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Ask her to come into the back room

2015-07-22T04:33:30Z

Oneoffire:

“Follow me, I want to show you something,” you say as you stride to the back of the class. You stop once you arrive at a door in the corner of the class. You slowly ease the door open, glancing over your shoulder to make sure no one is watching from the hall.

You reach into the room and flick the light switch before giving her a kind nod of encouragement.

“Come on, no reason to be afraid.”

She timidly musters up the courage and makes her way into the back room.

You quickly follow after her, shutting the door behind you and making sure that the metal latch is securely locked into place so no one can follow you.

The shelves line the storage closet’s walls and each row contains precisely organized scientific equipment and materials. In the center of the room there is a metal chair bolted to the ground with leather straps hanging off of it. Menacing-looking restraints attached to chains hang from the ceiling. In the corner you know from the host’s memory that there is a hidden trap door.

“Now then.”

*[[Take Elsi into the hidden trapdoor]]
*[[Strap Elsi into the chair]]
*[[Chain her to the metal restraints hanging from the ceiling]]
*[[Tell Elsi to get on her knees]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Ask her to come into the back room

2015-07-22T04:33:14Z

Oneoffire:

“Follow me, I want to show you something,” you say as you stride to the back of the class. You stop once you arrive at a door in the corner of the class. You slowly ease the door open, glancing over your shoulder to make sure no one is watching from the hall.

You reach into the room and flick the light switch before giving her a kind nod of encouragement.

“Come on, no reason to be afraid.”

She timidly musters up the courage and makes her way into the back room.

You quickly follow after her, shutting the door behind you and making sure that the metal latch is securely locked into place so no one can follow you.

The shelves line the storage closet’s walls and each row contains precisely organized scientific equipment and materials. In the center of the room there is a metal chair bolted to the ground with leather straps hanging off of it. Menacing-looking restraints attached to chains hang from the ceiling. In the corner you know from the host’s memory that there is a hidden trap door.

“Now then.”

*[[Take Elsi into the hidden trapdoor]]
*[[Strap her into the chair]]
*[[Chain her to the metal restraints hanging from the ceiling]]
*[[Tell Elsi to get on her knees]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Ask her to come into the back room

2015-07-22T04:32:46Z

Oneoffire: Created page with '“Follow me, I want to show you something,” you say as you stride to the back of the class. You stop once you arrive at a door in the corner of the class. You slowly ease the …'

“Follow me, I want to show you something,” you say as you stride to the back of the class. You stop once you arrive at a door in the corner of the class. You slowly ease the door open, glancing over your shoulder to make sure no one is watching from the hall.

You reach into the room and flick the light switch before giving her a kind nod of encouragement.

“Come on, no reason to be afraid.”

She timidly musters up the courage and makes her way into the back room.

You quickly follow after her, shutting the door behind you and making sure that the metal latch is securely locked into place so no one can follow you.

The shelves line the storage closet’s walls and each row contains precisely organized scientific equipment and materials. In the center of the room there is a metal chair bolted to the ground with leather straps hanging off of it. Menacing-looking restraints attached to chains hang from the ceiling. In the corner you know from the host’s memory that there is a hidden trap door.

“Now then.”

*[[Take Elsi into the hidden trapdoor]]
*[[Strap her into the chair]]
*[[Chain her to the metal restraints hanging from the ceiling]]
*[[Tell her to get on her knees]]

{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-22T04:28:58Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class. You begin reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks, and look over other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by, until suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and open their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is well developed for her age. Her form is curvy and she is well endowed. Her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Elsi, has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe-like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing Gothic-style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Elsi and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a another lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on, an Elsi timidly raises her hand. "Uhm, Professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes, Elsi?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson. Make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Elsi to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Elsi to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Tell Elsi to stay after

2015-07-22T03:51:30Z

Oneoffire:

As the students leave you call out to Elsi.

"Elsi can you stay after class for a moment?"

She timidly nods and waits quietly by your desk after packing up her things into her small checkered red and black backpack.

You wait until all of the other students are out of the class before you walk over to the door and close it, subtly locking it without Elsi knowing and then returning to your chair.

