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Maniac the Rapper — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 22:40:45 GMT

Maniac the Rapper:

Older discussions started before 2010 have been moved to an [[Talk:Main Page/Archive1|archive page]].

== How to start my own ==
I'm new and I have no idea how to start my own story.

==HELP==
Could some people please help me write *[[time machine]]

==Rules?==
Hi, I'm fairly new here. I'm wondering, is there anything that is not allowed in stories/on site? I just don't want my stuff deleted. -Creat0r

==Just some trouble==

Hi there, I've been writing a C.Y.O.A. and I'm having the problem that I've set three options on my first page; Male, Female and Other. These redirect to different C.Y.O.A.s and it is rather irritating that when I try to chose the male option to advance it comes up with a selection of emo guys that I can use, from a different Catagory. Any help would be appreciated as I will not be able to advance in my writings until it is fixed.

Thank you in advance
--Xuan Tian Shang Ti

Xuan, I had that same problem on my new CYAO. This happens because someone else is already using this as a category name, so it will keep redirecting to their story. It helps to use your story's name in front of the choices or to put a specific phrasingthat noone has used yet.
For instance say your story is Smurfs in Ireland and you want to give people the choice of being a male or female. You could put Smurfs In Ireland: Male, or I want to be a male smurf
Hope this helps for anyone else with the same problem.

==Main Page Stories==

What constitutes a story being on the main page? It seems like people just throw theirs on there. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 07:10, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

We're trying to only include a small, representative sampling on the Main Page. Yes, some people are throwing theirs on there, but those stories are being thrown back off when they're spotted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

By my understanding, the story has to be of a quality that it can be 'considered' for a feature, not necessarily featured, but close or at the level. By the way, great to see someone took the initiative and did this, the site really needed some tidying. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 13 September 2012

Maybe we should make specific guidelines? Must be this many pages, this quality of writing, etc. etc. [[User:Theotherguy|Theotherguy]] 23:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Well I would suggest at least having the minimum amount of pages be set to 50, besides the 'Quizzes and Challenges' Section. I'm not sure about the quality of writing, as long as it is understandable and entertaining. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] September 14 2012

== Main Page and Its Length ==

I'm sure most of you here have noticed this already, but I'd like to just point out. The Main Page is ever growing in it's length. That's great news! That means more adventures, but it comes at a price. The overall size of the page. I thought I'd do a little experiment and see how long it would take me to scroll down from the top to the very bottom. It took me more than 10 seconds. That is a ridiculously long time. Only fine for social media sites such as Facebook.

What I'm suggesting is that we need to find a way to successfully organize the Main Page to which the size of it is significantly less, while not having it link off into other pages. Such as replacing the sections with say Collapsible Tables [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Collapsing], so then you can choose which sections you want to look at, perhaps even placing sub tables on top of that.

Heyoeveryone 12:02, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

It's certainly worth looking into. But bear in mind that newbies constantly screw up even the limited formatting currently on the Main Page. Any further complications to the coding will mean even more intense monitoring and reverting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:56, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

Ahh, true. I barely know coding myself, but new people constantly make stories, and sooner or later, mistakes will be made, and those beloved tables will be disfigured. It is possible though, and if someone were able just to implement this idea, it will do wonders for this site. I don't go on often, but when I do, I always notice how long the Main Page is.

So, '''IF''' anyone is willing to do this, then by all means, go ahead, it will do wonders for the site, I suggest you ask Platypus though.

--Heyoeveryone 06:05, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

== YouTube Idea ==

I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). I would like to try it with a shorter story first. If you have a short, well written CYOA story and are interested in sharing your story on YouTube, please let me know your username, the name of the story, and that I have your permission to record it and put it on YouTube (right below this post) . I would also be happy to hear any input on this idea.
-AlexCW

I know a lot about doing that kind of thing, it would be really great if it was animated or something like that. If you need any help working with Youtube CYOAs I can certainly help. I can also do (some) animation if you want. -Creat0r

I think this would be awesome! Guys I don't know how long this thread was posted but I would like to continue it. You know in the you adventure stories or something like that you flip to a page to continue? Well, maybe it should be one or two long videos that you pause at choices and the choices have the time you skip to. I might make a video like this on my YouTube! Awesome idea.
- [[KateFleet]] [[ YouTube : FleetGaming ]]

== Family-Friendly Section, Not Family-Friendly ==

I recently noticed that about 10 new stories were made, and each of them looked like they should be in the 10+ section. How is stealing a car family friendly? Or discouraging school? Seriously, If I see one more story like that being made, it's going straight to PG-13.
Note: I am 11 years old, and I don't even think that those stories are appropriate for my age!--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:05, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Adenster, family-friendly is generally a relative term. While I dont know the particular stories you speak of, discouraging school or stealing a car CAN be used in a family setting IE. one character has a Huckleberry Finn-ish tendency to skip school and the car can be used as a life lesson piece. Terms like Family-Friendly vary greatly from person to person and are entirely dependent on perception. For example some people believe in spanking their children whilst others dont. One side would consider it "Family-Friendly" whilst the other group would not. Generally if things such as car-stealing or such occur it can be acceptable if put in perspective and used in the context of the story. --[[User:BFEL|BFEL]] 12:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

== New Category ==
I just had a really great idea, maybe a new category can be made for just new stories, called Not Rated Yet, or whatever. Then, where the story is placed can be decided by somebody, so that sections like "Family-Friendly" are not so populated with stories that aren't appropriate.--[[User:903860|The Adenster]] 01:23, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Your points are well taken, and this new group of writers is not writing family friendly material, but I'm somewhat averse to creating a Not Yet Rated section for ''somebody'' to rate, because there's only one sysop active on this site. My time is limited and I like to get in a little bit of time to work on my own writing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I myself would be interested in assisting with this, Platypus. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:28, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe ratings could be incoporated into reviews. That way unrated stories can move and get a review simultaneously.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 10:52, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

== About story page links ==
I'm kind of a perfectionist and it just hurts my eyes to see the story page links not formatted properly. It's either because people are too lazy or just not well enough informed on how to create proper links. Most pages have something like this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name-Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name-Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name: Page Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name: Page Name]]
And so on. What I'd like to see is this:
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Page Name|Display Name]]
* <nowiki>[[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]</nowiki> = [[Story Name/Character: Page Name|Display Name]]
The '''Display Name''' field makes the link show as that to the user, while still linking to the '''Story Name/Page Name''' page. This kind of naming makes the story pages look a lot better while still keeping the pages properly sorted out. I think this is explained on the main page, but it seems a bit unclear. Maybe it could be improved? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 16:00, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

It is discussed in the [[Tutorial]], but sometimes it seems as if some of the people who want to write here aren't capable of reading.

Mostly, I like to see consistency within any given story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:16, 25 February 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way to get the Category page to display just the page names? In my story, I use the <nowiki>[[Story Name/Page Name|Page Name]]</nowiki> idiom, but the category page shows every page with the story prefix and they are all grouped under the same header. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 8:50, 5 July 2010

I don't know a way of changing the way the page names are displayed on the Category page, but if you categorize each individual page as <nowiki>[[Category:Story Name|Page Name]] </nowiki>, then the Category page will aphabetize based on whatever you tell it the Page Name is, regardless of what the page name displays as. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I added a section to [[Tutorial/sleep|the tutorial]] about using the sort key in the category field. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 23:40, 10 Aug 2010

== problems with the search bar ==

Hello, I just want to say that there seems to be a problem with the search, whenever I type a requist in it comes back with no results, I tried using the report a bug feature but the appears to be broken. --[[User:Tricrotic|Tricrotic]] 11:57, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the search bar only works when you type in the exact title of a story. Granted, there is a place where you search for pages that begin with _______, that should be the automatic search engine. I don't know much about programming, but it really shouldn't be too hard to move a program that's already been created, just to a different, more accessible place. - veri_disquo (2014)

==New Story==

If you guys remember me from way back, I used to use this site a lot, then suddenly stopped. Well, I'm back (again), and I've started a new story titled [[Cell]]. I look forward to the reviews of this CYOA story, as it goes through the process of Evolution.--[[User:blablob|blablob]]

Are you still working on it? --[[user:blamblegam]]

==Questions==
Are the stories in here copyrighted in anyway? If I want to feature one on a website, can do I need permission of the author or is it public material?

The stories here aren't copyrighted. But it might be polite to mention your intentions to the author beforehand. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:53, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

If the story is in the Pit, can you edit the story to be in a different category? Because, for this story that I have been editing, I wish to change the maturity since its hard to keep track of every link you put. The Lost City of Atlantice is the story i had been working on for a bit and some of the tags that were created aren't really in the category. Plus, some of my ideas fit into other categories. What should I do? --[[User:sayrppoetry/sayrppoetry]]

If you retrieve a story from the Pit, feel free to up its maturity level as needed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

== Status functionality? ==

The tutorial mentions status functionality as if you are able to use variables, but there was no information on how to perform operations on variables (You know, add, subtract, that sort of thing.) I looked for an article on the issue but didn't find any. Is this functionality available?

No. You can not perform operations on the variables. You have to do any adding and subtracting manually on the next page, and if you want options where you have different values for the variables, you have to create multiple paths. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 19:27, 2 April 2010 (UTC)

BTW: I was wanting to experiment with status stuff, so I ended up creating a template page for the [[sandbox]]. Since you can't delete pages, and this might be useful, I replaced it with a basic status bar and left it in the sandbox. I hope others find it useful. --[[User:Shiine|Shiine]] 04:27, 19 March 2011 (UTC)

== New here, and want to know a few things about editting. ==

I joined today and want to know if it is okay for me to go through stories fixing some grammar mistakes and spelling. (not that I a grammar freak or saying I am perfect myself.) Some stories i looked at had a dozen mistakes a page and that is just bad for the site. See [[DUDE WHERES MY CAR]], I fixed the main page, leaving in the repitive sentence structure because I was unsure if I should change that. The next pages I looked at were equally plagued. Is there a way to catergorize stories as "being a pain to read because of mistakes"? I did not mean chnaging content, simplly fixing sloppy mistakes. To be sure, I am not planning on reading every story on here to be an English jainitor. I just wondered whose job these things were, Thanks. ~[[User:RandyRift|RandyRift]]

I’m not an admin or anything but…

There is no real problem or rule against editing pages, especially grammar correction. If you want to fix stories then that’s alright. Hell, even adding new stuff to the story is fine in most cases.
The problem with this site is that there are some users who create crappy stories with five pages that have no real plot or proper grammar. People work on their story for a day then leave resulting in many poor stories with no real purpose. So if you want to fix stories then go for it.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Unfortunately, there are far too many ungrammatical writers out there for me to repair all the things they post. I am the only active sysop here, and I don't object to anyone trying fix grammar around the site. We were recently invaded by a Canadian school whose students wanted the thrill of posting on the web despite the fact that many of them had a poor grasp of English. Their teacher's help made many things worse, not better. But since they seem to have left, many of their stories are going to be getting moved to the Pit of Abandonned Stories soon. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:21, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

I have another question, why is it that on the category page, (for my story) when I am logged in I see 90 pages, but when not logged in I see 78? (the page lists only that many.) ~[[User:RandyRift|RR]] 3 April 2010

== Pictures and Copyrights ==
I'm not very familiar with finding out what kind of copyrights some picture has on the web and what pictures are free to be posted here, for example, and what pictures may be freely copied and even uploaded here to be displayed. So far I've only been directly linking to pictures on Wikipedia (in very rare occasions anyway), but that's very limited. Anyone know better? --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 22:56, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

The safest thing is to upload your own pictures to photobucket or something. However, there are several free stock photo and picture sites out there. My favorite is http://www.sxc.hu/ . However, make sure you read the licenses for the photos before using them or linking to them! --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 00:42, 28 April 2010 (UTC)

There's thousands of free stock photos on [http://www.dreamstime.com/free-photos Dreamstime.com]. Just resize them to a width of 800 for web use. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra. ==

If you like the story idea, please help create a scenario for Myra. Remember, do not edit or add onto anyone else's scenario. Create a small one of your own. It doesn't have to be deep! Thank you for contributing!

She ought to wear a funky fruit hat. She's 12, was living with her mother in Maine, dad's a deadbeat, moves to Oklahoma for no apparent reason, uncovers alien conspiracy there. Turns out her mother's been replaced by an evil space automaton. She must team up with her drunken embarassment of a father to rescue her from a Dick Dastardly-esque villain who brought the aliens here with a magical voodoo portal, and then find a way to close said portal. Along the way, she learns important lessons regarding metaphysical idealism and beef Wellington. --[[User:Nalanhata|Nalanhata]], June 18

== Moving a page ==

Is there a way to move pages? I've looking over a story with terrible spelling problems and [[Tour_the_town|this page]] links to [[A little Tatoo paurlor]] which should be fixed. -- [[User:TheRick|TheRick]] 05:26, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

The page-moving function had to be disabled due to malicious vandals. However, what you can do is copy the text in the mis-named page, blank that page, edit the page with the mis-named link, and paste the text onto a new page with the correctly spelled name. Then I'll delete the blanked page. I'm the only one who can do deletions. And I do appreciate anyone who actually wants to do some work tidying up the place. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

== Old Geezer ==

I'm still having problems with editing Lady Helsing as it says Permission error" when l try to
edit it.

First of all make sure you are logged in... next... if you have been on a single page writing for too long it will automatically log you out so right click copy anything you have if you need to re-log in --[[User:Mezzo|Mezzo]] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Tags? ==
What are the tags supposed to do? Because the ones that are for this one are 'porn or death'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone]]

== Severe lag of site? ==

Anybody else getting loadtimes of upwards of 5 minutes (multiple refreshes included) for even the shortest of pages?

If so, I think I know why. Remember, this is only a guess (although it's one with backup). I noticed my browser (Chrome) seems to hang on loading the info from TagNimbus, so I tried to visit the TagNimbus site. It seems to be down or dead, and a look at www.IsUp.me told me the whole site seemed to be down for others, too.

If it's down, any chance of getting in touch with the owner to restore it? Otherwise, if TagNimbus is finall- I mean unfortunately dead, can we just remove the thing anyways? It didn't seem to change anything and was abused to tag pages with irrelevant tags...

But hey, this is all the rambling of one author who just hopes to get the site working so he can get back to writing the gore story he was in the middle of... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:27, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

==Hello==

Hello. Just wanted to say this site looks really cool and interesting, I really look forward to helping stories along or even starting some once I get the hang of it.

I should know though, are there any particular rules or anything that aren't immediately obvious or that are mentioned? And where should I start? Any advice for a newbie would be very appreciated. The site is a little unnecessarily complicated.

