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FamilyTree/Cole Family/Day 1/Find Sadie

2014-05-16T13:22:49Z

WCold: Created page with 'You moved along the corridor looking around, trying to find Sadie. Despite you were looking for her, it was unexpected when she appeared near you saying, "What are hell? Why did …'

You moved along the corridor looking around, trying to find Sadie. Despite you were looking for her, it was unexpected when she appeared near you saying, "What are hell? Why did you choose me? You weren't listening and I need get a good score for English. And you know it!"

"Yes. That's exactly why I chose you as a partner. With you I can get a better grade too. But I didn't slept well last night and practically passed out during the class. So you have to describe me our assignment in details."

"You didn't listen?" She was anxious. "That will be worse then I had imagined." Sadie sighed. "Alright. We have nothing else left. We have to do family tree of our partners and write an essay of 1000 words describing 3 family members."

"That's a very strange assignment," you said comprehending with her words.

"She said it will help us, classmates to know each other better." She shrugged her shoulders. "But we have only one week to do it, so we'll better hurry. Where will we start."

*[[FamilyTree/Cole_Family/Day_1/to_Coles_alone|Let's do it as it was specified. I'll take your family and you'll take mine.]]
*[[FamilyTree/Cole_Family/Day_1/your_family_for_youself|We should write about our families by ourselves and swap our paperworks.]]
*[[FamilyTree/Cole_Family/Day_1/let's_do_it_together|Let's do it together in both cases.]]

[[Category:FamilyTree]]

FamilyTree/partner Sadie

2014-05-16T08:44:05Z

WCold: Created page with '"...Sadie Cole," - you said. "Okay," - mrs. Berry confirmed, noticed it for herself and resumed questioning of class. When she signed the last pair, the bell rang and class was…'

"...Sadie Cole," - you said.

"Okay," - mrs. Berry confirmed, noticed it for herself and resumed questioning of class.

When she signed the last pair, the bell rang and class was over. It was the last class for today, so you were free now. You left classroom in crowd of your classmates.

*[[FamilyTree/Cole_Family/Day_1/Find_Sadie|Find your partner and ask about assignment.]]
*[[FamilyTree/Cole_Family/Day_1/Ask_About_Assignment|Find someone who knows about assignment.]]
*[[FamilyTree/Cole_Family/Day_1/Go_home_after_class|Go home.]]

[[Category:FamilyTree]]

FamilyTree/characters map

2014-05-07T13:31:51Z

WCold:

<h1>Characters</h1>

==Relatives==

===Newton family tree===

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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Steven Newton|Father Steven Newton 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Joann Newton|Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old]]
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Alan Bates|Uncle Alan Bates 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Meghan Bates|Aunt Meghan Bates (Schultz) 41 years old]]
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Kathy's 1st ex Allan Fleming 38 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Kathy Bates 37 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Kathy's 2nd ex Louis Vega 35 years old
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| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="8" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="4" |
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#April Newton|Sister April Newton 19 years old]]
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Christopher Newton|'''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old]]
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Amanda Newton|Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old]]
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sophia's husband Dustin Powell 23 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin Sophia Powell (Bates) 23 years old
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin 17 years old.
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin 17 years old.
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| colspan="24" | || rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sophia's daughter 3 years old.
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===Newton family===
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====Steven Newton====
Father of Chris Newton. 41 years old architect. He is working for the big firm in downtown. He has hazel eyes, black short hair. His body is slim and flexible by nature and some trainings. His height is 6'1. He is smart, but prefers to use his brain only at work. He is introvert and every day after work he comes back home and spends evenings near TV.

====Joann Newton====
Joann Newton (Bates). Mother of Chris Newton. 39 years old housewife. She has 5'8 height and 38D cup size, long black wavy hair and blue eyes with slender figure and pretty face. 20 years ago she could easily continue her education after college, but after marrying on Steven Newton and getting pregnant with April, decided to put her energy into family and became housewife. Now she mostly bored after 20 years of nurturing and houseworking, relieving her stress by workouts (which made her look like she is still on her 30), suntanning and rare hanging out with her neighbour friends. She is hot and you can barely find a man on the earth who wouldn't like to fuck her.

====April Newton====
Sister. 19 years old

====Christopher Newton====
'''Main Character'''. Christopher (Chris) Newton 17 years old schoolboy. His height is 6'0. He has hazel eyes, black short hair, big jaw and good nature build of body, but he doesn't try to improve it by constant trainings. Chris has a good grades and after school planning to continue his education in some good college. He has good looks and brains, which gives him a lot of points with girls, but currently he doesn't have a single one.

====Amanda Newton====
Sister. 16 years old

===Bates Family===
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====Alan Bates====
Uncle. 41 years old.

====Meghan Bates====
Meghan Bates (Schultz). Aunt. 41 years old.

==Families of friends==
===Cole family tree===
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather Jason Cole 66 years old
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother Katrina Cole (Douglas) 59 years old
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather Harold Hunter 60 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother May Hunter (Morris) 56 years old
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| colspan="4" | || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="2" | || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="7" | || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Dan Cole 38 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Elaine Cole (Hunter) 36 years old
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Carol Hunter 34 years old
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Christina's ex Rick Greene 33 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Christina Gross (Hunter) 33 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Tom Gross 34 years old
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| style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
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| colspan="5" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="11" |
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| colspan="4" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Sadie Cole|Daughter Sadie Cole 17 years old]]
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Daughter Jenny Cole 16 years old
| colspan="10" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin Anna Greene 12 years old
|}

===Cole family===
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====Sadie Cole====
Chris Newton's childhood friend. Now she become a hot cheerleader, which made her more distant lately, but still sometimes you all hang out together.

==Teachers==
====Tricia Berry====
34 years old.

[[Category:FamilyTree]]
[[Category:Pages Under Construction]]

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

2014-05-07T12:52:33Z

WCold:

==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of "Hot and Horny" has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)

Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it. Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree that that is a very nice pic. And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to know I was missed. I've just been getting over a really nasty cold. Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy. On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story. Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.

Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
 The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
 I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
 Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
 If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
 to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
 [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
 one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
 people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
 but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
 I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Angst of Mass Destruction -</h4>
        I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.
 Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then. As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the "Clean-Up" section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

...

Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft

== Sorry about that... ==

First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)

It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)

== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==

Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==

About trees.

That's a table with border="0" (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing="0" (lines between cells solid). 
The "connecting lines" is a cell's borders which I made visible.
--[[User:WCold|WCold]] 07 May 2014

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

2014-05-07T12:52:06Z

WCold:

==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of "Hot and Horny" has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)

Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it. Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree that that is a very nice pic. And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to know I was missed. I've just been getting over a really nasty cold. Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy. On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story. Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.

Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
 The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
 I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
 Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
 If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
 to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
 [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
 one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
 people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
 but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
 I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Angst of Mass Destruction -</h4>
        I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.
 Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then. As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the "Clean-Up" section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

...

Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft

== Sorry about that... ==

First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)

It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)

== [[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==

Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

== --[[User:WCold|WCold]] ==

About trees.

That's a table with border="0" (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing="0" (lines between cells solid). 
The "connecting lines" is a cell's borders which I made visible.
--[[User:WCold|WCold]] 07 May 2014

User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime

2014-05-07T12:51:20Z

WCold:

==Thank you for reminding me.==

Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.

[[User: Akibahara|Akibahara]] 01:50, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

==Trueroman's talk==
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices.

I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :)

Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks.

So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it?

[[User:Trueroman| Trueroman]] 9:53 AM 20th March 2014

==Wassersaeufer's talk==
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of "Hot and Horny" has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)

Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)

Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)

==MFCmaster123's talk==
From MFCmaster123
Thanks for your help with my Bold font problem.
Writ this day 17 March, 2014
==link log page==

Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

==ArthurKung's talk==
I think your story "Dirty Me" is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic ("Not the fun fantasy stuff" as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing! --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just "Dream about x, remember y" type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
==Teejay's talk==
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

==hidden text==
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong. You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.

If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.

<nowiki> invisible </nowiki>

produces:
 invisible 

You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:39, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Got it. You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table. I'm not sure how to build such a thing here. The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited. I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda "flowchart-y" in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr. He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner. I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==Blazetempest==
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers. If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

==warnings==
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them. It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

==egrizzly==
Thanks for the heads up. 'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

== Nah, it's okay ==

I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.

== Reply to your comment ==

Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review.
--[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 22:00 15 March 2014

==Number of views==
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up. It's just one of those things that stopped functioning. It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read. Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me. He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.

I'll experiment with variations on <nowiki>{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}</nowiki> and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved. The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had. I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have. Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

==Platypus' other talk==
Are you doing fine? No, you're doing better than that. It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress. You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup. Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired. You know something? I'm going to let him run with it. There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers. Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted. But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar. As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site. The backlog builds up so quickly around here! It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure. The name had to be changed for legal purposes. The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name. The links in the pages ''weren't''. It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.

Look at those dates in the history. I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Just so you know... If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is. Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it. It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first.

And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page. That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]]. Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Congratulations on getting through the Adult section. That was quite a task you took on. At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting. The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page. If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid. Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations. I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it. I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either. There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.

I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users. Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links. And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load. Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site. It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it. Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I agree that that is a very nice pic. And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Glad to know I was missed. I've just been getting over a really nasty cold. Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy. On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story. Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.

Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

== Regarding your comments ==

+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.

+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.

+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.

+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.
Blackadder38

== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==

I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.

As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.

Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.

== Thanks! ==

Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler

I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars

== Defnota's Messages ==

I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014

        My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.
 The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.
 I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.
 Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.
 If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014

        Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from <nowiki>"|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private"</nowiki>
 to <nowiki>"[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private"</nowiki>? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.
 [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the <nowiki>__TOC__</nowiki> magic word through
 one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML <style> tags working to make an internal stylesheet,
 people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

        Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

        Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout -</h4>
        The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.
<ul>
<li>If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.</li>
<li>If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.</li>
</ul>
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Page Layout Two-</h4>
        To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),
 but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,
 I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

<h4>- Angst of Mass Destruction -</h4>
        I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.
 Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.
 -[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==

Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH

==Thank You For Your Message==
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014

== WriterGhost talk ==

Thanks for your thoughts regarding "Adventure at the TG Thriftshop." The "Name" area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).

== Completionist Talk ==
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.

Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then. As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the "Clean-Up" section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

...

Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

== Realism ==

Hi Dirtyme,

Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!

-Bojangles

haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft

== Sorry about that... ==

First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)

It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)

== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==

Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

== --[[User:WCold|WCold]] ==

About trees.

That's a table with border="0" (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing="0" (lines between cells solid). 
The "connecting lines" is a cell's borders which I made visible.
--[[User:WCold|WCold]] 07 May 2014

FamilyTree/characters map

2014-05-07T08:58:18Z

WCold:

<h1>Characters</h1>

==Relatives==

===Newton family tree===

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|-
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| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
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|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="14" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
| || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="12" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Steven Newton|Father Steven Newton 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Joann Newton|Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Alan Bates|Uncle Alan Bates 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Meghan Bates|Aunt Meghan Bates (Schultz) 41 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Kathy's 1st ex Allan Fleming 38 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Kathy Bates 37 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Kathy's 2nd ex Louis Vega 35 years old
|-
| style="height: 25px; border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || |
| style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="6" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="8" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="4" |
| style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#April Newton|Sister April Newton 19 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Christopher Newton|'''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Amanda Newton|Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sophia's husband Dustin Powell 23 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin Sophia Powell (Bates) 23 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin 17 years old.
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin 17 years old.
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin 8 years old.
|-
| style="height: 25px;" | || || || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| colspan="23" | || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| colspan="24" | || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| colspan="24" | || rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sophia's daughter 3 years old.
|-
| style="height: 5px;" |
|}

===Newton family===
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====Steven Newton====
Father of Chris Newton. 41 years old architect. He is working for the big firm in downtown. He has hazel eyes, black short hair. His body is slim and flexible by nature and some trainings. His height is 6'1. He is smart, but prefers to use his brain only at work. He is introvert and every day after work he comes back home and spends evenings near TV.

