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User talk:I Lion Heart I

I Lion Heart I — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 08:50:45 GMT

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*Wow. I expected some adding onto my stories, but you have basically completed them. Thanks for adding onto the stories! --[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

**Thanks. Most of [[Crusader]] was just trying to link back to the story. As for [[Paladin.|Paladin]], I have an interesting imagination. --[[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 14:16, 21 September 2007 (EDT)

*Hello! Just thought I'd introduce myself. I read through Crusader and much of Paladin, and they're good stuff! I look forward to Paladin's conclusion. Are there any other stories you'd recommend?--[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 08:34, 9 April 2009 (PDT)
**I actually have no idea. I was drawn straight into Crusader when I first got here, I've never really had the time to look at other stories. I don't really have the time to write the stories. I notice you've been fixing formality and grammar issues: thanks. [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 01:50, 10 April 2009 (PDT)

Paladin/Demi66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 21:31:56 GMT

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A black matter encompasses the Valefar. As the matter disappears, the Valefar stands still. You stand still, almost waiting, hoping for it to fall when the Valefar pins you to the ground with his fist and crushes you beneath it.

THE END

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Wind66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 21:27:33 GMT

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The wind seems to push the gas away from you and exit the area. Unluckily for you, Valefar steps on you.

THE END

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Cure66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 21:18:36 GMT

I Lion Heart I: Correction

Using your initiative, you cast cure upon the undead beast. Struggling, the Valefar soon falls to the ground with no signs of life. Valefar's eyes stay open, and the beast is not moving. To make sure he's dead, you slice its head off. The cure seems to have also cured the air of the poisonous gas.

A bit trigger-happy with [[Caladbolg]], but you were still flexible with your magic and the [[Vorpal Blade]]. Speaking of the Vorpal Blade, you pull it from the beast.

You have gained several levels.

*[[Search the Valefar's carcass]]
*[[Glance around the place]]
*[[healup|Use your healing ointment]]

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[Vorpal Blade]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=1530|MP=185|Level=37}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Cure66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 20:41:29 GMT

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Using your initiative, you cast cure upon the undead beast. Struggling, the Valefar soon falls to the ground with no signs of life. Valefar's eyes stay open, and the beast is not moving. To make sure he's dead, you slice its head off. The cure seems to have also cured the air of the poisonous gas.

A bit trigger-happy with [[Caladbolg]], but you were still flexible with your magic and the [[Vorpal Blade]]. Speaking of the Vorpal Blade, you pull it from the best.

You have gained several levels.

*[[Search the Valefar's carcass]]
*[[Glance around the place]]
*[[healup|Use your healing ointment]]

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[Vorpal Blade]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=1530|MP=185|Level=37}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Rocket66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 19:47:39 GMT

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You conjure a rocket and as it slowly moves towards the enemy, the Valefar grunts, screeches, and sends a massive gust, sending the purple pollutant towards you, as well as the rocket.

THE END

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

User:ILHI/Dead

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 19:41:30 GMT

I Lion Heart I: For substing

THE END

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Crusader Spell Book

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 18:40:18 GMT

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== Crusader ==

The Crusader Spell Book has the few spells that you, as a crusader, can cast. Certain options allow you to access more spells (spells you can use will be given as an adventure option).

== Paladin ==

The Crusader Spell Book returns. It is called the Paladin Spell Book but it's the same thing. Many more pages have been added and now you can summon small Rockets and small Comets as well as all your old stuff. Fire, Water/Ice, Earth and Wind magic all have an increased effect and [[The 10 Rings]] make them even stronger.

There are ten magics that are features in the book:

*Fire - Creates fire in specific locations
*Ice - Conjures a sharp icicle which can be launched at the enemy
*Vines - Allows manipulation of vines and other plant life (Conditional)
*Water - Summons water and can be landed upon the enemy in the form of a wave
*Comet - Changes the gravitational pull of something, usually outer-space rocks for most damage (Conditional)
*Thunder - Not living to its name, it calls a lightning strike upon the enemy
*Rocket - Creates a slow explosive rocket from the hands of the user
*Earth - Manipulates the ground (Conditional)
*Cure - Increases health by 500
*Wind - Spawns a strong wind

Other spells may also appear in battles.

[[Category:Crusader]]
[[Category:Paladin]]

Paladin/Thunder66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 18:21:53 GMT

I Lion Heart I: I've just realised how stupid casting "Thunder" is.

The thunderbolt called from the sky strikes through the above ground surface into the underground tomb, sending the dismembered rocks down onto the archdemon. A shame the tomb is yours.

'''The End'''

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Water66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 17:04:52 GMT

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The water just deflects off the archfiend just before he reduces your health to its minimum.

'''The End'''

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Vines66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 17:01:41 GMT

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The plant life attempts to surround the enemy but the Valefar is strong enough to break free and step on you.

'''The End'''

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Ice66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 16:58:55 GMT

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The ice strike does nothing to the Valefar and he crushes you.

'''The End'''

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Fire66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 16:30:04 GMT

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The fire sends the beast into a terrific pain. Then it crushes you.

'''The End'''

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Caladbolg66

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 16:28:20 GMT

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The beast standing on its back legs, you strike at it with the Caladbolg which no longer appears to have an effect. Just a second after the strike, Valefar punches down with his right fist and removes any will, strength, and life you have left.

'''The End'''

{{PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Main Page

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 16:06:20 GMT

I Lion Heart I: Complex structure is too complex for everyone but me

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|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||(12+ pages)
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|[[Down The Rabbit Hole]]||(300+ pages)(Hail Eris!)
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|[[Freelancer: The Universe of Possibility]]||(10+ pages)
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|[[Friday the 13th: Revenge]] || (2 pages)
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|[[Furry World]]||(100+ pages)
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|[[The Story of Jack Foster]]||(200+ pages)
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|[[Teenager]] || (60+ pages)
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|[[The 007 Stories]] || (20+ pages, public, so you may edit, but ask for permission from me first)
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|[[The Tormentor's eyes]]|| (just started 1 page)
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|[[Tree of Doom]] || (30+ pages)
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==[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]==
Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time go in the pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back here on the Main Page if you get inspired and add to one.

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==Instructions==
===Starting Template===
'''Copy and paste this for new pages:'''
<pre><nowiki>
Page text here

Do you:
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]
</nowiki>
</pre>

The next to the last line here is the ''status indicator''. The status indicator shown here is the ''basic'' status indicator. Different stories use different status indicators, and some use none at all. Look at the edit screen for the page you're starting from and copy that status indicator to the new page you're adding. Modify as necessary.

===To edit a page===
Just click the edit tab on the top of the page

===To add an option===
<nowiki>[[Adventure name/New option name]]</nowiki>

Options that appear <font color="red">red</font> on the page have no content. Click the link, paste in the above template, and then add your own content.

This is for fun!

===Tips===
*To make it easier to add a page. Copy the text from the previous page into the current page
*To make the story better, you can make the story go comepletely different directions, like one way you go to the moon, and the other way you'll die and go to hell.
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==Rules==
People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:
*for each page where you kill the character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where he can go on.
*whenever you fill out the last option's page, add another one so the story can go another way.
*please stick to the theme and setting of the story. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly. We have a spell checker [[Spellcheck|here]].
*'''ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!''' Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be editted or deleted.

==To Do List==
*Go through and fix or remove status indicators from pages.
**Some are not needed in stories and were copied and pasted from the template.
**Some are missing the level and MP from the line of code.
*Remove off-topic pages.
*Correct capitalization and spelling mistakes.
*Add a basic, or main, timeline of background events during the period that the character is making choices in - those events are usually out of the character's control. This will help add consistency.
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==No One Should Read These==

'''FOR 21+''' No limits to content. Don't blame us.

{|
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|[[Fuckin Screwed Up]]||(75+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[The Guy Who Held His Breath Forever]]||(Work in Progress)
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|[[High School]]||(Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[Kill As Many People As You Can]]||(5+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[Kill The President]]||(5+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[One Messed Up Story]] (A Story For Guys)||(100+ pages, Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[Short and Funny.]]||(5+ pages)
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|[[S.W.A.T.]]||(Just Started, PLEASE HELP WITH IDEAS, ITS PUBLIC)
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|[[Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]||(Just Started, Work On It(please), It's Public)
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Talk:Main Page

I Lion Heart I — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 15:56:17 GMT

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==Story Discussions==
This is a great idea, but the problem is that the story lacks focus. Everyone is just adding to it in crazy directions with some adult content thrown in. Although I guess its funny, it will never be a story. I suggest that the authors try their best to constrain it to the world of the story, and not have things like out of place items like possibly cell phones or celebrities, etc. (I am talking here about the non-adult stories.)
::I completely agree, but keep in mind that if you see something that doesn't belong, feel free to cut it out. Also all it takes is one person with the urge to create a focused storyline. Right now everyone is just putting in little peices just for the heck of it.
::::I agree that story focus will be a problem with the current system (I also agree that this is a great idea). How about writing a short blurb on the beginning page when starting a new story? It could work as a setting definition for that story, and as a reference when editors weigh whether new additions to that story are appropriate or not. It would also work as a traditional book blurb, making it easier for readers to choose stories to their liking. [[User:E.p.|E.p.]] 11:15, 12 December 2006 (EST)

Whoever put in that story about red october, it was really good! -RobKohr 08:00, 10 August 2006 (EDT)

*Tip: [http://images.google.com/images?svnum=10&hl=en&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&sa=X&oi=spell&resnum=0&ct=result&cd=1&q=powerbar&spell=1 search for small images] and add the links to them to equipment. This way you can use images in the equipment list. Try to use the direct image url and not the google cached copy since that changes frequently.

