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Victim:Tell him your name and ask for his

Dudetteofchicka — Tue, 04 Aug 2009 04:08:27 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

"my names _______(your name where the line is) what's yours"you asked him smiling."My names Daimen it's a pleasure to meet you ______"."so does everyone do that here"he asked nodding towards the beauty queen"only the sick ones"you said smiling making him laugh."hey sweetheart why don't you sit over here by me?"the beauty girl asked him and he shook his head"no that's alright"he said,but the guy behind you sat next to her she looked at him and smirked at you evily."what the Hell is she smirking at?"you asked him and Daimen shrugged "who cares"he asked and you nodded "true"you said and he laughed alittle. Once you reached the school you two found out you had every class together, but one you twwo walked to the first one. Alot of people gasped since you only hung out with the tough guys, but you could care less you were lookin at the seat that were left there was only three. seat one,was by this cute nerd kid another was by that kid on the bus and one was by a kid who was about to wet his pants you smirked and sat by

Do you:
*[[made the one kid who was about to wet his pants get up so Damen could sit there]]
*[[*sigh* and sit by the cute nerd]]
*[[Roll your eyes and sit by the smirking pervert]]
{{Status|Equipment=''paper,pencils,pens,switchblade you got from your locker''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: Victim:Just averge; 14 female]]

Victim:Tell him your name and ask for his

Dudetteofchicka — Tue, 04 Aug 2009 04:03:13 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

"my names _______(your name where the line is) what's yours"you asked him smiling."My names Daimen it's a pleasure to meet you ______"."so does everyone do that here"he asked nodding towards the beauty queen"only the sick ones"you said smiling making him laugh."hey sweetheart why don't you sit over here by me?"the beauty girl asked him and he shook his head"no that's alright"he said,but the guy behind you sat next to her she looked at him and smirked at you evily."what the Hell is she smirking at?"you asked him and Daimen shrugged "who cares"he asked and you nodded "true"you said and he laughed alittle once you reached the school you two found out you had every class but one together and walked to the first one together alot of people gasped since you uausaly hung out with the tough guys then they're were three seat open one,was by this cute nerd kid another was by that kd on the bus and one was by a kid who was about to wet his pants you smirked and sat by

User talk:Platypus

Dudetteofchicka — Mon, 03 Aug 2009 04:18:25 GMT

Dudetteofchicka: /* Misc. */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

==Accident==
If i tried to delete Random III then it was probably an editing accident. Try to relax more, you dont have to blast me for a mistake.

You sly dog, you probably know who wrote this anyway so I won't sign it.

== What the Barbeque ==

K so i think we got an issue here mister LETS GO RUIN ALL THE FUN. I see that you want to be like us cool dudes and make the site better one story at a time but we gotta come to an agreement here k? Now this leads me to my first question. Are You the only admin on this site? OR ARE YOU JUST SOME KIND OF BARBEQUE HATER?!?!?!?! You are the only person who seems to freak out when we do anything that you think is wrong everyone else is gettin a laugh and changin it back in time... but you just seem to scream about every little thing. Yes i see that you are doing good but still....

thankyou [[User:Hey its|Me]]

p.s.
it would be really cool if you could set font colour :) (and if you can, can you help with how?)

[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]

== Greetings! ==
Um.... you seem to be the most active user, so I thought I'd introduce myself. There's not much to say, but is there anything I should know that's not on the main page? I admit, I'm a bit confused by the distinction between "Normal" and "R-rated" stories. Could you clarify please? Other than that, can you recommend any stories to read in the R-rated or under sections?

Thanks--[[User:Rawar|Rawar]] 09:23, 27 March 2009 (PDT)

==Okay==

Sorry about that. I'll try my best to do keep things right. I'm usually pretty good about this stuff but far from the best. If I'm doing anything wrong, just let me know and I'll do my best to fix it.-[[User:121|121]] 18:25, 30 January 2009 (PST)

== Misc. ==

I created a separate page which I use to describe a few points on the status bar, thereby allowing me to remove it from the main page and giving a end result that I think looks much nicer. However, since it's not technically part of the story if this is a problem feel free to delete it. Just let me know if you do so I can re-add the information to the first page. - [[User:Katrex|Katrex]] 18:48, 28 September 2008 (PDT)

chill I'm trying dude ok?
Platypus,

Not all of them are endings. Im actually refreshing it with a new side story.

