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Dirty Me's Diary/Fight at school

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 25 Jul 2022 04:01:13 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: .

Dear Diary,

So pissed! That little skank, Jennifer, so pissed me off today.

So, I was minding my own business when suddenly she came up to me and started talking shit. Again!

Oh, I had enough of this bitch. I balled up my fist and punched her, right in her big, ugly nose.

It hurt...my hand still hurts.

I don't remember much of the fight after that. The other kids around, chanting "fight, fight, fight", watching us, some laughing, at least until the stupid math teacher broke it up.

My side is a little sore, and my head hurts where she pulled my hair, but I beat the shit out of her. One of my friends told me that her eye is all swollen and her lip was bleeding, and I know I got a few good kicks in her ribs while she was on the ground.

Her, she started it. Don't judge me like that...

Anyways, mom will be rather upset when she gets home...

Jennifer ripped my top off. Well, it wasn't completely off, but the buttons are gone. Somewhere in the middle of the field. I ended up having to walk to the PE lockers with my bra exposed to put on my PE shirt. It was sort of embarrassing, the guys whistling, making some jokes about my breasts. I don't know, at the time I was too, whatever the word for it is, from the fight, to really notice much, but now, thinking about it, I realized that I was showing off my bra and breasts to the entire school.

Wait, is that why Justin suddenly asked me out? Oh god...I should just tell him no, he only wants to see what else was hidden by the bra.

Wish I remembered it though. What it felt like to be in front of everyone like that.

Gawd, what is wrong with me lately? Why am I having thoughts like this?

Think I need to find my vibrator and do something about these feelings, before I do something I might regret.

Got to go Diary. Go find where I put that stupid vibrator my mom got me for my birthday (Yeah, not even going to talk about that, talk about embarrassing, opening up a gift like that from your mom...think I am still a bit traumatized...)

*More entries later

[[Category: Dirty Me's Diary|Fight at school]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 25 Jul 2022 03:52:12 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime:

Dear Diary,

Something strange happened to me. Well, let me start at the beginning.

So, me and mom used to always take our leftovers to this one area where these stray dogs always hang around. As I got older, and mom got busier, she just asked me to do it myself. I ride there, so it isn't that far, and the street is not near anything, so I never have to worry about creeps around. That is probably why the stray dogs always stay over there.

Anyways, today, when I brought the food, I started playing with one of the new puppies. It seems one just gave birth, and there are a few new puppies in their pack. They know me pretty well, so do not bark or anything, and will come up to me when I give them food.

The puppy I was playing with is so cute. Black fur with white paws and white on his nose. He likes to nip, but it doesn't hurt.

Anyways, while I was there, on my knees, playing with the puppy, one of the adult dogs stuck his face right in my crotch and started licking my panties under my skirt with his tongue. I know it was male because I could see his thingy get all hard...

I wasn't sure what to do. I didn't know which one it was, since it was all dark, and I wasn't sure how to react.

Besides, it felt good. I mean, no one else was around, so not like I need to worry about what someone might think. Although, I imagine my blush was so bright if someone had been around they could have probably seen it even in the dark.

I am blushing sitting here writing this now...

But, it did feel good. I mean, really good.

I wonder what it would have felt like if I wasn't wearing panties...

OMG, can't believe I even wrote that.

Please don't tell anyone I thought something like that...

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses 2|Doggy kisses without panties]]

[[Category:Dirty Me's Diary|Doggy kisses]]

User:DirtyMeStoryTime

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 25 Jul 2022 03:49:38 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Add diary

<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Hello.

Yes, I am a girl.

I have been writing erotica for a while, and also publish some on Amazon.

Short form only, but I hope to actually write a full novel at some point.

I have a few stories going here, some more involved than others.

Also, while I have many things on my blog, figured I would add a page about what I have done in real life.

So, you can see it here: [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]

Also, I guess in the spirit of "Getting to know the author", I have also put more of my thoughts about things here: [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/Thoughts about stuff]]. By stuff, I mean whatever. It will not always be "Adult".</div>

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[The Review]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is not anything specific. This is a review of the stories on here by me. Of course, others can add their own, just create your name specific path for the stories. I will not bother reviewing stuff in the pit, or stuff that is marked for the pit, since it will just be too short to review. Only more complete stories. This is for all categories. Subcategories can be found in the main page.</div>

Current status of me (IRL)

{{DirtyMe}}

== Family-Friendly ==

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[A little Chinese story]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">A little Chinese story is just something I am working on to help me better learn Chinese, and, if anyone else is interested in learning, to help guide others through learning Chinese. It will be heavy on explanation, with a building story as it progresses. It will not be an exciting story, and will take a while to actually build a story, but eventually, I hope to be writing an actual story in Chinese that people can read, if they followed along with everything.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Lets make a webpage]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">I will use this to sort of learn about making webpages with tables, boxes, borders, colors, etc. A learning tool mostly, and hopefully others can learn from it also.</div>

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[It's programming time!]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Like the [[Lets make a webpage]] above, I will try to use this to sort of discuss programming. I will add a few languages I have learned a little about, but, since the one thing I actually work with is mostly LUA and C++, I will focus on those I think.</div>

== PG-13 ==

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Prank War]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Prank war is about two rivals who continue playing pranks on each other. Is it not a conventional story, but a story loop. Jennifer pranks Ashley, Ashley pranks Jennifer, etc. The two main pages will simply be Jennifer and Ashley, with a list of pranks they can play on each other. It is just a short little loop, with story elements revolving around what prank one plays on the other.</div>

== Adult ==

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Dirty Me]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Dirty Me is my main story. Most of the elements are from things that have happened to me in real life, or fantasies I have had, or how things could have been if I had continued to do the stupid stuff I did in high school. While many of the "Real life" elements from it were from when I was under 18, the character, Dirty Me, is 18. If age is a focal point, I will focus on it through dreams or memories, such as [[Dirty Me/Dream of your first time|how Dirty Me lost her virginity]]. Dreams and memories will always have the option to go through them, or to avoid them, and will be noted in the option's wording.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[The Exhibitionist]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is a community driven story. I will not make the options, I will only write the story from my point of view for options others give to me. If you want the story expanded, give me your options.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Masochist me]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is my dark fantasy story. Here, I can be spanked, scratched, hit, spit on, humiliated, raped, and generally used and abused, and enjoy it.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Too Graphic]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">So, as some people may or may not know, I have my own erotica blog. Sadly, I am not as active as I should be, but it is there. I ran a poll about photos, and the results showed more of my readers (The few who voted -.-) wanted graphics than didn't. So, I will use this, sort of create the graphics templates, and the stories to go with each. Warning: This is not just a text based story, so if you are under 18, definitely, stay out!</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Context]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is an experiment of sorts. It will have options, but not conventional options. Instead, I will add key words to the story. Honestly, I am not sure what category I will put this in yet. In this story, you will look for the normal blue words that you would see in the options, but they will be in the story instead. Clicking one is like interrupting the narrator, and will take you to an option based on that keyword. Not sure if I want to do this in a silly way, a funny way, a serious way. Anyways, I will list as adult, because knowing me, I will have some mature content in there...</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Short Bursts]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Short Bursts is another experimental. You select the options upfront is short bursts (That is why this is the name), and after the selections are made, you will be presented the story. I will write this as short story format. Sadly, since it seems all I seem to do good at writing is adult erotica, I will put this under adult. Maybe after playing with it for a little I will decide it is something else, but until then, I will leave it there.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">So, this is a story, sort of. It is a mixture of parody, satire, and pure rants. It is not listed because it will offend. I will use this to poke fun at not only things in general, but many of the cliches I have found on CYoS in general. Think of it as an outlet story, so I will stop leaving all these little notes on user pages like "Why would you do x?".</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Dirty Me's Diary]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Dear Diary, don't let others read you!</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Texting]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This will be another work in progress. I would like to create a story held only through text messages. It is an idea that came from [[User:Intheworstways]], and made possible by his great cell phone template.</div>

== Future Adult ==

<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">At some point, when I feel [[Dirty Me]] is far enough along, I want to create a story that incorporates all the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]. Right now, these are abandoned, and since they do exist, I think they need to find a way to live together and create an abandoned story. I have a few ideas on how I will do this, but will need to start playing with it before I really know how well it will work to incorporate multiple, limited page stories into a single one. Anyways, this is for the future, so we don't need to worry about it now.</div>

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<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">At one point, I left a story idea in the [[Idea Pitches]], but no one seems interested. I will only do this idea, if, and only if, I find someone, or more than one someone, who is willing to work on it with me. If I want to write about my own fantasies, I will write about them in my [[Dirty Me]]. This is for others to create a fantasy with me. To tell me what they want to do with me (To me?), with no boundaries (It will not be based on real things I have seen, done, experienced, or imagined, but instead is open to anything, so no limits, unlike [[Dirty Me]]), and let me react. Then, they can tell me what they did based on my reactions, and my options, etc. This story will require someone who is willing to write with me, not just read what I have written. Anyways, if anyone is interested, please let me know in my talk section. Otherwise, well, guess it is just some random idea floating around in the place where random ideas that have never became anything float around. Too wordy? Bleh...</div>

== Final notes ==

<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">So, leave me a message if you want. I am always glad to hear feedback on my writing. I really want to know if you like my stories, and what I can do to make them better. Don't make me get on my knees and beg you. I will. And I get bitey while on my knees and begging, if you know what I mean.

Most of my story paths will come from my blog: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com and you can send me emails at: dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

All my work is copyrighted using CC BY, which means you can copy it, reuse it, remix it, or do other things with it, but you must give me credit.

You can find the CC BY simple terms here: [creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/]

You can find the CC BY legal code here: [creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/legalcode]</div>
[[Category:User Pages|DirtyMeStoryTime]]

User talk:Fredhot16

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 24 Jan 2022 07:35:02 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* DirtyMeStoryTime */

[[User talk:Fredhot16/Archive 1]]

==Archives==

I put all your old messages in an archive file to help clean things up. Hope it helps!
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 21:33, 28 February 2019 (UTC)
Dungeon and dragons

Hello Fredhot16.
I noticed that you was one of last writers in "Dungeon and dragons" and I wonder if I can copy it and publish on chyoa.com? I would add in the description it isn't writed by me, to not plagiation your work. I don't know if you are the right person to ask, but this site looks unclean for me.

== Help with Mega-story, looking for partnerships/contributions ==

Hey Fredhot16,

I was wondering if you would be up for helping me out with the [[Tales of Illnora]] mega-story that I started up.

FYI: Its intended to be an Adult story with multiple branching off points with the common theme of all focusing on story and character development. At this point however, my ideas and goals for it are somewhat hazy. Having one or more people who are actively contributing to the overarching narrative and premise would be very helpful. --Durzan 21:28, 28 February 2019 (UTC)

Well, this stuff is a bit hard for me to explain, so I'll just describe it as best as I can:

'''Overview:'''

'''Genre:''' Fantasy

'''Base Concept:''' Tales of Illnora isn't so much a single story, as it is a collection of stories that take place over a number of different time periods on a single world (hence why I called it Tales of Illnora, and why I called it a mega-story). Basically, the idea is that each story (or group of stories), is its own general narrative and that they are linked by the setting and the specific time period. Each story will have some RPG elements (Classes, choice of race, etc), and will have some degree of sandboxing to it. If the stories are in the same time period, then they could interact and overlap with one another (difficult to setup but possible).

There are four time periods that I currently got planned (Only got 1 time-period link established, willing to cut them down or alter them) from which stories can branch out from:

The First Empire Era (era where Dragons ruled the world and are the only playable race).

The Great Cataclysm (Short period where the world is breaking due to Dragons messing with forces they can't understand).

the Golden Era (Humans rule the world, and dragons are shadows of their former selves).

the Silver Age (Dragons nearly extinct, but their bloodlines are strong enough that Dragonborn occasionally pop up throughout the lineage of the different humanoid races that are descended from Golden Age).

Of the four ages, I currently only have one age officially established (IE with blue links) and I have only started working on one story for it, with that story being [[ToI -- The Dragon Master]].

'''Concept of the Dragon Master story:''' In the Dragon Master storyline, Dragons who visit the human realm are hunted down, captured, and enslaved by both licensed humans (''Dragon Catchers''), by government enforcers (Dragon Masters), and by poachers. At the beginning you are given a choice of gender and race, which... depending on your choice will split you onto one of two main story branches.

If you are human, you are given the choice between being hired to work as a ''Dragon Poacher'' (i.e. you become a criminal), or being hired as an aide to a professional ''Dragon Master'' (think of them as being like special agents of the FBI who are tasked with handling all issues dealing with a specific kind of situation; in this case its anything to do with Dragons and Exotic creatures) with the goal of becoming one yourself.

If you become a poacher, you try to capture and sell as many dragons as you can while evading the law for as long as possible.

If you choose the path of becoming a Dragon Master however, you are given various tasks that involve dragons in one form or another, and are tasked with gaining ownership/protective custody of as many dragons as you can in your free time, and then training and/or developing a relationship with them.

Regardless of which path the player chooses, they may choose to treat their dragon slaves with kindness or with cruelty, but doing so will have consequences. Ultimately the main purpose of this branch is to focus on the relationships between you and your dragons, and explore how it affects you. Possible endings would include: setting your dragons free, keeping them, dying in various mishaps or getting eaten by one, getting arrested, and so forth.

If you are a Dragon, then the storyline is a bit more linear in nature. You go into the human lands hoping to start a new and better life (The Dragon lands are in a state of perpetual famine), get captured by a Dragon Master (and possibly sold to another person), and are tasked with figuring out how to either escape and live in hiding in the Human Lands, befriending the Dragon Master and becoming his familar, or convincing him to let you go.

'''Tone & Mood:''' Varies according to the time period and specific story, but in general, all stories should have parts that are serious and parts that are funny. Some should be more serious and more drama laden than others, but there is a time and a place for each in every story. In the Dragon Master, the tone is supposed to be at parts sober, and at other parts funny... and at other parts disgusting or horrifying (we are dealing with slavery after all).

'''Theme:''' Again, varies depending on the time period and the specific story being told. In the Dragon Master, the themes are about the relationships between humans and dragons.

Well, thats basically the gist of what I can tell you at the moment.

I am hoping to work on the Dragon Master and get the basis for that storyline fleshed out before we start on other time periods and/or stories. Also, keep in mind that this is to be a public story, so each story and option should have a somewhat sandbox nature to it.

If you need any more information about the world or the lore of Illnora, don't hesitate to ask. I already put some basic information in the story, but not all of it is fleshed out yet... at least on CYOS anyway.

--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 06:01, 2 March 2019 (UTC)

<nowiki>----</nowiki>

Sure, no problem. Were you thinking of one for the main page, or one for each story?
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 17:03, 3 March 2019 (UTC)

Okay, just made the two pages. --[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 18:58, 3 March 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the resources, Fredhot!
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 03:36, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

Well, which branch do you think we should focus on?
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 03:33, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Started a discussion on the dragon masters in [[Talk:Begin your training (TDM/MHW)]].
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 13:49, 6 May 2019 (UTC)

== Slaves Life ==

Hey Fredhot16, I noticed that you worked on [[Slaves Life]] a couple of times previously. Recently I adopted that story and started a reimagined version of it on CHYOA (renamed to Life of a Slave), which currently gets a lot more viewers than this site and has a few additional flexibilities when it comes to interactive fiction. Especially since this site tends to be a bit unstable.

Anyway, I was wondering if you'd like to collab with me on CHYOA and help out with the story, particularly on adapting Willow's route. If you're interested, hit me up.
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 15:18, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Sure, no problem. Here's the link (chyoa.com/story/Life-of-a-Slave.27660). Your gonna have to create an account and send me a message on there (same username over there for me), otherwise I can't add your username to the editor list.

I can easily relate to the bad work ethic, lol.

P.S. Its called that because I think it sounds a tad better than "Slaves Life" IMHO. If you want an in story reason, well... guess we'll just have to write and find out :D. My initial thought is that the main character is intimately involved with the life of his newly purchased slave, and thus he's witnessing first hand what its like to be a slave, even as he trains, sleeps with, and controls her. I kinda see this story as a bit of a romance. Gives the story added depth behind it, which is always a plus for any kind of story, erotic or otherwise.
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 00:40, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Okay, got you added in as an editor. Plus, I sent you a direct message on CHYOA.
--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 21:36, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

==Main Page==
I had to put protections against editing on the Main Page due to a persistent vandal. I may take the protections off again, as things seem to have calmed down. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:40, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

== DirtyMeStoryTime ==

lol, yeah, been a while. I don't actually come here. Just, some of the stories around make me feel physically ill. I know, it isn't you, or Platy, or Tee. I ended up moving my writings to discord.

Yes, my bathroom door was fixed. That was the second time. Fortunately, it hasn't broken again. Glass bathroom door, so it shattered into lots of pieces those two times.

As for CYOA style, I think that may be a bit why I disappeared. I think I just write better linearly. As for the choice aspect, I guess it depends on the viewpoint. If you are writing a character viewpoint, then yes, it should be more about their reactions to the events that happen around them. However, there is the other, where the viewer is more of a "god" type of thing, like a civilization game or whatever. Rather than figuring out how the character reacts to stimulus, you instead figure out what happens to the character. I guess it depends on what kind of story you are writing. However, yeah, I think a majority focuses on what the character does and how they react, rather than what happens to the character, which I would completely agree with your viewpoint. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

Sure. I don't stop in often, but do time to time. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

User talk:Fredhot16

DirtyMeStoryTime — Tue, 07 Dec 2021 03:42:31 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* DirtyMeStoryTime */ new section

User talk:Darth Malcolm

DirtyMeStoryTime — Tue, 07 Dec 2021 03:34:10 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* DirtyMeStoryTime */ new section

{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:19, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

== Adding date and time at the end of a message automatically ==
That's an easy one. Either type <nowiki>--~~~~</nowiki> in place of your signature or in the set of format buttons above your text box press the squiggle button in between the "slash-circle over the W" button and the - button. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:52, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

Believe me, I wish I knew what was up with the site and its random functionality. Unfortunately, I'm just a sysop. RobKohr is the actual site owner, and he tends to keep quiet. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:29, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

== DirtyMeStoryTime ==

Thank you for the note ^.^
Sorry, I am not really on here anymore. Think this is the first time I have stopped in for a while. But, it was nice to see the note there --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:34, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

User:DirtyMeStoryTime

DirtyMeStoryTime — Wed, 13 Jan 2021 07:43:05 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Undo revision 354788 by MinecraftKid2012 (Talk)

<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Hello.

Yes, I am a girl.

I have been writing erotica for a while, and also publish some on Amazon.

Short form only, but I hope to actually write a full novel at some point.

I have a few stories going here, some more involved than others.

Also, while I have many things on my blog, figured I would add a page about what I have done in real life.

So, you can see it here: [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]

Also, I guess in the spirit of "Getting to know the author", I have also put more of my thoughts about things here: [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/Thoughts about stuff]]. By stuff, I mean whatever. It will not always be "Adult".</div>

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[The Review]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is not anything specific. This is a review of the stories on here by me. Of course, others can add their own, just create your name specific path for the stories. I will not bother reviewing stuff in the pit, or stuff that is marked for the pit, since it will just be too short to review. Only more complete stories. This is for all categories. Subcategories can be found in the main page.</div>

Current status of me (IRL)

{{DirtyMe}}

== Family-Friendly ==

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[A little Chinese story]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">A little Chinese story is just something I am working on to help me better learn Chinese, and, if anyone else is interested in learning, to help guide others through learning Chinese. It will be heavy on explanation, with a building story as it progresses. It will not be an exciting story, and will take a while to actually build a story, but eventually, I hope to be writing an actual story in Chinese that people can read, if they followed along with everything.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Lets make a webpage]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">I will use this to sort of learn about making webpages with tables, boxes, borders, colors, etc. A learning tool mostly, and hopefully others can learn from it also.</div>

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[It's programming time!]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Like the [[Lets make a webpage]] above, I will try to use this to sort of discuss programming. I will add a few languages I have learned a little about, but, since the one thing I actually work with is mostly LUA and C++, I will focus on those I think.</div>

== PG-13 ==

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Prank War]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Prank war is about two rivals who continue playing pranks on each other. Is it not a conventional story, but a story loop. Jennifer pranks Ashley, Ashley pranks Jennifer, etc. The two main pages will simply be Jennifer and Ashley, with a list of pranks they can play on each other. It is just a short little loop, with story elements revolving around what prank one plays on the other.</div>

== Adult ==

{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Dirty Me]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Dirty Me is my main story. Most of the elements are from things that have happened to me in real life, or fantasies I have had, or how things could have been if I had continued to do the stupid stuff I did in high school. While many of the "Real life" elements from it were from when I was under 18, the character, Dirty Me, is 18. If age is a focal point, I will focus on it through dreams or memories, such as [[Dirty Me/Dream of your first time|how Dirty Me lost her virginity]]. Dreams and memories will always have the option to go through them, or to avoid them, and will be noted in the option's wording.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[The Exhibitionist]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is a community driven story. I will not make the options, I will only write the story from my point of view for options others give to me. If you want the story expanded, give me your options.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Masochist me]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is my dark fantasy story. Here, I can be spanked, scratched, hit, spit on, humiliated, raped, and generally used and abused, and enjoy it.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Too Graphic]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">So, as some people may or may not know, I have my own erotica blog. Sadly, I am not as active as I should be, but it is there. I ran a poll about photos, and the results showed more of my readers (The few who voted -.-) wanted graphics than didn't. So, I will use this, sort of create the graphics templates, and the stories to go with each. Warning: This is not just a text based story, so if you are under 18, definitely, stay out!</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Context]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This is an experiment of sorts. It will have options, but not conventional options. Instead, I will add key words to the story. Honestly, I am not sure what category I will put this in yet. In this story, you will look for the normal blue words that you would see in the options, but they will be in the story instead. Clicking one is like interrupting the narrator, and will take you to an option based on that keyword. Not sure if I want to do this in a silly way, a funny way, a serious way. Anyways, I will list as adult, because knowing me, I will have some mature content in there...</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Short Bursts]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">Short Bursts is another experimental. You select the options upfront is short bursts (That is why this is the name), and after the selections are made, you will be presented the story. I will write this as short story format. Sadly, since it seems all I seem to do good at writing is adult erotica, I will put this under adult. Maybe after playing with it for a little I will decide it is something else, but until then, I will leave it there.</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">So, this is a story, sort of. It is a mixture of parody, satire, and pure rants. It is not listed because it will offend. I will use this to poke fun at not only things in general, but many of the cliches I have found on CYoS in general. Think of it as an outlet story, so I will stop leaving all these little notes on user pages like "Why would you do x?".</div>

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{{Too Graphic Link|link=[[Texting]]}}
<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">This will be another work in progress. I would like to create a story held only through text messages. It is an idea that came from [[User:Intheworstways]], and made possible by his great cell phone template.</div>

== Future Adult ==

<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">At some point, when I feel [[Dirty Me]] is far enough along, I want to create a story that incorporates all the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]. Right now, these are abandoned, and since they do exist, I think they need to find a way to live together and create an abandoned story. I have a few ideas on how I will do this, but will need to start playing with it before I really know how well it will work to incorporate multiple, limited page stories into a single one. Anyways, this is for the future, so we don't need to worry about it now.</div>

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<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">At one point, I left a story idea in the [[Idea Pitches]], but no one seems interested. I will only do this idea, if, and only if, I find someone, or more than one someone, who is willing to work on it with me. If I want to write about my own fantasies, I will write about them in my [[Dirty Me]]. This is for others to create a fantasy with me. To tell me what they want to do with me (To me?), with no boundaries (It will not be based on real things I have seen, done, experienced, or imagined, but instead is open to anything, so no limits, unlike [[Dirty Me]]), and let me react. Then, they can tell me what they did based on my reactions, and my options, etc. This story will require someone who is willing to write with me, not just read what I have written. Anyways, if anyone is interested, please let me know in my talk section. Otherwise, well, guess it is just some random idea floating around in the place where random ideas that have never became anything float around. Too wordy? Bleh...</div>

== Final notes ==

<div style="width:100%; height:auto; margin:10px 30px 10px 0px; border:3px black solid; border-radius:15px; padding:5px 10px 15px 5px;">So, leave me a message if you want. I am always glad to hear feedback on my writing. I really want to know if you like my stories, and what I can do to make them better. Don't make me get on my knees and beg you. I will. And I get bitey while on my knees and begging, if you know what I mean.

Most of my story paths will come from my blog: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com and you can send me emails at: dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

All my work is copyrighted using CC BY, which means you can copy it, reuse it, remix it, or do other things with it, but you must give me credit.

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DirtyMeStoryTime: /* DirtyMe's new section */ Back?

Mr fredhot16. I aint got time so pls send me your age. Im making a poll for ages PLs send me ur age ASAP.[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]

== [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime|DirtyMeStoryTime]]'s talk ==
Do not delete an entire index and replace it with just your story again... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:27, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

I have already undone it, but did you seriously think selecting every single bit of text on a page, then suddenly seeing nothing BUT your story was the proper way to go? I know people can get intimidated trying new things, but don't just forget all common sense at the same time...

And, you should normally respond on the person's user page, not on your user page, or else they probably won't see it. But make sure is it User talk:, not User:. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

Just to let you know, I alphabetized your stories in the mature section, so if you don't spot them, please note they are in a different location, not removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:37, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

{{warn1}} --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:03, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

So, it has been a while since we last talked. I just wanted to stop in and say hi, and let you know I am looking for people to help me expand my story, [[The Exhibitionist]]. Just drop a couple options you would like me to write or something. A couple others have already been sweet and given me some options, but the more, the merrier! But, you don't need to, it is entirely optional (gogogogogogogogogo addadddadddaddadd) '''Thinks to herself, "are my subliminals working?''' Wait, did I say that outloud? So sorry :o Please forgive me. <nowiki>*</nowiki>beg beg beg beg<nowiki>*</nowiki>. Anyways, hope to see you there ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:38, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, but it is an adult story. Yes, I know what you mean, I don't bother reading most of the stories. I do write stories other than adults, but I am not that good, to be honest. I draw on my experience to write my stories, and many of my past history consisted of 3 things: Drugs, sex, and physical/emotional pain. I have tried writing about my pain, but honestly, when I read it, it makes me feel like I come across as whiny. I have written sometimes about drugs, but honestly, it is hard to describe what it feels like to be high. So, that leaves me with sex...I would love to write fantasy, sci fi, mystery, crime, etc, but every time I try, at least when I read, it always sounds so cliche. I think maybe the only difference is, I write my erotica based on my real life, so I try to make it realistic. Sometimes I get carried away, but normally I try to make it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:33, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Adding a little more: Yes, I have also written a couple of non-adult stories. You can check my user page for the stories I have written, but you can probably guess after looking at them that I do not do as good... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:35, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Yes, yes, I talk too much. Even in real life. I have started a story, [[Context]], but unlike [[The Exhibitionist]], it is not a community driven story. For [[The Exhibitionist]]. I will only work on options given to me, and those ideas that spring from them during story mode. I do not create new paths. However, for [[Context]], I am trying something completely different, keyworks located in the story itself. I am still trying to figure out how to work it though. Mostly, I am aiming it at non-adult, but have categorized it as adult because I imagine at some point I will have some level of adult content, but thinking of making it more of a silly, strange, random, train of thought type of story. Anyways, I will STFU now...I know I talk too much, and type too much... I like interaction, not isolation... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:45, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, so, you want stories that are adult but not really sex stories like 99%? Want to try my [[Short Bursts]] story? Let me know what you think? Yes, I will have graphic sex in there, and graphic other things. lol, you will probably be able to tell once you read the first two I have completed. Anyways, just want to know what you think, since it seems like you are not one who is here only for the graphic sex stories, but for actual stories. Anyways, I would like it if you let me know what you think about them. Yes, I am a needy, insecure person, so like to hear if my stuff is good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, where to start. I notice some of the things you have posted on Darky's talk page. Not saying I don't understand, or sympathize, but, are you sure this is really the correct way to go about it? I guess, he started the story, and while it seems that he should be able to do more than make it one of another, lots, of adult stories, are you sure criticizing him is really the way to go? It seems your view and his view are clashing, and I am not sure it is really that helpful at this point. Possibly you could make your own story that follows a vision you have? Not trying to get in the middle of it, but it just seems like many posts on his page are "Man, why would you even go there". I have the feeling he has changed the path, like the feather tickling, mostly because of your feedback, but... I guess, like me, I try to make non-adult stories. I try to make something that is not in the realm of "naughty", but I find most of the time when I try, I run out of story too quickly. I guess I am just better at erotica than I am at conventional stories. So, I sympathize with Darky too. But honestly, when the thing I see on the first page is "stunning girl with a nice butt and b-cup breasts", well, I think that was always his direction. I mean, what does her butt and breasts have to do with being a barbarian? She has a butt, she has breasts, but when there is a need to highlight them, I guess there was already a set direction in the author's eyes. Is it really that constructive to keep bugging him about "Man, why go there"? The only way it could have screamed more adult is if there was also the guy's penis size. I guess I am saying it seems like you would have a better story by writing your own. Maybe "Sherry becomes a barbarian girl", and run with it. Sorry, I know you are free to keep messaging him, but it just seems like it is only nagging about another author not meeting your expectations at this point. Just my opinion though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:34, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

Sigh, and yet another story with "DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass"... I swear, as I said above, I sympathize with you...every time I see something like this it makes me want to scream... Why do all women need to be unrealistically proportioned in like 90% of all the stories here, and why do they all need to have DD breasts unless someone is trying to create some under age style story? Seriously...it is frustrating... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:51, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, so cabin in the woods xD

Loved that movie --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:31, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I have not ignored your messages. Just, I suffer writers block frequently. Guess I get busy with other things and cannot really focus on writing. So, not ignoring, just not contributing anything right now because I am not sure what to contribute. That has always been one of my problems with writing, I start off okay, then end up losing my path completely for a while. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:26, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, blank or pre made are fine, depending on how it is done. I normally try to fill in details like with dreams, memories, etc. [[Dirty Me]] originally started mostly from my blog material, with some side options to make it a CYoS. Sometimes, I did better, when I used my own experience to write, other times, I did worse, especially when I was just trying to make an option to have an option, and when I was not really in a writing mood. "Okay, lets just put in some sex stuff for the readers to make them happy, and go work on something else". Those are probably the worst paths. [[Too Graphic]] is a WIP, majorly. I need to actually put story in. Doing it more because on my blog people told me they liked pictures. So, figured, let me figure out my path, and put some pictures in, then tell a story based on those. But, it is very sexual. Again, the issue I have with being able to write based on my own experiences, without sounding like a whiny bitch. If you want to get what I mean by that, try reading this path on [[Dirty Me]]: [[Dirty Me/Go ahead and accept the party invitation]] -> [[Dirty Me/Sure, one beer can't hurt]] -> [[Dirty Me/Go home and try to forget this]] -> [[Dirty Me/Pretend like you have no idea what happened and that you would love to party with him]]. I wanted to put how I felt, but, not sure how most of the readers here will react. I assume though I am right: whiny bitch. Especially when you think about what you said some people post on here. Raping a girl and she magically likes it after. Like, I started reading this, [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the female path, and it was okay, until the rapist. I mean, I shook my head at the "good girl randomly has sex with the army dude", or has sex with her brother, or neighbor, or whatever. But, I read, until the rapist, and turning him into a sex slave. Yeah, just sort of threw up my hands and said okay, that is too much...get a female writer, or at least try, '''try''', to imagine what a "good girl" would do. I mean, if you want to put that stuff, then make her the bad girl...

One thing I actually love about reading [[User:Teejay]]'s stuff. He makes the characters human. Not that I read all his stuff, he tried to follow the story line, but some that have good options he can write about. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:47, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, think you might be confused. I said on the good girl path, when the guy tries to rape the character, and he ends up in on the other end of his knife, the only option seems to be to turn him into a sex slave. I sort of liked the cut off his clothes and leave him there, but the author doesn't seem to be willing to let that happen, and keeps pushing towards keeping him as a sex slave. As for rape, did you read my path that I posted last time? That is exactly what it covers. I have been raped twice in real life, so I write from experience.

As for what Teejay writes, he tends to add on existing, not have a stand alone story. [[Special:Contributions/Teejay]]

One warning though, Platypus has warned you about categories, and I notice he is now deleting your pages. If you do not add them, he will ban you from this website. Don't be stubborn, just put category, even if you are still working on it...

Anyways, on a lighter note, here you go. Made this template just for you, so you can post and not need to worry about the 20 minute link thing:
{{Hypnobutt}}

lol, guess you liked my templates=P

btw, I changed your user page to the Index Link instead of Too Graphic Link. Mostly because I set up Index link for use on the main page, so it will not change much, but I cannot say the same thing for my too graphic link. After all, if I change it to pink, or red, are you sure you would want that? I just want to find a good color combination for it, and possibly see if I can use a background image in the future. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Going to add to them, but last week my brain just didn't want to think...I actually thought of something funny to do with [[Context]], with a misnamed news story. Now to put it into reality. Yeah, my projects tend to be hit or miss xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:30, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

No worries, saw the first message, and the second=P I think part of my problem is, at the beginning you kept telling everyone "Hey, I put up a page, please go to this link, check these out, then write stuff for it". It seemed more like you wanted others to write a story with your idea in mind. I noted Teejay had pointed out he would be willing to add, but wanted you to first so he could build on that. It is somewhat the same with me. I am more of the responder type than the initiator type normally. So, I guess it is good that you added some of the thoughts about what each character should be like. But, that is my other problem. I don't really feel anything when I read it. It doesn't spark anything that I really want to add. lol, Platypus just mentioned the same thing to me on my page xD When an idea strikes, sure, no problem adding, but hard to generate an idea from nothing. And sadly, you can sort of see what my writing moods have been lately, since I have been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]], making fun of some of the stereotyped stories on here. Can you find the originals? The innocent path idea, [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]], was the recent family story someone worked on, like [[AAF - The talk]], [["Ok, Scott. I trust you."]], and [[AAF - It works.]]. All of these I removed the underage stuff. I mean, the writer had his 4th grade sister having sex with him...Notice how my innocent girl is 18, yet looks 10? Yeah, because I am making fun of that stuff. For a short time I started asking people on their talk page why everyone seemed to write that the girl was "DD", which is why I created [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for DD]]. I am even making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] with [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]]. Once I finish the loop, the reader can just have the girl having sex forever, although they will only really have 8 options. I even added a new option to make fun of the [[Pokesex/Pokemon]], but I still need to put the story in. Not sure how I will write that. Even [[Context]], once I work on it, will have some options that will point out how absurd some writers paint women as on here. I am not really pointing at you, or at anyone specific. It is just me making fun of some common things I see on here. Like, sex with absolutely no story, although I must admit that I wrote a few things in [[Dirty Me]] simply to try to "fit in" and keep people wanting to read. One reason I sort of lost interest in working on it, when I found myself writing, not about my experiences, fantasies, or what I want to write about, but instead writing things just so more people would read, and falling into the same rut that many writers do on here. Anyways, think I have went on too long, and probably sound like a whiny bitch now...so I will stop typing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:41, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

Sorry if I intimidated you in my last message :o

Oh, and I added a bit of an "about me", well, about my real life experiences... if you are interested. [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]] --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

btw, for your:

10. Are sex scenes or explicit sexual descriptions really necessary in a Adult CYOS? (O.K, not a important question for the story but it still stands.)

Honestly, I think they can be very good, and push the plot, letting you imagine yourself in the scene, if done right. However, I think many people tend to just throw out "Position, penetration, release, random gibberish".

Here, from my [[Dirty Me/Get the gun, just to scare him away]], the rape scene, based on the first time I was raped irl.

<blockquote>You hear him yelling at you, but cannot grasp the meaning of the words. He jumps on you, yelling at you more, then you start feeling his hands. You feel him pulling your blouse, popping off buttons, ripping it off. His hand pulls at your pants, undoing them.<br>
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You lift your hands, trying to push him, to stop him, to fight him.<br>
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His fist connects with your stomach, knocking the air out of you, leaving you trying to catch your breath. When you finally do, it hurts, trying to suck in breath.<br>
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Your pants are around your knees.<br>
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You try to stop him again, and he punches you again, harder. You feel like throwing up, like your insides are hurt.<br>
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He takes your pants the rest of the way off, now that you are no longer trying to stop him, then rips your panties off.<br>
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You suddenly understand what he is about to do as he starts undoing his pants.<br>
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You yell at him, scream at him, but it doesn't matter. He forces your legs apart and punches you once more as you try to keep your legs closed, try to stop what he is doing.<br>
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He pushes in, and you scream, feeling him tearing your vagina, entering you dry. He ignores you, like a wild animal, and continues pushing himself in you, forcing himself deeper into you. You hurt so bad you cannot stop yourself from crying, sobbing, screaming. He pounds you for a short time before cumming inside you.<br>
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Laying on top of you, he rests for a few second before pushing himself up, getting off you.<br>
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He slaps your face a couple times, laughing, as pain blossoms on your cheeks.<br>
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Finally, he stands up, doing up his pants, and looking down at you in disgust, and maybe even a little guilt. You don't know because it is hard to see, as you sob in pain.<br>
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He leaves, with you curled up on the floor, crying.</blockquote>

Now, think about the way most people on here write about raping a girl. At first she is is all "eek, no Mr. don't do this to me" and then she is like "Oh god, I like your cock so much, I am glad you raped me". Seriously, read how many authors read about it. Now, read what I wrote again. Can you imagine the broken girl, battered and raped, the pain she is feeling, how it feels to be her?

Yeah, this is one of those cases where I honestly think, heavier description makes it more real. Of course, I guess the next question is: Do most people who write on this site really want to read about that, to think that the woman would feel like this?

Now, this one is a little long, so I will just leave you the link: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2013/09/slow-motion-love-final-polished-story.html

Read that one. Can you feel the love with it? That was what I wrote about me and my husband being intimate. Doesn't it paint a better picture of our love making, and the feelings inside of me, than just "We made love, he was tender, it was good"?

See, this is the problem. You read so many of these CYoS's that are just mindless "I want to imagine having sex with a woman like this" that I don't think you see the emotion. I think descriptions, while not always needed, nor always wanted, can pain the story.

Or, take for example, me loosing my virginity here: [[Dirty Me/Dream of your first time]], doesn't that show the awkwardness of "the first time"? Yeah, I know, I fall into the same problems that others do on here, especially when I am just writing to make more story for people to read and not feeling it, but...

See, when I write a sex scene, I close my eyes. I picture it in my head. I go through the motions. I use toys if needed, fingers, hands. Then, I write, then close my eyes, imagine more, write more. At least when I am doing it right.

So, I do not completely agree that it does not help the story, if handled correctly. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Lol you are telling a girl about the annoying ways people on here write about breasts? If you read my stories I normally do not describe a female's size. In part so the reader can imagine it. In another part because I honestly do not want some comparison to myself. I am a c cup. How do you think I feel reading all of these "she has a pair of DDs". You know how hard it has been for me to find every instance of that and either put my own size in to replace, or just remove?

As for the cup/bust size, at least they are trying to figure out how a woman works. I have mentioned that to people here before. But yeah... notice my dd rant story? That was to keep from going bitch mode on people...

And I understand too many ideas. Just look at how complete mine are...

Sadly, right now I just have a phone with bad internet to type on... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:21, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Lol I noticed you removed "at least you have a life". Does that mean I don't? =p --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:11, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I am home, so back to normal tomorrow. And, not much time for laying around. I have a 2 year old son, and he keeps me plenty busy xD I just reread your message, and now understand what you said. idk, are you a girl? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:58, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, so much to address.

You do know I speak fluent Chinglish, so the grammar on my talk page doesn't matter too much. No need to correct mistakes. If I can understand Google Translate's mess of a Chinese to English translation, I can normally figure out what is meant xD

A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops? - I am a game girl, but I can't really say I really know much about the comics thing. I know who they are, but...honestly, I would say wolverine, but more because I have seen him more. I really can't answer that.

<i>B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures?</i> In the [[Too Graphic]] (or my status on my user page?)? Random pics that I think match the story, but...I really have not done much with that. I am not as much of a visual person. I started that because on my blog, I took a poll, and more people wished I used more pictures. But...you can see how far I have gotten on that story...tells you how "graphically oriented" I am. Sorry, I don't share my pic because I have had bad experiences. Teejay knows, since he has read my blog and been talking to me for a long time, but...

So, one day I was talking to someone on a game I was playing. We had known each other for a while, and I was feeling...frisky...so, I sent him my picture. Soon after, I started getting strange messages on my facebook. We started getting strange calls at the house. It started out strange, and turned scary. Basically, the guy had released my pics and personal information to a revenge porn site. I got rape threats. Death threats. We ended up having to change our phone number. We ended up having to move. It was horrifying. And, taught me about what it means to be a girl on the internet.