** Removing the "Random page" link might be a good idea for this project, especially when children are visiting the site, may curiously or accidentally stumble onto a scene from an 18+ story or something. [[User:Leileilol|Leileilol]] 20:39, 28 November 2006 (EST)
**Done, good thinking! :)

* Anyone played Fantasy Quest? Are the Diablo sprites infringing any copywrite? [[User:FQ|FQ]] 16:57, 8 January 2007 (EST)

*How to we block destructive morons like [[C.Mitch]] and [[Gaius Flaminus the Censor]] who want to trash the site? [[User:Platypus]]
*I posted Gaius' rant over at the parent page, eddithis.info. Maybe someone there can do something about him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:44, 23 February 2007 (EST)
*Good idea Platypus! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*I wasn't here when Gaius Flaminus struck, but I went onto the recent changes page and I agree he sounds like a @#%$&. Post on my talk page if you agree. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*Has anyone tried [[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)|Crusader]] or [[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Paladin]]? They're not as boring as they may sound! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
**Yeah, I have. Crusader started fine but then got too wierd and mixed-up after a while. Paladin is newer, so it's still coming together. I added about 8 pages to Paladin the other day...[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

*I sort of stopped making then since I though they had enough (though I might start again after a while) and I've been looking on recent changes. Many different users are adding new things. They can be weird, but they aren't misspelled or way off topic, so I let them stay. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
**Oh yeah, they aren't really poorly written or anything, they just don't fit together. (like one second you're fighting off monsters in your castle and suddenly you're in a forest and the castle is never mentioned again)I kinda figured that you didn't write most of the more recent stuff. It's not really bad or anything.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

*What in the #^%* is going on!? I keep pressing "remember me" on the log in page and it keeps saying I'm not logged in! I don't know what's going on! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]17:05, 11 Feb. 2007 (EST).
**How odd. It's working fine for me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:41, 23 February 2007 (EST)

*Arg!!! I'm choking on a carrot! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

==Deleting an account==
*I haven't used this in awhile and I wish to delete my account. How do I do this? [[User:Flowerzomay|Flowerzomay]]

==Zoo Template==
*How do you add animal sketches to the zoo templet? I tried to add one and it didn't work. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*If you mean adding animals to the directory, first, I upload the animal pic I want using the 'Upload File' button. Then I right click on the uploaded file and choose 'properties' from the menu to see how the pic is named here on the site. Then I add a line like this to the ZooTemplate:
<nowiki>|[[Hyenas.]] http://www.editthis.info/images/choose_your_own_adventure/a/a9/Striped-hyena_1_sm.gif</nowiki>

I seperate rows of animals by using |- at the start of a new row.
Incidentally, I acquired those sketches from http://etc.usf.edu/clipart/mySearch.php --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)

If you mean adding the sketch to new pages, the template looks like this on a new page:
<nowiki>{{ZooExhibitTemplate|Animal=The Platypus|animalpic=http://www.editthis.info/images/choose_your_own_adventure/3/38/Platypus_7408_sm.gif}}
</nowiki>
Animal= the name of the animal, animalpic= the address of the picture --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:24, 3 March 2007 (EST)

==1st Person Stories==
*Do stories have to be set in the second-person perspective? Because I have a story set in first-person that I think might be nice here, but it would be a pain to change everything to second-person. I don't see any rules about it so I'm guessing it's ok...?[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

*Go ahead. When it comes to writing, don't be afraid to experiment. There's nothing wrong with doing something a little different. Also, Jo-Ann the Librarian is in semi-3rd person. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)
**Got it. Thanks.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
* Yeah my story Zombie OverLord is written in first person and I think its great but thats just because I am the writer... lol. [[User:Merlin_a4|Merlin_a4]]

==Formatting Text==
*How do you add words in bold writing after you make a new page or edit a page? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
*By putting threee quote marks around the text (<nowiki>'''bold'''</nowiki>='''bold'''). Two quotes makes ''italics''. Or use the little string of buttons on the top of the edit window. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 25 February 2007 (EST)

* Thanks for the info, but I was really meaning like this: (blocked "User:66.168.100.13" with an expiry time of infinite: vandal) which appeared on "recent changes" page after [[User:RobKohr|RobKhor]] blocked User 66.168 etc.

*Oh, that. Write something in the summary box at the bottom of the edit screen and it will appear on the "recent changes" page.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:38, 27 February 2007 (EST)

*Is there any way to format text so that certain lines are out in the middle (indented) like this:
E x a m p l e
But without having that blue box around it?

I don't think so.
You just have to start pages at the beginning of the page I guess.[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*Hm....That kind of sucks. Oh well, thanks.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
*I've been puzzling over this for days... and the answer is right above us! Colons!
Typing this:

<nowiki>
::Indent</nowiki>

<nowiki>::::Further indent.</nowiki>

Produces this:
::Indent.
::::Further indent. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:09, 3 March 2007 (EST)
*so it IS possible. Sweet, I thought there must be a way to do it
::::::Thanks.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

== Princess Carkegee ==
*I'm confused about the Kid's adventure, Princess Carkegee. It seems to be about religion, in which not many people would take interest. The plot is mixed up and confusing, and it seems to be focusing on more then one religion at once. The title does not mix into the adventure. The adventure, I think, needs to be changed. [[User:Fruitbat]]
**I'm glad I'm not the only one who couldn't make heads or tails out of that story. I'm not sure if it's meant to be Buddhist, Christian or what. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:03, 14 February 2007 (EST)
* Right now, I think I'm going to try to "re-vamp" Carkegee a little...
[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]].
*I have now added a Princess Carkegee status bar to the adventure. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
*What the...wow, you're right. What is going ON in that story? I really don't get it. [[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
*I did a google search for "princess carkegee". There's more confusing buddhist/christian/hallucination stuff about her floating around out there, but nothing that makes any kind of sense.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)

== Best wiki ever ==

*I admit obviously that I've only flicked through the non-adult sections and have paid the most attention to the Sex Romp story, but still, this is an excellent use of the wiki technology.

*I'm glad someone likes the site, since every day lately another jerk attacks and I waste a lot of time repairing things. [[User:Platypus|Platypus]]

*Why is it that "Smutty Sex Romp" can have the word "sex" when the word "sex" is forbidden?
Oh - wait...I understand now...

*Dang! I accidentally messed up the regular status indicator! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
*No biggie. Click on 'history' and go back to the revision before you messed it up.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 5 February 2007 (EST)

*Daang...who did the "World's End" Story? It's incredibly good, now we just need it to be expanded.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
*Well, it was started by 128.138.31.70... It looks like it attract writers who don't make names for themselves. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:13, 3 March 2007 (EST)

*Hey, just found this site, and yes, this is amazing. Very happy to be here and can't wait to start on my own story! --[[User:Olboyfloats|Olboyfloats]]

*Repeat of the World's End comment. I'd love to know what happened! (Also, excellent site. Now I've got even more stuff to play with while ignoring homework!) --[[User:Cyclone|Cyclone]]

== Page counts ==

*The page counts seem wildly off.

*And how do you figure that? Many stories here have their own status bar. By going to the Special Page 'Most Linked To Pages', you can see precisely how many pages link to a status bar. So the pages counts aren't guesses. They're computed by the site itself. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:22, 9 February 2007 (EST)

== Categories ==

Categories need to be created for each individual story. Makes it easier to group them and keep track of your pages. Also, I've created [[:Category:Templates]] for all "Status" templates - [[User:Kwenn|Kwenn]] 12:45, 9 February 2007 (EST)

It isn't necessary to categorize every page in a story. Having a status bar unique to that story serves pretty much the same function. But a category for templates is a good idea. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:10, 9 February 2007 (EST)

==Sysyop Rights==
*Something starnge just happened to me! I got sysop rights today and now the entire site looks different! I can't find edit buttons in certain places! I woundered if Platypus or anyone else with sysop rights sees the same thing, and also if they know how to get back to the old page or if it's just an effect of the sysop. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] has promoted us, Fruitbat. Now we can block vandals or protect pages, as necessary. I haven't noticed any missing edit buttons... yet.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 25 February 2007 (EST)

* I understand about the promotion. However, the page is now back to normal. I don't know what happened to the page. All of the edit buttons seemed to dissappear, but they are all back now. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*What does "protect" do?
**'protect' prevents anyone from editting a page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 08:45, 28 February 2007 (EST)

*I wounder what the highest rank we can get is?

