade586:

"Why don't we invite a few more people over?" you ask. Both Adam and Kara have no objections. You go through everyone in your phone and only find two friends worth calling. Unfortunately, they're exes of each other, so you can only choose one.

Matt is a senior as well, with an older brother who supplies him with alcohol. It could be fun to introduce that element into your night. But if you invite him over he would be after Kara and you kind of owe him because several months back you fucked his mother without knowing it was his mother and got her pregnant, worth it.

Raven is a year younger than you, with an undeniably attractive body and a tendency to be 'one of the guys'. You have no personal attraction to her; she's just not your type. You can't help but think you could use her to make Kara a little jealous and push things further, though.

On the other hand, you know Kara has some hot friends. She might not be so bored with one of her girlfriends over. You could always suggest Kara invite Shayla Chambers over. Kara's best friend Shayla is nearly as hot as her. Petite, blond, and with a fantastic pair of titties. She's a cheerleader, but also belongs to a regional gymnastic team. Like Kara, Shayla is one of the few hot girls at your school you haven't banged yet.

*[[Invite Matt over.]]
*[[Invite Raven over.]]
*[[Ask Kara to invite Shayla over.]]

[[Category: Your Best Friend's Younger Sister]]

Herculio wants everyone to take a go at his sister while he watches

Nighshade586 — Fri, 30 May 2014 03:20:37 GMT

Nighshade586:

As you step back you take a moment to look at your work. Candelas is pretty out of it, no wonder, as you have just popped her pretty good. Still, it seem's like Herculio want's to take it a step further, as you find out as your teammate says: "Okay guys! I want every cock in this room to fuck my little, goody-two shoes sister hard! She's not going home until everyone had pumped her load into one of her slut-holes!"

There is cheering and yelling and you wisely step back before you get trampled, as the team descends upon Candelas like a pack of hungry wolves. She is pulled upon a lap and a fat cock is speared into her asshole, making her scream out in surprise and pain, before her mouth is stuffed too. She is surrounded by cocks, forced to work her hands up and down the fat dicks, while three pricks are beginning to fuck her into every single hole.

You can not help but notice the way Herculio seems to enjoy the show immensly. He seems to have a special shine for his little sister.

You yourself notice that despite having fired your load so much already, you could go for the next fuck soon. You look around, trying to find out where a hole is free for your dick, and you notice that despite every girl being occupied, you could easily find a fuck-hole. Miranda is riding Chad's cock and giggling now and then, while Katy is laying on the bed with her ass up in the air and getting fucked hard in the ass, making her moan and whimper in pain, shame and pleasure.

*[[Hot and Horny/Josh, orgy, double on Miranda with Chad|Double up on your sister with Chad]]

*[[Hot and Horny/Josh, orgy, double on Katy|Fuck Katy's mouth while she gets assfucked]]

*[[Hot and Horny/Josh, orgy, gang-bang Candelas|Wait till Candelas has a free hole for you to use]]

*[[Hot and Horny/Josh, orgy, you're spend|You're spent, no more fucking for you today]]

*[[You need more cherries to pop]]

{{HotStatus|who=Josh, age 15}}
[[Category:Hot and Horny]]

LoL/(F)(SUH) Poke your cock into the hole at the tip of Gort's cock

Nighshade586 — Thu, 22 May 2014 02:24:55 GMT

Nighshade586:

You draw back, kneeling on the lid of the treasure chest in front of the troll's massive dick. You tentatively poke the tip of your cock into his pisshole. It's just the right size, hot and slick around your aching cock, and you thrust forward, slamming your meat into his cock as deep as it will go.

"More good!" Gort roars, apparently liking it, and you wrap your arms around the head of his cock as you work your hips, plunging your cock into the tight passage again and again. Above you, Gort bellows and his cock jerks, nearly bucking you off, but you hold on tight. It pulses in your arms as a powerful spurt of thick cum blasts out of the troll's cock, hitting you in the crotch and running down your legs. You hold on tight, fucking his slick, sloppy hole as another blast slams into you. With a shout, you dump your own load into his hole, only to have another blast of troll cum knock you backward.

You lay flat on your back, gasping for breath, as a final thick flood of cum splashes over you. Your body tingles with magic and you sigh in relief as the spells are broken. Your cock disappears and you return to your normal size. Quickly, you take the rings off and put them in your survival pack.

"Good little human," Gort says, giving you a solid pat on top of the head that makes you dizzy. "Take treasure." He stomps off, disappearing into the shadows. You climb down off the chest and lift the lid. Inside the chest you find a crystal wand, the base wrapped in soft suede and the tip wrapped in a mesh of fine copper strands. On the base of the wand is a small switch.

*[[LoL/(F)(SUH) Flip the switch| Flip the switch.]]
*[[LoL/(F)(SUH) Put the wand in your pack| Put the wand in your pack.]]
{{Labyrinth of Lust|Treasure=''Gold and Red Jade Sounding Rod, Sapphire Ring, Diamond Ring, Crystal and Copper Wand''|Health=Tired; Well fucked|Gender=Female|Location=Straight, underage, humanoid}}
[[Category: Labyrinth of Lust]]

Play with Barbie

Nighshade586 — Sat, 29 Mar 2014 00:46:26 GMT

Nighshade586:

Lets play barbie you said and sitting next to here.
When you have played barbie for a while your sister is leaning against you.
And when she is crawling on the floor you can spot here panties she is wearing under here shirt,
you feeling your tent is raising up in your panties and you see you opportunies to slide your ken doll up here legs.
She is now wondering what you are doing. You only stampers when she looking at your face and you are blushing like hell.
She see your tent also who is hard.

Do you:
*[[Say that you are bored and wanna play another game]]
*[[You wanna play house instead]]
*[[You telling you sister that you are horny for her]]

[[Category: A family tale of corruption]]

Tell her what's going on and see how she reacts

Nighshade586 — Sun, 23 Feb 2014 02:33:32 GMT

Nighshade586:

Before your mind catches up, your mouth has already run away. "He and some of the team will gangbang a girl on such a party. Right now it's my sister", you tell her as if talking about the weather, before taking another sip from your beer. And then you realize what you just had said, feeling the urge to kick your own behind. Have you lost your mind? Most likely yes.

She stares at you blankly. "What means gangbang?"

Wow, you're in luck. Seems like Katy is still too young to know the meaning behind your words. Now, you could either explain it to her or show her. Or perhaps have her all on your own? The guys have Miranda to occupied themselves, so why now? At the idea you feel your cock hardening again, even though you have just recently shot your load.

"Well, Katy, it's like this..."

*[["Gangbang means a lot of guys fucking a single girl"]]

*[["I'll show you."]]

*[[Screw this and then screw her]]

{{HotStatus|who=Josh, age 15}}
[[Category:Hot and Horny]]

User talk:Nighshade586

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 21:51:43 GMT

Nighshade586:

Vandalizing Rampage is not funny. You will be banned from the site if you play pranks like that. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:11, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

My apologies. I did miss when you added that plot point on the previous page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:41, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

No worries, it happens. --User:Nighshade586

User talk:Nighshade586

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 21:51:06 GMT

Nighshade586:

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 21:30:12 GMT

Nighshade586: /* Vandalizing */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
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Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

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User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

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User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

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User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

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User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
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Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
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User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

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User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
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User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

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I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

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I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

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Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

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I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

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Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

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User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

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Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
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I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

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Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
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Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

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EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

== Vandalizing ==
I didn't vandalize anything. The only page I've altered has been for continuity, due to what has happened in the storyline for the previous few pages. This wasn't a prank, that was just the direction the story was going. You can check, if you like: http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Give_her_one_last_cream_filling
--User:Nighshade586

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 21:29:46 GMT

Nighshade586:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
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Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

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User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

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User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

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User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

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User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
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Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
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User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

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User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
_________________________________________________________

User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

_________________________________________________________

I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

_________________________________________________________

I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

_________________________________________________________

Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

_________________________________________________________

I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

----
Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

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User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

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Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
_________________________________________________________

I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

_________________________________________________________

Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
----------------------------------------------------------
Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

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EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

== Vandalizing ==
I didn't vandalize anything. The only page I've altered has been for continuity, due to what has happened in the storyline for the previous few pages. This wasn't a prank, that was just the direction the story was going. You can check, if you like: [http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Give_her_one_last_cream_filling]
--User:Nighshade586

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 21:08:02 GMT

Nighshade586: /* Vandalizing */

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 21:07:04 GMT

Nighshade586: /* Vandalizing */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
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Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

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User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

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User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

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User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

_________________________________________________________________________________________

User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
____________________________________________________________________

Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
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User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

_________________________________________________________

User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
_________________________________________________________

User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
----

Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

_________________________________________________________

I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

_________________________________________________________

I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

_________________________________________________________

Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

_________________________________________________________

I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

----
Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

----
User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

------------

Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

------------

User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
_________________________________________________________

I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

_________________________________________________________

Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
----------------------------------------------------------
Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

----------------------------------------------------------
EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

== Vandalizing ==
I didn't vandalize anything. All I've done lately is watch a bunch of pages and edit others for spelling and grammar. The only page I've altered has been for continuity, due to what has happened in the storyline for the previous few pages.
--User:Nighshade586

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 20:59:50 GMT

Nighshade586: /* Vandalizing */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
----

Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

----
User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

----

User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

----

User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

_________________________________________________________________________________________

User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
____________________________________________________________________

Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
________________________________________________________

User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

_________________________________________________________

User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
_________________________________________________________

User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
----

Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

_________________________________________________________

I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

_________________________________________________________

I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

_________________________________________________________

Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

_________________________________________________________

I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
----
Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

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Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

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User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

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Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
_________________________________________________________

I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

_________________________________________________________

Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
----------------------------------------------------------
Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

----------------------------------------------------------
EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

== Vandalizing ==
I didn't vandalize anything. All I've done lately is watch a bunch of pages and edit others for spelling and grammar. I haven't deleted, changed or otherwise alter ANY pages (with the exception of spelling).
--User:Nighshade586

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 20:59:33 GMT

Nighshade586: /* Vandalizing */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
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Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

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User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

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User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

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User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

_________________________________________________________________________________________

User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
____________________________________________________________________

Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
________________________________________________________

User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

_________________________________________________________

User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
_________________________________________________________

User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
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Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

_________________________________________________________

I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

_________________________________________________________

I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

_________________________________________________________

Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

_________________________________________________________

I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
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Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

----
Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

----
User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

------------

Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

------------

User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
_________________________________________________________

I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

_________________________________________________________

Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
----------------------------------------------------------
Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

----------------------------------------------------------
EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

== Vandalizing ==
I didn't vandalize anything. All I've done lately is watch a bunch of pages and edit others for spelling and grammar. I haven't deleted, changed or otherwise alter ANY pages (with the exception of spelling).
--User: Nighshade586

User talk:Nighshade586

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 20:58:03 GMT

Nighshade586:

Vandalizing Rampage is not funny. You will be banned from the site if you play pranks like that. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:11, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

User talk:Platypus

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 20:57:13 GMT

Nighshade586:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archives.

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Could you delete the following page in my story. [[Walk over to the fully-grown female child and explain to the father that you intend no harm, you just want her as your mate]]

I changed the title, edited the page, and tried to move it to the new location, only to find that someone had written in it already. Thanks.
----

Hey, just wondering if you could delete the following page on my story? I merged it with another page, and couldn't find a tutorial on how to do it. Thanks.

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Back_at_the_Village

Kanin452 Jan 23, 2014

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User: JakeStorm93

January 15, 2014

Thanks for the helpful tips on punctuating dialogue! Gosh, you'd think I would know a simple grammatical rule like that. Horribly embarrassing, but I guess you learn something new every day! ;D

----
User: Santiagocreativewriting

January, 14, 2014

Thank you so much for helping us abide by the categories. I actually am teaching a class of 12-14 year olds in Santiago in a two-week course of creative writing. We are really enjoying this create-your-own-adventure site but did notice that one of our pages were deleted. What would you suggest we do to prevent this happening again? Would you like us to each make our own account?

Thank you!

User: Sexytext
1/14/14

Ok Then But Were Can I put my story then?! You removed off the main page but when I am finished may I add it again?
[[http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/My_Little_Pony:_Adventures_is_Magic | My Story]]
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User: Darkus123
1/11/14

Hey, I'm kind of new here but I've notice that I can't post my idea in the Idea Pitch... The story's name is [[The Twin Empires]].

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User: GalwayTraveler

1/10/14

Editing/Clarity/Format Help

Hey, I've seen that you've edited my page. I'm currently trying to figure out how the formatting goes, and have had some trouble with the tutorial. Do you think I could get some advice? I've read the tutorial over and over and cant figure out how to add properly formatted links and how to edit those linked pages (and so on and so forth)

Thanks for the help

----

User: relafen66

Date 12/30/2013

Hey bro r u the mod here? If you are I cannot put images in the submissions every-time i get a code verifier then it puts me on 20 min lock down. Also I haven't really checked my stories but it seems someone let ppl edit it now i got rows upon rows of additions i dont like.

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User: SgtBaha

Date: 12/30/13

Thanks for the heads up about the categories for my High School submissions and fixing my pages. And thanks for the text for the status bar; I was wondering how to get that.

_________________________________________________________________________________________

User: Mreurotic
Date: 10/10/2013
Hey, I messaged you once before, and was now curious about something. Is there a way to find out when new pages within your story are added? I ask this because I come on weekly, and hate having to travel through every option to see if there is anything new. I was also wondering if you had your own website somewhere, and if you did, could you share it? Thank you.

P.S. If you, or anyone reading this, wanted to email me, you can at townsville_strikers@hotmail.com

I saw your comment, and I'm kind of busy with my story at the moment but I plan on putting a title for each category I post. -Txtinkerbell12, 12-9-13
____________________________________________________________________

Hey, quick question: I forgot my password, and was wondering if there was anyway to recover it? if not, that's okay, was just curious. - Kanin452, 12-5-13

Thank you for the constructive criticism without being a jerk, and for not deleting my contribution. I admit that was my very first edit on the site. Your adventure is my favourite on the site so far and I may have gotten a bit carried away! - ThaneOfAss

Still new to site. I see your warning and am trying to figure out what you mean it. I'm just working on structure atm and apologize if I left out something important but i'm still working around the main structure and am not finished so please don't delete my work. My thanks, ~ MixedMojo

Hey there - just wondered if you'd like to read and/or comment on my story. Am new to the site. The story is [[The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra]]. Any tips/criticisms on the story or using the wiki would be most appreciated. [[User:Hornlarry|Hornlarry]] 00:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

User:creat0r
Yeah, I know I'm not the best at grammar, and I know I forgot the location in the status bar. *facepalms*

Anyways, maybe you or someone else good at grammar could review the pages I make? I don't want to impose or force you to work.
Just asking! Anyways, thank you so much for fixing my little problems. :)
User:creat0r
What do you mean? I looked over my additions and I can't see any problems.
________________________________________________________

User:Mreurotic
Sorry if my grammar isn't up to standards. I love that story arc, yet since nothing was added for a while, I thought I could help. I can see 1 punctuation error, yet that is it. Sorry if I make mistakes.

User: Mreurotic
I do admit that I am distracted at times, often writing an addition to your things, as well as on another site trying a 'choose your own adventure' style thing with the comments. I will take into consideration your advice, and re-edit what I have put up to keep it up to your standard. I hope that you do find my writing up to standard, as part of my dream is to become a writer, and this is good experience for me to learn.

_________________________________________________________

User:RoodyPoo
Uhhh...don't delete my page. It's obviously a WIP. Let me finish it before you decide if it's good enough or not.
_________________________________________________________

User:Masterdill22
Hey, i just recieved your message about leaving my title to the category thing, and I'm somehwat confused... i dont mind if you edit them to meet the requirements, oh and also, how easy is my story to access right now since its just been created?
----

Hey, sorry. How do I add my title to the category thing?

_________________________________________________________

I am just curious as to why my pages On Xozen Infection? I am very confused.If i did something wrong please inform before you delete it. *Seth Xozen*

_________________________________________________________

I apologize for misspelling "brakes" in Rampage. Thanks for the heads up. -[[User:Tower0505|Tower0505]]

_________________________________________________________

Quick question, how do I make my story available to the public? -[[User:RedJenny69|Jessica<3]]

_________________________________________________________

I wanted to try to fix the 'Hot Mom' pages that you deleted because they weren't catagorized but my first and only attempt failed so feel free to delete that attempt. I was trying to keep the original content and just add what ever it was missing but couldn't make it work. Didn't mean to side-step your authority or anything like that and apologize if it created a miss understanding. - Black Dragon 25
----
Hey how do I add the title to the catagory? - Yougotmyshirt

It's great the sight has decreased the page load time. It was getting to unbearable levels. However the 20 page per hour thing is god awful. Can that be edited some how so ppl are not waiting a whole hour? Like say down to 2 or 3 per minute.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 05:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Hi, youve sent me 2 warnings on page catagorization. I'm new here, how do I do that? 6 june 2013

== alternative site? ==

Hi,

These last months the site has been unbearably slow making it practically unusable, and despite repeated contacts the site admin Rob Kohr does not seem interested in acknowledging that his quick fixes aren't real solutions. Since I see no indication on his part a comprehensive fix restoring this site to normal responsiveness is forthcoming any time soon, I'd like to ask you if you know of any other free wiki site with a no-censorship policy, Platypus? Regards, [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 06:16, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

== Views ==

Really quick question, I can't see the amount of views I am getting per page anymore. Is this the same for everybody or did I change a setting?

Thanks, Bojangles

----
Hello! Just curious about why you deleted my page. - [[User:FrozenFlamingFire|FFF]]

In regards to your last comment on my talk page, I just wanted to say that I respect that rampage is your story, and if you don't want me posting there, then just say the word; I will respect that.

I put up a couple of stories last night, one of which I found in a folder which I thought I had posted a long time ago, the other of which I wrote in a bit of a hurry. For that reason, I must have forgotten to make sure that they conformed to your preferred punctuation style, and I apologize for that.

In regard to your last comment on my talk page, allow me to say, "Thank you". You said everything I had hoped you would say, and I feel encouraged to keep writing, and to follow http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Punctuation_with_dialogue.

My academic background is in descriptive grammar, and I have since moved to work with editing, which is of course prescriptive, but I never work with fiction writing, so I haven't had cause to study use of punctuation in quotations before.

----
User: Hwolin

Sorry about any grammar mistakes, I thought I had looked over it and caught them. Do you mind letting me know what I missed so I'm more aware of it next time?