Heyo whoever you are! Best thing you should start on is probably continuing on stories that have been started, but after 10 pages, the author has quit. If you really want to begin a new story, i suggest planning it before you actually type it all out. In your plan you should have: the main storyline, the seperate endings, and of course the characters who are going to be in the story.
-- [[User:Heyoeveryone]] 3 September 2011

You should try mind mapping. It's a great way to make branching plot lines. -- [[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

It's bad to add to the number of all the carcasses you can see on the Main Page. Save those, or if you prefer, get the more severely rotting ones that we lumped in the Pit to decompose. Unfortunately, stories are hard to get rid of, so save them from non-authorship before it's too late. It also makes it easier, since you'd agree with the storyline from the beginning, whereas others end up left behind because there's a lock on the whole thing. For Example, everything might lead to a standstill after everything directs to a page. The rest of the plot is a mystery and starts rotting. Simply because the author him/her self doesn't know how it ends.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:58, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

== Template Appearance Problem ==

The templates for my story [[War Pigs]] are coming out all wrong in IE 9, but they look fine in Firefox. Can anybody explain why? It would be greatly appreciated. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 03:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The problem is probably that it's IE9. IE9 enjoys shitting all over everything nice looking on the internet. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 15:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

== The whole "Anon" thing. ==

Anyone else amused by this? Three brief little "attacks" (if you even want to call them that) with an empty threat? I dunno, I guess it just struck me as pathetic and funny. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 06:26, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Yea a real dumbass, but thank God he didn´t write any pages, those would have been real '''attacks''' on the site! :)

[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Pictures ==

I noticed that there was an embedded image button. Being a photo editor, such as myself, I jumped at the idea of adding a picture where they could be used. Unfortunately it says that file adding is disabled. I looked through the General Discussion and i realize that you have had "attacks" in the past but is there a chance that they could be re-added?

--[[User:Aegisofawakening|Aegisofawakening]] 01:58, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

Actually, file adding was disabled due to server-size limitations, not due to attacks. But images can still be displayed on pages, even if the file itself cannot become part of this site. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

== Thanks! ==

I'd just like to say thank you so much!!! Why? Well, a few years back i wrote a few tales ([[Girlngirl High]], [[All Alone]] and [[Teehee!]]). I thought, no way were these stories would ever become hits, all of them are less than 100 pages! And i never finished any of them. So i decided to quit the site for 2 years. Today, i decided to go on and look at my stories, see how they've turned out.

I looked down to find out that '''every story i've made has gotten over 1000 views on the first page, with the most being 20 000!!!''' I was just amazed at how my stories were this popular. So i'd just like to say THANK YOU!! I've given the job of continuing the stories to my friend [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]]. He's a very good friend of mine and he said he'd love to take over. So once again, thank you so much for your support throughout these past 2 years. Also thanks to those people who added pages onto my stories. If you'd like to work on these stories, just ask Heyo for permission and he should promptly allow you.

Am i coming back? Nah. Well maybe. --[[User:Unkowhero23]]

Actually, you don't need my permission. Just make sure that you don't have many grammatical and spelling errors, and that the pages aren't just one or two sentences. Those are terrible, and with the load times of the site sometimes, you want something more than just that.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 5th September, 2011

== Spam ==

What's with all the random advertisements lately? It's actually more of a nuisance than those Anon people a little while back. Is this site really such a big deal that people need to go around and post all these ads? - [[User:Jamesparker|Jamesparker]], September 23, 2011

Ad's? Where? Link them here. It's best if you name and shame them, and so that their account will be quickly deleted off the site. And I guess it is such a big deal. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 9 October 2011

== Mature, Adult, Bad Taste ==

A suggestion, if you will. Maybe the mature, adult and bad taste story listings should be collectively put on a sub-page separate from the main page? On reflection, maybe only the Adult and Bad Taste ones. Those wishing to see those stories wouldn't have any trouble finding them by following the link (from the main page), and it'd render the main page free of offensive language and titles. Everybody wins? What'd'y'all think? [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 21:12, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

I have been giving the idea consideration, especially as some people would prefer not to be exposed to even the titles of some of the Adult stories. And it would help reduce the sheer size of the Main Page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Despite my own story preferences, I agree. I always thought it odd (and not a little family-unfriendly) to give almost equal weight to kiddie stories as well as possibly very kinky adult stuff. As long as you can always go directly to any given page (through a browser bookmark perhaps) I actually suggest adult stories are kept behind a disclaimer screen of some sort.
[[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 19:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, it can broaden the areas for the Adult Stories and free the titles. Then there could be another sub-group for the mild content.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:52, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

That is a great idea you have there, and it would be nice to see this happen. However there is a huge flaw I see in this. Recent Changes would still show everything be it a kids story about a kitten, or an adult story about bestiality.--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 07:04, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

I have a "Mature" (R rated) story I am writing. I am considering adding a storyline in which the character gets raped offscreen. Is that too intense for "Mature"? Should I post the beginning of the storyline, and the page that links to it, here to be vetted? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]]

I don't think an offscreen rape would necessarily need to be put in the Adult section. At least the Mature section, certainly. It depends on how much detail you put in. You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the storyline, simply because rape is a special kind of evil and will break (or make) the story for some readers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:34, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

== Feedback For My Stories ==

Hi! I'm new here, and I'm starting my first story, [[Transformers: War Between Two Worlds]]. I wasn't sure if it should go in the Family Friendly Section or the PG13 Section, so I put it in Family Friendly. If you have any feedback, read what I have so far and post it here. This story will take me a while, but as soon as I'm done, I'll get started on another one. Also, would anyone like to team up with me on a story? I'm guessing most of you will think I'm crazy, but it's good to check. TEAMWORK RULES! I'm not that smart when it comes to wiki editing, so if there's a place where this page would better fit, then please tell me here.

Feedback:

New Ideas (for my future stories):

Edit Requests (If you would like permission to edit one of my stories, put your username here):

-[[User:AwesomeSauce2233475]]

Sorry about putting my page in the wrong place, Platypus. How do you reach the user page?

== Finding A Story ==

Hi everyone.

Just a quickie.

1) Is there a story that focuses on something like a haunted house/mansion/what-have-you somewhere? I've skimmed the titles but nothing popped out at me and I've been reading here and there but even though most stories seem to only be like 5-10 pages the sheer number of them means I haven't had a chance to check them all and was hoping someone who'd been around longer knew of one and could point me in the right direction?

-- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

: I don't know of such a story, but this brings up an issue I've been meaning to: it's awfully hard for someone to find anything they might be looking for, if they haven't seen it already. I'm wondering if the allowance of short synopses has been discussed before, or perhaps if we might create categories like [[:Category:Stories that feature supernatural characters|stories that feature supernatural characters]] or [[:Category:Stories that take place in haunted houses|stories that take place in haunted houses]].

: --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 03:39, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

Well, [[Madman's Mansion]] isn't haunted but its the best one I know of that involves a proper what-have-you-somewhere and decent story length and grammar and punctustion and so on.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 14:49, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, how about this: when you enter the main page, there is a link to each level of the stories, then, you can continue on into sub-groups of Ghost, Sci-Fi, Quest, Tragedy, or something like that.--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:55, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

== How to know people are watching? ==

I'm new here, and recently finished a short story.

But how do I tell if anyone is seeing it? Is there a place on this website to get feedback on the stories?

Thanks

You can see at the bottom of each page how many times the page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:16, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Platypus, is this still true? I have looked at my page, and do not see a number for how many times it has been accessed. Or was this removed? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:20, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes, unfortunately, this isn't currently active. It was always nice to know how often a page has been accessed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:38, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

== Something wrong? ==

Hi, I'm new here. Saw this site and thought it was pretty interesting, and gave it a try. It's fun and I'm currently working on a story. However, I'm getting a feeling I am doing something wrong with creating stories and editing them. If I am doing anything wrong so far, which I am sure I am, please tell me, okays?

-Bluedragon

So far, so good. I see nothing wrong with what you're doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

== A page making/organizing resource ==

First of all, I don't want to sound like a spammer or advertiser, but since I can code, I thought I'd make a resource for everyone who's interested.
 
 
I've noticed when making games on here, that it's difficult to keep track of all your pages, and it's still hard to make them even with a mind map. So I made a rather unconventional, very small piece of software using Game Maker. Despite its not too standard interface. It provides an easy and efficient way to organize your pages. You can type and paste your page content into it and then automatically generate the pages in the correct format for this site.
 
 
I in no way claim that I have ownership rights to the site. I only want to provide a resource for its users in order to make the creating process easier.
 
 
The file is only 2.3MB.
Here's the download link(vs1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/g5M6PSP2/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]
 
 
 
'''New Features:'''
 
Made page recognition easier by showing the link names instead of the page names for the disabled parallel fields of each choice.
 
Added a ''Clear'' button to the description area.
 
Added a feature where the active field is always highlighted.
 
Added tab key support for faster navigation between fields.
 
'''Bug Fixes:'''
 
All of the proper link names show up in the generated code files. Before, all link names had been choice1's.
 
The disabled child name(now link) fields no longer show a value of 0 when going to one page and back again.
 
 
New download link(vs1.1) - [http://www.4shared.com/file/KF270foj/CYOA_-_Page_Organizer11.html]
--[[User:ImmortalDreams|ImmortalDreams]]

== Interaction ==

How can I communicate with other users of this site, so that we can conspire and work together. I am currently working on a story that is just to much for one person to handle, but I don't understand how I can talk with "helpers". I just don't get it!-- [[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]]

You can click on a user's name to view their profile page, then click on the "discussion" tab to see their talk page. If you post something on their talk page, they'll see an alert at the top of their screen. Hopefully, they'll click the alert, go to their talk page, and then write something back on your page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:06, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

i think that there needs to be a few changes to this site. A chatroom. It would be very easy to find one online and embed it in a page. Also I believe there should be category pages where all the sci fi pages are in one place with links to it. Maybe on the mainpage, instead of links to very story, have links to the category listing. Finally I believe there should be something to let us rate pages (as in 4 out of 5 stars).
-[[User:Gartonia|Gartonia]]

The interaction between users does seem unusual (profile page->discussion...) There can be a better way surely?
Also, clicking on a user's name is not easy. For one, the pages don't have a author's link. Also, the person who wrote the last page in a story might be different from the author of the current page.
A link to the profile of the creator should be there on each page so one can easily click on it...
-[[User:BenchWarmer|BenchWarmer]]

A link to the profile of the creator ''is'' there on each page. Just click the History tab. There's a link to the profile page and to the discussion page of every user who's edited the page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:43, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Salutations. ==

Hello, I am one of the new guys here. I just wanted to know if there are any rules that I must adhere to on this site. I mainly made an account just so that I was able to continue on a story that I saw on this website. Well anyway, If you can notify me, please do, Thank You.

== Linking to existing pages ==

How does one link back to an existing page, in effect creating a loop?

The same way you create a link to a new page: By enclosing the name of the page in square brackets. For example: <nowiki> [[Main Page]] </nowiki> links you to [[Main Page]].--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:49, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

== Featured Story - A Dead Thing? ==

We're 8 days from the 8 month anniversary of the last time the Featured Story section was last updated. Who was last in charge of updating that? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 07:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

The idea was proposed by [[User: Occono|Occono]], last seen in 2009. I said then that I had no objections to such a feature, but no intention of participating in it. Anyone volunteering? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

As I understood it, anyone could edit the featured story section, no one in particular was responsible for keeping it reguarly updated. That being said, 8 months is an alarmingly long time. If we´re looking for a story right now to put on there "Megan" (which is already nominated) could do. Although that one might be a bit to... bloody disturbing, to be put there. Another one might be Battle Royal, which has a lot of pages. (Wait, did I just recomend Battle Royal over something else beacuse it was so bloody disturbing? Scary thought!).

Overall though, personally I´d want to put a quality story on the featured page. And the simply fact is that there arn´t enough quality storys on this site to maintain a one or two months switch around in my opinion. Also, personally, I´d also not like to see adulth storys be put there, which decresses the story-pool significantly.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

Woah, seriously? 8 months? That is amazing. Nevertheless it's a great thing that someone actually bothered to change it. It may be my story, but from 2012 onwards, I was surprised that [[Remember]] was still featured. Congratulations to TheElderOnes. It's been a long time coming, and now you've finally gotten the story featured. Nice.

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 30/06/2012

== Compressing the main page ==

I started compressing the main page into smaller sortable tables. I just finished the family friendly section, feel free to take over for me if you would like to do the next sections

The goal for all of these tables is to keep the list around 10 items, and then have a more stories page for each section. The simpest way to do this is to choose all stories that have 50+ pages. If that leads to too many stories, then make it 100+...

If a story is well written, and more than 50 pages, it should trump a story with more pages.

Also, please bring the adult section back to the home page with the top items from it. That is the most active section of the site, and it generates a lot of traffic from google.

--[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] 12:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

== Separate Wiki for Adult Content ==

I don't really like that adult stores are so easily accessible for people that come here looking for non-adult material, such as that they'll pop up as random pages, or can be seen in "Recent Changes". Is there any interest in branching Adult content off in to a separate Wiki, and maybe including a link the "Adult Section" in the side-bar? --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 19:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Unfortunately, the majority of the traffic here is looking for the Adult Content. Removing it or trying to bury it in some way would most likely kill off the non-adult content. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:16, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

How extreme is the majority? As far as I can tell, this is the only active site to make free interactive adult stories, so if there's that much interest I may try to make my own. --[[User:Holvard|Holvard]] 20:56, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

Would it take a lot of work to put the adult content behind a disclaimer screen? As long as one had to go through the main page to access the adult site, it might actually ''increase'' traffic to the non-adult content, because people would feel better about, for instance, recommending it to children. People might feel more comfortable with the site in general if they felt sure that reasonable precautions were being taken. --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

It could work through account settings, and then it being disabled by default, and the option for parental controls. Maybe even an option (that would have to be enabled through account settings) so that only one account could be tied to that IP, and these settings, after being enabled, could be disabled via a parental control password that is set up with the account, that could be different than the account's login password.
[[User:UZ9|UZ9]] 21:52, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

== Issues With the Site ==
I've noticed that Create Your Own Adventure pages tend to load slowly, and the last week or so, accessing the site at all has been touch and go. Is there any particular reason for this? Is there anything you or we can do about it, or do we just need to be patient? --[[User:LaedyRose|LaedyRose]] 9 April 2012

== Lag of site and page load limits ==
Is there a problem? When I first started contributing to this site it could sometimes be very slow, but I put that down to traffic at certain times of the day. In the morning in GMT (when the Americas are asleep!) it was usually pretty good. Now, though, I find it's terribly slow whenever I use it, often taking upwards of thirty seconds to a minute to load a single page. What's more, not infrequently it doesn't load the page at all and I instead get a "Uncached page load rate limit reached -> 3 per second;" message. After a couple of those (even if I've only been on the site for ~5 minutes and loaded three or four pages) I get a request to complete a Captcha: "Page loads per hour hit - limit 60. Reset limit by filling in this captcha:"

It seems that it's trying to load pages multiple times when I access them? That might explain why it's being so slow, too.

*There is indeed a problem: link spammers. RobKohr has had to deliberately slow down site responsiveness and include that captcha in the hopes of frustrating the spambots so maybe they'll go away and leave us alone. The messages you're seeing aren't because ''you're'' trying to load more than 3 pages per second. It's because the bots are trying to load far, far more pages than that per second. Do I like this solution? Not really. It's frustrating. Can anyone else think of a better one? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:14, 13 May 2013 (UTC)

**You guys could require to creat a acc that is activaded by admin/mod to view the content, the login page should always come if a cookie isnt existing and the page itself could be a blank site with minmal text and a field to look in.

***You wouldn't even need to create an account to ''view'' the content (that would be counter-intuitive, since you want people to see it) but just to ''edit'' it. I know that's probably far from ideal because the whole point is the Wiki is free for everyone, but at the same time if it's being incredibly slow because of spambots then maybe it's a necessary step?

