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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;gt;Add new comments below.  Do not add new comments to the archive.&lt;br /&gt;
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Goohoojoo:  Thanks for cleaning up some of the beginning of my new, back-connected story arc for Rampage.  It's still a serious WIP and some of it isn't filled in yet.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bahawk: Got your message about adding title to each page. How do I go back to all the submitted pages and add title to each page?&lt;br /&gt;
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Silentman97: Do what now? I'm at this so what am I supposed to do? OKAY!!! Dear GOd my Computer's been acting funny with this website so I've had a little trouble please get off my back I'll try to fix it okay? but just today it froze up three times.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey bud, how have you been. Remember me?&lt;br /&gt;
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I got a question for you. I found a different create your own story site. I am writing my own story on it. I was wondering if it is okay or not okay to post a link to said site on my profile so that readers of my work here can find things I write elsewhere? thx for the reply in advance&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 14:48, 26 October 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you delete my pages I created?  I need to do a major revision and would prefer to not have history.  Thanks in advance. -Terrytens&lt;br /&gt;
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Great thanks. Yea, definitely let me know if you think of any stories that would be good for it. From the ones I've read, I think Heyoeveryone's Remember might be the best option. I'm probably going to record in about a week, so let me know before then if you think of any other good options.  -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). You seem to be very active on and passionate about this site. I was wondering if you can help me find a well written CYOA story with lots of dialogue. I'd be willing to discuss this idea if you have any input. Thanks! -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to ask what happened to the main page and the reason for it. I was gone for a week, then BAM! A template for the featured, only several stories available directly. What is the criterion for the stories to be displayed on the main page, anyways?&lt;br /&gt;
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thanks for the advice i'm a big fan of your work your a really big part of this website&lt;br /&gt;
Seth Xozen&lt;br /&gt;
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yo!! u just deleted my story!!!!!y???&lt;br /&gt;
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thank you!!!  i should be able to do it. i'm just a terrible speller. did u make this website??? this should be  my last post 'cuz i don't want annoy u any more than i have... :]&lt;br /&gt;
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peeta.luvr&lt;br /&gt;
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i tried to catogorize a page on 'Vampires Vs. Werewolfs' but it didn't work... sorry once again :] &lt;br /&gt;
peeta.luvr&lt;br /&gt;
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Last thing, you respond Fast!!!!p.s i understand if want me to stop posting stuff, sorry 'bout that. :]&lt;br /&gt;
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peeta.luvr again&lt;br /&gt;
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i have a question, my appologies for not asking before on my previous comment, but do you have to read All of the stories posted on this website?? :]&lt;br /&gt;
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i'm soooo sorry i ignored your first message!! i didn't know what it ment to &amp;quot;catagorize a page&amp;quot; and i still don't know, so i was wondering if you could help by telling me how to!!! please and thanks :] &lt;br /&gt;
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.&lt;br /&gt;
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.&lt;br /&gt;
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL&lt;br /&gt;
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL. &lt;br /&gt;
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]&lt;br /&gt;
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I &amp;quot;fix&amp;quot; the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/&amp;lt;page&amp;gt; to /CYOA/Luka/&amp;lt;page&amp;gt;. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD &lt;br /&gt;
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Also: apologies; please don't hate me.&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the &amp;quot;Trolling in the Mall&amp;quot; page in SSR. Just a heads up.&lt;br /&gt;
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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....&lt;br /&gt;
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i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident  and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.&lt;br /&gt;
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still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me. &lt;br /&gt;
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anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people. &lt;br /&gt;
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-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey&lt;br /&gt;
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel.  (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.)    [[User:DickingCream]]&lt;br /&gt;
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: I've gotten a message like this as well.  The story was tagged, as far as I could tell - as it was a story ending, I made sure that it linked back to the original story.  What exactly did I forget to do?  [[User:Wonder Boy]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?&lt;br /&gt;
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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so..  I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language) &lt;br /&gt;
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It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What do you mean 'title of the story?'&lt;br /&gt;
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-- Apollo.&lt;br /&gt;
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Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}&lt;br /&gt;
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.&lt;br /&gt;
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up &amp;quot;Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?&lt;br /&gt;
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-- Apollo&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?&lt;br /&gt;
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Starforce&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?&lt;br /&gt;
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I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?&lt;br /&gt;
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--Starforce&lt;br /&gt;
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Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.&lt;br /&gt;
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DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.&lt;br /&gt;
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--MaxJose &lt;br /&gt;
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dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.&lt;br /&gt;
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My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.&lt;br /&gt;
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*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont  have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello.  I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.&lt;br /&gt;
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*&lt;br /&gt;
Thank you very much.  The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...&lt;br /&gt;
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2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story.  I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it.  I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?&lt;br /&gt;
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== iWant Sex ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about.  However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going.  What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pokesex ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD&lt;br /&gt;
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==Pokesex==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads up about including the titles, I'll be sure to do that from now on.  You might be able to see through my edit history (on pokesex) my many, many failed attempts at fixing the previous pages.  How should I go about it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay sorry, I will be posting complete pages from now on. It was my first time editing, so I wasn't sure how things worked.&lt;br /&gt;
-Thisisme&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry, this is my first story, and I down really know all about how to categorize pages besides putting category at the bottom-abcdefg&lt;br /&gt;
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== Uncategorized pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know how to categorise stories either. Sorry! That's ok if you edit or delete the page that you think is not correctly written!  --[[User: Lovetoread|Lovetoread]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks Platypus!! Now I know how to categorise! ^_^&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...Plat..can you please tell me which pages I should categorize? I'm sure that every page has been categorized...If the gamebook is Elements of the Earth, can you leave it in the abandoned stories? I'll get back to it later.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Story titles in page titles ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I disagree with your assertion that I should avoid using good page and link structure simply because other authors are not using them.  These structure guidelines are outlined on the main page under the heading &amp;quot;Instructions&amp;quot; subheading &amp;quot;How to add a page&amp;quot;.  Do you feel that it is more important to keep page titles consistent even if they are equally readable, or that we should avoid the possibility of stepping on other stories?&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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Goohoojoo:  Thanks for cleaning up some of the beginning of my new, back-connected story arc for Rampage.  It's still a serious WIP and some of it isn't filled in yet.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bahawk: Got your message about adding title to each page. How do I go back to all the submitted pages and add title to each page?&lt;br /&gt;
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Silentman97: Do what now? I'm at this so what am I supposed to do? OKAY!!! Dear GOd my Computer's been acting funny with this website so I've had a little trouble please get off my back I'll try to fix it okay? but just today it froze up three times.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey bud, how have you been. Remember me?&lt;br /&gt;
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I got a question for you. I found a different create your own story site. I am writing my own story on it. I was wondering if it is okay or not okay to post a link to said site on my profile so that readers of my work here can find things I write elsewhere? thx for the reply in advance&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Yihman1|Yihman1]] 14:48, 26 October 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you delete my pages I created?  I need to do a major revision and would prefer to not have history.  Thanks in advance. -Terrytens&lt;br /&gt;
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Great thanks. Yea, definitely let me know if you think of any stories that would be good for it. From the ones I've read, I think Heyoeveryone's Remember might be the best option. I'm probably going to record in about a week, so let me know before then if you think of any other good options.  -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). You seem to be very active on and passionate about this site. I was wondering if you can help me find a well written CYOA story with lots of dialogue. I'd be willing to discuss this idea if you have any input. Thanks! -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to ask what happened to the main page and the reason for it. I was gone for a week, then BAM! A template for the featured, only several stories available directly. What is the criterion for the stories to be displayed on the main page, anyways?&lt;br /&gt;
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thanks for the advice i'm a big fan of your work your a really big part of this website&lt;br /&gt;
Seth Xozen&lt;br /&gt;
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yo!! u just deleted my story!!!!!y???&lt;br /&gt;
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thank you!!!  i should be able to do it. i'm just a terrible speller. did u make this website??? this should be  my last post 'cuz i don't want annoy u any more than i have... :]&lt;br /&gt;
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peeta.luvr&lt;br /&gt;
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i tried to catogorize a page on 'Vampires Vs. Werewolfs' but it didn't work... sorry once again :] &lt;br /&gt;
peeta.luvr&lt;br /&gt;
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Last thing, you respond Fast!!!!p.s i understand if want me to stop posting stuff, sorry 'bout that. :]&lt;br /&gt;
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peeta.luvr again&lt;br /&gt;
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i have a question, my appologies for not asking before on my previous comment, but do you have to read All of the stories posted on this website?? :]&lt;br /&gt;
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i'm soooo sorry i ignored your first message!! i didn't know what it ment to &amp;quot;catagorize a page&amp;quot; and i still don't know, so i was wondering if you could help by telling me how to!!! please and thanks :] &lt;br /&gt;
