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Intheworstways — Wed, 29 Jun 2016 08:39:35 GMT

Intheworstways: /* In The Worst Ways */

Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

Thanks! I didn't know there were scroll bars in the chatroom template but that doesn't matter as much. I made the box to scroll but I didn't know if the scroll bars would be different on desktop or not. I need to rewrite the context but I was kind of going for a chat window like Yahoo Messenger and I made sure the message field and the "typing" field would scroll if the text got too long instead of stretching.

I was more worried about the smartphone text template, but I used basically the same scrolling window code for that as I used for the messenger window so I assume there is one there too. On my screen, the scroll bar is barely a sliver that only appears when I scroll up and down so it's not obtrusive, which I guess is what I'm more worried about especially with the chat bubbles on the right side. Thank you for letting me know what that looked like :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 09:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Go right ahead :v. I was kinda hoping more people would use the templates than just me, though I might still change some things about the templates, so let me know if I break something if I do?

I'm going to experiment with a couple things. Since I know I can use {{{}}} to change parts of the code itself, I'm going to look into allowing the person using the template to change things like color schemes for the chat window and font, and I may be able to make a universal chat bubble that you can put to the left or right as needed as well as changing the color of the text and the bubble. Could make things much easier and more versatile to use :v-- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:37, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Sorry the new text bubble template is a bit complicated to use. I tried to make it as streamlined as possible, as in people using it not having to out in a bunch of code themselves, while still giving as many options as needed, but there were some things I just couldn't figure out how to simplify.

I might have been able to replace the short margin by making it the same variable as the alignment, so if it was set to float left or right then the 5px margin would be on the same side, but I couldn't think of a way to make the 20px margin automatically set to the opposite side, and if I removed it entirely it would just be stacked bubbles of mostly the same width which would defeat the purpose of designing them that way in the first place.

If you went to mess with the code or make the names of the variables less wordy you can totally do that though, I just gave them the first names that came to mind.

A yeah I made it so the bubbles can be told to either float left or float right, and hopefully the part of the code that says "clear: both;" will make it so that even if the bubbles are put in a larger field they won't float next to each other and I won't have to change the margins again if I try to do something like that. That's how that's supposed to work, anyway, but I'm not sure if I did it right.

I hate the 20 minute rule. It seems mostly unnecessary for it to be that long, and I haven't been able to successfully link anything at all because of it. My session keeps timing out before I can submit the captcha. Which is gonna suck if I ever want to start my planned idea for a more point and click type cyoa (not that I need another unfinished project but yknow.)

I did have an idea though for your emoticons and I was thinking it might work better for you than for me because the one website I've found that does technically work on mobile is still absolutely terrible on mobile, but there are websites that make pixel art into CSS code, you just have to figure out how to restructure the code so it works on this site. But it should be more or less the same structure as that space invader pixel art object you added to my talk page when it's done. You could make pixel art emoticons then use them instead of external images. And you can probably make those into a template, too.

I spent probably 6 hours making that phone and getting the bubbles to do what I wanted the first time around. Probably more since then. Like I'm sure you'd have figured all of this out too if you spent several hours doing virtually nothing but poking at it until it worked, but I'm sure you have other things going on in your life, and you've actually been doing other things around the site. Meanwhile, I have things I probably ''should'' be doing, but I fixate on anything ''but'' what I need to be doing instead.

I'm glad I've learned so much, and maybe it'll apply to other ends later, but the fact that I spent so much concentrated time and effort learning how to code these things for choose your own smut isn't something I feel particularly proud of lol.

However you decide to proceed with your text project, best of luck :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:09, 29 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. sorry for such a long message.)

'''kushagragour.in/lab/picssel-art/''' this one was the one i found that worked for pixels. The table smiley you put in my talk page, idk why but it's weirdly stretched vertically. The tool at this link puts out a code that looks a lot like that space invader you put on my talk page except using px instead of em. I don't have the patience for it because the input box is tiny and it doesn't respond if I zoom into it, so I have to be zoomed out to do everything. Would be different if I were on a computer, though. I was going to use it for something else.

I was thinking about using chyoa as well, and I might do so in the future, but at first I came here because chyoa had rules against what I had in mind for writing. I came here initially to write my ideas for Marie, and chyoa has rules against some of the things I had planned.

I don't just enjoy writing and art. If I'm not doing or haven't done something creative in some way I feel like I'm wasting my time. Even though half the time I can't will myself to even pick up my sketchbook. I don't think I'm a very good artist yet, or writer, but I keep trying because I feel like I need to, even if I never finish anything.

Writing here was a bit of a big step for me because prior to this I barely shared any of my work anywhere. Mostly because I never finish anything, though this medium kind of favors unfinished works, it would seem.

I used to play a lot of videogames, before my laptop died, before I moved and had to leave a ps3 behind. Not that I really got to use the ps3 all that much while I was there, other people kept hogging it. I'd kill to play fallout. Any fallout. Even 1 and 2.

Lately I've been stuck with Pixel Dungeon (which I both recommend playing and staying as far away from as possible. It's addictive and frustrating as hell.) and the basketball mini game that Facebook messenger has. I had fallout shelter but after a while that kinda becomes just, the same thing over and over.

For what it's worth, I haven't really noticed anything wrong with the way you write that I myself as a native English speaker wouldn't do. And I don't know any Chinese at all so you're a leg up on me there.

I'm going to bed though. I'm dead tired and I plan to do stuff tomorrow. I hope you have a good day! Sorry for the long message again. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:39, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes, there is feedback on the review. Unless you meant your review of the End of the World, in which case, i agree with your review. For my feedback on your review of my story see the comment just above this one. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I would not dare to insist you do anything, but I would suggest that your next story review by the completed adult story "Megan". -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7 or, at the very most, July 10. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "grill". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing? Edit: Here's Moira's speech below:

"Well, look around at the world we live in. It may be okay to you, but I've read about what it used to be like, and this isn't it. So we all need something that keeps us going, despite all the terrible things around us. For me, it's things like this book... did you ever try to put a broken piece of glass back together? Even if the pieces fit, you can't make it whole again the way it was. But if you're clever, you can still use the pieces to make other useful things. Maybe even something wonderful, like a mosaic. Well, the world broke just like glass. And everyone's trying to put it back together like it was, but it'll never come together the same way... the Wasteland Survival Guide isn't much towards that lofty goal, but it's an important one. And that's why I need your help. I don't think I can do it alone."

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 7 or 10.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so....you know. ''Simple''. But hey, don't mind me. I'm just a reader with an opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way, has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's goddamn terrifying but I'd rather be scared then bored because it's just the same thing you get in every 4 out of 5 Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as we didn't need the description about his...ejaculate.

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshiping cult rather then real Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually ends up as a C grade minor villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn it.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

This might seem...unusual for me to ask but would you play a card game where losing meant you had to lose a piece of clothing?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 10:18 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

Have you ever heard of Limbo of the Lost? It's not a CYOS, it's a game. One of the greatest games ever made, if I do say so myself. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 20:55 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

I've seen the "End of the World" review. All of your reviews, in fact. You're not doing too bad. Keep going. For your next CYOS, how about "The Life of a Medieval Princess"? It may not good but it's definitely more sane then the one you're doing right now. Sand in a vagina...for God's sake. P.S "End of the World" is more D grade in my opinion but it does have about three things above the average Adult CYOS such as "Life of a 13 Year Old": there is a ''story'' to it, it actually has some semblance of morality, and the protagonist is actually allowed to be noble, courageous, and even heroic. I gotta tel you, that is something I've learned not to expect from Adult Story CYOSs. Nothing against your review, however. I'm just a reader with an opinion, to borrow the catchphrase of an awesome reviewer named SF Debris. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:29 (Louisiana Time), 25 June 2016

So was strip poker and naked twister the only type of games you've played or have you played more games like that game where you have a conversation on the phone while having sex and you try not to give any clue that you're having sex at the moment to the person at the other end of the line? P.S. I suppose you haven't told any stories about...erm, naked twister on your blog? --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:45 (Louisiana Time), 29 June 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you again, I am thinking of updating all my pages to have a unique identifier to the story although I must say it does bug me that in the category index page all the pages are then listed with the story header prefixed it is a pity that there isn't a way for the index to show a chosen page title. Would it be terrible to index it with a post-fix identifier, as instead of "Hyde Road - Go to next page" it was "Go to next page - Hyde Road". Is that too non-conformist of me? Anyway I think I have the subcategory thing understood now except I seemed to have some issue in getting it to list the subcategory under the correct letter in the main categories index as in I wanted it to list Hyde road - Carla Yale under C not H but I couldn't seem to get that right. Anyway main reason I want to add the subcategory is I want to create a set of pages that would basically be my background notes. I would like to have a bunch of pages that explain the world as well as bunch of random story facts that I need to keep track of while writing but don't want them to show up in the main index, but rather under the sub-index, if that isn't too confusing. I don't really want the average reader to be reading them by accident because they will have spoilers in them, but I would like them available online. I am presuming that it wouldn't be a problem for these pages only to have the subcategory as their category.
Again sorry for all the questions, and thank you for taking the time to answer. I am trying to add little bit by little bit to the story so afraid it's taking me quite some time to get it all down, but I think it is getting there.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, I did try that but it isn't working the way I would have expected, when I type it like that it puts the tile of the page in the subcategory under C but in the main category the subcategory remains unchanged. So basically under Hyde Road, the page "attempt to start a conversation" is listed in A but in Hyde Road - Carla Yale it is listed under C. What I want is Hyde Road - Carla Yale. I don;t know maybe I broke something :/ I'll update all the Carla Yale pages and see if it fixes it... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:12, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am following how it works, so it's working as intended. Unfortunately I was trying to do something slightly different so that's where the confusion is coming in I think. I think I know where I went wrong. Will get back to you in a second. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:25, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Alright, sorry I had to disappear, the world was ending, sort of. Anyway, yes I understand the whole where the category name is coming from... was a bit of a stupid from my side. The category page gets it's category name from category listed in the subcategories index page... which is obvious when I think about it... anyways thank you, you helped me understand it a lot better.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 14:31, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

Thanks for the notes and advice. Very much appreciated. Really wasn't looking to get into a flame war with anyone, but also would expect more of a welcome to the site than what I got. Hoping to simply move on and not be chased out.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 02:51, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

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Intheworstways — Wed, 29 Jun 2016 07:09:23 GMT

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Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

Thanks! I didn't know there were scroll bars in the chatroom template but that doesn't matter as much. I made the box to scroll but I didn't know if the scroll bars would be different on desktop or not. I need to rewrite the context but I was kind of going for a chat window like Yahoo Messenger and I made sure the message field and the "typing" field would scroll if the text got too long instead of stretching.

I was more worried about the smartphone text template, but I used basically the same scrolling window code for that as I used for the messenger window so I assume there is one there too. On my screen, the scroll bar is barely a sliver that only appears when I scroll up and down so it's not obtrusive, which I guess is what I'm more worried about especially with the chat bubbles on the right side. Thank you for letting me know what that looked like :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 09:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Go right ahead :v. I was kinda hoping more people would use the templates than just me, though I might still change some things about the templates, so let me know if I break something if I do?

I'm going to experiment with a couple things. Since I know I can use {{{}}} to change parts of the code itself, I'm going to look into allowing the person using the template to change things like color schemes for the chat window and font, and I may be able to make a universal chat bubble that you can put to the left or right as needed as well as changing the color of the text and the bubble. Could make things much easier and more versatile to use :v-- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:37, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Sorry the new text bubble template is a bit complicated to use. I tried to make it as streamlined as possible, as in people using it not having to out in a bunch of code themselves, while still giving as many options as needed, but there were some things I just couldn't figure out how to simplify.

I might have been able to replace the short margin by making it the same variable as the alignment, so if it was set to float left or right then the 5px margin would be on the same side, but I couldn't think of a way to make the 20px margin automatically set to the opposite side, and if I removed it entirely it would just be stacked bubbles of mostly the same width which would defeat the purpose of designing them that way in the first place.

If you went to mess with the code or make the names of the variables less wordy you can totally do that though, I just gave them the first names that came to mind.

