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Ironwill — Mon, 24 Nov 2014 02:46:26 GMT

Ironwill:

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I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Make Jessica a tool to use to further your plans. Return her personality, but make it so she will follow your orders, no matter who you are possessing.

Ironwill — Sun, 23 Nov 2014 23:51:02 GMT

Ironwill: Created page with '"Wait," you say, and Jessica complies. Now you need to be quick in order for this to work, since Valeria is bound to get suspicious. You set up a codephrase, 'Beach Jessica Bud…'

"Wait," you say, and Jessica complies. Now you need to be quick in order for this to work, since Valeria is bound to get suspicious.

You set up a codephrase, 'Beach Jessica Bud' which, when said by someone, will cause her to accept whatever said by that person to be truth, and to obey any of their commands without question. This lasts until the person says the phrase again, or someone else does, at which point they will take command of Jessica instead. Since you had experience in this kind of activity in the past, you set up a few redundancies as well, making it that control of Jessica could always be exchanged with the codephrase. Once you finish, you let Jessica's original personality return.

"Sweetie, what's going on?" she asks, confused. "And why am I naked?"

"It's okay to be naked when you're alone with me," you say.

"What are you talking about," Jessica replies, as she walks over to her closet to dress herself. "Now get out and let me get dressed!" Jessica must be returning to her senses, you figure, since she just spoke with such authority. Looks like you forgot an important step.

"I mean, ''Beach Jessica Bud''. You want to be naked around me, Mom," you say.

"I know, sweetie," she says, her voice now soft and motherly, as if she never did order her son out of her room. Still, she continues to dress herself. "I just need to make sure I have my clothes on when I go down to make breakfast, since your sister is down there. After all, I don't think it's proper to do housework naked in front of her." You smile; it looks like this was a success. "Just wait there and we can go down together once I am done." As if on cue, your - Brandon's - stomach growls.

Getting some food would be useful for your host, but it doesn't mean you can't have a little ''fun'', now that Jessica is programmed.

*[[Tool Jessica makes a meal|Eat breakfast with Jessica and Valerie.]]
*[[Sex with Brandon's Mom|Make Jessica fuck you. Make her think it was her idea.]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Stay in Brandon, and call out to Jessica to get her attention.

Ironwill — Sun, 23 Nov 2014 23:18:13 GMT

Ironwill:

"Mom, are you alright?" you ask.

Jessica turns her head to you with a faint smile on her face. "Yes," she replies, almost surprising you. She seems to be in a very suggestible state right now, so you decide to test your theory.

"Then get out of bed and take off your clothes," you command. Wordlessly, Jessica does as you say, getting herself out of bed, the bedding being pushed onto the floor. She removes her clothes in a similarly careless fashion, letting her underwear fall to the floor. As you watch, an interesting memory surfaces from Brandon's mind, where he imagined himself having his mother under his hypnotic control, hanging on his every command.

You are then interrupted by a yell from downstairs. "Mom!" It's Valerie's voice. "Where's breakfast?" As if on cue, Jessica begins to make her way to the door, as if to make breakfast without any clothes on. If you want to take advantage of the situation, now is the time.

*[[Let Jessica make breakfast as she is now.]]
*[[Give a gift to Brandon. Return his mother's personality, but put her under his sole control.]]
*[[Tool Jessica|Make Jessica a tool to use to further your plans. Return her personality, but make it so she will follow your orders, no matter who you are possessing.]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Shift into Valerie and see how Jessica has changed

Ironwill — Sun, 23 Nov 2014 23:07:50 GMT

Ironwill: Created page with 'Once in Valerie, you decide to wait until she normally wakes up, and since her classes start in the afternoon today, she is sleeping in. You wait patiently until a scream wakes …'

Once in Valerie, you decide to wait until she normally wakes up, and since her classes start in the afternoon today, she is sleeping in. You wait patiently until a scream wakes up Valerie, at which point you rush out the door still wearing lingerie, excited to see what happens. The scream came from the bedroom, so you run in to find Jessica and Brandon.

Jessica's transformation was more or less complete; her skin and hair was now a pale green and long tentacle-like vines were extending from her hands. They were molesting her son, Brandon, filling every orifice they could find, much like what happened to Jessica the day before, thanks to your abilities. The boy was crying, weakly begging his mother to stop. Valerie stood there with an disinterested look on her face, as if that she didn't even recognize what was going on. In fact, she didn't even dress herself before attacking her son, confirming that whatever you did the day before did a number on her brain. This turn of events was not quite what you expected, but you can make it work, you figure.

Soon, Brandon goes silent, and the plant-monster Valerie releases the boy who collapses onto the floor. She doesn't even look at you, giving you some time to decide how to handle this situation.

*[[Attempt to communicate with Jessica]]
*[[Plant-Monster Jessica|Shift over to Jessica]]
*[[Valerie, Flee!|Run away screaming]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Valerie Jones]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Stay in Brandon, and call out to Jessica to get her attention.

Ironwill — Sun, 23 Nov 2014 18:04:45 GMT

Ironwill: Created page with '"Mom, are you alright?" you ask. Jessica turns her head to you with a faint smile on her face. "Yes," she replies, almost surprising you. She seems to be in a very suggestible…'

"Mom, are you alright?" you ask.

Jessica turns her head to you with a faint smile on her face. "Yes," she replies, almost surprising you. She seems to be in a very suggestible state right now, so you decide to test your theory.

"Then get out of bed and take off your clothes," you command. Wordlessly, Jessica does as you say, getting herself out of bed, the bedding being pushed onto the floor. She removes her clothes in a similar careless fashion, letting her underwear fall to the floor. As you watch, an interesting memory surfaces from Brandon's memory, where he imagined himself to have his mother under his hypnotic control, hanging on his every command.

You are then interrupted by a yell from downstairs. "Mom!" It's Valerie's voice. "Where's breakfast?" As if on cue, Jessica begins to make her way to the door, as if to make breakfast, without any clothes on. If you want to take advantage of the situation, now is the time.

*[[Let Jessica make breafast as she is now.]]
*[[Give a gift to Brandon. Return his mother's personality, but put her under his sole control.]]
*[[Make Jessica a tool to use to further your plans. Return her personality, but make it so she will follow your orders, no matter who you are possessing.]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Shift into Brandon and see how Jessica has changed

Ironwill — Sun, 23 Nov 2014 17:37:37 GMT

Ironwill: Created page with 'You shift over to Brandon, Jessica's son, while he was still sleeping. Excited to discover how the boy's mother changed, you force yourself awake and head down to the kitchen. …'

You shift over to Brandon, Jessica's son, while he was still sleeping. Excited to discover how the boy's mother changed, you force yourself awake and head down to the kitchen.

No one is there.

Confused, you head back and knock on Jessica's door. When you get no response, you enter the room, only to find that Jessica is sitting up in the bed, with an unfocused, but blissful look on her face. Huh.

*[[Shift into Jessica to experience first-hand her changes.]]
*[[Stay in Brandon, and call out to Jessica to get her attention.]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]