== Anon edits ==

Why are they disabled? --[[User:Elassint|Elassint]] 18:25, 3 July 2008 (PDT)

== Sex Romp updates ==

Just a brief note so you'll know I'm enjoying the SSR outrageousness. I especially like Lynn the ballerina, her determination to bring as many in as possible, and her slightly foul-mouthed amazement at their (lack of) limits. I'd like to see more of Lynn... pity there's no option (yet) to let her follow the player home and playfully boss him around some more. (-:

Hey man i just want to thank you for helping me out with my story since im new to this and all. So anyway, thanks man :D.

:Yeah, it's pretty amazing, thanks. [[User:Treebeard|Treebeard]] 21:34, 24 November 2008 (PST)

== Resident evil ==

Hey man i just want to thank you for helping me out with my story since im new to this and all. So yeah thanks man :D. --[[User:Anonym|Anonym]] 14:25, 20 August 2008 (PDT)

== My Threads (University Daze) ==

Thanks for the grammar nazi'ing. I have a habit of coming back (read: much) later and fixing what I write. It helps to be distanced from it, otherwise I don't spot errors and can't really tell whether I like what I've written. You've made my job easier.

--[[User:Anubite|Anubite]] 13:57, 25 November 2008 (PST)

== skilful / skillful ==

"skilful" is a better spelling than "skillful" because whereas both spellings are acceptable in American English, only "skilful" is allowed in British English. Therefore that's the spelling that should be used here: [[Rock, Paper, Scissors/Rock/Rock]].--[[User:Alphador|Alphador]] 03:36, 12 December 2008 (PST)

== Newbie ==

Hey - just discovered this site and have been perusing some of your work. I have a question - is it permitted to add gay options to existing stories? I am not sure what the accepted rules are. I can start my own story, but thought it might be fun to add to some of the existing adult CYOAs. [[User:PhinnyGene|PhinnyGene]] 12:36, 17 December 2008 (PST)

Yes. Adding gay options to existing stories is allowed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 17 December 2008 (PST)

I added an option to the [[Fuck Christie's tits]] page of Jack Foster -- I see you reverted it -- did I do something wrong? I thought we were encouraged to add more possible options...? [[User:PhinnyGene|PhinnyGene]] 20:29, 19 December 2008 (PST)

Just a quick question. Can we start our own stories? If yes, then how?
[[User:Unkowhero23|Unkowhero23]]

Thanks for contacting - I thought I was making my own story, but obviously I'm doing something wrong Lol! Will look into it and to a bit more reading. Cheers! [[User:Impious|Impious]]

== Sub Categories ==

I noticed that in SSR you have a separate category for all of the locations in that story. I was wondering if this is something that should be done for all non-story pages of an adventure. In my story, War of Nations, I do have a couple of spells with links that aren't related to the plot but instead explain what the spell does. Also, second question, Should I begin all of my options with War of Nations/ or is it okay to remove that part? Thirdly, how exactly do I create a category?

*I created the location subcategory mainly so I could track how many pages are in a given location and make it easier to get to pages in a given location. From a location's page, I can click on "What Links Here" and see all the pages in that location. If you want to make a subcategory for spells, feel free.

Should you begin all options with War of Nations? It's up to you. Adding that to the option name does keep you from accidentally crossing pages with another story.

Creating a category is much like creating a regular page. Type <nowiki>[[Category: Category Name]]</nowiki> on a page and the page is now categorized. Click on the red Category Name and you go to an index page showing all the pages in the category. If you place the name of another category on that index page, your new category become a subcategory. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:23, 1 February 2009 (PST)

== Thanks for the help ==

Thank you for helping me with my story! I'm new to editing Wikis so I don't know to add categories and all that plus I make mistakes often. Thanks. One question, why did you delete 666? It was a perfectly good room!

== Londonbirder ==

Hi Platypus,

Sorry to hear about the vandal attack. I haven't heard of him attacking elsewhere, but if I have learned anything about vandals, they get bored and move on after a little while. I saw that you were blocking his IP's so that should at least make it harder.

Note: it is very unlikely that he is related to Londonbirders. They are a group interested in birds, not messing with wikis, so I wouldn't bother asking them about this. He is most likely just trying to get wikis to accuse eachother.

:What is this "owned by birdwatchers" thing doing on my page?
::Seems that there is some vandal wandering around. Just revert his changes and don't engage him in dialog (never feed the trolls)

== It'll do for now ==

I'm sure you'll completely repair the main page when you get back online. I don't care too much about the rest of this jerk's vandalism, but we need a main page and I did what I could to get it at least usable. BTW, is there any way to block all users named "londonbirder[anything]" at once, so that imbecile boy would have to at least switch to a completely new username? Hopefully he'll get bored soon. -- Teejay

== thanks for your help ==

Thanks for your revisions. I hope you are enjoying the story. I'd love your contributions if you'd be so bold.