A yeah I made it so the bubbles can be told to either float left or float right, and hopefully the part of the code that says "clear: both;" will make it so that even if the bubbles are put in a larger field they won't float next to each other and I won't have to change the margins again if I try to do something like that. That's how that's supposed to work, anyway, but I'm not sure if I did it right.

I hate the 20 minute rule. It seems mostly unnecessary for it to be that long, and I haven't been able to successfully link anything at all because of it. My session keeps timing out before I can submit the captcha. Which is gonna suck if I ever want to start my planned idea for a more point and click type cyoa (not that I need another unfinished project but yknow.)

I did have an idea though for your emoticons and I was thinking it might work better for you than for me because the one website I've found that does technically work on mobile is still absolutely terrible on mobile, but there are websites that make pixel art into CSS code, you just have to figure out how to restructure the code so it works on this site. But it should be more or less the same structure as that space invader pixel art object you added to my talk page when it's done. You could make pixel art emoticons then use them instead of external images. And you can probably make those into a template, too.

I spent probably 6 hours making that phone and getting the bubbles to do what I wanted the first time around. Probably more since then. Like I'm sure you'd have figured all of this out too if you spent several hours doing virtually nothing but poking at it until it worked, but I'm sure you have other things going on in your life, and you've actually been doing other things around the site. Meanwhile, I have things I probably ''should'' be doing, but I fixate on anything ''but'' what I need to be doing instead.

I'm glad I've learned so much, and maybe it'll apply to other ends later, but the fact that I spent so much concentrated time and effort learning how to code these things for choose your own smut isn't something I feel particularly proud of lol.

However you decide to proceed with your text project, best of luck :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:09, 29 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. sorry for such a long message.)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes, there is feedback on the review. Unless you meant your review of the End of the World, in which case, i agree with your review. For my feedback on your review of my story see the comment just above this one. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I would not dare to insist you do anything, but I would suggest that your next story review by the completed adult story "Megan". -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7 or, at the very most, July 10. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "grill". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing? Edit: Here's Moira's speech below:

"Well, look around at the world we live in. It may be okay to you, but I've read about what it used to be like, and this isn't it. So we all need something that keeps us going, despite all the terrible things around us. For me, it's things like this book... did you ever try to put a broken piece of glass back together? Even if the pieces fit, you can't make it whole again the way it was. But if you're clever, you can still use the pieces to make other useful things. Maybe even something wonderful, like a mosaic. Well, the world broke just like glass. And everyone's trying to put it back together like it was, but it'll never come together the same way... the Wasteland Survival Guide isn't much towards that lofty goal, but it's an important one. And that's why I need your help. I don't think I can do it alone."

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 7 or 10.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so....you know. ''Simple''. But hey, don't mind me. I'm just a reader with an opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way, has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's goddamn terrifying but I'd rather be scared then bored because it's just the same thing you get in every 4 out of 5 Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as we didn't need the description about his...ejaculate.

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshiping cult rather then real Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually ends up as a C grade minor villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn it.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

This might seem...unusual for me to ask but would you play a card game where losing meant you had to lose a piece of clothing?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 10:18 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

Have you ever heard of Limbo of the Lost? It's not a CYOS, it's a game. One of the greatest games ever made, if I do say so myself. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 20:55 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

I've seen the "End of the World" review. All of your reviews, in fact. You're not doing too bad. Keep going. For your next CYOS, how about "The Life of a Medieval Princess"? It may not good but it's definitely more sane then the one you're doing right now. Sand in a vagina...for God's sake. P.S "End of the World" is more D grade in my opinion but it does have about three things above the average Adult CYOS such as "Life of a 13 Year Old": there is a ''story'' to it, it actually has some semblance of morality, and the protagonist is actually allowed to be noble, courageous, and even heroic. I gotta tel you, that is something I've learned not to expect from Adult Story CYOSs. Nothing against your review, however. I'm just a reader with an opinion, to borrow the catchphrase of an awesome reviewer named SF Debris. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:29 (Louisiana Time), 25 June 2016

So was strip poker and naked twister the only type of games you've played or have you played more games like that game where you have a conversation on the phone while having sex and you try not to give any clue that you're having sex at the moment to the person at the other end of the line? P.S. I suppose you haven't told any stories about...erm, naked twister on your blog? --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:45 (Louisiana Time), 29 June 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you again, I am thinking of updating all my pages to have a unique identifier to the story although I must say it does bug me that in the category index page all the pages are then listed with the story header prefixed it is a pity that there isn't a way for the index to show a chosen page title. Would it be terrible to index it with a post-fix identifier, as instead of "Hyde Road - Go to next page" it was "Go to next page - Hyde Road". Is that too non-conformist of me? Anyway I think I have the subcategory thing understood now except I seemed to have some issue in getting it to list the subcategory under the correct letter in the main categories index as in I wanted it to list Hyde road - Carla Yale under C not H but I couldn't seem to get that right. Anyway main reason I want to add the subcategory is I want to create a set of pages that would basically be my background notes. I would like to have a bunch of pages that explain the world as well as bunch of random story facts that I need to keep track of while writing but don't want them to show up in the main index, but rather under the sub-index, if that isn't too confusing. I don't really want the average reader to be reading them by accident because they will have spoilers in them, but I would like them available online. I am presuming that it wouldn't be a problem for these pages only to have the subcategory as their category.
Again sorry for all the questions, and thank you for taking the time to answer. I am trying to add little bit by little bit to the story so afraid it's taking me quite some time to get it all down, but I think it is getting there.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, I did try that but it isn't working the way I would have expected, when I type it like that it puts the tile of the page in the subcategory under C but in the main category the subcategory remains unchanged. So basically under Hyde Road, the page "attempt to start a conversation" is listed in A but in Hyde Road - Carla Yale it is listed under C. What I want is Hyde Road - Carla Yale. I don;t know maybe I broke something :/ I'll update all the Carla Yale pages and see if it fixes it... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:12, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am following how it works, so it's working as intended. Unfortunately I was trying to do something slightly different so that's where the confusion is coming in I think. I think I know where I went wrong. Will get back to you in a second. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:25, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Alright, sorry I had to disappear, the world was ending, sort of. Anyway, yes I understand the whole where the category name is coming from... was a bit of a stupid from my side. The category page gets it's category name from category listed in the subcategories index page... which is obvious when I think about it... anyways thank you, you helped me understand it a lot better.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 14:31, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

Thanks for the notes and advice. Very much appreciated. Really wasn't looking to get into a flame war with anyone, but also would expect more of a welcome to the site than what I got. Hoping to simply move on and not be chased out.
--[[User:Bardo75|Bardo75]] 02:51, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

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Intheworstways — Wed, 29 Jun 2016 06:19:49 GMT

Intheworstways: Made every color a variable. Descriptions of variables shouldn't be included in the template but let me know if something breaks.

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Variables for use with the template.

'''Color''' = color for background of user list and chaticon. This and all other color variables can accept anything that would go in after color= such as "red" or "#e5e5e5”. Yes I know just naming it "color" is confusing but it was the first one I tested to see if it was possible to change colors like this, so I'm just going to leave it be.

'''Users''' = list of users currently in the chatroom. Should be used to identify who the player cracter is chatting with either by their username or by their name, however you feel like going about it.

'''Chaticon''' = ideally where the user icon of the player character would go, if you can work out how to add one that doesn't break the rest of the window.

'''Bgcolor''' = color for chat window background, as in the header and outlines of everything else.

'''Chatroomname''' = the name of the chatroom. Can be the name of the person the player character is chatting with, can be a title for the chatroom, can even just be "chatroom" if you don't want to come up with something.

'''Chatroomnamecolor''' = font color for the title of the chatroom.

'''Textbordercolor''' = color for the border of the message field and the "options" field which corresponds with where one would be typing outgoing messages.

'''Textbackgroundcolor''' = color for the background of the message and options fields.

'''Chattext''' = body of the chat. Messages between characters in the chatroom.

'''Chatoptions''' = options worded as responses to the messages above, though not all options necessarily have to be in this field. They could be in the body of the chat, or even outside the chat window depending on the context.

'''Sendbuttoncolor''' = color of the send button.

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Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl

Intheworstways — Tue, 28 Jun 2016 21:43:39 GMT

Intheworstways: Swapped out for the new template. The new text bubble template was made mostly still using the same code as Dirtyme's templates but more round and with variables controlling alignment and color.

You find a personals ad put up by a self proclaimed "geek girl", she claims she has room to spare and more than enough money to support herself and a few others. For this reason, she's offering "cute boys" free room and board, and asks anyone interested to message her with a picture.

Well, free room and board sounds like exactly what you would like, so you message her with a picture of yourself.

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|message='''JC101:''' Hey, are you still looking for tenants?}}

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|message='''Harukosama26:''' (º﹃º) Sweet. Yes, I am. Are you interested?}}

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|message='''JC101:''' Definitely. So, what's the catch? I'm sure there's some kind of tradeoff, right?}}

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|message='''Harukosama26:''' There is. There are some requirements, you've already met the first one which is being cute.}}

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|message='''Harukosama26:''' But first we need to get some things cleared up. First, how old are you?}}

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|message='''Harukosama26:''' （●＞ω＜●） Good. Second, of these animals, which do you like best: [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Cat| Cat]], [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Mouse| Mouse]], [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Fox| Fox]], or [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Bunny| Bunny]]?}}

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Intheworstways — Tue, 28 Jun 2016 21:35:53 GMT

Intheworstways: added some instructions that shouldn't be included in the template itself.

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'''"Align"''' = alignment of the bubble. Left or right only.

'''"Longmargin" and "Shortmargin"''' = Longmargin is 20px, Short margin is 5px, they can be left or right but one has to be left and the other has to be right. Ideally, the Shortmargin should be the same as Align and Longmargin the opposite.

'''"Fontcolor"''' = color of the font in the bubble. Can be any valid named or hex code color designation.

'''"Message"''' = message to be displayed inside the chat bubble.

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Intheworstways — Tue, 28 Jun 2016 20:54:41 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 2

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Intheworstways — Tue, 28 Jun 2016 20:47:11 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 1

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User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Intheworstways — Tue, 28 Jun 2016 19:37:53 GMT

Intheworstways: /* In The Worst Ways */

Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]

Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

Thanks! I didn't know there were scroll bars in the chatroom template but that doesn't matter as much. I made the box to scroll but I didn't know if the scroll bars would be different on desktop or not. I need to rewrite the context but I was kind of going for a chat window like Yahoo Messenger and I made sure the message field and the "typing" field would scroll if the text got too long instead of stretching.

I was more worried about the smartphone text template, but I used basically the same scrolling window code for that as I used for the messenger window so I assume there is one there too. On my screen, the scroll bar is barely a sliver that only appears when I scroll up and down so it's not obtrusive, which I guess is what I'm more worried about especially with the chat bubbles on the right side. Thank you for letting me know what that looked like :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 09:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Go right ahead :v. I was kinda hoping more people would use the templates than just me, though I might still change some things about the templates, so let me know if I break something if I do?

I'm going to experiment with a couple things. Since I know I can use {{{}}} to change parts of the code itself, I'm going to look into allowing the person using the template to change things like color schemes for the chat window and font, and I may be able to make a universal chat bubble that you can put to the left or right as needed as well as changing the color of the text and the bubble. Could make things much easier and more versatile to use :v-- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:37, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes, there is feedback on the review. Unless you meant your review of the End of the World, in which case, i agree with your review. For my feedback on your review of my story see the comment just above this one. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I would not dare to insist you do anything, but I would suggest that your next story review by the completed adult story "Megan". -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "gril". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing? Edit: Here's Moira's speech:

"Well, look around at the world we live in. It may be okay to you, but I've read about what it used to be like, and this isn't it. So we all need something that keeps us going, despite all the terrible things around us. For me, it's things like this book... did you ever try to put a broken piece of glass back together? Even if the pieces fit, you can't make it whole again the way it was. But if you're clever, you can still use the pieces to make other useful things. Maybe even something wonderful, like a mosaic. Well, the world broke just like glass. And everyone's trying to put it back together like it was, but it'll never come together the same way... the Wasteland Survival Guide isn't much towards that lofty goal, but it's an important one. And that's why I need your help. I don't think I can do it alone."

