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In your bed, in your room

Mind — Sun, 27 Nov 2016 23:26:10 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You finished dishes and you get up upstairs to your room. There you remind yourself that Richard is in your bed. You wanted her back down but you are too drunk and you want just …'

You finished dishes and you get up upstairs to your room. There you remind yourself that Richard is in your bed. You wanted her back down but you are too drunk and you want just lay down. Good thing you got double bed. You didn't even take off your clothes. You slip under the blanket. After 5 minutes you fell asleep.

You dream about Richard. He's touching your body, he rub your tights, your belly and stopped at your breasts. You feel his nose around your neck, he smell your hair. You moan with pleasure from his hands massaging your tips. He begin with taking off your top, your boobs get free. His hands again run again your boobs you moan harder. One of his hands come down to reach your clit. He slip his hand beneath your underwear. You feel his hand entering your labia. You moan hard. He's pleasuring you with his finger. His second hand started to take off your shorts then your underwear. You are naked you feel his lips on your nipples and his hand on your pussy. He take off his clothes. You feel his dick in entrance of your labia. He comes in, you moan hard. He makes few slow moves then started fucking you furiously. You cum hard and so he does inside of you. Then you wake up. You noticed you are naked. Your head hurts, got pretty massive hangover. You look right you see Richard naked still sleeping. You remember getting your bed immediately you stand up and feel something sticky between your tights. You move your fingers there and you see white fluid. You think that wasn't dream....

What you do :

*[[Lay back next to Richard ]]
*[[Use him this time instead of him]]

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Watch the TV for next two hours

Mind — Sat, 26 Nov 2016 20:51:25 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'They took their beers and watch TV. Richard again put his hand around your waist. You feel soaking with whiskey and you want to Masturbate hard. You didn't focus on the TV like g…'

They took their beers and watch TV. Richard again put his hand around your waist. You feel soaking with whiskey and you want to Masturbate hard. You didn't focus on the TV like guys instead you drink beer to forget about how wet you are. For next 2 hours you drink 4 beers more. You barely stay awake. Your father says that they are going to sleep. He says to Richard 'I will show you where you gonna sleep then I'm going to bed myself'.

You say you gonna do dishes and go sleep too. They go upstairs and you grab the plates from coffee table and put them into dishwasher, you wipe down the table and put the empty bottles to bin. You are ready to get sleep.

Where you gonna sleep:

*[[Couch in living room like your dad said]]
*[[In your bed, in your room ]]
*[[In your parents bed ]]

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Stay there and watch what they gonna do

Mind — Sat, 26 Nov 2016 20:38:32 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You decided to stay. On screen you can see a girl riding man and they talk dirty. Moment later you see your dad and Richard took their dicks off and start Masturbate. In your min…'

You decided to stay. On screen you can see a girl riding man and they talk dirty. Moment later you see your dad and Richard took their dicks off and start Masturbate. In your mind lewd thoughts and you want masturbate too but you hold it back.

You see that soon they gonna cum so you get up and go to kitchen for some tissues. You get them and you get beers along. The moment got come back you see they cumming and the girl is fucked from behind. They get all messy, coffee table, their jeans, carpet even sofa. You put the beers on table and throw at them tissues. Richard say 'girl clean up the mess' you want to interrupt but your father say 'Vicky clean up there'. You want that money so you grab the tissues you throw at them and started to wipe down the coffee table you feel their eyes on your butt. Then you kneel to wipe the carpet. In meantime Richard say 'don't forget about something'. After that you still kneeling come between them and start wiping the couch and their jeans. You see they stare at you. You finished avoiding their cocks and want to get up, but Richard hold you down and say 'you forgot about something girl, you take look at your father and he nod. You grab another tissue and wrap it around Richard dick. You feel his meat in your hand. You start to rub off it. When you finish Richard just say ' good girl '. You proceed with your dad cock. After that they put their dicks back in the jeans and switch channel to some boxing fights.

What you do :

*[[Watch the TV for next two hours ]]

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Accept and drink whisky from his mouth

Mind — Sat, 26 Nov 2016 00:56:54 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You say 'fuck yeah I do'. You pick the bottle and give it to Richard. He pour some whisky into his mouth and waits. You come close to him, really close that your boobs press Rich…'

You say 'fuck yeah I do'. You pick the bottle and give it to Richard. He pour some whisky into his mouth and waits. You come close to him, really close that your boobs press Richard chest and you move your lips close to his. Your lips touched and you for first time taste whisky. You wanted immediately move your head away because you didn't like the taste but Richard already got his hand behind your head and started to kiss you. You felt good so you didn't oppose he put his tongue inside your mouth and move it like madman. After few seconds he stopped and asks how it was.

You say it was some and you want some more. Richard point to your dad. You did again take a bottle then you put it into your dad hand. He's pretty drunk by now even more than you are so he doesn't even say a word just pour whisky into his mouth much more than Richard. He grasp around you. You put your tongue into his open mouth and kiss him. Again you taste the whiskey but it's better than last time. You feel your dad suck onto your tongue. You kissed for few moments. After that your dad say 'we should get some break with whisky because e only got one bottle. Vicky get us some beer.'. You go for beer imagining how you kiss again with them. It's after 10pm. You place beers on table and sit on the couch. You see your dad zapping through channels. Richard says 'if there's nothing interesting play some music' when your dad accidentally play some port. You are shocked. Richard say 'Damn Kev, you knew what we need now' then he rubs his bulge with his hand. Your dad answers 'Richie, we need some relief.' and so he start rubbing his crotch.

What you do :

*[[Stay there and watch what they gonna do ]]
*[[Go to kitchen with your beer ]]

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Offer your bellybutton

Mind — Sat, 26 Nov 2016 00:31:57 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You tell them that they can use your bellybutton if they want. Richard just say 'really?' and your dad just take a look at you then he say 'will you do that?'. You say 'hell yea…'

You tell them that they can use your bellybutton if they want. Richard just say 'really?' and your dad just take a look at you then he say 'will you do that?'. You say 'hell yeah I want' your dad day that you are drunk but you opposed saying that you are far from being drunk. You lied obviously but he believe.

Richard told you to lie on coffee table so you did. He took a bottle of whisky in his hand and pour some into your bellybutton. You feel weird but nice. He asks 'ready sweetie?' you nod then you feel his face on your belly and then he started sucking the whiskey out of your bellybutton but he didn't stop there he put his tongue into it and started to lick it clean. You immediately get wet and you moan a little. Richard get up and says 'Kev, your turn'. Your dad comes close, then he pour some whiskey. He put his face close to your bellybutton when you feel his tongue. You feel so good. Both of them get one more turn then they said break for moment. You say 'I need someday try it too' then Richard interrupt 'Yeah you can but for girls is a little different' you say 'what do you mean' he proceed 'instead of drinking it from girl bellybutton you drink from male mouth, want to try?'

What you do :

*[[Accept and drink whisky from his mouth ]]
*[[Decline and get yourself new beer]]

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You go for bathroom

Mind — Fri, 25 Nov 2016 23:03:44 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You feel that you need use the bathroom. You stand up and go. When you get back you see they already got some whisky in their rock glass and their are chatting. In TV there is no…'

You feel that you need use the bathroom. You stand up and go. When you get back you see they already got some whisky in their rock glass and their are chatting. In TV there is now sport studio. You pick yourself another bottle of beer and get back to the couch. You feel drunk.