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.&lt;br /&gt;
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.&lt;br /&gt;
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL&lt;br /&gt;
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL. &lt;br /&gt;
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]&lt;br /&gt;
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I &amp;quot;fix&amp;quot; the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/&amp;lt;page&amp;gt; to /CYOA/Luka/&amp;lt;page&amp;gt;. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD &lt;br /&gt;
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Also: apologies; please don't hate me.&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the &amp;quot;Trolling in the Mall&amp;quot; page in SSR. Just a heads up.&lt;br /&gt;
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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....&lt;br /&gt;
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i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident  and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.&lt;br /&gt;
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still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me. &lt;br /&gt;
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anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people. &lt;br /&gt;
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-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey&lt;br /&gt;
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel.  (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.)    [[User:DickingCream]]&lt;br /&gt;
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: I've gotten a message like this as well.  The story was tagged, as far as I could tell - as it was a story ending, I made sure that it linked back to the original story.  What exactly did I forget to do?  [[User:Wonder Boy]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?&lt;br /&gt;
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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so..  I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language) &lt;br /&gt;
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It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)&lt;br /&gt;
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What do you mean 'title of the story?'&lt;br /&gt;
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-- Apollo.&lt;br /&gt;
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Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}&lt;br /&gt;
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.&lt;br /&gt;
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up &amp;quot;Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?&lt;br /&gt;
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I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?&lt;br /&gt;
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Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.&lt;br /&gt;
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DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.&lt;br /&gt;
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dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Re: deleteme ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.&lt;br /&gt;
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My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.&lt;br /&gt;
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*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont  have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello.  I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.&lt;br /&gt;
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*&lt;br /&gt;
Thank you very much.  The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...&lt;br /&gt;
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2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story.  I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it.  I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?&lt;br /&gt;
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== iWant Sex ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about.  However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going.  What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The Neighbors ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD&lt;br /&gt;
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==Pokesex==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads up about including the titles, I'll be sure to do that from now on.  You might be able to see through my edit history (on pokesex) my many, many failed attempts at fixing the previous pages.  How should I go about it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay sorry, I will be posting complete pages from now on. It was my first time editing, so I wasn't sure how things worked.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Uncategorized pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry, this is my first story, and I down really know all about how to categorize pages besides putting category at the bottom-abcdefg&lt;br /&gt;
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== Uncategorized pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know how to categorise stories either. Sorry! That's ok if you edit or delete the page that you think is not correctly written!  --[[User: Lovetoread|Lovetoread]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks Platypus!! Now I know how to categorise! ^_^&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...Plat..can you please tell me which pages I should categorize? I'm sure that every page has been categorized...If the gamebook is Elements of the Earth, can you leave it in the abandoned stories? I'll get back to it later.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Story titles in page titles ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I disagree with your assertion that I should avoid using good page and link structure simply because other authors are not using them.  These structure guidelines are outlined on the main page under the heading &amp;quot;Instructions&amp;quot; subheading &amp;quot;How to add a page&amp;quot;.  Do you feel that it is more important to keep page titles consistent even if they are equally readable, or that we should avoid the possibility of stepping on other stories?&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;gt;Add new comments below.  Do not add new comments to the archive.&lt;br /&gt;
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Goohoojoo:  Thanks for cleaning up some of the beginning of my new, back-connected story arc for Rampage.  It's still a serious WIP and some of it isn't filled in yet.&lt;br /&gt;
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Bahawk: Got your message about adding title to each page. How do I go back to all the submitted pages and add title to each page?&lt;br /&gt;
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Silentman97: Do what now? I'm at this so what am I supposed to do? OKAY!!! Dear GOd my Computer's been acting funny with this website so I've had a little trouble please get off my back I'll try to fix it okay? but just today it froze up three times.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey bud, how have you been. Remember me?&lt;br /&gt;
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I got a question for you. I found a different create your own story site. I am writing my own story on it. I was wondering if it is okay or not okay to post a link to said site on my profile so that readers of my work here can find things I write elsewhere? thx for the reply in advance&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you delete my pages I created?  I need to do a major revision and would prefer to not have history.  Thanks in advance. -Terrytens&lt;br /&gt;
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Great thanks. Yea, definitely let me know if you think of any stories that would be good for it. From the ones I've read, I think Heyoeveryone's Remember might be the best option. I'm probably going to record in about a week, so let me know before then if you think of any other good options.  -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). You seem to be very active on and passionate about this site. I was wondering if you can help me find a well written CYOA story with lots of dialogue. I'd be willing to discuss this idea if you have any input. Thanks! -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to ask what happened to the main page and the reason for it. I was gone for a week, then BAM! A template for the featured, only several stories available directly. What is the criterion for the stories to be displayed on the main page, anyways?&lt;br /&gt;
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thanks for the advice i'm a big fan of your work your a really big part of this website&lt;br /&gt;
Seth Xozen&lt;br /&gt;
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yo!! u just deleted my story!!!!!y???&lt;br /&gt;
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thank you!!!  i should be able to do it. i'm just a terrible speller. did u make this website??? this should be  my last post 'cuz i don't want annoy u any more than i have... :]&lt;br /&gt;
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peeta.luvr&lt;br /&gt;
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i tried to catogorize a page on 'Vampires Vs. Werewolfs' but it didn't work... sorry once again :] &lt;br /&gt;
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Last thing, you respond Fast!!!!p.s i understand if want me to stop posting stuff, sorry 'bout that. :]&lt;br /&gt;
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peeta.luvr again&lt;br /&gt;
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i have a question, my appologies for not asking before on my previous comment, but do you have to read All of the stories posted on this website?? :]&lt;br /&gt;
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i'm soooo sorry i ignored your first message!! i didn't know what it ment to &amp;quot;catagorize a page&amp;quot; and i still don't know, so i was wondering if you could help by telling me how to!!! please and thanks :] &lt;br /&gt;
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.&lt;br /&gt;
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.&lt;br /&gt;
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL&lt;br /&gt;
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL. &lt;br /&gt;
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]&lt;br /&gt;
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I &amp;quot;fix&amp;quot; the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/&amp;lt;page&amp;gt; to /CYOA/Luka/&amp;lt;page&amp;gt;. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD &lt;br /&gt;
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Also: apologies; please don't hate me.&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the &amp;quot;Trolling in the Mall&amp;quot; page in SSR. Just a heads up.&lt;br /&gt;
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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....&lt;br /&gt;
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i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident  and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.&lt;br /&gt;
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still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me. &lt;br /&gt;
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anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people. &lt;br /&gt;
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-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey&lt;br /&gt;
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel.  (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.)    [[User:DickingCream]]&lt;br /&gt;
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: I've gotten a message like this as well.  The story was tagged, as far as I could tell - as it was a story ending, I made sure that it linked back to the original story.  What exactly did I forget to do?  [[User:Wonder Boy]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?&lt;br /&gt;
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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so..  I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language) &lt;br /&gt;
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It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What do you mean 'title of the story?'&lt;br /&gt;
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-- Apollo.&lt;br /&gt;
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Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}&lt;br /&gt;
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.&lt;br /&gt;
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up &amp;quot;Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?&lt;br /&gt;
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-- Apollo&lt;br /&gt;
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Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?&lt;br /&gt;
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I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?&lt;br /&gt;
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Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.&lt;br /&gt;
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--MaxJose&lt;br /&gt;
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DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.&lt;br /&gt;
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--MaxJose &lt;br /&gt;
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dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Re: deleteme ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.&lt;br /&gt;
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My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.&lt;br /&gt;
          Continuation&lt;br /&gt;
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont  have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*&lt;br /&gt;
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CaptainMorgan30&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello.  I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.&lt;br /&gt;
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*&lt;br /&gt;
Thank you very much.  The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...&lt;br /&gt;
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2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story.  I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it.  I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?&lt;br /&gt;
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== iWant Sex ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus,&lt;br /&gt;
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about.  However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going.  What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?&lt;br /&gt;
Bight99&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)&lt;br /&gt;
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== The Neighbors ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Oops! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Pokesex ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD&lt;br /&gt;
           -- Ghengar&lt;br /&gt;
== Name of wiki changed ==&lt;br /&gt;
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More info here:&lt;br /&gt;
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http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Wiki_Name_Change_Information&lt;br /&gt;
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==Pokesex==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the heads up about including the titles, I'll be sure to do that from now on.  You might be able to see through my edit history (on pokesex) my many, many failed attempts at fixing the previous pages.  How should I go about it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay sorry, I will be posting complete pages from now on. It was my first time editing, so I wasn't sure how things worked.&lt;br /&gt;
-Thisisme&lt;br /&gt;
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== Uncategorized pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry, this is my first story, and I down really know all about how to categorize pages besides putting category at the bottom-abcdefg&lt;br /&gt;
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== Uncategorized pages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know how to categorise stories either. Sorry! That's ok if you edit or delete the page that you think is not correctly written!  --[[User: Lovetoread|Lovetoread]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks Platypus!! Now I know how to categorise! ^_^&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...Plat..can you please tell me which pages I should categorize? I'm sure that every page has been categorized...If the gamebook is Elements of the Earth, can you leave it in the abandoned stories? I'll get back to it later.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Timewalker|Timewalker]] 06:18, 30 September 2012 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Story titles in page titles ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I disagree with your assertion that I should avoid using good page and link structure simply because other authors are not using them.  These structure guidelines are outlined on the main page under the heading &amp;quot;Instructions&amp;quot; subheading &amp;quot;How to add a page&amp;quot;.  Do you feel that it is more important to keep page titles consistent even if they are equally readable, or that we should avoid the possibility of stepping on other stories?&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Smile at the football player and head on to homeroom</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;Homeroom is over&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Jill's memory tells you that this is Derrick &amp;quot;Bullhorn&amp;quot; something-or-other and he's a linebacker.  Bullhorn belongs to the half of the team that you haven't slept with yet.  You put on a bright smile and slide right past the football player saying, &amp;quot;Thanks, Bullhorn.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
Homeroom is the usual mix of geeks, jocks, stoners, girls applying makeup, and kids rushing to finish their homework.  The morning announcements remind you that the reason the cheerleaders are in their uniforms today is that there is a pep-rally after first period.  You mostly ignore the other announcements and almost laugh at the PSA against teen pregnancy.  Homeroom ends with a bell and your only class before the pep-rally is geography.&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Rampage/Jill-Head on to geography class|Head on to geography class]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Rampage/Jill-Go to the bathroom|Go to the bathroom]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Rampage/Jill-Skip class and go looking for someone to get stoned with|Skip class and go looking for someone to get stoned with]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<title>Continue into the school</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Continue_into_the_school</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;Added option to go to homeroom&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You ignore the stares and continue your way into the school. Students are passing by everywhere and you soon catch the gaze of an older woman, apparently a teacher, staring at your chest. As soon as you make eye contact she blushes and hurries into a classroom. Before you can do anything a guy in a football jersey comes over to you.&lt;br /&gt;
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The football player looks you up and down and says, &amp;quot;Hey Jill, you are looking fine today.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Do you:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Ignore the football player and follow the teacher]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Offer to take the football player into the bathroom and rock his world]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Rampage/Jill-Smile at the football player and head on to homeroom|Smile at the football player and head on to homeroom]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sat, 01 Dec 2012 23:44:17 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Continue_into_the_school</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Talk:Family Ties</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Family_Ties</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;/* Still Active? */ new section&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Thank you for dropping by the comments page of Family Ties. I am open to any suggestions and feedback concerning the story so long as it is constructive. It is my intention to open the story to public additions once I have the main outline of the story started. Keep checking the main page for updates as I am adding to the story almost daily. I also want to give a shot out to Platypus and Cannon for their editorial skill and assistence in the story set up, not to mention for putting up with my obvious short comings as I am still learning the ropes. YOU GUYS ROCK! Again thank you for your interest, I hope you are enjoying the story so far!--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 00:19, 29 May 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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After just 4 months on the web site Family Ties has had over ten thousand views. I would like to thank everyone who has shown interest in the story, dropping by and checking for updates. I also want to give a shout out to the others who have contributed to the story and want to encourage everyone who wishes to continue to participate! As for what to expect in the near future I will be adding Heather's and Jessica's story line very soon. Jessica with have the option of playing the innocent or a down right slut. Again, everyone's participation is more then welcome. Thanks again! Here's to 20,000 views!--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 23:46, 29 October 2011 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Still Active? ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Is this story still active? I was thinking of reorganizing some links but I don't want to mess around too much if Black Dragon still has plans to work on this story.&lt;/div&gt;</description>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 59</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;Made the page read a bit better&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;This girl really knows what she wants.  You peel off your clothes and leave them strewn about, grabbing a condom from your pocket just in case.  When, at last, you drop your boxers to the floor, your dick springs forth pointing the way to your desire.  Nichole turns her head to face the bright window in front of her as you approach her naked form.  You kneel at the edge of the coffee table and examine the flower before you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Resting just below eye level, Nichole's vulva is now completely open to you.  Her pale white flesh is now pink and filled with blood.  Her small clit is obviously hard and the hood has pulled back exposing the nub to the air.  Her thin inner labia glisten with Nichole's moisture and quiver with her excitement.  Shimmering vaginal secretions bathe the upper regions of the woman's thighs. Finally her round, firm ass cheeks spread to reveal a bright pink rosebud.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Without further hesitation you lean forward and lick those quivering lips.  You head Nichole inhale sharply.  The woman's fluids are gentle and sweet, almost like a syrup.  You lean in again and ligh the inside of her outer labia.  You spend a full minute lickinng up and down and all around first one outer lip, and then the other before moving on to those small inner petals.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Nichole moans loudly when you pull her small labia into your mouth.  She moans again as you swirl your tongue around those precious lips.  Her pussy, bright red with arousal, spasms and a small glob of her thick juice squeezes out.  You lean in and scoop up the sweet nectar with your tongue.  After several minutes of listening to Nichole's moans becoming more and more desperate, you finally shift your tongue to her aching clit.  As soon as you touch that small bundle of nerves she begins to moan loudly and constantly.  You lick beside and around her hot love button teasing her mercilessly.  Soon she seems just on the verge of climax.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 62|Keep eating her.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 63|Stop eating her and stuff her pussy with your cock.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 64|Leave her wanting and feed her yourr cock.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 16 Mar 2012 16:13:29 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_59</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New Page: another blowjob&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You pull on Nichole's shoulder and she turns to face you.  You press her body into yours, kissing her passionately and grabbing a double-handful of her round ass.  You kiss each other under the shower for a long moment.  Then you slide your hands up her wet back to her shoulders.  With a light pressure you guide the perpetually smiling blonde to her knees where she engulfs your dick once again.  She seems to be pulling out all the stops as she works her mouth to bring you back to full erection.  You can't remember ever meeting a woman with such a voracious appetite for sex.  Even Molly can't hold a candle to this girl.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Nichole's tongue is doing magical things to your dick.  When she sucks your entire length into her mouth, you can feel her throat as she swallows around you.  You lace your fingers through her hair and revel in the feeling of her mouth.  She pulls and sucks and licks at your cock and sooner than you thought possible you are on the verge of cumming again.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Evidently Nichole can tell that you are getting close.  She sucks your whole dick into her mouth until she can just barely lick your balls.  Then she hums.  The vibration of the soundtravels throughout the womans skull and up and down the entire lingth of your cock.  In moments you are cumming for the second time in the last hour.  Your knees go weak and you sit down in the back of the tub.  Nichole rinses the final suds out of her hair, smiling broadly at you the entire time.  &amp;quot;We definitely have to do this again,&amp;quot; she says.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Once you regain your strength you both dry off and get dressed.  Nichole leaves a note for her friend, Sarah, thanking her for the use of her apartment and you jump back in her car and head back to work.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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When you get back to the office your boss, Mary, is livid.  She corrals you both into a conference room and unleashes all of her frustration for the past week at you.  She let's you know that you will be receiving a formal written warning by the end of the day.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 80|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 81|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time adventure.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 82|Tell Mary that she can shove her written warning up her ass.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2012 20:25:32 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_78</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: handjobs all around.&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;The slick soap on Nichole's hand really adds another dimension to her already astounding handjob.  While she strokes you, she also rubs the head of your prick against her pert ass cheek.  You can feel tiny goosebumps on her ass through your sensitive penis.  She knows just the right places to touch while you swirl your fingers around her engorged clit.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Nichole's fingers speed up on your cock and you, in turn, frig her clit faster and faster.  Her moans turn into soft wails and you pinch her stiff nipple drawing a scream from her soft lips.  Suddenly you brush your fingers directly over her sensitive clit and she yells, arching her back and bucking her hips into your hand.  A moment later she collapses to her knees, the shower hitting her directly in the face.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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She turns around and grips your slick cock with both hands.  She pulls and twists and rubs all the right ways, then she does it all again.  You can hardly believe it, but this woman has you on the verge of cumming again so shortly after covering her face in the living room.  You can hardly believe it, but it's true.  Moments later you can feel your balls getting ready to spurt again.  You grab the shower curtain rod to steady yourself.  Nichole has her face right at the tip of your cock and when you finally cum, it lands directly on her delicate cheekbones.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Your knees go weak in the aftermath of your second orgasm in less than an hour.  You sit down at the back of the tub and watch Nichole rub her hands over her body.  She gives you a nice show while she rinses the last of the soap and your spunk from her skin.  You regain your strength a minute later and you both dry off and get dressed.  Nichole leaves a note for her friend, Sarah, thanking her for the use of her apartment.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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When you get back to the office your boss, Mary, is livid.  She corrals you both into a conference room and unloads all of her frustration from the week at you.  She let's you know that you will be getting a formal written warning by the end of the day.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 80|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 81|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time adventure.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 82|Tell Mary that she can shove her written warning up her ass.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2012 20:01:08 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_77</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: join her in the shower&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;lt;i&amp;gt;Damn, this girl just gets off on everything!&amp;lt;/i&amp;gt; you think to yourself as you climb off of her chest.  Nichole wrings the worst of the smelly liquid out of her hair and stands up.  She shows you where the mop is located and asks you to clean up while she is in the shower.  You recognixe that Nichole's friend, Sarah, will not be likely to let you use her apartment again if you leave a giant puddle of urine on her nice wood floor.  You take the mop and soad up the mess quickly.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You slip quietly into the bathroom while Nichole is massaging shampoo into her long hair.  You step into the shower behind her and admire her slender form under the spray.  With thw woman's hands in her hair, her breasts are lifted enticingly toward the falling water.  Her posture gives you a wonderful opportinity to reach around her torso and cup her breasts in your large hands.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Nichole jumps a little at your touch, but does not move to stop you.  Her tits fill your hands nicely.  You massage the tissue gently, enjoying their heft.  You rub your chest against your lover's bare back and pull her close so that you can kiss her tender throat.  You leave one hand encasing her swolen breast and slide the other down her trim body to her shaved snatch.  Automatically Nichole spreads her firm legs to give you access to her body.  You knead her breast with one hand and slide the other through her open pussy.  The falling water provides sufficient lubrication to allow your fingers to circle her clit with ease.  She leans her head, still bubbling with shampoo, against your shoulder and moans as you tease her sensitive nub.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Nichole reaches between your bodies and grasps your stiffening cock in her hand.  She pumps away at your shaft while you work your fingers through and around her slick sex.  Even behind her and with only one hand this girl's skills are amazing.  She twists her hand and slipps up and down your rod in the soapy water.  As you speed up your fingers, Nichole's breathing gets quicker and she moans almost constantly.  As you plan your next move, you remember that the condom is still laying, unused, in the living room.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 77|Keep manually stimulating each other.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 78|Turn her around and put her mouth back on your dick.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 79|Bend her over and ride her bareback.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2012 19:24:07 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_75</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;lt;i&amp;gt;Damn, this girl just gets off on everything!&amp;lt;/i&amp;gt; you think to yourself as you climb off of her chest.  Nichole wrings the worst of the smelly liquid out of her hair and stands up.  She shows you where the mop is and asks you to clean up while she's in the shower.  You recognize that Nichole's friend, Sarah, won't be likely to let you use her apartment again if you leave a giant puddle of urine on her nice wood floor.  You take the mop and some cleaner and clean up the mess.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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While Nichole is drying off you fit in a quick sponge bath.  Once you are both clean and dressed you kiss Nichole lightly on the lips, &amp;quot;We should definitely do this again.&amp;quot;  Nichole leaves a note for Sarah thanking her for the use of her apartment.  When the two of you get back to the office your boss, Mary, gives the you a stern lecture about taking long lunches.  After you both promise that it won't become a habit, she walks off.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 70|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 71|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time fling.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 20:31:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_76</comments>		</item>
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&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You climb off of the cum-soaked Nichole and help her to her feet.  The pair of you take turns taking quigh sponge-baths and get dressed.  Once dressed you kiss the woman gently on the lips, &amp;quot;We should definitely do this again.&amp;quot;  She smils and nods in agreement.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole leaves a note for her friend, Sarah, thanking her for the use of her apartment.  After a quick look to make sure you didn't leave anything behind, you head back to work.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 68|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 69|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time tryst.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 20:27:04 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_73</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: head back to work&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You climb off of the cum-soaked Nichole and help her to her feet.  The pair of you take turns taking quigh sponge-baths and get dressed.  Once dressed you kiss the woman gently on the lips, &amp;quot;We should definitely do this again.&amp;quot;  She smils and nods in agreement.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole leaves a note for her friend, Sarah, thanking her for the use of her apartment.  After a quick look to make sure you didn't leave anything behind, you head back to work.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 79|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 80|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time tryst.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 19:17:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_73</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: let Nichole shower alone&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;&amp;lt;i&amp;gt;Damn, this girl just gets off on everything!&amp;lt;/i&amp;gt; you think to yourself as you climb off of her chest.  Nichole wrings the worst of the smelly liquid out of her hair and stands up.  She shows you where the mop is and asks you to clean up while she's in the shower.  You recognize that Nichole's friend, Sarah, won't be likely to let you use her apartment again if you leave a giant puddle of urine on her nice wood floor.  You take the mop and some cleaner and clean up the mess.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
While Nichole is drying off you fit in a quick sponge bath.  Once you are both clean and dressed you kiss Nichole lightly on the lips, &amp;quot;We should definitely do this again.&amp;quot;  Nichole leaves a note for Sarah thanking her for the use of her apartment.  When the two of you get back to the office your boss, Mary, gives the you a stern lecture about taking long lunches.  After you both promise that it won't become a habit, she walks off.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 77|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 78|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time fling.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 19:07:25 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_76</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New Page: pee on her&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;All this sex has distracted you from the growing pressure in your bladder.  You look down at Nichole, who is happily scooping up your cum and licking it off of her fingers.  So far she has taken everything you've thrown at her with a smile.  You decide to go for broke.  You take hold of your quickly softening dick and point it back at the woman's face.  She notices this action and once again opens her mouth eagerly.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You begin to relax and a stream of pale fluid hits Nichole in the cheek.  You move the stream around and make sure that the woman's entire face is coated in your warm piss.  Nichole still has her mouth open and her eyes shut, moving her face around under your spray.  Satisfied that her face is covered you center your stream of pee on her face.  The blonde moves her head to catch the briny fluid in her open mouth.  Moments later you watch, transfixed, as the woman's throat muscles work to swallow your pee.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
She only gets a couple of mouthfuls before your stream peters out and the mast few drops fall on those luscious boobs.  &amp;quot;Mmm, thank you, Alex,&amp;quot; she purrs.  &amp;quot;But now I need a shower and our lunch hour is almost up.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 74|Convince Nichole to go back to work without a shower.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 75|Jump in the shower with Nichole.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 76|Let Nichole shower while you get ready.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 18:24:29 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_72</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You can tell that you are close.  You long to see Nichole's beautiful face decorated with your cum.  You touch her on the shoulder and motion that you want her to roll over.  She complies and you follow knealing over her body just underneath her snow-white breasts.  Immediately your lover pusher her supple mounds together around your dick encouraging you to tit-fuck her.  Using her thick saliva as lubricant you push your rod back and forth through that wonderous valley of flesh.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
All too soon you feel your balls begin to tighten and you know that you have reached the point of no return.  You thrust your hips forward and grab your rod, aiming at Nichole's smiling face.  You shudder and feel the unmistakable tingle of orgasm overtake your senses.  You shoot long ropes of cum at your coworker's face landing on her eye, her cheek, and her smiling lips.  As the force of your orgasm subsides you leave small amounts of cum on Nichole's tits as well.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
When you are finished, Nichole licks your seed off of her cherry lips and smiles broadly at you, &amp;quot;Thank you, Alex.  That was wonderful.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 72|Pee on Nichole's face.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 73|Climb off and get ready to go back to work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 18:06:47 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_67</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: Cum on her face&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You can tell that you are close.  You long to see Nichole's beautiful face decorated with your cum.  You touch her on the shoulder and motion that you want her to roll over.  She complies and you follow knealing over her body just underneath her snow-white breasts.  Immediately your lover pusher her supple mounds together around your dick encouraging you to tit-fuck her.  Using her thick saliva as lubricant you push your rod back and forth through that wonderous valley of flesh.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
All too soon you feel your balls begin to tighten and you know that you have reached the point of no return.  You thrust your hips forward and grab your rod, aiming at Nichole's smiling face.  You shudder and feel the unmistakable tingle of orgasm overtake your senses.  You shoot long ropes of cum at your coworker's face landing on her eye, her cheek, and her smiling lips.  As the force of your orgasm subsides you leave small amounts of cum on Nichole's tits as well.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
When you are finished, Nichole licks your seed off of her cherry lips and smiles broadly at you, &amp;quot;Thank you, Alex.  That was wonderful.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 72|Pee on Nichole's face.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 73|Climb off and get ready to go back to work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 17:42:58 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_67</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: bang Nichole&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You reach out and pick up the condom from where you dropped it on the floor.  You touch Nichole's head causing her to look up at your face.  When you show her the condom she grins and takes the package from you.  She tears open the foil wrapper, then places the rolled condom in her mouth.  Slowly she engulfs your penis again from tip to base in one smooth motion.  When she raises her head your member is encased in slick latex.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The blonde crawls up your body, dragging her hanging breasts over your skin.  You catch one pink nipple in your mouth and Nichole moans appreciatively as you suck on it.  Your lover swings her hips around until she is satisfied with your alignment, then sinks down on your rod in one smooth motion.  Her nipple pops out of your mouth and you move your hungry lips to her open mouth.  Her pussy is snug and warm.  You feel her inner walls along every inch of your hard cock.  Every tiny motion sends waves of erotic pleasure through your body.  Nichole grings her hips against yours for a minute, causing you to grunt and moanginto your shared kiss.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole breaks your kiss and pushes herself off of your chest.  She keeps you inside of her and rises into a sitting position.  Without moving her body, you can feel the woman's vaginal walls contracting and pulsating, she is virtually milking your cock with her pussy.  The feeling is exquisite.  When she starts rising and falling on your rod you almost lose your mind.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
She reaches out and puts your hands on her tits as she rides you.  Her nipples are so hhard that they are almost digging into your skin as you knead her wonderful mounds.  You can tell thay you are getting very close and Nichole seems to be approaching a second orgasm.  While you massage her tits and pull at her nipples, she reaches down to finger her clit as she rides you.  The sight is so erotic that you never want it to end.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Finally, just as you can almost take no more, Nichole arches her back and cums for the second time.  The waves of orgasmic bliss cause her pussy to pulsate and shudder on your prick.  The sensation pushes you over the edge and you thrust your cock into her love tunnel again and again as you fill your condom with your seed.  Once you have both finished your spasms, Nichole rests herself back on your chest so that the two of you can recuperate.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
After a couple of minutes Nichole whispers into your ear, &amp;quot;Thank you, Alex.  That was wonderful.&amp;quot;  She moves her head to kiss you tenderly.  &amp;quot;Wwe'd better get back to work, we're late as it is, but we should definitely do this again.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The pair of you pick yourselves up off of the floor.  You take turns taking quick sponge-baths and get dressed.  Nichole leaves a note for her friend, Sarah, thanking her for the use of her apartment.  When the two of you get back to the office your boss, Mary, gives you a stern lecture about taking long lunches.  You both promise that it won't become a habbit and she walks off.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 70|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 71|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time tryst.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 15:29:24 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_66</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: finish in her mouth&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You can tell that you're close.  You begin involuntarily lifting your hips off of the floor, attempting to thrust in deeper.  Just as you reach the end and your balls begin to tighten up, Nichole pulls her head up and sucks only on the tip of your prick.  One hand slides up and down on your pole while the other continues massaging your scrotum.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Finally you can take no more and your body goes rigid as you pump jet upon jet of hot cum into Nichole's eager mouth.  Orgasmic bliss floods your mind.  You feel nothing but pure ecstasy for several seconds before you relax, sated, on the floor.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole crawls up your body, her still turgid nipples brushing against your chest.  &amp;quot;Thank you, Alex.  That was wonderful.&amp;quot;  She leans down and kisses you on the lips.  &amp;quot;We'd better get back to work before we're missed, but we should definitely do this again.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The pair of you pick yourselves up off of the floor.  You take turns taking quick sponge-baths and get dressed.  Nichole leaves a note for her friend, Sarah, thanking her for the use of her apartment and you head back to work.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 68|Focus on work for the rest of the day.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 69|Text Molly and tell her about your lunch-time fling.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 11 Mar 2012 06:03:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_65</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: Nichole blows you&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You redouble your efforts, twirling your tongue around her stiff clit and slurping it into your mouth.  Nichole's moans lose all attempt at language and rise into a cry as you send her into orbit with your mouth.  You pull her hips toward you and keep licking at her sweet clit and labia.  You can feel her entire body shaking with the energy of her orgasm.  After several long moments of ecstasy Nichole's scream subsides and she lowers herself to the table.  You sit back and stroke one long leg while she recuperates.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole lies on the table, breathing heavily for a short time before picking her head up and fixing you with a hungry gaze.  She turns around on the table then slinks toward you with the graceful motions of a leopard. You lean back and sit on the floor as the blond crawls over you, her breasts swinging from her chest.  She bends down and you feel her warm lips kiss the tip of you rigid pole.  You slowly lie down and the warm moist sensation spreads to cover the entire head of your stiff dick.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You feel a light sucking as Nichole pops your penis out of her mouth, then she begins to lick up and down the entire shaft.  Her tongue is warm and very wet.  It is also slightly rough against your most sensitive area.  Her long slim fingers grip your member gently, manipulating it so that she can lick you all around.  A moment later you feel her mouth at the tip of your rod again.  You look down your body and see the woman's pale blue eyes staring at you through her blonde bangs.  You watch as more and more of your hard dick disappears into her slurping mouth.  Again you feel the texture of her tongue on your shaft as the woman slides your whole cock into her mouth.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole lifts her head, pulling your dick most of the way out past her glistening lips, then she leans forward and devours it again.  You lean your head back to the floor while the gifted woman bobs her head up and down on your pole.  Her tongue swirls around your shaft as she sucks you in and out of her.  You are lost in the sensations from your groin and when she gnetly cups your balls in her soft hand you can tell that you won't last much longer.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 65|Finish in her mouth.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 66|Tell her to ride you cowgirl.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 67|Roll her over and cum on her face.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sat, 10 Mar 2012 12:37:23 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_62</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: eat Nichole's pussy&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;This girl really knows what she wants.  You peel off your clothes and leave them strewn about, grabbing a condom from your pocket just in case.  When, at last, you drop your boxers to the floor, your dick springs forth pointing the way to your desire.  Nichole turns her head to face the bright window in front of her as you approach her naked form.  You kneel at the edge of the coffee table and examine the flower before you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Resting just below eye level, Nichole's vulva is now completely open to you.  Her pale white flesh is now pink and filled with blood.  Her small clit is obviously hard and the hood has pulled back exposing the nub to the air.  Her thin inner labia glisten with Nichole's moisture and quiver with her excitement.  Shimmering vaginal secretions bathe the upper regions of the woman's thighs. Finally her round, firm ass cheeks spread to reveal a bright pink rosebud.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Without further hesitation you lean forward and lick those quivering lips.  You head Nichole inhale sharply.  The woman's fluids are gentle and sweet, almost like a syrup.  You lean in again and ligh the inside of her outer labia.  You spend a full minute lickinng up and down and all around first one outer lip, and then the other before moving on to those small inner petals.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole moans loudly when you pull her small labia into your mouth.  She moans again as you swirl your tongue around those precious lips.  Her pussy, bright red with arousal, spasms and a small glob of her thick juice squeezes out.  You lean in and scoop up the sweet nectar with your tongue.  After another minute of listening to Nichole's moans becoming more and more desperate, you finally shift your tongue to her aching clit.  As soon as you tough that small nub she begins to moan loudly and constantly.  You lick beside and around her hot love button teasing her mercilessly.  Soon she seems just on the verge of climax.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 62|Keep eating her.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 63|Stop eating her and stuff her pussy with your cock.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 64|Leave her wanting and feed her yourr cock.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 09 Mar 2012 22:02:33 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_59</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: At Sarah's apartment&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;Let's go visit your friend's apartment,&amp;quot; you suggest.  The pair of you walk out of the office and jump into Nichole's car.  Sarah's apartment is in a high-rise just a few blocks from your office, and Nichole's car is let smoothly into the garage.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
In the elevator Nichole throws her arms around your neck and you lean down to press your lips against hers.  Her mouth opens instantly and you taste her cherry lipgloss as you spear her waiting mouth with your tongue.  The woman's soft breasts press against your chest when you wrap your arms around her body and gently squeeze her taut ass.  The elevator dings and Nichole pushes you away gently, stepping into the hallway.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You watch Nichole's hips sway seductively as she walks in her three-inch heels.  She places her hands at her waist ans as she leads you to her friend's apartmentshe slowly pulls ner narrow skirt up her lovely thighs until the bottoms of her bare ass cheeks are clearly visible.  She stops for a moment to unlock her friend's door then slips inside leaving it open for you to follow.  Before you even make it through the open door, Nichole's cardigan is on the floor in the entryway and she is pulling at her red camisole.  You quickly close and bolt the door behind you, never taking your eyes off of the disrobing woman in front of you.  Nichole walks seductively into the apartment tossing her camisole to the side.  Moments later her white lace bra is on the floor and her gray skirt is sliding smoothly down her legs.  She climbs gracefully onto a coffee table wearing nothing but a pair of black high-heels and takes a position on her hands and knees before looking back over her shoulder at you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 59|Dive in and eat that pussy]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 60|Walk around her and make her suck you off.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 61|Burry your dick in her tunnel]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 09 Mar 2012 21:21:18 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_56</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You walk into the Starlite Night Club and are greeted by waves of low thumping bass.  Your buddies Carl, Steve, Eddie, and James are standing by a table scoping out the dance floor as it starts to slowly fill. Right now the club is fairly deserted, they don't even charge cover this early, but later the party will really get started.  You order yourself a drink and join your friends for some laughs to start off the evening.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Sometimes it's fun to just watch guys make fools of themselves trying to talk to girls.  Sometimes it's even fun to make a fool of yourself just to see the girls' reactions.  But, it's always fun to get some tail to go home with.  In fact, you met your current girlfriend, Molly, on one of these guys' nights out.  She's not likely to be here tonight, but she won't mind if you have a little fun.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 34|Try to get one of the guys sloshed.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 35|Dance up to a girl on the dance floor.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2012 15:41:57 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_14</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You finish fumbling with your shoe and standup.  With the show over, Nichole smoothly lowers the hem of her skirt and slides her knees together.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Just as you open your mouth to ask the woman out to lunch a voice speaks up from behind you.  &amp;quot;Nichole, are you going to have that program change done by Wednesday?&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Hi, Mary,&amp;quot; Nichole greets your boss with a somewhat forced tone.  &amp;quot;Yes, I'll have that done and tested by Wednesday.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Great.  And Alex, whay about yours?&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Yeah,&amp;quot; you say.  &amp;quot;I should have everything wrapped up but paperwork by Monday,&amp;quot;  Mary writes down a note on her clipboard and walks away happily.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You turn your attention back to the woman in front of you.  &amp;quot;Would you like to go out for some lunch?&amp;quot;  You ask.  &amp;quot;Perhaps someplace with some privacy.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole smiles up at you, &amp;quot;My friend Sarah's apartment is less that ten minutes from here.&amp;quot;  She pauses for a moment, &amp;quot;I have a key.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 56|Take Nichole to Sarah's Apartment.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 57|Take Nichole to a parking garage.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 58|Take Nichole to a restaurant for food.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2012 15:35:11 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_53</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: ask Nichole to lunch&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You finish fumbling with your shoe and standup.  With the show over, Nichole smoothly lowers the hem of her skirt and slides her knees together.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Just as you open your mouth to ask the woman out to lunch a voice speaks up from behind you.  &amp;quot;Nichole, are you going to have that program change done by Wednesday?&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Hi, Mary,&amp;quot; Nichole greets your boss with a somewhat forced tone.  &amp;quot;Yes, I'll have that done and tested by Wednesday.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Great.  And Alex, whay about yours?&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Yeah,&amp;quot; you say.  &amp;quot;I should have everything wrapped up but paperwork by Monday,&amp;quot;  Mary writes down a note on her clipboard and walks away happily.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You turn your attention back to the woman in front of you.  &amp;quot;Would you like to go out for some lunch?&amp;quot;  You ask.  &amp;quot;Perhaps someplace with some privacy.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole smiles up at you, &amp;quot;My friend Sarah's apartment is less that ten minutes from here.&amp;quot;  She pauses for a moment, &amp;quot;I have a key.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 56|Take Nichole to Sarah's Apartment.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 57|Take Nichole to a parking garage.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 58|Take Nichole to a restaurant for food.]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2012 15:15:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_53</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: Nichole shows you her pussy&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You look over your shoulder up and down the row of identical cubicles.  Seeing no one, you drop to one knee and begin fumbling with your shoelaces.  You gaze past your coworker's exposed knees.  Your eyes slide smoothly up her pale thighs.  Where those perfect legs meet, the treasure you seek is hidden by deep shadows.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You look up to Nichole's pale blue eyes and find her staring back at yours, biting her lip with desire.  Slowly, almost timidly, she grasps the hem of her gray skirt and lifts, shedding light on her secret garden.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
True to her promise, the light reveals to you not the smooth pattern of cotton or satin, but the exquisite texture of bare flesh untouched by hair.  Her inner lips and clitoris are safely enclosed in the envelope of her outer lips.  The smooth skin is free of stubble or razor burn.  In the cleft of Nichole's beautiful vulva you can see the first glistening of arousal.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 53|Stand and ask Nichole to join you for lunch.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 55|Stand and ask Nichole to join you after work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 54|Reach out and touch that wonderful pussy.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 20:13:50 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_52</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You bend over behind Nichole and put your mouth next to her bejeweled ear.  You can smell the citrus of the shampoo that she used in her hais as the golden whisps brush against your skin.  You breathe in deeply then whisper into her ear, &amp;quot;You should slip off those panties and let me sniff them.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole turns slowly to grin at you, then looks cautiously around the area to see if anyone is listening.  She swivels her office chair around to face you.  You almost think she might do it when she looks up at you through half-lidded eyes and asks, &amp;quot;What makes you think I'm wearing any?&amp;quot;  Her question hangs in the air for a moment before your gaze drifts to the woman's bare knees protruding from her business-appropriate skirt.  You watch transfixed as she slowly spreads her knees apart further and further.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 51|Go back to your desk.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 52|Feign retying your shoe to look up her skirt.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 19:30:49 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_12</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: Nichole spreads her legs at the office&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You bend over behind Nichole and put your mouth next to her bejeweled ear.  You can smell the citrus of the shampoo that she used in her hais as the golden whisps brush against your skin.  You breathe in deeply then whisper into her ear, &amp;quot;You should slip off those panties and let me sniff them.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Nichole turns slowly to grin at you, then looks cautiously around the area to see if anyone is listening.  She swivels her office chair around to face you.  You almost think she might do it when she looks up at you through half-lidded eyes and asks, &amp;quot;What makes you think I'm wearing any?&amp;quot;  Her question hangs in the air for a moment before your gaze drifts to the woman's bare knees protruding from her business-appropriate skirt.  You watch transfixed as she slowly spreads her knees apart further and further.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 51|Go back to your desk.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 52|Feigh retying your shoe to look up her skirt.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 18:35:25 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_12</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;Added a line about texting Molly and an option&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;Going to work may not be exciting, but the paycheck is always welcome.  The drive to work is uneventful and you make it to your desk on time, as usual.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Today happens to be one of those days where you don't seem to have a lot on your plate.  You could mainly keep your head down and plan your evening, or you could try to make the day go a little bit faster.  Your girlfriend, Molly, is usually up for a little sexy texting, or you could go see what your coworker, Nichole is up to.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 9|Keep your head down and hit the town tonight.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 10|Go flirt with Nichole, the girl in the next cube.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 50|Text something sexy to Molly.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 16:25:31 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_6</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;Added info about girlfried Molly&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;As you shower, you take stock of where you are in life.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Your name is Alex Star.  You are twenty-seven years old and hold a bachelor's degree in software engineering.  You aren't exactly cut, but you hit the gym a couple of times a week to stay trim.  Your job isn't great, but it pays the bills and then some.  You live alone in a nice apartment on the eighth floor, but you have plenty of space should a significant other choose to stay the night.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Your current significant other is named Molly.  She's a cute little brunette with loads of energy.  The two of you met last year at a dance club and went home together that night.  Since then the two of you have been very close and supportive of one another.  You have both taken to using the &amp;quot;boyfriend&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;girlfriend&amp;quot; titles, but Molly has made it very clear that you two are not exclusive.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
It's Friday morning and the sun is rising.  How do you proceed?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 6|Head in to work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 7|Take a personal day from work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 8|Cut work without calling.]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 15:29:01 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_3</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: kill her messily&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You can't get out of your head the fact that the woman cowering in front of you is the source of all of your torment.  She kidnapped you and attempted to feed you to a demon.  You need to spill her blood in order for the ritual to be over.  You may as well spill &amp;lt;b&amp;gt;all&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt; of her blood.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You turn your gaze upon her naked form and she stares at you with terror in her eyes.  She can tell that something has gone wrong, but she's not sure what yet.  Before she can be certain what has gone wrong, you summon a tentacle behind the woman and wrap it around her legs.  This prompts the woman to scream loudly before you summon another tentacle and gag her with it.  You wrap several more loops of your fleshy appendages around her torso and begin to squeeze her like a snake with a mouse.  You summon a final tendril with a long blade at the end.  You stare deeply into the woman's eyes and let her see the hate boiling in your mind.  In one smooth motion you slice her throat open and squeeze her body with coils of muscle.  The woman's hot red lifeblood pours out of her gaping neck in a fountain of gore coating the ceiling, the floor, and you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You discard the emptied sack of flesh in the corner of the room and examine the room.  There is a wide roll-up metal door on one wall of the room.  Your clothes and the woman's are piled in a corner by the door.  The woman's book is on the floor near where she had been chanting.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 48|Get dressed and leave quickly.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 49|Examine the woman's belongings.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=80%|MP=0|Level=2}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Mon, 05 Mar 2012 22:47:04 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_28</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: the demon is loose&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;With one hand already free, the knot holding your other wrist falls apart easily.  You pick and pull at the knots holding your feet.  Across the room from you, the mysterious naked woman lies on the floor clutching at her breast and moaning.  The fire from the runes on the ground begins to rise higher and higher. Just as you finally get your ankles free the ground at the center of the circle where you sit begins to warp and ripple.  Two large, clawed hands reach out of the cement near the edge of the circle and grab onto the flaming magic ring like a swimmer in a pool.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
No one deserves to be left to whatever is about to come through that portal. You toss the rope away and spring to your feet.  You leap over the strange hands and the foot-high flames and easily lift the naked woman into your arms.  You have no trouble throwing the roll-up door up and you run, naked into the night.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You are in what looks like a rental storage unit complex.  There are rows of buildings with lines of roll-up doors all locked from the outside.  You run across the rocky ground in your bare feet toward the exit of the compound listening to sounds of destruction from behind you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 46|Find an emergency phone and call the cops.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 47|Look for some clothes to steal.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Mon, 05 Mar 2012 19:29:21 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_44</comments>		</item>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;With one hand already free, the knot holding your other wrist falls apart easily.  You pick and pull at the knots holding your feet.  Across the room from you, the mysterious naked woman lies on the floor clutching at her breast and moaning.  The fire from the runes on the ground begins to rise higher and higher. Just as you finally get your ankles free the ground at the center of the circle where you sit begins to warp and ripple.  Two large, clawed hands reach out of the cement near the edge of the circle and grab onto the flaming magic ring like a swimmer in a pool.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You toss the rope away and spring to your feet.  You leap over the strange hands and the foot-high flames and sprint for the roll-up door.  You have no trouble throwing the door up and you run, naked into the night.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You are in what looks like a rental storage unit complex.  There are rows of buildings with lines of roll-up doors all locked from the outside.  As you run across the rocky ground in your bare feet you hear a woman's heart-stopping scream that is suddenly cut off with a gurgling messy noise.  You head for the exit to the compound listening to sounds of destruction from behind you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 39|Find an emergency phone and call the cops.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 45|Look for some clothes to steal.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 05 Mar 2012 19:27:35 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_43</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 43</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: the demon is free!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;With one hand already free, the knot holding your other wrist falls apart easily.  You pick and pull at the knots holding your feet.  Across the room from you, the mysterious naked woman lies on the floor clutching at her breast and moaning.  The fire from the runes on the ground begins to rise higher and higher. Just as you finally get your ankles free the ground at the center of the circle where you sit begins to warp and ripple.  Two large, clawed hands reach out of the cement near the edge of the circle and grab onto the flaming magic ring like a swimmer in a pool.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You toss the rope away and spring to your feet.  You leap over the strange hands and the foot-high flames and sprint for the roll-up door.  You have no trouble throwing the door up and you run, naked into the night.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You are in what looks like a rental storage unit complex.  There are rows of buildings with lines of roll-up doors all locked from the outside.  As you run across the rocky ground in your bare feet you hear a woman's heart-stopping scream that was suddenly cut off with a gurgling messy noise.  You head for the exit to the compound listening to sounds of destruction from behind you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 39|Find an emergency phone and call the cops.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 45|Look for some clothes to steal.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 23:03:34 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_43</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 31</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: The world ends.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You were warned.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You sit back on your heels, unable to bring yourself to spill the woman's blood.  As you wait for oblivion you begin to feel a tension in your chest.  It's as if two parts of yourself are pulling violently away from each other. The sensation spreads and you hear the woman across the room from you scream in pain. Moments later you hear other people screaming.  Dozens, hundreds, more, all shouting in agony as every cell in their bodies begins to tear itself apart leaving nothing behind.  Pain is all that you know, all that you ever knew. Time and space lose all meaning as you feel every molecule of your body tear apart and wink out of existance.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;b&amp;gt;The end.&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Endings]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 20:03:03 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_31</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 25</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;I'm going to kill you, you whore,&amp;quot; you shour at the woman, thrashing and pulling at your bonds.  Your scream echoes around the small room.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The woman laughs at your efforts.  &amp;quot;Oh, that's cute,&amp;quot; she chortles.  &amp;quot;I don't think you'll get very far against those knots.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Lucky for you, this woman was never a boy scout.  Her knots seemed firm at first, but as you wriggle your fingers and pick at the knots they begin to give. The woman turns, chuckling, back to her book and before long your hands are slipping out of the rope.  Another moment and you have freed your ankles.  You now sit naked but free on the cement floor.  Drawn on the floor around you are lines and strange characters in an arcane circle.  The naked woman is reading her book, not yet aware that you have freed yourself.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 40|Attack the woman,]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 41|Run for the door.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 17:55:36 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_25</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 26</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: the ritual is disrupted.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You scream and writhe on the floor trying to make as much noise and distraction as possible.  You wrigle your fingers and eventually find that the woman's knots aren't entirely secure.  After a few minutes of picking at the rope while the woman chants hysterically, you finally manage to free one hand.  Your feet are still tethered to the floor, but you can move about that point to an extent. In an energetic attempt to distract the woman from her mad ritual you reach out and strike her hard accross one sensitive pink nipple.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You notice it before your hand comes in contact with the woman's flesh, but not in time to belay your strike.  Just before you slap the woman's breast, the room is bathed in a red light emanating from the circle drawn on the floor.  As soon as your hand comes in contact with the woman's skin she collapses in blind agony.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
A moment later, after the ritual has come screeching to a hault, the red light shifts to a firey orange.  The woman moans in pain and you look around horrified as the glowing markings on the floor suddenly erupt in flame.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 42|Sit frozen and watch events unfold.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 43|Finish removing the ropes and make for the exit, leaving the mysterious woman to her fate.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 44|Finish removing the ropes and carry the woman out with you.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 16:30:33 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_26</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 25</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;I'm going to kill you, you whore,&amp;quot; you shour at the woman, thrashing and pulling at your bonds.  Your scream echoes around the small room.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The woman laughs at your efforts.  &amp;quot;Oh, that's cute,&amp;quot; she chortles.  &amp;quot;I don't think you'll get very far against those knots.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Lucky for you, this woman was never a boy scout.  Her knots seemed firm at first, but as you wriggle your fingers and pick at the knots they begin to give. The woman turns, chuckling, back to her book and before long your hands are slipping out of the rope.  Another moment and you have freed your ankles.  You now sit naked but free on the cement floor.  Drawn on the floor around you are lines and strange characters in an arcane circle.  The naked woman is reading her book, not yet aware that you have freed yourself.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 40|Attack the woman,]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 40|Run for the door.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 16:10:37 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_25</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 25</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Fantasy_Life/_Page_25</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: you're free, now what?&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;I'm going to kill you, you whore,&amp;quot; you shour at the woman, thrashing and pulling at your bonds.  Your scream echoes around the small room.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The woman laughs at your efforts.  &amp;quot;Oh, that's cute,&amp;quot; she chortles.  &amp;quot;I don't think you'll get very far against those knots.&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Lucky for you, this woman was never a boy scout.  Her knots seemed firm at first, but as you wriggle your fingers and pick at the knots they begin to give. The woman turns, chuckling, back to her book and before long your hands are slipping out of the rope.  Another moment and you have freed your ankles.  You now sit naked but free on the cement floor.  Drawn on the floor around you are lines and strange characters in an arcane circle.  The naked woman is reading her book, not yet aware that you have freed yourself.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 40|Attack the woman,]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 40|Run for the door.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 15:23:47 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_25</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 18</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Fantasy_Life/_Page_18</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: outside Sanguine Sirens&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;As you continue to walk the sun sets and the city nightlife is illuminated by tungsten and neon.  More and more venues are becoming busy as the evening progresses. Many of them are the same kinds of bars and dives that you have been to dozens of times.  It might be nice to sit and eat while a pretty girl in a skimpy uniform serves you beer in a fake Irish accent.  On the other hand, there is one clu that stands out from the others.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The place is called &amp;quot;Sanguine Sirens&amp;quot; and you don't remember ever having heard of it before.  Despite your ignorance the club really seems to be a happening place.  There's a long line of people waiting behind the satin ropes, but the two bouncers seem to be getting them into the club fairly quickly after checking IDs.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 36|Get dinner at an Irish pub.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 37|Head into Sanguine Sirens alone.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 38|Text your buddies and have them meet you at Sanguine Sirens.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2012 01:32:38 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_18</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 14</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: at the club&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You walk into the Starlite Night Club and are greeted by waves of low thumping bass.  Your buddies Carl, Steve, Eddie, and James are standing by a table scoping out the dance floor as it starts to slowly fill. Right now the club is fairly deserted, they don't even charge cover this early, but later the party will really get started.  You order yourself a drink and join your friends for some laughs to start off the evening.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Sometimes it's fun to just watch guys make fools of themselves trying to talk to girls.  Sometimes it's even fun to make a fool of yourself just to see the girls' reactions.  But, it's always fun to get some tail to go home with.  In fact, you met your current girlfriend, Molly, on one of these guys' nights out.  She's not likely to be here tonight, but she won't mind if you have a &amp;lt;b&amp;gt;little&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt; fun.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 34|Try to get one of the guys sloshed.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 35|Dance up to a girl on the dance floor.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 23:19:34 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_14</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 7</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You just don't feel much like going to work today, so you fire off an email to your boss, Jennifer, to let her know you are taking a personal day.  With that taken care of you are free to spend your day as you please.  Most of your friends have work today, but you could always go out and meet new people.  Or, possibly you could convince your girlfriend, Molly, to play hookey with you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 32|Call up Molly before she goes to work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 33|Head over to the mall to meet new people.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 22:47:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_7</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 7</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: Take the day off.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You just don't feel much like going to work today, so you fire off an email to your boss, Jennifer, to let her know you are taking a personal day.  With that taken care of you are free to spend your day as you please.  Most of your friends have work today, but you could always go out and meet new people.  Or, possibly you could convince your girlfriend, Molly, to play hookey with you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 32|Call up Molly before she goes to work.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 33|Head over to the mall to meet new people.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:FantasyLife]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 22:45:58 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_7</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 27</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: you are now bound to the creature&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;hr /&gt;
&lt;div&gt;You lie naked on the cold cement floor looking for some way to escape while your captor flails about like a lunatic.  You are just starting to loosen the rope around your wrists when you notice a strange red glow.  A look of manic joy covers the woman's face as you both realize that the lines and runes drawn on the floor are the source of the blood-red light.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
As the seconds pass the light from the circle grows brighter and brighter.  The light begins to pulse and throb, the woman's voice rises in a crescendo to match the increasing light.  At the center of the the glowing circle, the floor on which you rest remains dark but you can feel the cement getting warmer against your flesh.  You are transfixed by what is going on around you, never having believed that it could be possible.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
There is a noise behind you like a heavy thump.  Then there is another at your feet.  The woman seems to be staring wide-eyed at something behind you.  She almost falters in her chanting.  A movement in front of you catches your eye.  Right in front of your eyes a small hump, about four inches across, grows out of the floor.  A moment later the hump has grown into a tendril over four feet long!&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The long tentacle lays itself across your body.  You feel the weight of what is likely other tendrils all along your body.  The tentacles appear to be getting tighter.  They are pressing you into the ground.  With every passing moment you expect the life to be choked out of you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The tentacles seem to have some kind of spines that are digging into your body.  The feeling is almost indescribable.  They are not penetrating any existing orifices, nor are they tearing at your skin.  It is almost like the tentacles are growing into your body.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The ground beneath you undulates and turns soft.  The rope anchoring your feet snaps as you are lifted into the air.  You realize that the thick flagella were not trying to crush you against the floor, they were using your body as an anchor to pull the rest of the being through the portal.  A moment later you are sharing the center of the magical circle with a giant, pulsating mass of tentacles.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You feel as if the monster before you is staring at you, studying you.  Then the feeling of the tentacles squeezing and growing into your body swells to agony as the creature descends on you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
----&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
You are alone in the center of the circle.  You are still naked, but you are no longer bound.  The woman has stopped her changing and is looking at you in horror.  Understanding blooms in your mind, knowledge from somewhere beyond the cosmos.  She got it almost right.  Your captor performed every task of the ritual perfectly, with one small mistake: she switched the positions of the priest and the sacrifice.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
With that knowledge comes more.  You are now permanently bonded with the creature that was summoned. That creature is not truly a demon, but a being from another dimension of space.  The tentacles were merely how tiny bits of the being, single cells or less, appear when projected into your dimension.  You can now cause parts of your partner-being to project into your own dimension in the form of tentacles that you can control.  These tentacles can take on any simple form from needles to clubs to phalluses and more.  They do not have to originate from your body and can appear to be protruding from thin air.  You will, however, always be able to feel them as much or as little as you like.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The final bit of information that comes flooding into your consciousness in that the ritual is not over.  The blood of the woman who took you captive is required to seal the bond.  A drop or a gallon, the woman's blood must be spilled or a tear will form between your dimension and your symbiont's destroying them both.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 28|Drain her body in a fountain of blood.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 29|Spill her blood as you rape her.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 30|Give her a quick prick and tell her to leave.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 31|Do nothing and allow the world to end.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=80%|MP=0|Level=2}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 15:13:19 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_27</comments>		</item>
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			<title>User:Lord Crontab</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;Created page with 'I mainly contribute to erotic stories, but I try to only add a page if I feel like I have something to add.  Away from this site I also write erotic short stories. [[Category:Use…'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;I mainly contribute to erotic stories, but I try to only add a page if I feel like I have something to add.  Away from this site I also write erotic short stories.&lt;br /&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 04:31:14 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Lord_Crontab</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 24</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: the ritual begins&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You try to calm yourself down.  Antagonizing your captor won't go very far towards convincing her to release you.  &amp;quot;Just what is this ritual supposed to accomplish?&amp;quot; you ask cordially.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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The woman smirks and spreads her arms, further exposing her chest and indicating the floor around you.  It's hard to tell from where you are lying down, but it looks like there are markings of some kind on the floor.  &amp;quot;This magic circle will form a portal to Hell, allowing a demon to enter our world.  As the sacrifice placed at the center of the circle, you will likely be devoured.&amp;quot;  The woman's voice begins to get louder as she talks.  &amp;quot;The ritual will bind the demon to me and it will be under my complete control.  Then I will be free to unleash its power on the world!&amp;quot;  This last declaration rises into a cackling laugh that reminds you of a Saturday morning cartoon.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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The woman is obviously nuts.  There's no telling what she will do when her little ritual doesn't work out.  Whatever she does, it's not likely to be pleasant.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Once your captor gets her hysteria under control she shifts to a kneeling position.  Despite your worry over what is about to happen to you, you still take a moment to notice that the woman's pubic mound is completely devoid of hair and her clit and inner labia can just be seen past the covering of her outer labia.  &amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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She begins chanting in some sort of language that sounds like utter gibberish.  She rises and falls on her knees with the rythm of the chant.  The motion causes her breasts to bounce and jiggle.  Her arms begin to move in strange, undulating patterns in front of her.  It is clear that the woman is really getting into this.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 26|Distract her.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 27|Do nothing.]]  There's no telling what could happen if you disrupt a magic ritual!&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 21:26:18 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_24</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 21</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Fantasy_Life/_Page_21</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: she wants the world&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;&amp;quot;What do you want with me?&amp;quot; you ask, almost screaming at the woman.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Oh, it's nothing personal,&amp;quot; she replies.  &amp;quot;You were just the first guy I got to follow me down that alley.  As for what I want; I want what every girl wants: the world.&amp;quot;  The woman's eyes take on a somewhat dreamy quality as she stares vacantly at nothing.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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She rouses herself from her fantasy and looks back at the book in her lap.  &amp;quot;I guess everything's set.  Shall we get started?&amp;quot;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 24|&amp;quot;What's this ritual supposed to do, anyway?&amp;quot;]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 25|&amp;quot;I'm going to kill you!&amp;quot;]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 20:59:29 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_21</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 19</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Fantasy_Life/_Page_19</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: she is also naked&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You find that your feet are tethered to the floor, effectively keeping you in one place. Even with your wrists and ankles tied behind you, you manage to turn yourself over.  As you suspected, the Redhead from the alley is sitting across the room from you reading.  The only light in the room comes from a single exposed bulb in a table lamp that is sitting on the floor beside your captor.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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What you did not expect is that your captor is also naked.  She is sitting on the floor reading an old hard-cover book.  She looks up as you turn to face her.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;I was beginning to wonder if you were going to wake up before it was time to start the ritual.&amp;quot;  The woman lowered the book to her lap revealing her grapefruit-sized breasts with their bright pink nipples.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*Ask [[Fantasy Life/_Page 21|&amp;quot;What do you want with me?&amp;quot;]]&lt;br /&gt;
*Ask [[Fantasy Life/_Page 22|&amp;quot;What's going on here?&amp;quot;]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 23|Remain silent]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 20:39:42 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_19</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 17</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Fantasy_Life/_Page_17</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: you are bound &amp;amp; naked&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You follow the woman down the alley, but soon lose sight of her.  The quiet stillness of the alley tempered with the noisy bustle of the nearby street is somewhat unsettling.  You are just about to head back to the street when a cloth is deftly placed over your mouth and nose.  Before you can gather your wits enough to act, you inhale deeply and the world goes dark around you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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The first thing you notice as you regain consciousness is that you are cold.  The second is that you can't move freely.  As your mind clears you find that you are naked, bound in a loose hogtie, and llying on a cement floor.  The room appears to be a warehouse or storage shed of some kind about twelve or fifteen feet square with corrugated steel walls.  A noise behind you indicates that you are not alone.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 19|Try to roll over and investigate the noise.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 20|Scream for help!]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=90%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 20:07:59 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_17</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fantasy Life/ Page 16</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New page: follow the woman or not?&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;You walk out into the warm summer evening, leaving your car parked at the office.  It's still early, but businesses are already starting to bustle with the after-work crowd.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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A woman catches your eye as you walk.  She couldn't be any older than you are, probably a few years younger.  She has vibrant red hair that cascades over her shoulders.  She is wearing tight black PVC pants that cling to her narrow hips and a black bustier that accentuates her even more narrow waist.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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As you get closer, the woman smiles at you.  She becons you with a crook of her finger and a seductive look in her eyes.  The mysterious woman retreats down an alley obviously hoping that you will follow.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 17|Follow the mysterious woman.]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Fantasy Life/_Page 18|Ignore the woman and keep looking for some fun.]]&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=none|Health=100%|MP=0|Level=1}}&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Fantasy Life]]&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 19:47:24 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Talk:Fantasy_Life/_Page_16</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Category:Fantasy Life</title>
			<link>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Category:Fantasy_Life</link>
			<description>&lt;p&gt;Lord Crontab:&amp;#32;New Category Page&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;An index of all of the pages in the story &amp;quot;[[Fantasy Life]]&amp;quot;.&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 19:12:49 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Lord Crontab</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Category_talk:Fantasy_Life</comments>		</item>
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