*It appears someone may have beed sort of "vandalizing". on the special page "user list", there are about 20 user names with multiple exlamation points, sort of like C. Mitch's ones. Should I block them? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
**I noticed those. I'm not sure if they mean anything or not. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)
*I went ahead and blocked them. It took a while! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*When I edit [[Boromir's Quest (an LOTR adventure)|Boromir's Quest]], I copy the Status Bar and Category indicator from the previous page. Now two of the pages are listed at the top of the category page and not under their appropirate letter. Can someone explain this to me? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
:*On the first page, the category bar reads <nowiki>[[Category:Boromir's Quest| ]]. The blank space after the | floats the page to the top of the index. If it read [[Category: Boromir's Quest|Z]], it would alphabetize the page under Z, no matter what the actual page title is. For most pages, it should simply be [[Category: Boromir's Quest]]. With no |, it alphabetizes by itself. </nowiki>--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:02, 15 April 2007 (EDT)

== Category experiment. ==

I know we've discussed categories before, and that some people have decided that it's unnecessary to put every page of a story in a category. I disagree, personally, I think that the current method is too unorganized, and when I see a page in recent changes, I can't tell what story it belongs to. So as a compromise, I'm going to start assigning categories to one story ([[Dead Kid]]) as a trial. If it works out well, we move on the next story. If it doesn't work out, well, it doesn't work out. (IMO, this plan makes at least as much sense as starting all of the Victim pages with "Victim:"). — [[User:LastUserNameEver|LastUserNameEver]] 11:55, 15 March 2007 (EST)

I disagree. Although I do find it hard to tell what story certain pages go into (especially if no status bar was placed on the page), I don't think that categorys are needed for each story and individual page. Although I don't really mind experimenting, I just don't want you to kill yourself caregorizing every page on the site. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

I think having unique status bars for each story works just as well, but I have nothing against experimenting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:10, 15 March 2007 (EST)

What is going on!? Categories are being placed for each and every story, even for the crumbling Island of Utobi! I don't know why everyone wants to categorize every page! Isn't ten categories enough? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

== fake link spamming ==

I have recieved the follwing message whan trying to edit main page:
"You have been identified as a link spammer by the use of the word sex.

If you are the admin of this wiki, you can go to the control panel for instructions on how to add this to the white list."
the word sex was not even written by me (in fcat I was just changing a 0 into a 5), but part of category descriptions, and if I were to try and delete all instnces of it, that would render one story unreadable. so... um... help?

[[User:A1s|A1s]] 17:58, 26 March 2007 (EST)

I used to get a similiar message if I tried to eidt the entire Main Page instead of just a section. It might let me do it now since I got promoted to sysop. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:03, 26 March 2007 (EST)

Oh yeah, that happened to me to. It ticked me off. However, I don't get it anymore (however, I don't think it's sysop, since it stopped before I was premoted). [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

That just happened to me! After I lost all my writing work trying to save only to have it deleted when that message came up, I went to the Nonspam page, and it was blank! I don't know why it turned blank, but it ticked me off (I restored it back to normal). [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]] 22:25, 06 April 2007 (EST)

== Secret Island of Utobi ==

*I want to know why the people in Secret Island of Utobi do their little 'ritual' of save-edit-save-edit.
*I'd like to know that, too, but they don't seem to be very communicative. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:32, 6 April 2007 (EDT)

And now, that story is becoming weird. I mean, first you're stranded on a desert island, and the next (if you choose the right path, of course)you come to a telephone booth where someone dropped their wallet. It would be best if the authors kept to the world of the story and didn't go overboard (this is also refering to a user who added pages like 'watch some TV' or 'go to the arcade' in [[Visiting the Zoo]]. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Since I don't know the secret of the secret island, I couldn't say if finding a phone booth or a wallet is that strange... but [[Visiting the Zoo]] should certainly remain a story about visiting the zoo, and not wander off topic to visit anyplace other than the zoo. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:24, 17 April 2007 (EDT)

The users who are editing the Secret Island are getting on my last nerve! They never seem to read their mail. I even posted a notice telling them to read their mail on a page they were editing, and they ignore it! I've given 68.216.187.39 user his last warning...[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

If any of you can't stand Utobi, go to Wikipedia and add a list of critisms about the story.

Huh? We aren't objecting to the story. We are asking you, repeatedly, to please stop filling up the Recent Changes page by doing you edit-save-edit-save-edit routine. Use the Preview button and consider what you want the page to contain before saving it. Or better still, create an identity for yourself. As a logged-in user, you'll have the option of marking changes as minor, so they can be hidden on the Recent Changes pages. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:46, 25 April 2007 (EDT)

Any good story ideas?

Don't edit one page a thousand times! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

I am quiting Utobi for a while, so if any of you can contribute that would be awesome.
[[User:SODANINGA|Sodaninga]]

== Zork ripoff ==

Entire Wiki dedicated to ripping off Uncyclopedia's Zork.

What is this? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Uncyclopedias Zork: [http://uncyclopedia.org/wiki/Zork] [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]]

Interesting, but I played the original Zorks, which predate wikis. And Zork was preceded by other text-adventure games. So no one's ripping off anyone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 15 May 2007 (EDT)

:I am an Uncyclopedian, and I have no objection to this site. --Anonymous 09:34, 14 June 2007 (EDT)

== A Trump Idea ==

Well I'm bored nowadays and I was wondering if I could make a trump game choose stat thing. I'm gonna make it small with 10 cards and each card only having 4 stats but I thought it would be kinda cool. If I do bother it would probably be Final Fantasy games from 1 - 10 including no FF and year and characters and something else. What do you guys think about this idea? [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]]

I really don't know what a trump game choose stat thing is, but if you can do it as a Choose Your Own adventure, go right ahead with it. Otherwise, this might not be the appropriate site for it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:31, 15 May 2007 (EDT)

== Crusader ==

I think there is only 9 pages left to make. I would make them but I need to read the story and choose the right directions so I know the whereabouts and what is happening. I think I've made just under 100 pages (on both my account and my IPs.) [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 16:02, 22 May 2007 (EDT)

I do believe the Crusader story is completely complete. I believe there to be no links in red and I searched through the whole category. Is this the first? --[[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 12:47, 8 July 2007 (EDT)

I think so. Congratulations! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:33, 8 July 2007 (EDT)

Shouldn't you just say "337" pages seeming it's definate and will only change if people add more options to a certain place and leave more red links. I'm gonna contribute to [[Paladin.|Paladin]] if that's okay. (seeming I haven't seen on [User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat on recently and I'll probably end it before then) I'm babbling on so... --[[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 15:05, 9 July 2007 (EDT)

Good job! I'm glad to see that you like my story! [[User:fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

== I've blanked a few pages of Jo-Ann the librarian ==
...and moved them to the [[Jo-Ann the Librarian (a Comedy)]]main Jo-Ann page. Don't mistake it for vandalism! --Anonymous 09:18, 15 June 2007 (EDT)

Understood. I've considered blanking those pages myself as none of the rules have been applied in the story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:14, 15 June 2007 (EDT)

== Wouldn't it be advisable... ==
...to protect [[Nonspam|the nonspam page]]? --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 14:51, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

You're right. The link spammers are annoying enough without leaving them the opportunity to mess with the nonspam page. Done. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

== I've made a new logo ==
I was bored, so I opened Photoshop, and...

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/108/cyoalogopngpp1.png

Do whatever you want with it. I don't mind. --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 06:54, 24 June 2007 (EDT)

Not bad. We could stand a change in logo. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 June 2007 (EDT)

Your new logo has disappeared, so I had to put the old one back. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:06, 25 June 2007 (EDT)
:That's odd. Try saving it to your computer then uploading it to the wiki's server space, if there's room. You can always delete it. --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 12:23, 25 June 2007 (EDT)
::I think the problem was with the crappy computer I was connecting from. I'm uploading it the the wiki's server, which should serve better even when I'm at a cruddy terminal. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:56, 25 June 2007 (EDT)

I've made a few minor adjustments, to make it slightly better (in my opinion, at least)...

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/8788/cyoalogo2pngtn5.png

I've made the text black, and enlarged the top text slightly. I've also done a few other things, but they're barely noticeable. --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 12:11, 26 June 2007 (EDT)
==SSR page-jump==
Since ssr (Smutty Sex Romp) is such a HUGE story, I think it might be cool to have a section on it's main page where you can select certain areas in the "story" to go to. There are certain areas that are near impossible to go to once you have to start over, so this could be an optional thing for people who want to find somewhere quickly or start from a certain place. --[[User:Kazemawari]]

There are several options for finding specific areas. On the status bar, there's a spot for Location. Click on the location and you'll go to a brief description of it. From this description page, click on the category, which is Smutty Sex Romp Locations. This will take you to the index of all locations in the story. Click on any of them to get the description, and from that page, click on the left where it says 'what links here'. That will give you a list of pages in that location.

This is why it's important to include the status bar on any page you create. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:55, 16 September 2007 (EDT)

I think it's a good idea with some games like world's end though, where there are no list of locations. I added one. Good idea. --[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

==Since I'm Still Working on Ideas, Still Incredibly New on Programming, . . .==

And I can't be here 24/7, what state should I leave unfinished pages in? I tried reading the rules, but now I can't find them anymore. I'd ''really'' like to not get banned. And for for those unfinished stories I add to (that aren't mine), is there a safe "time limit" I ought to adhere to? For instance, if authors come back from vacation/work/life/whatever and have been absent for three months, find I've added to their story in a way they don't like, I'll back off from their story (they have every right to take their stories wherever they see fit, within the rules, anyway). But should I stay away from any in particular?