====Joann Newton====
Joann Newton (Bates). Mother of Chris Newton. 39 years old housewife. She has 5'8 height and 38D cup size, long black wavy hair and blue eyes with slender figure and pretty face. 20 years ago she could easily continue her education after college, but after marrying on Steven Newton and getting pregnant with April, decided to put her energy into family and became housewife. Now she mostly bored after 20 years of nurturing and houseworking, relieving her stress by workouts (which made her look like she is still on her 30), suntanning and rare hanging out with her neighbour friends. She is hot and you can barely find a man on the earth who wouldn't like to fuck her.

====April Newton====
Sister. 19 years old

====Christopher Newton====
'''Main Character'''. Christopher (Chris) Newton 17 years old schoolboy. His height is 6'0. He has hazel eyes, black short hair, big jaw and good nature build of body, but he doesn't try to improve it by constant trainings. Chris has a good grades and after school planning to continue his education in some good college. He has good looks and brains, which gives him a lot of points with girls, but currently he doesn't have a single one.

====Amanda Newton====
Sister. 16 years old

===Bates Family===
----

====Alan Bates====
Uncle. 41 years old.

====Meghan Bates====
Meghan Bates (Schultz). Aunt. 41 years old.

==Families of friends==
===Cole family tree===
{| border="0" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| || || || || || || || || || || || || || ||
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather Jason Cole 66 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother Katrina Cole (Douglas) 59 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather Harold Hunter 60 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother May Hunter (Morris) 56 years old
|-
| style="height: 25px;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| colspan="3" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|
|-
| colspan="4" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Dan Cole 38 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Elaine Cole (Hunter) 36 years old
|-
| style="height: 25px;" |
|-
|
|-
|
|-
| colspan="4" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Daughter Sadie Cole 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Daughter Jenny Cole 16 years old
|}

===Cole family===
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====Sadie Cole====
Chris Newton's childhood friend. Now she become a hot cheerleader, which made her more distant lately, but still sometimes you all hang out together.

==Teachers==
====Tricia Berry====
34 years old.

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==Relatives==

===Newton family tree===

{| border="0" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || || ||
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="14" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
| || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="12" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Steven Newton|Father Steven Newton 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Joann Newton|Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Alan Bates|Uncle Alan Bates 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Meghan Bates|Aunt Meghan Bates (Schultz) 41 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Kathy's 1st ex Allan Fleming 38 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Kathy Bates 37 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px dashed grey;" valign="bottom" | divorce
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Kathy's 2nd ex Louis Vega 35 years old
|-
| style="height: 25px; border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || |
| style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="6" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="8" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#April Newton|Sister April Newton 19 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Christopher Newton|'''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Amanda Newton|Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sophia's husband Dustin Powell 23 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin Sophia Powell (Bates) 23 years old
|-
| style="height: 25px;" |
|}

===Newton family===
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====Steven Newton====
Father. 41 years old.

====Joann Newton====
Joann Newton (Bates). Mother. 39 years old.

====April Newton====
Sister. 19 years old

====Christopher Newton====
'''Main Character'''. 17 years old.

====Amanda Newton====
Sister. 16 years old

===Bates Family===
----

====Alan Bates====
Uncle. 41 years old.

====Meghan Bates====
Meghan Bates (Schultz). Aunt. 41 years old.

==Teachers==
===Tricia Berry===
34 years old.

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==Newton family tree==

{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Steven Newton|Father Steven Newton 41 years old]]
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Joann Newton|Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old]]
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#April Newton|Sister April Newton 19 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Christopher Newton|'''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old]]
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | [[#Amanda Newton|Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old]]
|}

==Relatives==

===Newton family===

====Steven Newton====
Father. 41 years old.

====Joann Newton====
Joann Newton (Bates). Mother. 39 years old.

====April Newton====
Sister. 19 years old

====Christopher Newton====
'''Main Character'''. 17 years old.

====Amanda Newton====
Sister. 16 years old

==Teachers==
===Tricia Berry===
34 years old.

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{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father [[#Steven Newton|Steven Newton]] 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother [[#Joann Newton|Joann Newton (Bates)]] 39 years old
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister April Newton 19 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | '''Main Character''' [[#Christopher Newton|Christopher Newton]] 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old
|}


<h1>Characters</h1>

==Newton family==

===Steven Newton===
Father. 41 years old.

===Joann Newton===
Joann Newton (Bates). Mother. 39 years old.

===Christopher Newton===
'''Main Character'''. 17 years old.


==Teachers==
===Tricia Berry===
34 years old.


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|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father [[#Steven Newton|Steven Newton]] 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother [[#Joann Newton|Joann Newton (Bates)]] 39 years old
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister April Newton 19 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | '''Main Character''' [[#Christopher Newton|Christopher Newton]] 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old
|}


<h1>Characters</h1>

==Newton family==

===Steven Newton===
Father. 41 years old.

===Joann Newton===
Joann Newton (Bates). Mother. 39 years old.

===Christopher Newton===
'''Main Character'''. 17 years old.


==Teachers==
===Tricia Berry===
34 years old.


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<h1>Newton family</h1>


==Newton family tree==

{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Steven Newton 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister April Newton 19 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | '''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old
|}



==Teachers==
Tricia Berry - 34 years old.


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== Newton family ==


=== Newton family tree ===

{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Steven Newton 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister April Newton 19 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | '''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old
|}





== Teachers ==
Tricia Berry - 34 years old.


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2014-05-06T08:45:02Z

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== Newton family ==

=== Newton family tree ===

{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Steven Newton 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister April Newton 19 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | '''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old
|}

== Teachers ==
Tricia Berry - 34 years old.

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2014-05-06T08:40:15Z

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== Newton family tree ==

{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14 || 15 || 16 || 17 || 18 || 19 || 20
| 21 || 22 || 23 || 24 || 25 || 26 || 27 || 28
|-
| || || || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || || || || || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || ||
| colspan="6" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || ||
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Uncle Terry Johnson 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Aunt Lisa Johnson (Newton) 38 years old
| || || || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Steven Newton 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Joann Newton (Bates) 39 years old
|-
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || colspan="5" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || style="height: 5px; border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" | || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || colspan="3" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
| colspan="4" style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Cousin
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister April Newton 19 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | '''Main Character''' Christopher Newton 17 years old
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Sister Amanda Newton 16 years old
|}

== Teachers ==
Tricia Berry - 34 years old.

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== Newton family ==

{| border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="0" style="text-align:center;"
|-
| 1 || 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 6 || 7 || 8 || 9 || 10 || 11 || 12 || 13 || 14
|-
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
| ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandfather
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Grandmother
|-
| || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" | || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|style="border-right: 3px solid grey; border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
|style="height: 5px;" | || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" | || || || || || style="border-left: 3px solid grey;" |
|-
| || || ||
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Father Steven Newton 41 years old
| colspan="2" style="border-bottom: 3px solid grey;" |
| rowspan="2" colspan="2" style="border: 1px solid black;" | Mother Joann Newton 39 years old
|-
| || || || || style="border-right: 3px solid grey;" |
|}

Daughter - April Newton 19 years old.

Son (main character) - Christopher Newton 17 years old.

Daughter - Amanda Newton 16 years old.

== Teachers ==
Tricia Berry - 34 years old.

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FamilyTree/find partner

2014-05-05T07:11:22Z

WCold:

mrs. Berry awaited for your answer. You looked around.

"But I should at first ask someone to participate," you said in astonishment.

Your teacher raised her brow and said, "I've already told that this time the person I asked should choose his partner instantly. That will make it more interesting. You first. Now do it."

You looked around again and saw among the other classmates: 
Marv Gibson - your best friend and soul of the company sits next to you. 
Derrick Gray - your other friend nerdy type fatso with glasses and bad grades. He sits after Marv. 
Sadie Cole - your childhood friend. Now she become a hot cheerleader, which made her more distant lately, but still sometimes you all hang out together. 
Ian Lawson - not your friend at all, but his hot mother is a PTA leader and nobody gives a shit if he screw up in school. It is convenient to be attached to him in group assignments. 
Stacey Marsh - another cheerleader. Not friendly at all, but the hottest girl at school and head cheerleader. Dates Owen Austin - school sport star with total lack of brains, who will most likely kill you if you speak with her not to mention about making her your partner. 
Owen Austin - himself is also here, which is unusual, because as a sport star he can do whatever he want. Maybe, the hottest teacher Berry was the reason of it.

"I'm waiting!" mrs. Berry hurried you.

You sighed and said, "My partner will be..."

*[[FamilyTree/partner_Marv|Marv Gibson]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Derrick|Derrick Gray]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Sadie|Sadie Cole]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Ian_Lawson|Ian Lawson]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Stacey_Marsh|Stacey Marsh]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Owen_Austin|Owen Austin]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_noone|Noone]]

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FamilyTree/find partner

2014-04-29T13:07:15Z

WCold: Created page with 'mrs. Berry awaited for your answer. You looked around. "But I should at first ask someone to participate," you said in astonishment. Your teacher raised her brow and said, "I'v…'

mrs. Berry awaited for your answer. You looked around.

"But I should at first ask someone to participate," you said in astonishment.

Your teacher raised her brow and said, "I've already told that this time the person I asked should choose his partner instantly. That will make it more interesting. You first. Now do it."

You looked around again and saw among the other classmates: 
Marv Gibson - your best friend and soul of the company sits next to you. 
Derrick Gray - your other friend nerdy type fatso with glasses and bad grades. He sits after Marv. 
Sadie Cole - your childhood friend. Now she become a hot cheerleader, which made her more distant lately, but still sometimes you all hang out together. 
Ian Lawson - not your friend at all, but his hot mother is a PTA leader and nobody gives a shit if he screw up in school. It is convenient to be attached to him in group assignments. 
Stacey Marsh - another cheerleader. Not friendly at all, but the hottest girl at school and head cheerleader. Dates Owen Austin - school sport star with total lack of brains, who will most likely kill you if you speak with her not to mention about making her your partner. 
Owen Austin - himself is also here, which is unusual, because as a sport star he can do whatever he want. Maybe, the hottest teacher Berry was the reason of it.

"I'm waiting!" mrs. Berry hurried you.

You sighed and said, "My partner will be..."

*[[FamilyTree/partner_Marv|Marv Gibson]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Derrick|Derrick Gray]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Sadie|Sadie Cole]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Stacey_Marsh|Stacey Marsh]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_Owen_Austin|Owen Austin]]
*[[FamilyTree/partner_noone|Noone]]

[[Category:FamilyTree]]

FamilyTree/characters map

2014-04-29T11:29:53Z

WCold: Created page with ' == Newton family: == Father - Steven Newton 41 years old. Mother - Joann Newton 39 years old. Daughter - April Newton 19 years old. Son (main character) - Christopher Newton …'

== Newton family: ==
Father - Steven Newton 41 years old.

Mother - Joann Newton 39 years old.

Daughter - April Newton 19 years old.

Son (main character) - Christopher Newton 17 years old.

Daughter - Amanda Newton 16 years old.

== Teachers: ==
Tricia Berry - 34 years old.

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[[Category:Pages Under Construction]]

FamilyTree/beginning

2014-04-29T11:27:32Z

WCold: Created page with 'You were sleeping. You dreamed about Jessica Alba and Megan Fox giving you a blowjob. They couldn't get enought of your dick, pushed each other aside every 10 seconds to get it i…'

You were sleeping. You dreamed about Jessica Alba and Megan Fox giving you a blowjob. They couldn't get enought of your dick, pushed each other aside every 10 seconds to get it inside their mouths. Soon it came time for you to cum. They both sit under your dick, opened their mouths and waited for you to give them your sperm.

"Christopher Newton, are you with us?" asked mrs. Berry - your English teacher. Her voice took you out of your dream right into the middle of the class.

"Yes," you quickly answered feeling raging bonner.

"Then, why don't you answer the question?"

"Sorry, I didn't hear you. I thought how to accomplish task," you tried to evade. Last time you heard her, she was talking something about big task.

"Great! But maybe you could first tell me the name of your task's partner?" You heard laughter from class.