Here is what I wrote on another website I used to post things in (This was a general post on that site because I was constantly getting asked about sharing pics or skyping or kiking, or whatever, but it should give you a good idea):<br />
<blockquote>So, I constantly get asked to send pics, to cam, to whatever.<br />I guess before people add me, let me explain a little about my life.<br /><br />I was the victim of a revenge porn site. I was talking to someone for over a year online, and one day I was feeling a little naughty. I sent him some nude pics.<br /><br />So, we had a fun cyber, and that was the end.<br /><br />Until one day I started getting some very disturbing text messages, facebook messages, etc.<br /><br />Rape threats.<br />Death threats.<br />Sex solicitations.<br /><br />I was not even 18. It seems the person I sent the pics to posted them on a revenge porn site, and put my real life information next to it.<br /><br />I was scared, for my life, for my body. My father called the police, and was told they could not do anything about it. We changed addresses, we changed phone numbers. We became unregistered because of what this one guy did on the internet.<br /><br />So, call me paranoid if you want, call me whatever you want, but this is my life. I will not give you my facebook information. I will not give you my skype information. I will not join kik and cam with you.<br /><br />I have fun writing naughty stories. I love writing, and some are erotica. I don't mind if you want to try to rp with me. Or if you want some naughty messages back and forth. But don't bother asking, because I will not send you anything other than a message on EP.<br /><br />Block me if you want, I don't care. You didn't go through hell because you were young, stupid, and send nude pictures to someone. I did. I will not repeat that experience.<br /><br />And don't bother trying to tell me "I am not like that". How would I know what you are like? I met you through some random, anonymous website. I don't know you, so don't even play that game with me.<br /><br />So, please remember, don't ask, because you already know the answer...</blockquote>

Of course, if you want to read more about what made me "me" (with all my thorns and mental brokeness), you can read my blog entry: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2013/08/damaged-goods-about-me.html

So, have I shared my pic after that point? Honestly, yes. But, it is something that for the most part I have a rule about, because I have been through the horrors of being "open"... Here, you can also read this: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2016/01/just-another-rant-on-society-and.html

It will give you a little understanding of why I do not really share like I would love to. I guess the bad experience sort of turned me camera shy. Even my parents complain they never get pics of me...

<i>C.Hmmm. Could be. What if I am? Would it matter?</i> Honestly, I am not judgemental. I actually have a friend who is m3f transgender, and my husband's sister is f2m transgender. My friend wants to fully transition, but my sister-in-law (who has also been my past lover...shhh, don't tell my husband about that though, he thinks we are just friends, which we are now, but weren't always) will never transition or even try to live as a male because if she did, her family would completely disown her. It is a sad situation where she can't really be her, the family's "known" secret. So, you can be whomever you want, and I will not judge. As long as you are happy and not harming others I don't really mind.

<i>D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in many adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.</i> Thanks ^.^ Always nice to hear positive feedback. Yes, I try, but that is also my curse. One reason why I go through writing spurts, then nothing for a long time. Because, I have tried to force myself. If you want to see my writing when I try to force it, just to please my readers, read this path: [[Dirty Me/The adult video store]]

This was just that...forcing myself to create some alternative. This: [[Dirty Me/The park]] is based on a real life experience though, so it is a better story (well, if you think a girl actually doing something like that makes a good story, but that is another matter=P). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:22, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the Wasteland Survival Guide. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:28, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess you realized the error? Yeah, by that point, people are stealing babies and shooting husbands or wives, so I think the guards and everything are all gone xD

Sadly, it seems pretty realistic that rape would actually be more prevalent in that world. I finally got further in the story on the game, so yeah, the guy who took Shaun would not really do something like that, but I don't really want to change it now. I wrote like that to set the "Adult" mood for the average CYoS reader, so they could get the sex out of the way. And sadly, you look at the world, and rape would be not only prevalent, but also something that has happened to almost every female in the game. For example: Raiders. They have a might makes right mentality. Do you think if they wanted to have sex with a woman they would bother to ask, or even try to court her? No, they would take. In the real world, sex slavery is real, so if you think about the Fallout world, and the slavery, do you think the only thing people do with slaves is make them work? That never even happened in the old days in the US with slavery. Many female slaves had to endure her owners raping her. Is it an idea I like? No, I have been raped. So, yes, I will include it, but as you notice in that intro, I will include it more realistically, rather than the way many CYoS writers include it. Later, I will try to use that to explain certain behavioral traits. I am trying to give the adult content many readers on here expect, but in a way that shows how that would be for a woman, rather than a man's ideal of a woman. Would it have been better if she was having a "wet" dream? Maybe it would have been better to not even include, but again, the original author put it in the adult category so I assume the author wanted it to be adult oriented. I am just trying to make sure it isn't "She woke up from her freezing and saw a naked man with a 12" penis standing over her. After being frozen so long, she was immediately wet and jumped up, swallowing the entire length, gagging a bit at it." Yeah, how realistic is that? But, it is the type of thing I would expect of many of the authors on here. I am trying to express her range of emotions, the environment, the mood. Confused - rotting breath, stink of a person who hasn't bathed for a while - horror as your mind puts it together - helplessness at your situation - the sense of revulsion at what they did to you - the horror of watching your husband shot, your baby taken - waking up again, and mentally screaming about the stuff that happened. I mean, how would you feel, having one horror stacked on top of another? If you honestly think about the setting, although the game is not a horror, a reality of it would be. I think every author would write it a bit different, but I am trying to portray a somewhat realistic view. And yes, I will be writing lots of rape scenes for it, I have been thinking about writing more of these for this site lately. Why rape? Because, you know how many stories I have read on here that the woman is raped, that make me want to scream at the author, or make me honestly a bit scared of some of the people on this site, if they actually view women the way they write? Since it is a prevalent theme in many places here, and since the fallout world would actually be a world where almost every woman would be a victim of it, I want to at least make the readers think about what it is like to be a woman in that situation. Put my readers in my shoes, so they know women are not just some random hole that exists for a penis, but are real, thinking people. That it has dramatic, traumatic effects on someone, to have their body violated. So, I write what many people on here seem to want, but my way.

Anyways, I was more curious if I captured Moria Brown's tone well in my Chapter 1-3 of the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I even did alot of reading of the quest on wikis to try to figure out how to write it in a way that seemed to match her. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:52, 16 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh, I played that too, but not as much. The stories from a raider is basically any fallout game. Doesn't matter, that is why it is in the fallout shorts, misc section. I am trying to paint a picture of why raiders are like they are. Guess I will let you wait until after you can read them before asking for your opinion. As for the scene in the intro, yes, I know it does not match the game. I wrote it for the average CYoS reader, and well, you should understand the average reader by now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:30, 18 June 2016 (UTC)

G. Public use? Yes, I arranged that as a fantasy fulfillment with one of my "lovers". lol, if you think about it, it was a dirty old man who liked young women, but I knew what I was getting into. Let me know when you want to read and I will direct you to the proper path. Since most of the path was taken from my blog, which is based on my true experience (Please note, I actually don't remember much of any of my experiences all that well, so many of them, while based on my real experiences, do have some level or artistic liberty. Especially since I tried to make my experiences writings naughty, not depressing. My slow motion love is about the only one that has all the details of what happened, since I actually wrote that shortly after it did happen, with a couple additional elements)

H. For swimsuits becoming translucent, yes, some do, but not the ones you find in the normal stores. Most of the "See through when wet" swimsuits you see are either specially made, a find from some company trying something new that went "oops" after, or lingerie that the model is wearing as a swim suit. As for the ones that do, normally they are aimed at sunbathing, not swimming. Most women would not wear them swimming. Sorry, you won't be able to go to the beach and see lots of naughty bits from swimsuits that have gotten wet.

I. Of course I realize almost nothing is original. Most of people's writings will draw on something from either other writing, the past, or something we imagine. But that can be said with almost everything. It is not original, it is a modification of something that was already around. Fires are common, cavemen did not create them, they just mimicked nature. Wheels are round, like rocks that are found rolling down hills. Nothing original, just mimicking nature. Birds fly. Nothing new. Just mimicking how they fly until we found a way to fly ourselves. There are example after example of how we just mimic and tweak to create something that seems original.

Sure, I will review and put the review under the review thing I started. I really need to get busy on it, just had too many other ideas that are running around in my head. Welcome to me, a bit flighty and disorganized. I have ADD, a touch of OCD, and more than a few other things that make me much less than perfect...

Ever wanted to fuck a statue in a museum, try to give a BJ to cliche serial killer who just murdered your boyfriend who you were having sex with at the time, or fuck a werecat? - Putting up your words here: Statue, hmm, that is one I would be willing to do. One thing about me, sometimes I just like to see how people react to things. If I thought I could get away with it, I probably would xD But, I doubt I would do it for more than to watch people "WTF" all over the place, because honestly, it seems like it would be extremely uncomfortable. I have also saw those pics of girls giving the statues bjs. They make me laugh. Horny, no, funny, yes. For the serial killer, no. Nothing I would ever really even have a fantasy about. Or want to either. I don't like people getting hurt. Werecat? You mean like on True Blood? No, nothing I have ever fantasized about. I have, honestly, fantasied about bestiality, but I would never do it. One of the main reasons is because, how can the animal give consent? I mean, isn't it really just trained animal abuse? While I might have thought about it, it just seems wrong to me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:57, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and your note to Platypus, if they are in the wrong section, feel free to move them. But, are they because some random person added something they should not have, that kicked them out? If so, well, then it is better to edit those few pages that cause them to be in the wrong area, so the original author's writing spirit is kept. But, if the original author, or many other contributors additions to many pages, caused them to be "Adult" instead of mature, there may be no choice. If you need to edit more than two or three pages, it should probably just be moved. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't know World of Darkness. And yeah, there are some strange ones. I giggled at the statue one, I think I know which you are talking about. However, the story is not that great. I mean, it seemed to have potential, at least by the name, but the author did not do well at placing themselves in the shoes of a woman. I mean, it was supposed to be for women, from what I read (Sorry, I don't remember the story, just remember that part where the statue wakes up and then turns you into a statue), and it did a horrible job of making me feel much. But yeah, honestly, it did make me wonder how others would react if they caught me doing something like that.

As for the stories you asked me to review, well, I had to make the mature sections. It is split because the website kept complaining at me, so no choice. Once I finished that, I read through the [[Escape from Syria]] story. It isn't too bad. Thinking about it though, I want to add something else in my review. Also, my idea is that anyone at all can make their own review. If you want to review it, just create your name link, then your review. That is why I have the DirtyMeStoryTime's review in there, so they know who the reviewer is. Other's opinions might be different, so others should also add their own if they care about the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:07, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

Eh, I know what you mean about that, but it does honestly make a good method for distraction. I actually guess when I read it, I thought the author was more trying to distract rather than seduce. Of course, if you think about it from a realistic point of view, would the guys be distracted, or incensed? I don't know that area of the world really, but from what I do know, wouldn't the guys be rather...pissed...at her for that? Given the covering of women and what is considered vulgar? I guess you would need to talk to someone more familiar with the culture there for that. I did note the author tried to use sex as a weapon a bit much, but honestly, not on a ton of paths, here and there only, when compared to 171 pages total. It was almost like the author wanted to use a random excuse for a sex scene. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:16, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

I guess that could be it. The directions I remember, the statue came to life, asked the girl if she would be his forever, and if she said yes, she turned into a statue. As for the main character being "random girl with big breasts", well, that is many of the adult stories, since most are written by males. Very little character development, outside of the kinds of sex they are interested in. I guess that is one thing about the story you asked me to review, The Devil's Daughter, that made more sense. I can easily believe that satanists would value style over substance, aka: shallow things. So, it does fit more, yet, that author actually gave more of a backstory than in ones like "Oops, your naked". As for how I see The Devil's Daughter. Well, I see an author that has watched too many Japanese porn cartoons. Honestly, the story seems like a written version of those. For ASOIAF Sexy Edition, yes, I have read some pages as they pop up in the recent changes tabs. No comment about it really, to be honest. It seems like someone who likes the series, and wanted to overly sexualize it, as if the series isn't sexual enough. For the "Distract him with your tits", well, honestly, it is a cliche. In real life, real professionals will not fall for it. I know, I have tried the "Show him your cleavage" with police and tickets. I still got a ticket, and the police officer barely looked. The average writer on here, I would have been fucking and sucking him to avoid the ticket. So, it would not really work well, might catch some people off guard, but not as well as the author likes to put. But, then again, if I want realism, I will write it myself. At least the author of that did not have her fucking and sucking her way out of syria at every turn. In fact, I found it amusing that in one page, because she was so willing to give the doctor a BJ that the doctor got suspicious, was a nice change. "She acts like a slut, so it works against her". So, he didn't over use it as bad as others might have. And remember, I read every page before I put my finished review. One reason The Devil's Daughter review is notes, not review, right now. Because, there are alot of pages in that -.- --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:42, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

You mean strip poker? Played it several times. It is not as sexy as many people imagine though in their fantasies. It is fun though when you are, well, me, someone who has exhibitionist tendencies and are the only girl=P And normally it does not turn into some orgy like most people like to talk about. Naked twister is just uncomfortable, but you find yourself in many funny positions. Fortunately, my grandpa liked poker, so every family gathering, we played. So, I normally held my own against the other players, and sometimes did better. It is especially fun when you are the only girl, most of the guys are naked, and you still have your naughty parts hidden. Frustrates the guys to no end xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:32, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

If you want to look it over, the review is done for [[The End of the World]]: [[The Review/Adult Stories/The End of the World]] --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:13, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, I finished the review for the [[Life of a 13 year old‎]]. It is not very nice, but I tried to make sure it is not inflaming or anything. Although, honestly, I am not sure how else to describe it other than a misogynistic, masochistic, psychopathic masturbation story... Sadly, I don't think a single thing in the story turned me on. [[Smutty Sex Romp]] turns me on more than this story did... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, interesting. Lots of changes, but only changes xD So, how is everything? Hmm, I would direct you to some of my non-adult stories, but they are rather sparse. Do you happen to know Chinese? I have a new experiment I want to try, called [[Texting]]. But, right now it is a bunch of tests, and no real content. I have written down some of my thoughts on the talk page, but if you go there, I will warn you, do not read the stuff that has been blockquoted (the indented paragraph stuff), since that was dirty talk with someone that was messaging me one time. At least, not until you can read that stuff again. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:58, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I hate twister. It is a horrible game. But, we were high, and it was there. Strip poker, sure. Some truth or dare style games, some drinking games. Since I was pretty easy to "score" with, guys liked me. Strange that most were not guys my age. Honestly, I remember very little of that time. As I have mentioned to Teejay, at that time I was heavily into drugs. Someone calculated it once, and I used about $10,000 worth of drugs a month. Pot, coke, meth, crank, speed, xtc, LSD, alcohol. Mostly the powders though. I once wrote an interpretation of a song I found, Nickleback Figured You Out, that I explained how he could have been singing about me. I probably played other games, but I don't really remember. The sad part is, while I called other girls crack whores, I really was one... for us, a crack whore was a girl who slept with people for drugs, rather than money. It wasn't that hard to get me to take off my clothes...nah, never wrote about things like that, or the normal, 1 on 1 sex (Other than Slow Motion Love, which was based on me and my husband with a couple extras). Even exhibitionism is hard to write a real story with. One reason I set up the exhibitionist as an idea -> Consequence story. I took off my clothes. I walked around. People stared. The end. Meh, hard to figure out how to write it, and lets face it, I am not a romance novel writer. I know who is reading my stories. Males mostly. So, they do not want a love story. Well, I don't think they do. They want sex, and probably exciting sex. But me, I get turned on more by the situation. Where am I? Why are we here? What is special about this? Etc. So, I try to merge it together so I enjoy it and my readers enjoy it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:21, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

Do you mean this?
<blockquote>Welcome to the ever-so-wonderful world of 3.5 Dungeons and Dragons (4.0 isn't nearly complete enough yet).</blockquote>
If not, then sorry, I don't know what you mean xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:19, 1 July 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, through? No. It is an innie, not an outie=P On? Sort of. It is...awkward, trying to have sex through a hole like that. I have seen those porns too, and they aren't really realistic. So, think about the average length of a penis. After pushing into it as much as possible, you still lose a good inch or two. Then, think about how to align a vagina to the hole. If you try to go facing the wall, then it is almost impossible to get the penis in it, and when you try to go backwards, well, there is the padding around that area that gets in the way (Well, unless you are so flexable that you can bend yourself in half, and I am not sure about that either, since I cannot do it). So, what you end up with is about a max of 2-3 inches of penetration. Neither person can really move much, or else the guy just pops out, then you have to get it back inside. It is more frustrating. Fortunately, the time I tried it, the guy on the other side seemed willing to play along. No, I don't know who he was. I didn't set it up with someone, to see what it was like. I just did it at a real glory hole. It is one of those fantasies that sound more interesting than it is to really do. But, it was still exciting, even with all the awkwardness, simply because of the anonymity. One reason why I have not written about trying actual sex when I experimented with them. Because, how do I make it sound erotic, when it was more awkward, and not really that erotic outside of the mental thought? I mean, the "average male in a CYOS story" might be able to do it with no problem, but real men aren't 10-14 inches long...and sorry, I am not going to even want to imagine that to make it more erotic. I will just not bother writing it. I am not as good at situations I cannot close my eyes and imagine myself in. Does this answer your question? Honestly, it would be easier to imagine through a curtain or something. The fabric will move and mold, so you can have the "anonymous" sex without the awkwardness of a solid wall getting in the way. Or a cardboard wall? I honestly think those porns are using fake penises... If you want to try it, my recommendation is to stick a dildo on a wall. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:24, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

And you wonder why I wrote my rant story. Got tired of seeing story after story that completely dehumanized women. At one point I even took a year off this site completely. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:28, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

I noted one of your complaints to Teejay was how no one was actually making the characters real and understandable. I know it was for the oops you're naked story, but wondering what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider|Tales from a raider]] shorts I have been working on. True, I only have two tales so far, [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1|Bitch]] and [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Leader1|Greg]]. Ryley isn't done yet. But, wondering how well they do telling the story of the raiders, and how they came to be who they are today. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:23, 22 July 2016 (UTC)

"You can't fit a vagina through a gloryhole. You just can't." o.O xD lol, interesting caption... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:09, 5 August 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, I think doing reviews and trying to read every page of some of these stories just sort of...left me not wanting to come to the site. Not a permanent thing, no worries. I disappear and pop back up on many websites I visit, even this one. But, I must say, reading some fantasies some of the people here have about women...lol, I wish I could just swap my mind for them for a day, let them see exactly what it is like to be a woman. I mean, honestly, I still do not really get how people can really just turn off the switch in their brain that differentiates a human from an object. I mean, even I let myself be objectified, I know what it feels like, I know what it is. But, I honestly do not know how people can just do that. Even one night stands, random hookups, etc, I can't just look at them like a walking dick and tongue. I don't know how people can hurt other people. I don't mean BDSM hurt, I mean really hurt. I have found I actually enjoy spankings. I hate hurting people. I don't understand how people can really enjoy many of these things. I admit, sometimes I like the idea of being forced to do something, but again, that is because I want it. I guess it is more "justification". "No, I didn't want to be touched all over on the train, in front of all those people, their eyes watching me." I did, but not like I will admit it=P But, why do some people actually seem to think doing things against another's will is enjoyable? And why do some people seem to think that we secretly want something done to us when we really don't. If I want something done to me, I will make sure that it is known. Me flirting does not mean do something to me. It means I am in a flirting mood. Me pushing your hand against my pussy means I want something done to me. But I don't get those who want to do something against others will. I have been raped, I know it isn't about sex, it is about power over another and control, but I don't get it. Ask me, don't leave me with no choice. Don't take, but instead share. Does that mean I want it to always be gentle? No. I mean, if I go camping with 5 guys, and they say "You, five guys, want some fun", and I am in the mood, okay, I will say yes. "But we like it rough. Want to pretend?" Sure, I will go for it if I am in the mood. Set up a safe word, honor that, and then you can rip my clothes off, act like cavemen fucking some helpless girl, and violate me all you want until I say my safe word. See, that I can understand. But when I say no, then why do you want to try to do something that I do not want? Don't people think of how the other person feels?

Anyways, sorry, I am rambling, and just putting down some of my random thoughts. I will shut up now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

I have worn the more...adult...costumed before, and had sex while in them. In fact, one Halloween I dressed up as a German prostitute xD Is that what you mean? The naughty nurse, the naughty schoolgirl costumes? I have a pink "catholic school girl" style outfit. I love it, honestly ^.^ Or are you thinking more like some super hero costume or something? Never really done that.

Although, I have been interested in cosplay. Just never had the money for it. My family is poor, and sadly, so am I right now... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:27, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, German prostitutes vs. American prostitutes. Not sure what the difference is. My uncle was in the army and was stationed in Germany before he came back to the US. So, 3 of my cousins were actually German/US dual citizens. Honestly, all they did was dye my hair and say "poof". I have no real idea. Maybe they were just teasing me, being the naive American xD. Then again, I have been an American prostitute, just for a very short time. I was only 13 at the time, so I don't really remember it that much, so I honestly cannot tell you, as, while yes, I was sexually broken long before that age, I still did not understand things like what a prostitute was. It was the first time I had worn heels, makeup. I was in a short skirt with a sleeveless crop top. And remember, I am from the US, not from Taiwan. I did not come here until I was 18.

As for a santa suit, no, I have never worn one xD I have put on the fake beard thing. It was itchy and hot. And nah, I have not been with someone in a santa suit. I guess that kind of thing is just not my preference.

For a pink, catholic school girl outfit type of thing, well, imagine this: litbimg.rightinthebox.com/images/v/201308/aqoghh1377568920037.jpg, but pink. It is that style, the color is just pink=P But, it is not sold as a costume here, it is sold as an outfit. And mine is similar to this picture, but not exactly the same. Unfortunately, it seems the shop is no longer at the Miramar...Let me think about it. Maybe I will snap a picture of it for you sometime. Not giving any guarantees xD

As for SCP Foundation, never heard of it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:20, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Oh, I left this request with Teejay, but maybe you can check it, since you tend to be much more critical (Yes, I am copying and pasting the request, since I don't want to retype it xD).

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:47, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Well, aside from trying to get my entire talk page blocked (And fixing it), you still haven't let me know about the story I am working on. And if I am in a horror mood, I will try to give them a look. Right now, I am questioning the direction I am taking with Loli camping, but I still want feedback, even if the current stuff does not survive xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:16, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, more stuff xD btw, did you use that certain blocked word because of my Loli story? Wondering, do you understand what she represents? A non-loli Loli that makes fun of all the Loli stuff on this site. A girl who is so innocent that she doesn't actually realize what is being done to her is not good, and the way her mind works, she explains away the actions, finding innocent seeming justification for why something is happening. Then, it shows the consequences of those actions, unlike other users "Hey, we can just do all this shit to under age people in our story, and it is all good because nothing happens". We see the impact of those actions, like the principal being arrested. Like the veterinarian clinic being shut down after "something" happened (I will leave it to the readers imagination if the mother sued them, reported them to someone who took a form of action that caused them to go bankrupt or shut down completely, or whatever else). She is the epitome of the "Loli" stereotype that I have seen in all these stupid stories. Although, I admit, I am writing the camping one as just something I am imagining. I am not sure if I should even post my completed story using Loli's persona, or if I should put it as another character, since they do not 100% match who Loli is to me. I haven't honestly decided. But, I am still waiting for your feedback. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:25, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, here, you have said you are judgmental. A nice guy, but a judgmental nice guy. I just wrote, well, alot to Teejay. Honestly, I wrote to him because we have known each other for a while, and he actually understands me a bit. lol, sounds like I am somewhat like some of his ex's. But, you do not know me as well, so I wanted to know what you think of my, well, thing I wrote.

Sorry, it was really super long, so I don't want to rewrite it. I will just copy from Teejay's chat to yours. No worries, you aren't second string or anything. I am telling you because, well, you can see the same thing I had written to Teejay. I thought about posting for you at the same time, but I wrote so much, that I didn't want to type it all over again.

Anyways, here goes.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, is that the "If you are worried that you are crazy, you are not crazy. If you are crazy, you don't worry about it."? And no, I know I am not a sociopath, because what I am doing to Loli, I am doing to me. I am the one I see, having this done to me, as I write about it being done to her. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, favorite from Fallout? Honestly, cannot say. In 3, I enjoyed killing the slavers, simply because they sold slaves...in 4, sadly, I have never finished it, so cannot say. I actually liked Moria. She was a bit nuts, but funny. I normally do good things, but tend to play a sneaky type. I don't do good at those games, although I do better at them than the first person shooter kind. A (male) friend once informed me that males were better at the first person, females better at the third person. No idea if it is true, but yeah, I suck at the first ones xD

For religion, although my husband does believe, and even I believe in some form of higher power, I don't really think it is the way religion says. I more like the way it is in Piers Anthony's world (An author that I both like and hate...) in the incarnations of immortality. That you go where you believe. If you believe in heaven and hell, then off you go. If you believe in reincarnation, then welcome back. If you believe there is nothing, then goodbye forever. Or not. I honestly cannot say. It is a great idea, that you will live on forever with your loved ones, and when they die, they are not gone. But, no idea if it is true. I don't really pay attention to the writings or videos or whatever most of the time. Sure, some are so stupid that they are funny, but I have better things to do. Like imagine myself as Loli=P Oh, last week was fun. I need to sit back down with her, but the site has been being stupid. But, I grew up around religion. LDS, Christians, born again Christians. I have known more than a few baptists. Now Catholics. I always tell my husband that religion is what makes people fight. Spirituality is what makes people better. I personally prefer to avoid religion overall. "Ain't nobody got time for that". But yeah, I see what you mean. Part of the root of why I am messed up, that I was told I was evil when I was young. That even now, I feel guilt just for thoughts that are labeled as bad. I fight them, but I feel them. I will sit there and point out why views are harmful and bad, but I internalize the thoughts that I am evil. Like, I have made my opinion known more than once on here about my views around nudity. I see no problem with it. Especially if you think about women nude on top. Why? Because it is not a reproductive organ, so why is it pornographic? Notice how in my Loli story, I have very little about her breasts? Because, I do not really get the fascination with them. Oh, I use that fascination, I am aware of that. I just don't understand it. I mean, if I give people views (For example, this weekend, I was scootering. It started just completely pouring, and I was in a shirt that ended up, well, pretty much see through, and no, I did not have a bra. One woman was scootering and gave me a look of disgust. Her son made some noise. Not the woo hoo like they would in the US, but something. Others definitely noticed too, but I only remember the mother and son clearly xD No, it was not intentional, but then again, if I knew it would rain, I might have worn it intentionally), well, that is because I know that people view it this way. But, to me, it should not be this way. It is exciting only because it excited others, not because I find it exciting. It was like when I was young. I never cried when people died. When my grandparents died, I never once cried because of their death. I cried because of the others crying. I was crying for their pain. Oh, I felt loss, but I didn't cry for it. It may sound cold, but...that is just the way I am. On shows, movies, etc, super sad part of the movie. I will cry in sympathy with the person on the screen, not over the sad even that made the character cry.

Sometimes, I have joked that I am more of a reactionist than anything. I like to react, not initiate. I tend to react, not to do something first. And, I like to do strange things sometimes just to see how others will react.

Like, one time, it was raining, and I mean raining alot. I don't quite remember if it was a typhoon, or was just before or after. So, I went down to my scooter to go out and get something. Now, I did honestly think about scootering in nothing but a rain coat. Or even about scootering in my underclothes only. But, what I did do was go back upstairs and change to a bikini. Hey, some show, no trouble, right? Feel sexy, running around in a two piece, without worry about anything. lol, I got to the store, took off the raincoat, and went in. Soon, two police showed up. They inspected me and left. Through my limited Chinese, and a bit of guessing, it seems someone had seen me go into the store in a bikini and thought I was in my bra and panties. So, they called the police. It didn't take the police long to figure it out, and I don't think they wanted to try to talk to me much, since I never speak Chinese to police. They did check my outfit, but it is not that difficult to tell the difference between a bikini and bra + panties...

Meh, see, off I go wherever my mind takes me. So, yes, I grew up around stupid religion stuff, but I prefer to stay away from it, as I can always find something better to do. Even random youtube videos is better than that xD

btw, you have not critiqued my story yet xD Just put your notes in parenthesis or something. I want to make it believable. While it does excite me, no matter what it seems like above where I ask how I could allow Loli to go through that, I do want to make it good for readers. It is in no means a full story, complete in anything, etc. It is a pure sex story. But, I do want to make it better while still using Loli's voice. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:52, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, okay, I changed the pic in my current status back to the one before this one. Still not sure what is wrong though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:35, 14 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries, have not been ignoring you. I just have not really been on the site lately. Eh, welcome to moody me. I have my moods. In this case, I am not really talking about when I am annoyed at someone, or just not feeling very happy. What I mean by moods is, I have to be in the right mood for something specific. And lately, that mood has not really been an "Editthis" mood. Haven't really felt sexual or horny, and while I have been trying to continue to learn how to program, I have not really wanted to add to my programming guides as much as just try to learn myself. Been working on my Chinese, and was playing No Woman's Sky (Yes yes, I know, it is "No Man's Sky"...don't care. Many women are also playing it=P) for a while. I like the game, but when we went to the southern part of Taiwan to visit my husband's family, I couldn't really play, so sort of dropped out of the mood for vast, planetary exploration. It is fun, but my laptop is not good enough for it. I thought about writing some stories based on it, but honestly, it is rather hard to think of stories while playing it. It is just an exploration/survival game. As for Loli's camping story, well, as I haven't really found myself in that mood, I haven't expanded it lately xD Plus, I am not sure what people think of it, to know if I am doing it right (Yes, it is a pure "taking sexual advantage of an innocent girl that does not understand what is being done to her", so don't expect much story, just an evolution of sexual situations). I really do want to write a real story, but am not good with the whole process. I do better with short stories. "How do I make sure characters are more than two dimensional stereotypes?" "How do I keep the plot moving, and not make it stale?" "How do I make interesting twists, and keep the reader engaged?" "How do I keep from repeating myself, or making things sound too similar?" This is part of my problem. I read long books, like Clan of the Cave Bear, and yet, cannot really seem to bring my reading experience, how the authors keep the story flowing and going in an interesting manner, to my writing experience. Not something I need to worry about as much with short stories, but something that becomes more of an issue with longer stories. Lets face it, I have had better luck taking other people's stories and adapting them to my perspective. lol, me and my husband have discussed this before. I am better at taking something and improving it, rather than trying to write something new. I am not really that original of a thinker I guess. One reason I have stuck more to sex stories than anything. Growing up, I experienced three main things that stick out in my head. Sexual dysfunction, drugs, and self loathing. Writing about drugs is hard. It is difficult to explain what it feels like when you see that white line in front of you. While you chop it up, examining it to make sure it is a fine powder with no large chunks. What it feels like to stick a straw in your nose, to snort a line, to feel that burning sensation, and the acidic taste running down the back of your throat. What it feels like when the drugs kick in, when the world starts to become a different place. Sometimes wonderful, sometimes extraordinary, sometimes scary, but a different world all the same. What it feels like with energy running up and down your body, like you can do anything. Or what it feels like to stare at the world in wonder, finding humor and enjoyment in even the most trivial, stupid things. It is really difficult to actually describe those. As for the self loathing, wishing I would just die, hating myself and everything. Well, then I just come across as whiny and neurotic. It doesn't make a good story, writing about how it feels to be completely without hope. lol, that is why the only two I have written in short bursts is the reader having something bad happen to them. Too many stories are all "Hey, it was difficult, we lost people, but we survived". I wanted one where, guess what, you died. No happy ending. Forget holding hands and cuddling at the end. Just die in a horrifying way. Sometime I will also write one dealing with rape, but rape is hard, since I have panic attacks sometimes writing about rape. But, I don't think it will be like my real life, a survivor story. It will be something with a bad ending, not a good ending. I am a survivor, but I don't think I could really be like some of the women who speak out, who go and talk to entire groups about their experiences, and about how to make the world better. I personally prefer to just forget it and move on. But, that is for a day when I am in the right mood. I thought about making Loli's camping story like that, but preferred the way I am doing it now. I liked imagining myself there, doing those things, and not really knowing what it really was so I wouldn't know I should feel a specific way. I wish I could do that myself. Do things without knowing the consequences, so I would not feel bad, or guilty, or whatever negative emotion. Anyways, sorry, not sure when I will really be "back" back to this site, but I will be, no worries. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 30 September 2016 (UTC)

==DirtyMe's new section==
Sorry, I removed the http in front of that link so it will not mess up people trying to leave me a message.

So, I went to his page. Honestly, not overly interested in bothering to preview his work. I only needed to look at the book pics, read a little of the "includes multiple partners, etc" category stuff, and note things like some girl having sex with goblins to know, not something I am that interested in. I guess the author has a thing for the superhero type of character?

Yeah, I prefer human stories. Yes, I know what you mean by "will do anything with anyone". That is one reason I stopped writing my original story on here, Dirty Me. Because I found myself trying to write exactly like that, where it is just dirty me having sex with everyone all the time. Honestly, not because I wanted that for my character, but because I thought that would be the only way to keep people reading my story, since I write very differently from many of the people on this site. Something about trying to please all the people all the time? Sigh, is my self esteem showing, when I just try to make people happy and pay attention? Don't peek, turn around while I try to cover it up. Okay, you can peek. Not like my self esteem is that well hidden anyways. Too many people have seen it already, and used it for their own pleasure. And another *sigh*. Seems this website is having lots of problems lately. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:20, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

"Asa thinks that her chest is larger then she'd like for it to be though there is no reason given for her distress."

I can give you some reasons. It is inconvenient and causes both specific social reactions that may be unwanted and can lead to physical discomfort.

One thing with larger breasts, you tend to be targeted more by males, and reactions by other women can also be rather negative, like you are purposely trying to appear more sexual, even if you are doing nothing else different. Women with larger breasts tend to be hit on, solicited, and approached much more, like part of your physical anatomy makes you more special than others. She would get stared at more often, objectified more often, and in a setting like high school, teased and ridiculed more often.

For physical issues, they also tend to lead to increased levels of backpain and neck pain.

You also find it harder to get clothes that fit properly, leading to more limited selection.

Here, I recommend reading this: www.webmd.com/beauty/breast-reduction

Target the "why it is done" section. I know, it seems like most of the writers on here are "hey, bigger is better", but do not really think of what it is like for the woman. I am 34C, and even I have discomfort at certain times. Now imagine what it would be like for someone with a larger chest than me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

Well, a couple new things since I last came on xD

For the breasts, you and me were the ones originally discussing it when I got annoyed at seeing so many stories being posted with "Girl with DD cups". So yeah, I hope you know since we discussed it xD

For the transgender question, I don't know. I don't have conflicts with my gender. I may have had an abiding hatred towards men in the past, but that is a different issue. Sometimes I wonder if that is why I an Bi. Being mistreated at the hands of males. But, for the transgender question, I would need to ask my sister in law, who is a female to male transgender (that sadly will never do anything about it, since it is "shameful" to her family) and another friend that is male to female, but sadly I have not talked to her in a while.

All I really know is, what they really want is to be accepted as the gender they identify with, not to be put in some special light because of their conflicts between their birth gender and identified gender (If that is what you call it. Sorry, I have not been following many of the LGBT stuff lately since I just really never feel like going on facebook anymore). But, who knows, maybe this isn't true for all. I honestly cannot tell you. I know for my sister in law, basically, if she was able to undergo everything and do a full gender change, she would just want to be a normal male. Not some special "I was born female but always knew I was male", but to actually be thought of as male, be treated as a male, etc. Sorry, hope this helps. I guess you would need to ask someone who understands more, because sadly, I don't, really. I try to empathize, to be supportive, but it is a strange concept to me. Hmm, guess how you would be able to empathize with a female, but never be able to truly understand. Or how I can try to empathize with a male, but will never truly understand. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 26 October 2016 (UTC)

lol, I notice you corrected alot of the question you asked me about how transgender people feel, but you didn't really respond to it xD

For your last question: Do I ever get tired of sex.

Of course. I have my moods. I know, people often confuse my openness, my willingness to write about taboo sexuality, and my general fuck you to how people try to stick a label on a woman about her sexual choices and the type of person she is, have resulted in many people thinking I am some sort of nymphomaniac, or that I am willing to do absolutely anything, or that I have no standards or whatever.

I ran into this problem alot on a website I was a member of that has now disappeared. See, on there, I was willing to have dirty talk, have sexual fantasy stories, interactive stories, things like that. At first, I tried to keep up with people messaging me, tried to make sure they were happy with the story that I wrote with them, etc. Finally, I got overwhelmed and fed up, and put up a new message that, sure, send me your stories, your fantasies, whatever, and if I am in the mood, I will play along.

I know. I talk about how, if it wasn't for the way society judges women, I would have no problem having sex for money. I would have no problem doing porn. I would have no problem with random, public, sexual encounters. Yes, I know I have mentioned before that hey, if I was in the mood, I would be willing to walk through the mall and let anyone have their way with me, at any time. I am pretty open about who I am and how I feel. I don't think nudity is a bad thing. Even nudity that you may be uncomfortable with, like those with less than perfect bodies. I don't know why we as a society are fine with seeing violence, but one nipple and everyone goes insane. We are born without clothes. Clothes were for protection from nature, not to cover up naughty bits. I am fine with sexuality. While there are of course issues around public health, I personally do not feel the need to get all grossed out and make a complete and total scene if someone is having sex in the alley behind the bar, or on the beach, or in the middle of their backyard in their swimming pool. Shit, I honestly would not really have a problem if I was shopping and found two people having sex in the middle of the store. lol, I would probably stay and watch.

But, I also understand that my openness often leads to others thinking I am something I am not. That I am some whore, or cheat, or someone who will have sex with anyone, anywhere.

To me, it is about choice. As long as you are not harming others, having sex with someone against their will, or sitting in the middle of the food isle, cumming all over the vegetables, then I don't care. If I don't want to see it, I will walk away. Same as if I don't want to see two people kissing in public.

But yes, my openness, my tendency to enjoy sex, to enjoy things that other people may not think are acceptable, has lead many to think I am like the energizer bunny or something. That I can keep going and going and going. I can't. I don't want to.

When I am in the mood, I will do things to you that would make you scream. When I am not in the mood, don't bother trying. I do have a temper, and can explode when people keep bugging me about something after I have said no. I get sore. I get tired. I get sick. I get bored. I have other things on my mind. I am just not interested at the time. You know, whatever reasons. As I mentioned, many of my sex stories that are based on my real life experience aren't always as "erotic" as they sound in the story. Sometimes, they are something that was done to me, with me just being passive. Sometimes they are things that had been tried, yet did not really work as well as the story makes it sound. My public use story on my blog. Not everything in it happened exactly that way (In fact, much like most of my life, I only remember bits and pieces of it. I honestly do not remember most of my life. Even now, don't ask me what was going on last year, outside of me being a stay at home mom, because I don't really know.). And not everything went as smoothly as I put. But, do we really want a sex story with bumbling, awkward sex? Unless you are writing about your first time, probably not.

Does this help clarify the "about me"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 3 November 2016 (UTC)

lol, I was wondering who sent me that email, but I noticed your response yesterday. I probably have many of them in my large collection of pirated ebooks xD Too bad I have no time for reading. My son is a major handful, so I have to always keep an eye on him, even when I am not in the same room -.-

Thanksgiving, well, nothing. Since that specific day is US oriented, nothing happens here. But yes, I used to spend thanksgivings with the family. One side of my family is moderate, I have 5 cousins. The other side of the family is...large. I think I lost track when I hit 28 cousins and second cousins...there are more than 28. But, my dad came from a farming family. 7 brothers and sisters. And each with their own kids, from 2-6, and their kids with kids now...well, I don't even know all my cousins...

Funny, I have never thought about sex that way. Yes, it can be painful, especially when excited guys forget that you cannot just shove bulbous parts inside holes without getting them all ready. But, I have never thought of it the way you do. Honestly, one of my favorite parts of sex, well, outside orgasming=P, is watching the penis completely disappear. Watching where we meet, and seeing this thing just poof, it's gone. It still fascinates me. I don't really like how the parts look. I mean, I don't think a vagina is that attractive. I definitely don't think a penis is attractive. But, that state, where me and someone is joined, together, and I possess him. Like I am devouring him. When I am having sex, at least, when I am doing it because I want it, it feels like I am in control. Like I am superior. It just, it always seems surreal to me. "Hey, I just stole your 'precious'". I guess it is hard to put to words.