"What is it professor?" She asks meekly.

You look over her small form. She is wearing a white blouse and a short black skirt, with white socks that reach all the way above her knees, leaving a small strip of skin beneath her skirt showing. You wonder what color panties she is wearing. Noticing your gaze she looks down at her black shoes and blushes.

You know that even without using your position as teacher to take advantage of her, you could force her to do whatever you wanted because of her quiet submissive personality. Or it came to it, you could easily overpower her.

"It was extremely rude for you to interrupt me in the middle of my lesson today," you say while tapping a pen against the desk to emphasize your point. "You embarrassed me in front of the entire class."

"I'm sorry sir, I didn't mean to." She quickly glances up at you before returning her gaze to the floor. "But I am going to be late by now, I need to get home." She looks nervously out the hall.
You follow her gaze and see that the corridor is empty, everyone has probably already went home by now.

"Don't worry I will make sure you get home. This is more important though. You also haven't been following instructions on the assignments, and in the last exam you did poorly. I think we need to have an intervention."

"An intervention? What's that?" She asks.

You pause to consider.

*[[Ask her to come into the back room]]
*[[Tell her come behind your desk]]
*[[Possess Elsi]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Tell Elsi to stay after

2015-07-22T02:53:40Z

Oneoffire:

As the students leave you call out to Elsi.

"Elsi can you stay after class for a moment?"

She timidly nods and waits quietly by your desk after packing up her things into her small checkered red and black backpack.

You wait until all of the other students are out of the class before you walk over to the door and close it, subtly locking it without Elsi knowing and then returning to your chair.

"What is it professor?" She asks meekly.

You look over her small form. She is wearing a white blouse and a short black skirt, with white socks that reach all the way above her knees, leaving a small strip of skin beneath her skirt showing. You wonder what color panties she is wearing. Noticing your gaze she looks down at her black shoes and blushes.

You know that even without using your position as teacher to take advantage of her you could force her to do what you wanted because of her quiet submissive personality, or if it came to it, easily overpower her.

"It was extremely rude for you to interrupt me in the middle of my lesson today." You say, tapping a pen against to desk to emphasize your point. "You embarrassed me in front of the entire class."

"I'm sorry sir, I didn't mean to." She said as she quickly glanced up at you before returning her gaze to the floor. "But I am going to be late by now, I need to get home." She looks nervously out the hall.
You follow her gaze and see that the corridor is empty, everyone has probably already went home by now.

"Don't worry I will make sure you get home. This is more important though. You also haven't been following instructions on the assignments, and in the last exam you did poorly. I think we need to have an intervention."

"What should I do?" She asks.

You pause to consider.

*[[Ask her to come into the back room]]
*[[Tell her come behind your desk]]
*[[Possess Elsi]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

User talk:Oneoffire

2015-07-22T02:38:42Z

Oneoffire:

If you're going to post in one of my stories, make sure you use proper punctuation and grammar. Don't run separate sentences together with commas. Use periods to end sentences. Make sure to hyphenate compound modifiers. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:48, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Will do! Thanks for the reminder. -[[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 19:17, 21 July 2015

If there is anything else let me know --[[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 19:17, 21 July 2015

Is you're telling Angel to stay after class, [[Tell Angel to stay after]], why is her name now Elsi? Don't change the name and then leave the original page hanging out in the middle of nowhere. Either blank the page you want to discard or use the move function to alter the page name.

Also, I will only warn you about poor punctuation and bad grammar so many times before I start deleting your postings from my stories. Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. Please pay attention to your verb tenses. If you cannot handle my standards, please start your own story or post in a story where the authors don't have such high standards. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:38, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

If I make grammatical fixes to your pages, such as changing the incorrect ''doe like eyes'' to the proper ''doe-like eyes'', you had better not undo my corrections unless you'd prefer for me to simply delete your postings. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 01:45, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

I noticed one of your other characters was named Angelica so I thought it was too close, I was not sure how to delete it. Thank you for telling me now. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 02:38, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T23:39:08Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing one another, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is developed for her age, her form is curvy and she is well endowed, her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Elsi has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing gothic style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a boring lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on a Anjelica timidly raises her hand. "Uhm professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes Elsi?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson, make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Elsi to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Elsi to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Tell Elsi to stay after

2015-07-21T23:36:58Z

Oneoffire: Created page with 'As the students leave you call out to Elsi. "Elsi can you stay after class for a moment?" She timidly nods and waits quietly by your desk after packing up her things into her s…'

As the students leave you call out to Elsi.