*[[FamilyTree/find_partner|Look Around]]

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Category:FamilyTree

2014-04-29T11:26:41Z

WCold: Created page with 'Starting page is Family Tree. Category:Adult Stories'

Starting page is [[Family Tree]].

[[Category:Adult Stories]]

Family Tree

2014-04-29T08:52:38Z

WCold:

This is a story about male teenager Chris Newton, who lives his boring life in some suburb with his family. He attends a local high school, where he receives a new home task which will give him a lot of exciting opportunities.

Go with him through that assignment and make choices which will affect on his entire life.

It's a fiction tale, but if you have something against the sexual, milf, incest, group and anal topics, I strictly recommend you to close this page as soon as possible.

If you are awaiting some dramatic or at least professional writing, I strictly recommend you to close this page as soon as possible.

If you have some doubts about reading this tale, I strictly recommend you to close this page as soon as possible.

[[FamilyTree/characters_map|Characters.]]

*[[FamilyTree/beginning|Let's start.]]
[[Category:FamilyTree]]

Family Tree

2014-04-29T08:52:12Z

WCold: Created page with 'This is a story about male teenager Chris Newton, who lives his boring life in some suburb with his family. He attends a local high school, where he receives a new home task whic…'

This is a story about male teenager Chris Newton, who lives his boring life in some suburb with his family. He attends a local high school, where he receives a new home task which will give him a lot of exciting opportunities.

Go with him through that assignment and make choices which will affect on his entire life.

It's a fiction tale, but if you have something against the sexual, milf, incest, group and anal topics, I strictly recommend you to close this page as soon as possible.

If you are awaiting some dramatic or at least professional writing, I strictly recommend you to close this page as soon as possible.

If you have some doubts about reading this tale, I strictly recommend you to close this page as soon as possible.

*[[FamilyTree/characters_map|Characters.]]

*[[FamilyTree/beginning|Let's start.]]
[[Category:FamilyTree]]

Category:Punishment for your wife

2014-04-28T08:45:57Z

WCold:

These are the pages in [[Punishment for your wife]].

[[Category:Adult Stories]]

All Adult Stories

2014-04-27T09:36:11Z

WCold:

==Adult Stories==
'''Alphabetize your entries please'''
(If you don't see your story here anymore, please check [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]], since the old, unfinished stories with few pages have been moved there)

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'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.

==# - C==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[The 007 Stories]] ||51|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Abandoned Adult Story]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Abandoned Adult Story}}||(Do not edit without permission. You can ask me at: [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime]])
|-
|[[Adventure at the TG Thriftshop]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Adventure at the TG Thriftshop}}|| (Public; Please Add!) Updated 4/24/2014
|-
|[[Adventures of Valour]]||13|| (WIP Do not edit)
|-
|[[Alien Adventure]]||21||(Public)
|-
|[[All Alone]] (Lesbian)||111||(Public)
|-
|[[All in the Family]]||141|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Amazon]] ||45|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Android Training]]||2||(Private)
|-
|[[+annabeth|Annabeth]]||21||(Public)
|-
|[[An Airplane Journey]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[Angorea]]||2||(A new, story-heavy adventure - Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/28/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Another Day At School...]] ||94||(Public)
|-
|[[Anime School]]||51||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Answer Is Yes]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Answer Is Yes}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[Archie's Gay Adventure]] (Gay)||88|| (Public)
|-
|[[Archie's Sexual Adventure]]||91||(Public)
|-
|[[Ardenstone]]||42|||(Do Not Edit) W.I.P. - Day 1 complete, plenty more to come!
|-
|[[Assassin]]||21|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Assassin's Guild]]||2||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/30/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Badlands]]||25|| (Public)
|-
|[[Band Forming thing|Band Forming Thing]]||123||(Public)
|-
|[[Beach Vacation]]||63||(Public)
|-
|[[Beachside Holiday]]||37||(Public)
|-
|[[Benighted]]||10|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A Big Ugly Story]]||24|| (Public)
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|[[Big Cock Fun]] (Gay)||47||(Under Construction)(Create new pages if you want, just please leave the originals alone.)
|-
|[[Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night]] (Gay)||1,032||(Do Not Edit)
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|[[Bi-sexual Sex stories|Bi-Sexual Sex Stories]]||150||(Public)
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|[[Blackmailed]]||345||(Public)
|-
|[[Blessed Union]]||43||(WIP: Please Do Not Edit)
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|[[Blue Mountain University]]||129||(Public)
|-
|[[Boarding School Magic]]||48||(Public)
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|[[Boarding School Whores]]||28||(WIP)
|-
|[[+Boy Scouts Bi-Sexual Bangup]] ||44||(Please Do Not Edit
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|[[Brood]]||6|| (Private)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/25/2013, only 6 pages.
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|[[The Breeding Games]]||88||(Public)
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|[[Camp to Remember]] (Gay)||20||(Public)
|-
|[[Catgirl Adventures]]||14|| (Do Not Edit New story! One ending so far. 2/8/14)
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|[[Cecilia]]||20||(Public)
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|[[Celebrities!]]||40||(Public)
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|[[Cellar Door]]||23||(Public)
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|[[Cheer Camp]]||7||(Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/27/2013, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Choose Your Destiny]]||91||(Public)
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|[[+Coda the Gay Sex God|Coda the Gay Sex God]]||2||(Please Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/24/2013, only 2 pages.
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|[[College: A Virgin's Fantasy]]||60|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[College Girls]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Girls}}||(Public)
|-
|[[+College Revamped]]||11||(Don't Edit)
|-
|[[College Threesome FFM - Denial and Teasing]]|| Under Construction || (Please Do Not Edit)
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|[[Country Girl]]|| 28 || (W.I.P.)
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|[[Curse of the Royals]]||7|| (Private)
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|}

==D - G==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Days in the Life of Sammy Simm]]||45||(Public)
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|[[Deadman Wonderland]]||14||(Feel free to edit, 1 writer per branch of sin+personality combo)
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|[[Death Will Come]] ||43|| (Public)
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|[[Decisions]]||25|| (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Demon's Host]]||29|| {Do Not Edit}
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|[[ Deutsche Geschichten]]||20||(Public)
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|[[Desert Island]] ||63|| (Public)
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|[[The Devils Daughter|The Devil's Daughter]] ||594||(Public)
|-
|[[Dirty Me]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Dirty Me}}||(Public) (Please ask before editing and read [[Dirty Me/Info|this]]) W.I.P
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|[[Double-Blind Desire]]||5||(Private)(new author, WIP until I can build solid foundation)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/19/2013, only 5 pages.
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|[[Down The Rabbit Hole]]||362||(Hail Eris!) (Public)
|-
|[[Downfall]]||({{PAGESINCAT:Downfall}}) WIP || (Please do not add or edit anything but spelling mistakes)
|-
|[[Dragon Life]]||1|| (Public)
|-
|[[Dread]]||104||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Druglord]]||27|| (Public)
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|[[Dungeons and Dragons]]||250||(Public)
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|[[The Echidna Tale]] (Monster girl, transformation)||37|| (Public)
|-
|[[ENF Nightmare Adventure]] ||0|| (WIP - Do Not Edit Please!)
|-
|[[Erotic Adventures of a Gentleman Spy]]||17|| (private - Do Not Edit Please!)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/29/2013, only 17 pages.
|-
|[[erotic life|Erotic Life]]||29||(w.i.p.)(Public)(please edit)
|-
|[[The Ever Changing World In Which I Live]]||12|| (Do Not Edit Yet Please)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/8/2013, only 12 pages.
|-
|[[Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager|Extraordinary Life of a Not So Common Teenager]]||51|| (Public)
|-
|[[Faith's punishment]]||WIP (growing daily)||(Public)
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|[[The Family Dog]] || WIP {{PAGESINCAT:The Family Dog}}|| (Public)
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|[[family guy|Family Guy]]||4||(Public)
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|[[Family Ties]]||185|| (Public)
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|[[Family Possession]]||41||(Public)
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|[[The Family Secret]]||5||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Fantasy Life]]||63||(Can be as crazy as you want it to be. Please go out of your way to make sure that all contributions use proper grammar. Any contributions with poor grammar will be deleted promptly.)
|-
|[[Fantasy Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT: Fantasy Sex}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Finky's Mansion]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Finky's Mansion}}||(WIP Do not edit)
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|[[First Day At College]](Gay)||{{PAGESINCAT:First Day At College}}||(Do Not Edit)
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|[[Freedom Keeper]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Freedom Keeper}}||(Public)(Please Edit and add more pages, just keep it realistic!)
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|[[Freshman Dream]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Freshman Dream}}||(Public)
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|[[Freshman Year]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Freshman Year}}||(Public)
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|[[Friday night|Friday Night]] ||49||(Public)
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|[[Fucking Classy]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Fucking Classy}}||(Public)
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|[[Fuck Your Friend]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Fuck Your Friend}}||(Public)
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|[[Furry Fling]]||8||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/16/2013, only 8 pages.
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|[[Furry World]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Furry World}}||(Public)
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|[[Futa Club]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Futa Club}}|| (private)
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|[[Futa Kingdom]] ||10|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/29/2013, only 10 pages.
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|[[Game of Thrones]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Game of Thrones}}||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/24/2013, only 7 pages.
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|[[Gay Academy]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Gay Academy}}||(Public)
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|[[Gay Middle School Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Gay Middle School Sex}}||(Public)
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|[[Gay School Fun]]||8||(Public)||Pit watchlist, only 8 pages
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|[[A Gifted Woman]]||5|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, 1 page edited 1/25/2014, other pages 2011-2012, only 5 pages.
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|[[Getting a job|Getting a Job]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Getting a job}}||(Public)
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|[[Generic Fantasy: The Erotic Adventure]]||5||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edited 11/25/2013, only 5 pages.
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|[[Girl Island]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Island}}|| (Public)
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|[[A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME|A Girl on Girl: My First Time]] (Lesbian)||{{PAGESINCAT:A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME}}|| (Public)
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|[[Girl Scout Cookies]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Cookies}}|| (Public)
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|[[Girl Scout Camp]] (The Sequel)||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Camp}}|| (Public)
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|[[The Girls are your Playthings|The Girls Are Your Playthings]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Girls are your Playthings}}||(WIP) (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Girlngirl High]] (Lesbian)||{{PAGESINCAT:Girlngirl High}}||(Public) Updated 4/16/2014||'''Mostly''' complete. See first page discussion for details
|-
|[[Girly Boy]] (bi)||20|| (WIP)
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|[[Good son]] (bi) ||{{PAGESINCAT:Good son}}|| (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Goodbye]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Goodbye}}||(Do Not Edit)
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|[[The Greatest Weekend Ever]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Greatest Weekend Ever}}|| (Public)
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|}