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 8.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so...worthless. But hey, don't mind me. That's just my opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way,has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's goddamn terrifying but I'd rather be scared then bored. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as the willingness to perform a sexual act doesn't automatically reveal her as a spy. She could just be desperate. Also, didn't need the description about his...ejaculate.

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshiping cult rather then real Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually ends up as a C grade minor villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn it.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired". Edit: how about "Life of a 13 Year Old" next? --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

This might seem...unusual for me to ask but would you play a card game where losing meant you had to lose a piece of clothing? Edit: Ever played to lose? Also, naked twister? Is that really a thing? Isn't normal twister sexual enough?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 10:18 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

Have you ever heard of Limbo of the Lost? It's not a CYOS, it's a game. One of the greatest games ever made, if I do say so myself. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 20:55 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016

I've seen the "End of the World" review. All of your reviews, in fact. You're not doing too bad. Keep going. For your next CYOS, how about "The Life of a Medieval Princess"? It may not good but it's definitely more sane then the one you're doing right now. Sand in a vagina of a fictional character...for God's sake. P.S "End of the World" is more D grade in my opinion but it does have about three things above the average Adult CYOS such as "Life of a 13 Year Old": there is a ''story'' to it, it actually has some semblance of morality, and the protagonist is actually allowed to be noble, courageous, and even heroic. I gotta tel you, that is something I've learned not to expect from Adult Story CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:29 (Louisiana Time), 25 June 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you again, I am thinking of updating all my pages to have a unique identifier to the story although I must say it does bug me that in the category index page all the pages are then listed with the story header prefixed it is a pity that there isn't a way for the index to show a chosen page title. Would it be terrible to index it with a post-fix identifier, as instead of "Hyde Road - Go to next page" it was "Go to next page - Hyde Road". Is that too non-conformist of me? Anyway I think I have the subcategory thing understood now except I seemed to have some issue in getting it to list the subcategory under the correct letter in the main categories index as in I wanted it to list Hyde road - Carla Yale under C not H but I couldn't seem to get that right. Anyway main reason I want to add the subcategory is I want to create a set of pages that would basically be my background notes. I would like to have a bunch of pages that explain the world as well as bunch of random story facts that I need to keep track of while writing but don't want them to show up in the main index, but rather under the sub-index, if that isn't too confusing. I don't really want the average reader to be reading them by accident because they will have spoilers in them, but I would like them available online. I am presuming that it wouldn't be a problem for these pages only to have the subcategory as their category.
Again sorry for all the questions, and thank you for taking the time to answer. I am trying to add little bit by little bit to the story so afraid it's taking me quite some time to get it all down, but I think it is getting there.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, I did try that but it isn't working the way I would have expected, when I type it like that it puts the tile of the page in the subcategory under C but in the main category the subcategory remains unchanged. So basically under Hyde Road, the page "attempt to start a conversation" is listed in A but in Hyde Road - Carla Yale it is listed under C. What I want is Hyde Road - Carla Yale. I don;t know maybe I broke something :/ I'll update all the Carla Yale pages and see if it fixes it... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:12, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am following how it works, so it's working as intended. Unfortunately I was trying to do something slightly different so that's where the confusion is coming in I think. I think I know where I went wrong. Will get back to you in a second. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:25, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Alright, sorry I had to disappear, the world was ending, sort of. Anyway, yes I understand the whole where the category name is coming from... was a bit of a stupid from my side. The category page gets it's category name from category listed in the subcategories index page... which is obvious when I think about it... anyways thank you, you helped me understand it a lot better.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 14:31, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

GA/Lucy/Work/Leave

Intheworstways — Sun, 26 Jun 2016 06:32:24 GMT

Intheworstways:

Along with a small group mostly consisting of those who you've worked with for a while, you get up and leave.

You're in such a hurry to get out that you forget to change back into your normal clothes and give back the new equipment, and you don't realize it until you get home and take everything off.

You sit down and begin thinking about what to do now that you're out of a job, when your phone rings. It's one of your friends from work, one of the ones who left when you did, Aaron.

"Hey, Aaron." You say.

"Hey. I saw you left early like I did." He says.

"Yeah. I thought that was pretty messed up. I knew things were bad but I didn't expect to be drafted when I went into work today."

"Right? I'm glad we got the chance to leave though. Glass was giving me bad vibes."

"You too? She watched me change and I felt dirty. And is it just me or was her outfit a bit... I dunno..."

"Tight? Sexy? No that wasn't just you. I don't know what was up with her but she was giving me the most terrified boner I've ever had." He laughs a bit. "Well, I don't think going back to work is a good idea. What do you plan on doing?"

"I don't know yet. I just got home and realized I forgot to give all the new equipment back before I left. I don't know if I should take it back though."

"I'm sure they won't care. Whatever you decide, if you need my help with anything just let me know, I'll be home for a while." He says.

"I'll keep that in mind. Talk to you later." You say.

"Later." You both hang up.

As you hang up, you notice a group conversation taking place on a messenger app on your phone. Your two friends from outside of work, Caroline and Noah, brought you into a group chat.

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|Chatroomname=The Chat With Three Backs
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|Chattext=*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Guys, shit's going down outside.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Nobody's broken in here or anything but I'm afraid to leave the apartment.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' I can see people going fucking bugnuts trashing stores. They tipped a van a while ago.
*'''3point5shots:''' Well shit.
*'''3point5shots:''' I can drive to come get you but if things are that bad I don't feel safe going alone. Can you hold on til Lucy gets off work?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' I guess as long as nobody comes to the apartment.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Shit I just heard gunshots!
*'''3point5shots:''' Shit. Lucy, it'd be great if you stayed home today.
*'''NotASmartPerson:''' I don't think I need to tell you this but stay inside, keep the doors locked, turn on the TV or something but don't draw attention to yourself.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Yeah OK.
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*[[GA/Character/Caroline|3point5shots]]
|Chatoptions=*[[GA/Lucy/Work/Leave/Meet|We need to meet up. I know someone who lives closer to Noah. Noah, is there a back way out of your place, or a fire escape?]]
*[[GA/Lucy/Work/Leave/Rescue|Caroline, we need to go get him. I know someone who can help, we can swing by on the way to get Noah.]]
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[[Category: Global Anarchy|Lucy/Work/Leave]]

GA/Lucy/Friends

Intheworstways — Sun, 26 Jun 2016 06:31:06 GMT

Intheworstways: Holy shit it works. You can make parts of the code of the template one of the variables that you can supply on the page. Colors, at least.

The first thing you're worried about right now is whether your friends are okay.

Outside of work, you only really have two friends, Caroline and Noah. You message them both in a group to see if they're alright.

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|Chatroomname=The Chat With Three Backs
|color=#fff0ff
|Chattext=*'''NotASmartPerson:''' Hey, are you two alright? Things seem to be alright by my place for now, but it looks like things are going sideways a lot of other places.
*'''3point5shots:''' I'm doing fine. I think some of my neighbors headed downtown so it's quiet around here. Noah?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Guys, shit's going down outside.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Nobody's broken in here or anything but I'm afraid to leave the apartment.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' I can see people going fucking bugnuts trashing stores. They tipped a van a while ago.
*'''3point5shots:''' Well shit.
*'''NotASmartPerson:''' I don't think I need to tell you this but stay inside, keep the doors locked, turn on the TV or something but don't draw attention to yourself.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Yeah OK.
*'''3point5shots:''' Is staying there safe?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Shit I just heard gunshots!
*'''3point5shots:''' Guess that answers my question.
|Users=*[[GA/Character/Noah|PrettyBoyRN]]
*[[GA/Character/Caroline|3point5shots]]
|Chatoptions=*[[GA/Lucy/Friends/Meet|Noah, is there a back way out of your place, or a fire escape?]]
*[[GA/Lucy/Friends/Rescue|Caroline, we've got to go get him.]]
|Chaticon=If I could upload or link an image there would be one here.}}

[[Category: Global Anarchy|Lucy/Friends]]

Template:Chat window

Intheworstways — Sun, 26 Jun 2016 06:24:21 GMT

Intheworstways: Testing something.

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User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Intheworstways — Wed, 22 Jun 2016 09:10:59 GMT

Intheworstways: /* In The Worst Ways */ Thank you!

Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]

Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

Thanks! I didn't know there were scroll bars in the chatroom template but that doesn't matter as much. I made the box to scroll but I didn't know if the scroll bars would be different on desktop or not. I need to rewrite the context but I was kind of going for a chat window like Yahoo Messenger and I made sure the message field and the "typing" field would scroll if the text got too long instead of stretching.

I was more worried about the smartphone text template, but I used basically the same scrolling window code for that as I used for the messenger window so I assume there is one there too. On my screen, the scroll bar is barely a sliver that only appears when I scroll up and down so it's not obtrusive, which I guess is what I'm more worried about especially with the chat bubbles on the right side. Thank you for letting me know what that looked like :v -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 09:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "gril". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing?

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 8.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so...worthless. But hey, don't mind me. That's just my opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way,has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's simultaneously hilarious and terrifying. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then acting like a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as the willingness to perform a sexual act doesn't automatically reveal her as a spy. She could just be desperate. Also, didn't need the description about his...ejaculate. Eeeeuuugghhh...

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshipping cult rather then public Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually end up as a C grade minor or starting villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn you, Bile Fascination!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired".--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

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Intheworstways — Wed, 22 Jun 2016 08:23:24 GMT

Intheworstways: Nicer looking? I still think it's missing some things but I think I'm on the right track here.

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Intheworstways — Wed, 22 Jun 2016 08:08:53 GMT

Intheworstways:

Along with a small group mostly consisting of those who you've worked with for a while, you get up and leave.

You're in such a hurry to get out that you forget to change back into your normal clothes and give back the new equipment, and you don't realize it until you get home and take everything off.

You sit down and begin thinking about what to do now that you're out of a job, when your phone rings. It's one of your friends from work, one of the ones who left when you did, Aaron.

"Hey, Aaron." You say.

"Hey. I saw you left early like I did." He says.

"Yeah. I thought that was pretty messed up. I knew things were bad but I didn't expect to be drafted when I went into work today."

"Right? I'm glad we got the chance to leave though. Glass was giving me bad vibes."

"You too? She watched me change and I felt dirty. And is it just me or was her outfit a bit... I dunno..."

"Tight? Sexy? No that wasn't just you. I don't know what was up with her but she was giving me the most terrified boner I've ever had." He laughs a bit. "Well, I don't think going back to work is a good idea. What do you plan on doing?"

"I don't know yet. I just got home and realized I forgot to give all the new equipment back before I left. I don't know if I should take it back though."

"I'm sure they won't care. Whatever you decide, if you need my help with anything just let me know, I'll be home for a while." He says.

"I'll keep that in mind. Talk to you later." You say.

"Later." You both hang up.

As you hang up, you notice a group conversation taking place on a messenger app on your phone. Your two friends from outside of work, Caroline and Noah, brought you into a group chat.

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User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Intheworstways — Wed, 22 Jun 2016 06:15:44 GMT

Intheworstways: /* In The Worst Ways */ Sorry, rambling.

Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you :v.

I was actually coming on here to message you. I've been thinking about the problem with the chat bubbles. I was wondering if wrapping them in a frame like a table or something might give a rightmost side for the bubble to stick to? Something kind of like the other chat window I was working on, perhaps, or at least the part that scrolls?

I barely know how to use templates, but I was thinking if there was a way to put like a template within a template or something it might be possible? Thought I'd bring it up and see what you thought. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:26, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

You probably saw, but I sorted the problem with the bubbles out and made a phone template to go with them! I'm thinking about reusing the code from the bubble templates and making two more universal chat bubble templates, though.

The bubbles were pretty much entirely you, I just added some bits to make it do the thing. I didn't see any solutions for making the jc101 bubble stick to the right without ignoring the rest of the page, ''and'' only expand inward instead of off the right, so I had to make it float right, then force it to stack properly with the harukosama bubbles by giving them both a margin in the opposite direction.

It kinda feels like a cheap solution but it's the only thing I could get to work. The first time I applied the float right, all the bubbles just kind of mixed together.

Then I spent way too long obsessing over the phone template until it got to what it looks like now. Once I was done with everything I spent several minutes just scrolling the chat window up and down and giggling to myself.