They chat like they know for quite long time about parties, girl called Joanne, about cars and much more. When your dad was to pour again some whisky Richard asked him if he remember when they were drinking whisky from girls bellybuttons. He answered of course and he said he remember when Debbie almost cum and gets herself soaking from whisky and had to change herself. Richard said he would like to recall it someday.

What you do :

*[[Offer your bellybutton ]]
*[[Keep quiet and drink your beer ]]

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Stay and let his arm

Mind — Wed, 23 Nov 2016 00:38:33 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You felt Richard hand around your back. You feel excited about it. For next 15 minutes didn't happen anything, Richard band didn't even move until they again run our off beer. Yo…'

You felt Richard hand around your back. You feel excited about it. For next 15 minutes didn't happen anything, Richard band didn't even move until they again run our off beer. Your dad just say 'Victoria do what you supposed to do' but you still have half of the beer left. You wrap your lips on the bottle head and start drinking. It comes easy this time a lot easier than last time. You don't know why but they watching you.

You drinked the rest of your beer and stand up. Richard said 'I love that view' your dad continued 'I got it more often'. You get another 3 beers. You know you are pretty drunk right now. When you come back you put the beers on table and opened them. Richard again slapped your button and said 'good girl'. You sit back right next to Richard and his hand immediately wrap around you again. They still watch the match. About 20 minutes later the situation repeat. They again run out of beer so you grab new ones. The match is going to end they are not that happy because the match ends with scoreless tie. Your dad picked bottle of whisky and asks Richard do you want some? Richard accepted it of course.

What you do :

*[[You go for bathroom ]]

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Sit on the couch and wait

Mind — Tue, 22 Nov 2016 00:46:04 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You sit on the couch and drink your beer. You see their mugs are empty so when they come back they gonna want another one. You get a brilliant idea and took of your phone to mak…'

You sit on the couch and drink your beer. You see their mugs are empty so when they come back they gonna want another one. You get a brilliant idea and took of your phone to make a selfie with beer so you can show your friends later. You shoot one and on preview you can see your nipples poke through the shirt. You felt hot. You drank the beer. You see the second half is starting and you do not know how but they come back the same moment the second half starts.

You get up and want to get beers. You felt another slap across your butt, it's Richard again with words and smile on his face 'grab us some beers sweetie'. You think the beers start working because you didn't mind it.
You picked another three beers and get back to the couch you opened them up but didn't pour them. You sit back on. You watch the TV trying to understand what's going on this match when you feel Richard hand wrap around your back.

What you do :

*[[Stay and let his arm ]]
*[[Move his hand away ]]

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Sit right to Richard

Mind — Tue, 22 Nov 2016 00:34:07 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You take a seat right next to Richard. You see grin on his face. You see how he's eating you with stares. You feel how your thighs touch. One moment later you notice they already…'

You take a seat right next to Richard. You see grin on his face. You see how he's eating you with stares. You feel how your thighs touch. One moment later you notice they already drunk half the beer when you took only a sip. You say to them 'you don't have to drink those beers that fast' and your dad response was 'we ain't drinking it fast it's you who's slow'. 'he's right ' Richard respond. You picked your mug and drink some but you tried take too big sip and some of beer run of your chin between your titties.

Soon gonna be half time. You took few more sips and excuse yourself for bathroom. First of you had to pee, you drink few beers you already feel drunk and your bladder was full. Second thing was your bra was little wet from the beer. You tried to dry off it but do not work so you decided to take it off. You tied up your top even tighter. You came down with your bra off but there's no one. You see on TV that's it's halftime. You wonder where they go, probably toilet.

What you do :

*[[Go find them ]]
*[[Sit on the couch and wait ]]

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You prepare some sandwiches

Mind — Sun, 20 Nov 2016 17:07:43 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You start doing sandwiches. It took you about 10 minutes. When you finished you get that plate to the boys. When you arrive you see that they again run out of beer. Your dad say …'

You start doing sandwiches. It took you about 10 minutes. When you finished you get that plate to the boys. When you arrive you see that they again run out of beer. Your dad say 'where have you been. We need fuel'. You put the plate and want to go for another beers for them when Richard hold your hand and say 'not that fast sweetie. You drink with us remember? And we got a rule, man rule. No one's have a new beer if someone didn't finished last.' pointing at your almost full beer by the armchair. 'what do you mean?' you say. He answered 'you need to drink this one and would be good if you do this quick because we are pretty thirsty'. You are confused. 'dad, what is he talking about' you and and your father responds 'we got that rule for many years now and Richie is right we can't get new one until you finish. Maybe that's better we don't have to drink that much.'. You say to him 'No, I told you you gonna get best evening.'

You picked your beer and take a couple of big sips. You see Richard and Kevin eyes on you. You look on your mug and there's over a half of it left and you are full. Richard say you can do it. You fought with it for over a minute but finally you made it. Richard said 'good girl now get three new'. You go to the kitchen and grab new ones. You already fell relaxed. When you get back with beers Richard say 'maybe you want to sit with us on the couch would be easier for you and us and you could at least see something.'

What you do :

*[[Sit right to Richard ]]
*[[Sit between them ]]
*[[Sit right to your dad ]]

Or

*[[Stay with the armchair ]]

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Stay there. Watch the match.

Mind — Sun, 20 Nov 2016 16:44:36 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You sit by the armchair at the end of the room from where it's hard to watch TV. The match is starting and both guys immediately took attention. You see Richard is going of off b…'

You sit by the armchair at the end of the room from where it's hard to watch TV. The match is starting and both guys immediately took attention. You see Richard is going of off beer so go to fridge for another ones. You also took some snacks for them. You put some some snacks over the center of the table leaning pretty much when Richard slaps your ass saying 'get off from my view'. You almost drop the two beers you got in your other hand. You say 'I'm sorry but don't do it again'. You pour the beer and get to the armchair.

It's like 21 minutes on clock of the match and you again see that they're running off beers. You again stand up and was on your way to the kitchen when Richard said 'why don't you grab one for you sweetie?'. You didn't were ready to hear that. You look at your dad he looks like don't mind. You though too yourself 'I only drank beer once and I would do it again' so you say to Richard 'Yeah, she. I would like to.'. You picked 3 beers from fridge and another mug. You pour all the beers, you take your and go for the armchair. You take a sip of beer and get up again to the kitchen to make some sandwiches for them.

What you do :

*[[You prepare some sandwiches ]]

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Nice to meet you to Richard. I'm here to make your evening even better

Mind — Sun, 20 Nov 2016 01:03:01 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You say 'nice to meet you Mr. Richard. I'm here to make your evening even better so relax and watch your game or whatever you're up to'. He answer 'first off call me Richard or …'

You say 'nice to meet you Mr. Richard. I'm here to make your evening even better so relax and watch your game or whatever you're up to'. He answer 'first off call me Richard or just Richie and second good because I didn't sign for babysitting' the he go with your father to the couch in front of TV. Your father say 'come on the match will start shortly' after they sit for dad said 'Victoria, bring us beer'.