==H - K==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
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|[[Hailey The Whore]]||35
|-
|[[The Hallway of infinity|The Hallway of Infinity]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Hallway of infinity}}||(Public)
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|[[Halo: After Reach]] ||9||(Public)(but do not edit)||Pit watchlist, last edited 2/20/2014, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Hardon High]] (Gay)||{{PAGESINCAT:Hardon High}}||(Public)
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|[[The Harem]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Harem}}||(WIP, Do Not Edit)
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|[[Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex}}||(Public)
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|[[Hentai]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Hentai}} ||(Public)
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|[[Harry Potter and the Years of Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter and the Years of Sex}}|| (Public (Add all you want))
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|[[Harry Potter: Master]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter: Master}}||(Public)
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|[[Heroes of Pleasure| Heroes of Pleasure]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Heroes of Pleasure}}||(Do Not Edit)
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|[[High School: Getting Lucky]]||{{PAGESINCAT:High School: Getting Lucky}}||(Public) WIP
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|[[High School]]||500+||(Public)
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|[[A High School Fantasy]]||15 ||(Public)
|-
|[[High School: A new beginning|High School: A New Beginning]]||18||(Public)
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|[[High School Redux‎‎]]||14||(Public)
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|[[High School: The Way It Should Have Been]]|| 60|| (Public)
|-
|[[Hipster Girl Exposed]]|| - || Not yet open to public
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|[[Hollywood Romp]]||26|| (Public)
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|[[Hooker life|Hooker Life]]||15+|| (Public)
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|[[Homecoming]]||6|| (Private, Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edited 2/27/2014, only 6 pages.
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|[[Home Early]]|| 45||(Public)
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|[[Horned Devil]]||23||(WIP)
|-
|[[Hot and Horny]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Hot and Horny}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Hot Mom]]||11||(Public)(Incest)(Don't edit existing pages.)||Pit watchlist, last edited 12/16/2013, only 11 pages.
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|[[The House on Horny Hill]]|| 20 || W.I.P. Not yet open to public
|-
|[[The Humiliation of Katie]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Humiliation of Katie}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Hunger Games]]||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edited 8/1/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Hunger Games : Sex addition|Hunger Games: Sex Addition]]||12||(Public)(Please edit, use good grammar)
|-
|[[Hush (Under Construction)|Hush]] (Under Construction)||22||(Do Not Edit)
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|[[Icarly: Iwant sex|iCarly: iWant Sex]]|| 309 ||(Public)
|-
|[[I'll Be Gentle...]]|| 50+ ||(Public)
|-
|[[Im just a boy|I'm just a boy]]||9||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/22/2013, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Incubus]] (Bisexual Pirate Fantasy)||41 ||(Public)
|-
|[[inevitable]]||4||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/11/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[+Infinity]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:+Infinity}}||(Public)||Moved, please don't try to put your story on top by adding + to it.
|-
|[[Interracial Extravganza]]|| 200||(Public) W.I.P (Any editing welcome, make all stories about interracial sex, only good spelling and grammar.)
|-
|[[In Our Bath]] ||15|| (Private)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/9/2013, only 15 pages.
|-
|[["In space no one can hear you breed"|In Space No One Can Hear You Breed]]|| 31 || (Public)
|-
|[[Invisible]]||45 ||(Public)
|-
|[[Invisible Boy]]||14|| (Public) ||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/13/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Jackie's Dilemma's]]||2||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/11/2014, only 2 pages.
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|[[Jade Rogue]]||13 ||(Public)
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|[[A Job]] || 40 || (Public)
|-
|[[Jessica's Choices]]||15|| (Under construction. Please Do not edit.)
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|[[Junior High]] ||17|| (Public)
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|[[Just Another Day]] ||31|| (Public)
|-
|[[Just Do It Already!]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Just Do It Already!}}||(Public)
|-
|[[ Kayla's Adventures: Party]]||9|| private, W.I.P.||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/30/2013, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[A Knight's Quest]]||16|| (Under construction. Do not edit yet.)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/4/2013, only 16 pages.
|-
|[[KPOP Love Story]]|| 14+ || (Do not edit.)
|-
|}

==L - O==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
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|[[Labyrinth of Lust]]||207|| (Public)
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|[[Lady Van Helsing]] ||101|| (Public)
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|[[Last day of school|Last Day of School]] ||13|| (Public)
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|[[Lara Croft: The Untold Tales]]||13||(Fuck this story, too hard to write. Not enough time. - Bojangles)
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|[[Legend of Krystal]]||61|| public
|-
|[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]||125|| (Public)
|-
|[[Let's Burn Down a Castle]]||248|| (Public)
|-
|[[The life of a medieval princess|The Life of a Medieval Princess]]||400|| (Public - but please read the [[Princess Editor's Guide]]. Mainly focused around the story with an erotic background and occasional sexual encounters. Might contain extreme violence and mutilation if you (or someone else) screws up during a fight.)
|-
|[[The Life of Others ]]||14
|-
|[[The Life of Cassie]]||5||(Public but Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/22/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Life of Unlimited Chances]]||12 ||(Public)
|-
|[[Life of a 13 year old|Life of a 13 Year Old]]|| 315|| (Do Not Edit, Update Jan, 25, 2014)
|-
|[[Life of a sexy Nerd|Life of a sexy Nerd]]||10||public
|-
|[[Life of a pedo|Life of a pedo]] ||3|| (W.I.P)(DON'T EDIT)||Pit watchlist, last edit 3/9/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Lost in the city|Lost in the City]]||41||(W.I.P)(Public)
|-
|[[Lucid dreams]]||11||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 4/16/2014, only 11 pages.
|-
|[[Lucky?]]||14|| Private||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/11/2013, only 14 pages.
|-
|[[March of the Dark Elves]]||{{PAGESINCAT:March of the Dark Elves}} ||(Public)
|-
|[[Mage Games]] (Gay Fantasy)||31||(Public)
|-
|[[Marion]]||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/9/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Masked Crimes]]||13|| W.I.P., (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Mass Effect: Sex Edition]]||19|| W.I.P., (Public, but please have prior gaming knowledge of the Mass Effect series)
|-
|[[Megan:Menu|Megan]] (An Exercise In Violence)||24|| complete. Do not edit.
|-
|[[Melanie and Michael]]||14|| W.I.P., (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Medieval Fun]]||14|| (Private) W.I.P DO NOT EDIT AON!
|-
|[[Meet'n'fuck Beach Vacation]]||34||(Public)
|-
|[[Meet the Kirks]]||7||(WIP. Do not edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/14/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Middle School]]||26||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Mind Controlling Device]]||31||(Public)
|-
|[[Misfortunes of an Asian College Girl]]||18||(Public)
|-
|[[My wish]]||4||public||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/11/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Naruto: Power of Mind]]||5||(Private)(Don't edit but you can contribute)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/25/2014, only 5 pages.
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|[[Neighborhood]]||33||(Public
|-
|[[The New God]] ||145||(Public)
|-
|[[New Life in some way]]||28||(Public)
|-
|[[Ninja Kittehs From Space!]]||22||(Public)
|-
|[[Not So Average Alex]]||8||( Public (gay) )||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/17/2013, only 8 pages.
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|[[Numbers]]||27||(Kinda Public)
|-
|[[Obscura]]||136||(Public)(Please add pages!)
|-
|[[Occupational Therapy]] (Gay)||24||(Public)
|-
|[[Ongoing Story]] ||560||(Some paths finished, others are work in Progress)
|-
|[[Oops! You're Naked!]] ||245||(Public)
|-
|[[The Ordinary Life of a Prostitute]]||13||(Public)
|-
|[[Organized Crime]]||36||(W.I.P, Please Edit, No spelling/grammar errors allowed.)
|-
|}

==P - S==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
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|[[the patchwork universe|The Patchwork Universe]]||2|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/2/2014, only 10 pages.
|-
|[[patriarch's legacy|Patriarch's Legacy]]||10||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/27/2013, only 10 pages.
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|[[Pedo Plushie|The Adventures of a Pedo Plushie]]||26|| (Public)
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|[[Pedo romp]]||378||(Public)||
|-
|[[Percy Jackson & Friends]]||32||(Public)
|-
|[[Percy Jackson God Of All]]||11|| (Private, WIP) (Please do not edit yet Updated March 17th, 2014)
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|[[Pervert]]||72||(Public)
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|[[Perverted Thirteen-Year-Old]]||96|| (Public)
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|[[Phineas and Ferb: The Erotic Adventures]]||17|| (Public)
|-
|[[Pi Pi Pi]]||304|| (Public)
|-
|[[Pimp]]||81|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Pimping Your Roommate]] ||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/27/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]||27|| (W.I.P., Private)
|-
|[[Pokemon: Sexy Version]]||12||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/20/2014, only 12 pages.
|-
|[[Pokesex]]||245|| (Public)
|-
|[[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|A Portrait of an American Girl Named Myra]]||72|| (Public)
|-
|[[Possessed]]||141|| (Public)
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|[[The Power of Will]]||60|| (W.I.P) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Princess Problems]]||7||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/25/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Public Nudity]]||29|| ((Public))
|-
|[[Punishment for your wife]]||149|| (Public)
|-
|[[ The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra ]]||116|| (***NEW*** You play a Sheriff who punishes his teenage daughter and her best friend - Please Do Not Edit - Comments welcome on talk page)
|-
|[[Queen of Lust]]||2||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/22/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[The Quest For Treguards Treasure]]||274|| (Public)
|-
|[[Rampage]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Rampage}}|| (Public-but any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted)
|-
|[[Red Mobster]]||67|| (Public)
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|[[School Fun]]||57||(Public)
|-
|[[Der Schulleiter]]||4|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/31/2014, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Sex Adventure]]||49|| (W.I.P) (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Sex and other Addictions]]||5||(Private)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/15/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Sex in Ancient Rome]]||7||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/11/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[The Sexual Adventures of You]]||119|| (Public)
|-
|[[Sexy World]]||31|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Shin Calibur]]||9||(Don't Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/9/2014, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Sissies love black cock]] || 41 || (Public W.I.P)
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|[[Sister Complex]] || W.I.P || (Public - No guro)
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|[[sisters]]||4||(do not edit yet)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/30/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Sisters and other Victims]]||{{PAGESINCAT:SAOV}} || (Public)
|-
|[[Skyrim: A Sexual Adventure]]||4||(Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/13/2013, only 4 pages.
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|[[Slasher]]||20+||(Public)
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|[[The Slave Mansion]]||3|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/30/2013, only 3 pages.
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|[[Slave to the Mist]]|| 40+ || (Public)
|-
|[[Smutty Sex Romp]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Smutty Sex Romp}} || (Public-For experienced writers with a firm grasp of grammar and spelling only. Any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted)
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|[[SpaceShip5EX]] ||50 || (Work In Progress) (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Special Agent 0069]]||8|| (W.I.P. - Do Not Edit)
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|[[SSS]]||15|| private
|-
|[[Star Girl Fighters Erotic Noval Diary: Stories Fantasy]]||16|| (W.I.P DON'T EDIT)
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|[[Star Trek: A Night with Troi]]||35|| (Public)
|-
|[[Star Trek: Jadzia's Adventure]]||81|| (Do Not Edit. Ask [[User talk:Kenny24|here]] if you would like to add)
|-
|[[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]||896|| (Public)
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|[[Stalker]]||184||(Public)
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|[[The Story of Jack Foster]]||341|| (Public)
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|[[Summer Party]]||34||(Public)
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|[[Super Power Fantasy]] ||14|| (Public)
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|[[Super Sex Adventure]] ||2|| (Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/6/2013, only 2 pages.
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|[[Supershifter]] ||14|| (Public)
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|[[Survive]] ||21|| (Public)
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|[[Survival Story]] ||65|| (Public)
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|[[Superhero?]] ||34|| (Public)||Updated April 19th, 2014. 1 new page
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|}

==T - W==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
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|[[The Tease]]||22|| (Public)
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|[[Teenager]] ||141|| (Public)
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|[[Teen Years]]||36|| (Private)(Site Under Construction, access denied; additions will be removed)
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|[[Temptation]]||17|| (Do Not Edit)
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|[[Testing Facility #80085]]||25||(Public)
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|[[Theme Park]]||15|| (Private)
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|[[The Long Road to Graduation]] || 10 || (Private)(W.I.P)
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|[[This Is You(Gay)]]||16|| (W.I.P)
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|[[This Story Will Piss You Off]]||60|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Time Lord]]||13|| (Public)
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|[[The Town]]||14|| (Public)
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|[[The Transformation Laboratory]]||28|| ((Public)
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|[[To Pee or not To Pee]]||5|| private for now, please don't edit||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/4/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Tori and the space creature]]||10|| (Public)
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|[[Tree of Doom]] ||40|| (Public)
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|[[Truth or Dare Game]]||20|| (Public make it good)
|-
|[[Twisted Family]]||5||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 3/26/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Ty's Story]] ||146|| (Public)
|-
|[[University Daze]]||727|| (Public)
|-
|[[Unlucky Girl]]||16|| (Public, Please Edit)
|-
|[[Vampire Weekend]]||331|| (Public)
|-
|[[Verse]]||22|| (WIP; Conditionally Public, please only contribute/edit if you're good friends with the English language.)
|-
|[[Victim]]||332|| (Public)
|-
|[[Victorious: Behind the Scenes]]||103|| (Public)(Please add pages!)
|-
|[[Waking up in a Mansion]]||26|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Walt Jizzney's Magic Kingdom]]||66|| (Public)
|-
|[[War Pigs]]||82|| (Do Not Edit)
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|[[War and Sex]]||211|| (Public)
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|[[Warped]]||12|| (Public)
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|[[Whore it Out]]||121|| (Public)
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|[[Wish Coin]]||82|| (Public)
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|[[Wild Times]]||33|| (Do not edit)
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|[[Witch of Egypt]]||18|| (Public - Please read the instructions on the first page, follow the guidelines or risk deletion!)
|-
|[[Witch's Power]]||42|| (do not edit)
|-
|[[Work Attire]]||173|| (Public)
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|[[The World Of Monster]]||9||(Please Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/11/2013, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[World of Wolves]] ||79|| (Public)
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|[[Wrestling X-rated]]||32|| (Public)
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|}

==X - Z==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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|[[XXX Sorority Sisters]]||4||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/14/2014, only 4 pages.
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|[[ Yakyuken Quest]]|| 0 || ( public, but poorly spelled and blocked entries will be deleted)
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|[[Yes, Yes, Yes, Your Honor]] ||261||(Public)
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|[[You Are An Orc]] || 468|| {Public, please read guidelines in the discussion}
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|[[You Disappear]] ||46|| (Public though please do not edit Female Under 18 8 branch
|-
|[[Young Love]] ||29|| (Under Construction Please Do Not Edit)
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|[[Young Teen on her way home]] ||20|| (Under Construction)
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|[[Your Best Friend's Younger Sister]]||141|| (Public - Use Proper Grammar Please)
|-
|[[Your Reality Ring]]||9|| WIP (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/30/2014, only 1 page edited, rest last edited 12/17/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Your Queer Weekend Adventure]]||20|| (Under Construction Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Your Brother's Girlfriend]]||16||(Public) (You may edit but Keep the main characters)
|-
|[[Youth Pastor]] ||3||(Public) (please add what you want, but leave the main characters)||Pit watchlist, last edit 3/27/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[The Zoo]] (Gay Furry) ||74|| (Public)
|-
|[[Zombie Rampage]]||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/10/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|}

== Poor Taste Stories ==

'''FOR 21+''' No limits to content. Don't blame us.

{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Note
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|[[Chimpout]]||20|| WIP DON'T EDIT
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|[[Fuckin Screwed Up]]||122|| Work On It, It's Public
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|[[Molest Little Boys]] ||18||(Work On It, It's Public)
|-
|[[One Messed Up Day]]||22
|-
|[[One Messed Up Story]]||220|| Work On It, It's Public
|-
|[[S.W.A.T.]]||23||(Just Started, PLEASE HELP WITH IDEAS, ITS PUBLIC)
|-
|[[Terror in Tibet]]||31||(DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Would You, Could You, Fuck A Goat?!]]||15||(Work On It(please), It's Public)
|}

[[Category:System Pages]]
[[Category:Adult Stories]]

All Adult Stories

2014-04-27T09:35:29Z

WCold:

==Adult Stories==
'''Alphabetize your entries please'''
(If you don't see your story here anymore, please check [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]], since the old, unfinished stories with few pages have been moved there)

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'''FOR 18+:''' No limits to content.

==# - C==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
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|[[The 007 Stories]] ||51|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Abandoned Adult Story]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Abandoned Adult Story}}||(Do not edit without permission. You can ask me at: [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime]])
|-
|[[Adventure at the TG Thriftshop]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Adventure at the TG Thriftshop}}|| (Public; Please Add!) Updated 4/24/2014
|-
|[[Adventures of Valour]]||13|| (WIP Do not edit)
|-
|[[Alien Adventure]]||21||(Public)
|-
|[[All Alone]] (Lesbian)||111||(Public)
|-
|[[All in the Family]]||141|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Amazon]] ||45|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Android Training]]||2||(Private)
|-
|[[+annabeth|Annabeth]]||21||(Public)
|-
|[[An Airplane Journey]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[Angorea]]||2||(A new, story-heavy adventure - Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/28/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Another Day At School...]] ||94||(Public)
|-
|[[Anime School]]||51||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Answer Is Yes]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Answer Is Yes}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[Archie's Gay Adventure]] (Gay)||88|| (Public)
|-
|[[Archie's Sexual Adventure]]||91||(Public)
|-
|[[Ardenstone]]||42|||(Do Not Edit) W.I.P. - Day 1 complete, plenty more to come!
|-
|[[Assassin]]||21|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Assassin's Guild]]||2||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/30/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Badlands]]||25|| (Public)
|-
|[[Band Forming thing|Band Forming Thing]]||123||(Public)
|-
|[[Beach Vacation]]||63||(Public)
|-
|[[Beachside Holiday]]||37||(Public)
|-
|[[Benighted]]||10|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[A Big Ugly Story]]||24|| (Public)
|-
|[[Big Cock Fun]] (Gay)||47||(Under Construction)(Create new pages if you want, just please leave the originals alone.)
|-
|[[Birthday Bottom Boy's Blackout Bar-night]] (Gay)||1,032||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Bi-sexual Sex stories|Bi-Sexual Sex Stories]]||150||(Public)
|-
|[[Blackmailed]]||345||(Public)
|-
|[[Blessed Union]]||43||(WIP: Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Blue Mountain University]]||129||(Public)
|-
|[[Boarding School Magic]]||48||(Public)
|-
|[[Boarding School Whores]]||28||(WIP)
|-
|[[+Boy Scouts Bi-Sexual Bangup]] ||44||(Please Do Not Edit
|-
|[[Brood]]||6|| (Private)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/25/2013, only 6 pages.
|-
|[[The Breeding Games]]||88||(Public)
|-
|[[Camp to Remember]] (Gay)||20||(Public)
|-
|[[Catgirl Adventures]]||14|| (Do Not Edit New story! One ending so far. 2/8/14)
|-
|[[Cecilia]]||20||(Public)
|-
|[[Celebrities!]]||40||(Public)
|-
|[[Cellar Door]]||23||(Public)
|-
|[[Cheer Camp]]||7||(Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/27/2013, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Choose Your Destiny]]||91||(Public)
|-
|[[+Coda the Gay Sex God|Coda the Gay Sex God]]||2||(Please Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/24/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[College: A Virgin's Fantasy]]||60|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[College Girls]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Girls}}||(Public)
|-
|[[+College Revamped]]||11||(Don't Edit)
|-
|[[College Threesome FFM - Denial and Teasing]]|| Under Construction || (Please Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Country Girl]]|| 28 || (W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Curse of the Royals]]||7|| (Private)
|-
|}

==D - G==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Days in the Life of Sammy Simm]]||45||(Public)
|-
|[[Deadman Wonderland]]||14||(Feel free to edit, 1 writer per branch of sin+personality combo)
|-
|[[Death Will Come]] ||43|| (Public)
|-
|[[Decisions]]||25|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Demon's Host]]||29|| {Do Not Edit}
|-
|[[ Deutsche Geschichten]]||20||(Public)
|-
|[[Desert Island]] ||63|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Devils Daughter|The Devil's Daughter]] ||594||(Public)
|-
|[[Dirty Me]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Dirty Me}}||(Public) (Please ask before editing and read [[Dirty Me/Info|this]]) W.I.P
|-
|[[Double-Blind Desire]]||5||(Private)(new author, WIP until I can build solid foundation)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/19/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Down The Rabbit Hole]]||362||(Hail Eris!) (Public)
|-
|[[Downfall]]||({{PAGESINCAT:Downfall}}) WIP || (Please do not add or edit anything but spelling mistakes)
|-
|[[Dragon Life]]||1|| (Public)
|-
|[[Dread]]||104||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Druglord]]||27|| (Public)
|-
|[[Dungeons and Dragons]]||250||(Public)
|-
|[[The Echidna Tale]] (Monster girl, transformation)||37|| (Public)
|-
|[[ENF Nightmare Adventure]] ||0|| (WIP - Do Not Edit Please!)
|-
|[[Erotic Adventures of a Gentleman Spy]]||17|| (private - Do Not Edit Please!)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/29/2013, only 17 pages.
|-
|[[erotic life|Erotic Life]]||29||(w.i.p.)(Public)(please edit)
|-
|[[The Ever Changing World In Which I Live]]||12|| (Do Not Edit Yet Please)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/8/2013, only 12 pages.
|-
|[[Extraordinary life of a not so common teenager|Extraordinary Life of a Not So Common Teenager]]||51|| (Public)
|-
|[[Faith's punishment]]||WIP (growing daily)||(Public)
|-
|[[The Family Dog]] || WIP {{PAGESINCAT:The Family Dog}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[family guy|Family Guy]]||4||(Public)
|-
|[[Family Ties]]||185|| (Public)
|-
|[[Family Possession]]||41||(Public)
|-
|[[The Family Secret]]||5||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Fantasy Life]]||63||(Can be as crazy as you want it to be. Please go out of your way to make sure that all contributions use proper grammar. Any contributions with poor grammar will be deleted promptly.)
|-
|[[Fantasy Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT: Fantasy Sex}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Finky's Mansion]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Finky's Mansion}}||(WIP Do not edit)
|-
|[[First Day At College]](Gay)||{{PAGESINCAT:First Day At College}}||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Freedom Keeper]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Freedom Keeper}}||(Public)(Please Edit and add more pages, just keep it realistic!)
|-
|[[Freshman Dream]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Freshman Dream}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Freshman Year]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Freshman Year}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Friday night|Friday Night]] ||49||(Public)
|-
|[[Fucking Classy]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Fucking Classy}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Fuck Your Friend]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:Fuck Your Friend}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Furry Fling]]||8||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/16/2013, only 8 pages.
|-
|[[Furry World]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Furry World}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Futa Club]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Futa Club}}|| (private)
|-
|[[Futa Kingdom]] ||10|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/29/2013, only 10 pages.
|-
|[[Game of Thrones]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Game of Thrones}}||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/24/2013, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Gay Academy]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Gay Academy}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Gay Middle School Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Gay Middle School Sex}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Gay School Fun]]||8||(Public)||Pit watchlist, only 8 pages
|-
|[[A Gifted Woman]]||5|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, 1 page edited 1/25/2014, other pages 2011-2012, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Getting a job|Getting a Job]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Getting a job}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Generic Fantasy: The Erotic Adventure]]||5||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edited 11/25/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Girl Island]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Island}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME|A Girl on Girl: My First Time]] (Lesbian)||{{PAGESINCAT:A girl on girl MY FIRST TIME}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Cookies]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Cookies}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[Girl Scout Camp]] (The Sequel)||{{PAGESINCAT:Girl Scout Camp}}|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Girls are your Playthings|The Girls Are Your Playthings]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Girls are your Playthings}}||(WIP) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Girlngirl High]] (Lesbian)||{{PAGESINCAT:Girlngirl High}}||(Public) Updated 4/16/2014||'''Mostly''' complete. See first page discussion for details
|-
|[[Girly Boy]] (bi)||20|| (WIP)
|-
|[[Good son]] (bi) ||{{PAGESINCAT:Good son}}|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Goodbye]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Goodbye}}||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[The Greatest Weekend Ever]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Greatest Weekend Ever}}|| (Public)
|-
|}

==H - K==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Hailey The Whore]]||35
|-
|[[The Hallway of infinity|The Hallway of Infinity]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Hallway of infinity}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Halo: After Reach]] ||9||(Public)(but do not edit)||Pit watchlist, last edited 2/20/2014, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Hardon High]] (Gay)||{{PAGESINCAT:Hardon High}}||(Public)
|-
|[[The Harem]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Harem}}||(WIP, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter and the Connubialis Hex}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Hentai]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Hentai}} ||(Public)
|-
|[[Harry Potter and the Years of Sex]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter and the Years of Sex}}|| (Public (Add all you want))
|-
|[[Harry Potter: Master]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Harry Potter: Master}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Heroes of Pleasure| Heroes of Pleasure]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Heroes of Pleasure}}||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[High School: Getting Lucky]]||{{PAGESINCAT:High School: Getting Lucky}}||(Public) WIP
|-
|[[High School]]||500+||(Public)
|-
|[[A High School Fantasy]]||15 ||(Public)
|-
|[[High School: A new beginning|High School: A New Beginning]]||18||(Public)
|-
|[[High School Redux‎‎]]||14||(Public)
|-
|[[High School: The Way It Should Have Been]]|| 60|| (Public)
|-
|[[Hipster Girl Exposed]]|| - || Not yet open to public
|-
|[[Hollywood Romp]]||26|| (Public)
|-
|[[Hooker life|Hooker Life]]||15+|| (Public)
|-
|[[Homecoming]]||6|| (Private, Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edited 2/27/2014, only 6 pages.
|-
|[[Home Early]]|| 45||(Public)
|-
|[[Horned Devil]]||23||(WIP)
|-
|[[Hot and Horny]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Hot and Horny}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Hot Mom]]||11||(Public)(Incest)(Don't edit existing pages.)||Pit watchlist, last edited 12/16/2013, only 11 pages.
|-
|[[The House on Horny Hill]]|| 20 || W.I.P. Not yet open to public
|-
|[[The Humiliation of Katie]]||{{PAGESINCAT:The Humiliation of Katie}}||(Public)
|-
|[[Hunger Games]]||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edited 8/1/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Hunger Games : Sex addition|Hunger Games: Sex Addition]]||12||(Public)(Please edit, use good grammar)
|-
|[[Hush (Under Construction)|Hush]] (Under Construction)||22||(Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Icarly: Iwant sex|iCarly: iWant Sex]]|| 309 ||(Public)
|-
|[[I'll Be Gentle...]]|| 50+ ||(Public)
|-
|[[Im just a boy|I'm just a boy]]||9||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/22/2013, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Incubus]] (Bisexual Pirate Fantasy)||41 ||(Public)
|-
|[[inevitable]]||4||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/11/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[+Infinity]] ||{{PAGESINCAT:+Infinity}}||(Public)||Moved, please don't try to put your story on top by adding + to it.
|-
|[[Interracial Extravganza]]|| 200||(Public) W.I.P (Any editing welcome, make all stories about interracial sex, only good spelling and grammar.)
|-
|[[In Our Bath]] ||15|| (Private)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/9/2013, only 15 pages.
|-
|[["In space no one can hear you breed"|In Space No One Can Hear You Breed]]|| 31 || (Public)
|-
|[[Invisible]]||45 ||(Public)
|-
|[[Invisible Boy]]||14|| (Public) ||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/13/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Jackie's Dilemma's]]||2||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/11/2014, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Jade Rogue]]||13 ||(Public)
|-
|[[A Job]] || 40 || (Public)
|-
|[[Jessica's Choices]]||15|| (Under construction. Please Do not edit.)
|-
|[[Junior High]] ||17|| (Public)
|-
|[[Just Another Day]] ||31|| (Public)
|-
|[[Just Do It Already!]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Just Do It Already!}}||(Public)
|-
|[[ Kayla's Adventures: Party]]||9|| private, W.I.P.||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/30/2013, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[A Knight's Quest]]||16|| (Under construction. Do not edit yet.)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/4/2013, only 16 pages.
|-
|[[KPOP Love Story]]|| 14+ || (Do not edit.)
|-
|}

==L - O==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[Labyrinth of Lust]]||207|| (Public)
|-
|[[Lady Van Helsing]] ||101|| (Public)
|-
|[[Last day of school|Last Day of School]] ||13|| (Public)
|-
|[[Lara Croft: The Untold Tales]]||13||(Fuck this story, too hard to write. Not enough time. - Bojangles)
|-
|[[Legend of Krystal]]||61|| public
|-
|[[Legend of the Trailer Park]]||125|| (Public)
|-
|[[Let's Burn Down a Castle]]||248|| (Public)
|-
|[[The life of a medieval princess|The Life of a Medieval Princess]]||400|| (Public - but please read the [[Princess Editor's Guide]]. Mainly focused around the story with an erotic background and occasional sexual encounters. Might contain extreme violence and mutilation if you (or someone else) screws up during a fight.)
|-
|[[The Life of Others ]]||14
|-
|[[The Life of Cassie]]||5||(Public but Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/22/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Life of Unlimited Chances]]||12 ||(Public)
|-
|[[Life of a 13 year old|Life of a 13 Year Old]]|| 315|| (Do Not Edit, Update Jan, 25, 2014)
|-
|[[Life of a sexy Nerd|Life of a sexy Nerd]]||10||public
|-
|[[Life of a pedo|Life of a pedo]] ||3|| (W.I.P)(DON'T EDIT)||Pit watchlist, last edit 3/9/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Lost in the city|Lost in the City]]||41||(W.I.P)(Public)
|-
|[[Lucid dreams]]||11||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 4/16/2014, only 11 pages.
|-
|[[Lucky?]]||14|| Private||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/11/2013, only 14 pages.
|-
|[[March of the Dark Elves]]||{{PAGESINCAT:March of the Dark Elves}} ||(Public)
|-
|[[Mage Games]] (Gay Fantasy)||31||(Public)
|-
|[[Marion]]||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/9/2014, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Masked Crimes]]||13|| W.I.P., (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Mass Effect: Sex Edition]]||19|| W.I.P., (Public, but please have prior gaming knowledge of the Mass Effect series)
|-
|[[Megan:Menu|Megan]] (An Exercise In Violence)||24|| complete. Do not edit.
|-
|[[Melanie and Michael]]||14|| W.I.P., (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Medieval Fun]]||14|| (Private) W.I.P DO NOT EDIT AON!
|-
|[[Meet'n'fuck Beach Vacation]]||34||(Public)
|-
|[[Meet the Kirks]]||7||(WIP. Do not edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/14/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Middle School]]||26||(WIP)
|-
|[[The Mind Controlling Device]]||31||(Public)
|-
|[[Misfortunes of an Asian College Girl]]||18||(Public)
|-
|[[My wish]]||4||public||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/11/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Naruto: Power of Mind]]||5||(Private)(Don't edit but you can contribute)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/25/2014, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Neighborhood]]||33||(Public
|-
|[[The New God]] ||145||(Public)
|-
|[[New Life in some way]]||28||(Public)
|-
|[[Ninja Kittehs From Space!]]||22||(Public)
|-
|[[Not So Average Alex]]||8||( Public (gay) )||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/17/2013, only 8 pages.
|-
|[[Numbers]]||27||(Kinda Public)
|-
|[[Obscura]]||136||(Public)(Please add pages!)
|-
|[[Occupational Therapy]] (Gay)||24||(Public)
|-
|[[Ongoing Story]] ||560||(Some paths finished, others are work in Progress)
|-
|[[Oops! You're Naked!]] ||245||(Public)
|-
|[[The Ordinary Life of a Prostitute]]||13||(Public)
|-
|[[Organized Crime]]||36||(W.I.P, Please Edit, No spelling/grammar errors allowed.)
|-
|}

==P - S==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[the patchwork universe|The Patchwork Universe]]||2|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/2/2014, only 10 pages.
|-
|[[patriarch's legacy|Patriarch's Legacy]]||10||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/27/2013, only 10 pages.
|-
|[[Pedo Plushie|The Adventures of a Pedo Plushie]]||26|| (Public)
|-
|[[Pedo romp]]||378||(Public)||
|-
|[[Percy Jackson & Friends]]||32||(Public)
|-
|[[Percy Jackson God Of All]]||11|| (Private, WIP) (Please do not edit yet Updated March 17th, 2014)
|-
|[[Pervert]]||72||(Public)
|-
|[[Perverted Thirteen-Year-Old]]||96|| (Public)
|-
|[[Phineas and Ferb: The Erotic Adventures]]||17|| (Public)
|-
|[[Pi Pi Pi]]||304|| (Public)
|-
|[[Pimp]]||81|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Pimping Your Roommate]] ||3||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/27/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Pokemon: Gotta Sex 'em all! Kanto Edition]]||27|| (W.I.P., Private)
|-
|[[Pokemon: Sexy Version]]||12||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/20/2014, only 12 pages.
|-
|[[Pokesex]]||245|| (Public)
|-
|[[A portrait of an American Girl Named Myra|A Portrait of an American Girl Named Myra]]||72|| (Public)
|-
|[[Possessed]]||141|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Power of Will]]||60|| (W.I.P) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Princess Problems]]||7||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/25/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[Public Nudity]]||29|| ((Public))
|-
|[[Punishment for your wife]]||149|| ((Public))
|-
|[[ The Punishment of Claire and Cassandra ]]||116|| (***NEW*** You play a Sheriff who punishes his teenage daughter and her best friend - Please Do Not Edit - Comments welcome on talk page)
|-
|[[Queen of Lust]]||2||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/22/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[The Quest For Treguards Treasure]]||274|| (Public)
|-
|[[Rampage]]||{{PAGESINCAT:Rampage}}|| (Public-but any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted)
|-
|[[Red Mobster]]||67|| (Public)
|-
|[[School Fun]]||57||(Public)
|-
|[[Der Schulleiter]]||4|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/31/2014, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Sex Adventure]]||49|| (W.I.P) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Sex and other Addictions]]||5||(Private)||Pit watchlist, last edit 12/15/2013, only 5 pages.
|-
|[[Sex in Ancient Rome]]||7||(Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 1/11/2014, only 7 pages.
|-
|[[The Sexual Adventures of You]]||119|| (Public)
|-
|[[Sexy World]]||31|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Shin Calibur]]||9||(Don't Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 2/9/2014, only 9 pages.
|-
|[[Sissies love black cock]] || 41 || (Public W.I.P)
|-
|[[Sister Complex]] || W.I.P || (Public - No guro)
|-
|[[sisters]]||4||(do not edit yet)||Pit watchlist, last edit 11/30/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Sisters and other Victims]]||{{PAGESINCAT:SAOV}} || (Public)
|-
|[[Skyrim: A Sexual Adventure]]||4||(Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 8/13/2013, only 4 pages.
|-
|[[Slasher]]||20+||(Public)
|-
|[[The Slave Mansion]]||3|| (Public)||Pit watchlist, last edit 10/30/2013, only 3 pages.
|-
|[[Slave to the Mist]]|| 40+ || (Public)
|-
|[[Smutty Sex Romp]]|| {{PAGESINCAT:Smutty Sex Romp}} || (Public-For experienced writers with a firm grasp of grammar and spelling only. Any contributions with poor grammar will be immediately deleted)
|-
|[[SpaceShip5EX]] ||50 || (Work In Progress) (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Special Agent 0069]]||8|| (W.I.P. - Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[SSS]]||15|| private
|-
|[[Star Girl Fighters Erotic Noval Diary: Stories Fantasy]]||16|| (W.I.P DON'T EDIT)
|-
|[[Star Trek: A Night with Troi]]||35|| (Public)
|-
|[[Star Trek: Jadzia's Adventure]]||81|| (Do Not Edit. Ask [[User talk:Kenny24|here]] if you would like to add)
|-
|[[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]||896|| (Public)
|-
|[[Stalker]]||184||(Public)
|-
|[[The Story of Jack Foster]]||341|| (Public)
|-
|[[Summer Party]]||34||(Public)
|-
|[[Super Power Fantasy]] ||14|| (Public)
|-
|[[Super Sex Adventure]] ||2|| (Do Not Edit)||Pit watchlist, last edit 9/6/2013, only 2 pages.
|-
|[[Supershifter]] ||14|| (Public)
|-
|[[Survive]] ||21|| (Public)
|-
|[[Survival Story]] ||65|| (Public)
|-
|[[Superhero?]] ||34|| (Public)||Updated April 19th, 2014. 1 new page
|-
|}

==T - W==
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|-
! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Notes
|-
|[[The Tease]]||22|| (Public)
|-
|[[Teenager]] ||141|| (Public)
|-
|[[Teen Years]]||36|| (Private)(Site Under Construction, access denied; additions will be removed)
|-
|[[Temptation]]||17|| (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Testing Facility #80085]]||25||(Public)
|-
|[[Theme Park]]||15|| (Private)
|-
|[[The Long Road to Graduation]] || 10 || (Private)(W.I.P)
|-
|[[This Is You(Gay)]]||16|| (W.I.P)
|-
|[[This Story Will Piss You Off]]||60|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Time Lord]]||13|| (Public)
|-
|[[The Town]]||14|| (Public)
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38 36/PunishW/Do nothing/talk about sex

2014-04-24T12:58:35Z

WCold:

You took a deep breath and blurted out, "I think we need to talk about our sex life."

Janine sat down again and asked, "What about it?"

"It has become monotonous and boring."

She had obviously become tense and you quickly added: "I'm not trying to make a scandal. I'm just suggesting to try to add something new in our relations."

"Why?"

"Because I love you and want we to become happier."

"So, what do you suggest?" she finally asked.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease|I think that you need to take courses of exotic dances to comprehend that you have a gorgeous body, be proud of it and feel yourself desired.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/naked_pictures/suggest|How about make some professional nude pictures of that gorgeous body of yours and for you to feel yourself desired.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/extreme_sex|We need to try to add extremal element to our sex life.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex|How about sex with other partners?]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/family_counselor|We need to go to family counselor and find out what we are looking for in our private life.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue female party -Katherine to dinner

2014-04-24T12:49:13Z

WCold:

"Katherine, while they will be out, you should come to our house for dinner. I think it will be a good entertainment."

"That's okay." Katherine smiled. "You don't have to entertain me. I have my own ideas how to spend my free time."

"No problem," your wife joined the discussion, "we are doing it's not for you, we are doing it for ourselves. Our family dinner is quite boring mostly, so your presence is always welcome."

"If it's for you, then I'm agree," Katherine smiled more joyful this time.

"Then it's settled. I'm waiting for it." Your wife hugged her. While they'd been hugged you get huge erection by imagining them continue their hugging into kissing. But scene you saw was enough for any normal man to get a boner.

"Ok, Ok." Katherine laughed already. "My family leaves tomorrow evening, so I think can come on the next day. It will be the Monday evening."

The three of you continue your conversation. Soon you noticed that everyone were already on your backyard. After a couple of hours the time to disperse came. And after everyone left, you with Janine started cleaning. When you finished, it was almost dark around, so you both returned home.

When you two entered the living room Janine suddenly kissed you and said, "I want you to know: I'm proud of you. It is good that you have thought about Katherine." And she kissed you again.

"Nothing personal. I just admired how she looks in her swimsuit."

"You're animal." Janine poked you.

"Don't get me wrong. I think you are the hottest woman I know. But imagining you two in the same bed gives me a boner."

"So, you are babbling again about the swinging sex."

"I'm babble about nothing. I'm just saying that I would like to sit at the same table with two hot women."

"Yeah, yeah," she cut off the conversation.

For the rest of the day you watched TV together.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex_Katherine/day_5|Go to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue female party -spicy

2014-04-24T12:44:43Z

WCold:

You had told to women a funny spicy story that you recently found in the net. It was about a long time married couple in which opinionated husband bragged to his friends about his sexual accomplishments while his wife gets 5 orgasms on the side. Women liked your story and tension eased. After a laugh Katherine said, "You know the husband from your story looks similar to Roger. It's so usual for him to brag about something when in reality there are one problem on the other."

"Yeah, yeah. And he is not the only one," your wife mocked.

"C'mon," you answered, "we all have this self-confidence side."

"That's right, but some have more than the others," Katherine continued, "For example, two weeks ago Roger bragged that he can definetely finish our pool amending and take our kids to our annual lake trip. But now he had to hire some workers for the pool and I have to watch for them while he will take our kids on the trip. Not to mention that kids don't want that trip anymore. They are not 10 years old now, but he still thinks that they expect nothing more. I hope they won't kill each other there without me."

Your answer was.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_female_party_-time_for_yourself|Katherine, that's good. You'll have time for yourself.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_female_party_-Katherine_to_dinner|Katherine, while they will be out, you should come to our house for dinner.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue female party -time for yourself

2014-04-24T12:43:02Z

WCold:

"Katherine, that's good. You'll have time for yourself," you said.

"Maybe, you are right. I didn't have a free evening for a long time."

Soon you noticed that everyone were already on your backyard.

After a couple of hours the time to disperse came. And after everyone left, you with Janine started cleaning. When you finished, it was almost dark around, so you both returned home and watched TV until your eyes not stuck together.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_5|Go upstairs and sleep until tomorrow.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue Shaun -further

2014-04-24T12:40:49Z

WCold:

"I'm glad you had your time," you said, "but next time I want you to go further with him."

"Further? What do you mean." Your wife blushed.

"I think next time you should do him a blowjob."

"Blowjob? I don't think that there will be any 'next time'."

"Oh, he'll definetely try to get the 'next time' from you. But enough about it for today. We'll return to it when you'll be ready. Now you go to the party and enjoy yourself."

"Okay." She kissed you fast and left. Despite of your words you wasn't going to let it remain as it is. A new plan formed in your head, when you returned to your party.

When you went out of the house everyone already was there, divided into small groups they were chit-chatting. You strolled along your backyard, sometimes inserting a few words into the conversations.

When it was time for Bromley family to leave, you make sure that Janine wasn't around and said to them, "I've talked to Janine and she said that she'll some help tomorrow afternoon, but I have a business meeting in downtown and I can't help her. So we decided to ask Shaun if he can come and and help her at 14:00."

"Of course I can," Shaun hurried with his answer. He was obviously dreaming about another time alone with your wife.

"If it's something important I can help too," his father intervened. As always he was desperate when it comes to Janine and dreamed about taking Shaun's place.

"No I think Shaun will handle with it perfectly." You smiled.

With these words them left as well as other guests. You and your wife cleaned the mess and watched some TV until the end of the day.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_5_Shaun|Go to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue Janine helps Shaun -watch

2014-04-24T12:09:32Z

WCold:

"It won't hurt," you thought. "Quick eye, that's all." And you silently went upstairs. "What can I find? What will Janine really do? Most likely, she's sitting next to him, lecturing about the ups and downs and how to handle it," were your thoughts when you went towards bedroom.

First you heard only voices, "Do you like them?" Janine's voice said.

"Yes! yes!!" man answered breathless. "I love them! Show them to me!"

"Okay, but don't be disillusioned afterwards," you heard Janine's voice again in a playful manner.

"Never!"

It was difficult for you not to rush the last 5 meters, but you very quietly sneaked to the doorway. When you finally looked inside you saw something different from "lecturing". Shaun sat on your marriage bed and your wife was on her knees beside him. Her boobs were uncovered and Shaun played with them while both her hands played with his penis stroking him fast.

"I knew your breasts are the best," said Shaun and she giggled slutty. "Do me! Do me faster!" he asked already on his edge.

"Cum! Cum on me, naughty boy!" your wife was totally into it. And she increased stroking rate. "Cum all over my face! Cum on my boobs! Cum...!"

And he released. Released on her. Released on her face, neck and boobs. There were a lots of cum and Janine directed it. She directed in on her face. When he ended she took some sperm. Your wife took it into her mouth, tasted it and smiled like the last hooker. That was really sexy.

After a couple of minutes when their breathing returned to normal, she got up and said, "Now, pull yourself together and get going. I'll come out after you in a couple of minutes."

It was time for you to go. When you already left the doorway, you heard, "Will we do it again," that was Shaun. Your wife giggled lecherously.
"Be a man and we will do a lot more," was the last word you heard before you returned down stairs.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_Janine_helps_Shaun_-wait|Wait for their return.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue Janine helps Shaun -wait

2014-04-24T11:56:33Z

WCold:

You sat in kitchen and waited. Your guests were still partying outside.

When it was about 15 minutes after Janine left upstairs, Shaun appeared. He was nervous, but was a lot happier than in the garage. Trying to avoid your gaze he sneaked out to backyard. You didn't move a bit waiting for your missus.

After another 10 minutes your wife appeared. She renewed her makeup.

"So, how did it go?" you asked right to the point.

"You know..." she started, then blushed.

"Dear," you smiled like a shark, "don't forget it was me who gave you permission. Now I want to hear what happened in all its details."

"Okay." She blushed even more. "I found him in our bathroom and led to the bedroom. Then we sat on the bed. I said that shit happens to everyone and I know that it was difficult for him to get into such situation in front of me. I said that he has nothing to be ashamed of, because he is a handsome man and stupid joke can't change it. He began to tell that from all other women he always liked me. I stopped him and said than it's not the time for confessions. He became upset, but I said that instead I can help him to relax and laid my hand on his inner thigh. He froze. I sat on the floor beside him, unzipped his pants and released his dick," she stopped. It was obvious arousing for her just talking about it.

"And?" you said impatiently. Your excitement was as high as hers.

"He was already rock hard and I started to jerking him off. It didn't last long. He was obviously saving it for a long time. After the release I sent him out," she ended.

"And what about your makeup?"

"You know, when he started to cum I couldn't force myself to redirect it, so he cum all over my face, on my neck and a little dropped on my boobs. Because of that after he left a had to refresh my makeup."

"And? Did you like it?" you asked in naughty way.

"Maybe," she evaded. You rouse your brows and she admitted, "I liked it a lot."

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_swapping|Ask if she wants to go further in swapping.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_Shaun_-further|Suggest to go further with him next time.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue Janine helps Shaun

2014-04-24T11:52:14Z

WCold:

You found Janine in the kitchen. She was preparing vegetables, instead of eaten ones.

"We need to talk," you said.

"Wait a minute," she answered and took vegetables to the backyard.

"What is it?" Janine asked when she returned to you.

"You know it's about Shaun," you tried to bring the conversation to subject.

"Oh, yes. His father's joke turned out very bad. Poor kid." She obviously felt sorry for him.

"You know? He has a thing for you."

"I know. It's so cute." She smiled.

"That's it became worse when you laughed at him," you put a pressure.

"I know. And I am ashamed."

"He is upstairs now brings himself into order in our bathroom. I think you need to come to him and made him calm."

"I am ashamed, but, you know, I don't think I can do something not to make things worse," Janine answered. You took a pause and looked into her eyes.

"You can caress him. Help him by your hand," when you said it your wife's eyes widened. "I am ashamed before him too."

"I don't know..." she slightly protested.

"Remember, we were talking before?" you said minding conversation about swinging and she understood it. "I give you permission to help him by your hand."

"You sure?" she's still uncertain.

"You know you have a permission and you won't get a pleasure. It's not a cheating." After that your tone changed to maximum confident, "Go to him."

Still uncertain your wife went upstairs.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_Janine_helps_Shaun_-wait|Wait for their return.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_Janine_helps_Shaun_-watch|Take a quick eye.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue Ellen helps Shaun

2014-04-24T11:45:45Z

WCold:

You found Ellen in the backyard. She was sitting in deckchair alone. She was drinking beer. By her behavior you thought that she was about to explode.

"Hi, Ellen," you said.

"Hi, Daniel." It was obvious that you wasn't in her favourite list right now. She sipped looking into space. "Do you want something?"

"I wanted..." You sighed. "To tell you that Shaun is upstairs bringing himself into order. Maybe, you can go and check how is he?"

"Okay." She got up. "Ellen will go and check," she said in 3rd person about herself. "While others make shit, Ellen cleans it."

She glanced at her husband and sighed through teeth. He was about to do something stupid near your wife again. Today he was unbearable.

You turned back to Ellen. She went to the house. Her back showed how angry she still was. You had to do something before everything became worse. So you ran towards her and said, "Ellen you know. I like Shaun. He is smart kid, but still a kid. It's common for them to fall in love with older women like teachers. But it will go away eventually. Someone other will take that place in his heart. He will find someone closer and will be happy."

Ellen thought a little, then suddenly kisses you at cheek and said, "Thanks." Her mood improved and she went upstairs.

Your wife quietly came from behind and hugged you.

"What was that for?" Janine asked.

"It's nothing. Just for being the best neighbor in whole world."

"Really?" she laughed and returned to company.

You still had been worrying about Shaun, but you wanted to drink something. So you

*[[38_36/PunishW/Ellen_and_Shaun/day_4_barbecue_watch|Quietly check upstairs how they are.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_return_to_party|Return to party.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 4 barbecue

2014-04-24T11:34:25Z

WCold:

Today was saturday so you both sleep until 10. When you finally got up it was time to prepare for barbecue.

At 1:30pm [[38_36/PunishW/neighbours|neighbours]] started to gather. Today as always were Scheers, Seldins and Bromleys families en banc, except the Scheers kids. Roger said something about birthday and courses in relation with their absence, but you didn't really listen because you tinkered with deckchairs.

Everything was the same as always on these traditional barbecues. Chris Bromley as always tried to say compliment to your wife but said some foolish things. Everyone laughed. So he became irritated and his wife was angry because he made court to another woman in front of everyone near her.

And then everything went on the rampage. At first he said to his son Shaun something rude, after laughed at him in front of everyone. And because Shaun had a thing for your wife too seeing as she laughed at him was too much and he left. Poor kid. All that made Ellen Bromley to feel herself even worse - all her family were an inadequate and all it was because of Janine, whom Ellen was jealous for a long time.

When you were seeking for another beer box you suddenly stumbled on Shaun in garage. Looked like he was crying but he tried not to show it to you.

"Look, Shaun," you said, "you can play a tough guy or you can go upstairs to my bathroom and make it look like nothing happened." And you returned to your search.

Shaun mumbled something like "thanks" and left you.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_stay_in_garage|Stay in the garage. You need to rest from them.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_Ellen_helps_Shaun|Ask Ellen to help her son Shaun.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_Janine_helps_Shaun|Ask your wife to help Shaun.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue_return_to_party|Return to everyone.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 3

2014-04-24T11:32:57Z

WCold:

The third day started like nothing happend for last two days. Bathroom, breakfast, work.

During the work you couldn't resist the pleasure of sending some exciting swing sex links to your wife. But you made it look like they were sent to her after visiting a certain sites.

Work day finished without anything interesting happened. Today was friday and you returned home thinking about upcoming weekend.

Your wife was already prepared to dinner. When you both sit near the table Janine said, "Don't forget about barbecue tomorrow. Today I'm confirmed it to all to start at 2pm."

"Yeah, Thanks," you answered. Barbecue with neighbours was your tradition. You held it every two weeks. So it wasn't necessary to say, because you knew it anyway.

With those words conversation was over. You both quickly ended the dinner and watched some movie together. After the movie you both had no powers for anything else.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue|It is time to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 3

2014-04-24T11:32:35Z

WCold:

The third day started like nothing happend for last two days. Bathroom, breakfast, work.

During the work you couldn't resist the pleasure of sending some exciting swing sex links to your wife. But you made it look like they were sent to her after visiting a certain sites.

Work day finished without anything interesting happened. Today was friday and you returned home thinking about upcoming weekend.

Your wife was already prepared to dinner. When you both sit near the table Janine said, "Don't forget about barbecue tomorrow. Today I'm confirmed it to all to start at 2pm."
"Yeah, Thanks," you answered. Barbecue with neighbours was your tradition. You held it every two weeks. So it wasn't necessary to say, because you knew it anyway.

With those words conversation was over. You both quickly ended the dinner and watched some movie together. After the movie you both had no powers for anything else.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_4_barbecue|It is time to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex/day 2

2014-04-24T11:31:20Z

WCold:

You got up by an alarm clock and took a shower.

When you went down for breakfast your wife wasn't in there, she was upstairs still occupied by morning proceedings. But her notebook was here and it was working with accessible desktop. Looks like she forgot to turn it down yesterday because her head was in the clouds.

You checked her browser. It showed that yesterday she searched topics which you raised in discussion. Among those topics was "marriage problems", "sex life", "sexual relations", "long marriage problems", "sex with other partners in marriage", "swinging partners" and "swingers". The last three was interesting. They showed that she considered the swinger idea. That was your chance to do more and you took it. You added some pages with more radical content than than the one she found and some links to swingers social pages and thematic porno. After that you left her computer before she found you manipulating with it. You hurried to work to let her be alone.

When you returned home everything looked like always but sometimes your wife looked at you with thoughtful expression. Suddenly after dinner she said, "I've been thinking about your words earlier."

"And?" you simply asked.

"It's exciting. But now I'm not ready. Maybe, when..." And she stopped searching for right words.

"That's okay. Nothing will happen until you'll be ready," you assured her. "Now let's just leave everything as it is."

After that you both returned to work on your notebooks for a short time, watched TV and went to the bed.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_3|It is time to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex 2

2014-04-24T11:29:53Z

WCold:

"No, I should think about it some more," you answered.

"Okay." She got up. "Looks like it's better to talk later."

After that you both returned to your work. You noticed that during evening and when you went to sleep Janine was dissipated. She obviously thought about your conversation earlier.

You made your move. You had planted the seeds of doubts by your words. Now it was time for them to grow up. And you waited.

*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex/day_2|Go to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/swing sex

2014-04-24T11:29:09Z

WCold:

"How about having sex with other partners?" you asked.

"What?" She was amazed.

"Something like swinging to fire up our feelings."

"That is out of the question," she cut you off.

"What exactly do you have against it?" you asked.

"I'm against the thought of doing something private with some stranger," she answered.

"Then maybe we'll try something less radical?" you suggested.

"Do you have something in mind?" your wife asked.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease|I think that you need to go on private dance courses to comprehend that you have a gorgeous body, be proud of it and feel yourself desired.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/extreme_sex|We should try to add an extreme element to our sex life.]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/family_counselor|How about go to family psychologist and discuss our private life and desires?]]
*[[38_36/PunishW/swing_sex_2|End conversation as it is.]]

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38 36/PunishW/striptease/day 5 good husband

2014-04-24T08:53:48Z

WCold:

The next day was Sunday. Janine had empty day in her schedule from courses, but she had an arrangement with her classmates.

Because yesterday was a difficult day, today she overslept again. You got up early and spent the morning in the living room with your laptop, until she finally got up.

After a quick snack your wife quickly dressed and left to downtown. While she was shopping you returned to your proceedings.

She returned at late evening with lots of new shopping bags and strong alcohol smell. She went upstairs to get ready for dinner. As you both agreed in the morning before, dinner was on you, so you served food (which you ordered from chinese restaraunt) and called for your wife.

After dinner you went upstairs to bedroom to finish your business which you done during the day. Before you had finished, Janine also came to bedroom and took off her outerwear. She stood only in sexy transparent maroon slip. It was obviously new and gave you surprisingly hard boner.

Silence fell. You were out of words. She on her side enjoyed the produced effect. She waited some more, then climbed onto the bed, brushed off notebook from your laps and freed dick from your pants. She took it into her mouth, but only for a couple of seconds because it was already rock hard. When she let your dick go, she climbed onto you, kissed you deeply and pushed your dick into her womb. You both moaned and begun to move your bodies. She was already wet and you had no problems with fucking her in hard pace.

When you were about to take out before the end, she said, "No. Cum inside me. I'm on the pills."

You smirked - usually she hated to use the pills because of some problems with side effects so you had to take out or use condom. The fact that your sperm will fill her, raised you to the peak. When your sperm shot inside her she started to cum too.

After that you did it another two times in wordless manner and fall asleep.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease/day_6_good_husband|Sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/striptease/day 4 meet

2014-04-24T08:46:00Z

WCold:

You waited till it was time to go.

You picked her up near the "Passion and heat" and drove back home.

"So, how was today's lesson?" you asked.

"It was good. I had made a great progress during lesson."

"How about your group? Did you found a common language?"

"Yes I've met a few friends. I have a meeting with Natasha and Tara from my group tomorrow. We are going shopping. Also I've got acquainted with Rafael Vega he is from male group and Tara's friend. They both aren't new in exotic dances and came to our studio to improve their skills," Janine answered. "It's good to know at this late hour that you can ask acquainted man for help."

"Strange," you thought, "why would she needed acquainted man for help?" But aloud you asked, "What are their main jobs?"

"Tara's work is real estate dealer and Rafael's - model."

"Model?" you asked to repeat.

"Yes. Model."

When you returned home, you both relaxed near the TV until it came time to sleep.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease/day_5_good_husband|Go to sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/striptease/day 4 bad husband waiting

2014-04-24T08:40:55Z

WCold:

You waited.

Another hour passed you were worried already. Finally a car stopped near your house. You looked out the window. It was a new big dark red pickup and your wife was inside. She sat on the passangers seat. The driver was handsome latino no older than 30. He was tall and muscular. He had short black hair. It was difficult to say more through the window. Your wife reached for him and long kissed him into lips. You were shocked. Then she jumped out of the car and went home.

"What the fuck was that," you asked from the doorway.

"What?" she asked innocently.

"A fuckin' kiss."

"Ah. A kiss! I was thanking a man for the drive, that you didn't gave me."

She turned away in a pointed manner and left upstairs.

When she finally came down for dinner, you asked, "And who the hell was that driver?"

"Driver? He is a friend from male group from courses."

"A friend? And who else has become your friend there." You were on the edge. She was at first too, but now she looked like it was fun.

"I've met a few new friends. I have a meeting with Natasha and Tara from my group tomorrow. We are going shopping. The driver - is Rafael Vega. He is Tara's friend. They both aren't new in exotic dances and came to our studio to improve their skills," Janine answered. "It's good to know at this late hour that you can ask acquainted man for help."

"And what are their main jobs?"

"Tara's work is real estate dealer and Rafael's - model."

"Model?" you asked to repeat.

"Yes. Model."

The hour was late you both was exhausted so you go to sleep.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease/day_5_bad_husband|Sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/striptease/day 3

2014-04-24T08:38:06Z

WCold:

The next day was friday.

It was a day off for Janine's courses, so you and your wife did everything like you did in any other friday. Day of hard work and after that you both were home, resting from hard workweek.

When you were making the bed Janine said, "Forgot to mention. I called off tomorrow barbecue." Barbecue with neighbours was your tradition. You held it every two weeks. "My courses will take entire evening and during the day I have to go shopping to buy some inventory for dances."

"Inventory?" you asked imagining lots of perverted things.

"Hey!" Your wife noticed what you were thinking of and kicked you. "I need to buy sports suit for dancing, some cream and..." She redden. "...stage costume."

Looked like, your thoughts reflected again on your face because she kicked you again.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease/day_4|Sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/striptease

2014-04-24T08:36:14Z

WCold:

"I think that you need to take courses of exotic dances to comprehend that you have a gorgeous body, be proud of it and feel yourself desired," your answer was.

Janine was a little shocked. "You want me to..." She stopped in the absence of words.

"Start dancing for the purpose of revealing of your sexuality," you finished her sentence.

"Exotic dances. Do you mean striptease?"

"Any sexual dance. But I prefer striptease. With a pole." You smiled. "If you know what I mean." It sounded like a joke and the situation diffused.

"Oh, yes. I'm perfectly understand you." Your wife smiled back.

Your phrase sounded like a joke, but you didn't joke and Janine understood it. But the moment was gone and you both return to your own business.

When it was time to sleep your wife came to bedroom and began to prepare for bed. Suddenly she turned to you and said, "Okay."

"Okay?" You switched your attention to her in no clue.

"Okay, I'll take your courses," And she sighed. "Striptease, if you want."

"Thanks." You kissed her. "You are the best."

"I know." Janine smiled. "You owe me."

"Oh, yes." And you kissed her again.

Two kisses was maximum for both of you. The day was long and you both were tired.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease/day_2|Sleep.]]

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38 36/PunishW/striptease/day 4 excuse

2014-04-24T08:21:11Z

WCold:

At first you waited till it was time to go. But after you thought, "Fuck it" and send her a message: 
(Daniel) dear, sorry. East bridge is blocked. Lookin for detour. I can't pick U up today. pls take taxi

Her answer was: 
(Janine) OK I'll take another ride

So you sat becide the TV and relaxed.

The film ended and you looked at the clock. It was about time for her to get back.

*[[38_36/PunishW/striptease/day_4_bad_husband_waiting|Wait for her arrival.]]

[[Category:Punishment for your wife]]