: Is there some reason that the normal solutions (for MediaWiki, let's say the Phalanx extension) can't be applied here? Spam is a rather indiscriminate reality of the Internet that sites are usually protected against without crippling themselves and hoping spambots will get frustrated and go away. They won't, but the users will. --[[User:KC Riley|KC Riley]] 13:06, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

== Linking pictures problems and other errors ==

Hello. In my various writing I try to place links to pictures to enhance the story experience. I've been doing this for months and months but lately the site has been completely blocking my ability to place links. The first time I try to post a page with a link it will force me to type in two words to verify that I'm human. After I type in the correct words it will attempt to post the page again but instead I will get this message: "You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period". Because of the human verification process I am completely unable to post links. I am fine with only posting one link per twenty minutes but the site has negated any way of posting links as the verification process eats up my one post per twenty minutes. As someone who uses the site often this is a major inconvenience.

Furthermore, if the human verification process doesn't stop my attempts at posting a link all the million of other error messages will. Errors such as site load limits or pages per hour or some such. These errors are never correct and seemingly random. I can stomach these messages and plod forward but they are a complete hindrance when it comes to posting links.

Please give me some assistance in this regard, I do not want to lose the function of placing links in my stories.

I have noticed this annoying tendency too. I tried to create a link to the CC-BY legal language, which is what I license my writing using, and find that, since I get the captcha thing, it blocks the link completely by telling me I can only do one external link per 20 minutes. So, it must say 1 time when I first submit, 1 time when I captcha and submit, meaning I can never do anything external. Like, say, link the CC-BY legal language for people to easily read the copyright terms, or provide a picture of an outfit I am thinking of, or whatever. Instead, I need to put a half link in so people can copy and paste, but not go to by directly clicking. Not sure how to get around this -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:45, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

== Hiya! Are people still active? ==

Hey guys. I'm Bloody and I just joined the site. I've noticed the discussion board is a little old, and just wanted to see if others were still active. Guess I just need a little reassurance that I'm not the only one. lol -Bloody

== Page loads per second hit - limit 2 ==

Has anyone else been getting this message a lot lately? [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 21:32, 1 February 2014 (UTC)

Yes. I have. But I wait about 2 seconds and hit the "reload page" button, and it works. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

That page loads hit per second is extremely annoying. I'm a fast reader, and on short pages, it sometimes pops up. It does so constantly when I'm just trying to get back to pages inside of a story I want to edit or add more to. I also really dislike that "Page hits per hour" message. What's the point of having it? Maybe the site can do away with that? -- [[User:Sophos8|Sophos8]]

I don't like it either, but "throttling" the site is one of the techniques that RobKohr is using to frustrate the spam-bots that were filling the site with crap. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

It is driving me insane. I can't enjoy this site when everytime i click on another page i get this annoying message. I spend more time reading that than actual story.
And i just got it when i tried to add here....

lol, you should try checking through stories to see if they should be moved to the pit. I see that message so often it isn't funny D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:00, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

its annoying as hell it would be nice if it was raised to 4

How does one "frustrate" a bot? If anything it will cause people actually interested in this site to turn away. There has to be a better way to do this.

== Image linking ==

Every time I try to link an image, it gives me:
"You can only submit one page with a link in it per 20 minute period."
This happens regardless of whether i add via hyperlinking or as a text url itself.

Any help would be very much appreciated.
My only other option for this is to upload images to this site, but I'm not sure if I can or not. But the editing tools does support adding images during editing so...
--[[User:Aelvir|Aelvir]] 15:33, 8 February 2014 (UTC)

== Chat Concept ==

Recently created, and in need of a public announcement. Feel free to use this link and open in separate tabs to keep it alive: '''editthischat.chatango.com''' 
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

== Mermaid games? ==

Can someone please make a adult section mermaid choose sex game or direct me to one... Thanks.

And i want it to be that you cant change into legs and are cught by fishermen.

Also make the girl mermaid choose a blonde girl.

And its set in a medieval world thats advanced on slavery and cross breeding and has mutant bugs.

Thanks.

==New here==

So I'm working on a story called [[Three sisters]] in the adult section. I'm just wondering if anyone is enjoying it as of yet, its still a WIP and there is still loads of work to be done with it. Anyway let me know if there are things you would like to see in it, or anything else.

-[[User:Tapdancingfish|Tapdancingfish]] 23:39, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

==I have questions==
Ive just joined but having been writting up my own story for months, i want to know if its possible to keep my story hidden from public until im ready for them to read it? Also is there anyway for me to revert unwanted edits by other users (to be honest i dont want any users editing my work unless its to fix grammar)?
[[User:Blitzbear93|Blitzbear93]] 14:01, 14 September 2014 (UTC)Blitzbear93
:Hi,
:I suggest that you create a wiki to write your story, then you blank the page in the last edit. Nobody can read it when opening your wiki, but you can easily retrieve your own story in the revision history page (clicking on the previous archived version). You cannot really prevent any user from editing, but whether it happens, you have the right to make reverts, too, so you can check your work periodically if you are worried about that. You may mention at the beginning of the story the following sentence :
:''Please do not change or add pages (unless you correct my orthography, which you are welcome to do). Thank you.''
:Good luck. -- [[User:Girl Mamtha|Girl Mamtha]] 20:10, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

== Linking to outside sites ==

So, I've been trying for over two hours to upload the first page of my my story. However, submissions with outside links can only be submitted once every 20 minutes, a common sense policy I have no issues with. My problem comes when the first submission attempt loads the page again with a captcha to prove I'm not a spam bot. Entering the captcha, I discover that triggering the Captcha counts as a story submission and makes me wait 20 minutes before I can actually submit it. Annoying, but okay. I wait the 20 minutes, hit submit, and discover that my login has timed out. I log in again to discover that being informed that I timed out COUNTS AS A GODDAMN STORY SUBMISSION. I went around this loop AGAIN, keeping track of the time in an attempt to not have to repeat it, with no more success. It should not be this hard to link to a goddamn discussion/writers collaboration thread on another website.

Oh, and hitting submit and being told you have to wait ALSO counts, so if you misjudge by one minute, you have to wait EVEN MORE.

EDIT: After another 40 minutes of trying, I have given up and removed the link. This Kraken shall be wrestled another day.

== Is this websites community still active? ==

A few years back I used to frequently use this website a lot, I never had an account though.
Now I want to contribute stories and etc.
But I'm worried the hay day of this website is over.
How active is this community?

User:Maniac the Rapper

Maniac the Rapper — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 22:36:40 GMT

Maniac the Rapper: /* Maniac the Rapper */

== Maniac the Rapper ==
You have found yourself in the presence of an powerful demon who will now eat your soul. "I am the greatest story creator of all time", he says. "Whether it be comedy or drama, my works always rank supreme."
----

User:Maniac the Rapper

Maniac the Rapper — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 22:33:42 GMT

Maniac the Rapper:

== Maniac the Rapper ==
<math>2+2</math>
You have found yourself in the presence of an powerful demon who will now eat your soul. "I am the greatest story creator of all time", he says. "Whether it be comedy or drama, my works always rank supreme."

Idea Pitches

Maniac the Rapper — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 22:25:06 GMT

Maniac the Rapper: /* The Twin Empires */

This is a page full of IDEAS for choose your own adventures that haven't been authored yet. Sometimes, you have a great idea, but you just can't finish its story, right? Post the idea or unfinished piece here and have it changed.

==You participate==
So, I have done this once on another website I belong to, but the website ended up removing it. I have done some cyber fantasies, and given I am not that great at coming up with my own material, it seems good with what I am good at: Taking someone else's fantasies and writing based on that.

If anyone is interested, I would be willing to do that on here too. Basically, the idea is, you create the paths and I will write what I do. So, you write, I respond. However, the people who want to participate would need to be interactive. They would need to write their part of the story, then give me the options. I won't bother starting one if no one wants to participate and join in the story. If someone likes this idea, remember, you shape what happens, and I respond to it, describing my part. It can be anything. Not like my [[Dirty Me]], which is more based on real situations, but a world where anything can happen.

Anyone like this idea? If so, please leave a comment on my talk page --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:21, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

==The Twin Empires==
I have this idea that I wish to turn into a story. It takes place in a fantasy world as you control a character of either gender with their own skills, backgrounds and endings. The story is about a great war between two great superpowers: The Empire of Glendia and The Ministry of Zuellni. The war lasted a few decades but in the end, both sides signed a peace treaty separating the continent of Glacia between the two superpowers. After a few years of peace. A group called "Ouroboros" along with the other problems such as the Fuerzan Bandits has begun to wreak havoc around the Ministry of Zuellni. The Ministry assumed that the group called "Ouroboros" came from the Empire and thus, is preparing for another war. Will you let the war continue or let the continent plunge into another age of chaos? What is the group called "Ouroboros" and what are their real motives? You start out in the hometown of the character you chose. As you progress, you'll eventually meet other characters, join a guild and compete in the annual Guild Wars and bring honor to your guild or foil the plan and destroy the group called Ouroboros or even join in the ranks of either superpowers and dominate the other. You can also form a party or even form your own guild. '''You can also add your own characters just send me the detail of the your character and wait for my approval'''. (Please look at the preset character for what to send)
Here are the preset characters:

'''Name''': Raiou 
'''Gender''': Male 
'''Age''': 19 
'''Hometown''': Soddon (Ministry of Zuellni) 
'''Abilities''': Skills of a master assassin in which he learned when he was a child and mysterious skill in which he does not know how to activate. 
'''Guild''': None 
'''Characteristics''': A boy with black spiky hair and amber eyes. Raiou tends to be quiet and serious and always gets to the point. He's not someone who is easily angered and will try to finish a fight as quickly as possible. He wields 2 blades. He mainly uses time magic. 
'''Background''': During the Great War, his hometown is destroyed and he was taken up by an assassins' guild and at the age of 7, he was given the title "Black Wolf". After a failed attempt to assassinate Edgar, the hero of the Ministry of Zuellni. The guild has sent assassins in order to kill Raiou for his failure but Edgar managed to defeat them and decided to take Raiou as his adopted son and the adopted brother of Ritz. After the incident, for some reason, Raiou has lost his memories of his childhood.

'''Name''': Ritz 
'''Gender''': Female 
'''Age''': 19 
'''Hometown''': Soddon 
'''Guild''': None 
'''Characteristics''': A girl with long violet hair and red eyes. Unlike Raiou, Ritz tends to be cheerful, forceful and will try to finish a mission without a bloodshed as much as possible. She is also easily agitated. She fights with a sword like whip called an urumi and can use healing magic but mainly uses offensive magic. 
'''Background''': Her mother died during the war prompting Ritz to practice the whip-sword and follow her father's footsteps. During the peaceful years, Edgar has brought Raiou to the family as an adoptive son, much to Ritz dismay but soon they got along. With Raiou training with the twin katanas and Ritz training with the urumi, both form a formidable pair. Ritz has developed lingering feelings for Raiou and wishes to know his pass. 

'''Name''': Zandarth 
'''Gender''': Male 
'''Age''': 47 
'''Hometown''': Glendia 
'''Guild''': None 
''''''Characteristics''': Tall, bulky, Black hair but graying from old age. Dark colored skin. Has a great sense of humor and doesn't take most matters seriously,but can also be stern when he feels necessary. Master swordsman and a brilliant tactician and strategist. Carries a black longsword cursed with forgotten dark magic, always wears a full suit of armor minus a helmet. Emperor of Glendia.
'''Background''': As the Emperor of Glendia and the created the peace treaty, Zandarth doesn't want another war between the two Empires. But should war be waged,he is ready. Zandarth created the treaty 19 years ago after his newborn daughter, Xana was kidnapped. He never found her, and he was so depressed that he couldn't focus on the war, thus he create created the peace treaty between Glendia and Zuellni, giving him time to find his daughter in peace. He has been given a new clue to her whereabouts... On the day she was kidnapped kidnapped, a farmer saw someone dressed in a black cloak running south from the castle towards Soddon holding a crying baby. He hopes to find his next clue there. 
Note: I could accept some names for the different town and villages and names of different characters. I'm also accepting guilds since I'm still planning one. Criticism is accepted. 

[[User:Darkus123|Darkus123]] 1/11/2014

==Super Mario!==
A CYOA where you control Mario and explore Mario World! You can either do the classic 1-1, 1-2 etc... or go 'out of the game' and Explore! You like? Roaming is awesome!
Status Health would be like 'Small', 'Big' or any Powerup. Level would be 1-1, 1-2 etc.
MP would be blank. Equipment may be misc objects Mario Gets!
EDIT: Or I could use <nowiki> {{SexRompStatus|Location=|Health=|MP=|Level=}}</nowiki>

[[User:Goombob|Goombob]] 20:00, 7 April 2013 (UTC)

==Stone Angel==

So I have this idea that I want to turn into a story. I've decided to call it " Stone Angel" because the story and the main character are involved with the title. So it takes place in this so-called " utopian" society where poverty, crime and chaos is common and the streets are actually safer than your own home. Think of the Tribe combined with 1984 and four outcasts want to survive in the society but it isn't an easy job. These four outcasts have names but no real background which I'll leave to you but they all share two things in common: they're fed up with how their lives are and they want to start fresh and clean- and fast. The problem? Nobody may know them but everybody could be looking for them. Trading, crime, work, school- anything's really possible in the society.
At least it is as long as you keep away from the "guards". Other than that, roam around to your heart's content. Cop to criminal, from beggar to billionare. Angel to devil,light to dark. It's your choice in the society.

[[User:blackknight45|blackknight45]] 16 March 2013

==An Adventure==
I suggest a genuine adventure story worthy of the title [[An Adventure]]. Since the birth of this idea I've dreamed of a rogue-like character that has no known history but has everything to become. Who he becomes is your choice.
The world is based in a medieval fantasy with dragons, dwarves, trolls(with their bridges), and other mythical creatures that add to the setting. Think of it as a mix of the worlds of Runescape and Minecraft. There is also an additional layer of distant and legendary places. Sky islands, the Dwarven fortresses, and the fabled edge of the world and what lies beyond it. Trading over the sea, sky or land are there for the character to immerse himself in or completely ignore. He can become a thriving tradesman or a pirate of the sky if he so chooses.
The people of the land range from magical to industrious to cultured. All have deep beliefs in myths and fantasies that you can adventure after in attempt to discover. In the surreal expanse there are evil sorcerers and good wizards waging a mysterious war over the continuous good or bad existence of the land. To many they is only a myth.
As this character travels he discovers his name, quests (to either complete or disrupt), and a new world never been discovered before. Hero or Demon. Baron or Pirate. The future is yours to discover and create.

No adventure ends.

[[An Adventure|Start Here.]]

I would like one story-line to take him to a city where he finds his way onto a skyship. He works up the ranks, meets a wizard, and becomes a captain that traverses the land and discovers the undiscovered to assist the wizard in saving the land from '''EVIL'''.
Here is a reference to art that somewhat matches the style I'm after >

[[User:Syberiyxx|Syberiyxx]] 00:54, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Wow. You just pitched an amazing concept for a Fantasy MMORPG. If you want this to work though, I suggest you don't have a character selection page, and only have one character. It makes writing the story much easier to handle, as your scope for your adventure is huge. You should also have a starting quest, or 'Adventure', a simple one at first, such as fetching something from a land not far. Then let the reader ''ease'' into the more difficult sections.

To keep it less confusing, don't make side-adventures, or if you do, don't have a lot of them. Lastly, don't make the combat system (if there is any) too robust, this is an CYOA, not Turn-Based RPG. Anyway, love the general idea. I hope to read your story soon!