You go for the fridge you get two beers and two beer mugs. You go for the coffee table in front of couch. Really low coffee table to tell the truth. You open the first bottle then pour it to the first mug bending pretty much showing your round ass, then you hand it over to Richard then he says 'Thank you sweetie.' You opened second bottle and pour it into mug and give it to your father. He just say 'thank you you can go now back to the kitchen'. Richard interrupted 'she can stay there and watch match too if she doesn't mind'

What you do :

*[[Go back to kitchen ]]
*[[Stay there. Watch the match. ]]

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Wait for your dad to open the doors

Mind — Sat, 19 Nov 2016 21:36:19 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'Immediately your dad comes down on his way to doors. He sees you and stare for a moment. You ask 'something wrong daddy?'. The doorbell rung again. Your dad wake up saying 'no n…'

Immediately your dad comes down on his way to doors. He sees you and stare for a moment. You ask 'something wrong daddy?'. The doorbell rung again. Your dad wake up saying 'no nothing sweetheart'. You knew that he could not take his eyes of you.

Your dad open the doors and greet his friend 'Richard, how are you please come in.'. He stepped in and you see a handsome men just about his forties little older than your father. He's wearing some t-shirt and jeans like your father. Your dad introduce you 'Richard, this is my daughter Victoria. Victoria this is my boss and founder of my company Richard' Richard interrupted 'Kevin but must of all we are buddies'. He comes close to you and said 'nice to meet you Victoria' then he continues speaking to your father 'I though we gonna be alone together after you said your wife will be not there and we gonna have a man only evening'. Your dad was ready to say something but you interrupted and said:

What did you say :

*[[Nice to meet you to Richard. I'm here to make your evening even better]]
*[[Tell him to not consider you as some kind child]]

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Low rise shorts, short sleeve tie top and thigh highs

Mind — Sat, 19 Nov 2016 21:16:12 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You decided to wear something more appealing. You choose low rise shorts that show your perfect round butt, short sleeve tie top showing off your cleavage and some sexy thigh hig…'

You decided to wear something more appealing. You choose low rise shorts that show your perfect round butt, short sleeve tie top showing off your cleavage and some sexy thigh highs. You picked a white push up bra with matching panties. You look into the mirror you feel sexy. Your dad friend can get there any minute.

You get into your white ballet flats and get downstairs take last look at everything before your dad friend arrive. You put some more beers into the fridge because your dad only put two there. Sit down on sofa and wait. Few minutes later you hear a doorbell.

What you do :

*[[Wait for your dad to open the doors ]]
*[[Open the doors yourself ]]

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Kiss his cheek

Mind — Sat, 19 Nov 2016 20:57:28 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You lean on and kiss your father cheek. He asks 'what was that' then you answered 'that was a kiss, wasn't it?' your dad say 'I wasn't expecting that kind of kiss'. You grin. …'

You lean on and kiss your father cheek. He asks 'what was that' then you answered 'that was a kiss, wasn't it?' your dad say 'I wasn't expecting that kind of kiss'. You grin.

You make it to the car. You get your stuff and there's a lot of this you feel like your father really want to get it best as he can. You get home. Your father had to explain himself to your mom but she didn't care that much because she's going off today. On meantime your sister woke up and your brother announce he's going off to his friend Jacob for gaming night and asks your parents for approval. Your mothers said if your father say yes he can go and your father answered 'at least you won't disturb me. You can go but call me before you go sleep'. 'alright dad, I will thank you' and goes upstairs to pack himself. Your sister join in and say 'gosh, why you all have to be so annoying and loud. By the way of everyone is going somewhere today I'm going to and don't ask where I go.' your dad say angry like 'not everyone I and your sister Vicky stay home' but your mother interrupted 'leave her Kev, she's in that age'.

After a while your brother comes down and said he's going. One hour after your mom wearing beautiful dress said she's going and whispered into your ear 'take care of your dad and don't let him do anything stupid especially when I don't heard about his friend'. 'Okay mom' you answered and when she was going to close door behind her she says 'for tonight your are the woman of this house'. Half hour later comes down and left without saying a word. Your dad was at his office for whole time. It's almost 5pm soon your dad friend should arrive. You go to your room to get prepared.

What do you wear :

*[[Low rise shorts, short sleeve tie top and thigh highs]]
*[[Jeans and cropped t-shirt ]]

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A normal red one

Mind — Sat, 19 Nov 2016 17:22:41 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You choose classic red. It's cost 45 bucks you see your father was not that happy about that but he do it. After you left checkout he say 'remember what you say?' you say 'I do'…'

You choose classic red. It's cost 45 bucks you see your father was not that happy about that but he do it. After you left checkout he say 'remember what you say?' you say 'I do' then he 'then what are you waiting for?'

What you do :

*[[Kiss his cheek ]]
*[[Kiss his lips ]]

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A new lipstick

Mind — Sat, 19 Nov 2016 17:17:18 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You say to your father 'I need a new lipstick' he answered 'you will get 200 so you can get new one' you say 'but I'd like get it today' again your dad 'why's that? You want to …'

You say to your father 'I need a new lipstick' he answered 'you will get 200 so you can get new one' you say 'but I'd like get it today' again your dad 'why's that? You want to kiss me or what? You will stay while day home so you don't need it today.' you bothered your father with words 'I will' your father was confused for moment then say 'you will what' you reply 'kiss you' your dad say 'if you say so I'll buy it for you if it's not too expensive'.

You took your dad to the shop where you could buy a nice lipstick and you start looking for some. He said 'sweetie, we don't have that much time which one of these three you want?' showing you three lipsticks.

What you want :

*[[Almost black one ]]
*[[A normal red one ]]
*[[A sweet pink one ]]

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Dad, can you buy me something?

Mind — Sat, 19 Nov 2016 17:04:02 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You wanted to use the situation and get some more money and you asked 'dad, can you buy me something' your dad answered 'sure, sweetheart if it's not too expensive'. What yo…'

You wanted to use the situation and get some more money and you asked 'dad, can you buy me something' your dad answered 'sure, sweetheart if it's not too expensive'.

What you want :

*[[A new costume? ]]
*[[A new lipstick ]]

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Go with your dad shopping

Mind — Fri, 18 Nov 2016 23:32:38 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'Yeah, I can go. You say. 'then it's settled' said your mom. 'Be ready in 10 minutes' said your father. You go upstairs you changed yourself into pair of jeans, a gray t-shirt an…'

Yeah, I can go. You say. 'then it's settled' said your mom. 'Be ready in 10 minutes' said your father. You go upstairs you changed yourself into pair of jeans, a gray t-shirt and some sneakers. You get down your mom give you shopping list and you go to your dad car. You drive to pretty big shopping centre.

Your dad say he first want to get everything he needs for today so he get few things like popcorn, then he goes for alcohol he picked 8 beers. You tell him that could be to little. 'you think so?' he say. You tell him to get whole crate it you can put it in the fridge and you don't have to worry if it's not enough'. That's good idea. No wonder mom sends you with me he said. Then he grabs a bottle of whiskey a big one to tell the truth. 'I believe he will like that' he said. Now let's buy rest of our stuff and gets going its almost 11am.

What you do :

*[[Dad, can you buy me something? ]]
*[[Let's get going. You need to clean your room before ]]

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Help your mom finishing the breakfast

Mind — Fri, 18 Nov 2016 22:49:28 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You asked your mom 'can I help you with something?'. She said of course and tells you get the Plates ready. You get the plates and tell her 'I heard that you gonna have some fun…'

You asked your mom 'can I help you with something?'. She said of course and tells you get the
Plates ready. You get the plates and tell her 'I heard that you gonna have some fun tonight' she tells you 'how you know? Never mind I will. I'll get fun like never before or at least in last 5 years. One of my friends got bachelorette party tonight. I don't think I gonna come home today. Please don't tell your father about it. He would argue about it. By the way one of his friends coming tonight so he's pretty pissed that I'm going off. What's your plans for today? '. Wow you think your mom seems pretty happy right now you want to keep it like this. You say to her 'so far nothing on my mind probably gonna play some games'.

