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User talk:Platypus

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 22:31:03 GMT

Ghengar:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.

-- Fin
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL.
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I "fix" the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/<page> to /CYOA/Luka/<page>. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD

Also: apologies; please don't hate me.

-- Fin
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the "Trolling in the Mall" page in SSR. Just a heads up.

-- Pterodactyl

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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....

i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.

still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me.

anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people.

-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel. (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.) [[User:DickingCream]]

Platypus,

I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
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*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?

== iWant Sex ==

Hey Platypus,
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about. However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going. What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?
Bight99

I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)

== The Neighbors ==

Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?

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== Oops! ==

Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Pokesex ==

Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD
-- Ghengar
== Name of wiki changed ==

More info here:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Wiki_Name_Change_Information

User talk:Platypus

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 22:29:43 GMT

Ghengar:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.

-- Fin
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL.
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I "fix" the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/<page> to /CYOA/Luka/<page>. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD

Also: apologies; please don't hate me.

-- Fin
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the "Trolling in the Mall" page in SSR. Just a heads up.

-- Pterodactyl

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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....

i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.

still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me.

anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people.

-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel. (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.) [[User:DickingCream]]

Platypus,

I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?

== iWant Sex ==

Hey Platypus,
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about. However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going. What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?
Bight99

I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)

== The Neighbors ==

Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?

_______

== Oops! ==

Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD

== Name of wiki changed ==

More info here:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Wiki_Name_Change_Information

Have gay sex

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 14:34:15 GMT

Ghengar: Created page with 'You pick up the money as you look up at the boy. He sighs from relief as it seems you have decided not to take his ass.... but since he already dropped the cash, why not have bot…'

You pick up the money as you look up at the boy. He sighs from relief as it seems you have decided not to take his ass.... but since he already dropped the cash, why not have both? The thought makes your pecker hard as you see the boy start to turn back. His shorts really seem to make his ass seem rather inviting. You rush at him and yank down his shorts. "Hey wait... n-no you took the money!" He screams as you topple him to the ground, his face down and ass up.

"No dumb ass, you dropped your cash, but my dick is uh... waiting to fuck." You grin as you pull his boxers down. You hold his arms down with your left hand as you shove your middle finger roughly into the boy's asshole. Luckily a bottle of lube drops out of the boy's pocket when he bucked from your penetration. You pull your finger out and grab the bottle and twist off the cap, rubbing the liquid around the boy's very sensitive hole. Judging by his whimpering, it must be his first time.

"P-Please... really... I don't want to!!!" He squirms even more but you don't give a single fuck. You shove three fingers in hastily to which the boy squeals with some discomfort but it seems to be changing his mind. You can see his dick raising to a hard-on. Yes now it is time, you think to yourself as you pull out your fingers and shove your rock hard member deep into the boy's asshole. He squeals each time you thrust inch after inch further into his manhole. His ass becoming loose with each thrust. Five minutes into it the boy cums, a betraying act to his previous request to stop.

You smile and feel your own dick begin to twinge. You give one more forceful shove into his ass and....

[[Cum inside that butt!]]

[[Cum on his back.]]

[[Pull out and cum on his face.]]

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ/Prize

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 14:04:09 GMT

Ghengar:

"Fuck yeah!" You yell out, lost in the climax. Your dick tingles, and squirms, with a final thrust you fill her mouth with your 'creamy prize.'

The girl swallows cum happily... even sucking the last few drops out of your dick until she gulps very audibly. You pull your cock free from her lips. "Mmm... gee Mr, your prize tasted a lot better than Mr. Oak's." She opens her eyes as she pulls her fingers out of her pussy and licks them off too. She gives your cock a quick kiss as she stands up. She pulls her strawberry print panties up and turns away, very happy with her tasty prize. "Mmm, I hope I can get more prizes today." She says as she skips back to the sign. Somehow you have the odd feeling that she waits there, a lot.

Where do you go?

*[[Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Blue|Go to your rival Blue's house.]]
*[[Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Lab|Go to the Oak Pokemon Research Lab.]]

[[Category: Pokesex]]

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ/Prize

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 14:01:12 GMT

Ghengar: Created page with '"Fuck yeah!" You yell out, lost in the climax. Your dick tingles, and squirms, with a final thrust you fill her mouth with your 'creamy prize.' The girl swallows cum happily... …'

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 14:00:16 GMT

Ghengar:

"Shhh. Shut up! I'll let you go after you suck on my dick for a while..." You tell the little girl. She stops fidgeting and thinks about her option. She nods, so you remove your hand.

"Um... Mr. what's a dick? Does it taste good if I suck it or something?" She asks. Somehow, her question perks up your cock.

"Open your mouth and close your eyes, when your done sucking you'll have a prize... Then you'll see what it is. Isn't that fun? Now do it before someone comes!" You tell her.

[[She agrees.]]

[[She says no.]]

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ/Agree

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 13:38:14 GMT

Ghengar:

She agrees and closes her eyes with a wide open mouth. You unzip your pants and pull out your cock, which is raging hard now that you know she wants it. "You can't say anything 'til I'm done-- err till you get the prize. I'll help you suck it by guiding your head, so don't worry. Just don't bite it." You smile for yourself for this lucky situation.

You place your dick between the little girl's lips. She clamps her lips around the cock and begins sucking ferociously. Her tongue and teeth grinding softly across your shaft. Oddly enough you wonder if she's used to this sort of thing. You put your hand over her head and thrust your cock in a little further, her saliva is a great lube... You can almost feel her throat as you fuck her mouth. She makes whimpers and moans as she blushes a deep red. You notice that one of her hands is working away under her skirt. The sight, sounds and sensation of this cute working on your cock throws you to the point of no return. You're ready to cum any second now!

[[Her creamy prize.]]

[[Cum all over her face as you pull out.]]

[[Cum on her clothes]]

[[Category:Pokesex]]

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ/Agree

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 13:37:08 GMT

Ghengar: Created page with 'She agrees and closes her eyes with a wide open mouth. You unzip your pants and pull out your cock, which is raging hard now that you know she wants it. "You can't say anything '…'

She agrees and closes her eyes with a wide open mouth. You unzip your pants and pull out your cock, which is raging hard now that you know she wants it. "You can't say anything 'til I'm done-- err till you get the prize. I'll help you suck it by guiding your head, so don't worry. Just don't bite it." You smile for yourself for this lucky situation.

You place your dick between the little girl's lips. She clamps her lips around the cock and begins sucking ferociously. Her tongue and teeth grinding softly across your shaft. Oddly enough you wonder if she's used to this sort of thing. You put your hand over her head and thrust your cock in a little further, her saliva is a great lube... You can almost feel her throat as you fuck her mouth. She makes whimpers and moans as she blushes a deep red. You notice that one of her hands is working away under her skirt. The sight, sounds and sensation of this cute working on your cock throws you to the point of no return. You're ready to cum any second now!

[[Cum in her mouth.]]

[[Cum all over her face as you pull out.]]

[[Cum on her clothes]]

[[Category:Pokesex]]

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 13:23:56 GMT

Ghengar:

"Shhh. Shut up! I'll let you go after you suck on my dick for a while..." You tell the little girl. She stops fidgeting and thinks about her option. She nods, so you remove your hand.

"Um... Mr. what's a dick? Does it taste good if I suck it or something?" She asks. Somehow, her question perks up your cock.

"Open your mouth and close your eyes, when your done sucking you'll have a prize... Then you'll see what it is. Isn't that fun? Now do before someone comes!" You tell her.

[[She agrees.]]

[[She says no.]]

Pokesex/Boy/Kanto/Girl BJ

Ghengar — Sun, 01 Jul 2012 13:23:38 GMT

Ghengar: Created page with '"Shhh. Shut up! I'll let you go after you suck on my dick for a while..." You tell the little girl. She stops fidgeting and thinks about her option. She nods, so you remove your …'

"Shhh. Shut up! I'll let you go after you suck on my dick for a while..." You tell the little girl. She stops fidgeting and thinks about her option. She nods, so you remove your hand.

"Um... Mr. what's a dick? Does it taste good if I suck it or something?" She asks. Somehow, her question perks up your cock.

"Open your mouth and close your eyes, when your done sucking you'll have a prize... Then you'll see what it is. Isn't that fun? Now do before someone comes!" You tell her.

[[She agrees.]]

[She says no.]]