"Elsi can you stay after class for a moment?"

She timidly nods and waits quietly by your desk after packing up her things into her small checkered red and black backpack.

You wait until all of the other students are out of the class before you walk over to the door and close it, subtly locking it without Elsi knowing and then returning to your chair.

"What is it professor?" She asks meekly.

You look over her small form. She is wearing a white blouse and a short black skirt, with white socks that reach all the way above her knees, leaving a small strip of skin beneath her skirt showing. You wonder what color panties she is wearing. Noticing your gaze she looks down at her black shoes and blushes.

You know that even without using your position as teacher to take advantage of her you could force her to do what you wanted because of her quiet submissive personality, or if it came to it, easily overpower her.

"It was extremely rude for you to interrupt me in the middle of my lesson today." You say, tapping a pen against to desk to emphasize your point. "You embarrassed me in front of the entire class."

"I'm sorry sir, I didn't mean to." She said as she quickly glanced up at you before returning her gaze to the floor. "But I am going to be late by now, I need to get home." She looks nervously out the hall.
You follow her gaze and see that the corridor is empty, everyone has probably already went home by now.

"Don't worry I will make sure you get home. This is more important though. You also haven't been following instructions on the assignments, and in the last exam you did poorly. I think we need to have an intervention"

"What should I do?" She asks.

You pause to consider.

*[[Ask her to come into the back room]]
*[[Tell her come behind your desk]]
*[[Possess Elsi]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T23:36:13Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing one another, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is developed for her age, her form is curvy and she is well endowed, her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Elsi has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing gothic style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a boring lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on a Anjelica timidly raises her hand. "Uhm professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes Elsi?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson, make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Elsi to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Elsi to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T23:34:49Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing one another, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is developed for her age, her form is curvy and she is well endowed, her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Elsi has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing gothic style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a boring lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on a Anjelica timidly raises her hand. "Uhm professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes Elsi?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson, make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Elsi to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Angel to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T23:26:34Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class. You begin reviewing teaching material as well as flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is well developed for her age. Her form is curvy and she is well endowed. Her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Angel, has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing Gothic-style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lecture, a intensive lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on, Angel timidly raises her hand. "Um, Professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes, Angel?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit. For some reason, the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! All right, that concludes our lesson. Make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out, you:

*[[Tell Angel to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Angel to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

User talk:Platypus

2015-07-21T23:23:24Z

Oneoffire:

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]

<b> >Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above. Do not add new comments to the archives. </b>

Thanks for the input! If there is anything else you would like me to do let me know. [[User:Oneoffire|Oneoffire]] 23:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hey Platypus, I am dwarftopia. I read your message and I thank you for informing me that it was a feature needed. I have managed to categorize every page on my new story. Thanks for the tip!

'''''dwarftopia''''' --[[User:Dwarftopia|Dwarftopia]] 07:16, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Hello Platypus, I received your message. I read back over my contributions to your choose your own adventure and hopefully fixed most of the errors. If there is something I missed, please let me know. Thanks! <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>

i swear i didn't know it affected everything i thought it on changed when i looked at it,i am sorry for the indecent

Sure, sure. That's why you're vandalizing page after page. If you're going to act like a 12-year-old then go play Call of Duty, kid. '''-[[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 00:51, 11 June 2015 (UTC)'''

<b> You can sign your messages for convenience by using four ~ (tilde) symbols like so: <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>. Your name and the date will show up like this: [[User:BakaG|BakaG]] 16:30, 16 November 2014 (UTC) </b>

Ok thanks! So others can still see my content? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 17:02, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hey, I was just wondering why when I am signed out I can't see my contributions to a story? Can others still see them?? [[User:Wytod300050|Wytod300050]] 02:59, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback. I was looking to leave more options for others but that will do [[User:Twjhh|Twjhh]] 17:15, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Constructive criticism is always welcome. [[User:Marzipan92]] 22:12, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the heads up on the pages that I forgot to Categorize. [[User:Deathsknight|Deathsknight]] 14:28, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey, is there a way to blank pages automatically, or to mass wipe a category? I'm trying to redo a story, so that would help out a lot. Cheers.
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 18:16, 22 February 2015 (UTC)

That is a really good point. I'll do it manually then. Thanks. --[[User:Snowball|Snowball]] 08:34, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Roger that. Sorry for my ignorance!-Lasagna

I appreciate your protectiveness of your source material, but try being more hospitable. No reason to delete things when the changes aren't more than link perspectives or minor punctuation problems. You clearly don't want to write all 64,000 pages that would be needed to finish and tie together Rampage, or any other of your stories. So stop impeding people who are helping add more content to the site by wholesale deleting everything anybody writes with 2 missed periods or a run-on sentence or two. Try leaving the message and see if I'll fix it first, at the very least.[[User:Makhai|Makhai]] 13:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC).

Hi there. I see you deleted my work on the story 'A Unique Arrangement'. It was understandable but i now know how to add options/categorize and i was wondering if you could get my deleted work back? I don't really want to have to write it all over again because of a couple of mistakes.
Cheers. [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 00:40, 11 December 2014 (UTC) [[User:Bammy|Bammy]] 13:29, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

I wpuld like toapologize for the actions that led to the deletion of the page if it were mear grammer problem please repost the page (if possible) and allow me to make corrections. If there was a problem with how I handled the story please tell me so I can make corrections and better furture work. In any case please type back as to know that you received this message

My apologies,
Greg222James

Platypus...this is Bustyalix. You recently messaged me about including the STATUS BAR, but I have no idea how to go about doing so. Is there any way you and I may converse privately? I'd be more than happy to include my personal email address if necessary. Please get back to me on this matter. Thanks!

I'm still new at this, so I don't appreciate the attitude. Yes, it'll take me some time getting used to this HTML like format, yes I'll make some errors now and again, but no that does not mean you have the right to strike an attitude with me. I haven't really worked with a status bar before, and I honestly didn't even realize I had to do anything with it. I'm still learning, rather teaching myself this strange format, so don't come to me in a hard and demeaning tone because I didn't do something the way you wanted it, because I am fairly new at this.

Platypus, this is eatenbypie. I appreciate that you pay attention to things like categorization of pages, but deleting work two hours after being warned and threatening to ban a new user because I missed categorization on 6-8 pages is excessive, especially given that the site doesn't notify you about warnings. Simple oversight on my part, and obviously an oversight given that the rest of the story has proper categorization. -Edit Not bothering to recreate my work on this site.

Apologies for the tense problems. I've been proofreading my stuff since I'm used to writing in past tense, but some things slip through the cracks it seems. As for quirky titles... do you mean the link/page title thing? The first was due to a page collision. I suppose I could have changed the action prompt to something else, but I consider that a part of the story itself, and didn't want to change it due to a collision. Those are rare, I guess. The second was due to a plan where two mini-storylines would converge to the same page... but the actions to get there would be different. In this case I would prefer to use a third page title rather than favor one of the two storylines. The third time I did it... yeah, that was just for my amusement, and it would be a simple matter to limit usage of alternate titles and use them only when needed. So... yeah. [[User:Ironwill|Ironwill]] 02:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus; I got your message. Sorry about the mistake. If it ever happens again let me know and I'll fix it right away. I'm new to the editing, but I really try hard to be professional. Like I said, If there's any more problems, message me and I'll fix them right away. I really enjoy your story and I hope we get along. Please message me back soon so I know you got my message. - ThatOneWritter

Got your message. Didn't see it at first since I posted one after another Sorry 'bout the mistake. Will try to pay more attention to it in the future.-Repoman.