The moment you finished your brother and father come down for breakfast. Your mom asks 'where is Kate?' your brother answers she's not coming. Your mom again 'no wonder when she comes late then sleep till noon. You eat, talk and laugh. More than one hour passed. Your mother goes doing her chores starting with dishes, your brother goes to his room and dad said he's going to get some shopping. He say to your mom 'darling, I'm going to get some stuff for today. Do you need something?' she answered 'of course I'll make some list. Vic, will you go with your dad? You know he always buy wrong things.'

What you do :

*[[Go with your dad shopping ]]
*[[Stay home, you still have some things to do ]]

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Day 2: "Gentleman's Evening

Mind — Thu, 17 Nov 2016 22:51:50 GMT

Mind:

You sleep well. You woke up at 7am you still got an hour to breakfast. In meantime you decided to take shower. Shave your legs and pussy. You wonder how your dad friend looks and who he is. You wear something on and get down for breakfast. There is still about 15 minutes left what you do in meantime?

What you do :

*[[Help your mom finishing the breakfast ]]
*[[Wake up your sister for breakfast ]]

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Day 2: "Gentleman's Evening

Mind — Thu, 17 Nov 2016 22:50:49 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You sleep well. You woke up at 7am you still got an hour to breakfast. In meantime you decided to take shower. Shave your legs and pussy. You wonder how your dad friend looks a…'

Play computer games

Mind — Thu, 17 Nov 2016 22:41:01 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'For the rest of the day you played some games. You get sleep about 10pm and you were thinking about tomorrow and how you spend your money. *Day 2: "Gentleman's Evening [[…'

For the rest of the day you played some games. You get sleep about 10pm and you were thinking about tomorrow and how you spend your money.

*[[Day 2: "Gentleman's Evening]]

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Lie about your school today

Mind — Thu, 17 Nov 2016 13:40:31 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'At school? Pretty good today. You talk for a moment. Then you go upstairs to your room. Your mom joined your father on couch watching TV. What you do for rest of the day? W…'

At school? Pretty good today. You talk for a moment. Then you go upstairs to your room. Your mom joined your father on couch watching TV.

What you do for rest of the day?

What you do :

*[[Play computer games ]]
*[[Read some books]]

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Your mom come home

Mind — Thu, 17 Nov 2016 13:34:14 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'Your mom come home. You stopped what you were doing and come down to say hi and ask how her day pass. She tells you pretty good because it's Friday and she can't wait for tomor…'

Your mom come home. You stopped what you were doing and come down to say hi and ask how her day pass.

She tells you pretty good because it's Friday and she can't wait for tomorrow. She asks if there is something to eat because she's hungry. You give her some chips and chicken you made before. She shares eating and asks 'so how's your school today?'

What you do :

*[[Lie about your school today ]]
*[[Tell her truth ]]

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Stop him, take a tissue and try to clean it

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 23:29:28 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You say wait Danny. He turn in your direction. You picked up some kitchen tissue and say 'you don't want to let it dry, you would ruin your new trousers' then you kneel before hi…'

You say wait Danny. He turn in your direction. You picked up some kitchen tissue and say 'you don't want to let it dry, you would ruin your new trousers' then you kneel before him and gently tried to rub his bulge the moment you touch him you feel he cum in his pants. You stand up and say 'put them into laundry, and one more thing' you lean on to his ear. You whisper 'your shorts too'. He's red right now and rushed for bathroom.

Your thanks you for meal was delicious. My pleasure you say. You picked up the plates and do the dishes. Your dad watch you for a moment especially your legs but then go upstairs. You spend some time, it's almost 6pm. Your mom gonna be soon home

*[[Your mom come home ]]

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If you serve him tomorrow

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 22:53:55 GMT

Mind:

Your dad tells you that tomorrow his friend from work gonna visit him and they want to have man evening. They gonna watch TV, drink beer, talk and just have good time. He say your mother go with her friends tomorrow somewhere so she won't be home. Will you serve us tomorrow?

You ask what do you mean by serve us? He says 'if we want beer you bring us one from the fridge, we want something to eat to make one, we want popcorn you bring one, I spill something you clean it. You want me to explain what serve mean? Just help us to have good time and you get your money'. Okay you say you got it dad. That will be your best evening ever you continue. Thanks, darling. He exclaims. 'and more thing he'll use your room tomorrow I don't want to make him sleep on sofa'.

What you do next :

*[[Clean yourself up then wear something on]]
*[[To go your room and wear another shirt like the one destroyed before ]]
*[[Wear your bikini then hop to the pool ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Place finger between your boobs, pick up the ketchup then lick your finger clean

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 22:50:48 GMT

Mind:

You put your finger under your shirt showing your cleavage, you picked up the ketchup and you suck on your finger for few seconds. Your brother and father looks at you like on some kind treasure..

You ask 'What? Do I have something on face?'. Your father joked again 'no, but I wish you do'. You blush a little'. Your brother say he's going to bathroom but the moment he stand up he pushed his fork so some of chicken lands on his trousers where the zipper is.

What you do :

*[[Stop him, take a tissue and try to clean it]]
*[[Let your brother go to bathroom ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Place finger between your boobs, pick up the ketchup then lick your finger clean

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 22:49:37 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You put your finger under your shirt showing your cleavage, you picked up the ketchup and you suck on your finger for few seconds. Your brother and father looks at you like on so…'

Some ketchup from your chips fall off between your boobs

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 13:47:34 GMT

Mind:

You dip up your chips so it deep into ketchup you move it to your lips when almost all of the ketchup fall off right between your boobs and your shirt. You let a little 'ouch' out of yourself when cold ketchup landed on your skin.

Your father and brother looks interested even more your brother looks like he swallow a whole chips. Your dad comment 'something landed between your uhm uh' pointing his finger at your chest.

What you do :

*[[Place finger between your boobs, pick up the ketchup then lick your finger clean]]
*[[Take off your shirt and pick up some tissue to clean it ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Some ketchup from your chips fall off between your boobs

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 13:40:50 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You pick up your chips so it deep into ketchup you move it to your lips when almost all of the ketchup fall off right between your boobs and your shirt. You let a little 'ouch' …'

You pick up your chips so it deep into ketchup you move it to your lips when almost all of the ketchup fall off right between your boobs and your shirt. You let a little 'ouch' out of yourself when cold ketchup landed on your skin.

Your father and brother looks interested even more your brother looks like he swallow a whole chips. Your dad comment 'something landed between your uhm uh' pointing his finger at your chest.

What you do :

*[[Place finger between your boobs, pick up the ketchup then pick your finger clean]]
*[[Take off your shirt and pick up some tissue to clean it ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Your brother ask for some ketchup

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 10:14:45 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'Your brother ask if you can give him some ketchup. You stand up to go to fridge, open up bend over for ketchup letting both of them see your perfect panties less but. You get it…'

Your brother ask if you can give him some ketchup. You stand up to go to fridge, open up bend over for ketchup letting both of them see your perfect panties less but. You get it and give it to your brother with wide smile on your face saying 'of course Danny'. Both your dad and brother was little shocked and you are sure both of them got bulges in their pants.