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 01:26, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Thankyou!! Okay, I've decided to give the character a name(Argoth) and have given him a quest right at the beginning. My plan is for anyone to be able to contribute. If you read the story and find a place where you would make a different choice than he did, you can create a new option for him and, if you so choose, write what happens in it. Eventually it will lead back to the main quest, or, if it is a major and interesting change, I will consider letting it be an entirely new branch to the story.

I will not be around to edit this forever though. Around the end of the year I will leave and be gone for (at least) two years. If anyone likes the theme and wants to continue as well as moderate this story, let me know.

[[User:Syberiyxx|Syberiyxx]] 22:51, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

It is a great idea but it is something that would require alot of work I read it so far you should expand further but that plot you wrote about above would require a full time writer

From a Random Bored Writer.(Love the idea though)

==Vampires Vs. Werewolfs :]==
alright so, i have an idea were in the begining of my story, Vampires Vs. Werewolfs, the vampires and werewolfs live in peace, until one night a child is born, (you are the child) that will supposedly kill off the other race. you have to lead your clan, (vamp./werewolf, its ur choice), to victory in a deadly battle for life. p.s dont expect it to be too gory!!
<3 peeta.luvr

==Badlands==

I've been working on a story about Australia in the future hit by nuclear war, think fallout meets mutant koalas. With lots of gore and sex :D The more people who help out would be awesome. give it a looky loo and tell me what you think :) [[Badlands]]

I took a read at it and here's what I think of it as of this moment... It's just a sex story. Except with Australians from the country talking crap. It would be awesome if you could make this an action adventure story, that's what I thought it was going to be anyway. I'd like to say though that it is a wonderful premise. Nuclear War, animals mutating, human's having to start over. Not that I've never heard of this idea before, but I'm always interested in those. So it's a great idea, I'd just like it not to be 'just another sex story'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

I agree. --[[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]] 4 April 2012

==Celebrities!==
I'm sure a lot of people would love to engage in an open world CYOA, similar to the likes of Rampage or Smutty Sex Romp, but in a Hollywood environment. Hollywood Romp fails in this regard due to it being very specific for who you are playing as, and it is geared for one particular story. What we need is a story where we can have multiple selections straight from the start, both playing as various celebrities, and possibly paparazzi, stalkers, body guards, or tourists as well! And of course, completely open for editing.
Perhaps putting the celebrities into categories right away would help. Such as 'Movie Stars' 'Singers/Band' 'Tv Actors' Or even the most basic, 'male' and 'female' celebrity choices.

== [[Crimes Which FAIL]] ==
It's a simple storyline where only one crime can be carried out that you get away with but you get a horrible ending in all others. Looking for co-writer to help as I have a major exam coming up next year, so I can't edit stories often, and I have to revise.My next school hangs in the balance, so if someone could take over I'd be grateful. It's on the Main Page 'C' area (Singapore)
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 13:56, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

== God ==
So I have an idea. I've been thinking of a story I could start for a while and this is it. I'll probably start quite about by myself first, but I want to know if anyone else would be interested in it. I won't start a story of my own unless I'm sure others would contribute.

So basically, you are a god. You need to make people worship you. You go about it many different ways; go old testament and kill everyone, go Greek and sex everything, start wars with others gods or make deals with them, etc. Later I might add new ages like futuristic and medieval, but I think going primitive (caveman) might be best start. I might add different types of gods as well. God of fire, wood, dinner plates, whatever the hell you want. So anyone think it's a good idea, or be willing to work on it?

-Okay, so maybe you choose the God you want to be and gain RP(Reputation Points) and give ranks such as

God of wood

RP:1 Like, ten obsessive people, all woodsmen

RP:50 Give thanks whenever they burn firewood, nothing else

Rp:250 Many a parent thinks you were the significant other.

Or maybe you can split it?

RP: General knowledge of you
Reputation Points

IP:How much you effect lives
Influence Points

TP:Whether you are thanked for gifts
Thankfulnesss Points

Try a system.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 06:17, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

I like the idea! Instead of Reputation Points. Just leave it as 'Reputation' and then beside it range in severity from 'Heavenly' to 'Horrific'. You can than implement such points as 'Fear/Praise Points', the more of those they have, the more likely they will do your willing. Such as, take over another country, or attack another religion. I don't think I could help you at this time though. I still have to finish my current project [[Remember]], and some very important tests are coming up for me so I can't be writing all the time. Once those are done (which will be some time), I will be happy to work with you and write up this story. I suggest you start it off as soon as possible, then show it to me so I can have a look and suggest what should be changed. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

Anyway, what're you going to call it? Also, maybe it would be a scale, so one end would have well, heavenly, and the other could be the Horrific. Decisions will change the scale and the scale will provide actions. So if you're really near the horrific side, you can show acts of kindness if you want. Perhaps you have a status of how widespread it is. ie: Reclusive Religion, Holy High-Up,Leading Light. You should probably start now. I can co-write and as he said, [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] can halp too. Three way writing! Any ideas for Actions?

Merge Self with ____

Agree to live in the same Era with ___

Try to destroy ___'s reputation

And you need to put a letter and a / or : it simplifies the story, and stops the overlapping of pages. Click [[Die]] and see what I mean.

[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 13:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Who's the third writer? Just wanted to know. I'm not going to start the story, more like I will just occaisionally add pages to move the story forward. Also, we'll need some sort of template for this at the bottom of every page. Do you happen to know how to make templates? Otherwise, we could just manually type it in the bottom.

As for the name of the story, I wouldn't have a clue. Perhaps, Eternal Greatness, The World Is Yours, or just basically, God.

I was also thinking of ways to start off this story. Maybe we could start off with the gods having a meeting, and welcoming the newest recruit (you!). Then, you will be assigned to architect and maintain a new 'Earth'. The first decisions you would make would be about how many superior races would be situated on the world, and which ones would rule it. Then you could enforce upon religions, cause natural disasters, perform miracles, make the Earth move forward in technology, etc.

Then after a certain point (say you reach a 'Heavenly' or 'Horrific' standard of your world), the gods will then host another meeting, in which you will recount all of your actions. If you chose to make it 'Heavenly', you will be applauded and congratulated. Then assigned onto a new world, which will be of a harder difficulty. If you made your Earth, 'Horrific', the other Gods will look upon you like some sort of freak, then cast you out.

That's all my thoughts on this. To sum up: I will love to help, but I will just add pages to move the story forward. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 09:16, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't know who posted it at first.

How about if you're cast out you can turn back and wage war. Also, we could let the God lie, so he would get a new world until one of the other gods find out. Anyway, I don't know either. I've never tried before but I think it was something like Template:Place whatever it was here with the [s and the]s. Oh, and maybe you trick the other gods and try to kill them. Then the Endings could also be classsed. If you do great on all your worlds, you get heavenly. Oh, and we could make it if you intervene too much and the race depends on you, you lose. Hmmm, maybe one could be lettting them evolve but guiding them slightly and the other would be shaping them in 5 minutes.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:33, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Sounds great! Uhh, whenever you're ready, begin. Then once I finish with [[Remember]], I'll help out on the story. Just make sure that the intro is interesting. Bad intro, people will leave after the second page!

Hear's what I say the levels are:

*Heavenly
*Holy
*Miraculous
*Savior-esque
*Neutral
*Depressing
*Destructive
*Demonic
*Horrific

You can switch them around or edit some if you want, this is just off the top of my head. Also, let's try not to make to many endings. I know it's called 'Choose Your Own Adventure', but if we limit the amount of endings to say about 3-6, it'd make the workload just a tad easier. The person who originally posted this has most likely gone and left the site. I thought that this was your idea since the first signature that was left was your own. That's why I initially got interested in the concept.

Anyway, start the story whenever you want. I'll come and have a read, then perhaps add a few pages if I have the time. --Heyoeveryone 09:04, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

This is an absolute great idea but it sounds just a bit too much like the game populas(probably incorrect spelling) but just try and tone done the flying between worlds thing that's just my idea

From a writer who doesn't know how to post the link to my name uh i think ->

--[[User:WRITER1234|WRITER1234]] 09:42, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

== Element Help ==
I recently started this project called [[Element]]. Its basically a Turn-based Strategy. Now the problem is that school just resumed(i'm in Australia) so that means less time on that project. If anyone is interested in helping me finish this project. Or even just editing, please do so. Please also be aware that if you cannot do anything that can be rude or offensive, it is a PG game after all. If you haven't already, please click on [[Element]] and if you express interest please go ahead and help this cause.--[[User:Heyoeveryone]] 6:29, 2 Febuary 2011

== High School Sophomore Year ==
I just started a new Adult Story, High School Sophomore Year, and could use some help, mainly with dialogue and details. I'm still working on adding more pages but could use alot of help expanding it! Thanks in advance to all who help!!!! http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/High_School_Sophomore_Year
Loch

==Succubus RPG==
Would anyone want to participate in an RPG with succubi? Either playing as the Succubi or humans. And would it be best to have it novel (free-form) or stat based?--[[User:ChaosLacky|ChaosLacky]] 10:08, 20 March 2010 (UTC)

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participate yes however it seems my writing or something sucks I can help but anything I do would need to be proof read and stat based sounds good--[[user:rhynohyde]]

==Julian==
i got this cool idea where you wake up on a space station with no memory and there doesnt seem to be any people around. The whole place is falling apart, and walls are collapsing and whatever. The ship was actually the last humans from earth, but we had to evacuate earth for some reason, but on the ship somehting went wrong and a bunch of people died. i dunno, just the beginning of an idea, but please give me some ideas if possible.

i also got this other idea, where instead of every option leading to entirely new stories and everything, you start off with a map of the area your going to choose your own adventureize and make every point where you can stand a new page. sort of like a point and click game, only with choose your own adventure. i left a more in depth explination in the discussion part, so look at that to. Also, if certain things in the game are kept track of by the player, on a peice of paper or something. For example, in the story "a knights tale" you could cut down the amount of work significantly by having player's stats kept on paper instead of each class leading to a new page, meaning you could expand much easier and faster.
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==Kawi==
I've been thinking about making a story where you are an international mercenary and you get to choose an organisation to work for. I went as far to make a setting for this story.

This is it so far...

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This story is set in the dystopian future of 2050. You are a mercenary, Jack Templar. You work for whoever pays the highest price. In such an unstable world, you are never short of work.

Here is a brief summary of Jack Templar world

North America- The former superpower was plunged into a second civil war during the 2030â��s. The North and the South are once again at each others throat. Neither side can gain superiority over the other.

Western Europe- Its people have the best standards of living. However, puppet democracies are really controlled by powerful aristocratic families and everyone is under 24 hour surveillance for their â��protectionâ��. Think George Orwellâ��s 1984

Eastern Europe- Individual warlords control the rural areas, and the conflict between them creates many atrocities. Meanwhile, its larger cities have become the red light district of the world as a result of the thriving sex slave trade.

Africa- Any hopes for harmony in Africa are all but destroyed. Old tribal tensions and civil unrest has plunged the continent into unimaginable bloodshed. As a result, most of the worldâ��s military contactors use it as a base of operations.

China and Japan- An uneasy truce exists between the worlds leading military and technological super powers. Their mutually beneficial arrangement makes them a force to be reckoned with. They are suspicious of all foreigners.

[[Jim's Barbeque]]- Prophets of the onset of the most delicious food this universe has ever seen, and fanatics in the ways of beef-fu. The leader is a figure cloaked in the shadowy fumes of teriyaki sauce, and noone has ever seen this wonderous man (or woman????).

South America- Most of the continent is controlled by a dictator. To the people, he is a benevolent revolutionary. Under the surface, he runs the biggest drug operation in the entire world. Resistance forces occupy most of the Amazon.

Russia- The old soviet power has long since shut its door on the rest of the world. Few know what goes on inside the country.

Middle East- Groups of all descriptions squabble over the last oil reserves. The longest wall ever built surrounds the state of Israel. Meanwhile, Palestinians have united and started an organised front against their old enemies.

Australia- An unknown epidemic swept the continent clean of any human habitation. There are many rumours that mutants occupy certain parts of the mainland.

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Sorry. My imagination went a bit crazy.Any thoughts or feedback would be greatly appriciated.

---You've created a world. Not much else. There's no real plot to your idea, or supporting cast, or anything. These things could be forgivable, but your world isn't even that interesting. It's a world spawned by a few exaggerated cliches. North and south start fighting? Over what? Slaves? Japan and China enemies? Whoa how novel. Africa enveloped in civil war? But Europe is controlled by government? Incredible. It'd be more novel to make Africa the strongest united nation in the world, plunge Europe and America into poverty and civil war, then have China and Japan on the move to take over these disputed territories.

And Jack Templar? Might as well call him Buff McWarriorpants. Give him an ordinary name. In order to draw reader immersion and interest, in-fact, it would be best if you made this Jack some deadbeat nobody. One day he's enjoying his life somewhere in the word when it's suddenly usurped from him. He has to learn to survive in a hostile changing world. There, that's a basic idea for a story, one which is well suited for CHOYA. Thanks for enduring my critical comments.--[[User:Anubite|Anubite]] 11:29, 28 November 2008 (PST)

:I'm actually quite interested to see that. Will there be choices for you to make, which would depend on the outcome?--[[User:Ashmount1|Ashmount1]] 00:14, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm fine with the name, to be honest. Like Anubite already said, you've got the world going for you, but now you need the plot that drives it. As a start, you can probably create more than one character who are living in one of the countries. If that's too difficult, I suggest maybe to get Jack to somehow be an agent trying to resolve all these wars and conflicts. That will lead to some heroic action. Then maybe some enemy catches him and drops him off to Australia with those mutants. Now you're headed for a survivalist story. Something like that. But that, of course, is just my opinion.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:46, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

==Jeffthedork==
I've been thinking about a story were: 3 teens are dared to spend the night in a haunted house and they get attacked by gousts and they find secret rooms and stuff like that.

---Good idea. What name and what rating?

---Jeffthdork: Rating = R. Name = Fright.

==Jeffthedork==
I've go another idea: A haunted prison kills it's convicts and it's guards. You would be a guard and have to try to live. The prison would be able to turn on machines by its self and make unreal stuff happen like the back wall of a cell push the inmate in the cell against the cell door, slicing him into many pieces.

-Well, I'd help you, but you do need to create it. Hmm, maybe the manacles clamp onto every part of the prisoner's body and drags him down into a pit. The main stuff can only be prison items, but that gives a lot of room. Maybe the ghosts go into the posessions of people and those try to kill them. So if someone smuggled drugs inside they'd get stung until they faint from drug abuse.

Good Concept, I'd help if it went up.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 03:18, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

==NovelOfDoom==
Is this page public?I hope so,cause I'm not sure xD.I had an idea for a story that I couldn't finish.Your a average guy who has a wife and 2 kids.Then all of a sudden this dude calls,saying he has a expert sniper who has a lock on your family,and you gotta go through a bunch of obstacles(involving fighting numerous enimies) assigned by the guy,or else he'll order the sniper to take out your kids and wife.Sorry that was so long :P

Yes, this page is public. And that's not too long for an idea pitch. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:17, 24 August 2008 (PDT)

Jack Frost: That is a really good story idea. (how come I never think of these great story ideas?) Would you mind if I write that story? It sounds excellent. Its just the thing I need.

TheEverLastingTale:Are you talking to me?LOL I'm NovelOfDoom,but sadly,I completely forgot my password,so I ended up making another account,LOL.Jack Frost,I likey that name :D.If you were talking about me,I would be honored if you write that story :D(I'm just guessing that you've been on this site for a long while,LMAO.)