I made the phone and my other chat window template to more or less be usable by whoever. Maybe it'd work for if you wanted to go with your idea for a story with texts? One thing I'm curious about though is, I only know how the phone template looks on mobile, I'm hoping the desktop version doesn't have an annoying scroll bar or anything.

I've been obsessed with coding these things since I started figuring things out but I still haven't gotten back into the swing of writing yet. Thank you for showing me it was possible to do more than just put text on a page here. Once I do get back to writing, there's so much more I still want to do. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC) (P.S. Sorry I'm rambling. I'm just really excited.)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.

P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have not played any of the Fallout games.

I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced.

If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.

Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I see you're reviewing stories. What do you think of this one? :)

http://www.editthis.info/create_your_own_story/A_Day_At_The_Races

-- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

If you want a nice, short, sane adult story to review to take your mind off The Devil's Daughter, I recommend A Big Ugly Story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Your review was quite accurate. And a description of exactly what I was aiming for -- realistic physical descriptions, quick on the sex since it is in the Adult stories section. Glad I achieved my goal, even if my work on the story petered out relatively quickly. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Alright, 4 things:

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?

B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?

C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic "gril". What if I am? Would it matter?

D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016
(Will finish later, busy at the moment.)

A. Huh. O.K, I get that. There's actually a explanation for why you might have heard of Wolverine much more. Here's the link: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WolverinePublicity He's the best at what he does and what he does is make gratuitous appearances to artificially hook in readers. I'm more of a Cyclops man but that's mostly because Cyclops gets so little love from fans, he's actually pretty cool, and I truly think that Wolverine is really ''fucking'' overrated. I mean, yeah, he deserves some respect but not the goddamn ''worship'' he's been getting. It's why I found Wolverine's part in X-Men: Apocalypse to be hilarious as it was basically a cameo!

B.

C. Uuuummmm...I'm not transgender. I'm just a dude trying to mess with you. I do that often in real life. Don't worry, I'll keep your secret. And yeah, I'm of the same mind on transgenders.

D. You're welcome. When Ramadan ends, I'll try to read your stuff for real. I'll be filling the discussion tabs with my comments and, I'll warn you, they may be a bit...caustic. I only mean well, though, and I'll try to be as fair as I can without seeming too harsh or too lenient.

E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4. Edit: I cut out my previous statement because I realized that I didn't really remember what happened back then and I couldn't read your thing to be sure. But I still believe that it wouldn't really happen. It was just a mercenary and two Institute technicians. I really doubt that the Institute would waste time like that. Also, I'm afraid that my computer wouldn't let Fallout 3 play so I can't really be sure about your depiction of Moira Brown and I can't read the Wasteland Guide anyway because it's Ramadan. Look up Brown's speech about why she's doing this. It might help and even if it doesn't, it's not a bad speech. P.S. Ever thought of trying Fallout New Vegas as part of your Fallout thing?

F. "And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way." Go ahead. Perhaps I could direct you to some other rape scenes in other works so you could fix them? I'm unfortunately witness to more fictional rape scenes then I want to admit.

G. Erm...(clears throat) I, um, heard something about a, erm, "gangbang". (Blushes) You don't have to if you don't want but I'd like to hear about it. Not now, though. Just around the second week of July, around July 8.

H. Do swimsuits that become semi-translucent when wet exist in real life or was this a case of "pulling out of thin air for the sake of sexiness"?

I. Here's a little note about originality from TV Tropes's "So You Want To / Be Original":"The first paradox is that it is impossible to create anything truly "new". One cannot create something from nothing. Every fictional work (with a few exceptions) is based on previous works...The second paradox is to realize that unlimited creative freedom actually puts limits on one's ability to create a story. Conversely, narrowing one's creative options actually helps to make creativity unlimited...;Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it'. If you don’t see how people before you made stories, it's very likely that you will unwittingly repeat the same ideas. And even worse, you might think that you were the first to come up with those ideas." Edit: In short, --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:13 (Louisiana Time), 15 June 2016

Yep. I definitely understand the average CYOS reader or at least the average CYOS writer. God, do I wish I don't. You know, sometimes I wonder, "Why? Why do I get so pissed off at Adult CYOSs? They're not actual stories, I know that they're just made for wanking so why do I care?" Four reasons: Quality concern. Concern for reputation of website. Uncomfortable reading. Love of writing. So, that's why I get so pissed off at the average Adult CYOS. When Ramadan ends, I'm going to go through a plethora of Adult CYOS and give my comments on them. I might seem a bit harsh but I ultimately mean well, for the CYOS and the website as a whole. P.S Do you mind reviewing "Escape from Syria" in the Mature Story section or "The Devil's Daughter" in the Adult Story section?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

By the way, your "cum bath" fantasy isn't all that weird, even by what I've read on this website. Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? Edit: Let me clarify, those were sexual fantasies that I had found swimming in the dark depths of the Adult CYOS section and by "werecat", I meant a guy who transformed from a human into a cat. Example: Bastet from World of Darkness. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

Honestly, I think it's kinda...garbage. One of the things that piss me off is the writer's idea that seduction means flashing the guy. It's just so...worthless. But hey, don't mind me. That's just my opinion.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:01 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2016

The statue sex comes from "Oops! You're Naked!" and from what I remember (no matter how hard I try to forget), the protagonist didn't get turned into a statue but managed to get into a threesome with a guard and the same statue she was fucking and, later on, the protagonist and the guard went to his place to fuck. And it just ends there. The protagonist, by the way,has big breasts and big hips but we know little else of what she has. I like to imagine that's all, just a talking bust and hips. It's simultaneously hilarious and terrifying. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:32 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Here's my two cents about "The Devil's Daughter": just as your average Adult CYOS is an exercise in hedonism, The Devil's Daughter is an exercise in depravity. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:55 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You've seen this CYOS that's been getting written a lot recently? It's called "ASOIAF Sexy Edition". --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:59 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

Distraction? Maybe. Don't see how it would work for someone who's right in front of you and I would expect someone trying to use their "womanly wiles" to be more subtle and more intelligent then acting like a drunk college girl.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:24 (Louisiana Time), 20 June 2016

You mean hentai? You know, I can actually imagine The Devil's Daughter as an animated hentai but as one of the more unsettling and unholy hentais that I'd abandon once I realize what I'm getting into to. Hey, I have standards!

The bit with the doctor in Escape from Syria is a bit iffy as the willingness to perform a sexual act doesn't automatically reveal her as a spy. She could just be desperate. Also, didn't need the description about his...ejaculate. Eeeeuuugghhh...

Yeah, I mentioned the Bastet from World of Darkness because I was hoping you would be interested and try to look it up. You really should look up World of Darkness, it's pretty cool. There's plenty of pdfs on the internet and on Scribd.

You know, I'm not an expert on Satanism but I don't think that Satanists would approve of the protagonist's behavior. Hell, there's actually many types of Satanism like Theistic Satanism, and The Church of Satan, and the Temple of Set. None of them seem likely to enlist hedonistic monsters that try to summon real life demons by any means necessary. I don't think the writer specifies what type of Satanism the protagonist does so I actually think, from the stated goal of the protagonist and the protagonist's cruelties, that she's just enrolled in a typical evil Devil worshipping cult rather then public Satanism. You know, the type of cult that usually end up as a C grade minor or starting villain in a show like Supernatural or Buffy: The Vampire Slayer.

P.S Sorry for dropping The Devil's Daughter on you. I didn't know how long it was. From your notes, it looks worse then I thought from my first glance. And yet that only makes me more curious about it. Damn you, Bile Fascination!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 June 2016

Alright, here's another suggestion for review: The End of the World. Look up Crossed by Garth Ennis. This CYOS is inspired by it...and maybe more then "inspired".--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 00:33 (Louisiana Time), 22 June 2016
== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

So I wanted some advice on a couple of things, is creating sub categories for your story an issue? Basically the story is told from 2 perspectives ie, that of Hart and Yale. I want to have a separate category for each although maintain the main category as well for each ie. each page would link to 2 categories. Would this be frowned upon?
Secondly if I want to change the name of a page link, is it okay to simply copy the content from the old link into a new link and delete the content in the old link, or does that leave a mess behind for someone else to clean up? Is the a better way of moving the content?
Thanks in advance. --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 19:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.

Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:18:57 GMT

Intheworstways: Put loose chat bubbles in smartphone text messaging template!

You find a personals ad put up by a self proclaimed "geek girl", she claims she has room to spare and more than enough money to support herself and a few others. For this reason, she's offering "cute boys" free room and board, and asks anyone interested to message her with a picture.

Well, free room and board sounds like exactly what you would like, so you message her with a picture of yourself.

{{Template:Phone text
|Name=Harukosama26
|Chattext=
{{Leaving/JC101TextBox|message='''JC101''' sent an image}}

{{Leaving/JC101TextBox|message='''JC101:''' Hey, are you still looking for tenants?}}

{{Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox|message='''Harukosama26:''' (º﹃º) Sweet. Yes, I am. Are you interested?}}

{{Leaving/JC101TextBox|message='''JC101:''' Definitely. So, what's the catch? I'm sure there's some kind of tradeoff, right?}}

{{Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox|message='''Harukosama26:''' There is. There are some requirements, you've already met the first one which is being cute.}}

{{Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox|message='''Harukosama26:''' But first we need to get some things cleared up. First, how old are you?}}

{{Leaving/JC101TextBox|message='''JC101:''' 19}}

{{Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox|message='''Harukosama26:''' （●＞ω＜●） Good. Second, of these animals, which do you like best: [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Cat| Cat]], [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Mouse| Mouse]], [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Fox| Fox]], or [[Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl/Bunny| Bunny]]?}}
}}

[[Category: Leaving|James/Stay with someone/Geek girl]]

Template:Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:14:00 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 6. Should be the last for this one. Sorry again.

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: #e5e5e5; position: rvpx 1px; margin-left: 5px; margin-right: 20px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|Harukosama26TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:11:48 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 5. Should be the last for this one. Sorry.

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 20px; margin-right: 5px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:09:47 GMT

Intheworstways: nope that was stupid. Test 4.

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 20px; margin-right: 3px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:08:13 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 4?

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 19px; margin-right: 1px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:05:52 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 3

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 20px; margin-right: 1px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:03:08 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 2

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 20px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 19:01:00 GMT

Intheworstways: Test 1

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: #e5e5e5; position: rvpx 1px; margin-right: 20px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|Harukosama26TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Phone text

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 18:53:30 GMT

Intheworstways: I spent WAY too much time on this, and there are still some things I'd like to add, but hey I made a smartphone texting template.