------------

Hey it's me again. It seems that stories haven't been featured in a while. Are they chosen by the someone or can we just replace it with our own every week?

Thanks-Bojangler Aug/20/2013

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User:Darkrage6

Sorry for the way i've been acting, i'm not trying to get banned. Sometimes I don't always think before I post due to my Aspberger's Syndrome, I was out of line with what I said before and I regret it. I appreciate you showing what I did wrong with my last entry, that really helped me. So i'm going to take your advice and try and start my own story, i'll consider myself lucky if I turn out to be even half as good of a writer as you are, i'll try not to make my grammar look too sloppy. I actually did well in my English classes in college, but I guess it's not always so easy to adapt your skills at writing papers into writing stories on sites like this.
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I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. - Azmor

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Hi This is Pedobear12
Thank you for showing me how to add the category into the story, I was trying to do that, but gave up. turns out i was almost there :)
Anyway I was wondering if you could tell me how to make different lines in a single story merge.
In other words if one decision was made, how do I make the lines merge with a bit down the line decisions of a different set.
What I am getting at is that if you choose a path it may lead to being captured or death.
if you choose the other path one of the decisions in that path could have the same result.
So instead of retyping it, I want to know how to direct the page to that same ending, especially if I think that ending was writen well?
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Hey this is Gaydude, I'm new with all these things, I have the basics like making a page and stuff down. Don't know a thing about adding the category thingy and also about merging parts of the story.

== Incomplete pages /options/status bar/category from the previous page. ==

Hey thanks for the feedback. I am fairly new to this site and don't yet know how to make new pages, add choices or add category bar. I don't mean to leave the story on a limb, it's just I don't know how to add options and selections. Could you message me and explain these to me if it's not too much trouble.

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EDIT: Interesting how the masculine/feminine forms persist from the the word's French roots. I didn't know that!

I dont know how to create the page with a catagory how do i do that? 22xander

== Help ==

Platypus, i am pretty new to this site, and i want to try to help with your story. Can you please help me with making a good story with links?

(note: I think Links are pretty dang confusing)

== Thank you, From TrawnyCarrol ==

Thanks man, I'll read some of the interactive and see if i can help somewhere

== Pokemon Trainer School - Trawny ==

Ok, i read a lot of what has been done, and i was wondering if i could help with the Pokemon trainer school? I'll take any pokemon, but i would prefer to do snivy's story.

== Pizza Girl Choices ==

I'm confused as to why you deleted the page I added for the pizza girl in the hotel. The note about the deletion said the choices weren't in second person, but each and ever choice refers to "you", the very definition of second person. Please clarify this for me.

== Catogrizing pages Trawny ==

how do i categorize these pages, still a bit new with that.

== Thread name? ==

Sorry, must have missed where I failed to post the name. If I didn't do it, then can you please edit that for me? I'm new here.

== RE:Linking images ==

So, I can't even use a simple url?

== About my additions ==

I'm cool with you editing and deleting my posts, it shows that you care about the quality of the story. I'd like to apologize for any annoyance I may have caused. Also, about the thing with who was in the car, I assumed that the choices being made were more what the person reading would want to happen, not what the actual character in the story was making. Whoops, I will be sure to follow the rules in the future and brush up on my grammar skills! --[[User:Anyname|Anyname]] 23:08, 9 February 2014 (EST)

== Vandalizing ==
I didn't vandalize anything. All I've done lately is watch a bunch of pages and edit others for spelling and grammar. I haven't deleted, changed or otherwise alter ANY pages (with the exception of spelling).

Leave the punkette and search for your next victim

Nighshade586 — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 00:45:14 GMT

Nighshade586:

You head on out of the arcade and wander off to the park. You settle on a park bench to rest for a few minutes.

Two girls who look to be about your age settle on the adjacent bench. One is a slender, small-chested brunette, and her friend is a curvy redhead with a considerably larger chest. They chatter away happily.

You decide to speak to one of them.

*[[Talk to the slim, small-chested brunette]]
*[[Talk to the curvy, large-chested redhead]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy with large-apple-sized balls and a 12-inch cock.]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Several girls getting fucked

Nighshade586 — Sun, 26 Jan 2014 22:41:33 GMT

Nighshade586:

To your surpsise you see not only Miranda in the room and a few guys, but also three other girls. The scene is completely insane and strange and for a moment you ask yourself if you have not stepped into some sort of twilight zone, as you watch the scene unfolding before you.

Moaning and groaning fills the room and the sound of flesh hitting flesh is a constant background sound. In front of you is some kind of orgy going on, with a clear ratio of more guys than girls, though most of the guys are standing back at the moment and watching, either already blown their load or waiting for their turn. On the bed itself lays your little sister Miranda, though you would not have recognized her immediately, her body limb, her skin covered with sweat and cum and her eyes rolled back in her face, her ass in the air. One of the senior guards of your team, you can't remember the name right now, is plowing his dick into her small, jail-bait pussy, grunting and groaning as he buries his massive dick again and again in her small body, her whole form shaking with every of his movements.

Right next to your sister lays one of her classmates, a small Pakistani girl named Parvati, a shy and pretty girl with jet black hair and dark skin. You remember her only because Miranda has invited her over a few times. Right now she is laying on her back, her head craned back as some guy is plowing her mouth with his dick, while another dude is busy with her hairless pussy. Though she does not look comfortable, she is not fighting it either and in a moment when her mouth is freed from cock you can hear her begging for more cum and dick in her little slut-mouth. You shake your head, as if you could dispel this illusion with that.

Chad is standing to your left, his phone in hand, filming the whole scene, a pretty blonde sucking his cock dutifully. She is older than your sister, perhaps twelve or thirteen, you don't know. There are just the first bumps on her chest and her body still has some baby-fat, but her big brown eyes are really beautiful, especially as she looks at you while swallowing Chad's dick. She too looks like she is through a lot, her hair matted with semen and sweat to her face, the thick creamy stuffy running from between her legs and dripping onto the floor.

"Hi, I'm Amy!", says a voice in front of you and draws your attention away from the girl on Chad's pecker and towards the girl standing in front of you. She looks nearly the same as the one working on Chad, though her hair is done in pigtails, perfect for gripping while fucking her throat. You have no idea where that thought comes from. You also notice that she too looks like she had been fucked a lot, her pussy dripping, her make-up smeared, her face covered in a thin layer of bodily fluids. But she smiles sweetly and even eager. "The slut sucking dick over there is Jennifer, my twin sister, and the two whores on the bed are Miranda and Parvati. So, you wanna fuck too?"

Before you can respond she already turns around and presents to you her cute sexy ass, as if inviting you to do her.

What do you do?

* [[This is insane, you run]]
* [[You get Miranda out of here]]
* [[You get involved]]

{{HotStatus|who=Josh, age 15}}
[[Category:Hot and Horny]]

Good son: go to the garage

Nighshade586 — Fri, 24 Jan 2014 23:29:27 GMT

Nighshade586:

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definitely looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is receiving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definitely sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighborhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realizes I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definitely Robin!

You close the door as silently as you can and sneak back up into your room. Still in shock from what just happened you have no idea how to react.

[[good son: tell your mom about your dad cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: Pay Robin a private visit]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Accept Mr. S's offer

Nighshade586 — Thu, 26 Dec 2013 09:19:14 GMT

Nighshade586:

"Well sure I guess...", you answer. What could go wrong? Sure you lost your parents, but this is heaven. You get to fuck as many girls as you want here.

"Splendid! I knew you'd agree.", he chortled, "But first..." Before you could react, you feel a sharp sting on your arm. Someone jabbed you with a large needle full of glowing red liquid.

"What the f..."

"Now relax, it's just a serum to enhance your male sexual abilities. You can remain stiff as long as you want to, and your balls have accelerated it's output of sperm to about 1800ml; it's just a guarantee you'll knock em up you know?"

''Well, it's been done. I might as well go with it.'' You think.

Where do you go first?:

'''ALL PAGES PUBLIC'''
''Please add sub categories such as specific shows, games, etc.''

*[[The Celebrity Wing| The Celebrity Wing]]

*[[The Comic Heroin Wing|The Comic Heroine Wing]]

*[[The Video Game Wing|The Video Game Wing]]

*[[The Cartoon Wing|The Cartoon Wing]]

*[[Add as you wish|Add as you wish]]

[[Category: Life of a 13 year old]]

Good son: evening (07)

Nighshade586 — Thu, 19 Dec 2013 06:26:22 GMT

Nighshade586:

You are home in the evening.

The whole family is present now. You eat dinner together. What do you want to do after eating?

Laura (sister) went out to meet her friends.

Siri (sister) is in her room.

Ron (brother) is getting ready for bed.

James (grandfather) is watching tv.

Heather (grandmother) is in the kitchen doing the dishes.

Your parents were tired from work and already went to bed.

Your aunt is watching tv in her room.

[[good son: help your grandma clean the kitchen (07)]]

[[good son: take your little brother Ron to bed (07)]]

[[good son: watch tv with your grandpa (07)]]

[[good son: look what Siri is up to (07)]]

[[good son: go check on your aunt (07)]]

You could try to call someone and ask if they want to do something with you this evening.

Apart from the obvious choice being calling your best friend Peter there are some other people you might want to hang out with. Maria the chubby girl from you class likes to play videogames. The two of you have been hanging out a couple of times to play. You have been chatting with a 15 year old girl living in your area for a while. You haven´t seen her yet though, so she might not be too good looking. You could give her a call.

[[good son: call your best friend Peter (07)]]

[[good son: call your classmate Maria (07)]]

[[good son: call your chatfriend "hotchick15" (07)]]

or just go to sleep

[[good son: go to sleep (07)]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Fuck Jessica's little slut ass

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 22:03:59 GMT

Nighshade586:

You spit on her tight asshole, lubing it up and slowly start to thrust your aching cock inside your sexy, slutty, tied up sister.

You quickly get a rhythm going, but all of a sudden you feel an intense pain in your gut, and fall over. The bitch kicked you in the nuts! She kicks you again and you slowly pass out, hearing her start to pound on the door of the bathroom.

Do you:
*[[let the darkness take you]]
*[[Fight to stay conscious]]
{{HotStatus|who=Josh, age 16}}
[[Category:Hot and Horny]]

Chelsea/Josh Bedroom Ass

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:46:18 GMT

Nighshade586:

You stand over him, grabbing his cock and holding it as you slowly descend towards it. You look back at the video and you see that the actors are performing anal. You lean in to Josh's ear and say 'Do you want to try that?' You lean back and look him in the eyes... he looks at you almost in confusion, but then he slowly nods his head, and so you sit on his cock.
You let off a small moan as you feel the head of his cock penetrate your tight, virgin asshole. You slid even further down his cock feeling every vain and contour on the surface of you sons cock. You start moaning uncontrollably, as this is the best sexual experience you have ever had. You lean back and look into your sons face to see if he is enjoying it. You can see by the look on his face that he is about to cum.

You then lean in again and whisper in his ear 'I never let you father do this, in fact I've never let anyone do this." You then lean back, and look into his eyes, you see him getting even hornier at what you just said, a second later you feel his hot cum warm you ass as it flows out of his cock. By the time he has finished the cum is already leaking out of your ass.

You then stand up, put you clothes back on and whisper in Josh's ear 'We must do that again sometime." and walk out of his room.

What do you do now?

[[Chelsea/Wake Jessica|Wake up Jessica]]

[[Chelsea/Wake Miranda|Wake up Miranda]]

[[Get started on breakfast]]
{{HotStatus|who=Chelsea, age 36}}
[[Category:Hot and Horny]]

Chelsea/Josh Continue sex with Josh

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:44:49 GMT

Nighshade586:

Fuck volleyball you keep the fun going you close your eyes and softly moan and curl your fingers in pleasure of your son's cock. You let out a load moan as Josh proceeds to push himself all the way into your warm pussy. Your right hand pushes his face into your tits as he gets his whole cock in. Your pussy constricts around his cock and you swear he could blow any second, you are close to cumming too. You feel an orgasm coming. "Fuck me harder", "Fuck your Mommy!!" This gets him motivated and he speeds up. With the rhythmical slapping of your flesh on his and his pulsating cock inside you, you explode in orgasm. Your body trembles for a few seconds oblivious to his continued thrashing. You can tell by his throbbing cock and escalating moans he is about to cum. Do you lie still and accept his load inside you or suck him dry?

*[[Chelsea/Josh Get filled more| Accept his load.]]

*[[Chelsea/Josh Drink Josh's juices| Suck all that cum out.]]

{{HotStatus|who=Chelsea, age 36}}
[[Category:Hot and Horny]]

Your Son Josh

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:44:12 GMT

Nighshade586:

You gives out a small scream of surprise and turn around to face your son. "Josh, what the hell do you think you're doing?". After a few seconds you calms down and eyes him head to toe, noticing a bulge between his legs. "Oh my, Josh, I can see why you are acting this inappropriately. You're all tense and stiff."

"Could you do something about that?" he asks. You giggle and put your hands on your waist. "Nothing easier than that." You say and move your hand to his groin, gently massaging his cock through the cloth. With one hand, you undoes the button and open up the zipper, reaching into his pants. You let out a giggle, "I'm always there for you when you need mommy, aren't I?" You move your lips to the head of his cock and let saliva drool out of your mouth onto it. You moves your head forward and swallow his dick Inch for Inch until about two thirds of it are pulsating in the warmth of your mouth.

You can feel the top of his manhood sliding through the bottleneck that is your throat and he puts his hands on your head, holding you in place as you move his cock back and forth, always keeping it deep enough in your mouth to feel the tightness of your throat. You gags a little, as he fucks your throat that way, but it doesn't seem to be uncomfortable and you she put your hands on his thighs and push him along. You lets off a gasp and tightens your grip around your him as you push his cock down all the way down your throat and start moving it fast. "Oh yeah mommy" he gasps as your movements grow faster and shorter "Take good care of me!" As you move out a little, you smiles at him and, catching breath giggle: "You like seeing mommy struggle a bit on your big cock, don't you?" you chuckles a little louder. "

"Now stick it in my cunt honey" as you get up and lie on the counter. You start to close your eyes and softly moan and curl your fingers around the edge of the counter. You smile at her pleasure and proceed to push him all the way into your hot, silky pussy. Your pussy constricts around his cock and your mind is filed with pure ecstasy yet you want more.

"Stick it in my virgin ass Josh fuck mommy hard!" You leans back and let off a small moan as you feel the head of his cock penetrate your tight, virgin asshole. He slides even further into your ass and you feel every ridge and vein of his cock. You start thrusting heavily, as this is the best sexual experience you have ever had. You close your eyes and you starts moaning uncontrollably in pleasure at your rhythmic fucking you're getting. You are getting even hornier and a second later you feel the orgasm hit you. Your body shakes and trembles and you try to scream out in pleasure except your son has jammed a washcloth in your mouth so you don't alert anyone. Seconds later you her Josh grunting heavily and you feel you tight asshole fill with hot cum it is already leaking out your ass. You then stand up, whisper in his ear 'We must do that again sometime." and then you hear footsteps coming down the stairs. You both share a mutual panic and slide your pants back on as mom does the same. By the time Jessica walks in from her shower you're sitting down and mom is walking over with breakfast.

Do you:
*[[Go to the volleyball meeting]]
*[[See who else is sleeping]]
*[[Get started on breakfast 1]]
[[Category: Hot and Horny]]

Slide your hand down onto her pussy

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:41:18 GMT

Nighshade586:

Craving your daughters pussy you move towards her and you place your hands onto her wet pussy. She gasps and looks up at you and you place your finger on her lips to be quiet. "What are you doing?" she whispers. "I think you can guess whats going to happen here" you say. You pull her head to yours and give her a passionate kiss. With one hand you presses your lips against hers, exploring her mouth with your tongue and with the other hand resting on her cunt. Jessica starts grinding her pussy on your hand and begins moaning. "Yeah mom! Stick your fingers inside me!!" she mumbles without stopping kissing you, her hand resting on your ass wanders further down and reaches your pussy with some difficulties and starts rubbing it.

You embrace your daughters fingers on your pussy as your pussy starts to get wet. You guide her to her bed and lie her down only now do your lips part as you move lower down her body stopping to kiss her nipples and belly before kissing her clit. You now guide your fingers into your daughters pussy and she lets out a low moan. Jessica innocent pussy clenches and contracts around your fingers, as you move two fingers in an out while massaging her clit with your tongue.

You pull your fingers out and use them to part her out lips, you lick your tongue all the way up her slit, enjoying the taste of her juice before reversing course and licking all the way back down. Her legs shudder as your tongue touches her again and she move to sit on the edge of the bed, opening her legs for you.

Crawling in between her legs you let her hands guide your face back to her pussy. Reaching your tongue out you flick it against her clit, feeling her shudder with pleasure at the contact. You dive in more, sucking her clit into your mouth.

She moans louder as you continue to suck on her clit, using her hands to push your face harder into her as he breathing gets faster. You gently pinch your lips together, biting her clit with them as your tongue flicks across it. Jessica gasps and says "Oh god that feels good, please don't stop, I'm cumming."

Suddenly her hands grip your hair, shoving your face even tighter against her sex and her legs clamp down. You continue nibbling and licking her clit and her body shakes in a powerful orgasm.
As she slowly comes down from it she gasps to catch her breathe before saying, "Wow that was absolutely incredible."

You look into her weary eyes and say my turn you instruct her to sit on your face while she licks you out. She gets a cheeky grin on her face and pulls out two dildos, one pink and one chrome. She hands you the pink one and proceeds to sit on your face. You lick out the remained of her orgasm and proceed to inch the dildo into you. She would of let out a moan but her mouth was already deep in your pussy. You feel the dildo moving in and out of you with your daughter tongue massaging your clit entering you int a world of pleasure. As you start to moan while under your daughters pussy she too starts to man again. Both of you are now thrusting yourselves onto the toys and using your tongues on each others clits.

You can slowly feel a powerful orgasm coming when you hear your daughter about to climax. Being the good mother you are you decide to finish hear first. Hear moans increase and you slowly wet a finger in her pussy and move it around the rim of her anus. This has her attention you move your tongue faster on her pussy and as she cums you slip your finger in her ass. Her whole body shakes and trembles with enjoyment, this moves the dildo in your pussy frantically and the tingles in your body increase and you enter into a powerful orgasm shaking your entire body similar to your daughter.