==monkey76==
how about a story where the laws of physics (or reason) don't apply, so the most sensable choice might not work eg: if you ask boss for a raise he explodes and if you kick him he'll give you the ocarina of time.
or is that a bad idea?

Jack Frost: If somebody ever writes that, I hope they put it in the "Nobody Should Read These" section. But, that does sound like it would be a good story. That also seems like a great idea for a story.

Trar: I need help writing my story, [[Would_You%2C_Could_You%2C_Fuck_A_Goat%3F!|Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]. Every page has to have an option at the bottom of it leading to[[Die]], ALWAYS, no matter what. Also, the player will NEVER actually fuck a goat. That would be bad.

TheNeverEndingTale:This is getting annoying ><.I keep forgetting my password,so I ended up making yet ANOTHER account(I'm NovelOfDoom and TheEverLastingTale.) I have another idea.You live in (whatever country you want) where the President is reall corrupt,so you take it upon yourself to take him out.

==TGLS==
You are Joe Jones an unimportant Sales Representative on a Dystopian Earth in 2230 but times are changing.
The Nations are as follows:

â�¢ Allied States of America: The remaining states have allied each other together in order to weather the attacks of revolutionaries.
â�¢ Confederate States of America: After the economic collapse of 2184 in order maintain the industrial base of the former confederate states they readopted slavery and war was declared by the Allied States of America.
â�¢ Microsoft Computer Corporation: One of the only Non-Asian Corporations left Microsoft Computer Corporation declared Sovereignty in 2185 and negotiated a treaty with the Confederate States of America.
â�¢ The Obsessive Cult: The Obsessive Cult declared Sovereignty in 2084 at the same time as the 2834 nuclear reactor incident, and has put a xenophobic position of all the citizens.
â�¢ The European Union: The European Union has been put in instability because of pressure of the Soviet Union & the Ottoman Empire.
â�¢ The Soviet Union: Russia reinstated communism on the factors of the economic collapse, communist partyâ��s pressure, newly assimilated china, and the American Civil War.
â�¢ The Ottoman Empire: The Ottoman Empire was formed when the Turkish Ousted the American garrisons from major middle east oil resources in 2175 and later joined an alliance with the Soviet Union
â�¢ Africa: Africa was leading the world in stability, technology, and economy but after the 2834 nuclear reactor incident it was completely crippled though there may be some survivors.
â�¢ Others: Japan, South America, Australia

Early Plot Threads
Early Plot Threads could be:
â�¢ Trying to move up in your career
â�¢ Further Education
â�¢ Emigration
And later plot lines would be developed over time.

==''Redage1''==
Hey all! Just wanted to say, The Life of a School Kid is online! It's public, but if you write a really dumb choice, I'll delete it. Also, if you write a section, please include (This section write by ---)And don't delete anyone else's work! thanks! http://editthis.info/Choose_Your_Own_Adventure/The_Life_of_a_School_Kid (Link to the story)

==Reecer6==
I have an idea. You are a kid named David who wakes up in a haunted mansion and must get out. it'll be slightly RPGish, as you'll gain Health, XP, ect. while facing creatures from spiders to Ginormous Screamer faces. He'll also have a fear meter. You'll want to keep it low to beat enemies easier, but keep it high to destroy cracked walls ect. There'll be 2 passages in most every room.

[[Category: System Pages]]

==Reporko: i have two ideas....==
one is where you are kicked out of your home by your girlfriend and are really depressed. you walk into an alley and discover you have secret powers.

The other one is where its like in post future like 2011 or 2015 or something and like the world is collapsing and people are surviving when the apocalypse and after. Tell me what you think.

:A little cliche, but maybe because you're just brushing the top of some even better ideas. Dig deeper! :) -[[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 14:38, 19 October 2009 (PDT)
==Olympian Quest==
Does anyone agree to this: This is about a quest that takes you to Mount Olympus and find a stolen trident that the greek god, Hades hid.--[[User:Greenlande23|Greenlande23]] 15:24, 4 June 2009 (PDT)

Go for it, tell me when you finish most of it. --[[User:Storylover141|Storylover141]] 18:00, 19 September 2011 (PDT)

I see no reason to object to someone writing such a story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:01, 4 June 2009 (PDT)

Seems like a good idea, in fact i think you should let it fly! --[[User:Megadeth1|Megadeth1]] 17:34 23 june 2009 (PDT)

==Fixing the red ring of death==
I had an idea to make a funny adventure of your x-box 360 geting the red ring of death, and you try to fix it. I just need to see if people think its a good idea.

Ring of Death eh? The old Ring of Death... well, I guess it wouldn't be really funny if you make it like, 'you restart your Xbox360. YOU WIN!' That would be lame. To me, a good story based on real life always has a kick-butt fighting scene, a huge plot twist, an evil wizard, Russia and it's 11 time zones, Shaka Zulu, and a Jamaican guy. So, if you include all of those, then yes, it would be an EPIC story, like mines. Play it here--> [[An Epic Adventure]] --[[Forsak3n1]] 16:33 August 6, 2009

Way to whore out your adventure Forsaken. [[User:Jakeinator|Jakeinator]] 23:09, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

==Castle II==
This is a scenario that I have done verbally, and want to put on here. It is a puzzle/rpg/type thing, with a plot and many different options. You explore a castle, trying to find the person who cursed your hometown. You encounter many dangers, monsters, conflicts, and other action-like things. Is this a good idea?
~[[User:Ebony949|Ebony949]] 14:32, 2 August 2009

It sounds like something with potential. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 08:11, 2 August 2009 (PDT)

==Badassery==
I'm new, so sorry if I edited this wrong. I'm just copying how other people are editing this. Basically my idea for the story is you start off normally. You're a man, kids, wife etc etc. Then out of NOWHERE, some guy tries to kill you! So you head off on a quest to try and find out who and why they tried to kill you. For fun, I will also put in some hidden random stuff in the story. Slipping in a internet meme, or a video game quote. The unique parts of the story(hence the title) will be the BADASS moments. Where the character will start off a combo(for lack of a better word), and you choose how to continue it. Some will advance the combo, and some will leave you flat on your face. I will try my hardest to put as much pages and effort into this story before summer vacation ends. Good idea?

~[[User:CheeseToast|CheeseToast]] 6:58PM, August 12th 2009 (GMT)

Very good idea, I'm a bit of a fan of action heroes myself. I'm also new, so, I'll try and do my best to help you out. --Vet 01:32, 31 July 2010 (UTC)

==Comics Unrated==
Much like the Star Wars and Star Trek, adventures, you choose characters and have sex, fight, kill, curse, etc. Basically way to express the comic heroes as if they were more like people and not heroes. There would be a set story for each hero. I even thought at the beginning you must choose DC or Marvel, and then it starts. I think a lot of people would like this.

~[[User:Carmenlover|Carmenlover]] 3:17 AM, August 15, 2009 (PST)

==Battle royal xtreme==
I'm also new so sorry if i edited wrong.
My idea is that there is a big battle royal, but instead of weapons, there are powers like wind, water, fire, earth and lightning. If someone dies they are respawened into a waiting room until the fight is over, but you lose and the story ends.
You can chose your power at the start. So please if someone could make this as i'd probably suck, CHEERS!

:If you get game over, why can't you just be dead then? Makes it a little more important that you win. If the point of it is so you're fighting the same people over and over, that might get a little boring. Maybe the people running the royale have a ton of extra people locked up as backup, and just replace the dead ones so the fight goes on after every round. You could slip in some character development, maybe it's like a tournament, so there can be other people fighting that you meet that you don't immediately have to kill. Or maybe it's not a tournament at all, just entertainment for a twisted society. Gladiator, but with magic instead of swords. -[[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 14:38, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

==Digimon Adventure?==
Honestly, I've seen a few Pokemon related adventures but none of them, ironically, are 'Digimon'-related adventures when there's a big freaking series called "Digimon Adventure". lmao Sorry, I just have to point that out. And, I pointed that out because I have an idea for one. It has quite a long plot, so I am just going to try and summarize it down here.

Similar to DC Comics' Earth Prime, this is what our Earth is like in my story, with the Digital Worlds you see in the anime being real planetary systems in parallel dimensions. The origins of those systems are naturally related to computers (again), with the creator of the first ever Digital World, called "D-World Neo", being specifically the ABC (Atanasoff-Berry Computer) and its shaper (having to build upon the foundations created by the ABC) being the ENIAC (Electronic Numerical Integrator And Computer). That first D-World is the one you see in the Digimon X-Evolution movie. Four other 'D-Worlds' were both created ''and'' shaped by more advanced Personal Computers. They were then called Alpha (Tamers' Digital World), Beta (Frontier), Gamma (Adventure), and Delta (Savers). Now here comes the plot. (There's a plot?!) Yes, even among all these documentary-style aspects, there ''is'' a plot.

Some of you might know about Millenniummon from the video game called ''Brave Tamer''. He... or I guess it's 'it' (since there are no genders among Digimon) controls time and space. He then turned into an alternate 'Ultimate Form' (do know that I'm using original Japanese-translated terms here instead of the dub terms) of his called Zeed Millenniummon. He was stopped by a kid named Akiyama Ryo, fused into one with a Digimon called Monodramon and turned into a single Digi Egg. Now, having done that, Zeed's data naturally is inside Monodramon, and though that allows him to evolve into his 'Complete Form' called Cyberdramon, that data also makes him very violent.

After some years of control, Cyberdramon finally caves in to the influence and there's nothing that its partner, Ryo, can do about it. Cyberdramon runs away, seeking to return to his 'Deus Ex' Zeed Millenniummon body, seek revenge upon Ryo and, of course, bring chaos to the Worlds. But, to do that, it needs an energy source to evolve into the 'Ultimate Form', and a deceitful Demon Lord Digimon claims that it just happens to have that energy. Barbamon offers Zeed a deal that Zeed will have to serve Barbamon for an eternity should Barbamon successfully return Zeed to its true form. An eternity is nothing to someone who controls time, so Zeed agrees. Boom. Zeed evolves from Cyberdramon to Zeed again, but Barbamon backstabs him by bounding Zeed as its very own mind-slave.

To restrain Zeed's omnipotent powers, it has these fractal-code chains wrapped around its body, of which the lower-half is trapped in a crystal. To remove both of these, Barbamon needs Zeed to absorb the souls of 'pure children' and their 'pure Digimon' partners. So, it summons you and a few other kids to Digital World Gamma (which was depicted in ''Digimon Adventure'' in our world) and it begins your 'training' into pure souls. Sounds cheesy, but there is a whole lot more to it after Zeed's chains are removed.

What do you think?

--[[User:OminousFlare|OminousFlare]] 23:55, 23 September 2009 (PDT)

==Friday Night==

This story is about you and a group of friends deciding that Fridays are now the day that you all smoke pot and just see what happens.

The first Friday of this new tradition and:

1.Tugboat (Greg Tubot) is caught by the police driving without a license. You and your friends are desperately trying to hide your pot while the police are getting the tow truck to tow Tugboat's car. In a last attempt, you all run to the car and take back roads which can either save you or kill you in the end.

2. After being late, you realize that your friends started smoking without you. While inside, you begin to watch movies and listen to music. After a few hours, you hear moans outside. Thinking it's Randy (whom disappeared for the last 2 hours) you laugh it off and pretend to be scared. Once Zack decides to look outside he shouts "look at these fucks trying to scare us", as he points and laughs at the zombies heading your way. You, not even getting your first inhale of smoke yet, realize that it isn't a prank by Randy and in fact, it is the Zombie Apocalypse. After a brief flashback, you remember that you and your friends have read the "Zombie Survival Guide". Once you remember this, you thank god you were in Ed's house for he has gotten prepared for this. (most up to this point is one set of possible events and it will be continued).

3. You try to break a record and smoke your own weight in Marijuana. After you and your friends pool money for that massive amount of pot, you begin to smoke it. After a hour, you pass out and can vaguely remember what happened. All you see is a blonde nurse and a redhead doctor. The blonde has a decent size of tits where the redhead has a pair of huge tits. (from here on out you fuck your way out of the hospital).

==MacGyver==
You are faced with all sorts of traps, hazards, all sorts of dangerous situations, but since you are MacGyver, you can handle pretty much anything. Could have branches for both the silly, building a bomb out of pocket lint and his own eyelashes MacGyver, and the serious, real human being who's just highly trained, intelligent, and resourceful MacGyver. There could be a plot involving terrorists or some other disgustingly American story that needs a capable hero, to honor the original series. Would work well in super-short, individual situations you need to get out of, short stories, like the length of an episode, all the way up to an epic novel length story with plots, conspiracies, and probably Russians. And of c

==Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf==
I know it sounds stupid, but I want to make a adventure based off a song by the name of "Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf". I found the song very entertaining, and I think it'd be cool if I could make a story based off the basic concept of the song.
I plan to use the information the songs gives you, while adding different endings and backgrouind story. So basically, the plot in the song will be the true ending, while there will be other endings you can follow.

Please give your opinion on the rating as well. The gore will not be very descriptive, I'm still at a very young age.

Good idea or way too weird? --[[User:Thoughtless|Thoughtless]] 21:02, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

== Elements of the Earth ==
Hi there, I'm new to this wiki and I have started a gamebook with the [[Elements of the Earth|same name]] of the title. It has just started, and any help would be appreciated.

--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 07:37, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

== A Lightbulb Pops on my Head ==
I have a good idea, and anyone can take this idea since I am working on EOE(see above).

It's about three scientists, Albert Einstien, Issac Newton and Thomas Edison. They three meet together, the third world war erupts and the government(for some reason) has banned scientists. In the starting, you choose the scientist you play as.

Not really good, but it seems good to me.

--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 07:37, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

I'm guessing that they somehow invented a Time Machine as well before hand? Perhaps it could be taken into a really Sci-Fi direction by making the adventure all about your chosen scientist either:

*Stopping the War from beginning through Time Travel

*Destroying everyone through Time Travel (and other means)

*Brokering Peace between countries

There is also the fact that Scientists are banned, so this could be interesting.

[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23:21, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

21 Sept 2012: Sounds like Isaac Asimov meets Ayn Rand!

== Connection page ==
I'm new to the site, but I just thought of an idea, and I wanted to see what people think of it.

My idea is to have a "story" that will lead into many/all the other stories. The user can start there, and follow several links to decide what story they would be reading.

For example, the first question could be "Are you interested in family-friendly stories, or adult stories?"
--[[User:Yoohoo2|Yoohoo2]] 16:32, 10 January 2013 (UTC)

==Conviction==
You (A character of your choosing) and your teenage friends become victims of a psychopathic genius with a dark secret past to shiver your spine. This man (soon to find out who) has set up small games of challenges, puzzles, traps, and obstacles for you to play. This abandoned facility is filled by an unknown presences. You'll uncover the dark story behind this place and the mad men. With how they are all connected. Will you sacrifice anyone to win? Will you try to save everyone? Will you take the next corner? What will you do? Only one question remains in these halls? Will you win the game? The insanity begins here.

Playable Players:

Marcy- Popular girl with some degrees in journalism.

Jonas- A boy who has an interest in solving mysteries.

Johnathan- The jock.

Candice- A smart girl that loves puzzles.

Sarah- A popular girl who has a history with Jonas.

Skyler- A Gothic boy who has an interest with dark unknown secrets.

Michael- A popular kid who knows leadership.

Penny- A sister of Michael and an athlete.

Jeremy- A brother of Johnathan who has in interest in electronics and programming.