As for how I feel, well, this is life. Life has its ups and down. Just, I have bad enough self esteem already, so people start bitching and complaining at me, and it just makes me feel small and stupid. Like maybe I just can't do anything right. Eh, not sure what to do about it. If there is anything I can do about it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

lol, I have no idea how to answer that. I mean, how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? I mean, how you see the world, how you react with it, what you do in it, would all be different. If that happened, guess I would need to take some time to try to figure out what it would mean for me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:27, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, not sure about Darky. You two got in an argument or something? For sex scenes, I have done both, written everything and just given the general situation. I don't really mind either, it just depends on how it is done. Yeah, I know you have heard it more than once, but it just depends on my mood. And to be honest, even those that are horrible will sometimes get me to imagining. That is the key for me, if it is something that sparks my own imagination. I don't always care of they wrote something with good quality, because I take it where my imagination goes. Of course, that can also be bad too, like the infinity one that made me nauseous. Where the girl was having sex with horses. I almost threw up reading that. So, sometimes sparking me to see it in my mind is bad... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:48, 21 December 2016 (UTC)

I sent you a reply about the books. Hope you enjoy. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:40, 23 December 2016 (UTC)

lol, reading your thoughts, you do not know how much I want to make random comments in the discussion pages xD

For the sex scenes one, I thought about describing a girl who had kidnapped a guy, tied him to the bed, and put a blue pill in his mouth, then proceeded to use him until it wore off xD

Or the about sex one, I thought about asking if you are secure with your feminine side, because you sound a bit like me on that xD It is not "He fucked her, she fucked him, they fucked and fucked and fucked" that is interesting. It is not about how tongues lick shafts while someone is giving a blowjob, or how tongues run roughly against clits while someone is pleasuring a woman.

It is about the fact that tongues are licking shafts in the middle of the dressing room, and the guy is busy moaning, which he will be quite embarrassed about when he walks out of the dressing room and sees everyone staring. It is about the situation. It is about the feelings and experiences, not about parts being put in other parts xD

It is about her secret shame, as she willingly goes into the alley behind the bar and lets the guy pull up her dress, pull down her panties, shove her against the wall, and grunt like a drunken caveman. It is about the fact that, although she finds him to be a poor partner, that she is secretly excited that they are in that alley, where anyone else can stumble across them. It is about the fact that they are not using birth control, and she is both turned on and scared of what can happen, the excitement fueling her, the risky behavior making her feel alive. Sorry, only gotten to those two thoughts so far xD

God dammit, now I am horny... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:08, 23 December 2016 (UTC)

lol, changed your mind on me writing sex scenes for you? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:55, 20 February 2017 (UTC)

Eh, I have been here more recently than two months, but normally just to see if I had any messages, and see what is new on the recent changes tabs. Just have not been actually doing anything on here.

Here you go, a nice, hot, sex scene:

They stumbled into the house, already pulling and tugging at each others clothes. The playful teasing at the restaurant, the impassioned kisses as they walked along the beach, clouded their heads. The taste of him on her lips, the taste of her on his. She drank in the scent of him as he frantically pulled at her shirt, tangling it up, rather than taking it off, in his haste.

They stumbled over the couch, him flat on his back, her sprawled on top of him. He looked dazed for a minute, as she watched him carefully, wondering if he was okay.

Once his head cleared, he sat up, and kissed her again. This time his hands were able to slip her top off, over her head. She returned the favor, pulling his shirt off, then removing her bra. They embraced again, skin to skin. His mouth left her lips, gently biting and sucking on her neck. She gasped at the tickling pleasure.

She stood up, pulling off her pants, then watched him as he pulled off his. Soon, they stood in front of each other, admiring each other in their underwear.

He scooped her up, then laid her down on the couch. Her eyes shot wide as his finger gripped her panties, pulling them off. She reached behind her and undid her bra, pulling it off, as his boxers fell to the floor.

They looked at each other, drinking in the others naked form, before embracing again, kissing again, merging into one, their minds lost in the feel of the other, on, under, inside. The clock on the wall ticked away as the two enjoyed their partner's body. Seconds. Minutes. An hour. Two.

He finally collapsed, exhausted. They wiggled around, finding just the right spot, and lay together, holding their lover as their bodies drank in their night of passion. Sleep came shortly after, where they would lay together until the next morning. To see what tomorrow would bring.

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:04, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, I don't know. I think I bookmarked it once while I was high. Or something, because I don't really remember anything about it. So, I was looking through my bookmarks, and found this site. Asked myself "What is this". Read some stories, and thought about contributing to SSR, but, Platypus intimidated me (Not by something directed towards me, but by the way he tends to address others adding if their stuff is not good enough, and I didn't think mine was), so, I started the dirty me story. Around off and on ever since there, and like to try out different things time to time while I am around. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:06, 6 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, your one red haired female in anime school, the pervert xD Is that a hint to me? I haven't watched much anime, but it didn't seem like a very...anime path. Anyways, I feel a little like writing, but not sure what you would like written. Anything specific you want me to try? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 7 March 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, realized you had not written that path. But I guess the question above is still the same xD Actually, was just thinking of writing another rant, where basically, the girl goes around raping every guy she finds attractive. Seems to be a running theme. "Guy finds girl hot, guy tries to have sex with her, girl says no, guy doesn't let that get in the way, girl submits, and, nothing. He finishes, then goes off to his next victim." Maybe I can even include the devastation of all the guys who are victims of her rape rampage. Thinking about it anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:33, 7 March 2017 (UTC)

Hmm, ethical slut? Never heard that term before...although, yes I looked it up after seeing your comment. Seems like the only "unethical" slut may be someone who is deceitful? Sure, you can use me in your story, I have no problem with that.

As for the story, why not just take your current work, and make a completely separate one. That one only has 96 pages, and it looks like many of them are written by others, so should not be hard to port over your work. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:16, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

[[Masochist me]] Thoughts? Created for me to write some of my...dark...fantasies... I know, not much there yet. But god start?

Edit: Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:55, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

Wow, not even some of my stories are worthy of a novel or something? I think I had some pretty good paths in [[Dirty Me]]. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:43, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

wow, welcome back. Thought I had done something wrong and you had completely poofed xD

To answer your question: Personally, while I think there is "something" beyond us, I am not sure I believe in a specific "God" at all. Neither is scary really. Well, unless you have the all powerful god that decides "This experiment is a bust. Let me hit delete and try again". Then again, won't the universe sort of do that for us anyways? I mean, everyone searched for their way to make a mark, to be important for something, but if you look up in the sky, think about all those places out there, do we really matter much? Then again, I have never thought much of myself, so maybe this is just my opinion based on me, rather than based on anything else. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:09, 22 May 2017 (UTC)

<i>Oh, I'm pissed off but it requires more effort to actually DO something.</i>

So, what are you pissed about? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:42, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

No, never even seen Nudisma Terena. I have been writing [[Masochist me]] though. But sadly, haven't been in a writing mood, and other than the planning page, have not gotten to much of the masochist part... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:23, 28 May 2017 (UTC)

Sure, you can leave me suggestions. I just wasn't sure if you were able to, as it is that time of the year. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 10 June 2017 (UTC)

This is one of my rants. I forget which story on this site I was originally making fun of with it. Anyways, since I don't remember the source reference, I am just writing it until complete, and decided to throw in boink games. Honestly, the hidden was written more as a sex story than as a satire or parody of something else on this site, so that if someone really wants to, they can have a naughty story, but hidden=P

Why boink? Well, it can't be sex, because she thinks sex is where two people kiss. You know, because of movies, and everyone says "sex scene", and in the scenes, people are always rolling around and kissing. This allows people to have sex with her without her realizing what she is doing, preserving her innocence. Then, she can have guilt free sex, without worry about the repercussions, consequences, etc. I guess you forgot when I mentioned this story to you and Teejay.

Anyways, so, think about the other words for sex. Fucking. Making love. Sleeping together. Do it. Fornicate. Hump. Making babies. Screw. Bang. See, some of these, Loli, with her personality, would not understand. She hates the word fuck, so fucking would not work. She doesn't love them, so why would they make love? And they definitely aren't sleeping, so sleeping together would be strange. I don't think any of them want to "make babies". Some of the other words might be just fine to have used, but boink is sort of a cute word, and doesn't sound dirty. So, she was told it was boinking, because few people think of that as slang for sex, it is a cute word, and, eh, don't know. Just what I went with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:47, 11 June 2017 (UTC)

Here, let me explain a little better. First, I guess you should read more of the Loli rants. Basically, she is someone who was raised in such an environment where she did not learn about sex, about the human body, and about being careful around guys. She is completely "innocent". Part of the commentary on this is that our society goes so out of their way to protect the children that they harm them more by not teaching them about the human body and human sexuality. Note how she never calls it penis and vagina, never calls it pussy and cock. It is always some cute name. Think about people you know, people who always have some strange name for human genitals. Some people think that the human body is dirty, so try to hide it behind these cute names. I think that harms people by making the body something evil and dirty. Same with sex. To her parents, sex is something bad, something dirty. So, they refuse to allow her to actually learn, so she will be more knowledgeable. So, instead, she sees the sex scenes, sees people talk about sex scenes, and equates sex with the kissing and rolling around that she sees on TV. Here, in Taiwan, I knew a woman who knew nothing about sex. She thought that sex was kissing. So, this isn't based on nothing, there are some people who have been sheltered so much that they honestly don't know. In fact, the woman I know was letting her boyfriend have sex with her, but not letting him kiss her. Because she really did think that was sex. Then, in the camping story, we see how the guys take advantage of her. Like you see many times in the stories here. Her innocence is used against her, and she gets used by them. Note how there are many times the guys comment "Don't ruin it for us" when someone comes to close to letting her know they are taking advantage of her. But, I still try to make sure the stories have the correct elements for those who just want a shallow sex story. a.k.a: something some people can get off on. Even for those though, I will have a real repercussion. Like with the principal, a child predator. Note that she finds "innocent" ways to explain it, leaving Loli as an innocent character. But the principal in one choice gets arrested. Another story, she has sex with the dog because some idiot thinks it is funny to tell her to "help it" by giving her something to search that shows a woman having sex with a dog. Even with the camping story, 5 guys having sex with her almost every day, multiple times a day, multiple times each time, and with no means of birth control. She doesn't understand because they perpetuate the misunderstandings she has in order to use her for their own gratification. I remember commenting on this to you and Teejay, wondering if something is wrong with me. In part, because I was enjoying imagining myself in Loli's place. Writing about her basically being a victim because she doesn't know better. Again, this is also why her name is Loli, because she is designed to make fun of all the "Loli" stories on here. But, I get turned on by the camping one by the idea of carefree sex, being able to do so without being guilty, without knowing there are consequences. But even this story, the consequences will be a thoroughly pregnant Loli delivered to her parents, not knowing how that happened, because she never once had "sex". So, I guess you can think of it in any way you wish. Same with any other reader. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:01, 11 June 2017 (UTC)

Sure, I have thought about writing those before. But, at least from a woman's point of view, the horror part would be rape, mutilation, and being rendered helpless to do anything about it, hopeless of an escape. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:19, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Just add in more than one category:<br>
<nowiki>[[Category:1]]</nowiki><br>
<nowiki>[[Category:2]]</nowiki><br>
<nowiki>[[Category:3]]</nowiki>

The hard part is trying to figure out how you want to structure them.

Like in [[The Review/Adult Stories/A Big Ugly Story]], I included:<br>
<nowiki>[[Category:The Review|A Big Ugly Story]]</nowiki><br>
<nowiki>[[Category:The Review - Adult Stories|A Big Ugly Story]]</nowiki><br>

I would say you could check [[Dirty Me]], but not sure you can look over those stories. I did lots of different things with that. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:31, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

''Hey, DirtyMe. Mind rewriting this scene into something more...structurally appealing? Like, you know, an actual book or something?''

Do you mean you want something added so it makes more sense, or that the page should be rewritten completely? I checked the following page, which builds on the "she was exposed in public", so not sure you could actually remove that without changing other pages. Honestly, the author(s) just seemed to build a story about her being humiliated, but being secretly turned on by it. I mean, sure, I could imagine trying to put on a look of suffering while secretly enjoying being looked at, touched, humiliated, so I could see if I could use the spirit of the page and just do either some adjustments or rewrite that keeps that spirit. Or there are other ways to make sure it is consistent with the next page but change the page completely. I just am not sure about a total change, since I hate removing other's writing completely. I mean, good or bad, it is their creation. It seems better to just add to it and make minor adjustments, rather than completely rewrite it. Let me know what you are thinking about on this.

PS. I looked at your female elf paladin review. I don't know much about this stuff either, so not sure if I could write it to match whatever the races in the world is like. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:58, 15 June 2017 (UTC)

I have started a rework of [[FemBard: Look for a suitable costume for the party tonight]], but would like you to read over what I have so far and what notes I have made to let me know if I am getting the information right. Sorry, I am not sure about the dungeons and dragons thing, so do not know if my generic fantasy references fit this world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:56, 19 June 2017 (UTC)

And question, in [[FemBard: Compensate the guy in a nearby alley]], this makes no sense. The story just started, and we do not know what information the guy has? I am sorry, but here I am, some adventurer, and the guys says "I have information, but suck my dick for it", shouldn't I find out if the information is valuable enough? And what is with the "Hey, keep sucking or we put this arrow through his head"? I don't know this guy, I don't know if the information is worth it, and wouldn't I be more worried about them putting an arrow through my head than worried about what they do to this random guy who has "information"? I mean, the conclusion sort of mentions that there was no information, just a setup anyways, so how well would you have known this informant anyways to do any of this?

Then we have the next step after the costume, [[FemBard: Nab some food at a nearby tavern]]. Again, this makes no sense. Unless strangers are fair game, most places would not allow this, because soon, no one would stop there because they would be afraid to be robbed with the owner authorizing it. And what is even the point of this? "I want to see her tits, so you go steal her coins, and we will not give them back until you show them to us". Really? This makes no sense.

And last, there is this: [[FemBard: Just go to the costume party.]]. I thought the character had already went to the party after selecting her costume. Where is all the groping and pawing happening, at the guys clothing shop? I am confused. Should I fix some of what I wrote? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:02, 19 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, finished I think. I added more naughty parts, and figured, if the character is willing to just start sucking on some guys penis she didn't know just for some vague "information", that for the gold the original author wrote, she would have no issues just fucking the tailor. So, there is a sex scene in there now. But I tried to make sure that it was something reasonable. You can see the cold calculation in it by how she acts after he is done. And after doing some research, having sex with him seems more reasonable for the 5 gold than "show yourself topless". I also put a little explanation in there about that based on the research I found. I will let you look it over and let me know if everything is as expected. Feel free to modify as needed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:56, 20 June 2017 (UTC)

lol, noticed you deleted your review. I had a quick look again at what you mentioned. I understand what you mean about the costume for the times. I tried hard to find what kinds of costumes people might have worn during that time, and had little luck. My inspiration actually comes from a different novel series, where the costumes for festivals were painted masks and clothes worn that was designed to look like animals and birds. It was all I could think of. The one with the feathers that barely covered anything was a direct inspiration from that series in fact.

But, I also notice you mention the exploitation and creepy behavior. I wanted to change a bit, but I was afraid that it would not really match well with the rest of the story, so I tried to keep the main points the author made, but in a more reasonable way. I also wrote the sex scene because, well, it made more sense. I checked some sites and found the reddit explanation of how currency works. The reddit post said the average laborer would make about 2 silver a week. 10 silver is 1 gold. So, 5 weeks worth of wages for 1 gold. 10 gold would have been 50 weeks of common laborer wages. It seems silly that he would be willing to pay almost a years wages (Less than a year, since he was skilled, but the material I read wasn't covering that, so I cannot estimate how much a tailor would normally make). So, I wondered "What would the shopkeeper, who had a really good day, be willing to pay the 5 gold the original author mentions for". Sex was the only thing I could think of, and well, pretty much every page was filled with sex, so it made sense that for that much money, she would be willing to. It helps also show more character, that she is not innocent, and that sex is not exactly foreign or something she is shy about doing. I thought it helped show more of her, and why she is willing to do the things she does in the other paths (Like a blowjob for information from a questionable source). I also tried to keep the groping, as the original author put, but instead it was more like people grabbing her as they squeezed by into the shop. Even the toplessness was explained. Not shoddy work, but instead young boys taking advantage of the situation, sneaking up behind her and cutting her top, then quickly ripping it away before she had a chance to react. Then, well, whoever is reading this to see the tales of "The great exploitable bard" can still see her exploited. I hint that she felt some secret thrill, but show that she is overall not happy about the situation. I even made sure that the page showed that she was not some helpless female, doing what everyone wanted because she was too weak and could not defend herself with the dagger part, and her threatening the tailor. Not the weak, helpless bard that doesn't do anything because she is powerless, and is secretly thrilled being pawed at and exposed, but the calculating bard that can defend herself to some point, but knows there are times when she needs to tolerate the situation.

Anyways, not sure what else could be done without rewriting every page of the female bards path, and I didn't want to make it completely inconsistent. Even with this, I know that it still sounds different than the other pages. At least it has some explanation, some things that make sense and help shape the character. Just wanted to let you know why I rewrote it like this. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:57, 21 June 2017 (UTC)

Welcome back. So, now that you can read the D&D story again, any word on the rewrite? What you were expecting, or no? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:41, 5 July 2017 (UTC)

Let's put it into motion<br>
I'mma give you a promotion<br>
I'll make it feel like a vacay, turn the bed into an ocean<br>
We don't need nobody, I just need your body<br>
Nothin' but sheets in between us, ain't no getting off early<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:32, 19 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, trying to tell me you don't like Fifth Harmony? At least you responded finally, thought you were avoiding me. You never did tell me what you think of the rewrite. Actually, you don't seem to be talking to much of anyone on here since you got back xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

P.S.:

Is it too late now to say sorry?<br>
'Cause I'm missing more than just your body, oh<br>
Is it too late now to say sorry?<br>
Yeah, I know-oh-oh, that I let you down<br>
Is it too late to say I'm sorry now?<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:08, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

So, guess you don't like the page rework I did? I notice you aren't bothering to message me anymore... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:25, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

She was captivating, hypnotizing. I mean, it's not like strippers are anything new around here. The subtle, sultry way she slid her gloves off. Each button, undone one by one, a slow dance calling attention to each as they popped off. You know what the guys always say: I so want to get inside her, get under her clothes. Her skirt dropping to the stage, showing off her silky lace. Soon, we were able to find out, do the curtains match the drapes. Yes, they did, red on top, red under the silk. But, not like it's really that erotic, that breathtaking, that exciting. Just another woman, peeling off her clothes. Once she stood there, her garments discarded, she make it more intimate. Let us see what was underneath. What was inside. My breath caught with the first unveiling. She gripped the skin of her fingers, and slowly, teasingly, peeled back the soft, pink flesh. Crimson dripped, so wet, so warm. Soon, the fleshy surrounding was off, veiny, letting us see inside her. The crowd gasped at the erotic, lewd behavior. A woman stripped of clothes is almost normal in these parts. A woman stripped of herself, something else completely. She peeled back the skin on the rest of her hand, and we were able to see those insides. Not the same level of erotic as legs parted, letting men see inside, but like herself parted, letting everyone see inside. The flesh of her arms, of her legs, discarded on to the stage. There, we could see everything, beyond everything. A beating heart, held inside her delicate ribs, thumping. Thumping. Thumping. There, her ovaries. Those that made her an object of lust. Their ability to release eggs, ready for the little, wriggling, writhing sperm to attach to, to implant into. The intestines, delicately folded, again, again, from small to large, from large to small, depending on the path you examined. This was new, exciting, enthralling. Shock and awe. To bare yourself so much, to be so completely naked. Many left in a huff of the shameful behavior. Men, women, others, that would just watch if this woman stripped to her skin, would not even comment if she went further, copulated on the stage. But this, this behavior, baring yourself so much. Some might think it is a sin. It's not. Somewhere I have heard it said, it isn't a sin, to strip off the skin, and get naked right down to your bones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:12, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, I notice you have made lots of small edits. Yeah, sadly, my English is getting worse. At least my Chinese is getting a bit better now. Anyways, for the D&D, not sure what to do with them. I had the existing page on the other rework, but honestly, writing it from scratch, not sure it is something I will do well. Not when I have nothing in mind for it. Honestly, I read the options, and the thoughts that come to my head is "Sure, whip it out. With that map in your hand, bet I can bite, grab, and run before you can recover to tell the guards anything other than 'AHHHHHHH'", and the "Lets start now option" just makes me wonder if he is planning on trying to have sex with her right there in front of the shop. For some reason, I doubt a shop owner would do that right there in front of their shop. They need to maintain a certain level of respectability if they own a shop, and I don't think that is something that will maintain that community respect. Unless his shop normally sells to criminal groups. They may not care, other than not wanting to be near when he is having sex with a woman in the middle of everything, since they would want to keep a low profile.

Maybe it would be better to at least throw up a small outline for this? At least then the basic details are out there. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:44, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, just thinking, someone should make a story called "Don't have sex!" (Or something better if you can think of something). Basically, a guy in some situation (Maybe some strange island, some mystical attraction, whatever) that he finds lots of women trying to have sex with him. The twist is if he has sex, something bad will happen. He will explode, or will die, or the world would end, or something. Not sure how well I could do writing it though. Just seems to be something that would do very good to offset the whole "Guy has sex with every woman that he sees" theme you see all over this website. Not sure what you think though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:24, 16 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, does this mean you are back? Been a while. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:31, 20 August 2018 (UTC)

== [[User talk:Teejay|Teejay]]'s talk ==

If you could do a page or two on your new stories, just so I can get a feel for them, I'd be happy to contribute. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I will look at Anime School then. Thanks for suggesting it. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Anime School says "Do Not Edit." -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Formality is definitely not necessary. I'm the casual type. :) I suppose if it's been a while, even though it says Do Not Edit... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I love collaborations! I did a nice one with [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] on a section of Rampage a couple years back. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

So I'm not trying to write? I'm insulted!

J/k. I know I'm not as good a writer as Dirty Me. I do my best, but writing isn't my strong point. I do enjoy it though. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Happy Ramadan. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes. You are now included. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You seem to be the resident critic around here. (Hey, SOMEONE has to do the job!) What's your take on the story "You Are An Orc"? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

A young orc needs to find his mate. He'd prefer an elf, a human would be acceptable, and if things get desperate, an animal would do (though 95% of the branches are about him taking either a human or an elf.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Start it, and I'll have a look. Always willing to give things a chance. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

"A certain egg-laying mammal" made me literally laugh out loud. Good thing I'm home alone right now. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I always take some time to think on things like that. Never rush a decision. Anyway, after careful consideration, I have decided not to endorse your park -- wait, wrong scenario.

After careful consideration, what's a collaboration without a little editing? Go ahead and edit any of my pages in Anime School. I'll be very interested to see the results. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Mind control, and I'd use it to make villains stop acting villainous and do the right thing. For instance, I would use it to force Congress in the next 2 hours to pass a clean Zika bill, with no riders. And I'd use it to force cops to not murder innocent people anymore. Etc. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

H'mm... sexual power? That's tricky.

Probably the ability to make any woman orgasm, no matter how "frigid" they think they are. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Most of my Facebook friends are transgender. I have no problem with developing the transgender characters. Also, your "indifferent tolerance" is fine. That's better than what most transgender people experience (source: my transgender friends.) That's all they really want, is people to treat them like they would treat anyone else, and not give a damn what's between their legs or on their chest. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I can handle it. I know what is and isn't offensive. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

My Thanksgiving was nice. I watched football and had a quiet dinner with my son. We gave each other hugs and said how thankful it was that we had each other. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

My older son, who lives with me, is about to become a teenager. My younger, who lives with his aunt, is 7. And yes, I do enjoy writing erotica. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

The first thing I would do is go buy proper clothes and other necessities. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have no real-life friends, only online ones. ("I had a life once, now I have a computer and a modem." -- Anonymous) My work is done solo and my bosses communicate by cell phone or online.

My GF and my sons would be surprised. I'd simply explain that it was some sort of weird transformation and leave it at that. And I'd continue living my life.

I'm both a boob man and a butt man. The bigger the butt the better. I have no preferences about boobs. I've been with A-cup women and F-cup women and as long as the woman is sweet and we get along outside the bedroom, it's all good. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Stolid. That's a good word for me. Or saturnine. According to Vladimir Harkonnen's philosophy, people should be terrified of me. "The man without emotions is the one to fear. But deep emotions... ah, those can be bent to your needs." -- Baron Vladimir Harkonnen, to his designated successor and nephew, Feyd-Rautha

That's fascinating stuff about Japanese divorces.

One more quote about people without emotions.

Though [Ryan] didn't know it, his face showed no emotion at all.

Miller looked into [Ryan]'s eyes and saw... nothing. For the first time, Sean Miller knew fear. He saw his own death...

[From "Patriot Games"]

Hope you're enjoying the holiday season. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

My first wife and I were happily married until she passed away from a heart attack.

"Yuri" is a female name in Japan but a male name in Russia. :)

I've only read Dune, not any of the sequels. How could you possibly top the original?

I'm sorry you're trapped in Redneckistan. Hope you get some precip soon. Glad your holidays are going well. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

It's OK. You had no way of knowing and I'm long since over it.

I've read lots of book series.

What's it like living in Red Stick? :) I suppose it beats living in Rat's Mouth. *giggle* -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I'm currently finishing the fifth and final book in the Chronicles of Prydain.

It also beats living in Broadbottom or Fingringhoe (both in England). Did you know that when traveling through Oregon, it takes about 2.5 hours to get from Idiotville to Wanker's Corner? :) And when in central Europe, it's about 1.5 hours between Titz and Cunter and another 3 from Cunter to Fucking. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I don't object to much of anything in the CYOA stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

They all look good to me, but then again, I'm not very good at figuring out or writing personality. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

As a reader, I think your work is very well written. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I've resumed my work on the non-adult story Battle Royale, which you might be interested in looking at or maybe contributing to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I do know what futanari is, yes. Some of the sexiest women I know are transgender women who have elected not to have GRS. If I ever become unattached again I'll probably end up dating one of them who lives reasonably close to me. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yes, I do. I'm iconoclastic that way. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Sure, why not? Maybe I'll work on some of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Cool. Thanks. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

About 7 years ago, I stumbled across this website by a total fluke while searching for information on West Ham United striker Pull Dickoff, the team's leading scorer in '05. I explored it and thought it would be cool to spend some of my spare time contributing, so I bookmarked it... and the rest, as they say, is history. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Heard a funny story today. Don't know if it's true, but it sounds plausible.

Two New Yorkers purchase a park bench (I'm assuming Central Park: the story didn't specify) and make sure to get a receipt. Then every day for two months they walk around the park, carrying the bench from point to point and sitting down on it when they got tired. When the cops see them carrying the bench, they show the receipt. Eventually all the cops realize that the two whackos running around carrying the bench actually OWN the bench.

Once the cops stop paying attention to them, the two guys proceed to steal and fence about 20 park benches. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Yeah, about that... I tried. My brain just couldn't cope with the illogic involved in Nudisma Teresma. You notice I did a couple of pages and stopped cold... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

All-powerful and uncaring is much scarier. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Happy Ramadan. The most difficult part (especially when it falls in or near summer) must be fasting during the daylight hours. Hope you have a good tuck in (and get hydrated) the instant the sun sets. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==[[User talk:Platypus|Platypus]]' talk==
Why are those choices in Darkness? Because the story is open for anyone to edit and some people are desperate to read stories about copping a feel, no matter how story-inappropriate that choice is, and some people freak when they realize they've been reading a story from a female perspective and have to force the story into a male perspective, no matter how inappropriate it is given the story thus far. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:05, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

One thing you may want to consider is that choices don’t necessarily have to seem logical. Consider that following scenario: Your son hasn’t come home from school and you’re worried about him. Do you: A) call the police? B) hire a private detective? C) search the neighborhood? D) get a rowboat and sail out to sea? A, B, & C are obvious choices, but the ridiculously illogical choice D… is what Gepetto chose in the Adventures of Pinocchio. And somehow that worked out. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:30, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

You're typing more than you need to...

<nowiki>[[ Ventrue|Ventrue]]</nowiki> tells the wiki "Instead of displaying the link to the page titled 'Ventrue' as 'Ventrue', instead display it as 'Ventrue'." Kind of redundant, no? The | is useful when you want the link to display as something ''different''. For example <nowiki>[[Ventrue|Aristocrats]]</nowiki> would send people to a page titled 'Ventrue', but the link would display as 'Aristocrats'.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:12, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

You could just place a note on the page such as "clan descriptions are copyright White Wolf Game Studio". --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:04, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

If you want to contribute to Darkness by adding more pages, fine. If you want to rip out pages because you don't like certain choices, NOT FINE. Leave those pages alone. I wrote them and they are staying. PERIOD. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:42, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

I know you know how to categorize your pages. Categorize them!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:35, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Categorizing is not something to be saved for 'later'. Either the page is categorized when it's posted or the page gets deleted. It's that simple.

If you've read a significant amount of Darkness, and it seems that you have, then you should have some understanding of what kind of story it is. If you don't understand it, I don't think that I can explain it any further. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:27, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

A discussion page exists for discussing the associated story page, so if you want to discuss the tropes that you feel are associated with that story page, it's appropriate to do so. Been spending a bit of time over at tvtropes? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:13, 15 April 2016 (UTC)

Awesome. All glory to the Hypnobutt! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:16, 1 July 2016 (UTC)

Is there a reason why you're erasing someone's else's writing? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:20, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

I understand that you want to take over Anime School. I understand that you want to make it a better story. But you aren't adding anything to it, and that makes me very wary of allowing you to remove pages that already exist. I, personally, insist in my stories that all choices must be second-person choices that your character can make. But not everyone subscribes to that view and in someone else's story, it must be allowed. Since you haven't written anything for Anime School or done anything to make it 'yours', I suggest that you refrain from ripping out pages in it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:34, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the head's up about A Young Boy's Night. You're right; there is too much that is too explicit for a Mature rating. Oddly enough, it was already on the Adult story list, as well as being in the Mature stories. Now it's just in the Adult listing, where it belongs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:39, 28 January 2017 (UTC)

I wouldn’t have removed the cat-torture link, except that I personally find it an unpalatable choice too. However, since our vandal is claiming that its existence is what motivates his shit, then if he comes back, the link will go back. I might even write a page for it, just to aggravate him if he persists in being a nuisance.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:43, 21 February 2017 (UTC)

Changing the name of a story is easy, but unless you don't mind having a category that doesn't match the title of the story, you would have to change each and every page in the story. Cutting and pasting helps, but depending on the size of the story, it could get pretty tedious. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 6 March 2017 (UTC)

I'd prefer to see abandoned stories moved to the pit, rather than just deleted. You never know when some forgotten snippet will inspire someone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:55, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You have my permission to move stories to the Pit. Doing that is easy. Remove the line of coding referencing currently the story on whatever page it's on and add that line to the appropriate place in the Pit. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:41, 27 May 2017 (UTC)

You could just put a note on the first page of D&D and a link to a page for people to post their plot ideas. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:30, 20 June 2017 (UTC)

Would you mind not going through Smutty Sex Romp removing the "Do you:" from random pages? Every page that I've written of it has those words (or some variant thereof) before the options. I've tried to keep that consistent throughout the story. I've got no objections to most minor edits, but breaking the consistency for no particular reason bothers me. Why are you even tormenting yourself by going through a story that's clearly not to your taste? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:10, 24 July 2017 (UTC)

I, personally, don't allow non-protagonist choices in my stories, and I tell anyone who posts in my stories that all choices must be choices that the main character can make. However, I view this as a personal stylistic choice, not a rule that all CHYOA stories must follow. Many of the stories on site include third-person-choice stories and many authors want to write stories that way. I don't, but I don't think that the authors who do should be restricted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:17, 14 September 2017 (UTC)

== Hello ==

Hello. The front page said we should talk to you if we have an idea for a story. I would like a good transgender story.

I tried reading the stories on this site. They are garbage. I am transgender, and all the stories on here do is sexualize transgenders. Gay ladyboys. Sexually amoral shemales. I hate these words, and hate the way people are writing about what it is like to be transgender. Even the stories with M2F transformation are stupid. They act like some guy will randomly become a wonton whore the instant he gets a vagina, rather than a dick. I was wondering about a story that shows what it is like to be transgender. What would you like to know?

P.P.P.S Here are some questions for you to answer as a basis for your story:

1. What is the name and sex of your protagonist? What kind of transgender person is the protagonist? Male to female? Vice-versa? I was born male, but identify female, so a M2F.

2. Again, what kind of genre do you want the story to be? What kind of tone, what kind of mood do you want? I assumed it would be more of a transformation story. A story of how someone fits into their world, given that they do not fit in to their own body. I guess something more like a coming of age story, but instead of age related, it was struggles with their own identity and the way the world views them.

3. What kind of personality does the protagonist have? I have grown up male, but my friends are mostly female. My family is even heavily female. I am interested in learning, and interested in people. Normally though, most of my interests are solo pursuits, since I have found myself outcast from my own community.

4. Is the protagonist transitioning openly or stealthily? Sadly, I have had to keep my true self secret. I went through stages when I was young of getting women's clothes (Normally by stealing them, but sometimes through other ways), and dressing up in secret.

5. Does the family support the protagonist's gender? Does the protagonist's friends support him/her? My mother knows, and my wife, but no one else. I have a secret facebook where I have talked to other transgenders, and belong to some transgender forums, but I have never told my other family and friends. I don't think they would understand. Even the two who knows don't understand, although they do support my happiness. But it is harder with my wife, since she married a male. She is not interested in women like that, so I find I can't even really be myself with her, even though she knows.

6. Is the protagonist a middle schooler, high schooler, or is he/she an adult? I am 39, but I guess that doesn't mean that a story has to be about me.

I am from Idaho, where we still have laws against homosexuality, so I grew up with a severe stigma about homosexuality. I kept myself secret, because I was always worried that I was gay or something. Not that my family would care, but the community would. And honestly, I don't want to be with a male like that. Maybe if I was a cis female. I fantasize about having a natural female body and being with a male. But, I don't think I could do that as a male. It was others starting to come out, like Caitlyn Jenner, that made me understand. I didn't have these feelings because I was gay, or something. I had these feelings because I am transgender. I started researching it more, and the more I saw, the more I understood. But, even finding doctors is hard. I have only found one anywhere around me. So, I still find myself trapped in a society that would not understand, so I cannot express myself. At times it becomes overwhelming, to be uncomfortable in your own skin. I find myself looking at other women, getting jealous, wishing I could take a magic potion, or have some clone body that my brain can be put into, or something. Hopefully it is clear?

Sorry for the late reply. I have been very busy during the holiday season. I do not know who the main protagonist would be. If I was writing it, it would probably be me.

== Hey==
Hey there, First I wanna say I appreciate some of the work you've done here like fixing things I may have missed. Second, I'm curious if I can get your opinion on something?--[[User:FrostBooster|FrostBooster]] 22:26, 25 February 2017 (UTC)

Well while I've been doing some bits to fix some of ages in H&H I've been wondering do you think something like the character sheets in 2T4U could help in perhaps as a way to give the family a last name and establish some important points about the characters and help keep things consistent? What do you think or are other things I can do help fix it?--[[User:FrostBooster|FrostBooster]] 15:42, 15 June 2017 (UTC)

I HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH [[User:Wixxer]] I DON'T KNOW HOW I WAS ASSOCIATED WITH HIM BUT HE VANDALIZED MY STORIES TOO, I'VE MADE NO CHANGES TO THE MAIN PAGE OR DISCUSSION PAGE SO STOP HARASSING ME. [[User:Blackadder38]]

== Saving Christmas ==

Hey there, I recently started working on a story called "[[Saving Christmas]]".
Unfortunately, I ran out of inspiration. Could you perhaps add some ideas of your own?
Please note that it's an all-family-story.

Thank you. --[[User:RuurdWoltring]], 19:34 NL time, Thursday, December 7th, 2017

== [[User:Magikarp7297|Magikarp7297]]'s Chat ==

Look, man, it would truly be an honor if you could please contribute to my story [[Rock Paper Scissors Lizard Spock]]. To see how it works, play a little bit, and you should understand. It's currently in version 1.3, should be a new addition soon. Anyways, please help my story!--[[User:Magikarp7297|Magikarp7297]] 05:33, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

Hey, man, sorry to bother you, but, I need help on writing a story called [[School Wars]]. Read through a little, see my unofficial status (please keep it that way), see what the Lockers are for, and eventually check out my cartel-versus-school kid thing. --[[User:Magikarp7297|Magikarp7297]] 04:30, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

I have an idea; a story based off of the original The Legend of Zelda game, which was released for the Nintendo Entertainment System (NES) in 1987. There would be these stats:
*Life
*Rupees
*Keys
*Bombs
*Key Items (stuff like Blue Ring, Magic Shield, Power Bracelet, Raft, Magic Key Wooden/White/Magic Sword, etc.)
*Items (i.e. arrow, silver arrow, boomerang, candle, etc.)

And maybe you could also add Level to it (for what level dungeon you are in). Thanks! --[[User:Magikarp7297|Magikarp7297]] 22:06, 5 July 2018 (UTC)

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 06 Aug 2018 05:53:36 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Dirty me needs another new Sextion */ Poofed

== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

hailey
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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

I have had an interesting week and a half...

So, there is an apartment, across from our kitchen, one floor up, that the construction company has been doing something with. Guess there will be new people there soon.

Well, once I noticed there was work going on there, I started getting naughty in my kitchen, hoping the construction people will catch me. I mean, no risk so go nuts.

It seems since I discovered someone was working up there, I have not went into my kitchen fully clothed. Topless, bottomless, in bra, in panties, completely naked. I have not seen the workers yet, but who knows, not like I watch the window to see if faces appear the entire time I am in my kitchen. I actually do things in my kitchen, like cooking, laundry, washing dishes.

Needless to say, I have orgasmed a few times in my kitchen, hoping they will catch me. Although, still no sightings, so it is starting to wear off a little, and I don't want my neighbors to catch me, since I have to live in the same community as them xD

Some friends and us had a pool party yesterday. Well, not really a pool party. We just went to visit them and spent the time we were there in the pool. I wore a bikini. Nothing special. I mean, I got it from a store that tends to sell rather blah clothes. The sexiest thing they have is panties with semi transparent back. So it wasn't some micro bikini or anything. And, I didn't do anything. We spent the entire time in the kids pool, since she has two daughters and a son (her husband wasn't there), and I have 1 son. I felt so self conscious. Isn't it strange, that I feel so self conscious swimming around in a kids pool in a normal bikini, yet I don't feel self conscious masturbating in my kitchen where some workers can see me if they look out the window? I know, probably more because I was around people I know and am friends with, while the workers, if they catch me, are complete strangers. Still seems strange. Of course, last night, my husband told me "I am so surprised you would wear that there". Didn't even no what to say... (And no, he doesn't know about my "exhibitionism" fascination...) I admit, you rarely see Taiwanese in bikinis, but still, not like it was that risque. I mean, the store I got it from has granny panties in every shape you want, but not a single "sexy" lingerie. They don't even sell thongs, or g-strings, or tanga cut panties, let alone other, sexy underwear, so when you think swimsuit, don't think "very sexy", instead, cute or boring. (Even my bikini was hard to find, they had two different bikini options...) Of course, I did notice a couple guys check me out. And one older guy for some reason was staying at the kiddie pool with his, not sure, think the girl was like his grand daughter or something, or he had her when he was older than normal. And she was more than old enough not to need supervision...

Also, a couple days ago, the glass door on our shower shattered. I mean, completely. It even fell. Glass all over the bathroom right now. I have already cut my foot and my finger...

Sadly, the people sent by our landlord to check it was sent yesterday, while my husband was home. Too bad, because I imagined myself, sleeping naked, no blanket, while they came in to check the door (I mean, it was 8:00 AM, OMFG, too early to get up on a weekend). Hmm, wondering if they will come over to repair it while my husband is at work. I really want a shower, and don't think I can wait for them to finish. (lol, that is what I did last time the door was broke...makes me wonder wtf is wrong with the construction company, putting a door like that in for the bathroom door...)

Well, because of all the broken glass I had to go and get a plastic bin. Yeah, not easy to scooter with. Sadly, I had worn shorts, and, well, it was late at night, and dark, so, I also picked up a nice skirt. I slipped into the bathroom, slipped off my shorts and panties, and slipped the skirt on.

Now, since I was on a scooter, it was either try to hold it with one hand and scooter with the other, not very good. But, fortunately it fit between the seat and the, well, whatever that front part is called, where the handles are. That meant I ended up with my legs spread wide, scootering down the road. I know a couple people got flashed when I had to turn.

It has been a very interesting time lately xD

Some workers still to try to show off for, both near my house (upstairs, across from our kitchen) and in my house (while fixing the door in my bathroom)

Honestly, you don't know how excited I have been feeling lately. Hmm, wonder, what would happen if I grabbed my sex toys while they fix my bathroom door (btw, it is the master bathroom, so in the master bedroom) Would that be pushing it too far? "Hey, come in, please take your time and replace the door. I will just be here in the bedroom, fucking myself senseless right here in almost the same room as you, where you can plainly see me". Concern is, they were hired by my landlord, and my husband talks to him. Wonder if they would say anything to my landlord... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Eh, pretending to be asleep would not work. If they come when my husband is home, well, that wouldn't work. If they come when my husband isn't home, well, then I can't really pretend to be asleep because we live in a gated community and I need to ring them in. Plus, my son will be with me, so while I could entertain him with his tablet while they are there, so I could be alone in the bedroom with them, it wouldn't make sense for me to go "back to sleep".