dude what are some of your story's?-Jay The man

will you be adding more to rampage and smutty sex romp? Jay The man

Hey platypus, just a quick question. I have a guy adding to my story using very little detail and it doesn't even follow the story. As the original creator of the story do I have the right to delete these submissions in favor of more descriptive and frankly more linear additions that I plan on making?--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 21:47, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
I understand, i just wanne give it a try.
I dont even speak english.
but i want to compliment you for your story

Hello Platypus,
thank you for your helpful (if terse) comments. I was unsure whether the status bar was needed as the second posted page obviously was meant as an ending. [[User:Kyrael|Kyrael]] 19:57, 19 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Platypus
i'm new and have tried to label like you requested but cant. can you help?
regards. wildside

Heya Platypus, I just wanted to ask you how high the writing standards are for this website, as I'm currently working on a CYOA story that I'd really love to post here... but sometimes my punctuation is lacking. I only ask because I've noticed a lot of people on this page complaining about you deleting their stories/pages. I would hate for that to happen to me.
Also I have another question, how easy is it to move a story to a different age category? - PurpleLemon

'''Sophie4C'''
Hi, I'm very sorry about catergories, yes I do know how to do them but I've been edit via phone, so it's not easy having to rewrite/re copy and paste each time I do forgot. I will check over the choices I have made and correct them if you haven't already. [[User:Sophie4C|Sophie4C]] 07:39, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

== Delete a page ==

Hey Platypus, since you're the only one who can delete pages can you please delete [[EW: Enter the briefing room]] (since I merged it into [[EW: On a tour of the Harry Potter studios‎]]). Thank you -- [[User:NiceGuy|NiceGuy]] 18:55, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello there, I was wondering if you could help me delete two pages of my own story please, for I can't seem to delete them myself. The reason why I want them deleted is because I feel like they are not good ideas for branches anymore, as I once thought they were. They are: [[Lucid dreams/Male/Dream about the shower brunette| Dream about the shower brunette]], [[Lucid dreams/Male/Grab the towels| Clean up mess]]

I thank you for your cooperation. And I will edit in some new and (hopefully) better branches next time. --[[User:Chaomaster|Chaomaster]] 19:50, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

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Platypus, I'm a long time admirer but new contributor to the site, i wasn't sure how else to respond to your message so I wanted to say thank you for your feedback and I'll make the necessary corrections but I am learning still and I ask patience on that score. I do not understand what i am not doing with the categories please explain to me what it is that i am not doing - i have looked at the tutorial and compared scripting and i do not notice what i am not doing that they were doing on this story i am working on please go into further detail and i appologize for the inconvenience [[User:Phreakinsane|Phreakinsane]] 02:20, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to make a Cool Effect bro

== Hope You Don't Mind ==

I hope you don't mind; but I used the warn template, for Nigfin, since he left several pages uncategorised. If you do, I apologise for stepping on your toes. - [[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 19:27, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey platypus, I have a user Maxpower altering my pages with out permission. I know he is just trying to help but he is altering the context or the story and despite my attempts to get him to stop polightly he continues to do it. I don't mind him adding to the story but he has been asked not to alter mine or other's contributions to the story. I would appreciate you having a word with him. Thanks --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 19:22, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

In my defence of the above accusations, I would like to bring Blackdragon's attention to the message that appears at the bottom of the edit window. Specifically, if you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then don't submit here. The majority of my recent edits have centered around spelling, grammar, and readability, although I admit that here or there I add some embellishment or make changes to improve consistency and continuity. No one else on here seems to have a problem with that and realize that wikis are designed with collaboration in mind, and collaborative storytelling only makes for better more well rounded stories. In any case, I submit that if he considers his writing to be a sacred text that he changes his story type to private. But I'm definitely done with his whining. He will see no further contributions from me.
[[User:Maxpower|Maxpower]] 05:48, 17 March 2015 (UTC)

== Make it four ==
No pages link to [[Make it four]]. I've asked the original creator what's up. Please don't just delete this; there's a whole string of pages I would like to see (re?)attached to the story. Writing you to see if there perhaps was some kind of technical hiccup that I couldn't find? [[User:Anedwcan|Anedwcan]] 16:09, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