Both of you lie motionless to each other covered in each others bodily juices. You kiss her passionately while giving her nipples a quick squeeze making her squeal a bit and proceed to get dressed. Before you leave you tell your daughter to invite her friend Aylssa over for next time. You wink at her and leave the room blowing her a kiss.

Do you:
*[[Get started on breakfast]]
*[[Go see who else is asleep]]

[[Category: Hot and Horny]]

Go to your bedroom with Jessica

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:37:50 GMT

Nighshade586:

Craving your daughters pussy you move towards her and you place your hands onto her wet pussy. "Lets go to my room sweetie" you suggest. Jessica's eyes light up as she nods in agreement. You to the room separately not wishing to arouse suspicion you pass your husband on your way in you kiss him on the cheek. You would offer for him to join but he is obviously to tired and in a hurry for work. You wait inside for your daughter and you hear her greet your husband in the stars. Seconds later she walks into the room. You walk towards her and you pull her head to yours and give her a passionate kiss. With one hand you presses your lips against hers, exploring her mouth with your tongue and with the other hand resting on her cunt. Jessica starts grinding her pussy on your hand and begins moaning. "Yeah mom! Stick your fingers inside me!!" she mumbles without stopping kissing you, her hand resting on your ass wanders further down and reaches your pussy with some difficulties and starts rubbing it.
You embrace your daughters fingers on your pussy as your pussy starts to get wet. You guide her to her bed and lie her down only now do your lips part as you move lower down her body stopping to kiss her nipples and belly before kissing her clit. You now guide your fingers into your daughters pussy and she lets out a low moan. Jessica innocent pussy clenches and contracts around your fingers, as you move two fingers in an out while massaging her clit with your tongue.
You pull your fingers out and use them to part her out lips, you lick your tongue all the way up her slit, enjoying the taste of her juice before reversing course and licking all the way back down. Her legs shudder as your tongue touches her again and she move to sit on the edge of the bed, opening her legs for you.
Crawling in between her legs you let her hands guide your face back to her pussy. Reaching your tongue out you flick it against her clit, feeling her shudder with pleasure at the contact. You dive in more, sucking her clit into your mouth.
She moans louder as you continue to suck on her clit, using her hands to push your face harder into her as he breathing gets faster. You gently pinch your lips together, biting her clit with them as your tongue flicks across it. Jessica gasps and says "Oh god that feels good, please don't stop, I'm cumming."
Suddenly her hands grip your hair, shoving your face even tighter against her and her legs clamp down. You continue nibbling and licking her clit and her body shakes in a powerful orgasm. As she slowly comes down from it she gasps to catch her breathe before saying, "Wow that was absolutely incredible."
She leaps up from the bed pushes you onto it. She pulls down your PJ's and dives tongue first into your cunt. You feel absolutely amazing as your daughters tongue licks every inch of your pussy. You let out a loud moan as Jessica slides two fingers into your pussy. Throughout this whole time her tongue is massaging your clit faster than anything you've ever felt. You can feel your cervix being pushed onto again, and again and again. You pull at your daughters head and try to shove her head deeper into your cunt. You feel the tingling and pleasure rising in your body as an orgasm waves over your body. You tremble and nearly fall off the bed but Jessica stops you, persistent to catch all of your orgasm juices.
As the orgasm subsides Jessica jumps up kisses you, and you taste your own juices as she pulls away she seductively licks your lips and smacks you on the ass. You let out a squeal at your daughters kinkiness and roll over presenting your ass. Jessica seems a little confused until you grab the back of her head and jam it into the back of your pussy. She struggles at first but soon you feel her tongue doing what it does best. In no time at all her fingers are knuckle deep in your pussy and your head is deep in a pillow muffling out loud moans you can hear your daughter also moaning your not sure why you guess she is probably just caught up in the moment. You gyrate on your daughters face for another minute as another orgasm sweeps over you. Once again your body trembles and shakes violently. When you regain composure you feel the need to satisfy your daughter again. As you face her you see she has three fingers shoved all the way up her cunt, and fluid dripping down them. Well that explains the moans. You take your daughters fingers and suck in the as she sucks the ones that where in your pussy. When you lick up every drop you, dress yourself and give a big smack to your daughter ass.

Know do you:
*[[Get started on breakfast 2]]
*[[Go see who else is asleep]]

[[Category: Hot and Horny]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:31:03 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definitely looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is receiving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definitely sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighborhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realizes I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definitely Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: Pay Robin a private visit]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:30:35 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definitely looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is receiving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definitely sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighborhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realizes I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definitely Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: Pay Robin a visit privately]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:25:04 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definitely looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is receiving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definitely sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighborhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realizes I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definitely Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: follow Robin home and confront him privately]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:24:52 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definitely looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is receiving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definitely sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighborhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realizes I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definitely Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: follow Robin home and confront him privately.]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Wed, 18 Dec 2013 21:24:36 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definitely looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is receiving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definitely sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighborhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realizes I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definitely Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: follow Robin home and confront him privately.=]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Tue, 17 Dec 2013 21:16:16 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definately looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is recieving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definately sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighbourhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realises I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definately Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: Find Robin and blackmail him to be your little slut]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: Sunday morning (cam your room)

Nighshade586 — Fri, 13 Dec 2013 17:56:24 GMT

Nighshade586:

It´s Sunday morning. You have breakfast with the whole family. You quickly remove the cams you installed last evening to check them after you eat.

You go through the footage and neither on the one in your room, nor the hallway is anything worth mentioning. But you can find something interesting on the one in the garage.

You can see the back of your dad. He is standing and leaning against the car. He is looking down to the floor.

Even though you can´t see the other side of the car you knock exactly what is going on. It definately looks and sounds like someone is blowing your dad. But who the hell is it that is pleasuring him?

"Fuck! You are so good at this!" you can hear your father say, "I am about to cum!"

He moans as he cums. You still can´t see the slut that is recieving his sperm right now.

"That was delicious!" you hear from behind the car, "it´s a shame I can´t stay longer though"

Holy shit! You recognize the voice from the slut. It definately sounds like Robin, a 16 year old boy from your neighbourhood. So your dad is not only cheating on your mom, but also with a boy?

"I gotta go home quickly before my mom realises I am gone." the boy says before standing up. You can now see his face behind the car and it´s definately Robin!

The video ends here...

[[good son: tell your mom about him cheating on her]]

[[good son: masturbate while fantasizing about what just happened]]

[[good son: try to forget about it]]

[[good son: track down Robin and put his mouth to use. Like Father, like son.]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Try to get her pregnant every night until she carries your child

Nighshade586 — Wed, 11 Dec 2013 00:37:09 GMT

Nighshade586:

Since last night went so well, maybe you can do it again tonight as well. After a long day at the beach, your family returns to the ship and decides to relax for the remainder of the day. Just like yesterday, Rachel's boy friend is in the shower leaving her vulnerable. You waste no time and hump away at her until you squirt another load of semen inside her uterus.

Day after day, you make your nightly trip to your big sister's room and fill her womb with your sperm. To your dismay, when the vacation ended you still had not succeeded in spawning a child inside her. Determined, you drug your sister when she comes home, and fuck her, often cumming inside her 4 or 5 times before your parents get home. Then you screw her some more until her pussy is raw in the morning.

At last after 2 1/2 weeks, it seems your sperm has managed to impregnate your older sister. Her period is late and your parent's are furious. Rachel's boyfriend is nowhere to be seen and your parent's force her to move out on her own.

9 month's later, your mother and sister give birth together in the same hospital. As soon as your mother had recovered, you rape her again putting another baby inside her womb. On Christmas day, Rachel comes back and your family celebrates together.

After the party, everyone was passed out drunk or asleep from your grandmother's dreadfully boring stories. Rachel; was passed out on her bed so you take advantage of this time to molest and inseminate her body again.

Year after year, you repeat the cycle. Now you live with your still pregnant mother on her way to birthing your 8th child. Your mother has grown used to your habits and accepts your cock whenever you want whether it be against the kitchen sink, or while she's doing the laundry.

As for your sister, she's also pregnant with your 8th child, but with no clue of your mischievousness.

'''Congratulations! You've found Good ending 1!'''

Good son: tell her to come over to your house right now

Nighshade586 — Sun, 10 Nov 2013 06:41:13 GMT

Nighshade586:

30 minutes later Jen is standing in your room in front of you.

She takes her cothes of revealing her nice big tits and her smooth pussy.

You tell her to lie down on your back on the bad. You pull her legs up in the air and get behind her. You rub your hard dick on the entrance of her pussy for a while so she´ll get wet before slowly sliding inside of her. It´s her second time so you go slow on her. You bend down on her and start to suck her nicely shaped c cup tits. You ask her if it feels good for her.

"Yes, it doesn´t hurt anymore," Jen says. You start to fuck her harder and suck and knead her breasts harder as well.

"I like it when you play with my tits. Sarah likes playing with them as well. She was always sucking on them like a baby. Afterwards she would always lick my pussy out."

Jen talking about lesbian sex with her friend makes you go insane. You turn her around and make her go on all four. You step behind her and start fucking her doggy style.

You grab her nice peach butt as you pump your meat into her fuckhole.

"Oh wow!" Jen moans "that feels nice! Almost as good as the tongue of Sarah!"

Now her constant comparisons to Sarah start to get a little bit annoying. You will show her how to feel reaaaally good! You grab her ass hard and fuck her as hard and fast as you can.

"Oh my god! What are you doing?" she screams out in pleasure. "I am going to cum!" Her whole body is shaking as she cums on your dick. You don´t care though and keep fucking her harder and harder.

"No way!" Jen cries out. "You are making me cum again!" Not even a minute after her last orgasm she once again cums from getting penetrated. Over the next 5 minutes you make her cum three more times before you are finally about to shoot your load.

"I never imagined sex with a boy could feel so good" Jen says with lust in her voice. "I don´t care about Sarah anymore! Please let me be your girlfriend! I need your dick every day now!"

You quickly pull out of her and cum all over her ass.

From that day onwards the two of you were a couple and you fucked every day. But your relationship didn´t last long. Jen turned into a total slut. She cheated on you all the time with other guys. You even caught her getting fucked by her father once. So you broke up a few month after getting together with her.

(ending 04)

back to the beginning:

[[Good son]]

[[Category: Endings]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Show her

Nighshade586 — Sun, 10 Nov 2013 02:39:27 GMT

Nighshade586:

You then stop her from sucking your cock and lay her on the bed and say this is what my personal cum dump does and you stick your dick into her one more time. You start thrusting a little harder into her causing her to moan and grab the sheets of her bed and take you full force and she wraps her legs around your waist. As the volume of her moaning increase you kiss Kara to quiet her down and stick your tongue in her mouth. She then wraps her arms around your back and opens her eyes and looks at you then close your eyes and release another load in her and push yourself and say “that’s what my personal cum dump does” and she responds back with “you just fuck me again, how does that make me your…” and Kara finally understand. “In other words you fuck me for your pleasure” she says sit up.

“And your too” you responded back, “Kara I can fuck any girl I want but not on my time, if I have a girl whose willing fuck anywhere at any time we can have sex, at the school, in my car, somewhere public, or private. Plus cumming into that tight pussy is fucking great I don’t want another man having you the way I just did”.

“Does that mean were dating” she asked excitedly.

“Sure, if you want to put it that way” you say calmly without causing suspicion. She then says “it’s only natural seeing how you impregnated me”. “WHAT” you say and she says “shhhhh… I’m only kidding, but I would be if I didn’t get birth control a week ago”.

Dodge a bullet “good” I don’t want to be a father yet” you reposed back, “But remember if you cheat on me, not only would I let you impregnate me, I'll force you to pay child support and claim that you raped me. So are you sure you want to be boyfriend and girlfriend?” as she wipes off some of your cum off her pussy and puts it in her mouth, and tastes your seed.

Say

*[[Hell no, this bitch is crazy]]
*[[YBFYS_Yes]]
*[[Our relationship is physical no strings attached]]

[[Category: Your Best Friend's Younger Sister]]

Good son: watch tv with your aunt

Nighshade586 — Fri, 08 Nov 2013 00:54:00 GMT

Nighshade586:

You enter her room. The lights are out, but the light from the tv is enough to see good enough. Your aunt is lying on the bed on her stomach. Her body is completely covered up with a blanket.

She lightens up as you enter her room.

"I am happy that you want to spend some time with me" she says. "Just get yourself a blanket and lie down next to me!"

The blankets are on the other side of the room. You walk past her and the bed and open the cupboard to get one of the blankets from inside. You turn back around to walk to her bed. But what you see as soon as you turn around is a huge surprise. Your aunt threw her blanket to the side and bent her knees so that her huge ass is up in the air while her face is still flat on the bed. And she is completely naked. You are too shocked to move and don´t know what the hell you should do.

"You said you think I am sexy right?" the fat lady asks. "Then don´t make me wait and fuck me!"

You quickly strip of your clothes and climb on the bed behind her. You guide your dick into her exposed fat pussy. You grab her huge butt with both of your hands and start to pound the chubby slut. The feeling of her fat ass slapping against your body every time you go inside her is amazing.

"Fuck yeah!" your aunt moans "I always wanted to get fucked by you! I just didn´t know you liked fat sluts like me!"

After fucking her from behind for a while you turn her around and lie her down on her back. You get on top of her and once again fuck her cunt. Her big boobs and stomach fat wobbles around more and more as you fuck her harder and faster. She grunts and screams your name over and over again so loudly that you can´t believe anybody heard you yet. But you don´t really care about it anyway. Sex with your aunt is so hot that you wouldn't stop if someone came in anyway.

"Give me your cum! Make me your bitch! Getting fucked by my nephew is the best thing ever! I love you so much! I am your dirty fucking whore! Fuck my fat cunt and make me pregnant!"

The dirty talk from your aunt drives you over the edge. With one last stroke you drive your cock completely into her and shoot every last drop of sperm into her. She screams out your name over and over again while being filled with your cum.

"You can fuck me again any time you want!" she tells you before you leave her room and go to bed.

Your aunt really did get pregnant from that night, and 9 months later of you fucking your fat bitch every night she gave birth to your first child. Since you could never resist pumping your cum deep inside her, she gave birth to a lot more children over the years.

*(More description would be awesome.)

(ending 13)

back to the beginning:

[[Good son]]

[[Category: Endings]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Good son: watch tv with your aunt

Nighshade586 — Fri, 08 Nov 2013 00:53:19 GMT

Nighshade586:

You enter her room. The lights are out, but the light from the tv is enough to see good enough. Your aunt is lying on the bed on her stomach. Her body is completely covered up with a blanket.

She lightens up as you enter her room.

"I am happy that you want to spend some time with me" she says. "Just get yourself a blanket and lie down next to me!"

The blankets are on the other side of the room. You walk past her and the bed and open the cupboard to get one of the blankets from inside. You turn back around to walk to her bed. But what you see as soon as you turn around is a huge surprise. Your aunt threw her blanket to the side and bent her knees so that her huge ass is up in the air while her face is still flat on the bed. And she is completely naked. You are too shocked to move and don´t know what the hell you should do.

"You said you think I am sexy right?" the fat lady asks. "Then don´t make me wait and fuck me!"

You quickly strip of your clothes and climb on the bed behind her. You guide your dick into her exposed fat pussy. You grab her huge butt with both of your hands and start to pound the chubby slut. The feeling of her fat ass slapping against your body every time you go inside her is amazing.

"Fuck yeah!" your aunt moans "I always wanted to get fucked by you! I just didn´t know you liked fat sluts like me!"

After fucking her from behind for a while you turn her around and lie her down on her back. You get on top of her and once again fuck her cunt. Her big boobs and stomach fat wobbles around more and more as you fuck her harder and faster. She grunts and screams your name over and over again so loudly that you can´t believe anybody heard you yet. But you don´t really care about it anyway. Sex with your aunt is so hot that you wouldn't stop if someone came in anyway.

"Give me your cum! Make me your bitch! Getting fucked by my nephew is the best thing ever! I love you so much! I am your dirty fucking whore! Fuck my fat cunt and make me pregnant!"

The dirty talk from your aunt drives you over the edge. With one last stroke you drive your cock completely into her and shoot every last drop of sperm into her. She screams out your name over and over again while being filled with your cum.

"You can fuck me again any time you want!" she tells you before you leave her room and go to bed.

Your aunt really did get pregnant from that night, and 9 months later of you fucking your fat bitch every night she gave birth to your first child. Since you could never resist pumping your cum deep inside her, she gave birth to a lot more children over the years.

(More description would be awesome.

(ending 13)

back to the beginning:

[[Good son]]

[[Category: Endings]]

[[Category:Good son]]

Take mother and daughter back to your apartment

Nighshade586 — Tue, 22 Oct 2013 19:39:57 GMT

Nighshade586:

You take both of them back to your apartment. They're insatiable. They can't seem to get enough of fucking you. After a night of steamy sex where you cum in one pussy and then the other, you wake up with one on either side of you, both of them resting their hands on your dick. You feel them up until they're awake and then fuck them both again.

You leave them in your bed in a sweaty heap together. Mother and daughter are probably closer than ever before after sharing your dick. You exepct that they'll still be there when you come home, so you might as well hunt for some fresh pussy while you're out.

Do you:
*[[Go to the library]]
*[[Go to the park]]
*[[Go to the gym]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Your Apartment]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=2}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Take them both back to your apartment

Nighshade586 — Tue, 22 Oct 2013 18:57:25 GMT

Nighshade586:

You take both of them back to your apartment. They're insatiable. They can't seem to get enough of fucking you and fucking each other. After a night of steamy sex where you cum in one pussy and then the other, you wake up with one on either side of you, both of them resting their hands on your dick. You feel them up until they're awake and then fuck them both again.

You leave them in your bed enjoying a hot sixty-nine with each other. You know they'll still be there when you come home, so you might as well hunt for some fresh pussy while you're out.

Do you:
*[[Go to the library]]
*[[Go to the park]]
*[[Go to the gym]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Your Apartment]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=2}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Fuck your sister's ass

Nighshade586 — Sun, 18 Aug 2013 01:38:49 GMT

Nighshade586:

You playfully slap her ass cheeks as you grab a bottle of shampoo to lube your cock. The creamy liquid cascades down and completely covers it. You take your hand a spread it around before aiming it at her pucker. With one smooth motion, you thrust your dick straight into your sister's ass hole.