<div style="margin: auto; padding-top: 100px; padding-bottom: 100px; padding-left: 20px; padding-right: 20px; width: 400px; border: 2px solid black; border-radius: 40px; background: #0a0809; /* Old browsers */
background: -moz-linear-gradient(45deg, #0a0809 0%, #0a0e0a 49%, #6e7774 50%, #aebcbf 100%); /* FF3.6-15 */
background: -webkit-linear-gradient(45deg, #0a0809 0%,#0a0e0a 49%,#6e7774 50%,#aebcbf 100%); /* Chrome10-25,Safari5.1-6 */
background: linear-gradient(45deg, #0a0809 0%,#0a0e0a 49%,#6e7774 50%,#aebcbf 100%); /* W3C, IE10+, FF16+, Chrome26+, Opera12+, Safari7+ */
filter: progid:DXImageTransform.Microsoft.gradient( startColorstr='#0a0809', endColorstr='#aebcbf',GradientType=1 ); /* IE6-9 fallback on horizontal gradient */">
{| width="100%" style="border: 1px solid #e5e5e5; background: #e5e5e5"
| bgcolor="#e5e5e5" valign="middle" align="middle" width="16%" height="50px" colspan=2| '''{{{Name}}}'''
|-
| bgcolor="#e5e5e5" valign="top" width="16%" colspan=2 style="border: 1px solid #e5e5e5;"| <div style="height:600px;width:390px;background: #e5f2ff; border:1px solid #ccc;font:20px/30px Roboto, Helvetica, sans-serif;overflow:auto;">
{{{Chattext}}}
</div>
|-
| bgcolor="#e5e5e5" valign="middle" align="middle" width="75%" height="40px" style="border: 1px solid #e5e5e5;" style="border: 1px solid #e5e5e5;"| <p style="display:block; height: auto; border: 2px solid grey; background: white; font:20px/30px Roboto, Helvetica, sans-serif;position: relative; margin: 1px 0 1px 1px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 30px; text-align:center; padding-top: 5px; padding-bottom: 5px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">Text
| bgcolor="#e5e5e5" valign="middle" align="middle" width="25%" height="40px" style="border: 1px solid #e5e5e5;"| <p style="display:block; height: auto; background: #9dd53a; /* Old browsers */
background: -moz-linear-gradient(top, #9dd53a 0%, #a1d54f 50%, #80c217 51%, #7cbc0a 100%); /* FF3.6-15 */
background: -webkit-linear-gradient(top, #9dd53a 0%,#a1d54f 50%,#80c217 51%,#7cbc0a 100%); /* Chrome10-25,Safari5.1-6 */
background: linear-gradient(to bottom, #9dd53a 0%,#a1d54f 50%,#80c217 51%,#7cbc0a 100%); /* W3C, IE10+, FF16+, Chrome26+, Opera12+, Safari7+ */
filter: progid:DXImageTransform.Microsoft.gradient( startColorstr='#9dd53a', endColorstr='#7cbc0a',GradientType=0 ); /* IE6-9 */ font:20px/30px Roboto, Helvetica, sans-serif;position: relative; margin: 1px 0 1px 1px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 30px; text-align:center; padding-top: 5px; padding-bottom: 5px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">Send
|-
|}
</div>

<noinclude>[[Category:Templates]]

Leaving/James/Stay with someone/Geek girl

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:23:34 GMT

Intheworstways: Okay, this works for now as kind of a proof of concept. made the right bubbles float: right with a 200px left margin the left bubbles a 200px right margin so they stop going side by side.

Template:Leaving/Harukosama26TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:12:50 GMT

Intheworstways: Hopefully this should work.

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: #e5e5e5; position: rvpx 1px; margin-right: 200px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|Harukosama26TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:09:13 GMT

Intheworstways: I'm going to need to tweak this again later, but i'm leaving it at this for now. In order to make these both work evenly I need to adjust the other one too.

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 200px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:04:05 GMT

Intheworstways:

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 275px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:03:22 GMT

Intheworstways:

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 250px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:02:01 GMT

Intheworstways: I'm so sorry for flooding the recent changes page.

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 07:00:45 GMT

Intheworstways: that kinda worked? tweaking.

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 100px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 06:58:42 GMT

Intheworstways: take 4

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin-left: 300px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 05:46:03 GMT

Intheworstways: take 3

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; margin: 1px 0 1px 1px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 05:41:26 GMT

Intheworstways: OK let's try this again. This is pretty much entirely dirtyme, I'm basically just slapping this one together so it works the same as the other one, which I may have broken this one again to begin with

<p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

Template:Leaving/JC101TextBox

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 05:31:43 GMT

Intheworstways: Trying this.

<p style="width: 135px; height: 30px; background: purple; position: relative; float: right; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 10px;">{{{message}}}<noInclude>[[Category: Leaving Templates|JC101TextBox]]</noInclude>

GA/Lucy/Friends

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 00:34:34 GMT

Intheworstways: Replaced table with template.

The first thing you're worried about right now is whether your friends are okay.

Outside of work, you only really have two friends, Caroline and Noah. You message them both in a group to see if they're alright.

{{Template:Chat window
|Chatroomname=The Chat With Three Backs
|Chattext=*'''NotASmartPerson:''' Hey, are you two alright? Things seem to be alright by my place for now, but it looks like things are going sideways a lot of other places.
*'''3point5shots:''' I'm doing fine. I think some of my neighbors headed downtown so it's quiet around here. Noah?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Guys, shit's going down outside.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Nobody's broken in here or anything but I'm afraid to leave the apartment.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' I can see people going fucking bugnuts trashing stores. They tipped a van a while ago.
*'''3point5shots:''' Well shit.
*'''NotASmartPerson:''' I don't think I need to tell you this but stay inside, keep the doors locked, turn on the TV or something but don't draw attention to yourself.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Yeah OK.
*'''3point5shots:''' Is staying there safe?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Shit I just heard gunshots!
*'''3point5shots:''' Guess that answers my question.
|Users=*[[GA/Character/Noah|PrettyBoyRN]]
*[[GA/Character/Caroline|3point5shots]]
|Chatoptions=*[[GA/Lucy/Friends/Meet|Noah, is there a back way out of your place, or a fire escape?]]
*[[GA/Lucy/Friends/Rescue|Caroline, we've got to go get him.]]
|Chaticon=If I could upload or link an image there would be one here.}}

[[Category: Global Anarchy|Lucy/Friends]]

Template:Chat window

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 00:24:08 GMT

Intheworstways:

<table width="100%">
<tr>
<td bgcolor="#ee0000" valign="top" width="100%" colspan="3"> {{{Chatroomname}}}
</td></tr>
<tr>
<td bgcolor="#ffffff" valign="top" colspan="2"> <div style="height:250px;width:600px;border:5px solid #ccc;font:16px/26px Georgia, Garamond, Serif;overflow:auto;">
{{{Chattext}}}
</div>
</td><td bgcolor="#fff0ff" valign="top" width="84%"> '''Users:'''
{{{Users}}}
</td></tr>
<tr>
<td bgcolor="#ee0000" valign="top" colspan="2">
</td><td bgcolor="#fff0ff" valign="top" width="84%" rowspan=2> {{{Chaticon}}}
</td></tr>
<tr>
<td bgcolor="#ffffff" valign="top"> <div style="height:100px;width:550px;border:5px solid #ccc;font:16px/26px Georgia, Garamond, Serif;overflow:auto;">
{{{Chatoptions}}}</div>
</td><td bgcolor="#ffffff" valign="top"> <p style="display:inline-block; height: auto; background: #e5e5e5; position: relative; margin: 1px 0 1px 1px; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; border-radius: 10px; text-align:center; padding-top: 45px; padding-bottom: 45px; padding-left: 10px; padding-right: 10px;">Send
</td></tr>
</table>

<noinclude>[[Category:Templates]]</noinclude>

Template:Chat window

Intheworstways — Tue, 21 Jun 2016 00:19:00 GMT

Intheworstways: Trying this out.

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Intheworstways — Mon, 20 Jun 2016 04:26:15 GMT

Intheworstways: /* In The Worst Ways */ Chat bubbles.

User:Intheworstways

Intheworstways — Fri, 17 Jun 2016 21:03:19 GMT

Intheworstways:

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Return ==

To my knowledge, we're okay for now. We could still use some money to deal with other things like medication, transportation, and other necessities we can't get with food money. But we're able to stay indoors so that's good.

I'm working on getting back into writing.

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

[[Category:User Pages|Intheworstways]]

User:Intheworstways

Intheworstways — Tue, 14 Jun 2016 21:09:20 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Mini update.

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Plea ==

So for the past few months we've been able to pay for our hotel room pretty consistently. The only problem has been that because we started out at a bit of a deficit, we've been consistently paying at the beginning of the next month for the 4 days at the end of the previous month, retroactively. Well, the owner's getting sick of that. Keep that in mind,

This month we're short because of last month. We have 8 days instead of 4. We don't have any solid options. We can call one place that has helped us before, the only place that ''would'' help us before, but last time we tried that they said they wouldn't help anymore. Back then we needed help every couple weeks, but things have changed since then. There's a church next door that we're going to try tomorrow that we hope will help but again, not a guarantee.

We need to make up $250 to get through to the 25th. We need at least $45 to pay per-day, but a week by comparison only costs $200.

If anyone can see fit to helping, my Tumblr is the same as my username here. It's just '''in-the-worst-ways''', or you can message me on here.

'''I'm not asking for free, necessarily. I'm willing to write or edit for that money. I'll take whatever requests for writing that you have. And I can sorta draw. I can't draw digitally but I can draw pencil on paper and take a picture or send it to you.'''

I'm sure you can tell by reading this that I can write fairly well at least. But whatever you want me to do, keep in mind that I only have a tablet to work with. I don't even have a working laptop.

We're hoping something, anything, will come through, but if it doesn't I don't know when I'll be back on here. That's 8 days we'll be out not knowing where to be. The two people I'm living with can't sit or lay on the ground because they can't stand back up again. So, we may have to carry all our things quite a distance before we can rest, and we may not be able to get back into this room again. Meaning we might be back to not being able to afford the full month again, which is how we got into this mess in the first place.

If we can get help covering the 8 days we need to make up we'll not only still be indoors but we will be in a much better position next month, no longer having to pay retroactively unless we're short one month.

Thank you for reading. If you can help or want to pay me to write, edit, or draw something, my Tumblr is '''in-the-worst-ways'''. If we can't work something out, then consider this an explanation of why I might not be around for a while. When this is behind us, I'll remove this eyesore from my user page.

'''''***Update***''''' - The church next door has office hours til 4 pm Monday to Thursday. We didn't get there til after 4 pm today so we have to wait til Monday to see if they can help us at all. But, given that they have office hours posted for those days, that should mean somebody will be there when we go on Monday. We're hopeful that even if they have no official service that would help us that they may still be able to help us somehow.

If we can get through this month, I have moneymaking ideas I'm going to pursue. Fiverr for instance. I started one last night but I found out that it takes 14 days to see any money, so even if I completed a gig today it would be too late anyway. But if I can get that going then maybe we'll have more next month.

'''''***Update 2***''''' - Provided everything goes well tomorrow we'll be $50 closer to our goal. Technically 1/5 the way there. But, if we can get just $200, that will cover a full week and the remaining day won't be a huge deal.

If anyone wants to give $50 to $150 that would go a long way. But literally anything would be helpful if you don't want to or can't give $50.

We still haven't gone to the church yet again because it's not monday yet, nor have we called the place that helped us last time. And as optimistic as I am that those two may come through, realistically it's not a good idea to put all our stock in either of them. If we can get assured help elsewhere we're going to go for it.

Even if we can get it down to just a 4 or 5 day gap, we'll be ablto pay retroactively again and do whatever we can to close the gap next month. Do as much stuff on fiverr as we can. See about online writing and editing/proofreading gigs. Etc.

We can do this!

'''''***Update 3***''''' - Still waiting on the $50 today. Still need to cover $200 by the 16th, four days from now, so we can pay for at least a full week. Still no word from anybody who has mentioned giving us some money about when that might happen.

If anybody can give us literally anything, please let me know.

'''''***Update 4***''''' - The $50 came through and a very generous friend donated another $100. Sadly, we might not get the $100 til the 17th, so we may need to use the $50 to pay for another day.

We're going to talk to the church soon, and then I'm going to walk up to the drug store and pick up the $50 from western union. Another friend has said that they will donate later but we don't know how much. Hopefully another $100 so we can knock the whole amount out as soon as it drops on the 17th (though if it drops sooner, that would be awesome!)

If anybody else wants to toss in something to make this a sure thing that would be awesome, just message me!

'''''***Update 5***''''' - I walked up to get the $50 today and in the process reminded myself why I can't walk up to that shopping center and be expected to stay on my feet for a full workday before walking back home again. I can't do it.

But, I didn't get the $50 because I didn't have all the information I needed. So, I'm going back up tomorrow with the correct information. (I say tomorrow, it's after midnight so technically today.)

We talked to the church. They may be able to help, they took our info and the man working there said they have someone who handles those things. So, hopefully they will get back to us but they may not get back to us as soon as we'd need them to.

At the very least, we have 3 days covered and 5 remaining. We may be able to pay 5 retroactively, but since the owner isn't fond of doing that and that's more than we usually have to pay for retroactively, I feel very uncomfortable doing that.

Once again, message if you can and want to help. If we can close the gap even further we would all feel so much more relieved about it.

'''**Update 5a**''' - The liquor store near us got their western union fixed so we got the $50 without me having to walk back up to the grocery store a mile away. As everything else is more or less still the same, I'm not making this a full update.

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

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Intheworstways — Tue, 14 Jun 2016 07:27:27 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Update number 5.