I guess the safest bet would be just to start my own stories up, which I plan to do . . .

Don't worry too much. I'm the only active member with the power to ban people, and I only ban people for vandalism. I do appreciate it if you finish an individual page once you've started it. That is, it should include options so other writers can carry the story onward if you don't (unless the page is an ending), and should include the status bar/category from the previous page, as appropriate. You can always edit the page's contents later if you feel it needs more work.

The only story I would advise against adding to at this time is Paladin, since it has a rather complex structure and [[User: I Lion Heart I]] has been putting a lot into it recently. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:51, 26 March 2008 (EST)

Wow Paladin 2 is big.

== Can't create an adventure ==

For some reason when I try to create an adventure via the create a wiki link, I can't seem to do it. It always tells me there is no wiki by that name and asks me to create one. But when I do, the same thing happens. Any help with this?

You don't click the creat a wiki link to creat your adventure, you click to edit the section you wish, like kids stories, normal stories and that kind of stuff. Then once you edit it you can copy a story link there, and paste it were it goes. Then you change the name of that to your story. After that you click on hit to edit it.

== Platipus, Please Don't Edit My Stuff ==

Platipus, I would like it if you didn't add pages onto my site. I like to make everything on my stories myself, expecialy "A Random Story" Please, and Thank You.

I saw it say "Work on it, guys. It's public." And I did a lot of stuff to it, too. Sorry.--[[User:Hammerthingys42|Hammerthingys42]] 15:05, 2 September 2008 (PDT)

== How Do I Make My Own Stuff? ==

How Do I Make Stuff Like:

{{Status|Equipment=''Example''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}

But with other options, like: Location, Kills, And How Many Cops Are After You?

Making your own template can be a bit tricky and does take some practice. To start, you might want to go to [[http://editthis.info/choose_Your_Own_Adventure/Category:Templates]] and take a look at the coding that's gone into existing templates. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 2 September 2008 (PDT)

== Something similar for Spanish ==

Great site, great effort, count me in.

I'm talking the idea and using in Spanish. Hope you don't mind.

Why should we mind? Good luck with your writing. Buena suerte, right? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:58, 6 September 2008 (PDT)

== Planning to create a new account. ==

I regret that i didn't used my normal name for my account (FreddeX) so im gonna create an new account named FreddeX. I know it dosn't really matter but still it keeps bugging me so yeah. Just wanted to say this to prevent confusions. --[[User:Anonym|Anonym]] 12:11, 7 September 2008 (PDT)

Alright done and done i have created an new account! Just so you know. --[[User:FreddeX|FreddeX]] 11:14, 15 September 2008 (PDT)

== Giant Cookie story ==

Guys, can somebody have a look at this, there are some things on there that really aren't very nice, especially on a story designed for kids.

== Amazing ==

::I am left speechless.
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[[User:Mask man|Mask man]]

== Deleteting some adventures. ==

There is alot of adventures which contains only like one or two pages or is simply work in progress, i think that we should consider deleting some of them to make it easier for all of us too find the adventure we are looking for. That is at least what i think.

--[[User:FreddeX|FreddeX]] 11:43, 25 October 2008 (PDT)

I've considered doing that, but every now and then someone comes along and takes a story that's been sitting around going nowhere and turns it into something. That [[Harry Potter]] adventurer, for example, had only a few pages for the longest time and then people began adding to it. [[Rampage]] had about five barely readable pages until I re-wrote it in proper English and since then many others have added to it.

On the other hand, some of those one- or two-page stories are truly awful and it's hard to imagine anyone ever adding to them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:43, 25 October 2008 (PDT)

How about we implant a new rule,
If a story does not have X amount of pages, it be marked as Under Construction? [[User:Mask man|Mask man]] 19:50, 27 October 2008 (PDT)

ya sounds good but even if some arnt being worked on we should still keep a few of the good ideas. For example i have strarted working on Zombie blood last week when it only hade 1 page on it.[[User:Power8|Power8]]

I think what I'll do is create a Pit of Abandoned Stories page. Any story of less than ten pages which hasn't been touched in over a month gets dropped off the Main Page and into the Pit. Anyone who gets inspired by an abandoned story may freely remove it from the Pit and add to it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:50, 28 October 2008 (PDT)

== Maybe an Idea? ==

I've been wanting to make a more formal one like these for a while, I've made http://writtenadventures.com in attempt to do so, but you can't add to someone else's adventures. I'm not sure if people more like to add to others' stories, or write their own from start to finish.

'''Note:''' If this is considered spam in anyway please delete it immediately, I don't mean it to be at all, just Wiki seems to be a little complicated.

From what I've seen, some people here hate having their stories touched by other people, and some people love to add to stories in progress or start stories that they hope others will add to. We get all types here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:18, 27 November 2008 (PST)

From the first post of this discussion: ''"This is a great idea, but the problem is that the story lacks focus. Everyone is just adding to it in crazy directions with some adult content thrown in. Although I guess its funny, it will never be a story."''

That's the reason I made it non-editable by everyone, but yeah, I see how some like to see what others would add to their story, I would in some cases. I was thinking about have 1 master adventure editable by everyone, make one long one and not as many short ones, but I'm not sure that's the best idea because some people have different tastes & styles.

Btw adventures in that website are editable & viewable to anyone you give the password to. --[[User:O.o|O.o]] 07:16, 28 November 2008 (PST)

== main page ==

whats up with the main page?

The whole wikk seems messed up now. WTF??

Just a vandal attack. He's been blocked and his edits reverted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:45, 26 January 2009 (PST)

ok then

== seeing how many ==

can you see how many people have visted a story?

The bottom of each page says how many times that page has been accessed. But you can't tell how many ''different'' people have accessed it.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:20, 2 February 2009 (PST)

ok tyvm

== Sort Order ==

Perhaps we should sort stories by number of pages rather than alphabetical. It will make it easier for new users to find good stories.

But it would make it impossible for new users to find their own newer stories. And the alphabet never changes, while the number of pages in stories does. The list would keep getting re-ordered and dis-ordered. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:33, 17 February 2009 (PST)

I think an editor's selection might accomplish the same end. Have a section that links to only the "best" stories. Or to the finished ones. I think that'd be a great idea. You could even have a page that you link to from the main page that accomplishes the same thing. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 12:11, 24 March 2009 (PDT)

==Relocation==
Have you ever considered moving the wiki? EditThis.info is riddled with problems. Since I organised to move one of my wikis to Wikia (and later moved my other one) everything has been fine. Here, everytime I try to open a page, it takes <s>double, possibly triple as long as</s> '''much''' longer than it does everywhere else.

I say Wikia, it's the only good wiki host I know of. Far more reliable, and reacts quicker to problems you may have. There's always WikiaStaff to help. More possible things on Wikia's MediaWiki than here too.

Or is this wiki owned by RobKohr and therefore moving it from EditThis.info isn't an option? [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 08:15, 8 April 2009 (PDT)

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==Story Discussions==
This is a great idea, but the problem is that the story lacks focus. Everyone is just adding to it in crazy directions with some adult content thrown in. Although I guess its funny, it will never be a story. I suggest that the authors try their best to constrain it to the world of the story, and not have things like out of place items like possibly cell phones or celebrities, etc. (I am talking here about the non-adult stories.)
::I completely agree, but keep in mind that if you see something that doesn't belong, feel free to cut it out. Also all it takes is one person with the urge to create a focused storyline. Right now everyone is just putting in little peices just for the heck of it.
::::I agree that story focus will be a problem with the current system (I also agree that this is a great idea). How about writing a short blurb on the beginning page when starting a new story? It could work as a setting definition for that story, and as a reference when editors weigh whether new additions to that story are appropriate or not. It would also work as a traditional book blurb, making it easier for readers to choose stories to their liking. [[User:E.p.|E.p.]] 11:15, 12 December 2006 (EST)

Whoever put in that story about red october, it was really good! -RobKohr 08:00, 10 August 2006 (EDT)

*Tip: [http://images.google.com/images?svnum=10&hl=en&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&sa=X&oi=spell&resnum=0&ct=result&cd=1&q=powerbar&spell=1 search for small images] and add the links to them to equipment. This way you can use images in the equipment list. Try to use the direct image url and not the google cached copy since that changes frequently.