Nah, last time the door was fixed (This will be the second time), I "urgently needed to take a shower and get ready to go". Since it is the bathroom door, well, I was showering right in front of the workers (not sure if they will be the same ones this time or not, not like that matters). I know enough Chinese to tell them I need to take a shower because once they are done, I need to leave, and no, they can just finish the work while I shower, just please don't look. (bu hao yi zi, wo yao shi zao. ni men gong zuo hao, wo gen wo de er zi yao qu wai mien. mei guan xi, ni men huei gong zuo, ke shi, qing bu kan) (excuse me, I need shower. You work complete, me and my son need go outside. No problem, you work, but please not look).

As I said, in the US, no, I wouldn't do something like that for fear of being raped. Here, that isn't honestly something I even worry about anymore. Not saying rape has never happened to women here (Looking it up, I guess new Taipei city had about 50 rape cases reported in 2016, so I guess it is not non-existent), but I have never heard of any of them (you can check here: www.nationmaster.com/country-info/compare/Taiwan/United-States/Crime, a US vs. Taiwan for crime). Very possible that it is just not reported often here, given this society is still very patriarchal, not sure, I just know other than being touched inappropriately on the MRT, I have never been sexually assaulted in any way, and only verbally assaulted (when I was with my son... some stupid driver who apparently was pissed he had to slow down because I was stopped, waiting for traffic to clear, before turning left...yelling "fuck you" out his car window as he passed multiple times) once. Oh, sometimes, I get looks. You get to know the looks of those who don't like foreigners, and my husband has gotten looks, having a foreign wife, but nothing else really (Older generation tends to give those looks more often than younger). I don't really slip into the role of "protect myself when I am walking alone late at night" like I did in the US. I don't constantly examine my environment for a threat. Honestly, if I ever go back to the US, I am going to have to change my mindset again, as I have fallen out of these habits.

As for the book you are reading, it seems to be Red Storm Rising, but I had to google it=P Never read that book. Honestly, never read any Tom Clancy books. I have meant to, but never have. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:26, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Good news, the repair guys are coming over when my husband and son will be out. My husband will be taking my son to swimming class, so I will have them all to myself.

I will greet them in a sexy, see through teddy. I have a nice blue one picked out. Then, while they are working on the door, I will go take a shower.

You honestly don't know how badly I want to strip naked, lay down on my bed facing the bathroom, and let them watch me fuck myself with my sex toys. If my husband would go along with it, and if he was home, I would let my son watch his favorite shows and have my husband make love to me right there in front of them. But, I won't even suggest it, I know he wouldn't. And, I will be good, and not pleasure myself in front of them like you recommended... party pooper...

Still, so excited right now! The construction people across from my kitchen have been disappointing, they have still never come to the window at the right time. I only know they are there because of the lights being on (and I know it is the construction company because of the paint fumes that I smelled when I found out about it...). So, here is my chance to at least get caught, without risk of getting in trouble, naked and wet=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:05, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Hmm, well, I found out a few things. This is the same person that changed the bathroom door last time. And, based on how he was talking to my husband on the phone, and the stuff that he was saying, I don't feel like showing off for him, at all. He already knows what I look like, but I am not going to show him anything again... This guy is pissing us off. So, the door broke once before, and he replaced it, no problem. Now, he is sitting there telling my husband "I can't accept that it broke by itself, you must have hit it", other crap...

I know we didn't hit it, I know what happened each time it broke, and so does my husband. He is acting like we are insulting the quality of his work or something, where we are just trying to say that maybe it is the quality of his supplier, or maybe it is just the environment, and that glass isn't appropriate.

He already pissed us off when he came over, tried to shove all the glass is a cardboard box, failed, and just left it there for "next week". Now, it is almost next week, and my husband just told me that he won't be here this week, he will come next week. God, I keep telling my husband he should just tell the landlord and let the landlord talk to the guy. This isn't even our house...and yet, we will need to pay out of pocket for it because "I just don't believe you didn't hit it" or whatever it is he is saying.

Maybe I will get a fucking frog from downstairs and let him see that naked, but I think I will wear as thick of clothes as I can stand when he is here... No longer in any naught mood, especially not around someone like this guy... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Teejay, sorry, I am...not been around. Been playing on discord lately xD No worries, being careful. Do you use? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:32, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

Aww. If you ever decide to try discord, let me know, I have my own small server I am trying to work on writing with and a few friends on there. I am still around, just honestly, trying to work on my stuff in other places. Have to be naughty in public somehow ^.- (no worries, no pics or anything, I just mean text flirting and writing my stories slowly publicly). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 6 August 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Wed, 01 Aug 2018 11:32:06 GMT

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== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

I have had an interesting week and a half...

So, there is an apartment, across from our kitchen, one floor up, that the construction company has been doing something with. Guess there will be new people there soon.

Well, once I noticed there was work going on there, I started getting naughty in my kitchen, hoping the construction people will catch me. I mean, no risk so go nuts.

It seems since I discovered someone was working up there, I have not went into my kitchen fully clothed. Topless, bottomless, in bra, in panties, completely naked. I have not seen the workers yet, but who knows, not like I watch the window to see if faces appear the entire time I am in my kitchen. I actually do things in my kitchen, like cooking, laundry, washing dishes.

Needless to say, I have orgasmed a few times in my kitchen, hoping they will catch me. Although, still no sightings, so it is starting to wear off a little, and I don't want my neighbors to catch me, since I have to live in the same community as them xD

Some friends and us had a pool party yesterday. Well, not really a pool party. We just went to visit them and spent the time we were there in the pool. I wore a bikini. Nothing special. I mean, I got it from a store that tends to sell rather blah clothes. The sexiest thing they have is panties with semi transparent back. So it wasn't some micro bikini or anything. And, I didn't do anything. We spent the entire time in the kids pool, since she has two daughters and a son (her husband wasn't there), and I have 1 son. I felt so self conscious. Isn't it strange, that I feel so self conscious swimming around in a kids pool in a normal bikini, yet I don't feel self conscious masturbating in my kitchen where some workers can see me if they look out the window? I know, probably more because I was around people I know and am friends with, while the workers, if they catch me, are complete strangers. Still seems strange. Of course, last night, my husband told me "I am so surprised you would wear that there". Didn't even no what to say... (And no, he doesn't know about my "exhibitionism" fascination...) I admit, you rarely see Taiwanese in bikinis, but still, not like it was that risque. I mean, the store I got it from has granny panties in every shape you want, but not a single "sexy" lingerie. They don't even sell thongs, or g-strings, or tanga cut panties, let alone other, sexy underwear, so when you think swimsuit, don't think "very sexy", instead, cute or boring. (Even my bikini was hard to find, they had two different bikini options...) Of course, I did notice a couple guys check me out. And one older guy for some reason was staying at the kiddie pool with his, not sure, think the girl was like his grand daughter or something, or he had her when he was older than normal. And she was more than old enough not to need supervision...

Also, a couple days ago, the glass door on our shower shattered. I mean, completely. It even fell. Glass all over the bathroom right now. I have already cut my foot and my finger...

Sadly, the people sent by our landlord to check it was sent yesterday, while my husband was home. Too bad, because I imagined myself, sleeping naked, no blanket, while they came in to check the door (I mean, it was 8:00 AM, OMFG, too early to get up on a weekend). Hmm, wondering if they will come over to repair it while my husband is at work. I really want a shower, and don't think I can wait for them to finish. (lol, that is what I did last time the door was broke...makes me wonder wtf is wrong with the construction company, putting a door like that in for the bathroom door...)

Well, because of all the broken glass I had to go and get a plastic bin. Yeah, not easy to scooter with. Sadly, I had worn shorts, and, well, it was late at night, and dark, so, I also picked up a nice skirt. I slipped into the bathroom, slipped off my shorts and panties, and slipped the skirt on.

Now, since I was on a scooter, it was either try to hold it with one hand and scooter with the other, not very good. But, fortunately it fit between the seat and the, well, whatever that front part is called, where the handles are. That meant I ended up with my legs spread wide, scootering down the road. I know a couple people got flashed when I had to turn.

It has been a very interesting time lately xD

Some workers still to try to show off for, both near my house (upstairs, across from our kitchen) and in my house (while fixing the door in my bathroom)

Honestly, you don't know how excited I have been feeling lately. Hmm, wonder, what would happen if I grabbed my sex toys while they fix my bathroom door (btw, it is the master bathroom, so in the master bedroom) Would that be pushing it too far? "Hey, come in, please take your time and replace the door. I will just be here in the bedroom, fucking myself senseless right here in almost the same room as you, where you can plainly see me". Concern is, they were hired by my landlord, and my husband talks to him. Wonder if they would say anything to my landlord... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Eh, pretending to be asleep would not work. If they come when my husband is home, well, that wouldn't work. If they come when my husband isn't home, well, then I can't really pretend to be asleep because we live in a gated community and I need to ring them in. Plus, my son will be with me, so while I could entertain him with his tablet while they are there, so I could be alone in the bedroom with them, it wouldn't make sense for me to go "back to sleep".

Nah, last time the door was fixed (This will be the second time), I "urgently needed to take a shower and get ready to go". Since it is the bathroom door, well, I was showering right in front of the workers (not sure if they will be the same ones this time or not, not like that matters). I know enough Chinese to tell them I need to take a shower because once they are done, I need to leave, and no, they can just finish the work while I shower, just please don't look. (bu hao yi zi, wo yao shi zao. ni men gong zuo hao, wo gen wo de er zi yao qu wai mien. mei guan xi, ni men huei gong zuo, ke shi, qing bu kan) (excuse me, I need shower. You work complete, me and my son need go outside. No problem, you work, but please not look).

As I said, in the US, no, I wouldn't do something like that for fear of being raped. Here, that isn't honestly something I even worry about anymore. Not saying rape has never happened to women here (Looking it up, I guess new Taipei city had about 50 rape cases reported in 2016, so I guess it is not non-existent), but I have never heard of any of them (you can check here: www.nationmaster.com/country-info/compare/Taiwan/United-States/Crime, a US vs. Taiwan for crime). Very possible that it is just not reported often here, given this society is still very patriarchal, not sure, I just know other than being touched inappropriately on the MRT, I have never been sexually assaulted in any way, and only verbally assaulted (when I was with my son... some stupid driver who apparently was pissed he had to slow down because I was stopped, waiting for traffic to clear, before turning left...yelling "fuck you" out his car window as he passed multiple times) once. Oh, sometimes, I get looks. You get to know the looks of those who don't like foreigners, and my husband has gotten looks, having a foreign wife, but nothing else really (Older generation tends to give those looks more often than younger). I don't really slip into the role of "protect myself when I am walking alone late at night" like I did in the US. I don't constantly examine my environment for a threat. Honestly, if I ever go back to the US, I am going to have to change my mindset again, as I have fallen out of these habits.

As for the book you are reading, it seems to be Red Storm Rising, but I had to google it=P Never read that book. Honestly, never read any Tom Clancy books. I have meant to, but never have. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:26, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Good news, the repair guys are coming over when my husband and son will be out. My husband will be taking my son to swimming class, so I will have them all to myself.

I will greet them in a sexy, see through teddy. I have a nice blue one picked out. Then, while they are working on the door, I will go take a shower.

You honestly don't know how badly I want to strip naked, lay down on my bed facing the bathroom, and let them watch me fuck myself with my sex toys. If my husband would go along with it, and if he was home, I would let my son watch his favorite shows and have my husband make love to me right there in front of them. But, I won't even suggest it, I know he wouldn't. And, I will be good, and not pleasure myself in front of them like you recommended... party pooper...

Still, so excited right now! The construction people across from my kitchen have been disappointing, they have still never come to the window at the right time. I only know they are there because of the lights being on (and I know it is the construction company because of the paint fumes that I smelled when I found out about it...). So, here is my chance to at least get caught, without risk of getting in trouble, naked and wet=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:05, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Hmm, well, I found out a few things. This is the same person that changed the bathroom door last time. And, based on how he was talking to my husband on the phone, and the stuff that he was saying, I don't feel like showing off for him, at all. He already knows what I look like, but I am not going to show him anything again... This guy is pissing us off. So, the door broke once before, and he replaced it, no problem. Now, he is sitting there telling my husband "I can't accept that it broke by itself, you must have hit it", other crap...

I know we didn't hit it, I know what happened each time it broke, and so does my husband. He is acting like we are insulting the quality of his work or something, where we are just trying to say that maybe it is the quality of his supplier, or maybe it is just the environment, and that glass isn't appropriate.

He already pissed us off when he came over, tried to shove all the glass is a cardboard box, failed, and just left it there for "next week". Now, it is almost next week, and my husband just told me that he won't be here this week, he will come next week. God, I keep telling my husband he should just tell the landlord and let the landlord talk to the guy. This isn't even our house...and yet, we will need to pay out of pocket for it because "I just don't believe you didn't hit it" or whatever it is he is saying.

Maybe I will get a fucking frog from downstairs and let him see that naked, but I think I will wear as thick of clothes as I can stand when he is here... No longer in any naught mood, especially not around someone like this guy... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Teejay, sorry, I am...not been around. Been playing on discord lately xD No worries, being careful. Do you use? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:32, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

User talk:Takoyakuza

DirtyMeStoryTime — Fri, 06 Jul 2018 07:31:26 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Welcome

Welcome to Edit this! Nice to see you here. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 6 July 2018 (UTC)

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Fri, 25 May 2018 12:14:01 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Dirty me needs another new Sextion */ Yeah, not bothering to get naughty anymore, let alone in the mood to let someone watch me masturbate...

== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

I have had an interesting week and a half...

So, there is an apartment, across from our kitchen, one floor up, that the construction company has been doing something with. Guess there will be new people there soon.

Well, once I noticed there was work going on there, I started getting naughty in my kitchen, hoping the construction people will catch me. I mean, no risk so go nuts.

It seems since I discovered someone was working up there, I have not went into my kitchen fully clothed. Topless, bottomless, in bra, in panties, completely naked. I have not seen the workers yet, but who knows, not like I watch the window to see if faces appear the entire time I am in my kitchen. I actually do things in my kitchen, like cooking, laundry, washing dishes.

Needless to say, I have orgasmed a few times in my kitchen, hoping they will catch me. Although, still no sightings, so it is starting to wear off a little, and I don't want my neighbors to catch me, since I have to live in the same community as them xD

Some friends and us had a pool party yesterday. Well, not really a pool party. We just went to visit them and spent the time we were there in the pool. I wore a bikini. Nothing special. I mean, I got it from a store that tends to sell rather blah clothes. The sexiest thing they have is panties with semi transparent back. So it wasn't some micro bikini or anything. And, I didn't do anything. We spent the entire time in the kids pool, since she has two daughters and a son (her husband wasn't there), and I have 1 son. I felt so self conscious. Isn't it strange, that I feel so self conscious swimming around in a kids pool in a normal bikini, yet I don't feel self conscious masturbating in my kitchen where some workers can see me if they look out the window? I know, probably more because I was around people I know and am friends with, while the workers, if they catch me, are complete strangers. Still seems strange. Of course, last night, my husband told me "I am so surprised you would wear that there". Didn't even no what to say... (And no, he doesn't know about my "exhibitionism" fascination...) I admit, you rarely see Taiwanese in bikinis, but still, not like it was that risque. I mean, the store I got it from has granny panties in every shape you want, but not a single "sexy" lingerie. They don't even sell thongs, or g-strings, or tanga cut panties, let alone other, sexy underwear, so when you think swimsuit, don't think "very sexy", instead, cute or boring. (Even my bikini was hard to find, they had two different bikini options...) Of course, I did notice a couple guys check me out. And one older guy for some reason was staying at the kiddie pool with his, not sure, think the girl was like his grand daughter or something, or he had her when he was older than normal. And she was more than old enough not to need supervision...

Also, a couple days ago, the glass door on our shower shattered. I mean, completely. It even fell. Glass all over the bathroom right now. I have already cut my foot and my finger...

Sadly, the people sent by our landlord to check it was sent yesterday, while my husband was home. Too bad, because I imagined myself, sleeping naked, no blanket, while they came in to check the door (I mean, it was 8:00 AM, OMFG, too early to get up on a weekend). Hmm, wondering if they will come over to repair it while my husband is at work. I really want a shower, and don't think I can wait for them to finish. (lol, that is what I did last time the door was broke...makes me wonder wtf is wrong with the construction company, putting a door like that in for the bathroom door...)

Well, because of all the broken glass I had to go and get a plastic bin. Yeah, not easy to scooter with. Sadly, I had worn shorts, and, well, it was late at night, and dark, so, I also picked up a nice skirt. I slipped into the bathroom, slipped off my shorts and panties, and slipped the skirt on.

Now, since I was on a scooter, it was either try to hold it with one hand and scooter with the other, not very good. But, fortunately it fit between the seat and the, well, whatever that front part is called, where the handles are. That meant I ended up with my legs spread wide, scootering down the road. I know a couple people got flashed when I had to turn.

It has been a very interesting time lately xD

Some workers still to try to show off for, both near my house (upstairs, across from our kitchen) and in my house (while fixing the door in my bathroom)

Honestly, you don't know how excited I have been feeling lately. Hmm, wonder, what would happen if I grabbed my sex toys while they fix my bathroom door (btw, it is the master bathroom, so in the master bedroom) Would that be pushing it too far? "Hey, come in, please take your time and replace the door. I will just be here in the bedroom, fucking myself senseless right here in almost the same room as you, where you can plainly see me". Concern is, they were hired by my landlord, and my husband talks to him. Wonder if they would say anything to my landlord... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Eh, pretending to be asleep would not work. If they come when my husband is home, well, that wouldn't work. If they come when my husband isn't home, well, then I can't really pretend to be asleep because we live in a gated community and I need to ring them in. Plus, my son will be with me, so while I could entertain him with his tablet while they are there, so I could be alone in the bedroom with them, it wouldn't make sense for me to go "back to sleep".

Nah, last time the door was fixed (This will be the second time), I "urgently needed to take a shower and get ready to go". Since it is the bathroom door, well, I was showering right in front of the workers (not sure if they will be the same ones this time or not, not like that matters). I know enough Chinese to tell them I need to take a shower because once they are done, I need to leave, and no, they can just finish the work while I shower, just please don't look. (bu hao yi zi, wo yao shi zao. ni men gong zuo hao, wo gen wo de er zi yao qu wai mien. mei guan xi, ni men huei gong zuo, ke shi, qing bu kan) (excuse me, I need shower. You work complete, me and my son need go outside. No problem, you work, but please not look).

As I said, in the US, no, I wouldn't do something like that for fear of being raped. Here, that isn't honestly something I even worry about anymore. Not saying rape has never happened to women here (Looking it up, I guess new Taipei city had about 50 rape cases reported in 2016, so I guess it is not non-existent), but I have never heard of any of them (you can check here: www.nationmaster.com/country-info/compare/Taiwan/United-States/Crime, a US vs. Taiwan for crime). Very possible that it is just not reported often here, given this society is still very patriarchal, not sure, I just know other than being touched inappropriately on the MRT, I have never been sexually assaulted in any way, and only verbally assaulted (when I was with my son... some stupid driver who apparently was pissed he had to slow down because I was stopped, waiting for traffic to clear, before turning left...yelling "fuck you" out his car window as he passed multiple times) once. Oh, sometimes, I get looks. You get to know the looks of those who don't like foreigners, and my husband has gotten looks, having a foreign wife, but nothing else really (Older generation tends to give those looks more often than younger). I don't really slip into the role of "protect myself when I am walking alone late at night" like I did in the US. I don't constantly examine my environment for a threat. Honestly, if I ever go back to the US, I am going to have to change my mindset again, as I have fallen out of these habits.

As for the book you are reading, it seems to be Red Storm Rising, but I had to google it=P Never read that book. Honestly, never read any Tom Clancy books. I have meant to, but never have. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:26, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Good news, the repair guys are coming over when my husband and son will be out. My husband will be taking my son to swimming class, so I will have them all to myself.

I will greet them in a sexy, see through teddy. I have a nice blue one picked out. Then, while they are working on the door, I will go take a shower.

You honestly don't know how badly I want to strip naked, lay down on my bed facing the bathroom, and let them watch me fuck myself with my sex toys. If my husband would go along with it, and if he was home, I would let my son watch his favorite shows and have my husband make love to me right there in front of them. But, I won't even suggest it, I know he wouldn't. And, I will be good, and not pleasure myself in front of them like you recommended... party pooper...

Still, so excited right now! The construction people across from my kitchen have been disappointing, they have still never come to the window at the right time. I only know they are there because of the lights being on (and I know it is the construction company because of the paint fumes that I smelled when I found out about it...). So, here is my chance to at least get caught, without risk of getting in trouble, naked and wet=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:05, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Hmm, well, I found out a few things. This is the same person that changed the bathroom door last time. And, based on how he was talking to my husband on the phone, and the stuff that he was saying, I don't feel like showing off for him, at all. He already knows what I look like, but I am not going to show him anything again... This guy is pissing us off. So, the door broke once before, and he replaced it, no problem. Now, he is sitting there telling my husband "I can't accept that it broke by itself, you must have hit it", other crap...

I know we didn't hit it, I know what happened each time it broke, and so does my husband. He is acting like we are insulting the quality of his work or something, where we are just trying to say that maybe it is the quality of his supplier, or maybe it is just the environment, and that glass isn't appropriate.

He already pissed us off when he came over, tried to shove all the glass is a cardboard box, failed, and just left it there for "next week". Now, it is almost next week, and my husband just told me that he won't be here this week, he will come next week. God, I keep telling my husband he should just tell the landlord and let the landlord talk to the guy. This isn't even our house...and yet, we will need to pay out of pocket for it because "I just don't believe you didn't hit it" or whatever it is he is saying.

Maybe I will get a fucking frog from downstairs and let him see that naked, but I think I will wear as thick of clothes as I can stand when he is here... No longer in any naught mood, especially not around someone like this guy... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Fri, 25 May 2018 07:05:40 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Dirty me needs another new Sextion */ May need a new sextion soon...

== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

I have had an interesting week and a half...

So, there is an apartment, across from our kitchen, one floor up, that the construction company has been doing something with. Guess there will be new people there soon.

Well, once I noticed there was work going on there, I started getting naughty in my kitchen, hoping the construction people will catch me. I mean, no risk so go nuts.

It seems since I discovered someone was working up there, I have not went into my kitchen fully clothed. Topless, bottomless, in bra, in panties, completely naked. I have not seen the workers yet, but who knows, not like I watch the window to see if faces appear the entire time I am in my kitchen. I actually do things in my kitchen, like cooking, laundry, washing dishes.

Needless to say, I have orgasmed a few times in my kitchen, hoping they will catch me. Although, still no sightings, so it is starting to wear off a little, and I don't want my neighbors to catch me, since I have to live in the same community as them xD

Some friends and us had a pool party yesterday. Well, not really a pool party. We just went to visit them and spent the time we were there in the pool. I wore a bikini. Nothing special. I mean, I got it from a store that tends to sell rather blah clothes. The sexiest thing they have is panties with semi transparent back. So it wasn't some micro bikini or anything. And, I didn't do anything. We spent the entire time in the kids pool, since she has two daughters and a son (her husband wasn't there), and I have 1 son. I felt so self conscious. Isn't it strange, that I feel so self conscious swimming around in a kids pool in a normal bikini, yet I don't feel self conscious masturbating in my kitchen where some workers can see me if they look out the window? I know, probably more because I was around people I know and am friends with, while the workers, if they catch me, are complete strangers. Still seems strange. Of course, last night, my husband told me "I am so surprised you would wear that there". Didn't even no what to say... (And no, he doesn't know about my "exhibitionism" fascination...) I admit, you rarely see Taiwanese in bikinis, but still, not like it was that risque. I mean, the store I got it from has granny panties in every shape you want, but not a single "sexy" lingerie. They don't even sell thongs, or g-strings, or tanga cut panties, let alone other, sexy underwear, so when you think swimsuit, don't think "very sexy", instead, cute or boring. (Even my bikini was hard to find, they had two different bikini options...) Of course, I did notice a couple guys check me out. And one older guy for some reason was staying at the kiddie pool with his, not sure, think the girl was like his grand daughter or something, or he had her when he was older than normal. And she was more than old enough not to need supervision...

Also, a couple days ago, the glass door on our shower shattered. I mean, completely. It even fell. Glass all over the bathroom right now. I have already cut my foot and my finger...

Sadly, the people sent by our landlord to check it was sent yesterday, while my husband was home. Too bad, because I imagined myself, sleeping naked, no blanket, while they came in to check the door (I mean, it was 8:00 AM, OMFG, too early to get up on a weekend). Hmm, wondering if they will come over to repair it while my husband is at work. I really want a shower, and don't think I can wait for them to finish. (lol, that is what I did last time the door was broke...makes me wonder wtf is wrong with the construction company, putting a door like that in for the bathroom door...)

Well, because of all the broken glass I had to go and get a plastic bin. Yeah, not easy to scooter with. Sadly, I had worn shorts, and, well, it was late at night, and dark, so, I also picked up a nice skirt. I slipped into the bathroom, slipped off my shorts and panties, and slipped the skirt on.

Now, since I was on a scooter, it was either try to hold it with one hand and scooter with the other, not very good. But, fortunately it fit between the seat and the, well, whatever that front part is called, where the handles are. That meant I ended up with my legs spread wide, scootering down the road. I know a couple people got flashed when I had to turn.

It has been a very interesting time lately xD

Some workers still to try to show off for, both near my house (upstairs, across from our kitchen) and in my house (while fixing the door in my bathroom)

Honestly, you don't know how excited I have been feeling lately. Hmm, wonder, what would happen if I grabbed my sex toys while they fix my bathroom door (btw, it is the master bathroom, so in the master bedroom) Would that be pushing it too far? "Hey, come in, please take your time and replace the door. I will just be here in the bedroom, fucking myself senseless right here in almost the same room as you, where you can plainly see me". Concern is, they were hired by my landlord, and my husband talks to him. Wonder if they would say anything to my landlord... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Eh, pretending to be asleep would not work. If they come when my husband is home, well, that wouldn't work. If they come when my husband isn't home, well, then I can't really pretend to be asleep because we live in a gated community and I need to ring them in. Plus, my son will be with me, so while I could entertain him with his tablet while they are there, so I could be alone in the bedroom with them, it wouldn't make sense for me to go "back to sleep".

Nah, last time the door was fixed (This will be the second time), I "urgently needed to take a shower and get ready to go". Since it is the bathroom door, well, I was showering right in front of the workers (not sure if they will be the same ones this time or not, not like that matters). I know enough Chinese to tell them I need to take a shower because once they are done, I need to leave, and no, they can just finish the work while I shower, just please don't look. (bu hao yi zi, wo yao shi zao. ni men gong zuo hao, wo gen wo de er zi yao qu wai mien. mei guan xi, ni men huei gong zuo, ke shi, qing bu kan) (excuse me, I need shower. You work complete, me and my son need go outside. No problem, you work, but please not look).

As I said, in the US, no, I wouldn't do something like that for fear of being raped. Here, that isn't honestly something I even worry about anymore. Not saying rape has never happened to women here (Looking it up, I guess new Taipei city had about 50 rape cases reported in 2016, so I guess it is not non-existent), but I have never heard of any of them (you can check here: www.nationmaster.com/country-info/compare/Taiwan/United-States/Crime, a US vs. Taiwan for crime). Very possible that it is just not reported often here, given this society is still very patriarchal, not sure, I just know other than being touched inappropriately on the MRT, I have never been sexually assaulted in any way, and only verbally assaulted (when I was with my son... some stupid driver who apparently was pissed he had to slow down because I was stopped, waiting for traffic to clear, before turning left...yelling "fuck you" out his car window as he passed multiple times) once. Oh, sometimes, I get looks. You get to know the looks of those who don't like foreigners, and my husband has gotten looks, having a foreign wife, but nothing else really (Older generation tends to give those looks more often than younger). I don't really slip into the role of "protect myself when I am walking alone late at night" like I did in the US. I don't constantly examine my environment for a threat. Honestly, if I ever go back to the US, I am going to have to change my mindset again, as I have fallen out of these habits.

As for the book you are reading, it seems to be Red Storm Rising, but I had to google it=P Never read that book. Honestly, never read any Tom Clancy books. I have meant to, but never have. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:26, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Good news, the repair guys are coming over when my husband and son will be out. My husband will be taking my son to swimming class, so I will have them all to myself.

I will greet them in a sexy, see through teddy. I have a nice blue one picked out. Then, while they are working on the door, I will go take a shower.

You honestly don't know how badly I want to strip naked, lay down on my bed facing the bathroom, and let them watch me fuck myself with my sex toys. If my husband would go along with it, and if he was home, I would let my son watch his favorite shows and have my husband make love to me right there in front of them. But, I won't even suggest it, I know he wouldn't. And, I will be good, and not pleasure myself in front of them like you recommended... party pooper...

Still, so excited right now! The construction people across from my kitchen have been disappointing, they have still never come to the window at the right time. I only know they are there because of the lights being on (and I know it is the construction company because of the paint fumes that I smelled when I found out about it...). So, here is my chance to at least get caught, without risk of getting in trouble, naked and wet=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:05, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Wed, 23 May 2018 06:26:19 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Dirty me needs another new Sextion */ Never read that book

== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

I have had an interesting week and a half...

So, there is an apartment, across from our kitchen, one floor up, that the construction company has been doing something with. Guess there will be new people there soon.

Well, once I noticed there was work going on there, I started getting naughty in my kitchen, hoping the construction people will catch me. I mean, no risk so go nuts.

It seems since I discovered someone was working up there, I have not went into my kitchen fully clothed. Topless, bottomless, in bra, in panties, completely naked. I have not seen the workers yet, but who knows, not like I watch the window to see if faces appear the entire time I am in my kitchen. I actually do things in my kitchen, like cooking, laundry, washing dishes.

Needless to say, I have orgasmed a few times in my kitchen, hoping they will catch me. Although, still no sightings, so it is starting to wear off a little, and I don't want my neighbors to catch me, since I have to live in the same community as them xD

Some friends and us had a pool party yesterday. Well, not really a pool party. We just went to visit them and spent the time we were there in the pool. I wore a bikini. Nothing special. I mean, I got it from a store that tends to sell rather blah clothes. The sexiest thing they have is panties with semi transparent back. So it wasn't some micro bikini or anything. And, I didn't do anything. We spent the entire time in the kids pool, since she has two daughters and a son (her husband wasn't there), and I have 1 son. I felt so self conscious. Isn't it strange, that I feel so self conscious swimming around in a kids pool in a normal bikini, yet I don't feel self conscious masturbating in my kitchen where some workers can see me if they look out the window? I know, probably more because I was around people I know and am friends with, while the workers, if they catch me, are complete strangers. Still seems strange. Of course, last night, my husband told me "I am so surprised you would wear that there". Didn't even no what to say... (And no, he doesn't know about my "exhibitionism" fascination...) I admit, you rarely see Taiwanese in bikinis, but still, not like it was that risque. I mean, the store I got it from has granny panties in every shape you want, but not a single "sexy" lingerie. They don't even sell thongs, or g-strings, or tanga cut panties, let alone other, sexy underwear, so when you think swimsuit, don't think "very sexy", instead, cute or boring. (Even my bikini was hard to find, they had two different bikini options...) Of course, I did notice a couple guys check me out. And one older guy for some reason was staying at the kiddie pool with his, not sure, think the girl was like his grand daughter or something, or he had her when he was older than normal. And she was more than old enough not to need supervision...

Also, a couple days ago, the glass door on our shower shattered. I mean, completely. It even fell. Glass all over the bathroom right now. I have already cut my foot and my finger...

Sadly, the people sent by our landlord to check it was sent yesterday, while my husband was home. Too bad, because I imagined myself, sleeping naked, no blanket, while they came in to check the door (I mean, it was 8:00 AM, OMFG, too early to get up on a weekend). Hmm, wondering if they will come over to repair it while my husband is at work. I really want a shower, and don't think I can wait for them to finish. (lol, that is what I did last time the door was broke...makes me wonder wtf is wrong with the construction company, putting a door like that in for the bathroom door...)

Well, because of all the broken glass I had to go and get a plastic bin. Yeah, not easy to scooter with. Sadly, I had worn shorts, and, well, it was late at night, and dark, so, I also picked up a nice skirt. I slipped into the bathroom, slipped off my shorts and panties, and slipped the skirt on.

Now, since I was on a scooter, it was either try to hold it with one hand and scooter with the other, not very good. But, fortunately it fit between the seat and the, well, whatever that front part is called, where the handles are. That meant I ended up with my legs spread wide, scootering down the road. I know a couple people got flashed when I had to turn.

It has been a very interesting time lately xD

Some workers still to try to show off for, both near my house (upstairs, across from our kitchen) and in my house (while fixing the door in my bathroom)

Honestly, you don't know how excited I have been feeling lately. Hmm, wonder, what would happen if I grabbed my sex toys while they fix my bathroom door (btw, it is the master bathroom, so in the master bedroom) Would that be pushing it too far? "Hey, come in, please take your time and replace the door. I will just be here in the bedroom, fucking myself senseless right here in almost the same room as you, where you can plainly see me". Concern is, they were hired by my landlord, and my husband talks to him. Wonder if they would say anything to my landlord... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Eh, pretending to be asleep would not work. If they come when my husband is home, well, that wouldn't work. If they come when my husband isn't home, well, then I can't really pretend to be asleep because we live in a gated community and I need to ring them in. Plus, my son will be with me, so while I could entertain him with his tablet while they are there, so I could be alone in the bedroom with them, it wouldn't make sense for me to go "back to sleep".

Nah, last time the door was fixed (This will be the second time), I "urgently needed to take a shower and get ready to go". Since it is the bathroom door, well, I was showering right in front of the workers (not sure if they will be the same ones this time or not, not like that matters). I know enough Chinese to tell them I need to take a shower because once they are done, I need to leave, and no, they can just finish the work while I shower, just please don't look. (bu hao yi zi, wo yao shi zao. ni men gong zuo hao, wo gen wo de er zi yao qu wai mien. mei guan xi, ni men huei gong zuo, ke shi, qing bu kan) (excuse me, I need shower. You work complete, me and my son need go outside. No problem, you work, but please not look).

As I said, in the US, no, I wouldn't do something like that for fear of being raped. Here, that isn't honestly something I even worry about anymore. Not saying rape has never happened to women here (Looking it up, I guess new Taipei city had about 50 rape cases reported in 2016, so I guess it is not non-existent), but I have never heard of any of them (you can check here: www.nationmaster.com/country-info/compare/Taiwan/United-States/Crime, a US vs. Taiwan for crime). Very possible that it is just not reported often here, given this society is still very patriarchal, not sure, I just know other than being touched inappropriately on the MRT, I have never been sexually assaulted in any way, and only verbally assaulted (when I was with my son... some stupid driver who apparently was pissed he had to slow down because I was stopped, waiting for traffic to clear, before turning left...yelling "fuck you" out his car window as he passed multiple times) once. Oh, sometimes, I get looks. You get to know the looks of those who don't like foreigners, and my husband has gotten looks, having a foreign wife, but nothing else really (Older generation tends to give those looks more often than younger). I don't really slip into the role of "protect myself when I am walking alone late at night" like I did in the US. I don't constantly examine my environment for a threat. Honestly, if I ever go back to the US, I am going to have to change my mindset again, as I have fallen out of these habits.

As for the book you are reading, it seems to be Red Storm Rising, but I had to google it=P Never read that book. Honestly, never read any Tom Clancy books. I have meant to, but never have. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:26, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

Dirty Me's Diary

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 09:49:51 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Move doggy kisses here

Dear Diary,

I hope no one else is reading you. I mean, these are my private, personal thoughts. Someone might think I am strange, or sick, or something.

HEY, ARE YOU READING MY DIARY!!! Get out!!! I am SERIOUS! I will call the police, or the mofia, or something. Ask them to kill you! I am a witch! I know how to cast spells! I will call a demon on you!!!

Okay, that should scare away anyone that tries to steal you or read you or something.

Well, just so you know diary, I am 18, and still in high school. So, anyways, where should I start?

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Fight at school|I was in a fight at school today...]]

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Ass patted on the train|My ass was patted today while I was on the train]]

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses|I got lots of doggy kisses! And an unexpected doggy kiss...]]

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Skip ahead|Skip ahead to stories that fall later, just because I am not in the mood to work on it in chronological order right now...This option will disappear as I make the chains up to these currently unconnected parts.]]

[[Category:Dirty Me's Diary]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Skip ahead

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 09:48:45 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Move Doggy Kisses

So, skipping ahead I guess. Just so you know, Dirty Me is not barely 18 and not still in high school. I just want to write like someone experiencing these things for the first time.

No worries, no demons or mafia hits for reading this=P

After all, that's what it is for. What, you really think I would keep a real diary online? I am not that young and stupid...

Anyways, here are some of the "future" path choices.

See, part of the dilemma is trying to write something that doesn't go into my other stories, just with a different tone of voice. I am afraid I am not that original of a person...no matter whether or not my writing is good.

[[Dirty Me's Diary/nipple slip|The nipple slip!]]

[[Category: Dirty Me's Diary|Skip Ahead]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses forever

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 06:02:54 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Final page of this one

Dear Diary,

Well, after a little searching online, I found out that I cannot get pregnant by a dog. I guess I also cannot get some dog STI or anything.

Makes me feel a bit better. I guess I just need to be careful of UTIs.

So, after finding out, I went back to see Kisses. But, he was gone...

I wanted to cry. It seems that the dog pack was caught and sent to some dog shelter, but here, they don't keep them, they kill them.

There was another pack already in the territory (I was afraid to go out, after Kisses fucking me, so it had been a couple weeks.). All they did was growl at me and bark, trying to chase me away.

I talked to my parents, and we found out where they were taken. We went, and fortunately Kisses had not been killed yet.

The people let us take him home. I wanted to rescue them all, but my parents only let me pick one. Of course I picked Kisses.

My parents laughed at that name after I told them that it was because he was so friendly, and likes to give doggy kisses. I just didn't tell them where...

We had him checked by the vet. The vet said he was in good shape, just malnourished. No sickness or anything. I felt much better after that.

So, we took him home, and I immediately bought some things to put over his paws, a heavy vest for myself, and after he tried to mount my mom, which she was not at all happy about, did some research on how to train him. Now, I am pleased to say, he has learned when it is appropriate to lick and mount, and when it is not.

I love Kisses, and really, what is not to love. He loves oral, unlike most guys, and when I am in the mood, is always ready to pleasure my pussy. And trust me, I don't think his doggy penis is ugly, or too large, any more. And, I don't need to worry about getting pregnant or getting some STI.

It is funny, as I write this last entry, he has his paws on the bed, I have my ass in the air, and, well, you can guess.

God, it feels good, and I no longer need to worry about sex toys.

Anyways, Kisses has already knotted, so, I am a bit, sticky, down there. Time to go shower up.

[[Category: Dirty Me's Diary|Doggy kisses forever]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses?

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 05:34:26 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Created page

Dear Diary,

I am shaking so badly right now. Not sure if I should go to the doctor or not...

So, I have been enjoying the "doggy kisses" a little too much. Been stopping by the strays a lot recently. They know me very well, and when I come, the shaggy, brown furred doggy, which I just call "kisses", for obvious reason, walks up to me, tail wagging. He even jumps on me now. And, well, sometimes he doesn't seem to wait, burying his face between my legs.

I don't know if I am doing something wrong. Like, maybe I should not have been letting him lick me there when I bring food. Like, "Hey, lick my pussy, and I will give you food."

His enthusiasm almost got me caught a few times. Fortunately, I go at night, so I was able to see the headlights right before they came around the corner. I was able to jump up and make sure my skirt was in place. But a couple times, he went straight to me, trying to lick my pussy, while a car was coming. I would die if anyone caught me, with a stray dog, or, well, any dog, licking my pussy.

Anyways, he got all stiff the first time a few days ago. I alternated between staring at it and looking away in disgust. I mean, his doggy penis is...rather big. And very ugly...

So, today, I was all bent over, with kisses wagging his tail, coming straight for me.

Before I knew it, he wasn't licking, but was mounting me. I mean, his penis wasn't out or anything, so I don't know what happened, but I felt first something, then, i really felt something.

His claws scratched me a bit, and I could feel his penis swell inside me. There was some intense pressure, then, I think he came.

I don't know if I got pregnant or something. He came right inside me. I was so afraid, I wasn't sure what to do. What if he gave me some dog STI or something? What if I got pregnant, and give birth to puppies? But, how would I explain to the doctor, tell him what I am worried about, without saying I just got fucked by a dog...?

I think I am going to go take a long, hot bath, and see if I can find anything on the internet later...

God, I really don't know what to do. It felt okay, although I am a bit scratched up, especially down there. But I don't want puppies, or some strange dog AIDS...

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses forever|Hmm, Doggy kisses, or...?]]

[[Category: Dirty Me's Diary|Doggy kisses?]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses 2

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 04:27:10 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Minor fix

Dear Diary,

Wow! That is all I can really say.