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Plea ==

So for the past few months we've been able to pay for our hotel room pretty consistently. The only problem has been that because we started out at a bit of a deficit, we've been consistently paying at the beginning of the next month for the 4 days at the end of the previous month, retroactively. Well, the owner's getting sick of that. Keep that in mind,

This month we're short because of last month. We have 8 days instead of 4. We don't have any solid options. We can call one place that has helped us before, the only place that ''would'' help us before, but last time we tried that they said they wouldn't help anymore. Back then we needed help every couple weeks, but things have changed since then. There's a church next door that we're going to try tomorrow that we hope will help but again, not a guarantee.

We need to make up $250 to get through to the 25th. We need at least $45 to pay per-day, but a week by comparison only costs $200.

If anyone can see fit to helping, my Tumblr is the same as my username here. It's just '''in-the-worst-ways''', or you can message me on here.

'''I'm not asking for free, necessarily. I'm willing to write or edit for that money. I'll take whatever requests for writing that you have. And I can sorta draw. I can't draw digitally but I can draw pencil on paper and take a picture or send it to you.'''

I'm sure you can tell by reading this that I can write fairly well at least. But whatever you want me to do, keep in mind that I only have a tablet to work with. I don't even have a working laptop.

We're hoping something, anything, will come through, but if it doesn't I don't know when I'll be back on here. That's 8 days we'll be out not knowing where to be. The two people I'm living with can't sit or lay on the ground because they can't stand back up again. So, we may have to carry all our things quite a distance before we can rest, and we may not be able to get back into this room again. Meaning we might be back to not being able to afford the full month again, which is how we got into this mess in the first place.

If we can get help covering the 8 days we need to make up we'll not only still be indoors but we will be in a much better position next month, no longer having to pay retroactively unless we're short one month.

Thank you for reading. If you can help or want to pay me to write, edit, or draw something, my Tumblr is '''in-the-worst-ways'''. If we can't work something out, then consider this an explanation of why I might not be around for a while. When this is behind us, I'll remove this eyesore from my user page.

'''''***Update***''''' - The church next door has office hours til 4 pm Monday to Thursday. We didn't get there til after 4 pm today so we have to wait til Monday to see if they can help us at all. But, given that they have office hours posted for those days, that should mean somebody will be there when we go on Monday. We're hopeful that even if they have no official service that would help us that they may still be able to help us somehow.

If we can get through this month, I have moneymaking ideas I'm going to pursue. Fiverr for instance. I started one last night but I found out that it takes 14 days to see any money, so even if I completed a gig today it would be too late anyway. But if I can get that going then maybe we'll have more next month.

'''''***Update 2***''''' - Provided everything goes well tomorrow we'll be $50 closer to our goal. Technically 1/5 the way there. But, if we can get just $200, that will cover a full week and the remaining day won't be a huge deal.

If anyone wants to give $50 to $150 that would go a long way. But literally anything would be helpful if you don't want to or can't give $50.

We still haven't gone to the church yet again because it's not monday yet, nor have we called the place that helped us last time. And as optimistic as I am that those two may come through, realistically it's not a good idea to put all our stock in either of them. If we can get assured help elsewhere we're going to go for it.

Even if we can get it down to just a 4 or 5 day gap, we'll be ablto pay retroactively again and do whatever we can to close the gap next month. Do as much stuff on fiverr as we can. See about online writing and editing/proofreading gigs. Etc.

We can do this!

'''''***Update 3***''''' - Still waiting on the $50 today. Still need to cover $200 by the 16th, four days from now, so we can pay for at least a full week. Still no word from anybody who has mentioned giving us some money about when that might happen.

If anybody can give us literally anything, please let me know.

'''''***Update 4***''''' - The $50 came through and a very generous friend donated another $100. Sadly, we might not get the $100 til the 17th, so we may need to use the $50 to pay for another day.

We're going to talk to the church soon, and then I'm going to walk up to the drug store and pick up the $50 from western union. Another friend has said that they will donate later but we don't know how much. Hopefully another $100 so we can knock the whole amount out as soon as it drops on the 17th (though if it drops sooner, that would be awesome!)

If anybody else wants to toss in something to make this a sure thing that would be awesome, just message me!

'''''***Update 5***''''' - I walked up to get the $50 today and in the process reminded myself why I can't walk up to that shopping center and be expected to stay on my feet for a full workday before walking back home again. I can't do it.

But, I didn't get the $50 because I didn't have all the information I needed. So, I'm going back up tomorrow with the correct information. (I say tomorrow, it's after midnight so technically today.)

We talked to the church. They may be able to help, they took our info and the man working there said they have someone who handles those things. So, hopefully they will get back to us but they may not get back to us as soon as we'd need them to.

At the very least, we have 3 days covered and 5 remaining. We may be able to pay 5 retroactively, but since the owner isn't fond of doing that and that's more than we usually have to pay for retroactively, I feel very uncomfortable doing that.

Once again, message if you can and want to help. If we can close the gap even further we would all feel so much more relieved about it.

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

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User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Intheworstways — Mon, 13 Jun 2016 17:49:30 GMT

Intheworstways: /* In The Worst Ways */

Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...

[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]

Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!

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IM JUST STARTED CREATE A DAMN STORY!

== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==

I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.

But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.

As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.

They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.

I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.

You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.

Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?.

I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.

It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.

The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v

Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.

Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.

I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.

Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.

If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.

I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.

I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.

I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.

But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==

E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on.

You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.

How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?

100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit "How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.

It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1

It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

How about "The Best New Breasts"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.

"The Breast New Thing!" "Perfect For Breast Men!" "New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!" -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User:117|117]]==
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016

There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==

The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'. Yes, I think this one is very young.

The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

That penis is between you & Zenclair. I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many. I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

==Fredhot16==
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)

Darky:

Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.

Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA "Now you're a girl!"? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking...correcting... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of "Kill myself by setting myself on fire" depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull! ‎

Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.

Anime School:

Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as "small and perky". Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do very well in the actual narration.

CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016

Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your "Winnie the Pooh" thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016

== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==

I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

== Other ==

I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT

Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole "wiki" thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly. --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--

== Messages from Clara ==

Hello.

== From TheWriter (Female, btw) ==

Hi

I read some of your stuff. You seem like a fun girl.

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Intheworstways — Mon, 13 Jun 2016 17:39:11 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Update number 4.

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Plea ==

So for the past few months we've been able to pay for our hotel room pretty consistently. The only problem has been that because we started out at a bit of a deficit, we've been consistently paying at the beginning of the next month for the 4 days at the end of the previous month, retroactively. Well, the owner's getting sick of that. Keep that in mind,

This month we're short because of last month. We have 8 days instead of 4. We don't have any solid options. We can call one place that has helped us before, the only place that ''would'' help us before, but last time we tried that they said they wouldn't help anymore. Back then we needed help every couple weeks, but things have changed since then. There's a church next door that we're going to try tomorrow that we hope will help but again, not a guarantee.

We need to make up $250 to get through to the 25th. We need at least $45 to pay per-day, but a week by comparison only costs $200.

If anyone can see fit to helping, my Tumblr is the same as my username here. It's just '''in-the-worst-ways''', or you can message me on here.

'''I'm not asking for free, necessarily. I'm willing to write or edit for that money. I'll take whatever requests for writing that you have. And I can sorta draw. I can't draw digitally but I can draw pencil on paper and take a picture or send it to you.'''

I'm sure you can tell by reading this that I can write fairly well at least. But whatever you want me to do, keep in mind that I only have a tablet to work with. I don't even have a working laptop.

We're hoping something, anything, will come through, but if it doesn't I don't know when I'll be back on here. That's 8 days we'll be out not knowing where to be. The two people I'm living with can't sit or lay on the ground because they can't stand back up again. So, we may have to carry all our things quite a distance before we can rest, and we may not be able to get back into this room again. Meaning we might be back to not being able to afford the full month again, which is how we got into this mess in the first place.

If we can get help covering the 8 days we need to make up we'll not only still be indoors but we will be in a much better position next month, no longer having to pay retroactively unless we're short one month.

Thank you for reading. If you can help or want to pay me to write, edit, or draw something, my Tumblr is '''in-the-worst-ways'''. If we can't work something out, then consider this an explanation of why I might not be around for a while. When this is behind us, I'll remove this eyesore from my user page.

'''''***Update***''''' - The church next door has office hours til 4 pm Monday to Thursday. We didn't get there til after 4 pm today so we have to wait til Monday to see if they can help us at all. But, given that they have office hours posted for those days, that should mean somebody will be there when we go on Monday. We're hopeful that even if they have no official service that would help us that they may still be able to help us somehow.

If we can get through this month, I have moneymaking ideas I'm going to pursue. Fiverr for instance. I started one last night but I found out that it takes 14 days to see any money, so even if I completed a gig today it would be too late anyway. But if I can get that going then maybe we'll have more next month.

'''''***Update 2***''''' - Provided everything goes well tomorrow we'll be $50 closer to our goal. Technically 1/5 the way there. But, if we can get just $200, that will cover a full week and the remaining day won't be a huge deal.

If anyone wants to give $50 to $150 that would go a long way. But literally anything would be helpful if you don't want to or can't give $50.

We still haven't gone to the church yet again because it's not monday yet, nor have we called the place that helped us last time. And as optimistic as I am that those two may come through, realistically it's not a good idea to put all our stock in either of them. If we can get assured help elsewhere we're going to go for it.

Even if we can get it down to just a 4 or 5 day gap, we'll be ablto pay retroactively again and do whatever we can to close the gap next month. Do as much stuff on fiverr as we can. See about online writing and editing/proofreading gigs. Etc.

We can do this!

'''''***Update 3***''''' - Still waiting on the $50 today. Still need to cover $200 by the 16th, four days from now, so we can pay for at least a full week. Still no word from anybody who has mentioned giving us some money about when that might happen.

If anybody can give us literally anything, please let me know.

'''''***Update 4***''''' - The $50 came through and a very generous friend donated another $100. Sadly, we might not get the $100 til the 17th, so we may need to use the $50 to pay for another day.

We're going to talk to the church soon, and then I'm going to walk up to the drug store and pick up the $50 from western union. Another friend has said that they will donate later but we don't know how much. Hopefully another $100 so we can knock the whole amount out as soon as it drops on the 17th (though if it drops sooner, that would be awesome!)

If anybody else wants to toss in something to make this a sure thing that would be awesome, just message me!

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

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Intheworstways — Sun, 12 Jun 2016 22:52:49 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Update number 2.

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Plea ==

So for the past few months we've been able to pay for our hotel room pretty consistently. The only problem has been that because we started out at a bit of a deficit, we've been consistently paying at the beginning of the next month for the 4 days at the end of the previous month, retroactively. Well, the owner's getting sick of that. Keep that in mind,

This month we're short because of last month. We have 8 days instead of 4. We don't have any solid options. We can call one place that has helped us before, the only place that ''would'' help us before, but last time we tried that they said they wouldn't help anymore. Back then we needed help every couple weeks, but things have changed since then. There's a church next door that we're going to try tomorrow that we hope will help but again, not a guarantee.

We need to make up $250 to get through to the 25th. We need at least $45 to pay per-day, but a week by comparison only costs $200.

If anyone can see fit to helping, my Tumblr is the same as my username here. It's just '''in-the-worst-ways''', or you can message me on here.

'''I'm not asking for free, necessarily. I'm willing to write or edit for that money. I'll take whatever requests for writing that you have. And I can sorta draw. I can't draw digitally but I can draw pencil on paper and take a picture or send it to you.'''

I'm sure you can tell by reading this that I can write fairly well at least. But whatever you want me to do, keep in mind that I only have a tablet to work with. I don't even have a working laptop.

We're hoping something, anything, will come through, but if it doesn't I don't know when I'll be back on here. That's 8 days we'll be out not knowing where to be. The two people I'm living with can't sit or lay on the ground because they can't stand back up again. So, we may have to carry all our things quite a distance before we can rest, and we may not be able to get back into this room again. Meaning we might be back to not being able to afford the full month again, which is how we got into this mess in the first place.

If we can get help covering the 8 days we need to make up we'll not only still be indoors but we will be in a much better position next month, no longer having to pay retroactively unless we're short one month.

Thank you for reading. If you can help or want to pay me to write, edit, or draw something, my Tumblr is '''in-the-worst-ways'''. If we can't work something out, then consider this an explanation of why I might not be around for a while. When this is behind us, I'll remove this eyesore from my user page.

'''''***Update***''''' - The church next door has office hours til 4 pm Monday to Thursday. We didn't get there til after 4 pm today so we have to wait til Monday to see if they can help us at all. But, given that they have office hours posted for those days, that should mean somebody will be there when we go on Monday. We're hopeful that even if they have no official service that would help us that they may still be able to help us somehow.

If we can get through this month, I have moneymaking ideas I'm going to pursue. Fiverr for instance. I started one last night but I found out that it takes 14 days to see any money, so even if I completed a gig today it would be too late anyway. But if I can get that going then maybe we'll have more next month.

'''''***Update 2***''''' - Provided everything goes well tomorrow we'll be $50 closer to our goal. Technically 1/5 the way there. But, if we can get just $200, that will cover a full week and the remaining day won't be a huge deal.

If anyone wants to give $50 to $150 that would go a long way. But literally anything would be helpful if you don't want to or can't give $50.

We still haven't gone to the church yet again because it's not monday yet, nor have we called the place that helped us last time. And as optimistic as I am that those two may come through, realistically it's not a good idea to put all our stock in either of them. If we can get assured help elsewhere we're going to go for it.

Even if we can get it down to just a 4 or 5 day gap, we'll be ablto pay retroactively again and do whatever we can to close the gap next month. Do as much stuff on fiverr as we can. See about online writing and editing/proofreading gigs. Etc.

We can do this!

'''''***Update 3***''''' - Still waiting on the $50 today. Still need to cover $200 by the 16th, four days from now, so we can pay for at least a full week. Still no word from anybody who has mentioned giving us some money about when that might happen.

If anybody can give us literally anything, please let me know.

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

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Intheworstways — Sun, 12 Jun 2016 06:08:12 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Update number 2.

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Plea ==

So for the past few months we've been able to pay for our hotel room pretty consistently. The only problem has been that because we started out at a bit of a deficit, we've been consistently paying at the beginning of the next month for the 4 days at the end of the previous month, retroactively. Well, the owner's getting sick of that. Keep that in mind,

This month we're short because of last month. We have 8 days instead of 4. We don't have any solid options. We can call one place that has helped us before, the only place that ''would'' help us before, but last time we tried that they said they wouldn't help anymore. Back then we needed help every couple weeks, but things have changed since then. There's a church next door that we're going to try tomorrow that we hope will help but again, not a guarantee.

We need to make up $250 to get through to the 25th. We need at least $45 to pay per-day, but a week by comparison only costs $200.

If anyone can see fit to helping, my Tumblr is the same as my username here. It's just '''in-the-worst-ways''', or you can message me on here.

'''I'm not asking for free, necessarily. I'm willing to write or edit for that money. I'll take whatever requests for writing that you have. And I can sorta draw. I can't draw digitally but I can draw pencil on paper and take a picture or send it to you.'''

I'm sure you can tell by reading this that I can write fairly well at least. But whatever you want me to do, keep in mind that I only have a tablet to work with. I don't even have a working laptop.

We're hoping something, anything, will come through, but if it doesn't I don't know when I'll be back on here. That's 8 days we'll be out not knowing where to be. The two people I'm living with can't sit or lay on the ground because they can't stand back up again. So, we may have to carry all our things quite a distance before we can rest, and we may not be able to get back into this room again. Meaning we might be back to not being able to afford the full month again, which is how we got into this mess in the first place.

If we can get help covering the 8 days we need to make up we'll not only still be indoors but we will be in a much better position next month, no longer having to pay retroactively unless we're short one month.

Thank you for reading. If you can help or want to pay me to write, edit, or draw something, my Tumblr is '''in-the-worst-ways'''. If we can't work something out, then consider this an explanation of why I might not be around for a while. When this is behind us, I'll remove this eyesore from my user page.

'''''***Update***''''' - The church next door has office hours til 4 pm Monday to Thursday. We didn't get there til after 4 pm today so we have to wait til Monday to see if they can help us at all. But, given that they have office hours posted for those days, that should mean somebody will be there when we go on Monday. We're hopeful that even if they have no official service that would help us that they may still be able to help us somehow.

If we can get through this month, I have moneymaking ideas I'm going to pursue. Fiverr for instance. I started one last night but I found out that it takes 14 days to see any money, so even if I completed a gig today it would be too late anyway. But if I can get that going then maybe we'll have more next month.

'''''***Update 2***''''' - Provided everything goes well tomorrow we'll be $50 closer to our goal. Technically 1/5 the way there. But, if we can get just $200, that will cover a full week and the remaining day won't be a huge deal.

If anyone wants to give $50 to $150 that would go a long way. But literally anything would be helpful if you don't want to or can't give $50.

We still haven't gone to the church yet again because it's not monday yet, nor have we called the place that helped us last time. And as optimistic as I am that those two may come through, realistically it's not a good idea to put all our stock in either of them. If we can get assured help elsewhere we're going to go for it.

Even if we can get it down to just a 4 or 5 day gap, we'll be ablto pay retroactively again and do whatever we can to close the gap next month. Do as much stuff on fiverr as we can. See about online writing and editing/proofreading gigs. Etc.

We can do this!

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

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User:Intheworstways

Intheworstways — Thu, 09 Jun 2016 21:20:37 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Update.

== '''What the he'll?''' ==

''My writing isn't even up to my own standards.''

== Plea ==

So for the past few months we've been able to pay for our hotel room pretty consistently. The only problem has been that because we started out at a bit of a deficit, we've been consistently paying at the beginning of the next month for the 4 days at the end of the previous month, retroactively. Well, the owner's getting sick of that. Keep that in mind,

This month we're short because of last month. We have 8 days instead of 4. We don't have any solid options. We can call one place that has helped us before, the only place that ''would'' help us before, but last time we tried that they said they wouldn't help anymore. Back then we needed help every couple weeks, but things have changed since then. There's a church next door that we're going to try tomorrow that we hope will help but again, not a guarantee.

We need to make up $250 to get through to the 25th. We need at least $45 to pay per-day, but a week by comparison only costs $200.

If anyone can see fit to helping, my Tumblr is the same as my username here. It's just '''in-the-worst-ways''', or you can message me on here.

'''I'm not asking for free, necessarily. I'm willing to write or edit for that money. I'll take whatever requests for writing that you have. And I can sorta draw. I can't draw digitally but I can draw pencil on paper and take a picture or send it to you.'''

I'm sure you can tell by reading this that I can write fairly well at least. But whatever you want me to do, keep in mind that I only have a tablet to work with. I don't even have a working laptop.

We're hoping something, anything, will come through, but if it doesn't I don't know when I'll be back on here. That's 8 days we'll be out not knowing where to be. The two people I'm living with can't sit or lay on the ground because they can't stand back up again. So, we may have to carry all our things quite a distance before we can rest, and we may not be able to get back into this room again. Meaning we might be back to not being able to afford the full month again, which is how we got into this mess in the first place.

If we can get help covering the 8 days we need to make up we'll not only still be indoors but we will be in a much better position next month, no longer having to pay retroactively unless we're short one month.

Thank you for reading. If you can help or want to pay me to write, edit, or draw something, my Tumblr is '''in-the-worst-ways'''. If we can't work something out, then consider this an explanation of why I might not be around for a while. When this is behind us, I'll remove this eyesore from my user page.

'''''***Update***''''' - The church next door has office hours til 4 pm Monday to Thursday. We didn't get there til after 4 pm today so we have to wait til Monday to see if they can help us at all. But, given that they have office hours posted for those days, that should mean somebody will be there when we go on Monday. We're hopeful that even if they have no official service that would help us that they may still be able to help us somehow.

If we can get through this month, I have moneymaking ideas I'm going to pursue. Fiverr for instance. I started one last night but I found out that it takes 14 days to see any money, so even if I completed a gig today it would be too late anyway. But if I can get that going then maybe we'll have more next month.

== Goals ==

*Improve my writing.
*Create stories that are entertaining, whether they're simple or complex. Even when something I write is simply a vehicle for scenes with sexual content, I want them to be enjoyable.
*Improve my editing, formatting, and wiki coding abilities.
*Use those abilities and the wiki medium to do unique and unexpected things with the choose your own adventure format. I believe this can be more than simply a bit of text and some options, though there's absolutely nothing wrong with sticking to just that.
*Eventually, when I have the ability, I want to create art assets for all of my stories. Perhaps even animated assets and audio/music. ''Though to do this I'll need something more substantial than a tablet to work with. Ideally a laptop. If anyone wants to either work with me on that or help me get a laptop it would be much appreciated.''

== Rant ==

'''Linking'''

Like I get that it's easier to just make a piece of text into a link, but I don't get why, for the sake of making sure their stories don't cross over with anything else or so they don't have to word things awkwardly to make common actions into unique links, people don't at least put the name of the story in the link and disguise it. Maybe not go into the insane '''this/that/the other thing/etc/1/next/''' shit that I do with mine, but ''something'' to make sure everything they want to do is unique to their story.

'''Not PC'''

I hate the term "politically correct" because it portrays basic human decency as a political act. Being racist, misogynist, ableist, homophobic, transphobic, etc. Doesn't make you edgy and "not politically correct" it makes you a fucking asshole. I put up with tropes that get into those territories because they're inescapable, but being upset that myself or people I care about are being thrown under the bus for a laugh is still justified.

'''Annoyances'''

I don't understand a few things I keep seeing people do. I don't understand, for one, clearly not going through the [[tutorial]] or reading the [[rules]]. Just, it's not that hard to do those things before you post something. I read the tutorial and reread it and referred back to it multiple times before I got comfortable with what I was doing and there's still some things I'm learning and don't know how to do.

I also don't understand people who start their stories in their user page, or worse still their talk page. Like who looks at the list of stories on here and concludes that if they start writing in their user page it will just magically appear in the list? Who clicks on their redlinked username and goes "You know what my user profile needs? Adult Zoey 101 fan fiction." Or worse, clicks on their Talk page and thinks "Obviously this is where I write furry erotica. Right here. That's what I'm talking about."

I don't understand it. At all. It makes no sense to me. I feel like I'd have to be seriously drunk to make that leap in my mind. I want to help these people, I do, but I can only do so much without literally doing it for them. And I'd even do that if I thought it would help, but chances are if I fixed it they'd just go "Eh? What happened?" And put it back. I hate seeing people get banned for this stupid shit but if they don't take a hint then what the fuck?

And for the record, I do think it would be interesting to work out your user page like a story. I'm not sure of that's allowed, but I think it would be interesting to say, have it be a story about your life where you as the user are the main character and people play around as you to find out about who you are, or something. Or maybe the player is talking to you and asking you questions about yourself. Something relevant to your user page, not adult fan fiction.

'''Not so much a rant as a minor grievance with myself'''

I hate to keep harping on the laptop thing, but seriously. My hand hurts like crazy after writing for any period of time because the corner of the tablet grinds into it. A physical keyboard would be heaven. I would write so much more often. If anyone has like an old laptop they never use or knows where I can get one, let me know. I hate not being productive.

== Stories ==

'''All 18+ so far'''

''For the record, I would like to point out, I do not and will never condone rape, abuse, murder, or anything else I may write about that violates someone else's rights, body, property, etc. I write about them purely for the purposes of the enjoyment of myself or the reader. Feel free to analyze anything I write about through the lens of social justice if you wish, I'll probably agree with you on whatever problems are raised, and may even change some things. But ultimately it is what it is.

*'''[[Leaving]]''' - Feel free to add, but read the first page. New characters are welcome, Kerry's branch is currently open because I don't know how to approach it, but if you want to edit or add on to anything else just ask first and I'll see if I like your idea better than what I had planned. '''''I'm now also opening up Marie's branch. Feel free to add new branches to Marie's and fill out red links as you wish, though I may change some things later.'''''

*'''[[Global Anarchy]]''' - Work in progress. New characters welcome and I'd be happy to correspond on major details about the plot and different factions. Characters in countries other than the U.S. are especially welcome as I have no frame of reference for writing about other countries myself and I don't want to make a fool of myself trying. I'm not accepting additions to existing storylines at the moment, however, because I'm not very far in. 