** Removing the "Random page" link might be a good idea for this project, especially when children are visiting the site, may curiously or accidentally stumble onto a scene from an 18+ story or something. [[User:Leileilol|Leileilol]] 20:39, 28 November 2006 (EST)
**Done, good thinking! :)

* Anyone played Fantasy Quest? Are the Diablo sprites infringing any copywrite? [[User:FQ|FQ]] 16:57, 8 January 2007 (EST)

*How to we block destructive morons like [[C.Mitch]] and [[Gaius Flaminus the Censor]] who want to trash the site? [[User:Platypus]]
*I posted Gaius' rant over at the parent page, eddithis.info. Maybe someone there can do something about him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:44, 23 February 2007 (EST)
*Good idea Platypus! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*I wasn't here when Gaius Flaminus struck, but I went onto the recent changes page and I agree he sounds like a @#%$&. Post on my talk page if you agree. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*Has anyone tried [[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)|Crusader]] or [[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Paladin]]? They're not as boring as they may sound! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
**Yeah, I have. Crusader started fine but then got too wierd and mixed-up after a while. Paladin is newer, so it's still coming together. I added about 8 pages to Paladin the other day...[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

*I sort of stopped making then since I though they had enough (though I might start again after a while) and I've been looking on recent changes. Many different users are adding new things. They can be weird, but they aren't misspelled or way off topic, so I let them stay. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
**Oh yeah, they aren't really poorly written or anything, they just don't fit together. (like one second you're fighting off monsters in your castle and suddenly you're in a forest and the castle is never mentioned again)I kinda figured that you didn't write most of the more recent stuff. It's not really bad or anything.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

*What in the #^%* is going on!? I keep pressing "remember me" on the log in page and it keeps saying I'm not logged in! I don't know what's going on! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]17:05, 11 Feb. 2007 (EST).
**How odd. It's working fine for me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:41, 23 February 2007 (EST)

*Arg!!! I'm choking on a carrot! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

==Deleting an account==
*I haven't used this in awhile and I wish to delete my account. How do I do this? [[User:Flowerzomay|Flowerzomay]]

==Zoo Template==
*How do you add animal sketches to the zoo templet? I tried to add one and it didn't work. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*If you mean adding animals to the directory, first, I upload the animal pic I want using the 'Upload File' button. Then I right click on the uploaded file and choose 'properties' from the menu to see how the pic is named here on the site. Then I add a line like this to the ZooTemplate:
<nowiki>|[[Hyenas.]] http://www.editthis.info/images/choose_your_own_adventure/a/a9/Striped-hyena_1_sm.gif</nowiki>

I seperate rows of animals by using |- at the start of a new row.
Incidentally, I acquired those sketches from http://etc.usf.edu/clipart/mySearch.php --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)

If you mean adding the sketch to new pages, the template looks like this on a new page:
<nowiki>{{ZooExhibitTemplate|Animal=The Platypus|animalpic=http://www.editthis.info/images/choose_your_own_adventure/3/38/Platypus_7408_sm.gif}}
</nowiki>
Animal= the name of the animal, animalpic= the address of the picture --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:24, 3 March 2007 (EST)

==1st Person Stories==
*Do stories have to be set in the second-person perspective? Because I have a story set in first-person that I think might be nice here, but it would be a pain to change everything to second-person. I don't see any rules about it so I'm guessing it's ok...?[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

*Go ahead. When it comes to writing, don't be afraid to experiment. There's nothing wrong with doing something a little different. Also, Jo-Ann the Librarian is in semi-3rd person. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)
**Got it. Thanks.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
* Yeah my story Zombie OverLord is written in first person and I think its great but thats just because I am the writer... lol. [[User:Merlin_a4|Merlin_a4]]

==Formatting Text==
*How do you add words in bold writing after you make a new page or edit a page? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
*By putting threee quote marks around the text (<nowiki>'''bold'''</nowiki>='''bold'''). Two quotes makes ''italics''. Or use the little string of buttons on the top of the edit window. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 25 February 2007 (EST)

* Thanks for the info, but I was really meaning like this: (blocked "User:66.168.100.13" with an expiry time of infinite: vandal) which appeared on "recent changes" page after [[User:RobKohr|RobKhor]] blocked User 66.168 etc.

*Oh, that. Write something in the summary box at the bottom of the edit screen and it will appear on the "recent changes" page.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:38, 27 February 2007 (EST)

*Is there any way to format text so that certain lines are out in the middle (indented) like this:
E x a m p l e
But without having that blue box around it?

I don't think so.
You just have to start pages at the beginning of the page I guess.[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*Hm....That kind of sucks. Oh well, thanks.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
*I've been puzzling over this for days... and the answer is right above us! Colons!
Typing this:

<nowiki>
::Indent</nowiki>

<nowiki>::::Further indent.</nowiki>

Produces this:
::Indent.
::::Further indent. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:09, 3 March 2007 (EST)
*so it IS possible. Sweet, I thought there must be a way to do it
::::::Thanks.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

== Princess Carkegee ==
*I'm confused about the Kid's adventure, Princess Carkegee. It seems to be about religion, in which not many people would take interest. The plot is mixed up and confusing, and it seems to be focusing on more then one religion at once. The title does not mix into the adventure. The adventure, I think, needs to be changed. [[User:Fruitbat]]
**I'm glad I'm not the only one who couldn't make heads or tails out of that story. I'm not sure if it's meant to be Buddhist, Christian or what. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:03, 14 February 2007 (EST)
* Right now, I think I'm going to try to "re-vamp" Carkegee a little...
[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]].
*I have now added a Princess Carkegee status bar to the adventure. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
*What the...wow, you're right. What is going ON in that story? I really don't get it. [[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
*I did a google search for "princess carkegee". There's more confusing buddhist/christian/hallucination stuff about her floating around out there, but nothing that makes any kind of sense.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)

== Best wiki ever ==

*I admit obviously that I've only flicked through the non-adult sections and have paid the most attention to the Sex Romp story, but still, this is an excellent use of the wiki technology.

*I'm glad someone likes the site, since every day lately another jerk attacks and I waste a lot of time repairing things. [[User:Platypus|Platypus]]

*Why is it that "Smutty Sex Romp" can have the word "sex" when the word "sex" is forbidden?
Oh - wait...I understand now...

*Dang! I accidentally messed up the regular status indicator! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
*No biggie. Click on 'history' and go back to the revision before you messed it up.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 5 February 2007 (EST)

*Daang...who did the "World's End" Story? It's incredibly good, now we just need it to be expanded.[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]
*Well, it was started by 128.138.31.70... It looks like it attract writers who don't make names for themselves. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:13, 3 March 2007 (EST)

*Hey, just found this site, and yes, this is amazing. Very happy to be here and can't wait to start on my own story! --[[User:Olboyfloats|Olboyfloats]]

*Repeat of the World's End comment. I'd love to know what happened! (Also, excellent site. Now I've got even more stuff to play with while ignoring homework!) --[[User:Cyclone|Cyclone]]

== Page counts ==

*The page counts seem wildly off.

*And how do you figure that? Many stories here have their own status bar. By going to the Special Page 'Most Linked To Pages', you can see precisely how many pages link to a status bar. So the pages counts aren't guesses. They're computed by the site itself. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:22, 9 February 2007 (EST)

== Categories ==

Categories need to be created for each individual story. Makes it easier to group them and keep track of your pages. Also, I've created [[:Category:Templates]] for all "Status" templates - [[User:Kwenn|Kwenn]] 12:45, 9 February 2007 (EST)

It isn't necessary to categorize every page in a story. Having a status bar unique to that story serves pretty much the same function. But a category for templates is a good idea. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:10, 9 February 2007 (EST)

==Sysyop Rights==
*Something starnge just happened to me! I got sysop rights today and now the entire site looks different! I can't find edit buttons in certain places! I woundered if Platypus or anyone else with sysop rights sees the same thing, and also if they know how to get back to the old page or if it's just an effect of the sysop. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*[[User:RobKohr|RobKohr]] has promoted us, Fruitbat. Now we can block vandals or protect pages, as necessary. I haven't noticed any missing edit buttons... yet.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:25, 25 February 2007 (EST)

* I understand about the promotion. However, the page is now back to normal. I don't know what happened to the page. All of the edit buttons seemed to dissappear, but they are all back now. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*What does "protect" do?
**'protect' prevents anyone from editting a page. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 08:45, 28 February 2007 (EST)

*I wounder what the highest rank we can get is?

*It appears someone may have beed sort of "vandalizing". on the special page "user list", there are about 20 user names with multiple exlamation points, sort of like C. Mitch's ones. Should I block them? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
**I noticed those. I'm not sure if they mean anything or not. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:04, 3 March 2007 (EST)
*I went ahead and blocked them. It took a while! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

*When I edit [[Boromir's Quest (an LOTR adventure)|Boromir's Quest]], I copy the Status Bar and Category indicator from the previous page. Now two of the pages are listed at the top of the category page and not under their appropirate letter. Can someone explain this to me? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]
:*On the first page, the category bar reads <nowiki>[[Category:Boromir's Quest| ]]. The blank space after the | floats the page to the top of the index. If it read [[Category: Boromir's Quest|Z]], it would alphabetize the page under Z, no matter what the actual page title is. For most pages, it should simply be [[Category: Boromir's Quest]]. With no |, it alphabetizes by itself. </nowiki>--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:02, 15 April 2007 (EDT)

== Category experiment. ==

I know we've discussed categories before, and that some people have decided that it's unnecessary to put every page of a story in a category. I disagree, personally, I think that the current method is too unorganized, and when I see a page in recent changes, I can't tell what story it belongs to. So as a compromise, I'm going to start assigning categories to one story ([[Dead Kid]]) as a trial. If it works out well, we move on the next story. If it doesn't work out, well, it doesn't work out. (IMO, this plan makes at least as much sense as starting all of the Victim pages with "Victim:"). — [[User:LastUserNameEver|LastUserNameEver]] 11:55, 15 March 2007 (EST)

I disagree. Although I do find it hard to tell what story certain pages go into (especially if no status bar was placed on the page), I don't think that categorys are needed for each story and individual page. Although I don't really mind experimenting, I just don't want you to kill yourself caregorizing every page on the site. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

I think having unique status bars for each story works just as well, but I have nothing against experimenting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:10, 15 March 2007 (EST)

What is going on!? Categories are being placed for each and every story, even for the crumbling Island of Utobi! I don't know why everyone wants to categorize every page! Isn't ten categories enough? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

== fake link spamming ==

I have recieved the follwing message whan trying to edit main page:
"You have been identified as a link spammer by the use of the word sex.