So, I told you about how the dog started licking my panties, right?

Well, it felt good. I mean, I know I am not supposed to say that, but it did.

And, you know how I sort of wondered what it would feel like...without panties?

So, I brought food tonight. A couple day's worth of leftovers. And...I decided to wear a short skirt without my panties.

So, as I was playing with the puppy, the same dog, at least I think the same dog, brown fur, a bit shaggy, almost like a golden retriever. I haven't seen another one like that there. I mean, he isn't a golden retriever, at least not a pure one. He is a bit smaller, with some black spots, like most of the other dogs here.

So, while I was bent over, he came over again, and, well, you know, started licking.

Right before, I was getting nervous. What would happen if he got, you know, all excited, and decided to try mounting me or something? I mean, I wasn't really sure I should let a dog lick me there, but mount me, no way...

Anyways, so the first time he licked me, I jumped. He ran off a bit. I mean, they know me and all, but they are still stray dogs.

It felt electric. I mean, right there, on my pussy down there.

So, I bent over, on all fours, and watched him to make him feel more comfortable. It took him a few minutes, and I was about to get up. My knees were starting to hurt, like that, on the concrete. Well, as I was about to give up this stupid idea, he finally came back. And when he started licking, OMFG! It was so...I can't even think of the words for it. I mean, you know I have masturbated. I have written enough about that, but this. His tongue was so warm, and smooth. Not completely, not like my dildo, but not like my cats either (And no, my cat doesn't lick my pussy, so don't even ask...)

I mean, he was really licking, and hard. I orgasmed so fast. He is much better than my dildo, my vibrator, my fingers, whatever.

Wow, it was so amazing. Like I was given a prize for giving them food. My reward? Hmm, wonder if dogs think like that, like he was doing it to reward me for feeding them.

I think I am going to be spending more time with them. Well, at least when I am feeling...you know...horny...

Hmm, wonder if it is too late to go back today...

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses?|Doggy kisses?]]

[[Category: Dirty Me's Diary|Doggy kisses 2]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses 2

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 04:25:39 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Add link to next step in story

Dear Diary,

Wow! That is all I can really say.

So, I told you about how the dog started licking my panties, right?

Well, it felt good. I mean, I know I am not supposed to say that, but it did.

And, you know how I sort of wondered what it would feel like...without panties?

So, I brought food tonight. A couple day's worth of leftovers. And...I decided to wear a short skirt without my panties.

So, as I was playing with the puppy, the same dog, at least I think the same dog, brown fur, a bit shaggy, almost like a golden retriever. I haven't seen another one like that there. I mean, he isn't a golden retriever, at least not a pure one. He is a big smaller, with some black spots, like most of the other dogs here.

So, while I was bent over, he came over again, and, well, you know, started licking.

Right before, I was getting nervous. What would happen if he got, you know, all excited, and decided to try mounting me or something? I mean, I wasn't really sure I should let a dog lick me there, but mount me, no way...

Anyways, so the first time he licked me, I jumped. He ran off a bit. I mean, they know me and all, but they are still stray dogs.

It felt electric. I mean, right there, on my pussy down there.

So, I bent over, on all fours, and watched him to make him feel more comfortable. It took him a few minutes, and I was about to get up. My knees were starting to hurt, like that, on the concrete. Well, as I was about to give up this stupid idea, he finally came back. And when he started licking, OMFG! It was so...I can't even think of the words for it. I mean, you know I have masturbated. I have written enough about that, but this. His tongue was so warm, and smooth. Not completely, not like my dildo, but not like my cats either (And no, my cat doesn't lick my pussy, so don't even ask...)

I mean, he was really licking, and hard. I orgasmed so fast. He is much better than my dildo, my vibrator, my fingers, whatever.

Wow, it was so amazing. Like I was given a prize for giving them food. My reward? Hmm, wonder if dogs think like that, like he was doing it to reward me for feeding them.

I think I am going to be spending more time with them. Well, at least when I am feeling...you know...horny...

Hmm, wonder if it is too late to go back today...

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses?|Doggy kisses?]]

[[Category: Dirty Me's Diary|Doggy kisses 2]]

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Mon, 21 May 2018 03:33:47 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Dirty me needs another new Sextion */ Interesting times

== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

I have had an interesting week and a half...

So, there is an apartment, across from our kitchen, one floor up, that the construction company has been doing something with. Guess there will be new people there soon.

Well, once I noticed there was work going on there, I started getting naughty in my kitchen, hoping the construction people will catch me. I mean, no risk so go nuts.

It seems since I discovered someone was working up there, I have not went into my kitchen fully clothed. Topless, bottomless, in bra, in panties, completely naked. I have not seen the workers yet, but who knows, not like I watch the window to see if faces appear the entire time I am in my kitchen. I actually do things in my kitchen, like cooking, laundry, washing dishes.

Needless to say, I have orgasmed a few times in my kitchen, hoping they will catch me. Although, still no sightings, so it is starting to wear off a little, and I don't want my neighbors to catch me, since I have to live in the same community as them xD

Some friends and us had a pool party yesterday. Well, not really a pool party. We just went to visit them and spent the time we were there in the pool. I wore a bikini. Nothing special. I mean, I got it from a store that tends to sell rather blah clothes. The sexiest thing they have is panties with semi transparent back. So it wasn't some micro bikini or anything. And, I didn't do anything. We spent the entire time in the kids pool, since she has two daughters and a son (her husband wasn't there), and I have 1 son. I felt so self conscious. Isn't it strange, that I feel so self conscious swimming around in a kids pool in a normal bikini, yet I don't feel self conscious masturbating in my kitchen where some workers can see me if they look out the window? I know, probably more because I was around people I know and am friends with, while the workers, if they catch me, are complete strangers. Still seems strange. Of course, last night, my husband told me "I am so surprised you would wear that there". Didn't even no what to say... (And no, he doesn't know about my "exhibitionism" fascination...) I admit, you rarely see Taiwanese in bikinis, but still, not like it was that risque. I mean, the store I got it from has granny panties in every shape you want, but not a single "sexy" lingerie. They don't even sell thongs, or g-strings, or tanga cut panties, let alone other, sexy underwear, so when you think swimsuit, don't think "very sexy", instead, cute or boring. (Even my bikini was hard to find, they had two different bikini options...) Of course, I did notice a couple guys check me out. And one older guy for some reason was staying at the kiddie pool with his, not sure, think the girl was like his grand daughter or something, or he had her when he was older than normal. And she was more than old enough not to need supervision...

Also, a couple days ago, the glass door on our shower shattered. I mean, completely. It even fell. Glass all over the bathroom right now. I have already cut my foot and my finger...

Sadly, the people sent by our landlord to check it was sent yesterday, while my husband was home. Too bad, because I imagined myself, sleeping naked, no blanket, while they came in to check the door (I mean, it was 8:00 AM, OMFG, too early to get up on a weekend). Hmm, wondering if they will come over to repair it while my husband is at work. I really want a shower, and don't think I can wait for them to finish. (lol, that is what I did last time the door was broke...makes me wonder wtf is wrong with the construction company, putting a door like that in for the bathroom door...)

Well, because of all the broken glass I had to go and get a plastic bin. Yeah, not easy to scooter with. Sadly, I had worn shorts, and, well, it was late at night, and dark, so, I also picked up a nice skirt. I slipped into the bathroom, slipped off my shorts and panties, and slipped the skirt on.

Now, since I was on a scooter, it was either try to hold it with one hand and scooter with the other, not very good. But, fortunately it fit between the seat and the, well, whatever that front part is called, where the handles are. That meant I ended up with my legs spread wide, scootering down the road. I know a couple people got flashed when I had to turn.

It has been a very interesting time lately xD

Some workers still to try to show off for, both near my house (upstairs, across from our kitchen) and in my house (while fixing the door in my bathroom)

Honestly, you don't know how excited I have been feeling lately. Hmm, wonder, what would happen if I grabbed my sex toys while they fix my bathroom door (btw, it is the master bathroom, so in the master bedroom) Would that be pushing it too far? "Hey, come in, please take your time and replace the door. I will just be here in the bedroom, fucking myself senseless right here in almost the same room as you, where you can plainly see me". Concern is, they were hired by my landlord, and my husband talks to him. Wonder if they would say anything to my landlord... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses 2

DirtyMeStoryTime — Thu, 10 May 2018 09:55:43 GMT

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Dear Diary,

Wow! That is all I can really say.

So, I told you about how the dog started licking my panties, right?

Well, it felt good. I mean, I know I am not supposed to say that, but it did.

And, you know how I sort of wondered what it would feel like...without panties?

So, I brought food tonight. A couple day's worth of leftovers. And...I decided to wear a short skirt without my panties.

So, as I was playing with the puppy, the same dog, at least I think the same dog, brown fur, a bit shaggy, almost like a golden retriever. I haven't seen another one like that there. I mean, he isn't a golden retriever, at least not a pure one. He is a big smaller, with some black spots, like most of the other dogs here.

So, while I was bent over, he came over again, and, well, you know, started licking.

Right before, I was getting nervous. What would happen if he got, you know, all excited, and decided to try mounting me or something? I mean, I wasn't really sure I should let a dog lick me there, but mount me, no way...

Anyways, so the first time he licked me, I jumped. He ran off a bit. I mean, they know me and all, but they are still stray dogs.

It felt electric. I mean, right there, on my pussy down there.

So, I bent over, on all fours, and watched him to make him feel more comfortable. It took him a few minutes, and I was about to get up. My knees were starting to hurt, like that, on the concrete. Well, as I was about to give up this stupid idea, he finally came back. And when he started licking, OMFG! It was so...I can't even think of the words for it. I mean, you know I have masturbated. I have written enough about that, but this. His tongue was so warm, and smooth. Not completely, not like my dildo, but not like my cats either (And no, my cat doesn't lick my pussy, so don't even ask...)

I mean, he was really licking, and hard. I orgasmed so fast. He is much better than my dildo, my vibrator, my fingers, whatever.

Wow, it was so amazing. Like I was given a prize for giving them food. My reward? Hmm, wonder if dogs think like that, like he was doing it to reward me for feeding them.

I think I am going to be spending more time with them. Well, at least when I am feeling...you know...horny...

Hmm, wonder if it is too late to go back today...

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Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses

DirtyMeStoryTime — Thu, 10 May 2018 09:41:04 GMT

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Dear Diary,

Something strange happened to me. Well, let me start at the beginning.

So, me and mom used to always take our leftovers to this one area where these stray dogs always hang around. As I got older, and mom got busier, she just asked me to do it myself. I ride there, so it isn't that far, and the street is not near anything, so I never have to worry about creeps around. That is probably why the stray dogs always stay over there.

Anyways, today, when I brought the food, I started playing with one of the new puppies. It seems one just gave birth, and there are a few new puppies in their pack. They know me pretty well, so do not bard or anything, and will come up to me when I give them food.

The puppy I was playing with is so cute. Black fur with white paws and white on his nose. He likes to nip, but it doesn't hurt.

Anyways, while I was there, on my knees, playing with the puppy, one of the adult dogs stuck his face right in my crotch and started licking my panties under my skirt with his tongue. I know it was male because I could see his thingy get all hard...

I wasn't sure what to do. I didn't know which one it was, since it was all dark, and I wasn't sure how to react.

Besides, it felt good. I mean, no one else was around, so not like I need to worry about what someone might think. Although, I imagine my blush was so bright if someone had been around they could have probably seen it even in the dark.

I am blushing sitting here writing this now...

But, it did feel good. I mean, really good.

I wonder what it would have felt like if I wasn't wearing panties...

OMG, can't believe I even wrote that.

Please don't tell anyone I thought something like that...

[[Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses 2|Doggy kisses without panties]]

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Dirty Me's Diary/Doggy kisses

DirtyMeStoryTime — Thu, 10 May 2018 09:07:52 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Create doggy kisses page

Dear Diary,

Something strange happened to me. Well, let me start at the beginning.

So, me and mom used to always take our leftovers to this one area where these stray dogs always hang around. As I got older, and mom got busier, she just asked me to do it myself. I ride there, so it isn't that far, and the street is not near anything, so I never have to worry about creeps around. That is probably why the stray dogs always stay over there.

Anyways, today, when I brought the food, I started playing with one of the new puppies. It seems one just gave birth, and there are a few new puppies in their pack. They know me pretty well, so do not bard or anything, and will come up to me when I give them food.

The puppy I was playing with is so cute. Black fur with white paws and white on his nose. He likes to nip, but it doesn't hurt.

Anyways, while I was there, on my knees, playing with the puppy, one of the adult dogs stuck his face right in my crotch and started licking my panties under my skirt with his tongue. I know it was male because I could see his thingy get all hard...

I wasn't sure what to do. I didn't know which one it was, since it was all dark, and I wasn't sure how to react.

Besides, it felt good. I mean, no one else was around, so not like I need to worry about what someone might think. Although, I imagine my blush was so bright if someone had been around they could have probably seen it even in the dark.

I am blushing sitting here writing this now...

But, it did feel good. I mean, really good.

I wonder what it would have felt like if I wasn't wearing panties...

OMG, can't believe I even wrote that.

Please don't tell anyone I thought something like that...

[[Category:Dirty Me's Diary|Doggy kisses]]

Dirty Me's Diary/Skip ahead

DirtyMeStoryTime — Tue, 08 May 2018 05:03:09 GMT

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Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

hailey
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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

So, I almost got the nerve to go scootering topless, but guess it is good I didn't. I had to go to the convenience store at 2 am. I took off my top completely, but then got too nervous. So, I left my top off and slipped on my windbreaker that I keep in my scooter. I left it unzipped, so not sure it was not that much different. Anyways, guess it was good that I didn't go completely topless, because there was a security guard next to his scooter at one of the construction sites along the way (This one was right next to me, since it was a very small road, unless the one that saw me with my skirt up, since that was one of those 4 lane roads with the center divider, and he was on the opposite side, so probably didn't see much if anything. No doubt this time I was seen...). Well, he got an eyeful anyways, because the windbreaker was unzipped. I have to admit though, it was more than a little thrilling.

Think I am almost ready to try a longer ride, completely topless. After, I want to try bottomless. Although, maybe it is better to try the opposite way? It is easier to notice topless than bottomless, at least from a distance. Anyways, work my way up to a complete nude ride.

lol, the other day, the neighbor was in her kitchen cooking something. I went into my kitchen, completely naked, and masturbated while watching her. I kept wondering if she would turn around and see me. She never did turn around, but it was thrilling to think that all she had to do was turn around to see me. Not that she would see much. I mean, our windows in the kitchen are high enough that she wouldn't even have seen my breasts without me standing on a stool or on my toes, but still.

Hmm, maybe that is why the next door apartment keeps getting new people all the time? The first people there caught me, masturbating on my balcony. The second people I am sure saw me doing something. I don't think the third saw me doing anything, unless it was walking in my kitchen naked (If stand near the far wall, you can see the other balcony door, which is glass except the frame, so it is possible to be seen). Now, we have these new neighbors. Maybe they are all getting scared out by that crazy foreign woman next door? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:50, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

User talk:Teejay

DirtyMeStoryTime — Thu, 03 May 2018 04:47:59 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: /* Dirty me needs another new Sextion */ Police officer freaked me out...

== Top section ==

Hello Teejay, I really liked the chapters you've added so I was wondering if you would be interested in adding to an interactive story that I am aiming to have an actual ending to [[Cassie's Horrible Family]]. Basically the main character (Cassie), goes through a limited amount of various difficulties each day until we get to our ending after a number of days. Basically I don't want any unwritten chapters in the story. I'd like it if you could take a look at it and see if you are interested. - Uman on July 13, 2015

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Thanks for adding to [[TWAWKI|The World As We Know It]]. I will definitely be expanding on your entries as well as working on [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] and [[Chronos]] after I have the basics for [[Arcade Adventure]] all lined up. I have a lot of stories because I am easily bored, but I will come back to each one, be sure (Except, perhaps for [[Primal Influence]] which I consider to be a clumsy first attempt). --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
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Hey thanks for your contributions to [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]. I have noticed that we seem to work on the story around the same time. It occurred to me that we might end up working on the same passage by accident. I wouldn't want either of use to waste our time. Any suggestions on how to avoid doubling up? --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]

Hopefully that will work, but I jump around a bit, especially if an option jumps out for me. Right now I'm just filling the story out a bit, but I enjoy working off of other peoples stories . . . you know trading off and what not. I'll try not to overwrite anything of yours while I'm at it. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 08:16, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind if I flesh out your entries for [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]] a bit? They're really great, but I'd like to add some more detail if you don't mind. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:12, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
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Don't you dare stop writing "Whore it Out!" My pussy almost fucking exploded during the big house storyline!! What happens if she wants to stay with him for good? :3

-RedJenny69 5/8/14

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Not a problem. I appreciate the work you put into it. But, to be honest, I'd like to see what you could do in your own thread. Come up with some new ideas of your own. Craft your own story for the orc. You don't have to if you don't want to, it's just a thought.

If you're going to write for my story 'You Are An Orc', please be aware that all races, humans, elves, and so on, all live separately. Only orcs, and villages made up of outcasts have a mixed society. To make the main orc's elf grandfather the lord of a human town does not make sense, especially considering that it's already been established that Isabelle is the lord's daughter. So, please try to stay consistent with what has already been written. Thanks.

-Kanin452 Feb 11, 2014
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Matt/Katelyn/Amanda to come, maybe very soon. Possible Matt's Dad/Katelyn or Matt's Dad/Amanda or Matt's Dad/Katelyn/Amanda to come. Any other ideas? - Super Tramp

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The Dwayne being humilated path is a 'true love' path, well part of it anyway. What I have going on there is Dwayne's older brother Derrick is going to come into the picture very soon with hoping to get revenge for this brothers humilation depending on the choices you make.

Yeah i realize i haven't really given Katelyn a chance and i love her spunky/sassy attitude. She is definitely a bad girl and i should REALLY show that side of her.

As for Mrs. O'Rielly.. Yeah, some of those paths I left open early on should definitely flesh out a story involving her.

You kept saying Mark but i'm guessing your talking about Matt - the main character.

I've been finding myself ending open paths just so i don't have to deal with them later and this was never my intention. I always wanted the story to be able to intertwine if and whenever possible with slightly different dialogs and events. Such as when Amanda and Katelyn go to the club alone after Matt tells him he can't make it and meet up with Dwayne, there would be a different outcome during the girls locker room scene.

I want people to think.. hey, the story didn't end so I must not have choosen the wrong path only to have it come to an abrupt unsatisfactory end because of that choice you made fifteen pages ago.

I don't know, I'm working on it.

Anyway, I read some of your contributions and I like them. If you would like to help out you can but I do have a lot of ideas that are just to many to write all down. I'm a slow typer and I know that can probably be a little frustrating. - Super Tramp
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Hey! Thanks a lot for the kind words. I thought for sure I was getting yet another warning from Platypus for doing something wrong. I'm very new to this site and don't know the ropes just yet. I'm glad you would like to contribute and thank you very much for asking first. I'm trying to something sorta unique with this story that i don't see often enough in other stories within the Adult Section. I'm trying to make this a story that isn't just about adult themes but rather a story that may occasionally have adult themes. hmm, does that make sense?

I would appreciate any suggestions and maybe I can incorporate them into the story. As of right now though I would like to keep story 'closed' to the community. I REALLY HOPE this doesn't change your appreciation for this story and I hope you will continue reading. Again thank you very much and Merry Christas & Happy New Years. - Super Tramp
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well, that very bad if that's only a standard "warning" because it was extremely rude and uncalled for, besides after reading through what he has said and done with others stories it appears i am not the only person who would agree it was very rude. i will continue to work on my story for now but if things like that continue in such a rude way, i'll finish it somewhere else because i don't feel like spending hours of work only to receive rude comments. anyway i would love to hear your ideas and may be able to throw some, if not many of them in with my story as i really only have one or two ideas which can go more then a couple pages at the moment.

i still fully believe that those kind of warnings may be necessary but can easily be dealt with in a much better,less rude fashion. after reading through his other comments i am shocked there is no FAQ page that is easily accessible to provide that kind of information to new users, that would avoid new users of the site reviving comments which they feel are rude and will allow more users to come and actually stay in the long run.

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Thanks for contributing. I had intended that to be an ending but drawing it out a little longer wouldn't hurt. :) Nice to know at least one person has read a little so far! -- [[User:Captain.Devonin|Cpt. Devonin]]

Just so you know, there are a couple of ways to revert vandalism. You can click the History tab on the top of the page, select the version that existed before the vandal attack, Edit, and save. Or you can click on the vandal's user name on the Recent Changes page, then click on User Contributions. Every page he's made or editted will have a 'revert' option next to it. Click 'revert' and his editing will be undone. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 05:01, 19 February 2009 (PST)

== Collaboration with Fredhot16 over Anime School ==

Over the course of this story, we should answer this list of questions:

1. What kind of genre should ''Anime School'' be overall? Should it be a slice of life story, a mystery, a horror, a comedy, or a thriller? Should it be a sub-genre like such as a "Gothic horror" story or a "psychological thriller" story?

2. Where is the school? Is it in a real place in Japan or is it a fictional place? Are there any special events in that place? Is it a city or a town? What kind of school is it? Is it a boarding school or a public school?

3. What kind of home lives do each of the characters have? What kind of families do they have?

4. What is the significance of the aliens? What is their purpose? DO they have any special abilities? Are they significant to the larger plot? Could they introduce a genre shift such as from drama to horror?

5. What kind of likes and dislikes do the characters have? What are their interests and why do they like said interests? What are their hobbies and why do they like each hobby?

6. What are their short and long term motivations, goals, desires, and temptations?

7. What kind of relationships do the characters have within the class, outside the class, and outside the school?

8. Is there anything special about the school? Are there any events that could conjure up potential stories? Does the school has some mythology around it, myths and legends that could conjure up possible stories for the characters? Have there been serial killer attacks, ghosts, special places or mirrors that could tell you the future? Have there been any Japanese mythological sightings around the area?

9. What hidden depths do the characters have? The characters have been general personalities like "pervert" or "shy" or "athletic" but we know that there is more to people then that. People have the tendency to have more to them then meets the eye. For example, Asa is supposed to be a athlete but who says she can't be a budding botanist? Riko is supposed to be a pervert but who says she can't be as interested in sports as Asa and a competent fighter too? Sia is supposed to be shy but who says that she can't come from a family that had suffered a painful divorce and be a supreme player of card games like poker and Yu-Gi-Oh? Suzaku is also supposed to be shy but who says that he can't be a rock guitarist too?

Every character should have something that is unexpected of them, whether if it is a hobby, something about their life, something about their family, or something about the way they act around other people. It helps the characters be more human and more interesting.

(I'm almost glad that they has broad stroke personalities as it means that we can determine all the little things that, as it piles up, can determine if a shade of red is ruby or crimson, rose or jam, apple or blood.)

(Here are websites below to help with writing the characters.)

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/DevelopCharacterPersonality

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/MakeInterestingCharacters

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:52, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I saw your recent edits. You're apparently going for a dating sim/slice-of-life feel. That's not a ''terrible'' idea, it's typical for a high school anime. Maybe you could some cross it with another genre?

Instead of going for the stereotypical "tough guy with heart of gold trying to hide it because he cares too much about his reputation", you could have him ''embrace'' his heart of gold? He doesn't hide it with stupid lies or no ridiculous disguises. He OPENLY goes out and spends a lot of time helping out at a orphanage. If anyone thinks him soft or weak for doing so, then they're allowed to say it to his face in exchange for a quite some pain. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:43, 6 September 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Well. We've hit a problem. Anime School has transgender characters. Well, I may be wrong. They're only described as "a boy who dresses like a girl" and "a girl who dresses as a boy". But I think we can assume that they're transgender. Sure, there might be other reasons and I'd like to hear them. For now, I'm assuming they're transgender. Which is a problem because a topic like this deserves a VERY careful hand when writing, a hand that I doubt that the original creator had before coming up with this idea. Since he's no longer with us, we have to ask ourselves: do we really want to keep this? I'm not asking because I'm transphobic, I'm asking because I want to this to be treated with the respect and skill it deserves. I'm willing to do research and I hope you're willing too but we need to make a decision about this so that we don't fuck this up majorly when this CYOS gets going. Should we keep this as an experiment for us and as a way to broaden our own experiences or should we cut it out so we don't accidentally do something terrible?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:46, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I thank you for what you've said and for your willingness to write a transgender character but a willingness...let me be blunt: a willingness to write is not the issue here. It's skill, a ability to write this sort of stuff without giving offense, intentionally or otherwise. Do you think you have that skill? Update: If I seem...rough, it's because I want this to go well. Hell, I'm not too sure I can pull this off without fucking up.-[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:28, 21 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Here's a character list and what personalities I've come up for them so far. I'm letting you know so you don't get thrown off track by what I write later. Please tell me if you agree with what I wrote.

? Sia: She's shy, I won't deny that. However, she's also ''very'' tough. Her father and mother divorced by way of ''Kyōgi Rikon'' so when the children had to be picked...well, I haven't come up with an idea for how much family she had or who she went with. Suggestions?

Amari Riko: She, too, is a prankster like Kenji. She's also a fierce fighter. She doesn't ''enjoy'' fighting but she can handle herself pretty well. Her mother is...clingy.

? Asa: Asa's goal in life is to become a doctor, not out of familial pressure but because of a genuine interest in medicine. She has a very tight and loving relationship with her father and she may have "feelings" with her parkour teacher. She's also pretty good at parkour.

Banno : She's extremely moral but she is no fool. She can be just as calculating and manipulative as Kouga, she simply makes the conscious choice not to on the grounds that she believes people are not chess pieces to be moved around. She often tries to act as the moral center of her classroom. When she feels that Kenji has goes too far with a prank, she either helps Riku get back at him or verbally tears him a new one. (Kenji's got enough of a heart to recognize when Dita's right and to not only admit it but to actually try to make up for it.) When Naru gets too creepy, she often tries to smooth things over. While she comes off as flighty and WAY too lively,

? Hinagiku:

? Ami:

? Rena: She has an unfortunate case of sticky fingers.

? Ren:

? Kouga: Kouga has a very Machiavellian side to him. His continuous silence is not because he has nothing to say. It's because he's always watching, thinking. Kouga isn't evil but he is somewhat...unscrupulous. He's very willing to play his classmates and friends like fiddles for his goals and is not prone to telling people the WHOLE truth if it suits him. He's not above occasional cruelty to get somewhere but he does not endorse USELESS cruelty. If it helps him, fine. If it doesn't, then it's worthless.

Yamamoto Kenji: Kenji is a irrepressible prankster, never letting anybody off from his tricks. It doesn't matter who they are, classmate or teacher, parent or sibling. He'll pull jokes on anybody and everybody he can when he feels the urge, all solely for his amusement. Yet he's not above pranking people because they've been cruel. He's willing to defend anybody he thinks have bullied unfairly. (Fair bullying, in his mind, is about the same as karmic justice.) And he's willing to give his time teaching weak or bullied people how to defend themselves. (Yes, did I mention Kenji is skilled in martial arts? Well, I haven't decided WHICH type of martial arts yet.) He does, however, have very stringent and exacting standards for others, his work and himself. Perfection, or least as close to it as possible, is his standard, one he does not compromise on. He also plays the violin. He has seemingly NO concern for how he's seen. Anybody who thinks lesser of him for what he does is allowed to say so to his face for the price of a hard fist to the gut. He'll do what he pleases and according to his conscious.

? Naru: I'm thinking of making this guy...creepy. Not in a perverted way, of course, like taking photos of classmates or trying to force himself on a girl in the shower. (Seriously, that part was utterly unreadable). He's creepy but he doesn't realize how creepy he can be. Take, for example, romantic gestures. His idea of one is to leave a bouquet of flowers with a card that professes his love in flowery terms but doesn't have a name on it. His idea of where to leave it? In the girl's room, right on her bed. And he doesn't see how this could scare her as she's more likely to think that somebody just broke into her house and is love with her then be appreciative of the flowers and card. He sees "romance", she sees " dangerous stalker". Naru is...how do I put it? He has a different ''mindset'' then most people. He's not malicious or malevolent, he simply sees things in a different way. He's capable of great compassion and empathy with people and his background...I haven't developed it yet but I'll try to make it sympathetic. I'm also thinking of getting rid of the crush he had on Asa in the original CYOA. It won't hurt him if he doesn't have an attraction to Asa and, quite frankly, I don't have a good attitude towards Asa x Naru because of the rape scene in the shower. Oh, and his narration will be sprinkled with "observations" of pretty much every woman he meets. He IS a pervert, after all. Just a unintentionally terrifying pervert with a heart. And, no, his perverted side and his scary side don't intersect all that often. That would lead to...dark territory. And while you'll discover that I have a...predilection for dark stuff, I have my boundaries.

? Sagara:

? Nagi:

? Suzaku:

? Hakkaku:

? Yuri: He's the Male-To-Female Transgender person.

? Rin: Rin is an alien. Therefore, we should not assume she naturally acts like a human or has human sensibilities. I have a weird idea where Rin has the ability to warp reality but in a much smaller extent then Dash. Why? Because I love the idea of supposedly weak abilities being extremely devastating in the right hands and mind. Look, I don't have a firm fix on this idea. The idea I have for her is to be able to "switch" things with the same "type" of thing. The "type" has to be general like "switching out" similar car types or similar clothes. She can't turn a fish into a pencil but can "switch" a trout for a bass.

: This dude, too, is an alien and, thus, is not human and should not naturally act like one. He has reality warping powers but they're far stronger.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:54, 27 October 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, Teejay. I asked around on a forum about Japan and transgender people and...well, somebody sent me the link below. You might want to read it.

www.hrw.org/report/2016/05/06/nail-sticks-out-gets-hammered-down/lgbt-bullying-and-exclusion-japanese-schools

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 19:34, 28 November 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yo. So, I was planning on making the shy girl, Sia, a child of divorced parents so I went and did some cursory research on Japanese divorce. There are apparently four types of divorce:

1."Kyōgi Rikon", which is divorce by mutual agreement. More then 90% of all Japanese divorces go this way since it's the fastest, least expensive, and most non-judicial procedure option.

2. "Chōtei Rikon", which is divorce by meditation in a family court.

3." Shinpan Rikon", which is divorce completed by family court decision when divorce cannot be established by mediation.

4. "Saiban Rikon", which is when if divorce cannot be established by the family court, then application is made to the district court for a decision.

Also, in a divorce by agreement, the husband and wife must determine which child they want to have custody of.

Just some things I found out.

Update: There are also "five grounds for unilateral divorce if divorce cannot be reached by mutual agreement": infidelity, malicious desertion, uncertainty whether or not the spouse is dead or alive for three years or more, serious mental disease without hope of recovery, and a “grave reason” which makes continuing the marriage impossible.

Oh, and some more: "Joint custody is not recognized in Japan" and "Japanese family law has no provision for visitation rights and has no legal mechanism to enforce visitation rights or other court-negotiated settlements afterwards. It is quite usual that upon divorce, the father pays nothing for the child’s support and that he never sees his child."

Well, here's another interesting fact: one of the male students is named "Yuri". Platypus told me that "Yuri" is not only Japanese for Lily but it is a female name and, well, slang for "lesbian".I have my own ideas about it: perhaps one of his parents was Russian? Maybe "Yuri" isn't his given name but one he calls himself since he's a Male-to-Female transgender person? I'll decide later.

--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:28, 17 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I've been looking at the pages you've done and I think I've noticed a key flaw in your writing. It's detail. In your writing, you seem to be a bit sparse on detail. You know, describing how people look, the surroundings, people's reactions, the physical sides of emotional reactions like fear making someone pale or rage tightening one's throat (strong emotions do that), the minutia of what's happening in a scene, that sort of thing. You're too general in your writing, you need to be more specific. Now that I think about it, that's actually a common flaw around this website.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:23, 21 December 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, if you want to write this story the way you want, you can go ahead. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:23, 22 January 2018 (Louisiana Time)

== Fredhot16 ==

I have a simple request to ask of you, Mister/Madam Teejay. I have started a few CYOSs in the Mature Story Section. If you go to my page, you will find the CYOSs. I was hoping that you would be so gracious to...get them started, if you would kindly. For the New World of Darkness CYOS, please refer to the Idea Pitches section. That is all and thank you for allowing to voice my humble plea.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:10, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Ah. Yes, I see. I apologize for the prior request as I have now come to the realization that it was a heedless idea. Forgive me for wasting your precious time. In return, may I suggest a CYOA that needs some...ehem, "wiki love"? The name is "Anime School" and it is in the Adult Story section. It is in dire need of more material and the last time someone spared the time to edit this was, as far as in my knowledge, December, 10, 2011. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Yes, I understand but-O.K, I'm dropping the formal way of talking. I don't want to carry on the joke any longer. Yeah, I know that it says "Do Not Edit" but the last time the thing was edited was in 2010 and, hell, the last time the creator edited ANYTHING was in 2013. Is it really wrong to do something for it?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I'm glad you agree! After all, why can't Create Your Own Story have a statue of limitations that lasts more then two years? Can't wait for your newest edits. I recommend trying the "Male Students" section since NO ONE has done anything in that section and some work on the field trip sections.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:10, 14 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Hey, heads up: I'm going to be working on this one as well. I'm going to be doing all types of edits everywhere so excuse me and sorry if I happen to edit something you've done. OOOORRR we could make this a collaboration. Eh? Eh? EEEHHH?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 11:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, let's get this show on the road! --[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:54, 19 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Glad you agree, Teejay. And I mean no offense to you. By the way, apologies for the lack of work I've put into "Anime School". Writing anxiety and I have about 20 other ideas jumbled in my head plus school. P.S Won't be working on Anime School until at least early July. This is the month of Ramadan. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 15:31, 14 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

(Quiet throat clearing) By "it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website", you mean me too, RRRRIIIGGHHTTT?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:23, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

That's what I thought. If that wasn't true, I would have gone and proved my manhood to you the same way Superman did: by punching you in the stomach while declaring my masculinity. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 20:59, 17 June 2016 (Louisiana Time)

I've heard DirtyMe has been giving around flowers so because I have been up for 18 hours straight, here is something in the same spirit:

{{Hypnobutt}}

All glory.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:30 (Louisiana Time), 1 July 2016

Not really by any sense of the word: DirtyMe's the one who has been doing the reviews on this website and I'm not even a internet critic like Linkara, Nostalgia Critic, or a professional critic like Roger Ebert. I'm just a dude who's making bitter comments at random Adult CYOS pages because I'm a curious combination of angry and apathetic towards this website now.

Seriously, that time machine scene was fucking ''gift-wrapped'' for character development which would have elevated the character above the ''THOUSANDS'' of sex objects running around this website. But no. Just waste the opportunity for character development and ignore one of the basic rules of writing. Why not? It's not like you actually CARE about what you're writing. Yeah, this is a case of what MST3K called, "They Just Didn't Care"!

P.S. I haven't read that CYOS yet. Give me a summary of it, please. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:54 (Louisiana Time), 19 July 2016

Ah. ''Fuckin''' riveting. Just...for fuck's sake, is there a actual DAMN story in the Adult CYOS section? You know, something that I could somewhat believe that it would be an actual novel? (Sorry for the tone, I'm not angry at you. This website...it just pisses me off.) --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 19:14 (Louisiana Time), 31 July 2016

Have you ever heard of something called "SCP Foundation"? It's a website where, in a sentence, people spend time making up horror stories about a sociopathic Men In Black organization that "Secure, Contain, Protect" supernatural/extra-normal/eldritch anythings, anyones, and ''anyplaces'' that violate the known laws of reality. They range from a immortal, invulnerable alien lizard that wants to kill ''everything'' to God to the Devil to Bigfoot. Trust me, this website is one of the greatest sources of nightmare fuel on the internet. Hell, I'm surprised there's no CYOSs about SCP. There's Silent Hill, why not this?

Here's a link to many of the scary things that the SCP Foundation has: tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/NightmareFuel/SCPFoundation

Here's a link to the official website: www.scp-wiki.net/

Also, congratulations on your new house. Hope you have plenty of happy memories there. Here's a link to a wonderful Imgur post:

imgur.com/gallery/kp92B

--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:46 (Louisiana Time), 5 September 2016

Well, I HIGHLY advise you to take a peek at SCP. If you're a fan of horror, this website will keep you afraid for fucking ''centuries''. There's all types of horror here from Lovecraftian to Slasher to Aliens to simply the terrible realization that humanity, without the SCP Foundation, would be dead long before we got out of our caves. It won't be unreasonable to think that reality is, simply put, deliberately designed to kill us in a dizzying variety of horrible, bone-chilling ways. And our "heroes", our protectors, are actually somewhat monstrous themselves. Sometimes it's for science, sometimes it's out of just basic cruelty, and sometimes it's because it's the only thing to do to protect the majority of humanity.

Here's a few SCP links just for a taste:

SCP-280: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-280

SCP-993: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-993

SCP-823: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-823

SCP-772: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-772

SCP-682: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-682

SCP-610: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-610 (It even has a special name: "The Flesh That Hates".)

SCP-1983: www.scp-wiki.net/scp-1983

Now if it seems like I'm gushing over this, well, you have your fetishes and I have mine. (I am using the word "fetish" as "something that you like" and not in the sexual term. I do NOT get turned on by SCP. Though when I read something especially scary, it's hard to tell if my heart is pounding out of fear or excitement...)--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:54 (Louisiana Time), 8 September 2016

So, if you had a special power, what would it be and how would you use it for...special purposes?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 9:44 (Louisiana Time), 9 September 2016

O.K, thanks for reminding me that I suck at innuendos. When I said "special", I meant sexual. Also, rampant mind control like that...well, honestly, it sounds...villainous. You do realize that you're just controlling them right? You can't actually ''change'' them and even if you did, that not only raises ethical issues of its own (since you're FORCING people to change, regardless of their own will) but that sort of power will frighten the shit of people and even then, you can't guarantee that you won't try making minor changes of people by the end, which might end in quite a disaster. How about a power that gives you the ability to know exactly the right words to say? That would not violate people's wills. P.S I found a website called Chick Tracts. You should check it out, it is full of the funniest shit you will find. Imagine the people who made "God's Not Dead" 1 and 2 decided to make comics and took EXTRA CRAZY PILLS. According to Chick, evolution is a religion that makes you a god and Satan loves turtleneck and slasher movie cosplay, don't you know? Also, if you tell your children that Santa Clause, the Easter Bunny, and the Tooth Fairy exist, they will be homicidal maniacs from the age of 8 when they're faced with the truth. 8 years old are also capable of killing their cellmates, according to "Fairy Tales". Look it up, it. Is. Hilarious.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:17 (Louisiana Time), 10 September 2016

...To be honest, I can see that being useful. A bit disgusting, maybe, but useful. So how would this power work? Personally, I'd choose the power of temperature control over a certain area, able to send it into extremes of either hot or cold but also capable of subtle changes. Hand gestures would be the medium like thrusting your hands forward to Force Push someone. Not only can it be a useful power, but a little imagination can lead to perverted uses. Guess how. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:13 (Louisiana Time), 12 September 2016

Hey, Teejay. I heard about your "Sphinx" thing so do you mind if I ask you a "real talk" question? Is...is it offensive to be apathetically tolerant towards transgender people? I'm not transphobic, I just don't care if you're a man in a woman's body or a woman in a man's body. That has no factor towards my perception or relationship with you. It's on the same level as what type of soda you like to drink. If you like Pepsi, that's fine. If you like Coca-Cola, that's fine. The type of soda you like is a neutral factor to me and so how you feel about your gender. I feel uneasy about this however. I don't know how to describe it but it doesn't feel like ''real'' tolerance. It's not out of compassion, or so it seems, it's out of indifference, a sort of stolid nonchalance. I don't normally care if you're man who has been born with a vagina, it only matters to me if someone tries to give you shit about it. Your gender is your own damn business and anybody trying to fuck you over that is nothing less but a walking human-shaped piece of shit. That...feels wrong, somehow. Something that I know is a huge and incredibly complicated issue with some people just...doesn't register as something to care too much about until somebody acts like an asshole over it. It almost feels...callous. Stony-hearted. Cold. And while I'll admit that I can be a bit...lukewarm, I don't want to be cold, especially over something like this. Well? Ball's in your court, Teejay. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:08 (Louisiana Time), 21 October 2016

Hey. I found this chatroom where a bunch of people get together every night at 8:00 PM (US/EST) to riff on bad to tolerable movies like Blacula and The Amazing Bulk. I was wondering if you'd like to join. Here's the link: cytu.be/r/TroperCoven. I hope to see you there soon. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:37 (Louisiana Time), 21 November 2016

Hey, Teejay. How was your Thanksgiving? Mine wasn't bad although my family had to deal with another family of four staying over for a couple of days so I had to sleep on the couch. The couch was pretty damn comfortable, though. There was even a trip to New Orleans!--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 11:21 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Oh, right, I forgot you had kids. Well, glad to see you had a good Thanksgiving. How old are those "munchkins" now, anyway?

And here's a weird question. I don't know where it came from but it just sprung up on me. Do you like writing erotica?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:59 (Louisiana Time), 28 November 2016

Hey, I know this is ANOTHER weird question but what would you do and how would you feel if you were suddenly a woman? Update: O.K, let me be more specific: how would you try to go through your day if you suddenly woke up a woman? How would you explain to friends, coworkers, children for example?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 14:57 (Louisiana Time), 5 December 2016

Don't ask, but are you a boobs or butt man?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:33 (Louisiana Time), 12 December 2016

...You must be a very calm and stolid man. Me, I'd be screaming like a little girl. Probably crying, too. When something like that happens, hysterics are understandable.

As for the "boobs or butt question", for me, it depends on what I feel that day or week. I've found that I consistently favor medium-sized breasts. Buxom's fine but it ain't my particular cup of tea. Guess I have average tastes.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:28 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Oh? You've read Dune too? The entire four-book series? (Kevin Anderson's work is dead to me.) What other book series have you read?

P.S The holidays aren't so bad so far. Saw a movie, went to a doctor, playing a game I just got recently (Ace Attorney Investigations 2). Wish there was more snow, though. Yes, I know I live in the Deep South of the Deep South but let me whine.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:38 (Louisiana Time), 17 December 2016

Ah. I see. I'm sorry for bringing it up. That was thoughtless of me to make such a baseless assumption. My deepest apologies.

Thanks for the wishes. Though I can't properly claim I'm in "Redneckistan" considering I live in a suburb in Baton Rogue. Nice suburb, too. It's even got Christmas decorations around the houses!

But have you read any other book series? Update: Anything specific?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:12 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

I just spent one or two hours doing research on bra sizes and Japanese bras. Not because I WANTED to but because I had to. If you're going to mention bra sizes in the profile, YOU MUST DO IT RIGHT AND TO DO IT RIGHT, YOU MUST DO RESEARCH! 5/10ths of writing is research, 4/10ths is coming up with something good, and 1/10th is sitting down and writing. As you may have noticed, I have a problem with that last 1/10th. But I like doing the other 5/10ths. I like learning new things. Frankly, part of the reason I'm doing this research is because bra sizes keep getting thrown around here and there around the site and it just interferes with reading since I have to translate that into a visual image.

I've also heard some complaints from DirtyMe about an excess of "women" with DD jugs. And I am here to tell you that...''(drumroll)'' not all DDs are large! DDs only mean that the bust is 5 centimeters more then the rib cage. It does not mean that the actual boobs are invariably big. Band sizes are an important factor. Bra sizes are much more complicated most people would assume. That's why there must be research. Just a little note because I feel like talking to somebody about this because I'm a know-it-all: Ex. 36B. 36 refers to the size of the rib cage and B refers to the cup size. To get the cup size, subtract the boob size by the size of the rib cage. To get the size of the rib cage, use tape around the area under the breasts themselves.

Update: Yeah, I got rid of the breast sizes in the "Classmate List". My research hit a dead end and, quite frankly, I didn't care much at the start. I just wanted to do it RIGHT.

P.S Hah, hah. Very funny. Well, "Red Stick" is a better name then Embarrass (Minnesota), Unalaska (Alaska), and Uncertain (Texas). All real names, I assure you.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 22:18 (Louisiana Time), 19 December 2016

Sorry, Teejay, but I don't think I'll be contributing to "Battle Royale". I'm not a fan of the franchise and I still have to do some ACTUAL work on this website on my own CYOSs.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:15,23 January 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Teejay, I apologize for my comment about one of your pages. I thought that it would lead to anal rape but that "Jimmy" asshole vandalized the page and I saw what you wrote when I reverted it. Yeah, egg on my face. Sorry for that. Also, didn't know you were writing funatari. You know what that is, correct?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

So. Do you often expand on CYOSs that people don't usually read or work on? Update: Want a list of CYOSs around the website that need some love? Just, you know, in case you're bored.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 14:41, 20 February 2016 (Louisiana Time)

Alright, here's some I found: Nudisma Terena in Mature, The Life of a Medieval Princess in Adult.

So. How did you get on this website in the first place and why did you decide to write on here?---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:50 (Louisiana Time), 24 February 2017

Hey, Teejay. Just going to pop by and give some advice to your work on "Nudisma Terena".

1. Maybe you want to make the characters more...embarrassed? I mean, they're stark friggin' naked and they're aren't used to NT. Have them be deeply, deeply ashamed of their lack of clothing and act like it.

2. What kinda genre would the CYOS be? "Sexual comedy" might work since the first arc of the story would heavily involve culture shock since the PC is naked and trying to cover up will ellict some weird looks and reactions from the locals. You could get some mileage from that. This CYOS sounds like a joke, anyway.

3. The PC woke up in a apartment, if I remember correctly. Maybe you shouldn't shift to a natural enviroment so quickly. Have the PC try to get down by either stairs or elevator. Have them looking for clothes or ''anything'' to cover themselves. Just saying, you should take things slowly and try to establish the character, the setting, etc.

4. What is the PC's name? What does he or she remember? What are their features? Where do they come from? What is their background?

5. Here's some advice I got on a writer's forum on how to make Nudisma Terena make sense. It's below and in quote marks.

"Have it be a small nation untouched by western culture. Have the weather be temperate enough for nudity. Due to the small amount of people, it means that different languages can coexist since there's not a lot, and the rest can be chalked up to either monkeysphere or how gender and sexuality is expressed in culture. Since there is no western culture in place, it's fairly easy for people to derive a completely different conclusion."

Edit: Yeah, I sympathise with you, Teej. This bloody CYOS's setting makes no goddamn sense. Hell, it feels like a unfinished Adult CYOS. Come on, a country full of naked people that don't care about gender or sex when it comes to who they want to fuck? But, hey! Think of it as a challenge! Maybe you could make it make sense. Or change the setting so it's not so goddamn perverted. It's yours to shape as you see fit. Not like anyone else gives a shit about it.---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 13:29 (Louisiana Time), 20 March 2017

Which idea is scarier: a weak, all-loving god or a all-powerful but uncaring god? ---[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:31 (Louisiana Time), 19 May2017

== High School? ==

Is that the one listed under "Poor Taste Stories"?

I'll give anything a go, but I want to be certain I'm working on the right story. --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Okey dokey! ==

I'll have a look at it. I don't know the requirements, but I would think that if someone started the story and assigned it there, then that's why it's there. Quick question: are you male or female? --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Gotcha! ==

Well . . . I'm female, and I like soccer. But I don't research any sports really. I much prefer to play them. High school was a long time ago for me, but writing for the University Daze story, has gotten me back in that mind-set. It will be fun to work on a high school setting too! --[[User:Robin|Robin]]

== Thanks? ==
While the scene of me having sex with a fat chick wasn't absolutely needed, I do thank you for you contributions to [[Ty's Story]]. You are welcome to edit any time, but you don't have to make me have sex with everyone. :p

Re: Thanks? -- It's well written, and makes a lot more sense than the random crap I throw in. It's not my place to censor you and it's good enough for me not just to kill myself off at every option. Thank you for showing interest in further story development. Also, I agree with many of the people here, the sex scenes are very good (although the mental image of Monica is disgusting).

I'm sorry for your loss, and for me acting disgusted (in my defense, I'm pretty sure "bowling ball with limbs" was supposed to make that reaction). I noticed that, and I think I'll branch from some of the nonsexual options. I'll leave you to any erotica, you're way better at that.

== Nice job ==

You are great at adult stories! I mean.. Just wanted to say that. Thanks in helping me out. --[[User:Kevinsims22|Orpheus]] 21:15, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

== Supershifter ==

Hey... I was kind of planning some other stuff for Supershifter, and while I appreciate the assistance, I didn't put a link to it on the main page for a reason. Again, I appreciate the help, but could you let me flesh it out first? I'll put it onto the main page when I feel it's ready to go public.

So could you wait before you edit it anymore, please? I DO have plans for it, but it takes me a lot of time to write them out because I want to be descriptive and consistent. Once it's public, you can add anything you want. Or, if you really want to help out right now, I don't really know what "you" could do with "your" powers at, say, the beach. So that could be useful.

I'm planning on putting this in the Adult section, so "you" can use your power in whatever way you want, from being a genuinely kindhearted soul to being a despicable rapist who cannot be taken down, (or anything in-between.) Just something to keep in mind if you continue to help.

So you can work on another location, but please, I would like to do this branch myself.

== Avast! ==

I appreciate your help for the [[Avast!]] story, but I hope you don't mind if I edit some of your pages in order to create hooks towards the various plots I have in mind. Also be aware that I'm a somewhat fussy person: I may edit other people's contributions for no adequately explained reason other than the fact that '''I''' wouldn't have written it this way. -- [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]], 2010-10-11

Oh, one more thing: I like my stories to be rather more detailed... If a quest can be completed too easily, there's not much fun in it.

== PAGNM ==

Thank you for your addition to [[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|PAGNM]]. I cannot claim credit for starting the story, but I've worked on quite a large chunk of it, and I was wondering if anyone else was even reading. You took it in a direction I would not have thought of myself, so I just wanted to show my appreciation. --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

== Thank You ==

I just wanted to thank you for adding to my story... I was begining to think, I'd have to do it all myself. Seeing how I'm not a guy, those sections are harder for me to come up with.

== Alien Adventure ==

Thank you for your additions to [[Alien Adventure]]. I'm a little bummed it was an ending, but at the same time, it just wouldn't be a Choose Your Own Adventure without endings. Thanks for making it a good one. And feel free to continue editing Alien Adventure to your heart's content. I love your style! --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 21:40, 24 May 2011 (UTC)

== Metropolis Power Plant ==

Thank you for adding the Smutty Sex Romp locations pages for the [[Metropolis Power Plant]] and [[Parasite's Hideout]]. It completely slipped my mind.
Also, your addition, "[[Try to wear Livewire out]]," is awesome! Can you give me some writing tips? --[[User:Cannon|Cannon]] 14:20, 26 May 2011 (UTC)

== "Megan" addition ==

Hey, thanks for the page beginning for the final scene, I had been putting it off until the end because I didn't quite know how I wanted to present it. I appreciate the work, and I'll probably use it as a framework (since I do prefer the pages to be a little bit longer, especially the ending scene), but you've definitely given me a start to it. Thanks, bro.

While we're at it, any complaints with the story so far? Too violent? Not violent enough? Do you happen to have a favorite kill?

I'm planning on finishing it really soon, and a few of the upcoming weapons/methods include a gun, a baseball bat, and power tools. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

== War Pigs ==

I appreciate your contributions to my story. Regrettably, it was not intended to be publicly edited. Although your additions are very well written, they're inconsistent with the main story and the characters.

I apologize for this inconvenience, as I did not make it clear that my story was only supposed to be edited by myself. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 19:44, 10 July 2011 (UTC)

== Re: ==

Thanks, I appreciate it. I haven't read Rescue myself, but I'll probably check it now.

I'll wait and see how my story progresses before I open it up for public editing. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

== MOTDE ==

Hey man, you're always an quality writer. Haven´t seen a bad page from you yet! The text you wrote fits perfectly with the overall feel of the story. I always thought it was hard writing swordfights btw.

Kind of had other plans for the effects of the duel through. All four options are marked with B1 or B2 (you can only see it in the edit, not the actual article). I do this to keep track of decisions that affect the competition with Solaria. I figured that if you lose then Solaria´s soldiers would steal the princesses away (thus taking points away) but if you win then the huntresses would be able to successfully repel the enemies.
The B means that you took the path through the market road and then acquired the generals head as a trophy. The 1 or 2 that follows signifies if you won or lost against Solaria. But if you had taken the (yet unwritten) temple road, marked with a C, then you would have acquired a different trophy.

I´m very undecided on what to do with Minvir through. I kind of want to keep her fate similar no matter what happens in the duel with Solaria (killing her off in battle if Daine defeats Solaria). But I´m not sure I want to write her off or not. Making Trix the new and young second-in-commander opens up new elements in the story but closes others. I´m not sure if the new elements are better, or if they can be implemented in other ways.

...

Oh thanks for writing the rest of the page! Great as always and I appreciate the effort. I might pad it somewhat through.

--[[User:Fletcher Peninsula|Fletcher Peninsula]]

== Dankeschön ==

Yeah, Megan is finally done. That's a giant weight off of my shoulders. It's funny, it was meant to be a quick 23-page story written out of boredom, but personal life, planning, re-planning, and revisions ended up making it take forever.

And by god, were there some revisions. The entire final page, "Return home", was only a fourth of the length of what it is now. I had originally been using the Quick, Good, Brutal system like you had outlined on it, but I ended up dropping it in favor of Megan recording a message for everyone (I couldn't help but reference WLB with Jack and Sarah. I'll probably be writing that next...) before she did herself in. The gun and power tool pages are still on my to-do list, but they'll be a future endeavor, a little update of sorts for another day.

And, uh... yeah, that's it. Guess I rambled there, but yeah. And now that I mention WLB, I'm sure you've found your way to it by now.
But, overall, thanks for the congratulations. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 20:35, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Just throwing my response onto here, seeing as it'd be pretty relevant here and I don't want to clutter up your Talkpage with more headers.

Yeah... I know I can be pretty rough on myself when it comes to stuff I've written. I guess it was just that, looking back on it almost four years later made me go "Oh god, X should have happened instead of that, it would have made more sense" and "Why on earth would X Y when they could have just Z?" I'm my own biggest critic, no doubt about that. Thanks, though. It's always good to know that as bad as I personally think it is/was, ''someone'' enjoyed it. Maybe a rewrite really is in order. Before I do that, though, I'm forcing myself to complete The Diary. Once that's done. that'll be one of three stories I have planned (bits of which are scattered across notebooks and hard drives) as pre-stories to another one.

Again, though, thank you. I always love hearing what people think about stuff I've written, even if it's negative. Thank you, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

== Re: Mind Reading? ==

Thanks man. I'm trying to get over a massive writer's block thats preventing me from continuing War Pigs and your comments mean a lot. --[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 23:12, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

We'll have to see about that...

Also, I really need to get back to War Pigs soon. I may open it up for more people to edit, just so long as they understand the personalities of the characters.--[[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]]

Thanks man! I've been tied down to college work, which has been getting in the way of submitting contributions to this site. When I have free time, I'm going to try to get more pages written. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 04:42, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

== Remember ==

'''Do not touch my story!.....'''

'''Only joking.''' Thank you so much for doing that. I haven't been able to write up much on my story because of my tests happening at the moment. So I really appreciate all the help. But I suggest not to make anymore pages from now on. Well, not for the next week at least, I'm about to make the story move forward a fair bit. (SPOILERS ->) By letting him choose. --[[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]] 4 November 2011

Teejay! Can you do me a favor? Is it okay if you can write for me: [[R: Try to piss him off]]. I can't seem to think up off any smart comebacks. My requirements for the page:

*At least three lines of dialogue
*Limit the swearing to only low amounts
*Have the choices: [[R: Smash the Walkie Talkie]] and [[R: "Hey man, when can I decide who shall leave?"]]
*Have at least 500 characters

You don't have to do it if you really don't want to. --Heyoeveryone 07:45, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

That page you did. That was almost spot on to what they were as kids. '''Spoiler:''' Thing is, that they weren't good friends as a child, they were actually brothers. With the kidnapper being the younger one. Richard used to always bully the voice. '''End Spoilers.''' I;'m going to edit it so that it matches my story. Anyways, you managed to make the story move forward extremely fast. Which is good. --Heyoeveryone 09:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

== More Avast! ==

Hi Teejay. I've been looking at a few of your additions to [[Avast!]] -- it's a good story, isn't it? I'm excited by the two new avenues you added [[Offer_the_female_pirates_a_chance_to_join_your_crew|here]]. I suppose I'm asking if you've got Big Plans<sup>TM</sup> for them, or if they're open to edit by anyone. I'm not exactly asking for them myself, since I've got a limited amount of time for writing and I'm still hoping [[User:-Sentinel-|-Sentinel-]] will get back to me, giving me permission to get stuck into the story with more than just my trusty Typo Cutlass. But I'd love to know what your intentions on them are. [[User:JackalRobot|JackalRobot]] 17:55, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

==2nd person==

I'm really trying to keep Rampage and Smutty Sex Romp as 2nd person, choose your own adventure stories, not 3rd person, choose-what-the-other-character-are-doing stories. Picking what your character sees when she opens a door is kind of straying from 2nd person to 3rd person. So I'm going to combine a couple pages there to keep in everything you wrote, but snip out the choice that really isn't something your character could choose. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

I do enjoy colloborating with you and it's great watching a story weave back and forth as your ideas spark ideas for me and vice versa, but give me a ''little'' chance after I create a new page before taking the ball and running with it. Okay? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:51, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. That's all I'm asking for. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:16, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

== Sorry, but with restraint ==

I am sorry for the poor etiquette but the apology is with constraint. Although I did not specifically mark it as private, I believe that the description by the title was decently clear that editting was not welcome. If you didn't get that message, sorry for your misconceptions. Furthermore, in editting, it does note that material may be removed by others. I understand that it is bad etiquette and I will restrain from repeating such actions but I did excercise my rights as deemed by the site's usage. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience
--Liger0sch

== Smutty Sex Romp ==

I agree that the [[Tell Christine to go with you and find shoplifters to abuse]] story line is developing nicely. Shouldn't the goth girl have a name?

== Did I do this right? ==

Thanks for the help on how to message people back but I'm just wondering, did I do this right?

== About my story ==

I've read what you wrote and I completely agree with your comment. I do like it when people contribute to my stories because I know they read it. As for the contributions you've made to Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager I like the things you've wrote, and I'm glad that you wrote those there. I honestly have been having writers block lately and I'm kind of stuck with a lot of the choices right now and I'm not sure if I can come up with stuff for them all, so feel free to add any pages or edit any you want.

== Not that I'm forcing you to ==

Lol, the comment title sounds dirty. No but what I mean by that is I really like how your making the story on Sarah Tredwall, honestly your doing a better job than what I would've done and I like the fact that not everything is about sex when you add pages and edit them. I know a lot of writers just write nasty things but the things you write are simply amazing. I don't want to do anything more on Sarah because I know I'll screw it up but if you have extra time or whatever can you do more of the story that's on Sarah? The things you write are amazing!

== I need to know something else also ==

I don't know how to make it sound right when someone is talking, for example I would write "Hey there bob how was your day?" you can tell his day sucked but he says "It was alright I guess, got divorced today but whatever" you send out a frown to express your sorrow to him and say "It'll be alright Bob." For some reason that conversation doesn't look right when I read it, if you have any tips messages me sometime. Also the last comment about Sarah Tredwall was written by me also - *[[Wedre2]]

== Thanks ==

Thank you for choosing to add more onto the Sarah story, your editions so far have been amazing!

== Re: F.R. Theory ==

Thanks for your contribution Teejay. I think I will need to revise the section to be consistent with the ongoing story that you added to, but any spin off stories, additional options to a page, as well as full stories are welcome. The main theme is to show real life situations with inequality. If you want more info on the project and the purpose see the [[Explanations page]] I may monitor for time to time and add information that relates to what the statistics tell us as well but I appreciate your participation! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:20 EST 28 November 2012
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Okay, I revised it a little bit but tried to stick with the points you made in your note to me. Hopefully I didn't change the message of what you were trying to get across but I just needed to make sure that it fit with the structure of the story, the facts, etc. Thanks again! ~[[User:Bekahllama|Bekahllama]] 17:35 EST 28 November 2012

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[[Pedobear12]] 2013/9/11

Actually I don’t mind in the slightest. I read what you’ve done and I like what I read.
Technically you are supposed to write in the first person, but I will not be panelizing you for that.
Also your rapist is a bit gentle for the spirit of the category but again, I will not be panelizing you for that. What you’ve done has a lot of potential, and if I read it correctly the rapist may soon have a sex addicted slave who will help him get more victims. Perhaps he can eventually get a harem going… 

2013/9/12
I changed the last headings you did a little just so that it is less in your face.
I have also continued on it, i have stayed with the gentle character that you are trying to create.
I will however now start thinking about a different line for that story. I will still contribute to the line your on, but I am going to split at the Hymen question and choose the perforated Hymen, which is an indication of much pain to come. At some point thoigh I want to try and merge that line back in with your line :)

[[user:Pedobear12|Pedobear12]] - nice. I was thinking about creating a link on these discusion pages of ours for our conversations.

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Thanks for contributing to the thread that I started in You Are An Orc. I did have to edit it since it didn't really make sense when read after the previous few pages. This dragon is a terrestrial forest dragon. It can't fly, so clipping it's wings won't do any good. It's wings are vestigial only. It also doesn't have breath weapons. It's a physical attacker. Also, it didn't make sense for the elves to chain the orc and dragon in the ravine for the rest of their lives, since the ravine is prone to flash floods that could kill them at any time. If you want to contribute to this thread in the future, I would suggest paying more attention to the story. Thanks. --[[User:Mokarran|Mokarran]] 18:09, 30 January 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me's sextion]] ==

I looked at your contributions, and see you have been around for 5 years. So, does it seem like I am doing ok organizing things up? Just want to check, because, to be honest, I feel a bit like I just came in and disrupted the normal stuff here. Also, I see you are the one contributing to the +Infinity. I was going to move that to i's, but, since you have been here a long time, I wanted to see if that seems like an ok thing to you. If you want me to leave it, I will. I don't want to step on anyone's toes. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

So, just wondering how I am doing? Does it seem like I am creating a good story? Sorry, I know, right now it is mostly the sexual stuff, but I will be getting to the other types of materials at a later point. I warned that it would be a more realistic story, but would have alot of sexual material. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:41, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, as I told Arthur, I only have one of the major positive sex paths left to complete, but will probably be moving down some of the darker paths now. I warn you, just as I am very graphic with sex, it will also be very graphic on what it is like to be raped, or to become a party girl in a world that goes too far, and gets very dark. So, I guess once I start on those, it will be more of a read at your own risk? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:57, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

So, starting to see the elements from my blog, or have you gotten that far into my blog yet? I have created one of the negative paths, although when I tried to commit suicide, I admit, I didn't have the courage to try slashing my wrists, I instead went with pills. However, for now, I am still working mostly with what I already have, since I am familiar with it. I will need to figure out the "What if I did this different" as I get the major stuff in. Still have to figure out where I will fit in things like "Dirty Little Tease", or the email man, the cuckold, trucker fantasy, etc. lol, guess I still have a long way to go with my story. I will also take some of my news reactions and see if I can turn them into a "What if this happened to me", like the rape path I have. What happened to the girl who was teased and taunted, etc. The dark side of humanity D: But, no reason to hide it. This is, after all, a story that you can imagine really happening to someone, good, bad, or otherwise. (Grr, always forget signature >.<) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:09, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Nah, not really focused on that. Just a focus on life. Beautiful. Ugly. Heavenly. Hellish. I think everyone has their own demons, but this story is just meant to be, a little me, a little of my thoughts on certain things. A little awareness of things people don't think about being the opposite gender. Some fantasy, some reality, some just plain weird, maybe. My bet, knowing my mind, some things could get strange. I have even figured, if I want to write something off the wall, I can do it as a dream sequence. Honestly, I hope someone who wants to write a realistic story for males will take over the initial male path. I would love to see a guy write about the real world, and what it would be like being a guy. Doesn't even have to have sexual elements. Eventually, I have the feeling I will put more stuff between the different sexual scenes, less complete erotica and more complete story with erotic bits included. I will even go back through the opening, the dream sequence and events leading to the restroom scene and see if I can make it a more involved opening. It is also a great place to practice a different style of writing. I am not used to writing in present tense like this, from the readers viewpoint. I am not used to writing with options included, creating "what if you did this" things. Right now the flow is a little clunky, since I am more trying to take what I have and figure out how to put that into it before I start writing new things. But honestly, I love feedback on how the story is going, but also understand that, with a work in progress, it is sometimes annoying to try to follow the things to be confronted by alot of red links. I still need to think about where I want to take some of those. Anyways, yeah, I talk/type too much. I will shut up now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

Bleh, don't you hate it when your brain does not want to think? I still have so much to do on my stories, but each time I try to complete a redline, my brain goes blank and I just stare at the screen...anyways, sorry, just sharing. Guess I should stfu xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello, just saw you pop up on the edit logs. Haven't seen you around for a couple days. Maybe it is just my time zone compared to yours. Anyways, I have added more to my story, and started creating some of the bad endings too, not just the naughty parts. Although, I still have more of those. Just wondering what you think of them? The last couple are actually inspired by a real life event. It is not the same, since I only know what I read about, and cannot comment from the exact same situation, but instead a mixture of me and what I read about her. Anyways, let me know if it seems ok so far. I know I really need to go back and edit through some of it, split it up more, write the story better, but at least it is a start. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the corrections. I didn't even notice it. I wanted to take a small break from my story. Writing the darker paths gets to me a bit, so I find I need to take breaks when I am dealing with things like rape and drug use and suicide. So, just wanted to try a slightly different style CYOA. And, given I am the type of person who sometimes does things simply because I like to see the reactions produced, it seemed to fit. Also, I can write short stories and still fit them into a CYOA. So, what do you think of them so far? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:46, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, well, I am only 21. It wasn't that long ago I was in school myself=P Of course, I put the warning up I can imagine lots of naughty pranks, and I don't want it turned into another adult story. But, I can imagine something doing more...interesting...pranks.

Actually, I am sort of using it as an experiment, because I have thought about trying a different type of CYOA, where, basically, you pre-pick the paths, then get an entire chapter. "You are x" page "You will do x" page "at x location" page "another option" chapter 1. Then, you just make rapid choices without loosing the story elements, so the choices add up, then the story is given to you so it doesn't break the flow by trying to make short pages with story, then another short page, another option. Thinking about trying that once I have [[Dirty Me]] more complete, with a different style of story. The [[Prank War]] is just a little sideline to give my brain a rest from dark thoughts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:04, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

lol, I didn't even bother correcting the links, just making the links show properly, so it wasn't Link,link,link. Bleh. Anyways, what do you think of my new pages and stories so far? I still need to think of more for prank wars, but no rush, and others can add their own pranks. I am also doing the Chinese story to help me better learn, because I find I have reached a point where I am having problems with vocabulary D: Plus, I have added a few new things to Dirty Me. I don't write things too quickly, because I want to know where I want to take it and what I want to write. The only time it will get a few pages quickly is when I am posting my already written stories into the paths. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I got a little paranoid that I had been banned from the site for some reason. I even tried sending you a message from my blogger...couldn't figure out how to get it to work correctly though... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

All I know is that the website was down over half the day, then I got strange things about lines not working or something. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 15:28, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. He is keeping me very busy. He is on an about 3 hour cycle, so feeding, burping, diaper, then getting him back to sleep before he becomes crabby. Then repeat again. xD But he is so cute. I could just watch him forever as he sleeps. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:06, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

Well, I am back, and adding to my stories again. Hopefully the new additions are good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:51, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

You know, I have noticed a trend with you. I notice you tend to go for the "damsel in distress" type of situations. It seems like it is a major theme in many of your contributions. Not saying good or bad, just something I have noticed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad side is starting to show through, but, I need to ask. Have I done something wrong? It seems like you are ignoring my notes complete, and it makes me wonder if I did something I shouldn't have...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 16:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Yeah...my bad side...I tend to get rather needy. No worries, that is just me D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Teejay, I am back. Well, as back as I ever really am...Sooooo, missed my favorite editthis personality! I started a new story, but I want it community driven: [[The Exibitionist]]. So, willing to tell me what to do? *Kisses* --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey, don't make me stalk you Teejay! I know where you edit=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:33, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

lol, no worries about the story part. I will write it up, just want the options ^.^ I don't want to overly complicate other's input into the story =(^.^)= --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:39, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Guess I can explain a little about how I work. I am bad at original things. Honestly, I don't think I have an original thought in my head. However, I am good at taking something and improving it. That is why I wanted this community driven story. If others give me an idea, I can go with it, as long as it is something I can imagine, but I am not that great at imagining my own new stuff. That is the roadblock I have hit on my own blog. I have written about many of my more, extreme, real life experiences. Even posted them as part of [[Dirty Me]]. Now, I am at the point where I have told many of my personal, unusual experiences, and sadly, I don't think my readers just want to read about normal, boring sex. I still have a couple to write, like about me being the "other woman", and my, gang bang I guess it would be, but, I want to do more than that. That is why I am trying to get others to help me. I want to write, I just need the catalyst... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

So, I started some added by someone else, but think my "example" story mislead him, so he seemed to view it wrong. Oh well, I will write any option submitted. Maybe you could look it over, see how I did, and let me know your thoughts, and maybe your options? Yes, I know, I am a whiny, insecure, needy attention whore :o . Anyways, waiting for your options at [[The Exhibitionist]]. I know you will come up with some wonderful ones. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 17:11, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

btw, Thank you thank you thank you, 谢谢您. <nowiki>*</nowiki>huggles<nowiki>*</nowiki> --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:22, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, you were only supposed to create the option :o lol, I was going to tell you "Sorry master, that is not allowed. However, I will follow your instructions and go boating naked", then have a few twists. One problem I find, is trying to keep an "Exhibitionist" type story interesting. "I wore something see through, I walked around, people reacted, I went home". That is why I try to think of "What kind of twist could occur in real life", and then include it. Now, honestly, not sure what to do with the boat path. Guess I will need to give it some thought. Hoping to finish more of the mall path today though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Seen Platypus around anywhere? btw, what do you think of Darky's path? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:20, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

I found Platypus, so ignore my last question. I forgot I had tied him to my bed and done bad things to him. Hey, I had a busy day! I don't always remember where I tied people up :o Anyways, for this path option: Go to the local outdoor swimming pool and sunbathe in a tight-fitting one-piece, Is there anything special you are thinking? Like, is this supposed to be see through? Sorry, lol, I can show myself off in this way, but it just surprises me that someone would have an option for an exhibitionist that is...completely allowed by society xD Well, unless society is still in the early 1900's. Just want to see what you are thinking, since I am not sure I will do it right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Okay, no problem ^.^

Now, I just need to figure out how to get you over here to tie you to the bed. *Evil laugh*. Promise I will try not to forget where I tied you=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, [[Too Graphic]] doesn't have any BDSM training pics yet=P I will need to figure out how to path that before I can include a reference xD

Of course, I did write a story for someone who was into the "Climax deprivation" thing. I won't link to my blog here, since it has that 20 minute limit, and I do not want to cause problems every time someone wants to message you, but it is here: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2014/04/for-climax-deprivation-guy-fantasy.html

And this is the story:
<blockquote>You wake up, not knowing where you are, or how you got here. You just remember a party last night, dancing, then nothing.<br><br>

As you try to get up, you find your arms tied to a bed. Your feet also seem to be tied to the bed.<br><br>

You look around, and notice the door opening.<br><br>

I step in, looking you up and down.<br><br>

"Aww, what happened? Someone play a joke on you?"<br><br>

I bend over, looking at you, my low cut shirt showing my breasts, not trapped by a bra.<br><br>

"Poor guy," I say. "What should I do with you?"<br><br>

I look directly into your eyes, and lick my lips slowly.<br><br>

"I think I have an idea."<br><br>

I move down, undoing your trousers, pulling them down. Then, I pull down your boxers.<br><br>

"Seems like you like this."<br><br>

I give a slight laugh, one that doesn't sound very nice.<br><br>

I rub my hand up your shirt, pulling it up as I gently stroke your skin.<br><br>

"Not too bad," I whisper.<br><br>

I step up on the bed, standing over you, green panties hiding what is underneath.<br><br>

"You know, my panties are getting a git wet, watching you like this," I say, laughing again.<br><br>

I slowly pull them down, showing my pussy underneath. They reach your chest, and I stand there for a second.<br><br>

"Wonder what you would say if that gag wasn't in your mouth."<br><br>

I lift one foot, pulling them over, then the other foot, taking them off.<br><br>

"Now where to put them."<br><br>

I put them on your head, slipping them over your hair.<br><br>

"You look so funny with my panties on your head."<br><br>

I squat down, spreading my legs, and you see my pussy spread slightly as I sit on your chest.<br><br>

"So, I have to wonder. What would you do if you could move."<br><br>

I run my fingers through your hair, watching your eyes dart back and forth.<br><br>

"I wonder if you are hoping you will get a taste."<br><br>

I move upward, shifting my way along you. You can feel my pussy on your chest as it drags across you slowly.<br><br>

"Yes, that feels good."<br><br>

I keep moving upward, until I am almost to your neck.<br><br>

"But no, I guess you can't lick me. Too bad."<br><br>

I lift myself off you, then put my pussy against the gag.<br><br>

"So, I wonder, do you like this?"<br><br>

I lift myself again, pressing my pussy against your nose, so you can smell me.<br><br>

Looking back, I see that you are definitely reacting.<br><br>

"So, you like this?"<br><br>

I shift further up, until my pussy is right in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Can you see me?"<br><br>

I put two fingers to my lips, spreading myself in front of your eyes.<br><br>

"Hmm, such a bad boy."<br><br>

I move back down, putting my pussy over your nose again.<br><br>

"I wonder if you can smell my sex."<br><br>

I move my hand down, rubbing my clit, slowly at first, then faster, faster.<br><br>

"Ohh yes!"<br><br>

I use my other hand, putting two fingers inside.<br><br>

"Ohh, it feels good!"<br><br>

I work my fingers on my clit and inside my pussy, faster, harder. You can hear the sounds, wet, squishy. You can smell my juices.<br><br>

"Ohhhh god yes!"<br><br>

I climax, rolling over next to you.<br><br>

"That felt wonderful," I whisper.<br><br>

I take off the rest of my clothes, laying down next to you. You can feel my breasts pushed against your side, my arm over you, cuddling close. My legs wrap around your leg, capturing it.<br><br>

"Well sweety, I would love to talk to you, but I guess we can't right now."<br><br>

With that, I caress you, chest, face, even patting your stiff penis from time to time. Eventually, I get sleep.<br><br>

"Well, good night. See you in the morning."<br><br>

With that, I fall asleep beside you, naked, as you are left unable to do anything but feel and hear and think.</blockquote>

lol, no worries. In fact, you are my favorite writer on here, because you make the people human and real. And I am not upset or blaming or whatever, even the one guy who I asked on his talk page why guys on this site keep doing that. I just do not get why. It is society as a whole. I watched Freezing anime recently, and other than reaching the conclusion that the only reason they fight is to expose each other's breasts, the second season had one character who was powerful, but had smaller breasts. And the way the other characters treated her...and sadly, in society, we feel that same problem. One reason you find women who are perfectly fine, but that have smaller breasts, tend to have lower self esteem. One reason in my stories I write I do not even mention how big or small their breasts are. The reader can imagine them as A if they want, or H if they like that. I also keep it fair to guys, and do not mention the guy's penis size. I mean, I cannot control the size of breasts I was given (outside of implants), a guy cannot control his penis size (can a guy even get that kind of implant?). I mean, if it is an actual part of the story (No matter where she went, everyone stared at her breasts. Growing into a JJ cup size had influenced more in her life than just the stares too.) See, if it has a purpose, okay, but so many on here just use it as "Hey, girl with large knockers, so now lets fuck her!" Anyways, I will be quiet now xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:13, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Teejay, would you be willing to help me test something? I created [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Teejay's Talk]] to see if I can create individual pages for people on here that I talk to alot, like similar to Platypus' archive, only specific talk pages. Can you leave me a message on there to see if I get the "You have 1 new message" thing? You can just write a simple test if you have nothing to say xD

Hmm, sadly, not sure it worked. I got the new message because of Darky, not sure if it would have given it to me for you. Bleh, may not work trying to create a person specific archive, unless I use it like an archive like Platypus did D: --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:06, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Yep, I caught it. I have to get busy with that sometime, but today been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. Mostly making fun of others. Although, I guess, like the last page I created, some will miss my point on how I am teasing them and actually get off on it. But, I don't take issue with it, and am creating a couple more pages that will show more "reality" to highlight how stupid these stories seem to me. I am honestly hoping people both get it and enjoy it, rather than just being my personal rants and parodies of stories I see around here. I will even poke fun at [[Smutty Sex Romp]] at some point=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Oh, but I thought this was how women act on cyos? Aren't half the stories on this site like this?

Lol. Now you see why I say I am writing this to make fun of other stories on here. Wait until I finish the loop. Sex sex sex in a never ending loop. For spoilers check the talk page I just edited. Although you will need to either edit or select the text to read the spoilers. No worries, I do not take it personally. That is why I am posting as a rant parody. Over the top ridiculous. Each branch will have its own flavor. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, I know you do. You actually make your characters human, not just automated sex robots. You give options to sleep rather than fuck like rabbits more. I guess my mindset right now is sort of on being frustrated that so many people on here write sex, sex, sex, and the women are pretty much interchangeable with any random hole. One reason I have said you are one of my favorite long time writers on here, because you don't do that. lol, I just posted lots of stuff on Fredhot's page, showing where I am making fun of different stories. What stories they are targeting. Things like that.

No worries, I will always go back to my charming, naughty self. I will be honest, the [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path does turn me on, to a point. I have had those times where I feel like having a fantasy about just being a sex object. Meh, I have let myself be one in the past...so, I am not writing it from pure "I hate all you writers and want to make fun of you then let you die in fire". lol, I am a feminist, not a feminazi xD I do read some of the stories and get turned on, even when I shake my head and think to myself "Do you really think of women this way" or "What the hell idiot, do you even know what women are?". These thoughts are not directed at you by the way, I just mean random things I read on here. There are some that spark my interest, not so much because whoever wrote them turns me on, but because I can close my eyes, and imagine something based on their writing, but...better. Anyways, I seem to be being a little ranty and bitchy today, so think I will just stop writing here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:53, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

lol, well, done with the first slut loop xD Sorry for the long message earlier. Platypus already told me he doesn't mind me making fun of SSR, and in fact mentioned it is a story that is very mock worthy, so wonder if people will understand my point for the whole "Never ending loop of sex" xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:12, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. Thoughts?

Actually, I was wondering more on thoughts on putting that profile page up. Good idea? Bad idea? Thoughts about my experiences (The bullet items, not the explanations of what made me, well, me)? Maybe I should get rid of the explanation.

I have been watching Masters of Sex a little, and reading about how technology is dealing with sex, and have sort of come to a point where I am tired of people tittering, hiding, etc. We are sexual animals. But, I grew up in the US, where sex has a love/hate relationship. It is a vice, a hidden reality. We base so much on trying to hide sex and sexuality that it has created an unhealthy culture. I honestly think that is one reason why the US is one of the biggest markets for porn. The mentality is to taboo sex, which has created a voyeuristic culture. We charge teenagers with possession of child porn because they took naked pics of themselves. With distribution because they sent those pics to their bf/gf. We hide education behind putting condoms on bananas for our hs "sex education", and trying to push abstinence instead of having real education. Then, people wonder why there is such a problem with hs pregnancy. We teach people their body is bad, so they need to hide it. While it is better than it used to be, you can still see it everyday. And yet, we have not figured out how to move past objectifying women.

One reason I put it there, and put many of my experiences in my blog, is because it should not be a dirty little secret. I am not saying we should just run rampant, have sex anywhere at any time. There are real concerns with public health issues. But, I wish that people could be honest, could move beyond being judgmental, and just accept the fact that it is a part of us. Let people be open and honest. I put it there so people could know, "Hey, this is me. This is all the stuff I have done. I am not ashamed. I am a human, who has made mistakes, who has experimented, who has pushed the boundary, and that is okay". Sometimes I wish people could just get over their fear of evil sex, and embrace sensuality. I mean, I have discussed it on my blog, but wouldn't it be great if we could just get to a point where I could have house guests come in while I am making love to my husband, without having to stop? "Oh shit honey, sorry, I forgot she was coming over. Get off me and get dressed." instead becomes "The door is unlocked. Come on in. Sorry, we have not finished yet. Grab yourself something to drink while we finish". Imagine a world where it is okay to answer the door naked because it is hot, and I don't feel like putting on clothes. True, it wouldn't be as naughty and exciting anymore, but I think it would be better. Nothing wrong with the naked human body, so why do we shame it? Nothing wrong with having a higher sex drive, so why do people "slut shame"? I mean, nude pics of me went online, and I get threatened and called vile things for what, having a pic of me without clothes? When can we move past this, and instead turn to appropriate methods of education, and acceptance? This is why I put it out there like that. If it wasn't for these reasons, I would not have problems putting my real name, my real face, my real body, in front of everyone. But, I am as much of a victim of society as everyone else.