Your brother thanks for ketchup and continue eating. Your dad joked that he would want another bottle of they were. Danny laugh. You smiled and say you are happy that they like your meal.

What happens next :

*[[Some ketchup from your chips fall off between your boobs]]
*[[You eat your chips normally ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Get down prepare something to eat

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 10:01:54 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You feel hungry so you go downstairs and prepare something to eat for you, your brother and father. You make some chips and chicken. The moment you finished your brother gets …'

You feel hungry so you go downstairs and prepare something to eat for you, your brother and father.

You make some chips and chicken. The moment you finished your brother gets inside. You ask you hungry? Of course I am, he exclaims. So change yourself and get dad down you say. Few minutes later your dad and your brother comes down and you all sit around the table. Your dad and brother at one side of the table and you on the opposite one. You start eating.

What happen :

*[[Your dad say the fries are badly cooked]]
*[[Your brother ask for some ketchup ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Take a relaxing nap

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 09:52:22 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You take a nap. You sleep for many hours. You have no idea that you are so tired. You wake up. Check out time. It's almost 3pm your brother gonna soon come from school. What …'

You take a nap. You sleep for many hours. You have no idea that you are so tired.

You wake up. Check out time. It's almost 3pm your brother gonna soon come from school.

What you do next :

*[[Sleep still ]]
*[[Get down prepare something to eat ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Lay on the bed

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 09:45:54 GMT

Mind:

You feel little tired so you decide to rest for a while on your bed.

You lay for few minutes and you feel horny and sleepy.

What you do next :

*[[Take a relaxing nap ]]
*[[Masturbate on your bed. ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Lay on the bed

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 09:44:56 GMT

Mind:

Lay on the bed

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 09:43:38 GMT

Mind:

You feel little tired so you decide to rest for a while on your bed.

You lay for few minutes and you feel horny and sleepy.

What you do next :

*[[Take a nap. ]]
*[[Masturbate. ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Lay on the bed

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 09:43:01 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You feel little tired so you decide to rest for a while on your bed. You lay for few minutes and you feel horny and sleepy. What you do next : *Take a nap *[[Masturbate…'

You feel little tired so you decide to rest for a while on your bed.

You lay for few minutes and you feel horny and sleepy.

What you do next :

*[[Take a nap ]]
*[[Masturbate ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

To go your room and wear another shirt like the one destroyed before

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 00:33:26 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'It's still pretty early it's only 9am. You decided to wear something comfortable and you go to your room. You choose another shirt like the one you destroyed, you still got abo…'

It's still pretty early it's only 9am. You decided to wear something comfortable and you go to your room. You choose another shirt like the one you destroyed, you still got about 4 more like it. No underwear this time also.

Now you think what to do next. Maybe turn on your PC, or lay down on your bed or get out of your room and seek for something around the house?

What you do next :

*[[Turn on your computer ]]
*[[Lay on the bed ]]
*[[Get out of your room ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

If you serve him tomorrow

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 00:25:40 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'Your dad tells you that tomorrow his friend from work gonna visit him and they want to have man evening. They gonna watch TV, drink beer, talk and just have good time. He say y…'

Your dad tells you that tomorrow his friend from work gonna visit him and they want to have man evening. They gonna watch TV, drink beer, talk and just have good time. He say your mother go with her friends tomorrow somewhere so she won't be home. Will you serve us tomorrow?

You ask what do you mean by serve us? He says 'if we want beer you bring us one from the fridge, we want something to eat to make one, we want popcorn you bring one, I spill something you clean it. You want me to explain what serve mean? Just help us to have good time and you get your money'. Okay you say you got it dad. That will be your best evening ever you continue. Thanks, darling. He exclaims.

What you do next :

*[[Clean yourself up then wear something on]]
*[[To go your room and wear another shirt like the one destroyed before ]]
*[[Wear your bikini then hop to the pool ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Let me stay home today and give me 200$

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 00:04:41 GMT

Mind:

You tell him you will accept his apologies and forget about everything if he let you stay home today and give you 200$. He moved his hand from your shoulder and scratch his head. Few seconds later you get his answer.

He tells you that he will let you stay home today but 200$ is way too much. Yeah I got my fun but it didn't worth that much money. You want to argue but your dad continue. 'but alright I will give you 200$ if you do something else'.

What he want :

*[[If you stay as you are till 6pm]]
*[[If you mow the lawn ]]
*[[If you serve him tomorrow]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Let me stay home today and give me 200$

Mind — Wed, 16 Nov 2016 00:03:23 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You tell him you will accept his apologies and forget about everything if he let you stay home today and give you 200$. He moved his hand from your shoulder and scratch his head.…'

You tell him you will accept his apologies and forget about everything if he let you stay home today and give you 200$. He moved his hand from your shoulder and scratch his head. Few seconds later you get his answer.

He tells you that he will let you stay home today but 200$ is way too much. Yeah I got my fun but it didn't worth that much money. You want to argue but your dad continue. 'but alright I will give you 200$ if you do something else'.

What he want :

*[[Stay as you are till 6pm]
*[[Mow the lawn ]]
*[[If you serve him tomorrow]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Demand something from him

Mind — Tue, 15 Nov 2016 23:48:59 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'He's right in front of you. You think even to close. He put his hand on your naked shoulder and try to apologize. He said he couldn't help or because he's a man. Your anger goe…'

He's right in front of you. You think even to close. He put his hand on your naked shoulder and try to apologize. He said he couldn't help or because he's a man. Your anger goes off but you think you can use it to your own advantage.

You say to your dad you know he's a good man but you are his daughter and you will accept his apologies if? He asks if what.

What you want :

*[[Let me stay home today ]]
*[[Let me stay home today and give me 20$]]
*[[Let me stay home today and give me 200$]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Rush to your dad office

Mind — Tue, 15 Nov 2016 23:39:12 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You rush with anger to your dad office. You didn't knock. You enter then smash door behind you. You see your dad is looking at you. You were so angry that you didn't put anythin…'

You rush with anger to your dad office. You didn't knock. You enter then smash door behind you. You see your dad is looking at you. You were so angry that you didn't put anything on you but you don't mind. You shout 'how could you' and turn your back to your dad. He tried to excuse yourself but you didn't want to hear that.

He stand up and he's coming in your direction. Probably to apologize.

What you do :

*[[Argue with him ]]
*[[Demand something from him ]]
*[[Accept his apologies ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

He give you scissors then goes up to his office

Mind — Tue, 15 Nov 2016 00:17:04 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You hear that your dad opens drawer and he's seeking for something moment later he inserted under the shelf right to your right hand a scissors and say 'that should do the job'.…'

You hear that your dad opens drawer and he's seeking for something moment later he inserted under the shelf right to your right hand a scissors and say 'that should do the job'. You didn't even pick it up when you hear your dad on stairs going to his office.

You immediately pick it up and tried to place them between your tits and try not to hurt yourself. You start cutting but the shirt is too thick right now so it's not that easy. You feel how the cum dribble from your ass. You try using all your strength to get loose the shirt and it did. You are free! You are naked now with your back splattered with your dad's cum.

What you do next :

*[[Rush to your dad office]]
*[[Get a shower then wear something on]]
*[[Stroll around the house naked with your dad cum on you ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Wiggle until you get off

Mind — Tue, 15 Nov 2016 00:02:36 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You furiously start moving in every direction, you tried getting your ass higher or lay down on the floor, you tried to roll from it but still didn't work. It's like something b…'

You furiously start moving in every direction, you tried getting your ass higher or lay down on the floor, you tried to roll from it but still didn't work. It's like something between your neck and shoulders keep you under it, like your shirt works as rope and now when it's all the way up is even harder to tear it apart. You still trying to but you think that won't do.

Meantime you hear your dad gasping hard, and you hear how fast he's stroking his dick. Few moments later you felt something hot and sticky splatter your back, ass and your legs. You are confused. Did your father just come over you? You hear he put his trousers back on.

What happened next :

*[[He give you scissors then goes up to his office ]]
*[[He leave you and goes to his office ]]
*[[You ask what happened ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

Still try to wiggle up from under the shelf saying nothing

Mind — Mon, 14 Nov 2016 23:47:22 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You tried to move forward then backward to escape from under the shelf, but it didn't work just make things worse because your shirt goes all the way up to your shoulders which …'

You tried to move forward then backward to escape from under the shelf, but it didn't work just make things worse because your shirt goes all the way up to your shoulders which are under the shelf. You feel naked, your boobs comes out and hangs free. You hear slapping like sound. You know what's happening.

Your dad said that's even better. You hear his hand moving on his dick. He's grunting a little.

What you do :

*[[Wiggle until you get off ]]
*[[Say 'please daddy help me, pull me from behind' ]]
*[[give up and lay still]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

You hear a zipper

Mind — Mon, 14 Nov 2016 10:54:18 GMT

Mind: Created page with 'You hear a zipper like sound. You would watch what was that but you are still stuck, but you are pretty sure your dad take off his meat. You hear like he move chair right behind…'

You hear a zipper like sound. You would watch what was that but you are still stuck, but you are pretty sure your dad take off his meat. You hear like he move chair right behind you. He sit down, take down his pants to ankles. He said then with laugh in his voice that he didn't know about such attractions for today.

You are sure your dad enjoys it right now.

How do you react :

*[[Still try to wiggle up from under the shelf saying nothing ]]
*[[Ask your dad what he's doing ]]
*[[Make him even hornier ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

He said you have to beat it yourself.

Mind — Mon, 14 Nov 2016 10:37:13 GMT

Mind:

He said you need make it yourself but you can barely move. You got your ass up face down. You can't move either way a little, you try too but it just don't work and again your shirt go up showing off your butt completely, you are not even sure if your dad can't see your underboobs right now.

You just hear his 'holy moly' dropping his newspaper and standing up.

Then :

*[[You hear a zipper]]
*[[He take another cup of coffee and sits back ]]
*[[He goes up to his office room ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]

User talk:Platypus

Mind — Sun, 13 Nov 2016 23:12:33 GMT

Mind:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]

<b> >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. </b>

I just wanted to let you know, if you want to read the story I am writing on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and let me know what you think, what is wrong, what is right, etc, it would be great. I was just thinking I had asked Fred and Teejay, but not you. Honestly, I didn't more because I didn't think you would really want to. But, I realized just now I was assuming that without even asking xD So, sorry for the delayed asking. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:22, 10 September 2016 (UTC)

Wow, I haven't been on this site for months and yet I still find you with the daily routine. Props! Just dropping by to say hello.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:40, 9 August 2016 (UTC)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

Yeah, that's probably true. I'll start reverting pages back.--[[User:Underside|Underside]] 02:06, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Okay, in an effort to satisfy everybody I templated each section page for [[All Adult Stories]]. Then I added the templates to the main index for the best of both worlds. Now edits in a section of any page will show up under the main index and the individual page. The main page still has parser issues though. I hope it's alright like this. If so I could do this for the PG-13 pages too. --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 01:33, 15 July 2016 (UTC)

Alright, thanks. I wanted to keep the structure the same as much as possible. I like the idea of a single page index too. I considered making the split pages alongside the main index, but the extra bookkeeping of maintaining two indexes didn't seem like a better way. I'll check for edits that happened between now I when I split the pages, and incorporate any I find before I change it. --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 20:47, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi there, I'm kinda new to the wiki, but I have been working on cleaning up the [[All Adult Stories|adult]] and [[All PG-13 Stories|PG-13]] stories. Both pages currently have too many parser calls and the 50kb adult page won't let me edit with my phone browser. I broke up the pages as suggested on the discussion page. [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|DirtyMe]] suggested I check with you before making big edits to the indexes though. I have links to the changes I made [[All_Adult_Stories/#|here]] and [[All_PG-13_Stories/#|here]] respectively. Would it be alright if I break the pages up? --[[User:Underside|Underside]] 15:44, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:36 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

lol, that is why I mentioned that path specifically. While the rest is rather questionable in the first place, it could be argued on why it should be allowed. However, the single path seemed to pass beyond what Rob wanted. Actually, I think it was me that ironically made it available. When I came across one page, I got the content not welcome message, so I edited it so the page displayed properly. Then, the pages were suddenly able to be read. I agree about not liking to censor stuff. Honestly, I don't understand people that like that kind of thing, but I would rather they just write and fantasize than actually do stuff in real life. Like an outlet. Seems better to me anyways, since I can just avoid reading it if I want to. Lets face it, Dirty Me is an outlet for my own personal fantasies, since I can no longer really live them out. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:58, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

While I was reading through [[Life of a 13 year old]] for the review, I came across this path: [[Stalk an elementary school]]

This path has red links mostly, and the only written options lead the main character have sex with a 10 year old girl, ending with the character piercing her uterus and cumming inside her chest, next to her heart. I am unsure if this goes beyond Rob's rules, so wanted to let you know in case it should potentially be removed. I am not here to judge it, just to make sure you were aware in case this should be removed or modified to comply with the rules. I will let you judge if it is acceptable. (Personally, I find the whole story offensive, and questionable (since it is mostly supposed to be a 13 year old doing all these things), but that is a different issue...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:00, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for your kind words and sage advice. A few thoughts you might want to consider:

*I finally built up the courage to make a contribution, and added a couple pages to an existing story. That's a big step. My first feedback is from a sysop who, rather than offering any sort of encouragement or advice, suggests I should be writing for a comic book. Not exactly the kind of behavior one would hope for in a sysop.
*I personally have no problem with feedback, but would hope it might come in a less douche-filled format. Particularly from a grizzled veteran such as yourself. That said, I'm not simply going to bow down and worship at the altar of Platypus. You have the power to ban...you've made it very clear. You've mentioned at every opportunity that you have special sysop powers. If your ego is so sensitive that you can't handle someone standing up to you, then ban away. A bully will be a bully...even in egg-laying mammalian clothing.
*I have no interest in getting into a pissing match. As previously stated, I simply was taken aback by your initial foray into doucheville. I've since come to understand that you were simply being you. I've dealt with cyber-bullies before, and will do so again. If you feel the need to flex your virtual muscles and remind everyone who is in charge, then feel free. Some guys need that sort of thing to get off. It takes more than a few snarky comments to scare me away. Can we hug it out now?

Hope this has been helpful.