Dog - Jonas pet (non-playable)

Objects in the Story:

-Renown points- The currency of the story and can be used to help you in mysteries.

-Interactive Characters- Other characters who are victims of the mad man. Including others who are insane as the mad men that lives in the facility.

-Leadership points- You have to maintain a balance of leadership points (100) to keep order among your other friends and keep them loyal in
each of your choices. If you have a low amount, they'll start questioning your every moves and may have an increase chance of leaving you.

-Side Quests- Complete side quests for interactive players for renown points and more details behind the facility.

-Weapons- Find certain weapons or buy certain weapons to defend yourself against mad men, creatures, and other hostiles.

-Players (Friends)- Interact with your friends to maintain leadership points. Also gain their trusts as well so you don't have to loose much leadership points. You can learn more about them when talking to them. Remember, all players are valuable. They all have advantages in coming obstacles built by the mad genius.

-Item bars- In the story, every character has health, MP (Levels, experiences gain), trust (leadership points), panic levels (best avoid), and a backpack (storage for main objects, side objects, weapons, and certain objects only available for certain characters).

-Entertainment Level- Keep the mad men genius level entertained so you don't have to deal with harder obstacles, hostiles, puzzles, and any hostile environments. So keep him entertained by completing these little games by him or any devilish actions.

-Good and Evil- Two bars that keeps track on your person. Either your a good person or an evil one by your choices.

-Unknown Presence- A dark unknown presence that dwells in this facility. All you know about them is that they are hostile and demonic.

Note: I'm trying to figure out on how to work on this. I'm stuck on my first one. So I added this story to the idea pitches for anyone to work on or help me on in the future sometime. Just contact me first. Contact Catpeople on create your own adventures.

==Candle Light==
It's a small little story I thought of basing it off of children story books.

You are on a quest in a fantasy mystical world that is full of danger, light, darkness, happiness, and morale lesson in each of your choices. In a search for the last candle light. This candle light is a source of power that is desired by both good and evil. Anyone who obtains this candle light can bend reality in their images. You are a peasant of the low lands. Once your farm land is endanger by tax mans, dark creatures, bandits, and your own family. Even the sickness threatens your family. So the only way to save them is to go on the journey in search of he last candle light. Will you take the journey?

Objects in the Story-

Good points- If you do good and noble actions, you'll be rewarded with good points. A currency in the story.

Evil points- If you do devilish and greedy actions, you'll be rewarded with evil points. Another currency in the story.

Companions- Depending on your actions and deeds. You'll be encountering by characters that can accompany you on your quest.

Side Story- Small side stories on the side of the story. Once completed you'll be rewarded with (Good or evil) points and any equipment.

Mariuk or Urgash- Two pets you can earn during your quest. Mariuk is a dog with golden fair. It is a symbol for all that is good. Urgash is a small flying dragon with red and black scales. It is a symbol for all that is evil. Either pets will give you beneficial powers to help you in the story.

Level- Level up to gain more powers in the darkness or the light.

Love Interest- Pursue relationships with companions or default characters.

Equipment and Backpack- Any equipments that you gain, buy, or find will be loaded in the backpack. Including weapons, armor, and potions.

Health Bars- To keep track of your health.

Note: I'm trying to figure out on how to work on this. I'm stuck on my first one. So I added this story to the idea pitches for anyone to work on or help me on in the future sometime. Just contact me first. Contact Catpeople on create your own adventures.

Idea Pitches

Maniac the Rapper — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 22:20:58 GMT

Maniac the Rapper: /* The Twin Empires */

This is a page full of IDEAS for choose your own adventures that haven't been authored yet. Sometimes, you have a great idea, but you just can't finish its story, right? Post the idea or unfinished piece here and have it changed.

==You participate==
So, I have done this once on another website I belong to, but the website ended up removing it. I have done some cyber fantasies, and given I am not that great at coming up with my own material, it seems good with what I am good at: Taking someone else's fantasies and writing based on that.

If anyone is interested, I would be willing to do that on here too. Basically, the idea is, you create the paths and I will write what I do. So, you write, I respond. However, the people who want to participate would need to be interactive. They would need to write their part of the story, then give me the options. I won't bother starting one if no one wants to participate and join in the story. If someone likes this idea, remember, you shape what happens, and I respond to it, describing my part. It can be anything. Not like my [[Dirty Me]], which is more based on real situations, but a world where anything can happen.

Anyone like this idea? If so, please leave a comment on my talk page --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:21, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

==The Twin Empires==
I have this idea that I wish to turn into a story. It takes place in a fantasy world as you control a character of either gender with their own skills, backgrounds and endings. The story is about a great war between two great superpowers: The Empire of Glendia and The Ministry of Zuellni. The war lasted a few decades but in the end, both sides signed a peace treaty separating the continent of Glacia between the two superpowers. After a few years of peace. A group called "Ouroboros" along with the other problems such as the Fuerzan Bandits has begun to wreak havoc around the Ministry of Zuellni. The Ministry assumed that the group called "Ouroboros" came from the Empire and thus, is preparing for another war. Will you let the war continue or let the continent plunge into another age of chaos? What is the group called "Ouroboros" and what are their real motives? You start out in the hometown of the character you chose. As you progress, you'll eventually meet other characters, join a guild and compete in the annual Guild Wars and bring honor to your guild or foil the plan and destroy the group called Ouroboros or even join in the ranks of either superpowers and dominate the other. You can also form a party or even form your own guild. '''You can also add your own characters just send me the detail of the your character and wait for my approval'''. (Please look at the preset character for what to send)
Here are the preset characters:

'''Name''': Raiou 
'''Gender''': Male 
'''Age''': 19 
'''Hometown''': Soddon (Ministry of Zuellni) 
'''Abilities''': Skills of a master assassin in which he learned when he was a child and mysterious skill in which he does not know how to activate. 
'''Guild''': None 
'''Characteristics''': A boy with black spiky hair and amber eyes. Raiou tends to be quiet and serious and always gets to the point. He's not someone who is easily angered and will try to finish a fight as quickly as possible. He wields 2 blades. He mainly uses time magic. 
'''Background''': During the Great War, his hometown is destroyed and he was taken up by an assassins' guild and at the age of 7, he was given the title "Black Wolf". After a failed attempt to assassinate Edgar, the hero of the Ministry of Zuellni. The guild has sent assassins in order to kill Raiou for his failure but Edgar managed to defeat them and decided to take Raiou as his adopted son and the adopted brother of Ritz. After the incident, for some reason, Raiou has lost his memories of his childhood.

'''Name''': Ritz 
'''Gender''': Female 
'''Age''': 19 
'''Hometown''': Soddon 
'''Guild''': None 
'''Characteristics''': A girl with long violet hair and red eyes. Unlike Raiou, Ritz tends to be cheerful, forceful and will try to finish a mission without a bloodshed as much as possible. She is also easily agitated. She fights with a sword like whip called an urumi and can use healing magic but mainly uses offensive magic. 
'''Background''': Her mother died during the war prompting Ritz to practice the whip-sword and follow her father's footsteps. During the peaceful years, Edgar has brought Raiou to the family as an adoptive son, much to Ritz dismay but soon they got along. With Raiou training with the twin katanas and Ritz training with the urumi, both form a formidable pair. Ritz has developed lingering feelings for Raiou and wishes to know his pass. 

'''Name''': Zandarth 
'''Gender''': Male 
'''Age''': 47 
'''Hometown''': Glendia 
'''Guild''': None 
''''''Characteristics''': Tall, bulky, Black hair but graying from old age. Dark colored skin. Has a great sense of humor and doesn't take most matters seriously,but can also be stern when he feels necessary. Master swordsman and a brilliant tactician and strategist. Carries a black longsword cursed with forgotten dark magic, always wears a full suit of armor minus a helmet. Emperor of Glendia.
'''Background''': As the Emperor of Glendia and the created the peace treaty, Zandarth doesn't want another war between the two Empires. But should war be waged,he is ready. Zandarth created the treaty 19 years ago after his newborn daughter, Xana was kidnapped. He never found her, and he was so depressed that he couldn't focus on the war, thus he create created the peace treaty between Glendia and Zuellni, giving him time to find his daughter in peace. He has been given a new clue to her whereabouts... On the day she was kidnapped kidnapped, a farmer saw someone dressed in a black cloak running south from the castle towards Soddon. He hopes to find his next clue there. 
Note: I could accept some names for the different town and villages and names of different characters. I'm also accepting guilds since I'm still planning one. Criticism is accepted. 

[[User:Darkus123|Darkus123]] 1/11/2014

==Super Mario!==
A CYOA where you control Mario and explore Mario World! You can either do the classic 1-1, 1-2 etc... or go 'out of the game' and Explore! You like? Roaming is awesome!
Status Health would be like 'Small', 'Big' or any Powerup. Level would be 1-1, 1-2 etc.
MP would be blank. Equipment may be misc objects Mario Gets!
EDIT: Or I could use <nowiki> {{SexRompStatus|Location=|Health=|MP=|Level=}}</nowiki>

[[User:Goombob|Goombob]] 20:00, 7 April 2013 (UTC)

==Stone Angel==

So I have this idea that I want to turn into a story. I've decided to call it " Stone Angel" because the story and the main character are involved with the title. So it takes place in this so-called " utopian" society where poverty, crime and chaos is common and the streets are actually safer than your own home. Think of the Tribe combined with 1984 and four outcasts want to survive in the society but it isn't an easy job. These four outcasts have names but no real background which I'll leave to you but they all share two things in common: they're fed up with how their lives are and they want to start fresh and clean- and fast. The problem? Nobody may know them but everybody could be looking for them. Trading, crime, work, school- anything's really possible in the society.
At least it is as long as you keep away from the "guards". Other than that, roam around to your heart's content. Cop to criminal, from beggar to billionare. Angel to devil,light to dark. It's your choice in the society.

[[User:blackknight45|blackknight45]] 16 March 2013

==An Adventure==
I suggest a genuine adventure story worthy of the title [[An Adventure]]. Since the birth of this idea I've dreamed of a rogue-like character that has no known history but has everything to become. Who he becomes is your choice.
The world is based in a medieval fantasy with dragons, dwarves, trolls(with their bridges), and other mythical creatures that add to the setting. Think of it as a mix of the worlds of Runescape and Minecraft. There is also an additional layer of distant and legendary places. Sky islands, the Dwarven fortresses, and the fabled edge of the world and what lies beyond it. Trading over the sea, sky or land are there for the character to immerse himself in or completely ignore. He can become a thriving tradesman or a pirate of the sky if he so chooses.
The people of the land range from magical to industrious to cultured. All have deep beliefs in myths and fantasies that you can adventure after in attempt to discover. In the surreal expanse there are evil sorcerers and good wizards waging a mysterious war over the continuous good or bad existence of the land. To many they is only a myth.
As this character travels he discovers his name, quests (to either complete or disrupt), and a new world never been discovered before. Hero or Demon. Baron or Pirate. The future is yours to discover and create.

No adventure ends.

[[An Adventure|Start Here.]]

I would like one story-line to take him to a city where he finds his way onto a skyship. He works up the ranks, meets a wizard, and becomes a captain that traverses the land and discovers the undiscovered to assist the wizard in saving the land from '''EVIL'''.
Here is a reference to art that somewhat matches the style I'm after >

[[User:Syberiyxx|Syberiyxx]] 00:54, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Wow. You just pitched an amazing concept for a Fantasy MMORPG. If you want this to work though, I suggest you don't have a character selection page, and only have one character. It makes writing the story much easier to handle, as your scope for your adventure is huge. You should also have a starting quest, or 'Adventure', a simple one at first, such as fetching something from a land not far. Then let the reader ''ease'' into the more difficult sections.

To keep it less confusing, don't make side-adventures, or if you do, don't have a lot of them. Lastly, don't make the combat system (if there is any) too robust, this is an CYOA, not Turn-Based RPG. Anyway, love the general idea. I hope to read your story soon!

--[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 01:26, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Thankyou!! Okay, I've decided to give the character a name(Argoth) and have given him a quest right at the beginning. My plan is for anyone to be able to contribute. If you read the story and find a place where you would make a different choice than he did, you can create a new option for him and, if you so choose, write what happens in it. Eventually it will lead back to the main quest, or, if it is a major and interesting change, I will consider letting it be an entirely new branch to the story.

I will not be around to edit this forever though. Around the end of the year I will leave and be gone for (at least) two years. If anyone likes the theme and wants to continue as well as moderate this story, let me know.

[[User:Syberiyxx|Syberiyxx]] 22:51, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

It is a great idea but it is something that would require alot of work I read it so far you should expand further but that plot you wrote about above would require a full time writer

From a Random Bored Writer.(Love the idea though)

==Vampires Vs. Werewolfs :]==
alright so, i have an idea were in the begining of my story, Vampires Vs. Werewolfs, the vampires and werewolfs live in peace, until one night a child is born, (you are the child) that will supposedly kill off the other race. you have to lead your clan, (vamp./werewolf, its ur choice), to victory in a deadly battle for life. p.s dont expect it to be too gory!!
<3 peeta.luvr

==Badlands==

I've been working on a story about Australia in the future hit by nuclear war, think fallout meets mutant koalas. With lots of gore and sex :D The more people who help out would be awesome. give it a looky loo and tell me what you think :) [[Badlands]]

I took a read at it and here's what I think of it as of this moment... It's just a sex story. Except with Australians from the country talking crap. It would be awesome if you could make this an action adventure story, that's what I thought it was going to be anyway. I'd like to say though that it is a wonderful premise. Nuclear War, animals mutating, human's having to start over. Not that I've never heard of this idea before, but I'm always interested in those. So it's a great idea, I'd just like it not to be 'just another sex story'. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

I agree. --[[User: Cyclops|Cyclops]] 4 April 2012

==Celebrities!==
I'm sure a lot of people would love to engage in an open world CYOA, similar to the likes of Rampage or Smutty Sex Romp, but in a Hollywood environment. Hollywood Romp fails in this regard due to it being very specific for who you are playing as, and it is geared for one particular story. What we need is a story where we can have multiple selections straight from the start, both playing as various celebrities, and possibly paparazzi, stalkers, body guards, or tourists as well! And of course, completely open for editing.
Perhaps putting the celebrities into categories right away would help. Such as 'Movie Stars' 'Singers/Band' 'Tv Actors' Or even the most basic, 'male' and 'female' celebrity choices.

== [[Crimes Which FAIL]] ==
It's a simple storyline where only one crime can be carried out that you get away with but you get a horrible ending in all others. Looking for co-writer to help as I have a major exam coming up next year, so I can't edit stories often, and I have to revise.My next school hangs in the balance, so if someone could take over I'd be grateful. It's on the Main Page 'C' area (Singapore)
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 13:56, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

== God ==
So I have an idea. I've been thinking of a story I could start for a while and this is it. I'll probably start quite about by myself first, but I want to know if anyone else would be interested in it. I won't start a story of my own unless I'm sure others would contribute.

So basically, you are a god. You need to make people worship you. You go about it many different ways; go old testament and kill everyone, go Greek and sex everything, start wars with others gods or make deals with them, etc. Later I might add new ages like futuristic and medieval, but I think going primitive (caveman) might be best start. I might add different types of gods as well. God of fire, wood, dinner plates, whatever the hell you want. So anyone think it's a good idea, or be willing to work on it?