"Mmmmmmm" She moans like a whore as you slide your dick in and out, making a loud squishy sound along with a colony of bubbles. You grab her tits and squeeze them gently as you continue pumping your self in and out of her rectum. With each thrust, a little bit on cum comes out of her pussy. You wander your hands over her distended belly filled with your cum and roam over it. The harder you press, the more cum gushes out. Breaking your kiss, you squeeze down hard on her stomach like a Heimlich Maneuver. No sooner had you done so than large globs of your thick cum that had been pent up in her womb, shoot out of her pussy making a large mess on the floor.

"OH GOD ALEX WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!???" She screams as she orgasms from the foreign sensation. Her rectum clenches tightly to your cock like a noose. Your balls boil with pleasure, unleashing its jism. You shoot your load into your moaning sister's bowels causing her to collapse from sheer pleasure. You catch her and place her softly in the puddle of cum on the shower floor, lying face down with your seed leaking out of both her holes.

You quickly clean yourself and turn the shower off, leaving her panting, trying to catch her breath.

You:

*[[Life of a 13 year old- Get ready for school (consent)| Get dressed and go down stairs, leaving your sister to bathe in your love juice]]

*[[Life of a 13 year old- Help your sister up and get dressed| Help your sister up and get dressed]]

[[Category: Life of a 13 year old]]

Fuck her brains out

Nighshade586 — Fri, 07 Jun 2013 19:59:04 GMT

Nighshade586:

Not bothering to stop, you keep plowing her pussy, fucking it raw. You cum once again, overflowing her twat with more even more of your gravy. You bend down and kiss her, tonguing deep into her mouth . She eagerly sucks on your bottom lip, causing you to orgasm, flooding her for the 4th time. Cum drips out of her engorged pussy, and runs down her leg onto her bed. You persistently ram her juicy cunt, making a loud slap every time your balls slap her clit, keeping her in a numb state.

You cum 3 more times in her belly before she regains consciousness again, creaming her vaginal walls and precious womb. She unconsciously cums from the feeling of you cock, shooting endless streams into her, splattering her juices all over the place.

"No more...no more Alex....i'm going to burst..." She pleads, having her 5th orgasm. You muster all your might and thrust one final time, balls deep into her, you unleash your final load into her beaten honey pot. She screams in total pleasure as her pussy milks you, urging you to unload all of yourself into her. With your cock bottling her pussy up, her belly distends abnormally at least 5-6 inches from her stretched uterus filled with your cum, making her stomach look as if she's 4 months pregnant.

Finally, you pull out of her steaming hot cunt. Splooge squirts out of her pussy as it attempts to morph back to its original tightness, reducing the size of her abnormally large belly although still bloated with about 3-4 inches of your cum. You stick your dick in her mouth allowing her eager tongue to clean your cock of cum and her honey.

She sit's up in her bed and attempts to get up and stand. Her legs buckle from your brutal fucking, not to mention to good 7-6 cups of cum held in her vagina.

"Im going to take a shower Alex, care to join me?" Rachel seductively winks to you as she sashays out of her room. You can't help but notice her ass bounce and the cum dripping out of her cunt onto the floor, making loud, wet plopping sounds as she disappears in the bathroom.

You:

*[[Life of a 13 year old- Follow your sister into the shower| Follow your sister into the shower]]

*[[Life of a 13 year old- Get ready for school (consent)| Get ready for school]]

[[Category: Life of a 13 year old]]

Give her one last cream filling

Nighshade586 — Mon, 13 May 2013 21:24:24 GMT

Nighshade586:

Your boyish hands grasp the sticky pale skin of her trembling thighs as you ram her up against the silent arcade machine. She inhales sharply at the sudden motion, a pierced eyebrow rising in alarm as she tries to turn her head around to look at you. Pressed close together, skinny bodies flush with sweat and various juices, you smell her. She smells of salt and musk, and something more, something sweet and rich. Almost like ketchup. In a single heaving motion, with your demonic virility coursing through your sixth grade body in one final ecstatic push, you force yourself further inside the pinned girl. And further still.

After the marathon fucking session her tight teenage vagina has transformed into something sloppy and lax. There's hardly any resistance left as you throw yourself past the folds of slick muscle. You bash your swollen head against her cervix, the quivering tip of her womb, finding it just as lax as the rest of her pussy. Its mouth hangs slightly open. You forcefully cram it shut with your pulsating dick, and keep pushing, forcing her cervix to accept more and more of your cock. Then, suddenly, your're inside of her actual womb. She cries out. In her exhausted state, you're not sure whether she can even distinguish pain from pleasure. In either case the shock proves too much for her exhausted body, and she faints without another sound. She sits impaled on the shaft of your dick.

Her cervix squeezes tightly around your victorious cock, just below the straining glans. The interior of her womb feels odd, almost alien to the touch. The walls, slick with secret secretions close in about the tender head of your cock, squeezing it furtively almost like a gloved hand. Scalding hot marshmallow walls with the texture of a million tiny pinheads press against your skin, practically gluing you to the deepest parts of the punkette's teen belly. The pleasure is simply too great.

Sticky gobs of semen pulse uncontrollably from the invading head of your cock. You fall against her unconscious body with a deep groan of primal pleasure as creamy sludge continues to pour into the girl's baby sack, seemingly without end. Then, finally, it's over. The somewhat flared head of your cock tingles, lodged deep inside her womb, coursing with demonic energies. As you look down at your shaft, or at least, the inch NOT stuffed into her, you notice something. Your cock is getting bigger! It seems that the demonic lust raging through you is having permanent effects on this boy's body. As you watch, your cock thickens, and grows by inches.

The punkette moans unconsciously as inches of cock push into her, forcing you deeper into her womb until you can feel her cervix slide down your shaft. You feel it stop somewhere around the middle of your huge cock, and you realize your cock has stopped growing. But the tingle moves lower, to your balls. You feel like weight is being added to them, and they're getting heavier. Leaning to the side, you look down at them with a smirk. They've grown to the size of large apples, and you can practically feel them sloshing with jizz. Oh, this is going to be FUN! You rock your hips back and forth, and you hear the punkette moan under you, your massive cock stuffing her full...

*[[leave the punkette and search for your next victim]]
*[[Fill her womb again]]
*[[Ravage her unconscious asshole]]
*[[Why leave a perfectly good fuckhole for someone else? Take her home!]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy with large-apple-sized balls and a 12-inch cock.]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Fuck her ruined, horsecum-leaking pussy.

Nighshade586 — Sat, 11 May 2013 04:17:01 GMT

Nighshade586:

You position your cock in front of her badly damaged pussy and decide that the situation there is just a little too vile for your tastes. Also, it looks unlikely to provide any traction for your meager human dick.

*[[Jerk off onto her face.]]
*[[Fuck her pretty mouth.]]
*[[Fuck her asshole.]]
*[[Eh...A hole's a hole. Fuck her ruined pussy anyway.]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Jim Shady|Rancher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Molest Jared

Nighshade586 — Fri, 10 May 2013 03:04:26 GMT

Nighshade586:

You release your swollen cock, which stands out on its own now, and firmly grab Jared's ass cheek. "Dude, what the fuck, are you some kinda fag? Get off me!" he says, continuing to pee.

"You don't like it?" you ask him. "Why else would you run in here, drop your pants and show me your ass like that?" You remove your hand from his cheek, then quietly step behind him, spit on your cock and stroke it a few times to get lubed up.

"Dude! I just had to go super bad," Jared says, his piss stream finally tapering off. As he starts to jiggle himself dry, you push his torso against the urinal and rub the tip of your cock around his asshole. He immediately struggles, but your demonic strength easily overpowers him. "DUDE WHAT THE FUCK! Get off-'''''OOMPHG'''''!" His cries trail off in a grunt as you spread open his virginal back door, shoving your cock past his sphincter and popping his dirty cherry.

You bury yourself deep inside him, aided by all the wriggling and squirming he's doing. Your host is clearly a virgin, as your demonic will is immediately required to keep him from blowing a load up the other boy's poop chute. You barely even need to thrust, since Jared is doing such a good job of jumping around against the urinal, impaled on your prick. Jared can barely breathe through the string of grunts you're eliciting from him. Despite your best efforts to hold back, you feel your orgasm slowly approaching.

Do you:
*[[Pound Jared's ass until you cum]]
*[[Give Jared a reach around]]
*[[Transfer your spirit into Jared]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Exit the toilet and carry Sue back to your seats so you can catch some sleep while your balls empty themselves into her

Nighshade586 — Tue, 30 Apr 2013 18:04:37 GMT

Nighshade586:

With Sue sitting contentedly in your lap, you manage to sneak back to your seats, or rather, the row in front of yours, by the emergency exit, with much more space to sit. Luckily this row is unoccupied, and Sue can straddle your hip and nestle her head against your shoulder.

A helpful stewardess wraps her in a blanket, and you quickly fall asleep. All the while, your balls tirelessly churn spurt after spurt of cum out of your dick and right into Sue's baby chamber...

You awaken.

There's bright light, and the captain is talking on the intercom. You've slept all night long!

Sue is smiling at you. "Good morning, super stud," she says and kisses you on the cheek. "Can you imagine you did... this?"

She looks down and you follow her gaze. She's enormous! Sue has swelled up to twice her size; it's not only that she sports an absolutely huge pregnant belly, her tits are beach-ball sized, and she's much fatter and flabbier overall too! Her nipples are threatening to fall out of her sweater, and you can see how they leak a white goo that most definitely is not milk.