== What the Barbeque ==

K so i think we got an issue here mister LETS GO RUIN ALL THE FUN. I see that you want to be like us cool dudes and make the site better one story at a time but we gotta come to an agreement here k? Now this leads me to my first question. Are You the only admin on this site? OR ARE YOU JUST SOME KIND OF BARBEQUE HATER?!?!?!?! You are the only person who seems to freak out when we do anything that you think is wrong everyone else is gettin a laugh and changin it back in time... but you just seem to scream about every little thing. Yes i see that you are doing good but still....

thankyou [[User:Hey its|Me]]

p.s.
it would be really cool if you could set font colour :) (and if you can, can you help with how?)

== Thanks for the help! ==

Really appreciate it. :) Do you know if it would be okay to set up a [[CYOA Drinking Game]] similar to the TV Tropes or Uncyclopedia Drinking Games?--[[User:Occono|Occono]] 03:02, 27 May 2009 (PDT)

== Please Contribute more! ==

You're probably the user that is on this site the most and are really creative, can you please contribute more to my story, "High School?"(Just not Gothic male or female please!)

Thanks--[[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]]

== Thank you ==

I would like to thank you for all the editing that you do, really appreciate it. You must really like writing don’t you? If there really were a Nazi grammar group then I’m sure you would be in the SS!
[[User:Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Gotcha. ==

I won't put any more redlinks on the MainPage, thanks for explaining.--[[User:Occono|Occono]] 18:19, 20 July 2009 (PDT)

Victim: watch

Dudetteofchicka — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 07:51:45 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

If you decided to watch he raped her and turned around to see you"Damn"you thought as you ducked under your seat and as soon as the bus pulled up to the school you got out and was heading for the doors but he grabbed your arm"I saw you"He whispered in your ear"If you wanted it you just could have asked and with that he knocked you out you woke up under the bleachers naked and it was dark he was hovering over you with no clothes on either"no no no"you said crawling away and trying to untie yourself"you know what theey say"He said as he stopped you and layed on top of you with a knife pressed to your neck"what goes around comes back around"and with that he raped you over and over again until you turned eighteen and became a fat whore congrads you sick chump!

Victim: watch

Dudetteofchicka — Sat, 01 Aug 2009 07:51:10 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

If you decided to watch he raped her and turned around to see you"Damn"you thought as you ducked under your seat and as soon as the bus pulled up to the school you got out and was heading for the doors but he grabbed your arm"I saw you"He whispered in your ear"If you wanted it you just could have asked and with that he knocked you out you woke up under the bleachers naked and it was dark he was hovering over you with no clothes on either"no no no"you said crawling away and trying to untie yourself"you know what theey say"He said as he stopped you and layed on top of you with a knife pressed to your neck"what goes around comes back around"and with that he raped you over and over angin until you turned eighteen and became a fat whore congrads you sick FUCK!

Victim: turn around, glaring, and ask what in the world is he talking about

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 17:51:42 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

he winks at you"the way your talking to me says it all"he answered"don't flatter yourself it's the way I talk besides I already have a boy friend you said as you got up and sat next to a emo/gothic looking guy this pissed the guy off something fierce he wanted you but couldn't hve you"then kiss him"he shouted by now the guy was staring at you confused of why you were sitting by him

*[[Victim: tell the guy that you were lying ]]
*[[Victim:kiss the emo/gothic guy ]]
*[[Victim: flip him off]]
{{VictimStat|Equipment=books,paper,pencils|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|Just average]]
[[Image: http://media.photobucket.com/image/emo%20guy/Lilbirdtor_44/emo-guy.jpg?o=50 ]]

the guy your sitting by

Victim: pick on the girl across from you

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 17:41:29 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

"hey slut I got a eew man are you serious"you said once you realize what she was dong the guy in the back had been staring at you since you started talking"shut up _______ your just mad because I'm hot and your not"she said as she continued you felt like you were about to puke you turned your head but then turned back around when you felt someone sit next to you it was some emo/goth looking guy"can I help you"you asked in your normal seductive/cold tone and he turned to you raising a brow"it's my normal voice trust me"you said befroe he sai anything "no just sitting here is that a problem"he asked in monotone"nope usualy everyone wants to sit by little miss beauty slut princess over there"you said pointing across from you andd he laughed at what you said looking over then stoped laughing and turned around quickly face red"is sshe"he askeed and you nodded

