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Take the bag on the left

Axehel — Thu, 01 Oct 2009 10:25:13 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You grab the left bag and head out...

As you walk along the hallway that leads to the exit you start to ponder...

''Wait, what am I doing? Am I really going to kill my classmates? Should I try to find the gang? Are they even still alive? BAH! Too many questions. First thing is first, I need to check out what I'll be working with... that is once I've reached a safe enough spot''

And so you rush out of the school and into the forest that surrounds the school, you just run...

After a while, or rather when you're out of breath, you look at your bag

*[[Time to see what I got]]

*[[Throw the bag into a tree and walk away]]

*[[Use your bag as a pillow and get some shut eye]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Get out the map and look at your options

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:51:34 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You get out the map and look at it...

''Okay so I can choose to go to the town, the mountain, the beach, the lighthouse, the hospital or of course stay here...''

''Heather (Heather Locker Girl #20) always liked the beach...''

''Then again, I might find some usefull stuff in the town and hospital...''

''But hey, I'm not likely to meet many people in the mountain and the forests...''

''And what about that lighthouse? Maybe David (David Smith Boy #1) went there, what with his uncle living in one...''

''Time to pick Zach!''

*[[Go to the beach, and try to find Heather]]

*[[Go to the town and find some gear]]

*[[Go to the hospital and find some gear]]

*[[Go to the lighthouse, and see if David is there]]

*[[Go to the Mountains and evade contact]]

*[[Stick to the woods]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50? students|Hours=72|Weapons=Shotgun|Friends=None|Deaths=None?}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Time to see what I got

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:34:20 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You open the bag up...

''Woaw a shotgun! Guess I picked the right bag! Although a 'How to take off the collar' guide woulda been better.''

''At least I can defend myself now...''

You hear a high pitched scream followed by gunshots...

''Damn it! Already? They are playing this thing already?''

'''What should I do?'''

*[[Go check out where you heard the gunshots come from]]

*[[Get your ass hawling in the opposite direction]]

*[[Get out the map and look at your options]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50? students|Hours=71|Weapons=Shotgun|Friends=None|Deaths=None}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Time to see what I got

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:32:17 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You open the bag up...

''Woaw a shotgun! Guess I picked the right bag! Although a 'How to take off the collar' guide woulda been better.''

''At least I can defend myself now...''

You hear a high pitched scream followed by gunshots...

''Damn it! Already? They are playing this thing already?''

'''What should I do?'''

*[[Go check out where you heard the gunshots come from]]

*[[Get your ass hawling in the opposite direction]]

*[[Get out the map and look at your options]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50? students|Hours=72|Weapons=Shotgun|Friends=None|Deaths=None?}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Time to see what I got

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:32:05 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You open the bag up...

''Woaw a shotgun! Guess I picked the right bag! Although a 'How to take off the collar' guide woulda been better.''

''At least I can defend myself now...''

You hear a high pitched scream followed by gunshots...

''Damn it! Already? They are playing this thing already?''

'''What should I do?'''

*[[Go check out where you heard the gunshots come from]]

*[[Get your ass hawling in the opposite direction]]

*[[Get out the map and look at your options]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50? students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None?}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Take the bag on the left

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:24:58 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You grab the left bag and head out...

As you walk along the hallway that leads to the exit you start to ponder...

''Wait, what am I doing? Am I really going to kill my classmates? Should I try to find the gang? Are they even still alive? BAH! Too many questions. First thing is first, I need to check out what I'll be working with... that is once I've reached a safe enough spot''

'''And so you rush out of the school and into the forest that surrounds the school, you just run...'''

'''After a while, or rather when you're out of breath, you look at your bag'''

*[[Time to see what I got]]

*[[Throw the bag into a tree and walk away]]

*[[Use your bag as a pillow and get some shut eye]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Take the bag on the left

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:22:46 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You grab the left bag and head out...

As you walk along the hallway that leads to the exit you start to ponder...

''Wait, what am I doing? Am I really going to kill my classmates? Should I try to find the gang? Are they even still alive? BAH! Too many questions. First thing is first, I need to check out what I'll be working with... that is once I've reached a safe enough spot''

'''And so you rush out of the school and into the wilderness, you just run...'''

'''After a while, or rather when your out of breath, you look at your bag'''

*[[Time to see what I got]]

*[[Throw the bag into a tree and walk away]]

*[[Use your bag as a pillow and get some shut eye]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Stand up and enter the game

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:14:23 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

You sharply stand up scaring the already on edge Rhonda price, girl #25, that was sitting right behind you, making her let out a small panic cry

'''-There we go that's better Mr. Brach... Now then hop to it'''
Said the teacher with glee pointing out the door

'''-Asshole...'''
You mutter as you grab your bag, one of the two remaining

*[[Take the bag on the left]]

*[[Take the bag on the right]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Remain seated...

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:10:08 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

'''3!'''

The Teacher unloads a single round...

You barely hear it as it penetrates your skull making your brains splatter on the young Rhonda Price seated just behind you...

== Game Over ==

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=49 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=YOU... }}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

What's the use...

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:08:18 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

'''Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...'''
said the man smiling

'''And I assure you...'''

'''This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...'''

''Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?''

''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''

'''1!'''

The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm

''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''

'''2!'''

He raises the gun and takes aim

''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''

*[[Stand up and enter the game]]

*[[Remain seated...]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Zach Brach (Boy

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:05:22 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Speach'''
''Thought''
Action/Narrative

'''...and finally, boy #25,Zach Brach!'''

''So... it's finally my turn...''
''Look at that asshole, calling out our names one by one to go to our deaths...''
''It's just... monstrous...''
''Should I even bother with this twisted game?''

*[[BOTHER!!! Get the hell up and think later]]

*[[What's the use...]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Stand up and enter the game

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:59:18 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Action'''
''Thought''
Speach

'''You sharply stand up scaring the already on edge Rhonda price, girl #25, that was sitting right behind you, making her let out a small panic cry'''

-There we go that's better Mr. Brach... Now then hop to it
'''Said the teacher with glee pointing out the door'''

-Asshole...
'''You mutter as you grab your bag, one of the two remaining'''

*[[Take the bag on the left]]

*[[Take the bag on the right]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Stand up and enter the game

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:57:30 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Action'''
''Thought''
Speach

'''You sharply stand up scaring the already on edge Rhonda price, girl 25, that was sitting right behind you, making her let out a small panic cry'''

There we go that's better Mr. Brach... Now then hop to it
'''Said the teache with glee pointing out the door'''

-Asshole...
'''You mutter as you grab your bag, one of the two remaining'''

*[[Take the bag on the left]]

*[[Take the bag on the right]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Remain seated...

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:47:23 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Action'''
''Thought''
Speach

3!

'''The Teacher unloads a single round... you barely hear it as it penetrates your skull making your brains splatter on the young Rhonda Price seated just behind you...'''

== Game Over ==

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=49 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=YOU... }}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

What's the use...

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:40:53 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Action'''
''Thought''
Speach

Zachy... you have three seconds to move, or I'll take your silence as a forfeit...
'''said the man smiling'''

and I assure you...

This! Is one game you don't want that to happen in...

''Damn it, I don't have a choice... or do I?''

''Come on Zach! Think! Think damn you!''

1!

'''The Teacher raises his hand alerting the armed soldier to his right to give him his side arm'''

''What about the others out there... do they need me? Would they need me?''

2!

'''He raises the gun and takes aim'''

''Kill or be killed... time to choose...''

*[[Stand up and enter the game]]

*[[Remain seated...]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Zach Brach (Boy

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:30:53 GMT

Axehel:

Authors note:
'''Action'''
''Thought''
Speach

...and finally, boy #25,Zach Brach!

''So... it's finally my turn...''
''Look at that asshole, calling out our names one by one to go to our deaths...''
''It's just... monstrous...''
''Should I even bother with this twisted game?''

*[[BOTHER!!! Get the hell up and think later]]

*[[What's the use...]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=Zach Brach|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

Battle Royale

Axehel — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 18:19:42 GMT

Axehel:

2015, Fifty high school students from Jamesville High are forced to compete in a bloody match that lasts three days. The winner is the last one alive. You are all on a deserted island and this is the first American Battle Royale.

'''''Rules:'''''

''*There are explosive collars on your necks. Pull them off and your collar explodes.
*You have 72 Hours to beat the game. If more than one person is alive by time the 72nd hour hits, all will lose.
*Every six hours, a list of Danger Zones and Dead students will be read. (Names need to be written on paper along with Danger Zones)
*Every danger zone causes your collar to automatically explode.
*Every one bag containing a weapon picked at random, seven sandwiches, four sodas, a blanket, a map and a list of danger zones.
*Have Fun!!!''

Who Do You Want To Be?

MALES:
*[[Nick Harris (BOY #20), a tough teenager who usually hangs out with a crew. But before he knew he was going to be in the Battle Royale, his crew left him ever since he ratted them out to other people. Now, he is all alone in the competition. He is a good guy and he probably won't kill unless its neccessary]]

*[[Aaron Shull (BOY #23), a Complactied teen who can at time's show mercy yet kill without remorse. His father well trained in weapons taught what he could to his son. A star Linebacker for his football team he is in good shape. The only problem is he is a little to trusting the first time. He is sure to get a few kill's.]]

*[[Josh Meyers (BOY #16), a teen who doesn't take no for an answer. He is one for his friends, who are with him in the compietion. But if worse comes to worse, he will try not to hurt his friends. He will protect himself and his friends no matter what the cost, equalling out in some blood. He will not be taken lightly]]

*[[Zeke Davidson (Boy #8)]]

*[[Zach Brach (Boy #25)]], the quiet type that hangs with his friends not saying much, that is, because he's analysing everything and anything using his high IQ brain and quirky out of the box thinking. Of course, he's not unknown to crack a smile and has a great sense of humour that's reknown within the class, but hey, will he be laughing much in the days to come?

FEMALES:
*[[Christine Angel (GIRL #16), a girl who is a badass. Apart from her last name, this girl is known for carjacking, shoplifting and any other bad things that have two words in them. She makes fun of others if she doesn't like them and if she does like them, she'll bother them until she dates them. She is a fanatic of the Asian BR series and can't wait until she plays. She will be bringing some blood]]

*[[Karen Andrews (GIRL #13), a girl who always studies and never really talks to anyone. She is soft, kind and gentle, and yet, she is known to lash out whenever anyone makes fun of her looks or someone else. She can get violent and some point, but it is very unlikely]]

*[[Brooke Harris (GIRL #4), a little sister to Nick Harris (boy #20). She doesn't care about him, though. All she wants is to survive with her five cheerleading friends who are with her. She doesn't fight because she is scared she will get dirty, although she is known to have a real nasty streak. If she wants, she could kill all of her cheerleading crew and more. She will probably have a low body count, but is fighting to survive]]

OR

*[[Student List (NO ELIMINATIONS SO FAR). Please Write this down on a piece of Paper. Every six hours, this list will show up and tell you who is left and who is dead. Danger zones can also lead to your death, so write those down on paper ever six hours]]

{{BattleRoyaleStatus|Name=None|Alive=50 students|Hours=72|Weapons=None|Friends=None|Deaths=None... yet}}
[[Category:Battle Royale]]

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