-Okay, so maybe you choose the God you want to be and gain RP(Reputation Points) and give ranks such as

God of wood

RP:1 Like, ten obsessive people, all woodsmen

RP:50 Give thanks whenever they burn firewood, nothing else

Rp:250 Many a parent thinks you were the significant other.

Or maybe you can split it?

RP: General knowledge of you
Reputation Points

IP:How much you effect lives
Influence Points

TP:Whether you are thanked for gifts
Thankfulnesss Points

Try a system.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 06:17, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

I like the idea! Instead of Reputation Points. Just leave it as 'Reputation' and then beside it range in severity from 'Heavenly' to 'Horrific'. You can than implement such points as 'Fear/Praise Points', the more of those they have, the more likely they will do your willing. Such as, take over another country, or attack another religion. I don't think I could help you at this time though. I still have to finish my current project [[Remember]], and some very important tests are coming up for me so I can't be writing all the time. Once those are done (which will be some time), I will be happy to work with you and write up this story. I suggest you start it off as soon as possible, then show it to me so I can have a look and suggest what should be changed. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23 October 2011

Anyway, what're you going to call it? Also, maybe it would be a scale, so one end would have well, heavenly, and the other could be the Horrific. Decisions will change the scale and the scale will provide actions. So if you're really near the horrific side, you can show acts of kindness if you want. Perhaps you have a status of how widespread it is. ie: Reclusive Religion, Holy High-Up,Leading Light. You should probably start now. I can co-write and as he said, [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] can halp too. Three way writing! Any ideas for Actions?

Merge Self with ____

Agree to live in the same Era with ___

Try to destroy ___'s reputation

And you need to put a letter and a / or : it simplifies the story, and stops the overlapping of pages. Click [[Die]] and see what I mean.

[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 13:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Who's the third writer? Just wanted to know. I'm not going to start the story, more like I will just occaisionally add pages to move the story forward. Also, we'll need some sort of template for this at the bottom of every page. Do you happen to know how to make templates? Otherwise, we could just manually type it in the bottom.

As for the name of the story, I wouldn't have a clue. Perhaps, Eternal Greatness, The World Is Yours, or just basically, God.

I was also thinking of ways to start off this story. Maybe we could start off with the gods having a meeting, and welcoming the newest recruit (you!). Then, you will be assigned to architect and maintain a new 'Earth'. The first decisions you would make would be about how many superior races would be situated on the world, and which ones would rule it. Then you could enforce upon religions, cause natural disasters, perform miracles, make the Earth move forward in technology, etc.

Then after a certain point (say you reach a 'Heavenly' or 'Horrific' standard of your world), the gods will then host another meeting, in which you will recount all of your actions. If you chose to make it 'Heavenly', you will be applauded and congratulated. Then assigned onto a new world, which will be of a harder difficulty. If you made your Earth, 'Horrific', the other Gods will look upon you like some sort of freak, then cast you out.

That's all my thoughts on this. To sum up: I will love to help, but I will just add pages to move the story forward. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 09:16, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't know who posted it at first.

How about if you're cast out you can turn back and wage war. Also, we could let the God lie, so he would get a new world until one of the other gods find out. Anyway, I don't know either. I've never tried before but I think it was something like Template:Place whatever it was here with the [s and the]s. Oh, and maybe you trick the other gods and try to kill them. Then the Endings could also be classsed. If you do great on all your worlds, you get heavenly. Oh, and we could make it if you intervene too much and the race depends on you, you lose. Hmmm, maybe one could be lettting them evolve but guiding them slightly and the other would be shaping them in 5 minutes.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:33, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Sounds great! Uhh, whenever you're ready, begin. Then once I finish with [[Remember]], I'll help out on the story. Just make sure that the intro is interesting. Bad intro, people will leave after the second page!

Hear's what I say the levels are:

*Heavenly
*Holy
*Miraculous
*Savior-esque
*Neutral
*Depressing
*Destructive
*Demonic
*Horrific

You can switch them around or edit some if you want, this is just off the top of my head. Also, let's try not to make to many endings. I know it's called 'Choose Your Own Adventure', but if we limit the amount of endings to say about 3-6, it'd make the workload just a tad easier. The person who originally posted this has most likely gone and left the site. I thought that this was your idea since the first signature that was left was your own. That's why I initially got interested in the concept.

Anyway, start the story whenever you want. I'll come and have a read, then perhaps add a few pages if I have the time. --Heyoeveryone 09:04, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

This is an absolute great idea but it sounds just a bit too much like the game populas(probably incorrect spelling) but just try and tone done the flying between worlds thing that's just my idea

From a writer who doesn't know how to post the link to my name uh i think ->

--[[User:WRITER1234|WRITER1234]] 09:42, 12 March 2013 (UTC)

== Element Help ==
I recently started this project called [[Element]]. Its basically a Turn-based Strategy. Now the problem is that school just resumed(i'm in Australia) so that means less time on that project. If anyone is interested in helping me finish this project. Or even just editing, please do so. Please also be aware that if you cannot do anything that can be rude or offensive, it is a PG game after all. If you haven't already, please click on [[Element]] and if you express interest please go ahead and help this cause.--[[User:Heyoeveryone]] 6:29, 2 Febuary 2011

== High School Sophomore Year ==
I just started a new Adult Story, High School Sophomore Year, and could use some help, mainly with dialogue and details. I'm still working on adding more pages but could use alot of help expanding it! Thanks in advance to all who help!!!! http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/High_School_Sophomore_Year
Loch

==Succubus RPG==
Would anyone want to participate in an RPG with succubi? Either playing as the Succubi or humans. And would it be best to have it novel (free-form) or stat based?--[[User:ChaosLacky|ChaosLacky]] 10:08, 20 March 2010 (UTC)

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participate yes however it seems my writing or something sucks I can help but anything I do would need to be proof read and stat based sounds good--[[user:rhynohyde]]

==Julian==
i got this cool idea where you wake up on a space station with no memory and there doesnt seem to be any people around. The whole place is falling apart, and walls are collapsing and whatever. The ship was actually the last humans from earth, but we had to evacuate earth for some reason, but on the ship somehting went wrong and a bunch of people died. i dunno, just the beginning of an idea, but please give me some ideas if possible.

i also got this other idea, where instead of every option leading to entirely new stories and everything, you start off with a map of the area your going to choose your own adventureize and make every point where you can stand a new page. sort of like a point and click game, only with choose your own adventure. i left a more in depth explination in the discussion part, so look at that to. Also, if certain things in the game are kept track of by the player, on a peice of paper or something. For example, in the story "a knights tale" you could cut down the amount of work significantly by having player's stats kept on paper instead of each class leading to a new page, meaning you could expand much easier and faster.
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==Kawi==
I've been thinking about making a story where you are an international mercenary and you get to choose an organisation to work for. I went as far to make a setting for this story.

This is it so far...

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This story is set in the dystopian future of 2050. You are a mercenary, Jack Templar. You work for whoever pays the highest price. In such an unstable world, you are never short of work.

Here is a brief summary of Jack Templar world

North America- The former superpower was plunged into a second civil war during the 2030â��s. The North and the South are once again at each others throat. Neither side can gain superiority over the other.

Western Europe- Its people have the best standards of living. However, puppet democracies are really controlled by powerful aristocratic families and everyone is under 24 hour surveillance for their â��protectionâ��. Think George Orwellâ��s 1984

Eastern Europe- Individual warlords control the rural areas, and the conflict between them creates many atrocities. Meanwhile, its larger cities have become the red light district of the world as a result of the thriving sex slave trade.

Africa- Any hopes for harmony in Africa are all but destroyed. Old tribal tensions and civil unrest has plunged the continent into unimaginable bloodshed. As a result, most of the worldâ��s military contactors use it as a base of operations.

China and Japan- An uneasy truce exists between the worlds leading military and technological super powers. Their mutually beneficial arrangement makes them a force to be reckoned with. They are suspicious of all foreigners.

[[Jim's Barbeque]]- Prophets of the onset of the most delicious food this universe has ever seen, and fanatics in the ways of beef-fu. The leader is a figure cloaked in the shadowy fumes of teriyaki sauce, and noone has ever seen this wonderous man (or woman????).

South America- Most of the continent is controlled by a dictator. To the people, he is a benevolent revolutionary. Under the surface, he runs the biggest drug operation in the entire world. Resistance forces occupy most of the Amazon.

Russia- The old soviet power has long since shut its door on the rest of the world. Few know what goes on inside the country.

Middle East- Groups of all descriptions squabble over the last oil reserves. The longest wall ever built surrounds the state of Israel. Meanwhile, Palestinians have united and started an organised front against their old enemies.

Australia- An unknown epidemic swept the continent clean of any human habitation. There are many rumours that mutants occupy certain parts of the mainland.

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Sorry. My imagination went a bit crazy.Any thoughts or feedback would be greatly appriciated.

---You've created a world. Not much else. There's no real plot to your idea, or supporting cast, or anything. These things could be forgivable, but your world isn't even that interesting. It's a world spawned by a few exaggerated cliches. North and south start fighting? Over what? Slaves? Japan and China enemies? Whoa how novel. Africa enveloped in civil war? But Europe is controlled by government? Incredible. It'd be more novel to make Africa the strongest united nation in the world, plunge Europe and America into poverty and civil war, then have China and Japan on the move to take over these disputed territories.

And Jack Templar? Might as well call him Buff McWarriorpants. Give him an ordinary name. In order to draw reader immersion and interest, in-fact, it would be best if you made this Jack some deadbeat nobody. One day he's enjoying his life somewhere in the word when it's suddenly usurped from him. He has to learn to survive in a hostile changing world. There, that's a basic idea for a story, one which is well suited for CHOYA. Thanks for enduring my critical comments.--[[User:Anubite|Anubite]] 11:29, 28 November 2008 (PST)

:I'm actually quite interested to see that. Will there be choices for you to make, which would depend on the outcome?--[[User:Ashmount1|Ashmount1]] 00:14, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm fine with the name, to be honest. Like Anubite already said, you've got the world going for you, but now you need the plot that drives it. As a start, you can probably create more than one character who are living in one of the countries. If that's too difficult, I suggest maybe to get Jack to somehow be an agent trying to resolve all these wars and conflicts. That will lead to some heroic action. Then maybe some enemy catches him and drops him off to Australia with those mutants. Now you're headed for a survivalist story. Something like that. But that, of course, is just my opinion.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:46, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

==Jeffthedork==
I've been thinking about a story were: 3 teens are dared to spend the night in a haunted house and they get attacked by gousts and they find secret rooms and stuff like that.

---Good idea. What name and what rating?

---Jeffthdork: Rating = R. Name = Fright.

==Jeffthedork==
I've go another idea: A haunted prison kills it's convicts and it's guards. You would be a guard and have to try to live. The prison would be able to turn on machines by its self and make unreal stuff happen like the back wall of a cell push the inmate in the cell against the cell door, slicing him into many pieces.

-Well, I'd help you, but you do need to create it. Hmm, maybe the manacles clamp onto every part of the prisoner's body and drags him down into a pit. The main stuff can only be prison items, but that gives a lot of room. Maybe the ghosts go into the posessions of people and those try to kill them. So if someone smuggled drugs inside they'd get stung until they faint from drug abuse.

Good Concept, I'd help if it went up.

--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 03:18, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

==NovelOfDoom==
Is this page public?I hope so,cause I'm not sure xD.I had an idea for a story that I couldn't finish.Your a average guy who has a wife and 2 kids.Then all of a sudden this dude calls,saying he has a expert sniper who has a lock on your family,and you gotta go through a bunch of obstacles(involving fighting numerous enimies) assigned by the guy,or else he'll order the sniper to take out your kids and wife.Sorry that was so long :P

Yes, this page is public. And that's not too long for an idea pitch. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:17, 24 August 2008 (PDT)

Jack Frost: That is a really good story idea. (how come I never think of these great story ideas?) Would you mind if I write that story? It sounds excellent. Its just the thing I need.

TheEverLastingTale:Are you talking to me?LOL I'm NovelOfDoom,but sadly,I completely forgot my password,so I ended up making another account,LOL.Jack Frost,I likey that name :D.If you were talking about me,I would be honored if you write that story :D(I'm just guessing that you've been on this site for a long while,LMAO.)

==monkey76==
how about a story where the laws of physics (or reason) don't apply, so the most sensable choice might not work eg: if you ask boss for a raise he explodes and if you kick him he'll give you the ocarina of time.
or is that a bad idea?

Jack Frost: If somebody ever writes that, I hope they put it in the "Nobody Should Read These" section. But, that does sound like it would be a good story. That also seems like a great idea for a story.

Trar: I need help writing my story, [[Would_You%2C_Could_You%2C_Fuck_A_Goat%3F!|Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]. Every page has to have an option at the bottom of it leading to[[Die]], ALWAYS, no matter what. Also, the player will NEVER actually fuck a goat. That would be bad.

TheNeverEndingTale:This is getting annoying ><.I keep forgetting my password,so I ended up making yet ANOTHER account(I'm NovelOfDoom and TheEverLastingTale.) I have another idea.You live in (whatever country you want) where the President is reall corrupt,so you take it upon yourself to take him out.

==TGLS==
You are Joe Jones an unimportant Sales Representative on a Dystopian Earth in 2230 but times are changing.
The Nations are as follows:

â�¢ Allied States of America: The remaining states have allied each other together in order to weather the attacks of revolutionaries.
â�¢ Confederate States of America: After the economic collapse of 2184 in order maintain the industrial base of the former confederate states they readopted slavery and war was declared by the Allied States of America.
â�¢ Microsoft Computer Corporation: One of the only Non-Asian Corporations left Microsoft Computer Corporation declared Sovereignty in 2185 and negotiated a treaty with the Confederate States of America.
â�¢ The Obsessive Cult: The Obsessive Cult declared Sovereignty in 2084 at the same time as the 2834 nuclear reactor incident, and has put a xenophobic position of all the citizens.
â�¢ The European Union: The European Union has been put in instability because of pressure of the Soviet Union & the Ottoman Empire.
â�¢ The Soviet Union: Russia reinstated communism on the factors of the economic collapse, communist partyâ��s pressure, newly assimilated china, and the American Civil War.
â�¢ The Ottoman Empire: The Ottoman Empire was formed when the Turkish Ousted the American garrisons from major middle east oil resources in 2175 and later joined an alliance with the Soviet Union
â�¢ Africa: Africa was leading the world in stability, technology, and economy but after the 2834 nuclear reactor incident it was completely crippled though there may be some survivors.
â�¢ Others: Japan, South America, Australia

Early Plot Threads
Early Plot Threads could be:
â�¢ Trying to move up in your career
â�¢ Further Education
â�¢ Emigration
And later plot lines would be developed over time.

==''Redage1''==
Hey all! Just wanted to say, The Life of a School Kid is online! It's public, but if you write a really dumb choice, I'll delete it. Also, if you write a section, please include (This section write by ---)And don't delete anyone else's work! thanks! http://editthis.info/Choose_Your_Own_Adventure/The_Life_of_a_School_Kid (Link to the story)

==Reecer6==
I have an idea. You are a kid named David who wakes up in a haunted mansion and must get out. it'll be slightly RPGish, as you'll gain Health, XP, ect. while facing creatures from spiders to Ginormous Screamer faces. He'll also have a fear meter. You'll want to keep it low to beat enemies easier, but keep it high to destroy cracked walls ect. There'll be 2 passages in most every room.

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==Reporko: i have two ideas....==
one is where you are kicked out of your home by your girlfriend and are really depressed. you walk into an alley and discover you have secret powers.

The other one is where its like in post future like 2011 or 2015 or something and like the world is collapsing and people are surviving when the apocalypse and after. Tell me what you think.

:A little cliche, but maybe because you're just brushing the top of some even better ideas. Dig deeper! :) -[[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 14:38, 19 October 2009 (PDT)
==Olympian Quest==
Does anyone agree to this: This is about a quest that takes you to Mount Olympus and find a stolen trident that the greek god, Hades hid.--[[User:Greenlande23|Greenlande23]] 15:24, 4 June 2009 (PDT)

Go for it, tell me when you finish most of it. --[[User:Storylover141|Storylover141]] 18:00, 19 September 2011 (PDT)

I see no reason to object to someone writing such a story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:01, 4 June 2009 (PDT)

Seems like a good idea, in fact i think you should let it fly! --[[User:Megadeth1|Megadeth1]] 17:34 23 june 2009 (PDT)

==Fixing the red ring of death==
I had an idea to make a funny adventure of your x-box 360 geting the red ring of death, and you try to fix it. I just need to see if people think its a good idea.

Ring of Death eh? The old Ring of Death... well, I guess it wouldn't be really funny if you make it like, 'you restart your Xbox360. YOU WIN!' That would be lame. To me, a good story based on real life always has a kick-butt fighting scene, a huge plot twist, an evil wizard, Russia and it's 11 time zones, Shaka Zulu, and a Jamaican guy. So, if you include all of those, then yes, it would be an EPIC story, like mines. Play it here--> [[An Epic Adventure]] --[[Forsak3n1]] 16:33 August 6, 2009

Way to whore out your adventure Forsaken. [[User:Jakeinator|Jakeinator]] 23:09, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

==Castle II==
This is a scenario that I have done verbally, and want to put on here. It is a puzzle/rpg/type thing, with a plot and many different options. You explore a castle, trying to find the person who cursed your hometown. You encounter many dangers, monsters, conflicts, and other action-like things. Is this a good idea?
~[[User:Ebony949|Ebony949]] 14:32, 2 August 2009

It sounds like something with potential. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 08:11, 2 August 2009 (PDT)

==Badassery==
I'm new, so sorry if I edited this wrong. I'm just copying how other people are editing this. Basically my idea for the story is you start off normally. You're a man, kids, wife etc etc. Then out of NOWHERE, some guy tries to kill you! So you head off on a quest to try and find out who and why they tried to kill you. For fun, I will also put in some hidden random stuff in the story. Slipping in a internet meme, or a video game quote. The unique parts of the story(hence the title) will be the BADASS moments. Where the character will start off a combo(for lack of a better word), and you choose how to continue it. Some will advance the combo, and some will leave you flat on your face. I will try my hardest to put as much pages and effort into this story before summer vacation ends. Good idea?

~[[User:CheeseToast|CheeseToast]] 6:58PM, August 12th 2009 (GMT)

Very good idea, I'm a bit of a fan of action heroes myself. I'm also new, so, I'll try and do my best to help you out. --Vet 01:32, 31 July 2010 (UTC)

==Comics Unrated==
Much like the Star Wars and Star Trek, adventures, you choose characters and have sex, fight, kill, curse, etc. Basically way to express the comic heroes as if they were more like people and not heroes. There would be a set story for each hero. I even thought at the beginning you must choose DC or Marvel, and then it starts. I think a lot of people would like this.

~[[User:Carmenlover|Carmenlover]] 3:17 AM, August 15, 2009 (PST)

==Battle royal xtreme==
I'm also new so sorry if i edited wrong.
My idea is that there is a big battle royal, but instead of weapons, there are powers like wind, water, fire, earth and lightning. If someone dies they are respawened into a waiting room until the fight is over, but you lose and the story ends.
You can chose your power at the start. So please if someone could make this as i'd probably suck, CHEERS!

:If you get game over, why can't you just be dead then? Makes it a little more important that you win. If the point of it is so you're fighting the same people over and over, that might get a little boring. Maybe the people running the royale have a ton of extra people locked up as backup, and just replace the dead ones so the fight goes on after every round. You could slip in some character development, maybe it's like a tournament, so there can be other people fighting that you meet that you don't immediately have to kill. Or maybe it's not a tournament at all, just entertainment for a twisted society. Gladiator, but with magic instead of swords. -[[User:NightChime|NightChime]] 14:38, 19 October 2009 (PDT)

==Digimon Adventure?==
Honestly, I've seen a few Pokemon related adventures but none of them, ironically, are 'Digimon'-related adventures when there's a big freaking series called "Digimon Adventure". lmao Sorry, I just have to point that out. And, I pointed that out because I have an idea for one. It has quite a long plot, so I am just going to try and summarize it down here.

Similar to DC Comics' Earth Prime, this is what our Earth is like in my story, with the Digital Worlds you see in the anime being real planetary systems in parallel dimensions. The origins of those systems are naturally related to computers (again), with the creator of the first ever Digital World, called "D-World Neo", being specifically the ABC (Atanasoff-Berry Computer) and its shaper (having to build upon the foundations created by the ABC) being the ENIAC (Electronic Numerical Integrator And Computer). That first D-World is the one you see in the Digimon X-Evolution movie. Four other 'D-Worlds' were both created ''and'' shaped by more advanced Personal Computers. They were then called Alpha (Tamers' Digital World), Beta (Frontier), Gamma (Adventure), and Delta (Savers). Now here comes the plot. (There's a plot?!) Yes, even among all these documentary-style aspects, there ''is'' a plot.

Some of you might know about Millenniummon from the video game called ''Brave Tamer''. He... or I guess it's 'it' (since there are no genders among Digimon) controls time and space. He then turned into an alternate 'Ultimate Form' (do know that I'm using original Japanese-translated terms here instead of the dub terms) of his called Zeed Millenniummon. He was stopped by a kid named Akiyama Ryo, fused into one with a Digimon called Monodramon and turned into a single Digi Egg. Now, having done that, Zeed's data naturally is inside Monodramon, and though that allows him to evolve into his 'Complete Form' called Cyberdramon, that data also makes him very violent.

After some years of control, Cyberdramon finally caves in to the influence and there's nothing that its partner, Ryo, can do about it. Cyberdramon runs away, seeking to return to his 'Deus Ex' Zeed Millenniummon body, seek revenge upon Ryo and, of course, bring chaos to the Worlds. But, to do that, it needs an energy source to evolve into the 'Ultimate Form', and a deceitful Demon Lord Digimon claims that it just happens to have that energy. Barbamon offers Zeed a deal that Zeed will have to serve Barbamon for an eternity should Barbamon successfully return Zeed to its true form. An eternity is nothing to someone who controls time, so Zeed agrees. Boom. Zeed evolves from Cyberdramon to Zeed again, but Barbamon backstabs him by bounding Zeed as its very own mind-slave.

To restrain Zeed's omnipotent powers, it has these fractal-code chains wrapped around its body, of which the lower-half is trapped in a crystal. To remove both of these, Barbamon needs Zeed to absorb the souls of 'pure children' and their 'pure Digimon' partners. So, it summons you and a few other kids to Digital World Gamma (which was depicted in ''Digimon Adventure'' in our world) and it begins your 'training' into pure souls. Sounds cheesy, but there is a whole lot more to it after Zeed's chains are removed.

What do you think?

--[[User:OminousFlare|OminousFlare]] 23:55, 23 September 2009 (PDT)

==Friday Night==

This story is about you and a group of friends deciding that Fridays are now the day that you all smoke pot and just see what happens.

The first Friday of this new tradition and:

1.Tugboat (Greg Tubot) is caught by the police driving without a license. You and your friends are desperately trying to hide your pot while the police are getting the tow truck to tow Tugboat's car. In a last attempt, you all run to the car and take back roads which can either save you or kill you in the end.

2. After being late, you realize that your friends started smoking without you. While inside, you begin to watch movies and listen to music. After a few hours, you hear moans outside. Thinking it's Randy (whom disappeared for the last 2 hours) you laugh it off and pretend to be scared. Once Zack decides to look outside he shouts "look at these fucks trying to scare us", as he points and laughs at the zombies heading your way. You, not even getting your first inhale of smoke yet, realize that it isn't a prank by Randy and in fact, it is the Zombie Apocalypse. After a brief flashback, you remember that you and your friends have read the "Zombie Survival Guide". Once you remember this, you thank god you were in Ed's house for he has gotten prepared for this. (most up to this point is one set of possible events and it will be continued).

3. You try to break a record and smoke your own weight in Marijuana. After you and your friends pool money for that massive amount of pot, you begin to smoke it. After a hour, you pass out and can vaguely remember what happened. All you see is a blonde nurse and a redhead doctor. The blonde has a decent size of tits where the redhead has a pair of huge tits. (from here on out you fuck your way out of the hospital).

==MacGyver==
You are faced with all sorts of traps, hazards, all sorts of dangerous situations, but since you are MacGyver, you can handle pretty much anything. Could have branches for both the silly, building a bomb out of pocket lint and his own eyelashes MacGyver, and the serious, real human being who's just highly trained, intelligent, and resourceful MacGyver. There could be a plot involving terrorists or some other disgustingly American story that needs a capable hero, to honor the original series. Would work well in super-short, individual situations you need to get out of, short stories, like the length of an episode, all the way up to an epic novel length story with plots, conspiracies, and probably Russians. And of c

==Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf==
I know it sounds stupid, but I want to make a adventure based off a song by the name of "Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf". I found the song very entertaining, and I think it'd be cool if I could make a story based off the basic concept of the song.
I plan to use the information the songs gives you, while adding different endings and backgrouind story. So basically, the plot in the song will be the true ending, while there will be other endings you can follow.

Please give your opinion on the rating as well. The gore will not be very descriptive, I'm still at a very young age.

Good idea or way too weird? --[[User:Thoughtless|Thoughtless]] 21:02, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

== Elements of the Earth ==
Hi there, I'm new to this wiki and I have started a gamebook with the [[Elements of the Earth|same name]] of the title. It has just started, and any help would be appreciated.

--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 07:37, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

== A Lightbulb Pops on my Head ==
I have a good idea, and anyone can take this idea since I am working on EOE(see above).

It's about three scientists, Albert Einstien, Issac Newton and Thomas Edison. They three meet together, the third world war erupts and the government(for some reason) has banned scientists. In the starting, you choose the scientist you play as.

Not really good, but it seems good to me.

--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 07:37, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

I'm guessing that they somehow invented a Time Machine as well before hand? Perhaps it could be taken into a really Sci-Fi direction by making the adventure all about your chosen scientist either:

*Stopping the War from beginning through Time Travel

*Destroying everyone through Time Travel (and other means)

*Brokering Peace between countries

There is also the fact that Scientists are banned, so this could be interesting.

[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 23:21, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

21 Sept 2012: Sounds like Isaac Asimov meets Ayn Rand!

== Connection page ==
I'm new to the site, but I just thought of an idea, and I wanted to see what people think of it.

My idea is to have a "story" that will lead into many/all the other stories. The user can start there, and follow several links to decide what story they would be reading.

For example, the first question could be "Are you interested in family-friendly stories, or adult stories?"
--[[User:Yoohoo2|Yoohoo2]] 16:32, 10 January 2013 (UTC)

==Conviction==
You (A character of your choosing) and your teenage friends become victims of a psychopathic genius with a dark secret past to shiver your spine. This man (soon to find out who) has set up small games of challenges, puzzles, traps, and obstacles for you to play. This abandoned facility is filled by an unknown presences. You'll uncover the dark story behind this place and the mad men. With how they are all connected. Will you sacrifice anyone to win? Will you try to save everyone? Will you take the next corner? What will you do? Only one question remains in these halls? Will you win the game? The insanity begins here.

Playable Players:

Marcy- Popular girl with some degrees in journalism.

Jonas- A boy who has an interest in solving mysteries.

Johnathan- The jock.

Candice- A smart girl that loves puzzles.

Sarah- A popular girl who has a history with Jonas.

Skyler- A Gothic boy who has an interest with dark unknown secrets.

Michael- A popular kid who knows leadership.

Penny- A sister of Michael and an athlete.

Jeremy- A brother of Johnathan who has in interest in electronics and programming.

Dog - Jonas pet (non-playable)

Objects in the Story:

-Renown points- The currency of the story and can be used to help you in mysteries.

-Interactive Characters- Other characters who are victims of the mad man. Including others who are insane as the mad men that lives in the facility.

-Leadership points- You have to maintain a balance of leadership points (100) to keep order among your other friends and keep them loyal in
each of your choices. If you have a low amount, they'll start questioning your every moves and may have an increase chance of leaving you.

-Side Quests- Complete side quests for interactive players for renown points and more details behind the facility.

-Weapons- Find certain weapons or buy certain weapons to defend yourself against mad men, creatures, and other hostiles.

-Players (Friends)- Interact with your friends to maintain leadership points. Also gain their trusts as well so you don't have to loose much leadership points. You can learn more about them when talking to them. Remember, all players are valuable. They all have advantages in coming obstacles built by the mad genius.

-Item bars- In the story, every character has health, MP (Levels, experiences gain), trust (leadership points), panic levels (best avoid), and a backpack (storage for main objects, side objects, weapons, and certain objects only available for certain characters).

-Entertainment Level- Keep the mad men genius level entertained so you don't have to deal with harder obstacles, hostiles, puzzles, and any hostile environments. So keep him entertained by completing these little games by him or any devilish actions.

-Good and Evil- Two bars that keeps track on your person. Either your a good person or an evil one by your choices.

-Unknown Presence- A dark unknown presence that dwells in this facility. All you know about them is that they are hostile and demonic.

Note: I'm trying to figure out on how to work on this. I'm stuck on my first one. So I added this story to the idea pitches for anyone to work on or help me on in the future sometime. Just contact me first. Contact Catpeople on create your own adventures.

==Candle Light==
It's a small little story I thought of basing it off of children story books.

You are on a quest in a fantasy mystical world that is full of danger, light, darkness, happiness, and morale lesson in each of your choices. In a search for the last candle light. This candle light is a source of power that is desired by both good and evil. Anyone who obtains this candle light can bend reality in their images. You are a peasant of the low lands. Once your farm land is endanger by tax mans, dark creatures, bandits, and your own family. Even the sickness threatens your family. So the only way to save them is to go on the journey in search of he last candle light. Will you take the journey?

Objects in the Story-

Good points- If you do good and noble actions, you'll be rewarded with good points. A currency in the story.

Evil points- If you do devilish and greedy actions, you'll be rewarded with evil points. Another currency in the story.

Companions- Depending on your actions and deeds. You'll be encountering by characters that can accompany you on your quest.

Side Story- Small side stories on the side of the story. Once completed you'll be rewarded with (Good or evil) points and any equipment.

Mariuk or Urgash- Two pets you can earn during your quest. Mariuk is a dog with golden fair. It is a symbol for all that is good. Urgash is a small flying dragon with red and black scales. It is a symbol for all that is evil. Either pets will give you beneficial powers to help you in the story.

Level- Level up to gain more powers in the darkness or the light.

Love Interest- Pursue relationships with companions or default characters.

Equipment and Backpack- Any equipments that you gain, buy, or find will be loaded in the backpack. Including weapons, armor, and potions.

Health Bars- To keep track of your health.

Note: I'm trying to figure out on how to work on this. I'm stuck on my first one. So I added this story to the idea pitches for anyone to work on or help me on in the future sometime. Just contact me first. Contact Catpeople on create your own adventures.

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