*[[Victim: ask him is what people say about emos true ]]
*[[Victim:Tell him your name and ask for his ]]
*[[Victim:tell him that he can always come over your house to see something better]]
{{VictimStat|Equipment=books,paper,pencils|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|Just average]]

Victim:take A PICTURE

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 17:30:36 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

you take a picture as he was about to rape her and he snaps around glaring"if you continue kiss your life goodbye because your going to jail"he straaighten himself out s the nerdy girl did the same and sat next to you the boy glared behind you but didn't attept to try anything he new who you were then he realized how your were talking"oh so you were jjealous huh?"he said ffrom behind you stroking your hair

*[[Victim: turn around glarng asking what in the world is he talking about ]]
*[[Victim:turn around and kiss him ]]
*[[Victim: ignore him and talk to the nerd beside you]]
{{VictimStat|Equipment=books,paper,pencils|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|Just average]]

Victim: Listen to your ipod

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 05:44:16 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

you decided to listen to your ipod and ignore all the people on the bus until you get to school you et off the bus and that guy is behind you "my names James"he said smoothly "(your name here)"you answered boredly (__when you see the line put your name there) "so ____ I heard your one of the toughest chicks in the school"he asked as you both walked down the empty hall"yeah and"you asked opening your locker"sso have a boyfriend?"he asked "nope but I like somone"you answered and he looked pissed you had to admitt he was hot but the guy had serious problems"who?"he asked and you turned around

You look like:
*[[Victim: and you point to a cute nerd]]
*[[Victim: You point to A pretty boy]]
*[[Victim: shrug and smirk at him before waling away]]

{{VictimStat|Equipment=Nothing|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|D]]

Victim: Help her kick this guys ass

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 05:15:48 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

you went back there puching him square in the jaw he looked up at you glaring but then looked afraid your grabbed him by his neck and slammed him against the wall of the back of the bus"what the hell do you think your doing"you yelled "sh-e she didn't mind she asked for it I swear"he said and both of you turned to her and she nodded"sorry about that"you said in your normal seductive/cold voice his face expression changed from scared to shocked"why are you talking like that?"he asked as he and the girl straighten themselves out"It's my normal voice"you answered in the same tone and he growled was he getting turned on by your voice

You look like:
*[[Victim: Go back to your seat ]]
*[[Victim:Sit by the beauty-queen ]]
*[[Victim: Tease him ]]

{{VictimStat|Equipment=paper,pencils,books|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|D]]

Victim:turn around because you hear a faint "help"

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 05:03:12 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

You turn around and see a guy raping some nerd girl just like you said they were always the vunerable ones but you couldn't just let her get raped could YOu so what do you do now?
You look like:
*[[Victim:take A PICTURE]]
*[[Victim: Help her kick this guys ass]]
*[[Victim: watch]]

{{VictimStat|Equipment=books,paper,pencils|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|D]]

Victim: Just average

Dudetteofchicka — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 04:59:46 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

your not the Most gorgeous slutty girl iin school or the school nerd who is most likely to be raped your one of those tough chicks that works out and takes defese class
You entered the bus boredly sitting across from the from one of the most popular girls on the bus you were getting bored so you

You look like:
*[[Victim: Listen to your ipod ]]
*[[Victim:turn around because you hear a faint "help" ]]
*[[Victim: pick on the girl across from you]]

{{VictimStat|Equipment=books,paper,pencils|Gender=Female|Age=14}}
[[Category:Victim|D]]

Stay and chat for awhile

Dudetteofchicka — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 01:08:04 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

"so you like reading huh?"you asked picking up on of his books and he nooded as you two began to walk down the hall"so do you write too?"you asked once and awkard silecne came over you to"yeah sort of it's no big deal though"He said and you frown and he gave you a weird look"what?"he asked"why wouldn't you think your work is a big deal I'm pretty sure it's great"you said and he blushed and smiled"thanks no one has ever said that to me before"he said as you two stoped iinfront of his dorm you gave him back his book Now what

Do you:
*[[Ask him if you can come in to "help uinspire him"]]
*[[leave waving bye]]
*[[go look for dan]]
{{Status|Equipment=''key card''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: University Daze]]