*''More to come.'' [[User:Intheworstways/Ideas| Ideas I'm tossing around.]]

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User:Intheworstways

Intheworstways — Thu, 09 Jun 2016 07:05:47 GMT

Intheworstways: /* Plea */ Ugh. Also, for*

User:Intheworstways

Intheworstways — Thu, 09 Jun 2016 06:59:14 GMT

Intheworstways: Plea/Begging, or, why I haven't written anything or a while.

GA/Lucy/Friends

Intheworstways — Tue, 07 Jun 2016 01:37:44 GMT

Intheworstways: Salt. SALT I TELL YOU. I've been working on this for entirely too long and I had an idea in mind for it but I can't do it because I can't use images! There's still more I want to do this.

The first thing you're worried about right now is whether your friends are okay.

Outside of work, you only really have two friends, Caroline and Noah. You message them both in a group to see if they're alright.

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*'''NotASmartPerson:''' Hey, are you two alright? Things seem to be alright by my place for now, but it looks like things are going sideways a lot of other places.
*'''3point5shots:''' I'm doing fine. I think some of my neighbors headed downtown so it's quiet around here. Noah?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Guys, shit's going down outside.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Nobody's broken in here or anything but I'm afraid to leave the apartment.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' I can see people going fucking bugnuts trashing stores. They tipped a van a while ago.
*'''3point5shots:''' Well shit.
*'''NotASmartPerson:''' I don't think I need to tell you this but stay inside, keep the doors locked, turn on the TV or something but don't draw attention to yourself.
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Yeah OK.
*'''3point5shots:''' Is staying there safe?
*'''PrettyBoyRN:''' Shit I just heard gunshots!
*'''3point5shots:''' Guess that answers my question.
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*[[GA/Character/Noah|PrettyBoyRN]]
*[[GA/Character/Caroline|3point5shots]]
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*[[GA/Lucy/Friends/Meet|Noah, is there a back way out of your place, or a fire escape?]]
*[[GA/Lucy/Friends/Rescue|Caroline, we've got to go get him.]]</div>
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User talk:Platypus

Intheworstways — Mon, 06 Jun 2016 22:23:19 GMT

Intheworstways:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
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 >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. 

I keep seeing [[Story Reviews]] on the front page, but...nothing is ever done.

I am slowly going to try to build a review system. I will change it as I go, probably with some key words in a template on the main rating page, giving the story link, review link, etc, but for now, I am just starting the thing. I am hoping after it is developed enough, we can use it to replace the [[Story Reviews]] page. Or, would it be better for me to blank [[The Review]], and just modify [[Story Reviews]]? I was thinking of just making a page per story, with my review and let others also add their reviews if they wish, but I want to know your thoughts. I will play with templates later to try to get right. I will of course include the same info as in the [[Story Reviews]], but in a nice table format. Title, link, review page link, page count, probably some key terms (Especially when I get to adult). But, again, I am a bit worried about how many pages I will create. I am also going to have a cutoff, pagecount. Like, under 20 pages, unless your story is 100% complete, I won't bother. I wanted your thoughts, since I think it would be better for people to understand the stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

Okay, this is a strange request. So, for your smutty sex romp, on the female path, would you be willing to write about a strange...fantasy...I have?

I can't explain the fantasy, and know it is really strange...but, I have always had a fantasy of taking a bath in a bathtub full of cum...

I wrote a little short, more as a funny short, for this: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2013/10/a-withdrawal-from-sperm-bank-cum.html. I know, if inspiration hits you, but it can't really hit you if you don't think of it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:15, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

I sort guessed it was there to stop spambots but it's annoying nonetheless. Ah Well. I'll see how much I can move to the pit before I get distracted (it might not be a lot) -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 09:15 29 May GMT

Is there anyway to remove the captcha thing that pops up after every few pages. I was trying to be helpful and move a bunch of stuff over to the '''PIT OF ABANDONED STORIES''' (Great name btw) and after copying and pasting the names of the stories from 'All Adult Stories' to the 'Pit of Abandoned stories' page and I pressed save on the pit editing thing, fine, then I pressed save on the other page and suddenly I was presented with a captcha, filled in the captcha and then lost all the edits I had just made to the page. I think I've rectified the mistake but the annoyance, although minor, is not ideal. (Also I hope you don't mind me moving things to the pit, just felt like it needed a clean up.) -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 27 May 21:21 GMT

lol, no comment about the dick I left on Zenclair's page? Yeah, I actually should remove it...honestly, I read over some of his stuff, and found it rather demeaning, so I hinted at him that I thought he was a dick. I sort of feel bad about that now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:01, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, hidden stories gives me ideas. Wonder what someone would say if I wrote an entire CYoS story, but when they saw the text they saw nothing. It isn't until they drag the mouse that they realize the font is white, the story is there and complete, but no one can see it xD

Maybe have a second story purely in pop-up text (using the <nowiki>Something</nowiki>

Now I am getting better ideas for Context xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:32, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Ok mr.platypus. im gonna say that my story is gdeleted by me and I am finding people who can contribute to my story
in my place(In my city actually) and then I will rewrite it. I may not include the title or category cause im still finding people who can help me with this
Since then I will not add choices to the I am male thinggy. I might as well not reply to people including you too. I may not be online too
Then after that I will make it a looong story. ps im removing "low priority" discussions from my discussion. pps my story I cant publish it in public first
Because many will put things in that. I must say that putting my story in my talk page is a kind of privacy which means only selected people or people who know me can read it because I dont talk to "Low priority" people. IT STAYS HIDDEN WHILE I MAKE IT. MR PLATYPUS.

And a flower for Platypus! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:00, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
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About rampage: You know, the way it is set up, why doesn't someone create subcategories for the currently possessed character? Like <nowiki>[[Category: Rampage:Black Cat]]</nowiki>? Then, the victim pages, like [[Ashley Duruma]], could just be category pages with the text on the page put in as the text of the category page. Just a though xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:42, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, I have been trying to change the 6th grade girl in rampage to 12th grade girl, and I found something. The rancher part, with the horses and stuff, is making me feel rather nauseous... I think I will stop touching that story and let someone else change her to 12th grade...before I throw up... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

I don't want to sound picky but is there any way to get my pages that I wrote like that? I understand that there was a slight spelling error on one and I messed up use of the status bar, but I went on there this morning to correct the and the majority had been taken down. That was over an hours writing that I'm a little miffed about having to redo for a misunderstanding since it was my first time adding to one of these pages. It's very intimidating getting a message a few seconds after you step out and try to share something on here simply because you slightly misunderstood the code. I'm new, and I am sorry about it, but I can't be perfect on my first post. Did I do something else wrong or do you really take people's post's down without giving them a chance to edit mistakes, because of my time zone this was the first chance I had to log on and check them.
--[[User:JulietMai]]

Hey Platypus, wanted to ask you a question about the new rules. Now that we're not allowed to write about underage characters a lot of the old stories have been deleted. Some of them were my favorites that I worked hard on. Are they gone forever or are they archived somewhere? I would love to transcribe them to the allthefallen stories site instead. Thanks! (Bellajones)

lol, I have been with a guy who was "Well endowed". He hurt, alot. Wish I had known about that ring thing before that. I would have made him use it. Instead, we only had sex one time. I never let him touch me again. Oh well, wasn't a serious thing anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:14, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing out the mistake. I am seriously beginning to speak Chinglish. Think I even have a little bit of a Chinese-English accent now...

So, what do you think of my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]? I know they are making fun of people, but I am at least trying to keep them interesting enough that they are readable. Also, not sure about your thoughts on my [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. I had a bit of discussion with this with Teejay, but I also know it crosses from "Story" to "Bio", so not sure if I should even put it here. Your thoughts? Basically, just trying to let those who like my writing know a bit about who I am. At least, in the areas that most people on here would care about, given most people on here are mostly [[All Adult Stories]] oriented. Guess it is more of a "Hey, do you wonder why I write mostly erotica? Here you go" thing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Noted, I will apply to the others then, just wanted to check before I did too much. I will try to improve it, trying to figure out how to get them to line up, but at least it is another step towards a nicer, more graphic website for us all ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:38, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

I have tried to add a nice looking template to the family friendly section on the front page. If you do not like it, we can revert. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:55, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.

Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- [[User:Michaeltamayo96]]

Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]

So I hope you don't mind me making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] in my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Please check [[Special:Contributions/Njrsgg]]. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained "under age vagina", but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and
4th grade" and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

<nowiki>*</nowiki>Sniff<nowiki>*</nowiki> You haven't given me any options for [[The Exhibitionist]]. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

What the hell is "shotgun-wielding" supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: "Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup." Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Please check [[Special:Contributions/Sup]]. Teejay reversed the damage. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)

Added a [[Rules]] page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, it's [[User:Vgybhu]]. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).

I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]

Um, oops, I kind of got them mixed up its been a while since I wrote something. Did you edit it if not I will. And next time I will check my work more thoroughly.
[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]

Sorry, think I overwhelmed the poor guy :o I was trying to help, not intimidate xD (hint check histories...)

Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it.
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.

I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not.
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.

Hi Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]]. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user [[AllyG]] was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on [[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]?? Thanks, [[Whining Winnie]] Happy Easter Everyone!

The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know.
[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so "immature"
. I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone
like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration
testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of
committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your
comment very rude and I was emotionally crushed than you would delete my pages because you think
I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]

I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

o.O What happened? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

When you come back, you might want to check [[Special:Contributions/Darth_nox]]. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of "too many conflicting changes"...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So
can you please keep to your self. [[H0rniWr1t3r]]

Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. [[User:LilBitOfSpace|LilBitOfSpace]]

Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? [[Whining Winnie]]

Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( [[Whining Winnie]]

It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? [[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016

Don't forget that [[CLM]] is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016

[[Whining Winnie]]

Could you move [[CLM]] to the [[Adult Stories]] section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? [[Whining Winnie]] 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)

Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though.
[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 1:35 Central Time 1/21/2016

Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]]

Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]] 31/01/16

Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore? [[User:Fort|Fort]] 05/02/16

Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --[[User:Fort|Fort]] 5 February 2016

I apologize for my "obsession with colons" when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... [[User:Shirasade|Shirasade]] 20/02/16

Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 23/02/16

Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 24/02/16

I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a [[Talk:Continue fucking Kate|specific story talk page]]) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the "Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you" choice in "Darkness". I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the "I'm Your Brother" choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - [[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]]

I'm going to finish the above section in "Idea Pitches" in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is "Lords". It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found "Aristocrats" to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that "feeling up" choice in "Darkness". Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So to answer your question about[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a "dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, "dating sim" would be the closest one thought "slice of life" is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 8 April 2016

Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the "Darkness" choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 10 April 2016

Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --[[QueenPrisme]] 7:43pm April 13, 2016

Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 1:44am April 16, 2016

Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 19 April 2016

Would you happen to be able to tell me if [[Leaving]] is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

For the record, what is the page maximum for the pit? The main page says 10 pages but iirc I've seen stories in the pit with more than 10 pages. Again I know it takes a while for something to drop into the pit, and I know I can get it back out again, but I thought I'd ask.

I get paranoid cause I have a habit of unintentionally abandoning things and I'm still mildly worried about losing internet access soon. I'd like to get anything new I start past the point where it could fall into the pit just in case. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:25, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

So, I'm trying to include an image in something, but the only way to do this is to link to an image outside of the wiki. Which would be fine, if it weren't for the fact that apparently said images are also under the rule of having to wait 20 minutes. Which again would be fine, if it didn't count hitting preview?

So if I want to see how it looks on the page I need to wait 20 minutes before I can see the changes I've made? And then, from past experience, if I try to submit the page I have to fill out a captcha and wait another 20 minutes before I can submit the captcha, by which point my session (every time I tried this at least) has been terminated?

Is there something I'm missing here? Are other people able to include links and images just fine and somehow I'm just completely screwing this up? Like I'm not trying to be ungrateful and I know you probably don't have control over any of this I'm just confused and I'm starting to get frustrated with the thing I'm trying to work on. Sorry for bothering you. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 22:23, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

== How to make my own story without disturbing the peace ==

I just wana know how to make my own story