Anyways, that is why I put it, and why I am wondering about your thoughts on putting my real life information, well, as much as that is, on a site like this, dedicated to creating little CYoS stories. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Help! Sigh, I can't find it. Okay, a few days ago, I was reading a page someone added, or edited, or something. In the story, you had the option to be the virgin girl. Needless to say, this story was one of my "Triggers" for creating [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]. So, one path at least was a virginal girl, and I remember one path she has sex with a guy just out of the military, another path some teenager tries to rob her and she dominates him, bringing him back to her house as her sex slave. And, one path she runs into her brother at her parents house. He is skipping school, and she catches him masturbating. In one scene, she "Helps him". Yeah, my current [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]] "brother" path is a parody of this. But, I cannot remember where the story came from. I know you contributed something to it, so was hoping you would remember... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

nvm, found it. [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the [[Your younger brother Bobby]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:19, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, guess someone has actually read the summaries=P Excuse me, need to break out the toys again...thoughts of being put in stocks are turning me on again xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, today I am feeling passive and horny. No worries, you can do it "to" me. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, I can be frank with you. The mood I am in right now, if it was not for three things:
*Marriage and infidelity
*Societies judgments
*Legality of it in the first place

I would let me take someone to a very public place, stick me in stocks completely naked, and let people either use my mouth or pussy all they want, as long as they are gentle and careful with me. That is my current mood... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:31, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, been trying to finish some of the options provided for me in [[The Exhibitionist]], and I noted this one again: Go to a nightclub wearing a shirt with a deep V-neck that shows off a good deal of your cleavage and tight-fitting booty shorts with no panties

So, another slow start? Surprising, since a skirt can ride up, but shorts, well, I have worn tight booty shorts with no panties on many occasions xD

Of course, spoilers, I will have lots of "show" for the top, so I guess you will get lots of story "peeks". Forgot to ask though, the top, bra or braless? Braless is fine. Like, those Hollywood celebs that wear the deep tops with no bra, and the shirts go sideways. Especially if I am dancing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, you said cleavage. You can show cleavage with a bra xD You would have also liked my weekend shopping trip. I made sure that my top was see through enough that you could make out my nipples xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:14, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, went out with nothing under my raincoat but a bikini again today. lol, at least no one called the police again on me xD Thought about wearing a "wet t-shirt", but after going out in a semi see through shirt this weekend, I thought it might be too much.

Also, you haven't given me feedback about my completed rants xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:59, 23 May 2016 (UTC)

Not leaving you out :o Flowers for Teejay!

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Hey, you have my email address, right? dirtylittlemestorytime@gmail.com

Send an email. You can just use one of your anonymous ones if you want. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:59, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Oh, and once you do, please leave me a message on here so I know it is you, not someone else xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:54, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

No email D: <nowiki>*cry*</nowiki>

btw, what do you think of my [[It's programming time!]]? I don't mean on how much is done, since not much is done, I just mean trying to create interesting "tutorials"? Hmm, does this fit into the "Story" part? Wonder if I can make it into a story story. Anyways, who is your dirty nerdy girl? Say it, SAY IT! Eh, I am in a strange mood today... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:24, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Sent you a couple emails... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

You know, for an "Oops! You're Naked!" story, it seems to have an awful lot no oops, but "You decide to get naked" paths. Seems a little misleading...think I could get into an "Oops! You're Naked!" a bit better... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:51, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

lol, the rest I wrote after I had watched "Work from home" a few times xD I was thinking about gender reversal. It even made me wonder about writing a story, like that video, where the gender roles were reversed. Just not sure I could made it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:04, 27 May 2016 (UTC)

Just found this story yesterday: www.henthighschool.com/hhs-development/human-sexuality-201/

It is interesting. I think the author did not do well at actually writing from a female perspective (I have nothing to do with the story, other than I am reading it now), but I can so imagine this, so it isn't bad. Just wondering what your thoughts were on it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, the things that bother me the most is some of the specific words. I hate "Pussy Juice" and especially, really, really hate "cunt". Tits is another word that takes me out of the "From a female perspective". It is strange when males try to write from a female perspective, they do not honestly think about the actual words and language they use. Like the word "cunt". It is a double meaning, for pussy and for "bitch/whore". It is a very derogatory word, yet I notice it is used to describe her vagina. Do men really think about that? I mean, I read a study on how the brain is physically structured and how that forms thought patterns. I remember it saying, basically, "(In general) Men have larger vocabularies, but use the words less effectively. Women have smaller vocabularies, but are more proficient at using them". It was both the makeup of the brain and the part that connects the sides together. I guess that connection is larger in women, which increases the "able to use proficiently" part. Your thoughts from a male perspective?

Oh, and btw, I think Platypus is writing my strangest fantasy for me in SSR=P Lets see what he comes up with. I have read the first part, where he opens, just wondering how the scene will be managed xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:58, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, need your help a little. So, in my [[Context]] story, I figured out already that the reader has written an article that embarrassed the company he works for. Some spoilers I guess: The reader is of course a news writer, the person he is talking to is his ex, and also his boss. Anyways, the story was mundane: A new form of breast implant to replace silicon implants. But, it is the article title which has gotten him in trouble. I have tried to think of some inappropriate titles that may be used, but it is hard to figure out one that seems like something someone might write on the web blogs, like huffington or NYT or something.

"Breasts I can squeeze all day". "Best breasts of the west". "Wow, look at these tits!". I just can't figure out one that seems realistic. I had the idea when I was scootering, and thought of a great title, but lost it, and now can't think of a good one...any ideas from you?

After I get my title idea, I will need to draft the article, making it sound appropriately reporter like and boring, surprise the reader=P "Hey, look at this provocative title, lets click that link!" "Oh man, this is...well, sort of educational on breast implants, but also very boring..." Help me Teejay-kanobi, you are my only hope! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:00, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, honestly not sure if that is offensive enough xD Maybe you are too nice to think of a good "offensive, inappropriate" headline. At least that would not really offend me. But, I think I see where you are going, trying to hint to women that "Hey, these are the best breasts. If you do not have these, you do not have good breasts." But, I think that is reading into it, and not sure the people who like to complain would really be offended by that. Put on your asshole, objectification hat. Think that is what I need. xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:05, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

lol, I don't really feel those, but they did make me laugh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:39, 3 June 2016 (UTC)

No worries, I am fine, just frustrated at someone who is annoying the shit out of me...irl drama... Other than my status, I am not going to be a drama queen. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Hardest part for me is to figure out how to do a realistic "Grooming" that you had mentioned before. When I was molested, I was just threatened, and too young to really understand. And for the older guys I have been with, it was something I just did, they didn't need to do anything special. I took their gifts, their money, and loved that, but also loved having the positive attention (Well, more positive than my highschool. At least they just used my body, and treated me decently, instead of bullying me, calling me names, taking my stuff, sometimes getting physical with me, but no, not sexually, more like slapping, hitting, etc). So, not 100% sure I can get it really accurate, but at least somewhat. Also, trying to write it without loosing it irl and breaking down, well, that is also not so easy...

But, it is real. It happens. One out of every three women suffer some form of sexual abuse. Whether it is molestation or rape, whether it is from their family member, their SO, or some random stranger, it is very real, and while rape culture has diminished, it is still out there, and given it is a pretty prevalent theme on this website, it may be good for those willing to read to see point of view. I don't care if guys fantasize about it (As long as that is the most they do...) because, what goes on in their mind is up to them as long as they do not harm someone else with in the process. But, sometimes I get the feeling that some people on this site sort of view it as a "Hey, if the girl gets off, then she will enjoy it and it won't be rape anymore". I think I wrote about this on fredhot's page once. Too many are "Ohh, no Mr. Don't rape me. Oh, well, yeah, that feels good. Okay, I guess I am glad you did." Lie a phrase I heard about "Those uptight lesbian girls", that "They just need the right man to give them a good dicking, and they will enjoy men again". I guess too many feelings like that.

Don't get me wrong, I like a good rape fantasy. But, it is slightly different for men and women. Women, it is less about him forcing us, and more about being so overwhelmed with lust that we cannot resist, no matter how much we want to. And I admit, I like the entire "choice taken out of my hands" sometimes, but again, there is that "We secretly wanted to, but were afraid, and he made us try by forcing x". Meh, it is hard to explain I guess.

In fact, many of the ideas I have for fallout 4 revolve around rape. When I played that, and fallout 3, I always wondered, what is up with this female slave chained up by the super mutants? What would they do with her? What about these raiders? I mean, what would happen to a real woman captured in this world? I will write it both naughty and horrorific. I imagine there are two worlds: The "civilized", and the "Take whatever the hell we want". If sex existed in the game itself, with raider mentality, I know very well that some would do exactly that: take what they want. So, I imagine pretty much every female raider has been raped at some point, creating three different types of women: 1. The broken woman. Either she was hurt so bad in the process that her body is tore up (just look at the bodies hanging around the entrances...something I try to avoid looking at in fact...), and/or her mind snapped and she is mentally broken, or both. 2. The one who just pretends to enjoy it because it is such a matter of life, and if she struggles, well, she has seen the other type. 3. And those who grew stronger from it. Those are the ones who created the female raider groups, or else have the female leaders, and she survived her past and used that anger to drive her to be more than the male raiders. It is simplistic, but I think it would not only show the fallout 4 world, and create a depth to the female raiders, but also make the CYoS readers happy, since it will be filled with lots of sex. And maybe lots of morals. Anyways, I am trying not to crusade, just tell an interesting story that will capture the average readers attention on here, and let them see the world through my eyes. Instead of just writing how the sex physically felt for me, write the ramifications. I did with one of the dirty me paths, when the character goes to the party and ends up getting raped due to the date rape drug thing, and how she broke from it. I think it is a good path, and shows this type of thing from the female perspective. The molestation part I did't go into details on, since I do not want to write about being forced to perform sexual acts when I was 6, just giving the brief details, but I think it describes well the consequences. And, it is only one path, so if the reader does not like it, they can skip. Yeah, I know many readers here do not want to really read about how that sort of thing messes you up, but there are a few, like you, that actually like a good story, and like understanding the story, the background, the characters, rather than just "read with one hand, masturbate with the other".

Sorry, really long post...was thinking about these things half the night and morning, so wanted to get them out there... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:30, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Oh trust me, I already went through my fucking batshit insane stage. Drugs, drugs, more drugs. Lots of alcohol to wash them down. Two attempts at suicide. I write about the sex because it is easier to describe than getting high, especially since I can't remember half of my teenage years...lets face it, the sex was more about attention, some rewards (well, more from the older lovers and stuff), and honestly, caring about myself so little I didn't care what happened to me. More of a death wish, hoping someone would just do what I could not. If you had met me when I was high school age, I have no idea how you would have reacted.

I have a criminal record (Sealed, since I was a minor). I hung out with gang members, with drug dealers, with people that, if I was approached by them today, I would probably freak out completely. It is hard to imagine who I used to be compared to who I am today. I think one time someone did the math. I used about $10,000 a month in coke, crank, meth, pot, LSD, shrooms, speed, xtc. And I had no money, so you can imagine where some of my sex stories come from...and why I had even attempted street level prostitution at one point...honestly surprised I never ended up with some STIs (Not sure about the pregnancy risk, since yes, while I popped all the other pills, I also popped birth control, but yeah...given I got pregnant, fortunately by my husband, while I was on the pill. I blame quality control over here in Taiwan...) Anyways, I was a mess...I write about my "sexual experiences", and have hit on some of the other experiences, but normally avoid those because, well, again, hard to describe taking so many drugs that I felt like I was floating away, and telling a guy at the house to lay on me. Seriously, it was messed up. My arms and legs kept lifting, and I thought I was going to be stuck to the ceiling, or in outer space, or something. Easy to explain that, but hard to explain how it really felt. Easier to explain how being penetrated felt. I mean, how do you describe being on LSD, and the feeling that you are being followed because one of the other people cut themselves pretty bad and you have to walk home by yourself? I ran all the way home. I have never made it home that quickly before. Now, I realize, it was just the street lights, but at that time I though they were cop headlights. Then, when you are at home, calling another friend at 3 AM because you swear you are still at the same place you left, and you are dying, and if you don't get back, you will die, but there is a cop parked across the street (The neighbor across from us drove a white car that is the same model as the police use), so if you leave you will get in trouble. lol, she was so pissed at me the next day xD And that was my first time using LSD. Or the hotdog that kept talking to us. It was my stupid friend being stupid, and she was moving the bun and talking, but after a short time, it creeped us out and we thought the hotdog was really talking to us. We left the house very quickly...not sure how her parents didn't figure it out, since they were home...

Or when my dumbass bf put a drop of LSD in the birds water, I don't even remember where we were, and killed the poor bird D: The bird died basically beating itself against the cage. Or breathing pot smoke at someone's dog until it was just laying on its back, pawing at the air. Or getting my cat high. My poor cat kept trying to crawl out of the room under the door...

And those are the ones I remember vaguely. I have woken up next to people I didn't know, but know that I had sex with them, but don't remember anything about it. I have done that more than once...

Seriously, most of my "experiences" were honestly between the ages of 15-18...if that shows you how completely wild I went...and I was no angel before that either... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

I am in a somewhat whimsical mood right now, so working on the [[Wasteland Survival Guide]]. I guess my first question is: Have you ever played the fallout games? Especially 3, but for chapter 4+, it will be for others. For Chapter 1-3, I would like help seeing if I am doing very good in imitating Moria's style in my writing. But, I guess if you have not played the games, then nothing you can really help with. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:27, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Meh, guess you cannot really comment too much on the pages then...

Well, any thoughts from an outsider on how well they were written in general? Not sure if I made the random author hops feel strange and hard to follow or not. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Guess also if you want, you can tell me what you think of [[FMS/Tales from a raider/FS-Bitch1]]. It is not complete yet, but I guess you can get the feel of it so far. I know you will of course report back how mad it makes you on how the female raider was treated by the male member of her band, but I am wondering more how the story is. I mean, is it captivating? Does it make you imagine what is happening? Does it put you in the place of the scribe, and the raider? Is the flow okay? Does it keep your attention, or does the style detract from the story itself and break your immersion? I at first thought of doing it all through dialog, but the girl who we are finding out about is rather simple when it comes to mental capacity, and I was worried that writing too many "bad grammar speech" would detract. It would help with immersion, so you understand this is a female who has been a victim from the male band members, but that she has a pretty simple mind and worse ways of expressing herself, even though she is "officially" one of them, but I figured better to have a non-mutilated speaking method of telling the story of this girl. Anyways, thoughts and opinions on the story quality would be very nice, since the person who originally asked me to help write some fallout content appears to not really be around much. Just think of deathclaw as something super scary, and replace the random food with poor quality, hardly even seems worth stealing food. And I think you can guess what raiders are. Thieving, murdering, extorting bands that run around in a post apocalyptic wasteland, doing anything they can to survive and believing that if they can take it, it is fair game. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:02, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, if you want, you can proofread it, offer recommendations on where I had problems or where things are not clear, where things need to be rewritten or have content added or removed. Feel free to edit any grammar mistakes I have made, but keep in mind that the girl being interviewed does not have a very good grasp of grammar, so those mistakes are intentional. It is pretty much done. Just need it proofread, and I guess I will see at another time if I need to do more changes. For now, I am going to move on to her leader, which is the other option I have created.

Basically, I am trying to tell interesting stories of the "bad guys". Try to make them more relatable and understandable. In the game, raiders are an annoying presence that you try to eliminate. For this, I am trying to explain why they are the way they are. How they became the human monsters that terrorize towns and murder, steal, and kidnap. With Bitch, we can see how a girl was warped from a young age, turned into a monster, rather than just being one naturally. Next, I will show how the leader has good qualities, and how he has survived the harsh world, and even has an ethical code that hopefully will make the reader feel at least somewhat sympathetic to him. Of course, for him, I will focus on different areas of his growing pains, so not sure the "sex" readers will enjoy it as much. They can always read kyle's vault girl stuff. It is full of that kind of story. I even fixed the broken pictures.

Also, I am curios of thoughts on [[FO3 Shorts/When molerats attack! The untold pheromone story.]]. Think of it as a female "black humor" or "dark comedy". I was trying to write it in a way that will be sort of funny, but in a very dark way. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 17 June 2016 (UTC)

Honestly, a few more pages, and not going to bother reading more. I think I have a pretty good idea for the story, and have already finished the review. Now, I guess someone with more of that kind of story taste can write their own. It was for that that I added something in [[The Review Guide]], because my idea is that each person just puts their own review, so users get more than just mine. I don't like the idea of only a single reviewer, because while I may be hard on the devil's daughter, just look at my "female perspective" and second conclusion, others may like the story. It is not written badly, just needs someone to fix mistakes since I do not think the author is a native English speaker, but it is just shallow and more than a little misogynistic. Much more than a little... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:40, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Well, finished the review of your story, [[A Big Ugly Story]]. lol, I guess one of the few stories you have actually authored on here? I haven't seen any actually started from you. Hopefully you do not think my review is too harsh xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:16, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no feedback on the review? I didn't think I reviewed it that bad xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Ohh, hmm, *blush*. Not sure how I missed it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished my second story in [[FMS/Tales from a raider/I am a female scribe]]. So, what do you think? I would ask for a review of both Bitch's path and Greg's path, but honestly, not sure I can say there is enough to warrant a review. If you want, you could always look them over and let me know what you think. And, I will try to get to that review tomorrow. Today, I finished the one, and want to take a break from reviewing. Wanted to work on a story I had made. But, not sure how well I did with Greg's path, I think more because I could not sympathize with it as much as with Bitch's path. So, wondering what I should do to improve it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Bleh, I had to stop after the scissors. I feel like I am about to throw up... Yeah, I might just keep reading the delaying path, and skip the killing. I have a pretty good feel for the story now... not sure I can finish it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

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--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:05, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Miss me? lol, I have been busy playing Pokemon Go and now No Man's Sky=P

Was just thinking. When are you going to either blindfold me naked and lead me through a room full of strangers, or tie me naked so I can see all the strangers, but cannot do anything about it? Fun either way - I am not aware of it or I a helpless to stop it=P

But look, no touching! Hmm, touching could be fun though...decisions decisions... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, at first I am like {{appleemojiuncatepage1|U+2049=}} Why would you try to parade me in front of Arab women. After looking it up, I know what you mean. But, I am still confused. Don't they normally like men, not women? Still sort of confused... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

lol, you know, I have wondered, just offhandedly, how you would handle being married to someone like me xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:33, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

You know, that explains so much xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:31, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

The nice guy with a dirty mind=P Very sexually oriented in your writing (Not sure I have ever seen you contribute to a non-adult story), but you also humanize it, rather than making the woman a random fuck doll. Just doesn't surprise me you have had a partner that is very open. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Random thought for the day: I was surrounded by, like, guys, and only guys. No other women anywhere. Suddenly the thought popped into my head "I wish one of you would just pull your penis out so we can have some fun!". No, I wouldn't have done it, but still, that thought lurked in my head xD Maybe I am just loosing it xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Imagining myself there, sure=P Even girls can have naughty fantasies. But really doing it, no. If my husband was accepting like you, maybe, I honestly do not know. But it was still fun to imagine being there, in the middle of them all, and suddenly, some Japanese porn or something xD They were college guys, so still cute. I live right next door to a college by the way. I mean, literally. My kitchen window looks onto their (... okay, I am really starting to get frustrated. Building where you play sports, has the basketball court/volleyball court/whatever the re-purpose it as, lockers, etc...and I cannot think of the name for it...it is starting to become more obvious that I do not live in an English speaking country when I really cannot remember this stuff...). When I throw the trash away, I see their dorms, since it is right next to the building we throw our trash in. When I go somewhere, I drive by their basketball court. And sadly, given my husband has been working long hours (No worries, this isn't like "My husband is working long hours" when he is sleeping with someone else. In Taiwan, employees leaving at *gasp* the time they are supposed to is frowned on. I know this from personal experience...), and since we have a son running around that sleeps in the same bed as us, intimacy is...lacking, so I have been a bit frustrated and found myself fantasizing more and more lately. Toys do not make a long term substitute for your husband's warm arms around you, and his warm other parts within you =P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:30, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Yesterday was nice though. Got to scratch that itch the night before. Too bad we were interrupted by my son waking up... (He still sleeps in our bed with us). Then yesterday I got to met a couple friends of my husband. The wife was a programmer in a large company. Was so nice to meet a woman programmer! There are very few in Taiwan... Too bad the husband was the one that spoke English xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:11, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

In high school, my, eccentric, side pretty much turned me into the taunting target for the school... Then again, I admit, I have grown alot since then. I admit I was whiney, needy, selfish, and a drama queen. Hmm, I still have many of these characteristics... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:52, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

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(btw, if you want to know what it says, try: binarytranslator.com =P) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:08, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

btw, when you say eccentric, do you mean my new "camping" path? I am actually writing a hidden story, and will unhide it once I am done xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:47, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Only one problem, while I can write it as something like what I did, a very vague sketch, I would not be able to actually write a story like that. I tend to be more of a sub personally. In the right mood, I can be a dom, and when I am in the right mood, you better do what I say or I will find ways to make you do what I say. I can take charge when needed. But, it is not really how I normally am. I am the one who always tries to be polite, helpful, things like that. While I do talk alot, for the most part, I am pretty passive. I do not think I could write a story about the female character flipping on the males that has bad intentions. Not and make it an obviously attractive read on a site like this. lol, check out my rants, the double D one xD I tend to take more of a lecturer approach I guess, not that great for a story. The camping path I am writing is still in my normal line, the passive girl. But, although I use Loli to highlight some of the absurd elements of stories on here, in fact, all my rants are aimed at that, I do admit that her story turns me on. It is the idea of being so innocent that things like that can be done in a way that is sort of easy to understand from her perspective (Yeah, as if any woman is that innocent...), and can be done in a way that she still maintains the innocent appeal, while doing some very un-innocent things. It is the way that innocence allows her to do things both kinky and dirty without realizing they are kinky or dirty. It is the sexual release without the guilt, because she does not see anything wrong with it. I guess it is sort of hard to understand. Like, the principle path. I did that in a way that she stays innocent, not realizing that it is "bad", or that she should feel ashamed. But, also showing the consequences (Although honestly, I do not think I will put the consequences in the camping path I am working on). "Oh, yeah, I shouldn't tell anyone about this thing you did to me because, it is like a doctor, not because you are like a completely sick and twisted person that should not be within a mile of children". Or the pictures of the other girls with no clothes on on his computer. "Yeah, I mean, everyone likes pictures! He is really awesome for taking pictures with his students. But no clothes, so must have been hot!". Yeah, I wish I was more like her, seeing things innocently instead of realizing how messed up people are. It may be more parts naive rather than innocence, but the Loli character will not go through hell wondering how evil she is, how dirty, and thinking that she does not deserve happiness. It is that she can be so carefree and not even see all the evil lurking around her. You can see it a bit in my other turn-ons. Exhibitionism. It turns me on more, the idea of being exposed in a way that will both turn people on, but also where people will not fault me. Where I can show off but I am blameless and not judged for it. "My dress got caught in the door!" "My skirt got stuck in the escalator!" "Oh, sorry, I didn't realize the door wasn't shut!" "Oh, I didn't realize you could see under my skirt, or that I was bending over and showing off everything in my top!".

I have sometimes wondered about that when I have thought about who I am. I mean, you know I was molested when I was 6, and how that crushed me and made me feel. But, I have wondered, if I went to a sympathetic ear, who understood what had happened to me, instead of to someone who said "You don't do that. It is evil", would I have been as broken as I was? Or would I have healed better, maybe even retained some of my childhood innocents, if it had been approached in the proper, textbook way? If I had not been damaged already when I was raped, and if society did not blame the victim to the extent it does, would it have been less traumatic and easier to get over? How much does our messed up societal views actually mess up our own self worth after being a victim? I have thought about my molestation, and wondered things like, what if it was Greece during the times of the philosophers? Didn't they have sex with minors? I know, it was young boys, but still, did those young boys grow up to be broken? Or, since it was a normal, accepted social phenomenon, did they actually grow up to be normal (In their society)?

I mean, I think about that related to today's age and nudity. I sleep in panties only, and our son sleeps in our bed with us. Does that mean I am a bad parent for letting a two year old see me topless? What is unnatural about nudity? Are minors that are raised in nudist camps harmed by seeing naked men and women? I understand that there is a health issue, which is why nudists bring things to sit on, rather than sitting with their skin touching public surfaces. But, why has the battle for public breastfeeding been going on for so long? We do not pop our nipple out for sexual titillation. We do it to feed our infant. My breasts, while they can be touched in the right ways to bring about sexual response, are not actually a sexual organ. So, why do I need to cover them? I mean, you want more sexual reaction from me? Nibble on my earlobes. That will get you attacked (sexually) faster than anything you can do with any other body part. The nibbling may not please me, but it does elicit response and excitement. But then again, no matter how much you play with my breasts, I will never orgasm from that. I have never known a woman who can (Although I have heard rumors, but again, not like perfectly viewable other parts could not create the same reaction, like ears...).

But, I am also someone who does not view public sex as bad either, as long as it is done in a way that is hygienic. It is a natural process. I think the US view on sex, the human body, etc, has created more sexual dysfunction than anything else, and has done more harm than the entire population engaging in sex and nudity in public spaces ever could. And, if this wasn't this way, would I have grown up much healthier, mentally? Would I have done many of the things I did, given most of my teenage years was pretty much me not caring since I felt I was worthless, evil, and did not deserve happiness? What is one more penis inside of me if I am not worth anything? What is one more dirty old man enjoying my underage body if I am evil, and don't deserve to be happy? No, don't address these, they are rhetorical questions based on how I felt growing up, not on who I am now. But, if society was more open, honest, non-judgemental, non-shaming, etc, would I have still felt this way? I know, lots of questions, explanations, whatever. I hope you don't mind that, while I will leave up the beginning with guys tied to trees all over the place, my story will still be based on what I can imagine. So, Loli in the camping path will still be the innocent girl that does dirty and kinky things because she doesn't understand that the are dirty and kinky, and that she will still see them through some positive, innocent light at the end. Now, I just need to figure out how being tied to a tree and all the guys having sex with her will mesh with her "innocent" mindset. Yeah, I have been having this fantasy more and more lately, so this is a way to write about it=P

Anyways, I could probably keep typing and typing, but think I should stop for now. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, how very open minded of you. I can almost imagine the cries of "Liberal socialist" rising already xD SMH, anyways. Yeah, for some reason, I am just in that mood lately. The kind of mood that, as long as I am not physically hurt, I would be more than willing to just be a public sex toy.

Strip me, tie me, use me, abuse me, tease me, please me, do whatever you want. Let them all watch. Let them all join. Leave me covered, leave me dripping, hot and sticky, wet and willing. Anal, vaginal, oral, hands, fill me up and spray me down. I promise not to spit baby, just don't stop. I promise not to scream, well, unless you want. Will we do it in the mall? Will we do it in the hall? Can we do it on a bike? Or maybe while we take a hike? While flying in an aeroplane? Maybe in the high speed train? How many eyes to look at see, or take part, with you and me?

Yeah, poetry, not my strong suit=P Anyways, yeah, been having these fantasies lately xD Too bad they do not have an APEX here (And that my husband would never agree). I do miss that about APEX. The voyeur parties. The swinger parties. lol, I was not a member very long, a few months right after I turned 18 (Since you need to be 18 to join), but it was...interesting. To this day, I can still remember one person I met. She radiated pure sexual energy, and you could tell she was a dom. Not a fake dom. She was the real one. I fell in lust with her at first site. Sadly, I never got the courage to even try. Too bad...she probably could have taught me what BDSM was really about, rather than all the phony "doms" I have had talk to me online, that are really just guys that want a wet hole that will do whatever they want, without needing to do anything of the real things a master or do should do, like take care of their slaves/subs... The users, not the real masters, the real doms... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:34, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

== Dirty Me's new sextion ==
Okay, getting annoyed at that message that this page is too long, so starting a new section xD

Can you go to [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Camping trip]] and hit edit? Inside, you will find the <nowiki></nowiki>. Can you look over the stuff I have written? Some is notes, but most is the story I am working on. I just want to know if I am doing good at explaining how Loli sees this stuff, how she rationalizes it. "Sure, go ahead and use the bathroom. My dad and brother do that too, since we only have one", and if it is somewhat believable. I am trying to figure out how to work in the compromised positions while still maintaining her "Oh, it is just something innocent" mentality, while showing the reader that while she does not understand what is happening to her, and does not think of it as something bad, the readers can get the messages and still find themselves able to stay immersed. Like what happened to her while she was sleeping in the back of the truck. "Hmm, salty, slightly bitter. OMG, did I drool all over them? I hope they didn't see, let me wipe this away." I know readers will sit back and "omfg, she is so stupid, naive, etc", but, hey, that is one thing that keeps you attached to the character. It is better than "this story sucks", and lets face it, that is one of the points of my character Loli, she is so innocent, or naive, depending on how you look at it, that these things happen to her without her realizing she shouldn't be doing this and shouldn't be letting these guys do this kind of thing to her. Anyways, believable? At least on a level where the story can be followed without just saying "forget this"? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:45, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Hmm, no review and recommendations yet? No worries, you can put notes in there. Just need to make them noticeable, maybe in ()s. And why do I have the feeling you had me in mind when you wrote Nicole's body type? Maybe that is just my "center of the universe" mentality showing. I am still sure the Earth revolves around me though. I mean, I never move, so it must xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:20, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Okay, warning, this will be a long post. Just getting my thoughts out, seeing what you think about them.

So, you still haven't reviewed the hidden Loli camping story. But, yesterday, after I had expanded more, I was thinking about her. Alot. Who Loli is, and why I am allowing this kind of thing to happen to her. I mean, she is a sweet, innocent girl. Maybe some will argue she is naive so bad it hurts. Maybe some will think she is a complete and total idiot. I don't honestly know. But, she is a sweet, sensitive, helpful girl that is willing to go out of her way, and do things that she doesn't really want to, to help others. And that she doesn't realize that what others are doing to her should not be done. So, I started thinking about why I am perfectly okay with letter a bunch of guys basically rape her in her sleep (At this point, as sex while she is awake will happen more further into the story). Not the fact that I am okay with writing about it. The fact that I am okay with letting it happen to her.

It made me wonder who I am. I mean, while I can picture her perfect, while I know her, I am her creator. So, in essence, I am the one letting these things happen to her. It made me start wondering if I am just a sociopath or something, since I can sit back and imagine these things being done to her without feeling anything but excitement. No remorse. No feeling bad for her. Nothing...

It has to be a part of my own psyche. Sadly, it make me think about how I would feel if I was in her position. I thought about the fact they are taking advantage of her trust and friendship to rape her as she sleeps. I thought about my own thoughts on this being done to me. I came to the sad realization that, as long as the perpetrator left no evidence, I would be completely fine with it. I would not ask, I would not try to figure it out. I would just ignore it. By evidence, I mean as long as I did not get hurt, I did not get pregnant, I did not get some STI, whatever. It brings me back to my thoughts I have had about sleeping in a room full of strangers. Sadly, I think, if I was single, if I knew there was no risk of being injured, and if I knew if I slept in that room I would get taken advantage of, I would still close my eyes.

I am not really sure how I feel about this part of me. Maybe it is just the dramatic life switch I had, going from slut and drug whore to married, loving wife. We have been married now over 6 years. Maybe it is just my past, and I have became numb. I still break down and cry when I truly think about being molested. I still break down and cry when I think about the first time I was raped. But, the second time? I know I should feel horrified. But, I just felt meh. I said no, but since he wouldn't stop anyways, I just wanted him to finish fucking me and get the hell away.

One thing that is scaring me, is the fact that I am not scared about some of these fantasies I have been having lately. Okay, so you know about my walking path. I went back yesterday in fact, after my husband got home so he could watch our son while I went for a walk. Let me tell you about this path. It is an old road. No lights, no nothing, blocked off on each end. Technically, people should not be on there, so I can walk along it freely without encountering anyone. Not that no one will ever be on it, because anyone at all could do the exact same thing as me and just walk down it, allowed or not. Yesterday, I brought a small purse with me. Once I had gone far enough that no one could see me from the road, I stripped and put all my stuff in the purse, walking around the path completely naked. At first, I walked along it, feeling the breeze on my skin, feeling excited, being naked out in public, even if the chances are very low that someone else would see me in the public space. Finally, I stood there and played with myself until I orgasmed. What I watched while I did that was gifs from a rape tumblr. In the past, I have done the same thing, although I didn't watch anything, I just closed my eyes and imagined it. I imagined encountering a bunch of men, alone, in this dark path, outside of the normal public view, forcing me down, shoving me against the bank, my ass in the dirt, as they raped me. And, it turned me on.

So, yesterday, I was thinking about this, after I was done of course. And, it made me wonder what my mentality was. In some ways, it almost feels like I want that. Like, I want to engage in this rough sex, with complete strangers, but that, given I now live in the "social norm", with a child and loving husband, that I cannot do this, so it is like I have turned these fantasies on themselves and moved from willingly doing this to being forced to. Like, I inwardly want this, so I am not really being raped, but I want the excuse that I had no choice to justify the action. I mean, even my "oops" moments show this. I would rather be "accidentally" exposed, so the choice taken away from me, than to do it in a way that others know I want to be exposed. Honestly, if faced with the situation, I cannot say I would feel this way. But, right now, my mind is telling me I want this to happen to me. Reality vs fantasy? So hard to explain how I feel. Like, roofie me, gangbang me, and make sure that I do not suffer consequences, like torn vaginal muscles, torn anal muscles, bruising, scraping, pregnancy, STIs, pictures that will ruin my future, etc, and I will be perfectly fine to take that drink from you. Then again, recently, I have been reading more BDSM stuff. And, I have spanked myself. It makes me wet at the same time as it hurts. So, I am not even sure where my pain boundry is. Maybe just if it is temporary. I honestly do not know, and cannot really test it, as my husband will not do that.

So, what does that make me? I have thought of myself, of when I did prostitute myself. If I hadn't been beaten half to death that first time, would you find me on a street corner? Still high as hell, fucking anyone with the money to pay? Would you find me in your favorite porn? Would I be that porn actress that does those rape porns? Or the slave porns?

I am honestly not sure right now who I am, where these thoughts are coming from. Maybe my life transition from party girl, drug girl, easy lay to happily married housewife with a son to drive around, cook for, change diapers for, was too sudden? Sometimes, I almost think I miss my teenage years. When I was fucking and sucking, when I was snorting and smoking. But, I am happy now, so why would I want that, from a time when I was miserable? Why am I letting Loli get taken advantage of? I mean, my principal path, I was highlighting the absurdity of some stories on here. The dog path. The brother path. That was more parody than the camping path I am working on now. The camping path, as I have laid out for her, is pretty much just Loli being used as a sex toy for a bunch of perverts. No consequences like the other paths. Just an innocent girl who is being taken advantage of, and doesn't realize it, just explains it in her innocent way. I am starting to feel bad that I do not feel bad I let her be taken advantage of to this level.

I mean, even the roofie potential, I am not honestly sure if I would care if I woke up and knew everything that happened. If someone slipped something else into my drink, paralyzing me, so I could see, hear, taste, smell, and feel every single thing that was done to me, yet could not speak or move. Right now, in my head, I don't think I would mind that. I could just blame them for it instead of saying "Yeah, I wanted to be fucked by all these guys". Again, real situation, I don't think I could, but I guess I am not sure how I would react in a real situation as I doubt it will happen. Am I turning into some unfeeling sociopath? Is something else wrong with me? I cannot get these thoughts out of my head, and I know that it is not something that is healthy, not something that is good, that I would want to happen, on an intellectual level. So, why do keep hoping, one day, down a dark path, I get attacked and raped by some seedy men? Why do I seem to want to be taken advantage of? Why do I want the control stripped away, and to be locked in a basement, or even better yet, in a town square, where I will just be sexually used and abused?

Hmm, can a 24 year old have an identity crisis? Is that what all this is for me?

Anyways, hopefully you read all this. Just, trying to work through my own conflicting thoughts, and see your thoughts on them. Also: I still want to know how to make Loli's camping trip more "believable". I have thought about completely removing the parts she gets taken advantage of, and leave it all that she does the things willingly thinking they are innocent. I am even thinking of changing the character so it is not her, so it can be just a fantasy, and not part of a character that is aimed at parodying all the "loli" stuff on this website... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Eww, Trump. Don't even get me started on how stupid he is...I am voting Hilary. There may be a few things I do not like about her, but, I think it will be great to have a female president finally, and I do support her on many other things. And, Trump as president would just be some cruel, inhumane joke...

Anyways, your response brought other things to mind. At first, it was some naughty writing about my past. Making it seem more...erotic and exciting, I will admit that I cleaned up the details alot, to make them more "Oh god, this is making me so horny", rather than "Oh god, why did she do something like that" but still. Then, it was getting into old habits. Finding exhibition outlets. Now, it is pervasive thoughts about wishing I could do it. So, what is the next step? Me putting myself in potentially dangerous situations where it could easily become reality? Not as easy here in Taiwan as it would be in the US, but still. I imagine if I tried hard enough, I could find a way, or get myself arrested for trying...given I could always go to a KTV and just be a KTV girl for a day, without requesting money, or maybe and request money...I drive past the betel nut girls, and wish I was Taiwanese so I could be in that glass box. Then again, a white girl in there might attract even more people. It would just not work, because of my Chinese ability... (If you want to see what I am talking about, check here: goo.gl/bNQUA3)

See, this is the thing. This keeps building inside me. So, how do I keep myself from doing something that I know I will regret. And no, it isn't just sexual thoughts. It is drugs. Fortunately, I do not know drug dealers here, but god, sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be to get high. I read about the legalization of marijuana in Colorado. It makes me remember getting stoned. I think about how good it would feel to just have a line of coke.

And, all through this, I think about how I do not feel guilty with the idea of doing any of this. That I just stop myself because I do not want to face the consequences... I do not think I would feel guilty (Again, maybe I would if I really did it, but I do not feel that way right now) having sex with another guy. I just don't do it because I would not want to face the consequences if my husband found out. I really don't want to lose him. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:07, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

lol, would rather he blindfold me, tie me up, and pound me hard=P Preferably leave me that way for a long time, and use me infrequently all throughout the day so I never quite know when he will attack xD. Maybe do like those Japanese porns, strap a high strength vibrator right on my clit so it is constant, for a long time.

Maybe even a few spankings. Make it rough. But...this is the problem. He won't...and my "toys" won't either...although it is fun to shove a vibrator in, get dressed, and go out. But, after a while, it stops being pleasant, and becomes irritating. Wish I knew where to pick up better sex toys here. Wish I had the money to order some better sex toys online...

No worries. I do try to be a good girl. You know, good girls do it in heaven. Bad girls do it everywhere. (Yes, I know the song is...slightly different=P But, I want to do it everywhere! Not go everywhere...www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_cCwwXu5RM) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

No worries. lol, I don't expect anyone to fix it xD I am a big girl, and I will figure out how to deal with it. I go crazy time to time, but I am smart enough to know when I need to stop xD And now, I have things I care about enough to stop myself. It is just good to have someone to talk to. I don't honestly have many IRL friends. I have lots of people who want to be my friends, but that is more about "Hey, I can talk to a foreigner when I want" and "I have a foreign friend! You should meet her", rather than someone to sit down and seriously talk to. While I like it here, sometimes it gets a bit lonely. Guess you can guess, given I am talking to a strange guy on the internet, pouring out all this stuff that I would normally talk to another girl about xD Well, not completely, I would still edit many of those sexual thoughts...

Anyways, no worries. Thanks for listening. I will stop being nuts someday xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:50, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Did you know, I think of Justin as you? Yes, I realize you would not take advantage of young Loli in that manner, but as a part of you. Trying to make sure she enjoys it (He will teach her what it feels like to receive oral in the next part I write), and not in the fact that he is being just as not upfront with her as the others, but in that he tries to help her a bit, make her feel more comfortable, explain a little more. Like, a more asshole version of you, but acting nice. Or maybe just the way Loli perceives him is more like you. Okay, am I confusing you yet?

If I ever end up single, and decide to take all the people on EP on an adventure, I will be Loli, you can be Justin. For the other 4, well, sure, Fred can join, and Platypus. I can pretend to be all sweet, innocent, naive. Maybe it can be like a script=P But, well, you don't mind if I use birth control, unlike Loli, right? I don't want to end up like Loli is about to... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:03, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

More eyes to see

More ears to hear

More hands to feel

To feel, to feel, to touch, to tickle, to tease, to grope, to fondle

Everywhere. My top. My bottom. My front and back. Outside, and inside. Watching me squirm, listening to me pant, to beg, to scream, in surprise, in shock, in pleasure.

Seeing me, in my ecstatic agony. In my glorious humiliation. In my state of carnal bliss, and erotic torment.

Watch me, tease me, taste me, please me. Happily bound to the chain, enslaved in silk and velvet, caresses bringing ecstatic pain, with everyone I ever met.

Anyways, sorry, that stuff randomly popped into my head, and I had to find somewhere to write it. Sadly, I wish that was my mindset. Lately, I have been feeling stupid, useless, pointless. Seems like everywhere I turn, I get told that I am doing everything wrong. No, not from my husband, but by others... I feel so dispirited, so dejected right now. Starting to get depressed... I ended up bursting into tears as someone was bitching at me about something the other day. Had to walk away and just try to clear my head. Sigh...beginning to wonder if it is something wrong with me, or wrong with this culture I live in...I don't really know anymore...

Soooo, any thoughts? [[Masochist me]]? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:49, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Actually, not really. More based on fantasies I have, rather than realities. I mean, as with all my writing, I will draw on my personal experience (like being spanked by my dad), but just, eh, what can I say, I have studied a bit of BDSM, and sort of like the 50 Shades of Grey, even though I know it is basically garbage. So, figured this would be a good way to let my kinky side out, the side of me that wants to be humiliated, who wants to be spanked, who wants to try all these things, since it won't happen in real life. As for my family, they are wonderful. My husband is very busy lately, and sadly, I am too. My son is a handful. But, it was him that gave me this idea. Not sure why he is doing it, but after I spanked him once, he started spanking himself. It was just a single spank, but his behavior made me wonder why he did that. It made me wonder, are some people attracted to pain? Does it stimulate, rather than make one want to flee? So, I created a character that has the exact opposite reaction. For example, in the opening, I mentioned "rewarded myself". I remember, lying in bed, waiting for my husband. And, I spanked myself. Then did it again. And again. One night, while waiting for him, I took out the belt. Started spanking myself, again, and again. It hurt, but at the same time, I found myself growing wet, and wetter, and... Anyways, I haven't tried again for a while, but I found I sort of liked it. And, well, decided to make a story of it. At first, I wanted to make it a pure rape story, and was getting ready to repurpose [[Rape Magnet]]. The author put one page, and not that great of a page, and never did anything. But, each time I tried, I realize, sure, I want to explore my darker side through writing, but not just about rape. I wanted a plausible story, not "a voodoo witch doctor cursed me, so now everyone will rape me", but something that really exists. Something with real seeming people. Sure, I will write about rape, but also about someone who enjoys being degraded, enjoys being hurt, and humiliated, and used. Why? Well, then I have something to fantasize about when my mind starts to fill with those kinds of fantasies. Yes, I do masturbate to my own stories. Why? Because I think there is some part of me that actually feels, at least a little like this. Why? Well, because there are real people like this in the world. In fact, the "psychologist diagnosis" was taken from wiki, as a real psychological condition. There are real people like this. So, it lets me step into these shoes, and imagine, what would it be like if I was someone like that. No worries, I am not, and not going to do things like that. But, it lets me imagine. Isn't that the purpose of fantasies? To imagine things you don't really want to do? So, guess in here, some mystery men get to choke me, spank me, pull my hair.

As for how I am doing in real life, no worries, doing fine. Money is always tight, like normal, but I am doing good. Now, if only you could tell me your secret to making money at home...since I don't think teachers could handle my little ball of energy... I need to keep a constant eye on him... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:07, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I think I have finished most of the backstory and intro to the character in [[Masochist me]]. I am worried though that I did too much for it though, or that it rambles, or will bore the reader. Can you do me a favor, go check everything, and let me know if anything is awkward, too much, too little, too meh, or whatever? I am trying to make sure the reader knows who the character is, but not sure if I am doing that good at it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:53, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

So, not too much? It helps demonstrate who the character is, and doesn't go overboard? Just want to make sure. I will write some of the actual "story" parts soon, although I have introduced a few short ones already. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:24, 15 March 2017 (UTC)

It sounds bad just from the name alone...I checked it on IMDB, and it sounds just as bad as the name suggests... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:26, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

lol @ mumble years ago. I finished high school in 2010. Wow, almost 7 years now... hard to believe... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Sigh. Why do I feel like right now I am more explaining to people "how to be a more interesting date" than writing a naughty BDSM escort story? Anyways, you said before you found the information useful. How about the current "training" parts? Are they actually helpful to get into the mind of someone who's job is to keep strange men interested and coming back for more? I understand, maybe this is way too much details (Which you still haven't told me if it is too much, and if I should just skip to the story), but wondering if it is helpful to get into her mind a bit, and try to understand her world. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:14, 20 March 2017 (UTC)

You know the funny part? Writing these "escort training" pages, I am actually learning a bit myself. I mean, I know most of these things, but have never really thought about the why. At first, I was just planning on writing my own reasons on why I think this or that may be important, but after I started actually looking up the information, I started realizing exactly how little attention we normally pay to how we present ourselves to others. Or at least how little attention I usually pay...

I mean, I touch those people I am with and feel comfortable or attracted to, but I never thought about how touch will normally play an important part in the attraction between a couple. I do quite fine with dressing myself, but have never thought about some of the other things related to it. Most of these "character reactions" is how I would have reacted if I was with the character. I think that researching these things I am writing now has actually help me better understand what we do on a subconscious level, and made me think about how we actually apply some of these things, consciously, to improve existing relationships xD Sort of strange I guess that I am learning almost as much as I am trying to tell the readers. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:36, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, was thinking. Maybe once I finish up my training material, I will let you be the male instructor to come in and teach us "how to please a man sexually". After all, a male should probably be teaching this class in my story. Otherwise, me writing it will probably sound rather, cliche..."oral, let him stick it where he wants, focus on his satisfaction not yours", and sadly, would probably sound like many of the stories here... "lick shaft, stroke shaft, cup balls, twist balls, swallow, etc". I am not honestly sure, if a guy was teaching a group of escorts the "general how to make sure a man is sexually satisfied" that this would be how he would teach it. I mean, eye contact. Vocalization of pleasure. Do men prefer specific positions in general (Does it feel better for him)? I have heard that men actually depend on the woman's facial expressions to determine how turned on by her he is. All these strange little tidbits. Anyways, just giving you a heads up so you can think about it, and will let you know when I have the page ready for you. Of course, the instructor can do it in any tone of voice he wants. Later, I might even have her go for BDSM training (I have had some limited training). Honestly though, not sure if I want a full demonstration (AKA, actual sex in the training session or not), and it will be an optional class, outside of the agency, for those who do wish to add sexual intimacy to their companion services as an escort. I think these training classes I am writing about help paint the picture in the readers head better, so they can see the character, see what she is doing and learning about, so they can feel more connected to her. But this could just be me, and not anyone else who is actually reading what I have written so far... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all created for you ^.^ Well, the option is: [[Masochist me/Sex training]]

I have left the notes there for you on the request. But, I know you do not "have to do it", but hoping you will do it for me. I know you can! Teach me how to please a man! And don't forget, if you don't, I will be taking some BDSM classes soon, so will know how to properly handle ropes, and whips, and Cock and ball torture (Although Masochist me would never do anything like that...)... Can't wait to see my class, and learn lots of new things! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:03, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Don't even know what to say...www.youtube.com/watch?v=ucEreWSSB6Y --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:03, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

lol, I stumbled across that on youtube. I could not stop laughing. My poor husband didn't understand why that English was so...wrong, until I explained it to him, and sadly, he had to attend a video conference call, and I could not stop laughing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:39, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

btw, thoughts about the current training? Sadly, I am not very far in. Just now finished kissing, and next need to move to caressing. I will also write that the character misunderstands the teacher, starts to strip thinking he is asking for sex to not kick her out of the class. He will refuse, and then explain the problem. This will help show that, although the character and teacher will have sexual contact, it is not for nefarious reasons, and that he is a good guy. But, after she explains about herself, he will also find some difficulties, as her sexual responses do not follow the normal conventions that he is trying to teach, so there may be some materials exploring the further differences between her (And how she can only achieve 'climax') and what he is trying to teach the other students. Anyways, I know the current sex education material is long, just want to make sure that it is okay from the male perspective, and doesn't state things that are incorrect. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:46, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

So, how did you like the twist? Where the teacher was trying to teach them "slow, closed mouth, non aggressive", and it was the female in this case that escalated it from that to "Fucking stop being gentle"? I like writing little...twists...in the storyline to keep it interesting. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, criticism time. Please feel free to go through my teaching parts and critique if needed. You can leave the critiques on the discussion page for that part of the story. Well, if you want to. I know I ask alot. And I know that you have no requirements to help. Just want to see where I am not doing good. Or if I am putting in something redundant. Or something... I swear my english is rapidly deteriorating. My mom even told me that I have an accent now, and I notice myself using Chinglish, so I am rather paranoid if I am writing this okay right now. I also assume, at least this part, you are enjoying, since we haven't gotten to the beating, and spanking, crying and screaming. Also, some of it is based on my own knowledge or thoughts about the way things work (Like the current touch, since it is harder to get information on touch, since everything out there talks about kinds of touches-caress, hug, cuddle, etc, and not about the specific areas of touch, light vs. heavy, stroke, or poke, or firm pressure, etc, or what a touch on the neck means, what a touch on the cheek means, what a touch on the stomach means, so most of this is based on what I think and know, which may not be correct). I know you may not know any more or less than me, but if you see something that seems stupid, or flat out false, please let me know. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

ヽ(゜Q。)ノⓌⓗⓐⓣ？ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I guess I need to add some. Looked up some dirty poems just for you:

Mental anxiety,<br>
Mental breakdowns,<br>
Menstrual cramps,<br>
Menopause...<br>
Did you ever notice how all our problems begin with MEN!<br>

Okay, fine, I will copy some of the actual poems:<br>
If guys had their periods<br>
They would have compare the size of their tampons<br>

Sigh, okay, a real one!

Holy mother, full of grace<br>
Bless my boyfriend's gorgeous face<br>
Bless his hair that tends to curl<br>
Keep him safe from all the girls<br>
Bless his arms that are so strong<br>
Keep his hands where they belong<br>
Bless his dick, the one I sucked<br>
Bless the bed, in which we fucked<br>
And if my mom happened to walk in<br>
Bless the shit I'd be in<br>

So, I finished the petting training page, that should cover your recommendation of groping and fondling. But, not sure I covered it well enough from your viewpoint? If you want to look it over, and let me know. It just felt strange to have a sex training with "Hey, women, let the men grab your breasts and ass, they will like that", since it is supposed to educate both men and women. Even had a bit of a sex scene in there for readers. Women do like to grab also=P Of course, it was a shorter one than the touching, since it was focused on private contact, rather than pure touch. Next, I will get to oral. Now to research how to give good oral, for both men and women, considering I cannot say I have had many partners that have been that into oral, so honestly, I am not sure what good oral is either xD Had plenty of men able to cum in my mouth, but is that a measure of "how good of a cocksucker I am"? Anyways, let me know what you think. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:49, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Sigh, think I will let...someone else watch this new guy, Teddy, to make sure he does what he should on the site...

"OOOOH MY WOMB! Y-YOUR BREAKING MY WOMB! OOOHH! ITS IN MY STOMACH NOW!"

I don't even know what to say...so many typos, misspellings, things that are just plain wrong, and the story is just, bleh, and I have no interest to even help it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:45, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

You know, beginning to wonder if our new neighbor is an exhibitionist, or just doesn't think that we can see straight into her kitchen. From time to time, at night, I will see her in her kitchen, topless. lol, maybe she doesn't care, since I tend to go into my own kitchen topless at times xD Wonder if my husband has seen her yet though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

lol, well, if I knew the answer to that, I would decide if I should...do more xD But, not the first time I have seen someone walking around topless in their house. I think it is just that they do not think about it like that. Too bad. It would be interesting if she was. We could give each other a show. But, that is not the kind of thing you ask your neighbor (And I wouldn't know how to ask her that in Chinese anyways). --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:54, 17 May 2017 (UTC)

*cry* I assume you have heard of Ariana Grande's Manchester concert...I wanted to go to her concert, since she is supposed to be coming here. But wondering if it is safe...probably, I doubt that would happen in Taiwan. Then again, if something did happen, sure not too many people would miss me... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:48, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

I have been working on my Loli camping story, and need your help. I am getting close to finishing it, but I want to have the boink games. Loli thinks sex is two people kissing, and the guys with her, finding this out, call sex boinking instead of sex, and the next part of the story I am writing is them having the boinking games.

First, what is that one sport called where you run to a set point, like a tree or something, then run back. Back and forth? I forget what it is called...feel like my English is getting worse...I know it isn't relays. Those are the ones with the batons. I forget what it is called though.

Anyways, here are the boinking games I currently have:

Boink tag - She picks someone, and boinks them. They need to tag someone else. Once they do, that other person needs to chase her and catch her. Once they catch her, he gets to pick the position and boink her. She will then pick someone else, choosing the position she boinks him.

Boink racing - She will boink each one by one, and she needs to race to see who she can get to cum first. The guys need to try not to cum. The shortest one is out, then it will repeat until only one is left.

Hide and boink - The guys will hide. She will boink each as she finds them. The last one hiding wins. For some reason, they will suck at hiding...I don't know why...

Last idea is the (Not relay). She will be one point, a tree in the forest the other. The first person to reach her boinks her. The rest run back to the other point, the tree. Then, once the one boinking her cums, he will run back to the tree and continue racing. They will stagger out, so everyone will get a chance to boink her, but obviously, the ones that run the fastest may be able to boink her more than the others.

The boink games will not really have anything special for winning, other than the satisfaction of winning, but the guys don't seem to mind.

Anyways, can you help me think of more boink games? I want to have 7, for a week of boink games. (And help me remember the name of that one non-relay racing...) --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:14, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

Okay, all done with the camping trip. Sorry, it is a long, boink filled story. There are a couple notes at the beginning and end, but the story is done. So, let me know what you think after you finish it ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:34, 12 June 2017 (UTC)

Well, you realize Justin was a reference to you. Not the "Take advantage of a girl who doesn't understand" part like all the guys, but the "Gentle, comforting, show her pleasure too" parts. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

Honestly, you don't realize how turned on I get from this story. I think it is just the thought of being able to enjoy sex without having to think about the consequences, without having to feel guilty, to being able to have sex without any idea of societies views. She doesn't know she is having sex, so she doesn't know she is acting like a slut. She doesn't know that there are risks of STIs, pregnancy, things like that. She doesn't get hung up on the link between love and sex, because "boinking" is not sex. Had they been kissing, she would have had the same hangups all of us must face and either accept or reject. She doesn't need to think about what her parents would say, because she is a good girl and has never had sex (in her mind). She doesn't need to think about what her friends would think, or her brother, or anyone else, because as far as she understands, there is nothing wrong with what she is doing, and in fact, she is helping her friends, so is doing something good without any bad results (that she is aware of). It is this innocent, carefree, guilt free sex that I find a turn on. Being able to enjoy the physical act without all the baggage.

Then again, some of the excitement of sex and sexual behavior comes from the element of risk. Letting a guy finish inside without protection: Risk of pregnancy. Walking around naked through a dark park late at night: Risk of getting caught, arrested, raped. Random hookups: Risk of STIs. Walking down the stairs in my apartment bottomless: Risk of humiliation. Getting in a car with a random stranger: Risk of being raped, tortured, killed. I took alot of risks when I was young. Even now, I still take some risks, just...minimizing them. Now that I am a wife and mother, I can't really take risks, and don't want to. I care about myself more, so don't want to so much, and I don't want to put myself in a position where my son will lose a mother, my husband would lose a wife. So, I just fantasize about it now. But, this is why this specific Loli story actually kept me more than a little wet... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:15, 13 June 2017 (UTC)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvD3CHA48pA --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

I was scootering home today, and it was raining. I have thought this before, and wanted to before, but it struck me again. I saw someone in one of those clear rain coats. They are cheap, like basically one dollar us. I always jokingly call them garbage bags with holes, because they are like a garbage bag with arms holes and a head hole. I was looking at the person riding in this cheap, clear rain coat, and thinking "You should be naked under that". I keep wanting to take a ride on a scooter either naked or in one of these cheap, clear rain coats. Every time I imagine it, I always imagine myself, scootering along, naked, and a couple college guys come along. They pull up beside me and start trying to talk to me. I am sitting there, hunching over, trying to hide my naked self from them. But, can't really cover up, since my hands need to stay on the handle bar. I so want to try scooter naked though.

Sigh, I need to find some me time sometime, late at night, so I can head over to the park, go for a naked hike... at least I can do that without getting in trouble. Still, I miss naked rides from when I was younger. Bicycling around completely exposed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:40, 7 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, no comment on the "God, Iw ant to scooter around naked" thing? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:10, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG. So exciting last night! So, let me tell you what happened. After my husband got home, I went out for a walk. The college is pretty dead since it is summer break, but there are a few students still. As I was walking, a guy started saying "Hi, what's your name, are you American", etc, in broken English. I am used to that living here. Anyways, suddenly he says "I like your breasts". Now, here, normally people are pretty polite, and do not tend to say things like that. I have heard "You are so pretty, you are so beautiful, you are so sexy", even once "I love your legs", but never something so obviously sexual. For a split second, I thought about walking away or saying something. But, well, you know me, I instead went another way. I lifted my shirt and showed him my breasts. I have not done that in like, 9 years. I mean, purposely exposing myself to someone. I mean, a foreign country, I worry about getting in trouble. Well, even the US I could get in trouble, but I would not be deported there or anything. Just, the way he suddenly said that made me feel that "hey, I can do this without getting in trouble". His jaw literally dropped. I ended up putting back down my shirt and walking away as fast as I could, but it was so exciting, and I felt so...well, hard to describe. I know, risky (Not risky as in risk of getting raped, that is not something I am honestly worried about here. Just risky as in risk of getting in trouble), but still, I felt like I was a teenager again xD

As for the naked scooter ride, I am telling you so I can get it off my chest. You should know me better than that. I get something into my head that I think would be fun to try, and eventually I work myself up to trying it. lol, not sure if I was looking for you as the voice of reason (Don't risk your safety and freedom) or the voice of YOLO (Hey, just find someplace you feel you would be able to do it safely, and then go for it). You know, someone else excited about the idea of me there, naked on a scooter, at least helps me feel more than an empty desire to do something, and frustration that I cannot do it.

God, this weekend, no excuses, I am going to do naughty, naughty things to my husband. It has been way too long, with us never getting to bed in time. I don't care if it is 3 am, we will be "boinking". --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Me to random Taiwanese college student on a dark and lonely street: My shirt!

Does that work with your thoughts? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:39, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

== Dirty me needs another new Sextion ==

Lust? Eh, hard to tell anymore. Our life is: Weekdays - up at 7, and he gets ready for work while I go buy him breakfast. Once he is ready and I am done, he goes to work. Then, my day is busy taking care of our son. He is a huge bundle of energy, so trust me, it feels like a full time job. Only quiet time I get is while he is sleeping (Either nap or at night) or eating and watching his show. Plus, now I am trying to start potty training him and teach him, so dealing with peed in shorts while trying to get him to say, well, whatever. Once my husband gets home, it is time for me to work. I have started teaching online for one of the local adult english schools. Once I finish that, it is time to start getting everything ready. Wash the dishes, hang the laundry, clean the floor after my son has knocked half of it off. By the time everything is done, it is after 12 or 1. We take out the trash, come back, and take our shower. By the time everything is done, we go to bed, well, on an early night, around 1:30 am. Sadly, early nights don't happen often.

The weekends, well, love life doesn't have much chance either. We have someone living with us now, so even if our son takes his nap, even when we go to bed, it is still the same time or later, and the rare love making is with me trying not to wake our son, laying right next to us...

Needless to say, I have not had sex in over 2 months. Not unless you count with myself. And I have been doing that more and more lately...

lol, haven't you noticed? When I start coming on here, and start talking more and more naughty, and start thinking about things I want to do in real life, well, most of the time it is because I miss being touched, being desired, being sexual. It isn't my husband's fault. It isn't my fault. It is just life, and how busy our lives are. But that does not mean that I do not want...something. My late night walk yesterday, only reason I had time is because I only had 1 class scheduled last night. Been a while since I have got to go out and just walk and enjoy being outside, without having to chase our son, tell him no, tell him stop. Sigh, no idea if we will even find time this weekend. It is more what I want. I want him to tie me up, and not let me lose for the entire weekend. I want to tie him up, and see if I can ride him until his penis breaks. But in reality, he will probably sleep in. I will teach some classes. He will eat while I am teaching. The breaks will make it so it is not convenient to go anywhere or do anything. And I will think again about what would happen if I taught the class naked. That will probably be the most excitement I will get...

But god, so horny. I want to go to my little, dark park. I want to put my clothes in my bag and go hiking. I want to have to hide because I saw someone else walking late at night. Not like I can throw on my clothes that quickly. That is why it is exciting. Because, it is fun wearing the right shirt, so others can catch a glimpse of your breasts. Wearing no panties in a nice, light, pleated skirt, that blows just the right way to show I am not wearing panties. It is fun to wear a short skirt at store full of escalators. To try on clothes and see if anyone peeks into the dressing room. At the markets, they are normally the cloth type, easier to leave cracked. The ones in the department stores are normally doors, so I don't dare "accidentally" not getting them completely closed. Not if I want to continue shopping there. Very infrequent times, okay. But, I do not want someone I see frequently thinking I am doing it on purpose. And where I am, there aren't that many department stores. It was easier in Taipei, because I could just hit lots of different stores. Now, this area is smaller. So, the stores I go to are the same stores I always go to. Harder to look someone in the eye when they know you are showing off your private parts intentionally.

A nice shower, and the right shirt, great. I actually went out that way a couple weeks ago when it was raining. But sadly, not even much time for finding ways to get naughty, with or without my husband.

And I don't do that when I have my son with me, so most of the time it is late night, after he is asleep, when I need to go out for something, or sometimes, just when I can find an excuse to go out.

I miss being young, single, and stupid... The kinky side of me, the broken side of me, needs something to release. Fuck, if I was single, right now, the way I feel, I would go see if I could rent that train car (It was a story in Taiwan, someone rented a train car, then a girl had sex with 15 guys in it). I would go see if I could get a job as a betel nut girl. Not sure if they are allowed to sell them in the little glass booths wearing nothing but lingerie (In some cases, literally nothing but their underwear). I don't see those anymore, so they might have cracked down, but would still be fun. From what I was told, while they do not prostitute themselves, they do tend to get people who do things like pull out their penis and masturbate in front of them. The betel nut girls sit in a glass booth by the side of the road, waiting for customers. They sell them betel nuts, or bottles of tea, or cigarettes. When the car pulls up, they leave the booth, the person inside rolls down their window, and tells the girl what they want. Like I said, not like I am worried about getting raped here. These girls wearing almost nothing don't tend to get attacked or raped. The most they need to worry about is the random guy whacking off.

If I was single, I would probably lend them a helping hand=P At least, the way I feel right now xD

God, I want to go to a sauna and enter the men's area, see how long it takes them to say something, see how long it takes the spa people to come in and remove me, the crazy foreign girl who is in the wrong sauna. I want to go fuck in that changing booth with the door, and see how loud I can do it. I want to do something before I explode...

Eh, never said I was perfect. I am still broken. I am just happier now. I have an addictive personality, and tend to do things because they make me feel good, even when I shouldn't do it. Trust me, I was researching where to buy marijuana in Taiwan. Found out, don't fucking bother. With my husband and son, I wouldn't do the other stuff, but that doesn't mean I don't think about how great it would be to have a gram of cocaine. A little something to get myself feeling all nice and good and fuzzy. Just not as sexy talking about using drugs as it is to talk about being naughty=P

Oh well, that's life and its struggles. Sigh...time to go grab my vibrator and fuck the shit out of myself before my son wakes up. Writing all this game me lots of things to visualize. Think when I close my eyes, I will be a betel nut girl, naked in a glass box while all the cars pull up to buy something=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 14 July 2017 (UTC)

Funny thing I read today:

Crazy how women have the stereotype of being chatty when 90% of dudes have 45 minute podcasts that no one listens to.

I love 21, but it is a picture, so you will need to go there yourself: theberry.com/2016/08/07/jokes-strong-enough-for-a-man-but-ph-balanced-for-a-woman/

There are alot of good ones there xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:02, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Debbie? As in Debbie does Dallas? lol, one my mom recommended to me xD Still never actually watched it. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:39, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, 22 years ago. I was like...3... You don't know how tempted I have been sometimes to ask how old you are >.> No worries, not going to ask xD No, for some reason, when you wrote the SSS page, I wondered if the girl in that page was named Debbie because of that. You know, sometimes my mind just pops up with random things xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:56, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you means your intro? It says you have two munchkins, which makes me think they are younger children. And, well, if it was like my cousin, even with children that are 18, you could be only 34 years old. My cousin got pregnant at 16. I think that is one of the reasons my mom started making me take birth control as early as she could. My aunt also did that to her other daughters after that. And you honestly think you need to be 18 to watch porn? Meh, I was making porn (Well, not really making it, but being recorded as we had sex) before I was even 18. So, 22 years ago, well, you would have been 12 (If you were 34 I mean). I don't know if it actually true, but there are all those "12 year olds watching porn on the internet". Well, maybe your brain is better at that than I am. Honestly, I was beginning to wonder if you were like, 50's, or something xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Well, adding some planning material for Masochist me at [[Masochist_me/Planning_and_editing_page]], Rape_fantasy, ravishment section. Wondering what you think of it so far. I still have more to write, and once I have the appropriate part of the story in place, will copy it to the main part of the story. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:43, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, that is why I ask you. I would feel creepy asking those that tend to write all the rape stuff in the stories to judge how well written it is. It almost feels like saying "Hey, I am writing about rape, and you like rape, so you should come rape me". I know, probably many of the people who write those here aren't rapists (And I would hope none are), and maybe, like me, they just want to write about some fantasy. But, it feels wrong. Like asking the mugger about what it is like to be a victim. Again, not judging, just the way I feel.

And, I am writing them because I do have the dark tendencies, and the victim status, so it is a way to work out that stuff in myself. I know, strange, right? Someone who knows what it is like to be raped sitting there having sexual fantasies about being raped, yet finds it hard to actually talk about her own rape. Guess you would need to find a psychologist to ask about that... But yeah, it is like the president. The people I want to be president aren't the ones who want to be, even though I think they would do a great job. You don't want to see if it is good, because it isn't something you like really, but you are the one I trust to judge it more. lol, imagine me asking some of the people that have written some of the rampage stuff, and just completely demean women and use them like a one time sex toy, then slit their throat...sorry, it is their story, and hopefully they aren't acting it out, but...yeah, I avoid talking to most of those people on here... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:53, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

lol, you can always tell when I am going out of my mind with boredom when I start spamming the spammers xD Guess you can check the comments I left, if you can get to the pages before Platypus wipes the account and everything else... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:11, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Starman Jones. Sorry, but I had to look it up. Wow, that is an old book. I have been reading the Expanse. On book 6 right now. The authors are so bad at character details. But, they are good at world building. Reminds me of Infoquake. Interesting, easy to imagine worlds, but character development was so meh. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:50, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

wow, [[A girl's life]], no clue what to say... I tried to at least make sentences out of his past thing, then left him lots of things to think about on [[Talk:A girl's life]]. After reading that, I can imagine pulling up to the McDonald's drive thru

"Hello, what will you have today?"

"I will have the sex, with a side of sex, and extra sex. For a drink I would like some sex."

"Okay, your total comes to sex dollars and sex cents. Please pull up to the window."

"Hello, here is your order. How will you take it?"

"Doggy style please. And don't hold the cum."

They sex.

"Thank you, cum again," he says as I leave the window.

The sex end.

Sex. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

[[Stories: Codsworth]] Thoughts? I know you don't know the name, but I am hoping the story will be explanatory enough that it doesn't need a full background. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:17, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

I should. I have thought about it, have even visited the page before. Just need to get around to making up the paths. Same with Masochist me, or filling in some of the red links in Dirty Me.--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:43, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, no idea about the movie. I guess I could check google for it...and the horticulture joke was funny. I didn't get the thing before xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:22, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

lol, that one was funny. Too bad I am sick...my son appears to have gotten the flu from somewhere, and I got it from him. I feel horrible.

Yesterday, while I was scootering around, I thought of a new game to add to Loli's camping trip. Boink a wee wee. Since most guys get soft after cumming, you just keep working on the other guys, trying to get them all soft. Maybe I will add that to one of the days for Loli. Of course, since they are all high school guys, well, it may be a bit harder to do than if they were all older guys. In high school, guys seemed to spring up again very quickly. Wonder how long Loli would need to boink their penises before they stay down. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:24, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

A right twisted wench from Caprees-ed<br>
Orgasmed each time that she sneez-ed<br>
To the druggist she went<br>
And laid down her last cent<br>
Said, "A barrel of snuff, if you pleas-ed."<br>

This one made me laugh pretty good. I have milked a cow, and part of my family lives in rural areas, so I know a bit about farms (Yes, they have farms in Arizona...)

A new farmer's helper named Kull<br>
Accidentally was milking a bull<br>
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,<br>
You done milked the wrong one!"<br>
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."<br>

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:49, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

Well, added in whack a mole to the boink games in the loli camping story. It seems like it could be interesting, and, like Loli, probably not possible to do, fuck a group of guys until all of them are soft. Well, maybe if they are all like 50 or something. Meh, whack a mole sex game wouldn't work well if they took viagra. The whacked moles wouldn't go down xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:35, 12 September 2017 (UTC)

A girl goes into the doctor's office for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a red 'H' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Harvard and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Harvard sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a blue 'Y' on her chest. "How did you get that mark on your chest?" asks the doctor. "Oh, my boyfriend went to Yale and he's so proud of it that he never takes off his Yale sweatshirt, even when we make love," she replies.

A couple of days later, another girl comes in for a checkup. As she takes off her blouse, he notices a green 'M' on her chest. "Do you have a boyfriend at Michigan?" asks the doctor. "No, but I have a girlfriend at Wisconsin. Why do you ask?"

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:54, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Nope, never heard of it. Google search found it pretty quickly though. The series I just finished was Remembrance of Earth's Past by Cixin Liu. It wasn't too bad, although you can tell the differences in how the Chinese view society and people from it. Right now, been reading some Stephen King. Well, started reading for Halloween, and still reading. Did you know this is the first time I have read Carrie? It is strange, it is so well known, and I never really read it or anything before, just knew all the cliches.

Sadly, this weekend, I talked to my mom. Found out my cousin had a heart attack. He is only 2 years older than me...they ended up having to replace a valve. At 27... Sigh... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Debating. Either go out riding my scooter with a button up blouse completely unbuttoned, or completely topless...

Obviously, it is much more exciting going completely topless, as there is nothing I can do until I can get to something to cover myself up with if someone is on the road or sidewalk, but it is more exciting because it is also riskier.

Thought about seeing if I can go through a naked run through the park close to my house (I have done it before, since there is not really anyone that goes there at night), but there are construction workers nearby working on the new rail lines at the time I would normally be able to get out. I could completely avoid going too close to the road so they could not see me, but one of the paths takes me beyond the treeline, but back in the park still, away from the road. More chance for them to see me that way. I don't know. It seems like the last couple weeks, this has become an obsession. I really want to be caught (just not get in trouble)...

Maybe I just need to see if there is an English speaking psychologist here that I can go to, before I get in trouble...

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:03, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Eh, trying a new style now, [[Dirty Me's Diary]]. Now, you be good and don't go reading an innocent girls private thoughts! wink wink

Sorry, I know, high school story again. Just want it to be "firsts". Firsts are always more fun. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:24, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Well, took your advice, but with a jacket with nothing on under. Had to pick up drinks, so I kept it zipped up enough while I was scootering through areas with people, but down enough so it was obvious that I was only wearing a jacket. Zipped it all the way up before I got to the drink store (I know them, so not going to parade around my "behavior"), then unzipped again a bit while going back out. Once I hit the road with no traffic, zipped it down so far that it was barely zipped at all, and made sure it opened completely in the front. Sadly, that road is getting more and more new buildings, and I can't be naughty on as much of the road as I could before...soon, not sure I can even do anything.

At least the park is still the same, and there is still the blocked path that I can be naughty on. I am seriously contemplating a naked jog through the park, about 7 or 8. The lights are off in the park, so it is dark, so not worried about that. But, thinking I really want to take the second path that goes near the road. The construction workers normally seem to gather around there after they finish, and if one looked over at the right time, they would definitely see me. Not that I would do anything with them. Bleh, construction workers in porns are much better looking, while real ones are older, beer bellies, and not very attractive. And I am married, so there is that. But still, give them a show xD I have the feeling they would not call the police or anything if they saw a naked woman jogging through the park. Then again, I could be wrong... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:29, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wow, had my ass patted today on the train. But, he stopped when I looked around and saw him. I didn't glare, or give him a specific look, I just saw who it was and turned away again. Too bad he didn't keep it up. I didn't mind=P He could have done so much more before I would have started minding xD That makes the second or third time (Unsure about one, someone brushing my breasts with his hands, it could have been a real accident, but one actually grabbed my ass before, so I doubt you can say that was an accident) I have been touched inappropriately on the MRT. Now, I want to know when it will turn into one of those Japanese porns, and they will actually fondle me... I promise I won't resist, as long as his penis stays out of me. Would the police believe I was the victim if I didn't scream or say no, if I just stood there and endured it, until the perpetrator had me naked in the middle of the train? "Officer, I just didn't know what to do. I was so scared, so I just stood there, and tried not to make it worse" --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:44, 17 April 2018 (UTC)

lol, well, I didn't really react much, except to see who was patting me. And I know it had to have been intentional because it wasn't crowded. As for if it was a woman, about the same. Not much reacting on my part when he did it, it is just unexpected. Remember, I am bi, and do like women also=P --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:22, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

So, lately, seems like I have been breaking out my summer outfits. Getting hot here lately (Well, until today...). Some are a bit less...opaque...than others. So, I was at a red light when a police officer came across the crosswalk. As he walked passed, he looked at me so intently. Not in the leering look, but more like he was looking for me doing something wrong. Maybe just my imagination, a guilty complex, etc, but still, it was not a leer or a glance. I pulled myself inward, worried that he might see something he shouldn't. I don't think my top would have shown anything, it was just a normal button-up, black, and nothing at all that might have exposed myself, but I sort of freaked out anyways. Who knows, maybe it is just the look he gives everyone, and I was just freaking because I have been feeling like I really want to show myself off lately.

Maybe I need to stop wearing some of these outfits, or start wearing a bra anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:47, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

== Dear daddy ==

I am afraid I did something bad. I just wanted to let you know in case someone tells you later. You know it has been warm, and well, I was wearing this skirt. I know, I have been warned before about wearing the short skirts when scootering. And, I don't think you will like this. You know how I like to feel the breeze, down there? Well, I didn't put anything on under the skirt...

So, I was scootering, and I guess when I sat down, the skirt pulled up, so that my bare butt was on the seat, instead of on the skirt. And, well, the wind sort of blew it up, so everything down there was able to be seen. I wasn't paying much attention, you know how I am. And, well, I think a security guard saw me, with nothing covering me down there, as I scootered passed. Don't worry, it was in one of the new buildings, so he didn't know me or anything. It wasn't the guard at our community.

Anyways daddy, I don't know if you will punish me or anything, but I wanted to tell you. You always said it was better to let you know if I did something wrong before you found out, not after, and that I wouldn't get in trouble if I was honest with you.

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know. I guess I will wait for your reply, to let me know if I am in trouble.

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:07, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Daddy,

I am glad you are not mad at me. I guess I should tell you the rest.

My skirt blowing up and showing off my all, down there, was not an accident...

I wore the skirt on purpose, and didn't wear panties on purpose, and made sure that it was not under me when I sat down on the scooter. I let it blow up on purpose.

Of course, the security guard seeing me was not on purpose. He was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.

So, umm, I guess that's all...

Still not mad?

Love you daddy,

--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

==Blackadder38's messages==

Thanks. I do read the stories on Literotica at times. Congratz on your munchkins my bring me joy as well, although the eldest is out chasing girls now, and the youngest doesn't kiss me goodbye when I drop him off at school anymore. Still the good times outweigh the sad ones I hope it's the same for you. Love-[[Blackadder38 ]]

Feel free to add anything I don't mind Blackadder38

== Editing on 2T4U ==

Hey, I have been contributing to 2T4U lately, and am trying to work out a cohesive story line between all the characters. I was wondering if it would be Ok with you if I were to do a major overhaul of the material under Maria Cortez, and probably any other characters you have done as there need to be some details brought together for all characters to make this work. So far, I have only worked on Jack and have written several sex scenes with him. (Actually, I think I have probably written all of the sex scenes he is involved in.)

For the most part, I am going for a much more dark angle to the story, and that includes Maria being far more malevolent in nature (witch I have gotten from discussions with Elerneron was his intention for the character as well.) [[user: Jemini]]

Yes, I am quite aware that is the point here. I am just of a disposition to be polite and ask regardless. So, thanks :) [[User:Jemini]]

== On "Morning After"... ==

While I planned on opening it to the public soon, the section you're posting on is your character reflecting on the events of the night before. I'd change it so it's Shiori confronting her as they're playing videogames. -[[Sir Blahtson]]

== Hi ==

I was wondering why I had never even heard of a "Pull Dickoff" until I remembered Paul Dickov... I always felt a little bad for him. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 05:07, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

== Hey! ==

Thanks man! I've still been reading stories on this site, but I finally worked up the energy to start writing new pages again.

I have an arc planned for Slasher, I hope I'll have the energy to complete it. [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] 07:28, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

== Leaving ==

Feel free to continue on that /far away/ branch if you want, I was having trouble coming up with ideas for it. If you want, I'd like if people added new characters to the first page, or Kerry's branch needs some love. Every time I try to start that character I hit a wall. Outside of that, just ask first. I check pretty much every day lately even if I don't update. Ask if you have any questions about Janet as well. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:40pm, 04/22/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Okay, I like your addition to that, [[Leaving/Janet/Nap/Weapon/Gun]]. I was going to go in a completely different direction with that, though. So, continue on from there unimpeded if you like, but as I said last time, please ask first if you want to add on anywhere else. I may like your idea better than what I had planned, I just want to hear about it so if I had something else planned it doesn't just go out the window. Kerry's branch is still wide open for editing since I'm at a loss with it, and if you want you can start another character on the first page of the story and do anything you want with it.

I was actually going to have that page be an "end" page, Janet dies and the player gets an option to follow into the afterlife like I was doing with Marie. I can still implement that somewhere else, of course, I just thought you should know. I check every day, feel free to message me or put it into the discussion of the page you want to branch off from. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:28am , 4/25/16 (Eastern Standard Time)

Hey, so, as I've become sorta inactive lately (though I hope to come back soon) I have a proposition. If you want to continue on from somewhere else in Leaving, go ahead and start a new branch on an existing page. Or if you want to follow through with an existing red link, perhaps make a duplicate of the option you want to follow through with and when I'm around I'll see about differentiating between them or just merging yours with the existing option if it's just plain better than what I'd have done.

This is mostly selfish, I admit. I want to give you more options but I don't want to just have my existing ideas "overridden", which is mostly mental on my part. I feel like if a red link is carried on by someone else, I don't want to just delete their work, so if it's presented as another link entirely I'll still have the option of deleting my existing red link or modifying it to take a different course. Idk, this is probably dim of me, but there it is.

Feel free to add new branches or continue existing options by making fresh links for them. Keep in mind that Kerry is still completely open and new characters are always welcome. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:50am est 5/5/16

Thank you. And the reason I bring it up now is because if the worst case scenario happens, we might not have internet access for a long while and I would hate for you to have an idea and let it go because you can't get hold of me :v [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 5:15am east 5/5/16

chance has it that I'm related to hitler--[[User:Poopyhead|Poopyhead]] 18:54, 2 January 2017 (UTC)

Dirty Me's Diary/Skip ahead

DirtyMeStoryTime — Sun, 29 Apr 2018 06:08:14 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Add Doggy style option

Dirty Me's Diary/Fight at school

DirtyMeStoryTime — Wed, 18 Apr 2018 06:20:08 GMT

DirtyMeStoryTime: Finished the fight entry

Dear Diary,

So pissed! That little skank, Jennifer, so pissed me off today.

So, I was minding my own business when suddenly she came up to me and started talking shit. Again!

Oh, I had enough of this bitch. I balled up my fist and punched her, right in her big, ugly nose.

It hurt...my hand still hurts.

I don't remember much of the fight after that. The other kids around, chanting "fight, fight, fight", watching us, some laughing, at least until the stupid math teacher broke it up.

My side is a little sore, and my head hurts where she pulled my hair, but I beat the shit out of her. One of my friends told me that her eye is all swollen and her lip was bleeding, and I know I got a few good kicks in her ribs while she was on the ground.

Her, she started it. Don't judge me like that...

Anyways, mom will be rather upset when she gets home...

Jennifer ripped my top off. Well, it wasn't completely off, but the buttons are gone. Somewhere in the middle of the field. I ended up having to walk to the PE lockers with my bra exposed to put on my PE shirt. It was sort of embarrassing, the guys whistling, making some jokes about my breasts. I don't know, at the time I was too, whatever the word for it is, from the fight, to really notice much, but now, thinking about it, I realized that I was showing off my bra and breasts to the entire school.

Wait, is that why Justin suddenly asked me out? Oh god...I should just tell him no, he only wants to see what else was hidden by the bra.

Wish I remembered it though. What it felt like to be in front of everyone like that.

Gawd, what is wrong with me lately? Why am I having thoughts like this?

Think I need to find my vibrator and do something about these feelings, before I do something I might regret.

Got to go Diary. Go find where I put that stupid vibrator my mom got me for my birthday (Yeah, not even going to talk about that, talk about embarrassing, opening up a gift like tat from your mom...think I am still a bit traumatized...)

*More entries later

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