Victim: Scream that the guard is molesting you

Dudetteofchicka — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 01:01:50 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

the gurad was pulled off you as people started to beat the crap out of him using this time to escape where do you go?
Do you:
*[[to school]]
*[[home]]
*[[somewhere else]]
{{Status|Equipment=''cell phone,pocket knfe''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: name of story you're working on]]

Realize you need your ID and head back to the Welcome Center

Dudetteofchicka — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 00:44:35 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

you run to the welcome center and then managed to catch up withthem again before they did anything"wow you should be on the track team"said a guy about you height shaggy brown hair and green eyes"thanks,I'm jackie"you stated and he nodded"the names Sammy but you can call me sam"he said as you two conversated someone was watching you two becoming very jealous and then all of a sudden you felt something hit your head you turned to see

Do you:
*[[A red head girl with a smug look]]
*[[a smirking blonde girl]]
*[[A tough/althletic gangsta looking chick]]
{{Status|Equipment=''ID and key card''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: University]]

Realize you need your ID and head back to the Welcome Center

Dudetteofchicka — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 00:44:03 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

you run to the welcome center and then managed to catch up withthem again before they did anything"wow you should be on the track team"said a guy about you height shaggy brown hair and green eyes"thanks,I'm jackie"you stated and he nodded"the names Sammy but you can call me sam"he said as you two conversated someone was watching you two becoming very jelous an dyou felt something hit your head you turned to see

Do you:
*[[A red head girl with a smug look]]
*[[a smirking blonde girl]]
*[[A tough/althletic gangsta looking chick]]
{{Status|Equipment=''ID and key card''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}
[[Category: University]]

Say goodbye to Dan and enter your dorm

Dudetteofchicka — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 23:07:10 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

"wait he said grabbing your arm and you turned around hee was about to say something but quickly clech his jaw "see you around right"he asked and you nodded"bye Jackie"he said as he left you opened the door to see your roommate is not there so you put up all your things a decided to walk around and explore whenyou were about to pass by the library when a Guy came walking out bumping into you falling on top of you"sorry"he said as he quickly got off face bright red"it's ok you didn't mean to"you said annd he smiled holding a hand out to you to help you up you took it and helped him gather all the books he had dropped"so what's your name"you can call me jackie"you said smiling making him blush alittle more he had blonde hair one of his eyes were covered by it and he had shocking blue eyes and you could tell he was a lean muscular type"what's yoour name"you asked and he responed"Jason"

Do you:
*[[Smile and make some lame crack about his name]]
*[[Tell him you'll be better go]]
*[[stay and chat for awhile]]
{{UnivStatus|Health=100|Height=5’ 8”|Weight=121 lbs|Gender=Female|Equipment= key card}}
[[Category: University Daze]]

Smile and accept

Dudetteofchicka — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 18:29:32 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

'''''"uh sure what harm could it do"''You said
His smile gets even wider (if possible)

You two arrive at the Welcome center and both get out you waited while he grabbed your bags and walk into the building where they were discussing the rules and regulations and codes etc...

once they were finished they handed out everyone's key card to there dorm when it was your turn they gave you a choice on who to bunk with'''
You take your key and walk with dan towards the door you thank him giving him a hug and waved as he walked off leaving you to enter the room

who Did you choose:
*[[Gothic Chick]]
*[[The Slut of the university]]
*[[The innocent Angel]]
{{UnivStatus|Health=100|Height=5’ 8”|Weight=121 lbs|Gender=Female|Equipment=duffel full of textbooks}}
[[Category: University Daze]]

Smile back and accept his offer

Dudetteofchicka — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 18:26:54 GMT

Dudetteofchicka:

"Great." His smile broadens. "Hop in."

He steps out of the car to help you with your bag and your heart flutters slightly. You aren't quite used to such treatment, but you could see yourself very much getting used to this.

"I'm Dan," he introduces himself.

"I'm..." You pause to think a moment. "Jack..er sorry thinking of something else the name is (your name here)." You smile nervously.

"So...you more excited or nervous about today, (your name here)?" he asks as he starts driving up toward the Welcome centre.

"A bit of both..." you admit shyly.

"Maybe once you're done at the Welcome Center..." He glances at you. "I can help you carry your stuff to your dorm..."

Do you:
*[[Smile and accept]]
*[[Tell him you'll be fine on your own]]
*[[Say you'll manage but would like to see him later]]
{{UnivStatus|Health=100|Height=5’ 8”|Weight=121 lbs|Gender=Female|Equipment=duffel full of textbooks}}
[[Category: University Daze]]

Smile and accept

Dudetteofchicka — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 18:21:25 GMT

Dudetteofchicka: