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User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Defnota — Fri, 04 Jul 2014 09:43:17 GMT

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==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of "Hot and Horny" has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)

Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> <font color=white> invisible </font color=white> </nowiki>

produces:
<font color=white> invisible </font color=white>

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it. Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree that that is a very nice pic. And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to know I was missed. I've just been getting over a really nasty cold. Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy. On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story. Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.

Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to be back. I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week. Not fun. But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations! Glad to hear that you're still around. And having a baby boy... That's ''really'' creating your own adventure! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
<br> The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
<br> I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
<br> Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
<br>If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
<br> to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
<br>[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
<br> one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
<br> people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
<br>but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
<br>I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Angst of Mass Destruction -</h4>
        I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.
<br> Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then. As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the "Clean-Up" section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

...

Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft

== Sorry about that... ==

First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)

It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)

== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==

Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==

About trees.

That's a table with border="0" (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing="0" (lines between cells solid).<br/>
The "connecting lines" is a cell's borders which I made visible.
--[[User:WCold|WCold]] 07 May 2014

== Narutostory reply ==

Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire "Invading the Cult" story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.

== Help - Defnota ==
        Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,
<br> and you're the only person I've ever emailed.
<br>- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

        Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling "definitely" properly these last few times.
<br> I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)

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==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of "Hot and Horny" has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)

Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> <font color=white> invisible </font color=white> </nowiki>

produces:
<font color=white> invisible </font color=white>

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it. Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree that that is a very nice pic. And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to know I was missed. I've just been getting over a really nasty cold. Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
<br> The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
<br> I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
<br> Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
<br>If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
<br> to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
<br>[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
<br> one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
<br> people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
<br>but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
<br>I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Angst of Mass Destruction -</h4>
        I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.
<br> Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then. As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the "Clean-Up" section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

...

That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

User:Defnota

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That Prison Story - First Dream

Defnota — Fri, 18 Apr 2014 08:32:53 GMT

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        You attempt to stir from your long, restful, sleep, but you can't. Your eyes snap open, you tug with your arms to find they're bound with something. You can't see what though, as the room is dark.
<br>As sudden as your wake up, the lights flash on, blinding you momentarily. As your vision clears you see a figure walking towards you. Quite a figure actually, [WORK IN PROGRESS]

<ul>
<li>[[That Prison Story - A More Rude Awakening|Wake Up]]</li>
</ul>

[[Category:That Prison Story]] [[Category:That Prison Story - Red Links]]

That Prison Story - Stay at the Party

Defnota — Fri, 18 Apr 2014 08:22:11 GMT

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        <b>Though leery of what will happen to your body while you're the only one asleep, you decide it'll be best if you stay.</b>
<br>
<br>        The group looks surprised you didn't leave, pleasantly surprised, but surprised nonetheless. You're greeted with warm smiles and pats on the back as you sit back down in the circle,
<br>leaning against the grungy seventies-esque chesterfield. You play for a bit, but quickly succumb to sleepiness.
<br>

<ul>
<li>[[That Prison Story - First Dream|Dream]]</li>
<li>[[That Prison Story - A Rude Awakening|Wake Up]]</li>
</ul>

[[Category:That Prison Story]] [[Category:That Prison Story - Red Links]]

That Prison Story

Defnota — Fri, 18 Apr 2014 07:46:08 GMT

Defnota:

        <b>In case it's necessary:</b>
<ul>
<li><b style="color:red;">The portrayal of police and prisons in this story is not to be taken for fact and is not based on experience or research; this is a fiction story for god's-sake, not an essay.</b></li>
<li><b style="color:red;">I do not advocate drunk driving, it's a stupid, reckless idea and you probably shouldn't do it.</b></li>
<li><b style="color:red;">And lastly: remember kids, don't do drugs!</b></li>
</ul>
<br>
<br><b>You might want to read [[That Prison Story - Character Background|this]] before starting this story.</b>
<br>
<br>
        <b>What a rowdy party. You don't remember much of it, but what you do involved a lot of booze, sweaty teenagers, D&D, and maybe some drugs; or, at least... you think it did.
<br>The more you think about it, the more your memory fades.</b>
<br>
<br>        What were you doing? The doorknob, right! No, not like that, you were just thinking of leaving. Should you? You're pretty drunk, but you're tired too, unlike your friends, so it's either go home drunk,
<br>or leave yourself at the mercy of your drunk, rowdy, horny, friends.
<br>

<ul>
<li>[[That Prison Story - Stay at the Party|Stay at the Party]]</li>
<li>[[That Prison Story - Drive Home Drunk|Drive Home Drunk]]</li>
<li>[[That Prison Story - Call a Cab|Call a Cab]]</li>
</ul>

[[Category:That Prison Story]] [[Category:That Prison Story - Red Links]]

That Prison Story

Defnota — Fri, 18 Apr 2014 07:34:11 GMT

Defnota: Created page with '        <b>In case it's necessary:</b> <ul> <li><b style="color:red;">The portrayal of police and prisons in this story is not to be taken for fact and is not…'

        <b>In case it's necessary:</b>
<ul>
<li><b style="color:red;">The portrayal of police and prisons in this story is not to be taken for fact and is not based on experience or research; this is a fiction story for god's-sake, not an essay.</b></li>
<li><b style="color:red;">I do not advocate drunk driving, it's a stupid, reckless idea and you probably shouldn't do it.</b></li>
<li><b style="color:red;">And lastly: remember kids, don't do drugs!</b></li>
</ul>
<br>
<br><b>You might want to read [[That Prison Story - Character Background|this]] before starting this story.</b>
<br>
<br>
        <b>What a rowdy party. You don't remember much of it, but what you do involved a lot of booze, sweaty teenagers, D&D, and maybe some drugs; or, at least... you think it did.
<br>The more you think about it, the more your memory fades.</b>
<br>
<br>        What were you doing? The doorknob, right! No, not like that, you were just leaving. But should you? You're pretty drunk.
<br>

<ul>
<li>[[That Prison Story - Stay at the Party|Stay at the Party]]</li>
<li>[[That Prison Story - Drive Home Drunk|Drive Home Drunk]]</li>
<li>[[That Prison Story - Call a Cab|Call a Cab]]</li>
</ul>

[[Category:That Prison Story]] [[Category:That Prison Story - Red Links]]

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Defnota — Thu, 17 Apr 2014 04:05:13 GMT

Defnota: /* Defnota's Messages */

==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)
==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> <font color=white> invisible </font color=white> </nowiki>

produces:
<font color=white> invisible </font color=white>

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
<br> The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
<br> I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
<br> Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
<br>If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
<br> to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
<br>[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
<br> one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
<br> people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
<br>but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
<br>I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

...

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Defnota — Wed, 16 Apr 2014 23:40:50 GMT

Defnota: /* Defnota's Messages */

==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)
==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> <font color=white> invisible </font color=white> </nowiki>

produces:
<font color=white> invisible </font color=white>

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
<br> The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
<br> I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
<br> Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
<br>If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
<br> to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
<br>[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
<br> one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
<br> people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
<br>but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
<br>I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably get the page set up then.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.
. . .

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

...

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

Defnota — Thu, 03 Apr 2014 02:34:36 GMT

Defnota: Blanked the page

The Quiz of a Million Questions

Defnota — Thu, 03 Apr 2014 02:28:56 GMT

Defnota: Created page with '        Welcome, to The Quiz of a Million Questions. To play, you're going to have to be a good sport and follow these rules: <ul> <li>You start with three li…'

        Welcome, to The Quiz of a Million Questions. To play, you're going to have to be a good sport and follow these rules:
<ul>
<li>You start with three lives.</li>
<li>For every question answered wrong you lose a life.</li>
<li>For every fifteen questions correct, you gain a life.</li>
<li>If you ever get three questions wrong, in a row, no matter how many lives you have, you lose.</li>
<li>You may not backtrack in the quiz.</li>
</ul>
<br> That said, let us begin!
<br>
<br>[[TQMQ - Begin|Begin]]
<br>
<br><b>You may want to open a text document and record some stuff. (For example: bookmark which question you're on, your lives, and your progress to gaining a life; you should be able to remember how many questions you've answered wrong in a row.)</b>

[[Category:The Quiz of a Million Questions]]

All Adult Stories

Defnota — Wed, 02 Apr 2014 06:25:06 GMT

Defnota:

==Adult Stories==
'''Alphabetize your entries please'''
(If you don't see your story here anymore, please check [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]], since the old, unfinished stories with few pages have been moved there)

----

'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.

==# - C==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[The 007 Stories]] ||51|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[2014 : A Space Journey]] (Lesbian/Futa)|| 0 || (<font color="red">Private<font>)
|-
|[[Adventure at the TG Thriftshop]]||17|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Alien Adventure]]||21||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[All Alone]] (Lesbian)||111||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[All in the Family]]||141|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Amazon]] ||45|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[+annabeth|Annabeth]]||21||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[An Airplane Journey]]||15||(New story, feel free to work on it)
|-
|[[Angorea]]||2||(A new, story-heavy adventure - <font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/28/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Another Day At School...]] ||94||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Anime School]]||51||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[The Answer Is Yes]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Answer Is Yes}}|| (<font color="green">Public</font>) (<font color="orange">Updated 3/7/2014</font>)
|-
|[[Archie's Gay Adventure]] (Gay)||88|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Archie's Sexual Adventure]]||91||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Ardenstone]]||42|||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>) W.I.P. - Day 1 complete, plenty more to come!
|-
|[[Assassin]]||21|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Assassin's Guild]]||2||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/30/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Badlands]]||25|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Band Forming thing|Band Forming Thing]]||123||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Beach Vacation]]||63||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Beachside Holiday]]||37||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Benighted]]||10|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[A Big Ugly Story]]||24|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Big Cock Fun]] (Gay)||47||(Under Construction)(Create new pages if you want, just please leave the originals alone.)
|-
|[[Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night]] (Gay)||1,032||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Bi-sexual Sex stories|Bi-Sexual Sex Stories]]||150|| (<font color="purple">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Blackmailed]]||345||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Blessed Union]]||43||(<font color="red">WIP: Please Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Blue Mountain University]]||129||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Boarding School Magic]]||48||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Boarding School Whores]]||28||(WIP)
|-
|[[+Boy Scouts Bi-Sexual Bangup]] ||44||(<font color="red">Please Do Not Edit||Moved, please don't try to put your story on top by adding + to it.- (Sorry, I was copying code from another story and I didn't know if it was necessary or not)
|-
|[[Brood]]||6|| (<font color ="red">Private</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/25/2013, only 6 pages.
|-
|[[The Breeding Games]]||88|| (<font color="green">Public, help yourselves</font>)
|-
|[[Camp to Remember]] (Gay)||20||(<font color="green">Public, feel free to add more</font>)
|-
|[[Catgirl Adventures]]||14|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font> New story! One ending so far. 2/8/14)
|-
|[[Cecilia]]||20||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Celebrities!]]||40||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Cellar Door]]||23||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Cheer Camp]]||7||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/27/2013, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Choose Your Destiny]]||91||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[+Coda the Gay Sex God|Coda the Gay Sex God]]||2||(<font color="red">Please Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/24/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[College: A Virgin's Fantasy]]||60|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[College Girls]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Girls}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[+College Revamped]]||11||(<font color="red">Don't Edit</font>)||Moved, please don't try to put your story up top by adding a + to it.
|-
|[[Curse of the Royals]]||7|| (<font color="red">Private</font>)
|-
|}

==D - G==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Days in the Life of Sammy Simm]]||45||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Deadman Wonderland]]||14||(<font color="green">Feel free to edit, 1 writer per branch of sin+personality combo</font>)
|-
|[[Death Will Come]] ||43|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Decisions]]||25|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Demon's Host]]||29|| {<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>}
|-
|[[ Deutsche Geschichten]]||20||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Desert Island]] ||63|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Devils Daughter|The Devil's Daughter]] ||594||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Dirty Me]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Dirty Me}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>) (<font color="red">Please ask before editing and read [[Dirty Me/Info|this]]</font>) W.I.P
|-
|[[Double-Blind Desire]]||5||(<font color="red">Private</font>)(new author, WIP until I can build solid foundation)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/19/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Down The Rabbit Hole]]||362||(Hail Eris!) (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Downfall]]||WIP (80)|| (<font color="red">Please do not add or edit</font>)
|-
|-|[[Dragon Life]]||1|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Dread]]||104||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Druglord]]||27|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Dungeons and Dragons]]||206||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Echidna Tale]] (Monster girl, transformation)||37|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Erotic Adventures of a Gentleman Spy]]||51|| private - Do Not Edit Please!||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/29/2013, only 17 pages.
|-
|[[erotic life|Erotic Life]]||29||(w.i.p.)(public)(please edit)
|-
|[[ The Ever Changing World In Which I Live]]||12|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit Yet Please</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/8/2013, only 12 pages.
|-
|[[Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager|Extraordinary Life of a Not So Common Teenager]]||51|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Faith's punishment]]||WIP (growing daily)||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||
|-
|[[ The Family Dog]] ||18|| public
|-
|[[Family Ties]]||185|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Family Possession]]||41||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
[[family guy]] public
|-
|[[ The Family Secret]]||5|| public (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Fantasy Life]]||63||(Can be as crazy as you want it to be. Please go out of your way to make sure that all contributions use proper grammar. Any contributions with poor grammar will be deleted promptly.)
|-
|[[Fantasy Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT: Fantasy Sex}}||(<font color="green">Please Edit! </font>)
|-
|[[Finky's Mansion]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Finky's Mansion}}||(<font color="red">WIP Do not edit</font>)
|-
|[[First Day At College]](Gay)||{{PAGESINCAT:First Day At College}}||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Freedom Keeper]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Freedom Keeper}}|| (Please Edit and add more pages, just keep it realistic!)
|-
|[[Freshman Dream]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Freshman Dream}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Freshman Year]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Freshman Year}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Friday night|Friday Night]] ||49||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Fucking Classy]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Fucking Classy}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Fuck Your Friend]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Fuck Your Friend}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Furry Fling]]||8||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/16/2013, only 8 pages.
|-
|[[Furry World]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Furry World}}|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Futa Club]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Futa Club}}|| (<font color="red">private</font>)
|-
|[[Futa Kingdom]] ||10|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/29/2013, only 10 pages.
|-
|[[Game of Thrones]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Game of Thrones}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/24/2013, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Gay Academy]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Gay Academy}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Gay Middle School Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Gay Middle School Sex}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[ Gay School Fun]]||8|| public||Pit watchlist, only 8 pages
|-
|[[A Gifted Woman]]||5|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, 1 page edited 1/25/2014, other pages 2011-2012, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Getting a job|Getting a Job]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Getting a job}}||(<font color="green">Public - Updated 1/27/14</font>)
|-
|[[Generic Fantasy: The Erotic Adventure]]||5||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edited 11/25/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Girl Island]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Island}}|| (<font color="Green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME|A Girl on Girl: My First Time]] (Lesbian)||{{PAGESINCAT:A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME}}|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Cookies]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Cookies}}|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Camp]] (The Sequel)||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Camp}}|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Girls are your Playthings|The Girls Are Your Playthings]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Girls are your Playthings}}||(WIP) (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Girlngirl High]] (Lesbian)||{{PAGESINCAT:Girlngirl High}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Girly Boy]] (bi)||20|| (<font color="red">WIP</font>)
|-
|[[Good son]] (bi) ||{{PAGESINCAT:Good son}}|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Goodbye]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Goodbye}}||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[The Greatest Weekend Ever]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Greatest Weekend Ever}}|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|}

==H - K==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Hailey The Whore]]||35
|-
|[[The Hallway of infinity|The Hallway of Infinity]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Hallway of infinity}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Halo: After Reach]] ||9||(<font color="green">Public</font>)(<font color="red">but do not edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edited 2/20/2014, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Hardon High]] (Gay)||{{PAGESINCAT:Hardon High}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Harem]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Harem}}||(<font color="red">WIP, Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Hentai]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Hentai}} || Public, please contribute
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Years of Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter and the Years of Sex}}|| (<font color="green">Public (Add all you want)</font>)
|-
|[[Harry Potter: Master]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter: Master}}||(<font color="green">Public (Please Add)</font>)
|-
|[[Heroes of Pleasure| Heroes of Pleasure]] (Under Construction)||{{PAGESINCAT:Heroes of Pleasure}}||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[High School: Getting Lucky]]||{{PAGESINCAT:High School: Getting Lucky}}|| (<font color="green">Public WIP</font>)
|-
|[[High School]]||500+||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[A High School Fantasy]]||15 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[High School: A new beginning|High School: A New Beginning]]||18||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[High School Redux‎‎]]||14||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[High School: The Way It Should Have Been]]|| 60|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Hollywood Romp]]||26|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Hooker life|Hooker Life]]||15+|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Homecoming]]||6|| (<font color="red">Private, Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edited 2/27/2014, only 6 pages.
|-
|[[Home Early]]|| 45||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Horned Devil]]||23||(WIP)
|-
|[[Hot and Horny]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Hot and Horny}}||(<font color="green">Public, please edit!</font>)
|-
|[[Hot Mom]]||11|| (Incest)(Public. Don't edit existing pages.)||Pit watchlist, last edited 12/16/2013, only 11 pages.
|-
|[[The House on Horny Hill]]|| 20 || W.I.P. Not yet open to public
|-
|[[The Humiliation of Katie]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Humiliation of Katie}}
|-
|[[Hunger Games]]||3|| ( Under Construction )||Pit watchlist, last edited 8/1/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Hunger Games : Sex addition|Hunger Games: Sex Addition]]||12||(Please edit, use good grammar)
|-
|[[Hush (Under Construction)|Hush]] (Under Construction)||22||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Icarly: Iwant sex|iCarly: iWant Sex]]|| 309 ||(<font color(="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[I'll Be Gentle...]]|| 50+ ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Incubus]] (Bisexual Pirate Fantasy)||41 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[inevitable]]||4|| public||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/11/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[+Infinity]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:+Infinity}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Moved, please don't try to put your story on top by adding + to it.
|-
|[[Interracial Extravganza]]|| 153||(<font color="green">Public W.I.P</font>) (Any editing welcome, make all stories about interracial sex, only good spelling and grammar.)
|-
|[[In Our Bath]] ||15|| (<font color="red">Private</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/9/2013, only 15 pages.
|-
|[["In space no one can hear you breed"|In Space No One Can Hear You Breed]]|| 31 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Invisible]]||45 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Invisible Boy]]||14|| (<font color="green">Public</font>) ||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/13/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Jackie's Dilemma's]]||2||Public||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/11/2014, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Jade Rogue]]||13 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[A Job]] || 40 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Jessica's Choices]]||13|| (<font color="red">Under construction. Please Do not edit.</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/22/2013, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Junior High]] ||17|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Just Another Day]] ||31|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Just Do It Already!]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Just Do It Already!}}||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[ Kayla's Adventures: Party]]||9|| private, W.I.P.||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/30/2013, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[A Knight's Quest]]||16|| (<font color="red">Under construction. Do not edit yet.</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/4/2013, only 16 pages.
|-
|[[KPOP Love Story]]|| 14+ || (<font color="red">Do not edit.</font>)
|-
|}

==L - O==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Labyrinth of Lust]]||207|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Lady Van Helsing]] ||101|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Last day of school|Last Day of School]] ||13|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Lara Croft: The Untold Tales]]||13||(<font color="green">Fuck this story, too hard to write. Not enough time. - Bojangles</font>)
|-
|[[Legend of Krystal]]||61|| public
|-
|[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]||125|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Let's Burn Down a Castle]]||248|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The life of a medieval princess|The Life of a Medieval Princess]]||400|| (<font color="green">Public - but please read the [[Princess Editor's Guide]]. Mainly focused around the story with an erotic background and occasional sexual encounters. Might contain extreme violence and mutilation if you (or someone else) screws up during a fight.</font>)
|-
|[[The Life of Others ]]||14
|-
|[[The Life of Cassie]]||5||(<font color="pink">Public but Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/22/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Life of Unlimited Chances]]||12 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Life of a 13 year old|Life of a 13 Year Old]]|| 315|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit, Update Jan, 25, 2014</font>)
|-
|[[Life of a sexy Nerd|Life of a sexy Nerd]]||10||public
|-
|[[Life of a pedo|Life of a pedo]] ||3|| (W.I.P)(<font color="red">DON'T EDIT</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 3/9/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Lost in the city|Lost in the City]]||41||(W.I.P)(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Lucid dreams]]||8||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/7/2014, only 8 pages.
|-
|[[Lucky?]]||14|| Private||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/11/2013, only 14 pages.
|-
|[[March of the Dark Elves]]||{{PAGESINCAT:March of the Dark Elves}} ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Mage Games]] (Gay Fantasy)||31||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Marion]]||3||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/9/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Masked Crimes]]||13|| W.I.P., (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Mass Effect: Sex Edition]]||19|| W.I.P., (<font color="green">Public, but please have prior gaming knowledge of the Mass Effect series</font>)
|-
|[[Megan:Menu|Megan]] (An Exercise In Violence)||24|| complete. Do not edit.
|-
|[[Melanie and Michael]]||14|| W.I.P., (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
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|[[Medieval Fun]]||14|| (Private) W.I.P DO NOT EDIT AON!
|-
|[[Meet'n'fuck Beach Vacation]]||34||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Meet the Kirks]]||7||(<font color="red">WIP. Do not edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/14/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Middle School]]||26||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Mind Controlling Device]]||31||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Misfortunes of an Asian College Girl]]||18||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[My wish]]||4||<font color="green">public</font>||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/11/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Naruto: Power of Mind]]||5||(<font color="red">Private</font>)(<font color="blue">Don't edit but you can contribute</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/25/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Neighborhood]]||33||(<font color="green">Public</font>
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|[[The New God]] ||145||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[New Life in some way]]||28||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Ninja Kittehs From Space!]]||22||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Not So Average Alex]]||8||(<font color="green"> Public (gay) </font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/17/2013, only 8 pages.
|-
|[[Numbers]]||27||(<font color="green">Kinda Public</font>)
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|[[Obscura]]||136||(<font color="green">Public</font>)(<font color="green">Please add pages!</font>)
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|[[Occupational Therapy]] (Gay)||24||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Ongoing Story]] ||560||(<font color="red">Some paths finished, others are work in Progress</font>)
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|[[Oops! You're Naked!]] ||245||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Ordinary Life of a Prostitute]]||13||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Organized Crime]]||36||(W.I.P, Please Edit, No spelling/grammar errors allowed.)
|-
|}

==P - S==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[patriarch's legacy|Patriarch's Legacy]]||10|| public||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/27/2013, only 10 pages.
|-
|[[Pedo Plushie|The Adventures of a Pedo Plushie]]||26|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Pedo romp]]||374||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Percy Jackson & Friends]]||32
|-
|[[Percy Jackson God Of All]]||11|| (<font color="red">Private</font>, <font color="green">WIP</font>) (Please do not edit yet Updated March 17th, 2014)
|-
|[[Pervert]]||72
|-
|[[Perverted Thirteen-Year-Old]]||96|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Phineas and Ferb: The Erotic Adventures]]||17|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Pi Pi Pi]]||304|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Pimp]]||81|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Pimping Your Roommate]] ||3||<font color="green>(Public)</font>||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/27/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]||27|| (<font color="red">W.I.P., Private</font>)
|-
|[[Pokemon: Sexy Version]]||12||<font color="green>(Public)</font>||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/20/2014, only 12 pages.
|-
|[[Pokesex]]||245|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|A Portrait of an American Girl Named Myra]]||72|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Possessed]]||141|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Power of Will]]||60|| (W.I.P) (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Princess Problems]]||7||<font color="green>(Public)</font>||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/25/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Public Nudity]]||29|| (<font color="green">(Public)</font>)
|-
|[[Punishment for your wife]]||57|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>) under construction
|-
|[[ The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra ]]||116|| (<font color="red">***NEW***</font> You play a Sheriff who punishes his teenage daughter and her best friend - Please Do Not Edit - Comments welcome on talk page)
|-
|[[Queen of Lust]]||2||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/22/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[The Quest For Treguards Treasure]]||274|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Rampage]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Rampage}}|| (<font color="green">Public-but any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted</font>)
|-
|[[Red Mobster]]||67|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[School Fun]]||57||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Der Schulleiter]]||4|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/31/2014, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Sex Adventure]]||49|| (W.I.P) (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Sex and other Addictions]]||5|| private||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/15/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Sex in Ancient Rome]]||7||(<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/11/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[The Sexual Adventures of You]]||119|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Sexy World]]||31|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Shin Calibur]]||9||(<font color="red">Don't Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/9/2014, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Sissies love black cock]] || W.I.P || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Sister Complex]] || W.I.P || (<font color="green">Public - No guro</font>)
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|[[sisters]]||4||'''do not edit yet'''||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/30/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Sisters and other Victims]]||{{PAGESINCAT:SAOV}} || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Skyrim: A Sexual Adventure]]||4||(<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/13/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Slasher]]||20+
|-
|[[The Slave Mansion]]||3|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/30/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Slave to the Mist]]|| 40+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Smutty Sex Romp]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Smutty Sex Romp}} || (<font color="green">Public-For experienced writers with a firm grasp of grammar and spelling only. Any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted</font>)
|-
|[[SpaceShip5EX]] ||50 || (Work In Progress) (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[SSS]]||15|| private
|-
|[[Star Girl Fighters Erotic Noval Diary: Stories Fantasy]]||16|| (W.I.P DON'T EDIT)
|-
|[[Star Trek: A Night with Troi]]||35|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Star Trek: Jadzia's Adventure]]||81|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit. Ask [[User talk:Kenny24|here]] if you would like to add</font>)
|-
|[[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]||896|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Stalker]]||184||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[The Story of Jack Foster]]||341|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Summer Party]]||34||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Super Power Fantasy]] ||14|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Super Sex Adventure]] ||2|| (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/6/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Supershifter]] ||14|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Survive]] ||21|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Survival Story]] ||65|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
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|[[Superhero?]] ||33|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|}

==T - W==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Turning into a Girl?]]|| 1 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>) (I'd appreciate the help, try to make this interesting!)
|-
|[[Tails and Tribulations]] ||WIP|| (<font color="green">Public</font>) (Under construction. Addittions are welcome, but I reserve the right to edit/remove those that don't fit)
|-
|[[the patchwork universe]]||1+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)(yay patchwork keep adding to it and it will last forever)
|-
|[[The Tease]]||20+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Teenager]] || 60+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Teen Years]]|| 15+ || (<font color="red">Private</font>)(Site Under Construction, access denied; additions will be removed)
|-
|[[Temptation]]|| (WIP) || (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[Testing Facility #80085]]||18 (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[That New Story]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:That New Story}} || Please discuss with me before editing.
|-
|[[Theme Park]]|| 0 || (<font color="red">Private</font>)
|-
|[[The Long Road to Graduation]] || 0 || (<font color="red">Private</font>)(W.I.P)
|-
|[[This Is You(Gay)]]|| || (W.I.P)
|-
|[[This Story Will Piss You Off]]||55 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Time for fun]]||3|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Tickle adventure]]||10|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Time Lord]]||(Just started) || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The Town]]|| 3 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Tranny Fun]]||0+ || (<font color="red">WIP, Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[The Transformation Laboratory]]|| 10 || ((<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[To Pee or not To Pee]]|| W.I.P || <font color="red">private for now, please don't edit</font>
|-
|[[Tori and the space creature]]||9|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Tree of Doom]] || 30+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Triple]]|| 11+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Truth or Dare Game]]|| 0 || (<font color="red">Public make it good</font>)
|-
|[[The Twelfth Doctor]]|| (W.I.P)|| (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Twilight]]|| 5+ || (<font color="green">Please Add</font>)
|-
|[[Twisted Family]]||4||Public, creator banned for failure to follow the site rules, so feel free to take it over if you want
|-
|[[Ty's Story]] || 100+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[University Daze]]|| 600+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Unlucky Girl]]|| 3 || (<font color="green">Public, Please Edit</font>)
|-
|[[The Vampire Diaries: Sex Edition]]|| 2 || (Under construction; additions will be removed) (<font color="red">Private</font>)
|-
|[[Vampire Weekend]]|| 340+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Verse]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Verse}} || (<font color="green">WIP; Conditionally Public, please only contribute/edit if you're good friends with the English language.</font>)
|-
|[[Victim]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Victim}} || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Victorious: Behind the Scenes]]|| 80 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)(<font color="green">Please add pages!</font>)
|-
|[[Waking up in a Mansion]]|| 0 || (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[War of Fur]]|| WIP || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Walt Jizzney's Magic Kingdom]]|| 49 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[War Pigs]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:War Pigs}} || (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[War and Sex]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:War and Sex}} || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Warped]]|| 10 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Whore it Out]]||91 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Wish Coin]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Wish Coin}} || (<font color="green">Public</font>) (<font color="orange">Updated 3/9/2014</font>)
|-
|[[Wild Times]]||W.I.P.|| (Do not edit)
|-
|[[Witch of Egypt]]|| W.I.P || (<font color="green">Public - Please read the instructions on the first page, follow the guidelines or risk deletion!</font>)
|-
|[[Witch's Power]]|| W.I.P || (do not edit)
|-
|[[Work Attire]]|| 168+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[The World is Yours]] || 8 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[ The World Of Monster]]|| 0 ||(<font color="red">Please Do Not Edit</font>)
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|[[World of Wolves]] || 76 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Wrestling X-rated]]|| 1+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|}

==X - Z==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[XXX Sorority Sisters]]||20 ||(<font color="red">Please Do Not Edit</font>)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/14/2014, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Yes, Yes, Yes, Your Honor]] || 250+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[You Are An Orc]] || 450+ || {<font color="green">Public, please read guidelines in the discussion</font>}
|-
|[[You Disappear]] || W.I.P. || (<font color="green">Public though please do not edit Female Under 18 8 branch</font>
|-
|[[Young Love]] || W.I.P. || (Under Construction Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Your Best Friend's Younger Sister]]|| 130+ || (<font color="green">Public - Use Proper Grammar Please</font>)
|-
|[[ Your Gay Adventure]]|| WIP || Private (Please don't edit)
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|[[Your Reality Ring]]|| 0+ || WIP || Public
|-
|[[Your Queer Weekend Adventure]]|| || (Under Construction Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[You're a god, good for you]]|| 10 || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[You're Omnipotent!]]|| 0+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Youth Pastor]] || W.I.P. || (Under Construction Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Zoo]] (Gay Furry) || {{PAGESINCAT:The Zoo}} || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Zombie Rampage]]||1
|-
|}

== Poor Taste Stories ==

'''FOR 21+''' No limits to content. Don't blame us.

{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Note
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|[[Chimpout]]||10 || WIP DON'T EDIT
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|[[Dark Nights]] ||3
|-
|[[Fuckin Screwed Up]]||90 || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[The Guy Who Held His Breath Forever]]|| ||(Work in Progress)
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|[[Incest Story]]|| 0 || Work On It, It's Public; add gay/bi things if you'd like. Also my first time writing one of these.
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|[[Kill As Many People As You Can]]||5 || Work On It, It's Public
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|[[Kill The President]]||5 || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[Molest Little Boys]] || ||(Work On It, It's Public)
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|[[One Messed Up Day]]||
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|[[One Messed Up Story]] (A Story For Guys)||100 || Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[S.W.A.T.]]|| ||(Just Started, PLEASE HELP WITH IDEAS, ITS PUBLIC)
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|[[Terror in Tibet]]|| ||(DO NOT EDIT, for guys only.)
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|[[ While Your Boyfriend Sleeps ]]|| 9 || (<font color="red">WIP: Please Do Not Edit</font>)
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|[[Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]|| ||(Work On It(please), It's Public)
|}

[[Category:System Pages]]

All Mature Stories

Defnota — Wed, 02 Apr 2014 06:22:11 GMT

Defnota:

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Note
|-
|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)
|-
|[[1943]]||35||Open
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|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
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|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Adventure through Mythology]]||20+||(WIP; Public; Please Don't Edit; First Story)
|-
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 10+ || please do not edit
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
|-
|[[Aleron]]||16+ ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||50+
|-
|[[Another Naruto Story]]|| 7+|| Private: My first attempt so please refrain from editing
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
|-
|[[Apocolyptia]]|| 4+ || (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)
|-
|[[Awake]] || 45
|-
|[[Badassery]] || 20+
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 13+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit
|-
|[[Bloodshed]]||16+
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[ Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.
|-
|[[A Brand New World: Sanyan]]|| 2+ || (WIP, Don't Edit unless you are capable of writing exciting pages with good grammar.)
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| 16 ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[Choose your own Naruto Adventure]]|| 200+ || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
|-
|[[City Life]]|| 12 ||
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+
|-
|[[Critical Control]]|| 5 (WIP) || <font color="red"><b>Private</b> Don't Edit </font>[updated every weekend]
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| 11 ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Chronicles of Strange I.]]||200+||(<font color="purple">W.I.P please do not edit</font>)
|-
|[[Danse Macabre]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Danse Macabre}} ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| 8 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| 25+ ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| 5 ||(Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| 8 ||(Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| 49 ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Designing life]]|| 1 ||('''New!''' You are welcome to participate)
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| 35 ||
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| 2 ||(WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| 5 ||(Public)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || 4 ||(Please Edit!)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball: your very own story]]||1+ ||(Do not edit, only play)
|-
|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 0+ ||WIP, NO EDITING
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+
|-
|[[Elder Scrolls]] || 10+ || WIP Feel free to add a branch
|-
|[[End of Days]]|| 1+ || Under Construction. Please Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Escape from Syria]]|| 130+ || WIP, please don't edit
|-
|[[F.R. Theory]]||0+||(WIP, for a school project. Please don't edit pages that are already up)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| 8 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || 50+ ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[A General Story of Awesome]]||0+||(NO EDITING unless you know the elder scrolls 4&5, DBZ, and Naruto)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || 7 ||(New story, under construction)
|-
|[[The Grey Manor]]|| 0+ || Under Construction. Please do not edit!
|-
|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )
|-
|[[Hero's or Villains]] || 10 ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| 5 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[ Hetalia Days]]|| 0 || (WORK IN PROGRESS. Please Do NOT Edit!)
|-
||[[Higschool Monsters]]|| 2 ||(Warning: Gruesome) (Under Construction, Do not edit)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| 30+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hitman]]||0+|| (WIP, Closed
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public
|-
|[[The horrors]]||10+||Work in progress. DO NOT edit or add new pages (but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| 4 ||(Under Construction)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 || (<font color="red">Do Not Edit</font>)
|-
|[[I like Cookie]]||10+
|-
|[[In The Army]] || 25+
|-
|[[In The Beginning]]||3+||Closed
|-
|[[Infectional Survival]] || 13+ || (<font color="red">DO NOT EDIT</font>)
|-
|[[InFeRnO]]|| 4 ||(the under construction epic)
|-
|[[Insert Word Here]]|| 2 ||(JUST STARTED)
|-
|[[It's Not Hard to Fail, It's Not Easy to Win]]|| 5 ||(Barely started, feel free to edit and contribute)
|-
|[[It's Only Wednesday]]|| 5+ || WIP
|-
|[[Jim's Barbeque]] || 15+
|-
|[[July 5-6, 1944]]||0|| Private, Do not edit.
|-
|[[Kemp]]|| 10 ||(Under Construction ) <font color="green">[PUBLIC EDITING - Great Grammar Would Be Appreciated]</font>
|-
|[[A Knights Quest]]||20+
|-
|[[Krime or Kop King]]||7+ ||(No Editing.)
|-
|[[Life of a Legend]]||0+ ||(No Editing.)
|-
|[[Life of an Abused Emo]]||3+ || (<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[Life Of a Rouge]] || 2+ ||(WIP, don't edit without my permission. Warrior Cats BTW)
|-
|[[Life of Who?]]|| 2+ ||(WIP, do not edit without my permission, thanks.)
|-
|[[Lucy In The Sky With Diamonds]] (Romance) || 12 ||(Open to pubic add on as you please:) )
|-
|[[Luigi and Mario Stories]]||175+ ||(11 stories)
|-
|[[ Magical World of Hetalia ]]|| 25+ || Private DO NOT EDIT. ( Any pages added will be immediately removed. SO DON'T WASTE TIME MAKING SOMETHING THAT WILL BE REMOVED. )
|-
|[[Mahjor's Box]]|| 8 ||(JUST STARTED, DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Malinovyĭ - The Red Planet]]|| 8 ||(<font color="green">Public</font>)
|-
|[[ Medieval Life ]]|| 11 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Mess Effect 2]]|| 50+ ||(WIP)
|-
|[[moon light]]||8+
|-
|[[Naruto's Friend, you]]|| 25+||(<font color="orange">Private, no editing</font>)
|-
|[[Nations At War]]||15+ ||
|-
|[[Nature Calls on a Nature Hike]]|| 7 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Never-Ending Quest]]||30+
|-
|[[A New Beginning]]|| 12 ||just began
|-
|[[A New Life]]||40+ ||Public
|-
|[[The New Overmind]]|| 10+ || public (I reserve the right to delete and/or edit pages)
|-
|[[The Next Day]] || 3 ||Just Started, Do Not Edit
|-
|[[Nexus Path; The Beginning]]|| 1 ||(don't edit! Work in progress.)
|-
|[[the night at home]] || 14 ||(just started)
|-
|[[ OF, Z!!! ]] || 9 ||(I give up, too difficult/not worth it.)
|-
|[[On a Boat]] || 7 ||(Mission/Adventure WIP, Public)
|-
|[[Our Way]] || 0+ ||(Private, To be taken seriously)
|-
|[[out in the woods]]|| 6 ||(in construction)
|-
|[[The Outbreak]]|| 7 ||(No editing please)
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User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

Defnota — Wed, 02 Apr 2014 05:28:53 GMT

Defnota:

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014
==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)
==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> <font color=white> invisible </font color=white> </nowiki>

produces:
<font color=white> invisible </font color=white>

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
<br> The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
<br> I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
<br> Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
<br>If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
<br> to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
<br>[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
<br> one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
<br> people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
<br>-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

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[[How to Edit]]

[[Idea Pitches]]

*Hint: If you don't care enough about your writing to attempt to use proper grammar or spelling, chances are people won't care to read it. If grammar isn't your strong suit, you may want to look over some [[Grammatical Tips]].

If you want to practice editing, you should do so on the [[Sandbox]].
<br><b>P.S. To those looking for the adult stories, they are at the bottom of the page, past the warning, as to prevent any incidental stumblings into adult content and to keep the site reasonably appropriate for all ages.</b>
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==Rules==
<b>People have a tendency to create branches where the character dies. To prevent the story from being just a tree with all dead ends:</b>
*For each page where you kill the player's character, you must create at least 2 pages (with content) where s/he can go on.
*Please stick to the theme and setting of the story, and discuss ideas for major changes on the discussion pages. Although creativity is encouraged, radical plot changes and inconsistencies will ruin the flow.
*If something is off topic, remove it.
*Try to capitalize and spell your words correctly.
*<b>ADD OPTIONS AND NOT JUST TEXT!</b> Complete pages include options so the story can continue (unless the page is an ending). Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted.

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<h3>Featured Story: Vote For Your Favorite Story [[Featured Story Vote|Here]] || 0 Pages || No need for a description. || || [[Nominated Stories]]</h3>
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== [[Story Reviews]] ==
Look here for reviews of existing stories or to add your own reviews. This is still new though, so don't expect your favourite story to be reviewed just yet. Try to stick to constructive criticism only. Deliberate insults or flaming will be deleted.

If you have any questions concerning this section, or you want a certain story to be reviewed and you can't bothered to do it yourself, don't be afraid and ask [[User:Heyoeveryone|Heyoeveryone]].
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==Family-Friendly Stories==
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<b>FOR ALL AGES:</b>
Suitable for anyone with Basic Reading Level skills. Please keep these G-PG.
<br>Please remove any other content that exceeds this.


[[Another Story Of Another Random Person]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Another Story Of Another Random Person}} Pages

[[Goosebumps in Horrorland]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Goosebumps in Horrorland}} Pages

[[Harry Potter| Harry Potter And the Adventure Chosen by You]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter}} Pages

[[Kalew]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Kalew}} Pages

[[Madman's Mansion]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Madman's Mansion}} Pages || <b style="color:green;"> Public </b>

[[The Kitty in the Window]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Kitty in the Window}} Pages

[[Percy Jackson]]: The Adventures of a Demigod || {{PAGESINCAT:Percy Jackson}} Pages

[[Visiting the Zoo]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Visiting the Zoo}} Pages

<br><h3>[[All Family-Friendly Stories]]</h3>
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==PG-13 Stories==
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<p><b>FOR 10+:</b> For more advanced readers. Please keep these G - PG-13.
<br>Please remove any content that exceeds this. </p>
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[[Avast!]] A Pirate Story || {{PAGESINCAT:Avast!}} Pages || <b style="color:red;"> Contact me Before Editing </b>

[[DARKNESS]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Darkness}} Pages

[[Crusader (an action-adventure fantasy)|Crusader]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Paladin}} Pages

[[Paladin (Crusader 2)|Crusader 2: Paladin]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Paladin}} Pages

[[Dead Kid]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Dead Kid}} Pages

[[Hunting again for Red October|Hunting Again for Red October]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Hunting Again For Red October}} Pages

[[Subject 413]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Subject 413}} Pages || <b style="color:green;"> Public </b>

[[Fantasy Quest]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Fantasy Quest}} Pages

[[Superdickery|Superdickery Superman Adventure]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Superdickery}} Pages

[[Transylvanian terror|Transylvanian Terror]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Transylvanian Terror}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[The many rooms|The Many Rooms]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The many rooms}} Pages

[[Quest of the magician|Quest of the Magician]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Quest of the Magician}} Pages

<br><h3>[[All PG-13 Stories]]</h3>
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==Quizzes and Challenges==
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<p><b>Not actually stories, but a chance to test your knowledge (or your luck):</b></p>
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[[Digimon Quizo'!]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Digimon Quizo'!}} Pages

[[Quiz Show]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Quiz Show}} Pages

[[A Quizzy Show]] || {{PAGESINCAT:A Quizzy Show}} Pages

[[Rock, Paper, Scissors]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Rock, Paper, Scissors}} Pages

[[Rock, Paper, Scissors 2]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Rock, Paper, Scissors 2}} Pages

[[The Rock Paper Scissors game|The Rock Paper Scissors Game]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The Rock Paper Scissors game}} Pages

[[Trivia Time]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Trivia Time}} Pages

[[The Ultimate MMA quiz game!|The Ultimate MMA Quiz Game!]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The Ultimate MMA quiz game!}} Pages

[[The video game quiz|The Video Game Quiz]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The video game quiz}} Pages

[[The video game quiz 2|The Video Game Quiz 2]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The video game quiz 2}} Pages

[[Video Game Trivia I]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Video Game Trivia I}} Pages

[[Video Games]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Video Games}} Pages
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==Mature Stories==
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<p><b>Content normally found in R-rated movies,
<br>no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:</b></p>
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[[Agent Black]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Agent Black}} Pages || <b style="color:green;"> Public </b>

[[Another Pointless Story|Another Pointless Story: The Ultimate Showdown]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Another Pointless Story}} Pages

[[Battle Royale]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Battle Royale}} Pages || <b style="color:green;"> Public </b>

[[Dragon Ball Z:Quest]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Dragon Ball Z: Quest}} Pages || <b style="color:red;">Please Do not Edit </b>

[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The Giant Building With A Million Rooms}} Pages

[[Luigi and Mario Stories]] || 11 Stories || {{PAGESINCAT:Luigi and Mario Stories}} Pages

[[A random story|A Random Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:A random story}} Pages

[[A Random Story About Random Stuff]] || {{PAGESINCAT:A Random Story About Random Stuff}} Pages

<b>[[Remember]]</b> || {{PAGESINCAT:Remember}} Pages || <b style="color:orange;"><--Previously Featured!'''</b> <b style="color:red;">Do Not Edit Without Permission</b>

[[Resident evil|Resident Evil]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Resident evil}} Pages || <b style="color:red;">Do NOT edit!.</b>

[[Short And Random Stories]] || 25 Stories || {{PAGESINCAT:Short And Random}} Pages

[[Spongebob's Day Off]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Spongebob's Day Off}} Pages

[[Thought Of Me]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Thought Of Me}} Pages

[[war in Europe| War in Europe]] || {{PAGESINCAT:war in Europe}} Pages

[[Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Warhammer: Sartosa, City of Pirates}} Pages

<br><h3>[[All Mature Stories]]</h3>

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===Tips===
*Don't give too many options when starting a new story and leave half of them redlinked. Focus on a small number of story threads at first.
*Outline a general plan for what the intention of your story is when you start it: What genre and themes it belongs to.
*As alternative to plain formatting for your story, you may try using ''Italics'' to write the Narration, regular Font for character Dialogue and '''Bold''' for Character/Item/Location names or important developments. Example: ''As you walked through the'' '''Forest''', ''you heard a young girl calling out for you.'' "Jack! Wait for me! I have a gift for you!" ''Kate runs up to you and gives you the'' '''MacGuffin'''. Whatever style you choose, try to keep it consistent throughout the story.
*If you are having difficulty spacing out paragraphs, you can use <nowiki><br></nowiki>, which works as a line-break.
*Don't inject crude humor into a story that's intended to be played straight.
*Please categorize the pages in your story. For example, if your story is called "The Story", then please add <nowiki>[[Category:The Story]]</nowiki> to each new page you create for your story.





== Useful Links ==

<h4>[[Pit of Abandoned Stories]]</h4>
*Stories of less than ten pages that haven't been worked on by anyone in some time will be dropped into the Pit. Feel free to retrieve stories from the Pit and put them back on the appropriate story-type page if you get inspired and add to one.

<h4>Help</h4>
*[[Tutorial]]

<h4>Meta-Games</h4>
*[[CYOA Drinking Game]] (Teen/Adult, though you can play with soda if you're under the minimum age for drinking alcohol.)
*[[You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When|You Know You Play Too Many CYOAs When...]]




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<h1> Adult Stories </h1>

<h3 style="color:red;">18+ Only. Do not read these stories if you are underage or if you are offended by adult material.</h3>
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[[Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night]] (Gay) || {{PAGESINCAT:Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night}} Pages || <b style="color:red;">Do Not Edit</b>

[[Blackmailed]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Blackmail}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[College Girls]] || {{PAGESINCAT:College Girls}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[The Devils Daughter|The Devil's Daughter]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The Devil's Daughter}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Down The Rabbit Hole]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Down the Rabbit Hole}} Pages || (Hail Eris!) <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Furry World]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Furry World}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Girl Scout Cookies]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Cookies}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Girl Scout Camp]] (the sequel) || {{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Camp}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[High School]] || {{PAGESINCAT:High School}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Hot and Horny]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Hot and Horny}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public, please edit!</b>

[[+Infinity]] || {{PAGESINCAT:+Infinity}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[The life of a medieval princess|The Life of a Medieval Princess]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The life of a medieval princess}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public - but please read the [[Princess Editor's Guide]].</b>

[[Life of a 13 year old|Life of a 13 Year Old]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Life of a 13 year old}} Pages || <b style="color:red;">Do Not Edit, Update Jan, 25, 2014</b>

[[Ongoing Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Ongoing Story}} Pages

[[Oops! You're Naked!]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Oops! You're Naked!}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Pedo romp|Pedo Romp]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Pedo romp}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Pi Pi Pi]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Pi Pi Pi}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Rampage]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Rampage}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public-but any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted</b>

[[Smutty Sex Romp]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Smutty Sex Romp}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b> <b style="color:red;">-For experienced writers with a firm grasp of grammar and spelling only. Any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted</b>

[[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[The Story of Jack Foster]] || {{PAGESINCAT:The Story of Jack Foster}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[University Daze]] || {{PAGESINCAT:University Daze}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Vampire Weekend]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Vampire Weekend}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b>

[[Yes, Yes, Yes, Your Honor]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Yes, Yes, Yes, Your Honor}} Pages || <b style="color:green;">Public</b> <b style="color:pink;">Complete</b>

<b>[[All Adult Stories]]</b>


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