Kindest regards,
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 23:41, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Did you honestly just ban me from editing "your stories" because I posted a snarky response to your grammar nazism, then thought better of it an deleted my own post? I think perhaps Mr Sysop is letting his title go to his head. --[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 01:17, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Hey, mind looking at "Escape from Syria" and "A Boy's Night Out" in the Mature Story section? I think they're Adult stories that somehow wandered into the Mature Story section. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:20, 19 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I didn't understand half of that...so...I am not completely sure if you are making fun of me or not xD Anyways, I have asked Teejay to look over my raider tale story I have completed for some proof reading. [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. I am not sure if you would be willing to or not. I assume it is easy enough to understand, even without knowing about the game. Raiders are the thieves, murderers, raiding groups. Deathclaw is just scary, like it sounds. And the random food is super low quality food that you would not even think of as worth stealing. The setting is the world after lots of atom bombs fell, so a giant, irradiated wasteland with mutated things running around trying to kill everything. Oh, and a Yao guai is a mutated bear. TMI? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:18, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Sigh...where did everyone go? I keep seeing change after change of one name, then another name replaces, but it seems like it is relatively few people active right now...

I haven't even seen you in the logs lately.

btw, ever played fallout games? Wondering what you think of my new stuff if you have. Not getting much feedback from anyone on them lately... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:21, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

I explained how I do images. Maybe it will help him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:34, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

I keep seeing [[Story Reviews]] on the front page, but...nothing is ever done.

I am slowly going to try to build a review system. I will change it as I go, probably with some key words in a template on the main rating page, giving the story link, review link, etc, but for now, I am just starting the thing. I am hoping after it is developed enough, we can use it to replace the [[Story Reviews]] page. Or, would it be better for me to blank [[The Review]], and just modify [[Story Reviews]]? I was thinking of just making a page per story, with my review and let others also add their reviews if they wish, but I want to know your thoughts. I will play with templates later to try to get right. I will of course include the same info as in the [[Story Reviews]], but in a nice table format. Title, link, review page link, page count, probably some key terms (Especially when I get to adult). But, again, I am a bit worried about how many pages I will create. I am also going to have a cutoff, pagecount. Like, under 20 pages, unless your story is 100% complete, I won't bother. I wanted your thoughts, since I think it would be better for people to understand the stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

Okay, this is a strange request. So, for your smutty sex romp, on the female path, would you be willing to write about a strange...fantasy...I have?

I can't explain the fantasy, and know it is really strange...but, I have always had a fantasy of taking a bath in a bathtub full of cum...

I wrote a little short, more as a funny short, for this: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2013/10/a-withdrawal-from-sperm-bank-cum.html. I know, if inspiration hits you, but it can't really hit you if you don't think of it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:15, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

I sort guessed it was there to stop spambots but it's annoying nonetheless. Ah Well. I'll see how much I can move to the pit before I get distracted (it might not be a lot) -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 09:15 29 May GMT

Is there anyway to remove the captcha thing that pops up after every few pages. I was trying to be helpful and move a bunch of stuff over to the '''PIT OF ABANDONED STORIES''' (Great name btw) and after copying and pasting the names of the stories from 'All Adult Stories' to the 'Pit of Abandoned stories' page and I pressed save on the pit editing thing, fine, then I pressed save on the other page and suddenly I was presented with a captcha, filled in the captcha and then lost all the edits I had just made to the page. I think I've rectified the mistake but the annoyance, although minor, is not ideal. (Also I hope you don't mind me moving things to the pit, just felt like it needed a clean up.) -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 27 May 21:21 GMT

lol, no comment about the dick I left on Zenclair's page? Yeah, I actually should remove it...honestly, I read over some of his stuff, and found it rather demeaning, so I hinted at him that I thought he was a dick. I sort of feel bad about that now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:01, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, hidden stories gives me ideas. Wonder what someone would say if I wrote an entire CYoS story, but when they saw the text they saw nothing. It isn't until they drag the mouse that they realize the font is white, the story is there and complete, but no one can see it xD

<p title="Is it just me or does he seem to be...rather young...like a know it all teen?">Maybe have a second story purely in pop-up text (using the <nowiki><p title="Some words will pop up when you hover your house over the words of the paragraph">Something</p></nowiki></p>

Now I am getting better ideas for Context xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:32, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Ok mr.platypus. im gonna say that my story is gdeleted by me and I am finding people who can contribute to my story
in my place(In my city actually) and then I will rewrite it. I may not include the title or category cause im still finding people who can help me with this
Since then I will not add choices to the I am male thinggy. I might as well not reply to people including you too. I may not be online too
Then after that I will make it a looong story. ps im removing "low priority" discussions from my discussion. pps my story I cant publish it in public first
Because many will put things in that. I must say that putting my story in my talk page is a kind of privacy which means only selected people or people who know me can read it because I dont talk to "Low priority" people. IT STAYS HIDDEN WHILE I MAKE IT. MR PLATYPUS.

And a flower for Platypus! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:00, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
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About rampage: You know, the way it is set up, why doesn't someone create subcategories for the currently possessed character? Like <nowiki>[[Category: Rampage:Black Cat]]</nowiki>? Then, the victim pages, like [[Ashley Duruma]], could just be category pages with the text on the page put in as the text of the category page. Just a though xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:42, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, I have been trying to change the 6th grade girl in rampage to 12th grade girl, and I found something. The rancher part, with the horses and stuff, is making me feel rather nauseous... I think I will stop touching that story and let someone else change her to 12th grade...before I throw up... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

I don't want to sound picky but is there any way to get my pages that I wrote like that? I understand that there was a slight spelling error on one and I messed up use of the status bar, but I went on there this morning to correct the and the majority had been taken down. That was over an hours writing that I'm a little miffed about having to redo for a misunderstanding since it was my first time adding to one of these pages. It's very intimidating getting a message a few seconds after you step out and try to share something on here simply because you slightly misunderstood the code. I'm new, and I am sorry about it, but I can't be perfect on my first post. Did I do something else wrong or do you really take people's post's down without giving them a chance to edit mistakes, because of my time zone this was the first chance I had to log on and check them.
--[[User:JulietMai]]

Hey Platypus, wanted to ask you a question about the new rules. Now that we're not allowed to write about underage characters a lot of the old stories have been deleted. Some of them were my favorites that I worked hard on. Are they gone forever or are they archived somewhere? I would love to transcribe them to the allthefallen stories site instead. Thanks! (Bellajones)

lol, I have been with a guy who was "Well endowed". He hurt, alot. Wish I had known about that ring thing before that. I would have made him use it. Instead, we only had sex one time. I never let him touch me again. Oh well, wasn't a serious thing anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:14, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing out the mistake. I am seriously beginning to speak Chinglish. Think I even have a little bit of a Chinese-English accent now...

So, what do you think of my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]? I know they are making fun of people, but I am at least trying to keep them interesting enough that they are readable. Also, not sure about your thoughts on my [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. I had a bit of discussion with this with Teejay, but I also know it crosses from "Story" to "Bio", so not sure if I should even put it here. Your thoughts? Basically, just trying to let those who like my writing know a bit about who I am. At least, in the areas that most people on here would care about, given most people on here are mostly [[All Adult Stories]] oriented. Guess it is more of a "Hey, do you wonder why I write mostly erotica? Here you go" thing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Noted, I will apply to the others then, just wanted to check before I did too much. I will try to improve it, trying to figure out how to get them to line up, but at least it is another step towards a nicer, more graphic website for us all ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:38, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

I have tried to add a nice looking template to the family friendly section on the front page. If you do not like it, we can revert. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:55, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.

Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- [[User:Michaeltamayo96]]

Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]

So I hope you don't mind me making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] in my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Please check [[Special:Contributions/Njrsgg]]. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained "under age vagina", but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and
4th grade" and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

<nowiki>*</nowiki>Sniff<nowiki>*</nowiki> You haven't given me any options for [[The Exhibitionist]]. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

What the hell is "shotgun-wielding" supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: "Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup." Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Please check [[Special:Contributions/Sup]]. Teejay reversed the damage. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)

Added a [[Rules]] page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, it's [[User:Vgybhu]]. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).

I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]

Um, oops, I kind of got them mixed up its been a while since I wrote something. Did you edit it if not I will. And next time I will check my work more thoroughly.
[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]

Sorry, think I overwhelmed the poor guy :o I was trying to help, not intimidate xD (hint check histories...)

Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it.
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.

I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not.
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.

Hi Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]]. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user [[AllyG]] was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on [[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]?? Thanks, [[Whining Winnie]] Happy Easter Everyone!

The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know.
[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so "immature"
. I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone
like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration
testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of
committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your
comment very rude and I was emotionally crushed than you would delete my pages because you think
I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

o.O What happened? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

When you come back, you might want to check [[Special:Contributions/Darth_nox]]. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of "too many conflicting changes"...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So
can you please keep to your self. [[H0rniWr1t3r]]

Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. [[User:LilBitOfSpace|LilBitOfSpace]]

Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? [[Whining Winnie]]

Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( [[Whining Winnie]]

It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? [[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016

Don't forget that [[CLM]] is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016

[[Whining Winnie]]

Could you move [[CLM]] to the [[Adult Stories]] section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? [[Whining Winnie]] 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)

Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though.
[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 1:35 Central Time 1/21/2016

Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]]

Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]] 31/01/16

Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore? [[User:Fort|Fort]] 05/02/16

Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --[[User:Fort|Fort]] 5 February 2016

I apologize for my "obsession with colons" when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... [[User:Shirasade|Shirasade]] 20/02/16

Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 23/02/16

Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 24/02/16

I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a [[Talk:Continue fucking Kate|specific story talk page]]) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the "Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you" choice in "Darkness". I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the "I'm Your Brother" choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - [[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]]

I'm going to finish the above section in "Idea Pitches" in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is "Lords". It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found "Aristocrats" to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that "feeling up" choice in "Darkness". Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So to answer your question about[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a "dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, "dating sim" would be the closest one thought "slice of life" is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 8 April 2016

Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the "Darkness" choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 10 April 2016

Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --[[QueenPrisme]] 7:43pm April 13, 2016

Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 1:44am April 16, 2016

Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 19 April 2016

Would you happen to be able to tell me if [[Leaving]] is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

For the record, what is the page maximum for the pit? The main page says 10 pages but iirc I've seen stories in the pit with more than 10 pages. Again I know it takes a while for something to drop into the pit, and I know I can get it back out again, but I thought I'd ask.

I get paranoid cause I have a habit of unintentionally abandoning things and I'm still mildly worried about losing internet access soon. I'd like to get anything new I start past the point where it could fall into the pit just in case. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:25, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

So, I'm trying to include an image in something, but the only way to do this is to link to an image outside of the wiki. Which would be fine, if it weren't for the fact that apparently said images are also under the rule of having to wait 20 minutes. Which again would be fine, if it didn't count hitting preview?

So if I want to see how it looks on the page I need to wait 20 minutes before I can see the changes I've made? And then, from past experience, if I try to submit the page I have to fill out a captcha and wait another 20 minutes before I can submit the captcha, by which point my session (every time I tried this at least) has been terminated?

Is there something I'm missing here? Are other people able to include links and images just fine and somehow I'm just completely screwing this up? Like I'm not trying to be ungrateful and I know you probably don't have control over any of this I'm just confused and I'm starting to get frustrated with the thing I'm trying to work on. Sorry for bothering you. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 22:23, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

Hey, sorry about not seeing your messages earlier! I'll remember to categorize my pages. Sorry about that! -- [[User:Kal]] 23:11, 2 August 2016 (EST)

Hey, could you delete the following page of my story? The writing is awful, misspellings everywhere, horrible punctuation, and there aren't even any options. I tried, but I couldn't salvage it. Thanks.
http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Make_her_the_first_whore_of_the_tribe,_all_are_welcome_to_fuck_her_and_impregnated_her
[[User:Kanin452]] 23 October 2016

Sorry, Platypus. I thought I was punctuating where needed, but I'll proofread some of the things I've posted. I am an ESL student and trying to get better by writing short stories, and I suppose the short quips for Rampage and Smutty are ideal for this. I immensely enjoy both those and try to contribute where I can. But if I'm just a terrible writer getting in the way of progress, I'll just be content reading what others have posted. Thank you for the opportunity though. Cheers. - [[User:Wtfismook]]

== How to make my own story without disturbing the peace ==

I just wana know how to make my own story

1. There is a sidebar to the left

2. The second divider from the top remarks "search"

3. Enter through the '''input box''' the '''name of the story you'd like to create'''

4.Once on this page anew: note the tabs at the top of the page.

5.Impress the button that is prescribed the word '''create'''.

6.''On formatting:'' There are buttons above the page to change the text and to '''include links to the next part of the story; including links to the next part of the story is vital for any interactive story'''. Create a link by typing in the name of the action the user may perform I.e <nowiki>[[Action]]</nowiki>. Replace "action" with what you want the character to be able to do.

7.If anything went wrong: '''Platypus the site moderator is always able to revert the changes'''

8.'''At the bottom of each page in your story: write down the story's category like this:
<nowiki>[[Category:Story name]]</nowiki>
At "Story name" put the name of your story.

9. If all goes according to plan, your page should be formatted like so:

Solemn ipsut Armet

Do you:

<nowiki>*[[Go to the left]]

*[[Go to the right]]

[[Category:Story]]</nowiki>

If your page looks like that: it should function rather blithe.

You got the chips,
[[User:Heathin|Heathin]] 19:52, 9 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I'm fairly new to this site and all I can say is wow. This is probably my favorite place on the internet. However, being a wiki means it can be edited by users and that's even more amazing. Again, just wow. Now, taking into consideration I'm a writer myself and love being part of group efforts. I would like to know if the contributions I've made will be unsatisfactory. I would like to know what the thoughts are on the pages I've created [http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Follow_her_silently Here], [http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Call_Neria%27s_bluff Here], [http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Continue_staring_at_the_lovely_butt And Here]. I have no problem if the moderator or another user edits the works. I mean that's kind of the point of a wiki. However, I'd like to know if i would be better off creating my own works from scratch.
Thank you for your time. Kreaturewithak

Hey Platypus, do you know what's up with the website? Some time ago it had been out for a few weeks, then once back, it keeps fluctuating between slow, functional, and offline. Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darth Malcolm|Darth Malcolm]] 11:26, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. I still don't know how to use it properly but I'm learning a bit. I'll leave Category now :) If you want tell me something about let me know. Thanks mate. --[[User:Mind|Mind]] 00:12, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

He said you have to beat it yourself.

Mind — Sun, 13 Nov 2016 23:03:08 GMT

Mind:

He said you need make it yourself but you can barely move. You got your ass up face down. You can't move either way a little, you try too but it just don't work and again your shirt go up showing off your butt completely, you are not even sure if your dad can't see your underboobs right now.

You just hear holy moly dropping his newspaper and standing up.

Then :

*[[You hear a zipper]]
*[[He take another cup of coffee and sits back ]]
*[[He goes up to his office room ]]

[[Category: A very interactive story]]