"I know I might have become a bit too big... but I couldn't bear to wake you up," Sue says. "You looked so happy in your erotic dream!"

Erotic? You feel great! In fact, you realize you're still cumming at a steady pace!

Do you:
*[[Kiss Sue and tell her she looks beautiful]]
*[[Think boring unsexy thoughts to put a stop to this nonsense]]
*[[Freak out and buy a ticket back to the states as soon as you land]]
*[[Keep draining your balls into her]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[On An Airplane]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}
[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Ongoing Story/Hide and watch Amber and the Pizza Boy

Nighshade586 — Thu, 25 Apr 2013 19:57:27 GMT

Nighshade586:

==Chapter 23: Layaway Pizza==
You hide in a closet with a clear view of the living room and wait. Amber walks naked to the door and answers it.

"Hello there, did you bring me something hot and tasty?" Amber seems to be quite good at this game. The delivery boy seems only mildly surprised.

"I got a large pepperoni here, but looks like you were hoping for a little 'extra sausage'." He leers at her.

"I'm sorry but I seem to have misplaced my purse, think maybe we might come up with an alternate method of payment?" Amber asks and starts sucking on her index finger suggestively.

"By the look of the cum left on your chin it looks like you've already ordered pizza once today already" He jokes. Amber embarassedly wipes off the offending sperm. "Listen honey, we get lots of little sluts wanting to play out their freak-show fantasies every month. All that pizza comes out of our salary. Now granted you're a lot hotter than most of those other bitches so I'm willing to play along but I'm gonna need more than a BJ and a smile to show for it. You get me?" Amber nods, glad that this scrawny little dude is just as dominant sexually as you are.

"Whatever you want buddy." she says and pulls him inside.

"OK then, bend over the back of that couch. Let's hurry this up I got plenty more pizzas to deliver." Unzipping his pants he whips out his cock (With relief you see that it is smaller than yours, but still good sized) and puts it up against her ass cheeks. "Don't fight it honey, relax and unclench your sphincter, or else your in for an unpleasant ride." Amber, letting out small whimpers and moans, tries to comply. You can't believe that the girl who was a stuck up bitch earlier tonight is now letting a complete stranger corn-hole her recently de-virginized ass in exchange for a $15 pizza.

"That's it whore! Relax, just try and relax! You are so damn tight! I love my fucking job! Any time you need a pizza you ask for me, Rod. What's my name slut? WHAT'S MY NAME?"

"Rod. YOUR NAME IS ROD. Fuck me Rod, FUCK MY TIGHT ASS YOU STUD!" Amber is really starting to get into it you can tell. She's bent over the sofa and is clenching the seat cushions with both hands, her knuckles white with tension. You see Rod pounding into her from behind, a look of primal ferocity in his eyes, he's knows he's hurting her and enjoys it.

"You like it now, dontchu? You like my big cock inside you guts?"

"Fuck me. PLEASE. Cum in my ass, I want you to shoot it up into my intestines! Do it, do it please!"

"I'll cum where I like bitch!" Rod tells her and yanks her up by her hair. Turning her around to face him he pushes her down on her knees. Amber, believing he wants to have his dick sucked, opens her mouth wide. Instead of ramming it into her open orifice her jerks off in front of her until he squirts hot jizz of her face. He makes sure to get a lot in her hair, her eyes, and in her nose and mouth. The mask of cum blinds her and she has trouble breathing because she accidentally inhaled semen in through her nostrils. Tossing the pizza on the coffee table he say's, "Hope the guy hiding in the closet jacking off appreciates what a good job you did for me" and with that he leaves.

What do you do now?
*[[Ongoing Story/Enjoy your pizza and go home|Enjoy your pizza and go home]]
*[[Ongoing Story/Make Amber eat a slice with your "Special Sauce" on top|Make Amber eat a slice with your "Special Sauce" on top]]
[[Category:Ongoing Story]]

Ongoing Story/"You begged me to fuck your ass earlier. Now, it's time!"

Nighshade586 — Wed, 24 Apr 2013 06:42:53 GMT

Nighshade586:

==Chapter 10: Bonk the walls!==
Without taking any break, you lift her from the bed and place her with her hands against the wall. Your cock is also getting pretty exhausted, but this girl still isn't satisfied!!!
"Ok, Tom, no hands! Just your hip-work!" she says while shaking her bottom. You agree with the new temporary fetish and storm at her, dick forward. You ram her so hard, she loses grip on the wall and gets squished between you and the wall. Her ass is really tight now! But you keep stroking it. With every stroke, her stomach slams the wall, causing 'BONK' sounds while ramming her. The house trembles. You keep pumping her ass hard. She screams in pleasure. It feels so fucking good! Man, what a hot ass! "YES! TOM! YES! AAAAHHH!!" You can hear she's nearing another climax (lost count) And after several more pumps she reaches that ultimate climax. What you didn't spray into her ass 5 minutes ago, cums out now. Sadly enough, it ain't much...

What do you do now?
*[[Ongoing Story/Go home and go to sleep! Go to school tomorrow (nice girls there!)|Go home and go to sleep! Go to school tomorrow (nice girls there!)]]
*[[Ongoing Story/Stay here for the night, take her again tonight|Stay here for the night, take her again tonight!]]
[[Category:Ongoing Story]]

Ongoing Story/Jill doesn't want to dance anymore

Nighshade586 — Wed, 24 Apr 2013 03:57:08 GMT

Nighshade586:

==Chapter 8: Jill doesn't dance...==
"I can't take this anymore, honey. Take me now!" she yells, as she jumps on the bed and straddles you.

"Whoa, what happened to the dance?"

"I need your huge cock so badly...I'm so goddamn horny!" she shouts, as she rips your shirt off. She starts to rub her pussy on your stomach, and you feel the moisture just fall onto you and start to dribble off. "Can't you feel how wet I am?"

This is it for you, you can't take it any longer (who could?). You reach behind her to unzip the dress as she starts to unbuckle your jeans. "Hurry, honey," she moans. "I feel like I'm gonna explode."

But her dress is off unzipped as she says the word explode (you can't wait anymore either.) You lift her for a second do pull the dress off her front, throw it to the floor. She's left sitting above you wearing nothing but those leather gloves.

She lifts her left leg and turns on her right, so she's no longer straddling you. She then lifts your ass and pulls your pants and boxers off in one smooth motion. Once those are in the corner, she lifts you up and pulls the tattered remains of your shirt off and throws it in the corner too.

You, now entirely naked, turn to give her a look of pure love and lust. She looks back, give a brief, sexy smile, and turns back to straddle you again. Your cock is as hard as it's ever been, and Jill slides her pussy onto it as slow as molasses. There is no resistance, but you don't think she wants to take your whole huge cock in one quick go.

Once your cock is into the hilt, she starts to ride you, moaning loudly. "Ohhhh...fuck...I need this so badly..." she moans. "I still can't believe it could feel this good..."

She moans really loudly, and starts to ride you a lot faster. You can barely hold your load, but you exert whatever self-control you have left to sit up and kiss her deeply, pulling her hot body into yours.

"Please...fuck me...it..ahh...feels SO GOOD!!!" she moans. "I can't take this too much longer! I'm gonna cum!!!"

You moan as well as she shudders with her first orgasm, and reach one hand up to squeeze her left breast as you move down to suck on her right, and let your right hand slowly start to creep down, caressing as it goes towards her ass.

"Huh..huh..huh.." she says, each time she slams down on to your cock. Your hand makes it to her ass, and you slide your index finder in to her ass.

"Oh my God...my ASS! Fuck my ASS!!!" she screams. Not one to deny Jill pleasure, you slowly slide your middle and ring fingers as well, which somehow manage to find space in the extremely tight cavity. You feel the tension in her body quickly build back up again, and you know she's close to her second one.

You keep sucking her right nipple, but start to lower you other hand down her front. She keeps banging hard against you, and you let out another load grunt. When your left hand makes it down to the bottom, you feel around for her clitoris and start to squeeze, as you rhythmically thrust in and out of her ass.

"HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!" she screams, as she orgasms again. Her waves and waves of contractions force you into your own orgasm, and you start pumping your sperm really deep into her ass. She collapses next to you, and snuggles up against you. "That was the best orgasm I've ever had. Thank you, Tom."

Well your orgasm was one of the best too. You feel really beat, but you've gone for much longer than this.

What do you do now?
*[[Ongoing Story/Keep going, but this time you do the fucking|Keep going, but this time you do the fucking]]
*[[Ongoing Story/Sleep in Jill's arms|Sleep in her arms]]
[[Category:Ongoing Story]]

Cream her face

Nighshade586 — Wed, 17 Apr 2013 00:18:28 GMT

Nighshade586:

Sperm shoots out of your cock and lands all over her face. Thick gloops hit her eyes as she screams, "What the fuck Alex? Tell me before you..." She's cut off as a thick shot lands straight in her kisser. You finish as the lands rope of cum hits her breasts, dripping down to her nipples and onto the floor.

"I'm sorry Natasha, but I just couldn't hold it seeing your beautiful face like that" You admire your newly marked territory as she attempts to clean herself. "I'm not some slut you can just use you know? I've known you since we we're kids!" She angrily snatches a towel and marches to the girls locker room.

You:

*[[Leave for class| Hurry to your next class]]

*[[Follow Her| Follow her and fuck her hard]]

[[Category: Life of a 13 year old]]