If you are the admin of this wiki, you can go to the control panel for instructions on how to add this to the white list."
the word sex was not even written by me (in fcat I was just changing a 0 into a 5), but part of category descriptions, and if I were to try and delete all instnces of it, that would render one story unreadable. so... um... help?

[[User:A1s|A1s]] 17:58, 26 March 2007 (EST)

I used to get a similiar message if I tried to eidt the entire Main Page instead of just a section. It might let me do it now since I got promoted to sysop. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:03, 26 March 2007 (EST)

Oh yeah, that happened to me to. It ticked me off. However, I don't get it anymore (however, I don't think it's sysop, since it stopped before I was premoted). [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

That just happened to me! After I lost all my writing work trying to save only to have it deleted when that message came up, I went to the Nonspam page, and it was blank! I don't know why it turned blank, but it ticked me off (I restored it back to normal). [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]] 22:25, 06 April 2007 (EST)

== Secret Island of Utobi ==

*I want to know why the people in Secret Island of Utobi do their little 'ritual' of save-edit-save-edit.
*I'd like to know that, too, but they don't seem to be very communicative. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:32, 6 April 2007 (EDT)

And now, that story is becoming weird. I mean, first you're stranded on a desert island, and the next (if you choose the right path, of course)you come to a telephone booth where someone dropped their wallet. It would be best if the authors kept to the world of the story and didn't go overboard (this is also refering to a user who added pages like 'watch some TV' or 'go to the arcade' in [[Visiting the Zoo]]. [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Since I don't know the secret of the secret island, I couldn't say if finding a phone booth or a wallet is that strange... but [[Visiting the Zoo]] should certainly remain a story about visiting the zoo, and not wander off topic to visit anyplace other than the zoo. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:24, 17 April 2007 (EDT)

The users who are editing the Secret Island are getting on my last nerve! They never seem to read their mail. I even posted a notice telling them to read their mail on a page they were editing, and they ignore it! I've given 68.216.187.39 user his last warning...[[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

If any of you can't stand Utobi, go to Wikipedia and add a list of critisms about the story.

Huh? We aren't objecting to the story. We are asking you, repeatedly, to please stop filling up the Recent Changes page by doing you edit-save-edit-save-edit routine. Use the Preview button and consider what you want the page to contain before saving it. Or better still, create an identity for yourself. As a logged-in user, you'll have the option of marking changes as minor, so they can be hidden on the Recent Changes pages. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:46, 25 April 2007 (EDT)

Any good story ideas?

Don't edit one page a thousand times! [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

I am quiting Utobi for a while, so if any of you can contribute that would be awesome.
[[User:SODANINGA|Sodaninga]]

== Zork ripoff ==

Entire Wiki dedicated to ripping off Uncyclopedia's Zork.

What is this? [[User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

Uncyclopedias Zork: [http://uncyclopedia.org/wiki/Zork] [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]]

Interesting, but I played the original Zorks, which predate wikis. And Zork was preceded by other text-adventure games. So no one's ripping off anyone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 15 May 2007 (EDT)

:I am an Uncyclopedian, and I have no objection to this site. --Anonymous 09:34, 14 June 2007 (EDT)

== A Trump Idea ==

Well I'm bored nowadays and I was wondering if I could make a trump game choose stat thing. I'm gonna make it small with 10 cards and each card only having 4 stats but I thought it would be kinda cool. If I do bother it would probably be Final Fantasy games from 1 - 10 including no FF and year and characters and something else. What do you guys think about this idea? [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]]

I really don't know what a trump game choose stat thing is, but if you can do it as a Choose Your Own adventure, go right ahead with it. Otherwise, this might not be the appropriate site for it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:31, 15 May 2007 (EDT)

== Crusader ==

I think there is only 9 pages left to make. I would make them but I need to read the story and choose the right directions so I know the whereabouts and what is happening. I think I've made just under 100 pages (on both my account and my IPs.) [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 16:02, 22 May 2007 (EDT)

I do believe the Crusader story is completely complete. I believe there to be no links in red and I searched through the whole category. Is this the first? --[[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 12:47, 8 July 2007 (EDT)

I think so. Congratulations! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:33, 8 July 2007 (EDT)

Shouldn't you just say "337" pages seeming it's definate and will only change if people add more options to a certain place and leave more red links. I'm gonna contribute to [[Paladin.|Paladin]] if that's okay. (seeming I haven't seen on [User:Fruitbat|Fruitbat on recently and I'll probably end it before then) I'm babbling on so... --[[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 15:05, 9 July 2007 (EDT)

Good job! I'm glad to see that you like my story! [[User:fruitbat|Fruitbat]]

== I've blanked a few pages of Jo-Ann the librarian ==
...and moved them to the [[Jo-Ann the Librarian (a Comedy)]]main Jo-Ann page. Don't mistake it for vandalism! --Anonymous 09:18, 15 June 2007 (EDT)

Understood. I've considered blanking those pages myself as none of the rules have been applied in the story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:14, 15 June 2007 (EDT)

== Wouldn't it be advisable... ==
...to protect [[Nonspam|the nonspam page]]? --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 14:51, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

You're right. The link spammers are annoying enough without leaving them the opportunity to mess with the nonspam page. Done. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

== I've made a new logo ==
I was bored, so I opened Photoshop, and...

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/108/cyoalogopngpp1.png

Do whatever you want with it. I don't mind. --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 06:54, 24 June 2007 (EDT)

Not bad. We could stand a change in logo. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:25, 24 June 2007 (EDT)

Your new logo has disappeared, so I had to put the old one back. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:06, 25 June 2007 (EDT)
:That's odd. Try saving it to your computer then uploading it to the wiki's server space, if there's room. You can always delete it. --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 12:23, 25 June 2007 (EDT)
::I think the problem was with the crappy computer I was connecting from. I'm uploading it the the wiki's server, which should serve better even when I'm at a cruddy terminal. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:56, 25 June 2007 (EDT)

I've made a few minor adjustments, to make it slightly better (in my opinion, at least)...

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/8788/cyoalogo2pngtn5.png

I've made the text black, and enlarged the top text slightly. I've also done a few other things, but they're barely noticeable. --[[User:Anotherpongo|Anotherpongo]] 12:11, 26 June 2007 (EDT)
==SSR page-jump==
Since ssr (Smutty Sex Romp) is such a HUGE story, I think it might be cool to have a section on it's main page where you can select certain areas in the "story" to go to. There are certain areas that are near impossible to go to once you have to start over, so this could be an optional thing for people who want to find somewhere quickly or start from a certain place. --[[User:Kazemawari]]

There are several options for finding specific areas. On the status bar, there's a spot for Location. Click on the location and you'll go to a brief description of it. From this description page, click on the category, which is Smutty Sex Romp Locations. This will take you to the index of all locations in the story. Click on any of them to get the description, and from that page, click on the left where it says 'what links here'. That will give you a list of pages in that location.

This is why it's important to include the status bar on any page you create. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:55, 16 September 2007 (EDT)

I think it's a good idea with some games like world's end though, where there are no list of locations. I added one. Good idea. --[[User:Ashogo|Ashogo]]

==Since I'm Still Working on Ideas, Still Incredibly New on Programming, . . .==

And I can't be here 24/7, what state should I leave unfinished pages in? I tried reading the rules, but now I can't find them anymore. I'd ''really'' like to not get banned. And for for those unfinished stories I add to (that aren't mine), is there a safe "time limit" I ought to adhere to? For instance, if authors come back from vacation/work/life/whatever and have been absent for three months, find I've added to their story in a way they don't like, I'll back off from their story (they have every right to take their stories wherever they see fit, within the rules, anyway). But should I stay away from any in particular?

I guess the safest bet would be just to start my own stories up, which I plan to do . . .

Don't worry too much. I'm the only active member with the power to ban people, and I only ban people for vandalism. I do appreciate it if you finish an individual page once you've started it. That is, it should include options so other writers can carry the story onward if you don't (unless the page is an ending), and should include the status bar/category from the previous page, as appropriate. You can always edit the page's contents later if you feel it needs more work.

The only story I would advise against adding to at this time is Paladin, since it has a rather complex structure and [[User: I Lion Heart I]] has been putting a lot into it recently. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:51, 26 March 2008 (EST)

Wow Paladin 2 is big.

== Can't create an adventure ==

For some reason when I try to create an adventure via the create a wiki link, I can't seem to do it. It always tells me there is no wiki by that name and asks me to create one. But when I do, the same thing happens. Any help with this?

You don't click the creat a wiki link to creat your adventure, you click to edit the section you wish, like kids stories, normal stories and that kind of stuff. Then once you edit it you can copy a story link there, and paste it were it goes. Then you change the name of that to your story. After that you click on hit to edit it.

== Platipus, Please Don't Edit My Stuff ==

Platipus, I would like it if you didn't add pages onto my site. I like to make everything on my stories myself, expecialy "A Random Story" Please, and Thank You.

I saw it say "Work on it, guys. It's public." And I did a lot of stuff to it, too. Sorry.--[[User:Hammerthingys42|Hammerthingys42]] 15:05, 2 September 2008 (PDT)

== How Do I Make My Own Stuff? ==

How Do I Make Stuff Like:

{{Status|Equipment=''Example''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}

But with other options, like: Location, Kills, And How Many Cops Are After You?

Making your own template can be a bit tricky and does take some practice. To start, you might want to go to [[http://editthis.info/choose_Your_Own_Adventure/Category:Templates]] and take a look at the coding that's gone into existing templates. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 2 September 2008 (PDT)

== Something similar for Spanish ==

Great site, great effort, count me in.

I'm talking the idea and using in Spanish. Hope you don't mind.

Why should we mind? Good luck with your writing. Buena suerte, right? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:58, 6 September 2008 (PDT)

== Planning to create a new account. ==

I regret that i didn't used my normal name for my account (FreddeX) so im gonna create an new account named FreddeX. I know it dosn't really matter but still it keeps bugging me so yeah. Just wanted to say this to prevent confusions. --[[User:Anonym|Anonym]] 12:11, 7 September 2008 (PDT)

Alright done and done i have created an new account! Just so you know. --[[User:FreddeX|FreddeX]] 11:14, 15 September 2008 (PDT)

== Giant Cookie story ==

Guys, can somebody have a look at this, there are some things on there that really aren't very nice, especially on a story designed for kids.

== Amazing ==

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[[User:Mask man|Mask man]]

== Deleteting some adventures. ==

There is alot of adventures which contains only like one or two pages or is simply work in progress, i think that we should consider deleting some of them to make it easier for all of us too find the adventure we are looking for. That is at least what i think.

--[[User:FreddeX|FreddeX]] 11:43, 25 October 2008 (PDT)

I've considered doing that, but every now and then someone comes along and takes a story that's been sitting around going nowhere and turns it into something. That [[Harry Potter]] adventurer, for example, had only a few pages for the longest time and then people began adding to it. [[Rampage]] had about five barely readable pages until I re-wrote it in proper English and since then many others have added to it.

On the other hand, some of those one- or two-page stories are truly awful and it's hard to imagine anyone ever adding to them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:43, 25 October 2008 (PDT)

How about we implant a new rule,
If a story does not have X amount of pages, it be marked as Under Construction? [[User:Mask man|Mask man]] 19:50, 27 October 2008 (PDT)

ya sounds good but even if some arnt being worked on we should still keep a few of the good ideas. For example i have strarted working on Zombie blood last week when it only hade 1 page on it.[[User:Power8|Power8]]

I think what I'll do is create a Pit of Abandoned Stories page. Any story of less than ten pages which hasn't been touched in over a month gets dropped off the Main Page and into the Pit. Anyone who gets inspired by an abandoned story may freely remove it from the Pit and add to it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:50, 28 October 2008 (PDT)

== Maybe an Idea? ==

I've been wanting to make a more formal one like these for a while, I've made http://writtenadventures.com in attempt to do so, but you can't add to someone else's adventures. I'm not sure if people more like to add to others' stories, or write their own from start to finish.

'''Note:''' If this is considered spam in anyway please delete it immediately, I don't mean it to be at all, just Wiki seems to be a little complicated.

From what I've seen, some people here hate having their stories touched by other people, and some people love to add to stories in progress or start stories that they hope others will add to. We get all types here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:18, 27 November 2008 (PST)

From the first post of this discussion: ''"This is a great idea, but the problem is that the story lacks focus. Everyone is just adding to it in crazy directions with some adult content thrown in. Although I guess its funny, it will never be a story."''

That's the reason I made it non-editable by everyone, but yeah, I see how some like to see what others would add to their story, I would in some cases. I was thinking about have 1 master adventure editable by everyone, make one long one and not as many short ones, but I'm not sure that's the best idea because some people have different tastes & styles.

Btw adventures in that website are editable & viewable to anyone you give the password to. --[[User:O.o|O.o]] 07:16, 28 November 2008 (PST)

== main page ==

whats up with the main page?

The whole wikk seems messed up now. WTF??

Just a vandal attack. He's been blocked and his edits reverted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:45, 26 January 2009 (PST)

ok then

== seeing how many ==

can you see how many people have visted a story?

The bottom of each page says how many times that page has been accessed. But you can't tell how many ''different'' people have accessed it.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 07:20, 2 February 2009 (PST)

ok tyvm

== Sort Order ==

Perhaps we should sort stories by number of pages rather than alphabetical. It will make it easier for new users to find good stories.

But it would make it impossible for new users to find their own newer stories. And the alphabet never changes, while the number of pages in stories does. The list would keep getting re-ordered and dis-ordered. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:33, 17 February 2009 (PST)

I think an editor's selection might accomplish the same end. Have a section that links to only the "best" stories. Or to the finished ones. I think that'd be a great idea. You could even have a page that you link to from the main page that accomplishes the same thing. --[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 12:11, 24 March 2009 (PDT)

==Relocation==
Have you ever considered moving the wiki? EditThis.info is riddled with problems. Since I organised to move one of my wikis to Wikia (and later moved my other one) everything has been fine. Here, everytime I try to open a page, it takes double, possibly triple as long as it does everywhere else.

I say Wikia, it's the only good wiki host I know of. Far more reliable, and reacts quicker to problems you may have. There's always WikiaStaff to help. More possible things on Wikia's MediaWiki than here too.

Or is this wiki owned by RobKohr and therefore moving it from EditThis.info isn't an option? [[User:I Lion Heart I|I Lion Heart I]] 08:15, 8 April 2009 (PDT)

Do something of more interest.

I Lion Heart I — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 15:43:14 GMT

I Lion Heart I: One kills you, the other restarts the quest. No.

Not finding anything, you can:

*[[Drink from the toilet.]] ''Eww''.
*[[Go home.]]
''Or:''
*[[Use the latrine.]]
*[[Destroy the latrine.]]

{{Status|Equipment=''[[Vorpal Blade]], [[Golden Plate Armor]], [[Gauntlets of Vengance]], [[Crusader Spell Book]]''|Health=175|MP=20|Level=10}}
[[Category: Crusader]]

Go through the smaller door.

I Lion Heart I — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 15:39:11 GMT

I Lion Heart I: Sp

Opening the door, a horrendous smell greets your nostrils. It's a latrine.

Wondering what a latrine is doing so far inside the castle, you:

*[[Use the latrine.]]

*[[Destroy the latrine.]]

*[[Do something of more interest.]]

{{Status|Equipment=''[[Vorpal Blade]], [[Golden Plate Armor]],[[ Gauntlets of Vengance]], [[Crusader Spell Book]]''|Health=190|MP=20|Level=10}}
[[Category: Crusader]]

Try to climb to the window.

I Lion Heart I — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 15:37:25 GMT

I Lion Heart I: See WLH

This originally would be a good idea, but your armor is much too heavy to allow this. You are weighed down and fall, taking a lot of damage.

However, the damage is unimportant, so click back to choose another choice.

{{Status|Equipment=''[[Vorpal Blade]], [[Golden Plate Armor]],[[ Gauntlets of Vengance]], [[Crusader Spell Book]]''|Health=135|MP=20|Level=10}}
[[Category: Crusader]]

User:I Lion Heart I

I Lion Heart I — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 15:33:11 GMT

I Lion Heart I: ...

I have decided to register after 2 days of searching and adding pages. I recommend [[Crusader]], I have added over 100 pages to it. Although the latrine part was weird to work around. It's now complete. --I Lion Heart I 19:24, 9 July 2007 (EST)

== Paladin ==
I'm taking on the Paladin story myself. I am very familiar with the Crusader story and following it on will be fun. The story includes a really complex structure. The battles aren't just randomly come up with, enemies have set health, attacks do set things and each enemy is vastly different. And as there are different ways to reach each battle, levels and health amounts will be different. In Crusader, it did randomly changed. I'm trying to stop that. I plan do the following things:

*Make The Wizard a major part in the ending.
*Include the "Mountain Horse Sanctuary", and the unicorn.
*Include the [[Caladbolg]] and [[The 10 Rings]], the old [[Golden Plate Armor]] and a change of armour half way through.
*Different types of demon.
*Places where you get attacked but not all your health depletes and bring it back to full without leading it back to the storyline with full health once again.

Category:First Adventure

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:15:33 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

An index of the pages in the story ''[[{{PAGENAME}}]]''.

Voluntarily fall into the pit

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:12:30 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

Continuing past the wooden door you charge into the room, step off the ledge, and fall into the pit. The ground, covered with dozens of razor sharp spikes comes flying at you. You put your hands out reflexively to protect your face but the speed of your fall proves to be too much. Your body is skewered in a dozen places and you collapse to the floor of the pit trap to die a slow and painful death.

Your adventure ends here...

[[Category:First Adventure]]

Charge the door down

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:12:11 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You take a few steps back, then charge the door with your shoulder. The door was full and solid and you readily expect the door to hold as if it were made of stone. To your surprise the lock itself is flimsy and smashes to pieces when your body collides with the door sending pieces of metal in all directions. Unable to stop your forward momentum you lumber on past the doorway into the next room. You realize there is a pit immediately in front of you.

Do you:
*[[come to a stop as quickly as possible]]
*[[increase your speed and try to jump over the pit]]
*[[voluntarily fall into the pit]]
[[Category:First Adventure]]

Open the door

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:11:56 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You try the handle but the door is locked. You test the door and it seems very sturdy.

Do you:
*[[charge the door down]]

Or you can go back and:
*[[head left from the beginning passageway]]

[[Category:First Adventure]]

Come to a stop as quickly as possible

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:11:18 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You firmly plant your forward foot down to halt your rush into the room. Your front foot silps on the edge of the pit and you just barely stop yourself from tumbling forward. And its a good thing too. Through your flickering torchlight you can see that the bottom of the pit is lined with rows of sharp, teeth like metal projections.

You look around the room but it appears to be a dead end. With no other choice you walk back and:
*[[head left from the beginning passageway]]

[[Category:First Adventure]]

Head left from the beginning passageway

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:10:56 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

test message

Do you:
*[[head left]]
*[[head right]]

[[Category:First Adventure]]

Head right from the beginning passageway

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:10:35 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The passage continues on for some way before leading to a simple wooden door.

Do you:
*[[open the door]]

Or you can go back and:
*[[head left from the beginning passageway]]

[[Category:First Adventure]]

First Adventure

I Lion Heart I — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 12:09:52 GMT

I Lion Heart I: I pressume this is the title of your story

---this part will be written better***
Okay, you're a basic adventuring dude, entering a dungeon somewhere. You are armed with leather armor, a sword, and a pack. So basically the minimum of gear.

---start***
You walk down the rough carved tunnel, watching as insects on the walls skitter away out of the corner of your eye, dashing for cover against your approaching torchlight. Shortly after entering the tunnel, not more than perhaps a hundred feet from the entrance, the tunnel splits off in two directions. You peer down both directions using your torchlight, but each path continues on past the meager illumination of your flame.

Do you:
*[[head left from the beginning passageway]]
*[[head right from the beginning passageway]]

[[Category:First Adventure]]

Paladin/Caladbolg65

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:33:33 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You charge at it while the Valefar stand up, as you attack, you cut it right down the chest. The skin splits revealing a rib cage, at the front.

As the remaining fur of the beast changes into a copper colour, and a purple gas starts being released. While the gas interferes with the oxygen, you struggle to breathe. But the Valefar's transformation is complete.

The heart of it lays on the floor in front of you, how is it still alive?

*[[Paladin/Caladbolg66|Strike with Caladbolg]]

*[[Paladin/Fire66|Cast Fire]]

*[[Paladin/Ice66|Cast Ice]]

*[[Paladin/Vines66|Cast Vines]]

*[[Paladin/Water66|Cast Water]]

*[[Paladin/Thunder66|Cast Thunder]]

*[[Paladin/Rocket66|Cast Rocket]]

*[[Paladin/Cure66|Cast Cure]]

*[[Paladin/Wind66|Cast Wind]]

*[[Paladin/Demi66|Cast Demi]]

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=190|MP=165|Level=33}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/VP58

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:22:18 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You throw the [[Vorpal Blade]] and it gets stuck in the Valefar. He doesn't react, make your next move.

*[[Paladin/Caladbolg65|Strike with Caladbolg]]

*[[Paladin/Fire65|Cast Fire]]

*[[Paladin/Ice65|Cast Ice]]

*[[Paladin/Vines65|Cast Vines]]

*[[Paladin/Water65|Cast Water]]

*[[Paladin/Thunder65|Cast Thunder]]

*[[Paladin/Rocket65|Cast Rocket]]

*[[Paladin/Cure65|Cast Cure]]

*[[Paladin/Wind65|Cast Wind]]

*[[Paladin/Demi65|Cast Demi]]

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=190|MP=165|Level=33}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/VP64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:16:02 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The Vorpal Blade applies major damage to the undead demon but he punches downwards on your head, knocking you dead.

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Demi64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:08:53 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

Demi doesn't affect the undead and he steps on you.

'''The End'''

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Wind64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:08:21 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The wind doesn't affect the enemy. But it does get rid of the purple gas. Only if the Valefar doesn't crush you now, you could win. But you don't, and Valefar does.

'''The End'''

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Cure64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:07:47 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You cast cure and the monster falls to the ground with no signs of life. Valefar's eyes stay open, and the beast is not moving. To make sure he's dead, you slice its head off. The cure seems to have also cured the air of the other gas.

Destroying this beast was difficult and mere luck took you through. You have gained several levels.

*[[Search the Valefar's carcass]]

*[[Glance around the place]]

*[[healup|Use your healing ointment]]

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= [[Paladin Spell Book]], [[Caladbolg]], [[Vorpal Blade]], [[The 10 Rings]], [[Golden Plate Armour]], [[Silver Plate Mail]], [[Demon Book]], [[The Demon Jewels#Incandesce Ruby|Incandesce Ruby]]|Health=1530|MP=185|Level=37}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Rocket64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:06:59 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You cast the rocket and launch it at the enemy. Behind the explosion there is a light, and the explosion homes back at you, suicide really.

'''The End'''

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Thunder64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:06:30 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The bolt does nothing. Valefar crushes you.

'''The End'''

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Water64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:05:48 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

Water does nothing. He finishes you off by stepping on your head and crushes you to the ground.

{{Template:PaladinStatus|Possessions= --|Health=--|MP=--|Level=--}}
[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Vines64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:05:26 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The plants begin to do by your wish, but Valefar destroys them as soon as possible and steps on you.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Ice64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:04:40 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

Ice doesn't affect Valefar in this state. He crushes you.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Fire64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:04:15 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The fire has a mass affect on the beast in this state. However he steps on you and kills you before any further attack can be applied.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Caladbolg64

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 14:03:25 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The [[Caladbolg]] seems not to affect Valefar in this form. Valefar picks you up, squeezing your arms together until not one of your bones remains unbroken.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Caladbolg58

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:58:59 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The Valefar breaks free and stands up, as you attack, you cut it right down the chest. The skin splits revealing a rib cage, at the front. As the remaining fur of the beast changes into a copper colour, a purple gas begins to get released. While the gas interferes with the oxygen, you struggle to breath. But the Valefar's transformation is complete.

The heart of it lays on the floor in front of you, how is it still alive?

*[[Paladin/Caladbolg64|Strike with Caladbolg]]

*[[Paladin/VP64|Strike with Vorpal Blade]]

*[[Paladin/Fire64|Cast Fire]]

*[[Paladin/Ice64|Cast Ice]]

*[[Paladin/Vines64|Cast Vines]]

*[[Paladin/Water64|Cast Water]]

*[[Paladin/Thunder64|Cast Thunder]]

*[[Paladin/Rocket64|Cast Rocket]]

*[[Paladin/Cure64|Cast Cure]]

*[[Paladin/Wind64|Cast Wind]]

*[[Paladin/Demi64|Cast Demi]]

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Vines57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:45:11 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The plant life animates around the limbs of the Valefar and leaves him useless for attacks, for now at least.

*[[Paladin/Caladbolg58|Strike with Caladbolg]]

*[[Paladin/VP58|Strike with Vorpal Blade]]

*[[Paladin/Fire58|Cast Fire]]

*[[Paladin/Ice58|Cast Ice]]

*[[Paladin/Vines58|Cast Vines]]

*[[Paladin/Water58|Cast Water]]

*[[Paladin/Thunder58|Cast Thunder]]

*[[Paladin/Rocket58|Cast Rocket]]

*[[Paladin/Cure58|Cast Cure]]

*[[Paladin/Wind58|Cast Wind]]

*[[Paladin/Demi58|Cast Demi]]

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/VP57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:39:29 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You throw the Vorpal Blade and it gets embedded into the demon. He torches you with an ember, ignoring your armour and taking more damage than you have.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Demi57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:36:54 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You cast a demi ball and cut off a good amount of health. He embers you and cuts off all your health.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Wind57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:36:23 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

Your gale force doesn't even act like a prod upon the Valefar. He lets out an ember which torches you to death.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Cure57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:35:19 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You cure to give you 690 health. Valefar torches you with an ember which takes off 800. Not enough health to keep you alive.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Rocket57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:34:53 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You magic up a rocket and launch it towards the Valefar. He stays still and waits. As it hits him, a golden glow comes from his chest and the explosion turns back on you.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Thunder57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:33:50 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

The bolt strikes the enemy, and he lets out a roar. In this moment of pain, he opens his jaw, and lets out another stream of fire, this time leaving you lifeless.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]

Paladin/Water57

I Lion Heart I — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 13:33:20 GMT

I Lion Heart I:

You cast water and the Valefar isn't affected. It torches you with another ember, burning you for more health than you have.

'''The End'''

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[[Category: Paladin]]