So, I just got that "second warning" of yours, but I have been titling every post since you gave me the first one. Can you please explain to me what it is I am not doing and possibly link me to the offending post? --[[User talk:Jemini|Jemini]]

Never mind, I figured it out. --[[User:Jemini | Jemini]]

== 2 Taboo 4 You Deletion Request ==
Could you please delete the following pages by [[User:Vitalis|Vitalis]] from my story [[2T4U|2 Taboo 4 You]]:
*[[2T4U/Go into mommy's room]]
*[[2T4U/Climb into bed with her]]
*[[2T4U/Snuggle up to her, rubbing your dick against her]]
*[[2T4U/Say "I need help mom"]]
*[[2T4U/Yes, mom suck my dick]]
He didn't adhere to the guidelines I laid out for the story, basically added nothing to the story, and has not fixed his passages after I asked him to. I feel that I have given him enough time to repair the damage. Thank you. --[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]] 22:08, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

User talk:Oneoffire

2015-07-21T23:19:27Z

Oneoffire:

User talk:Oneoffire

2015-07-21T23:17:28Z

Oneoffire:

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T22:40:55Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing one another, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is developed for her age, her form is curvy and she is well endowed, her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Angel has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing gothic style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a boring lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on a Anjelica timidly raises her hand. "Uhm professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes Angel?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson, make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Angel to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Angel to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T22:39:58Z

Oneoffire:

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing one another, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is developed for her age, her form is curvy and she is well endowed, her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Angel has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing gothic style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a boring lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on a Anjelica timidly raises her hand. "Uhm professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes Angel?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson, make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Angel to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Angel to stay after]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Brandon Jones|6th Grade Boy]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Wait and prepare for your final class

2015-07-21T22:38:02Z

Oneoffire: Created page with 'You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pi…'

You settle down into the teacher's comfortable chair behind his oak desk and wait as patiently as you can for the next class, reviewing teaching material, flipping through the pile of science textbooks and other literature articles. As you concentrate on reading, the time seems to flash by and suddenly your concentration is broken by the sound of the bell. Students begin pouring into the room.

As the students take their seats and opened their books, you scan the class looking for your next victims. The students are clamoring around, teasing one another, laughing, and whispering to one another. Most of the children are at various points in their development and are still awkwardly growing into their bodies.

Three female students catch your eye. You search the teacher's memory for their names. The first one, Emma, has brown hair and is developed for her age, her form is curvy and she is well endowed, her bust stretches the top half of her uniform. The second one, Angel has cascades of platinum blonde hair and is petite and skinny. Her breasts are small mounds and her large doe like eyes make her seem very vulnerable. The last one, Raven, is wearing gothic style clothing, mainly black and white lace with some striped stockings and gloves. She has pitch black hair and eyes and has a cool demeanor. Her development is somewhere in between Angel and Emma.

You clear your throat to get attention and begin your lesson, teaching a boring lesson about microbial organisms and soil morphology. The students seem extremely bored and stare out the window listlessly. As the class drags on a Anjelica timidly raises her hand. "Uhm professor?"

You stop your lecture and call on her expecting a question about the information. "Yes Angel?"

"Class was supposed to have ended ten minutes ago."

You look up at the clock and realize you have gone over the time limit, for some reason the bell didn't ring.

"Wow, I didn't even notice the time! Alright that concludes our lesson, make sure you pick up your tests from last class before you leave!"

As the students begin to file out do you:

*[[Tell Angel to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma to stay after]]
*[[Tell Raven to stay after]]
*[[Tell Emma and Angel to stay after]]

Shift into Mr. Rembert the science teacher

2015-07-21T22:05:01Z

Oneoffire:

You slide from the sixth-grader into the teacher. Brandon looks confused momentarily, but you flash him an encouraging smile. "You did pass the test," you tell him. "Now hustle along."

"Okay, Mr. R.," Brandon replies. He departs and you proceed to teach for the rest of the school day.

Your new host isn't bad-looking, especially for a science teacher. He's not Mr. Muscles but he's got a decently toned body, doesn't need glasses, and has straight red hair down to his shoulders and a slightly scruffy beard that women find attractive, as it makes him look just a bit "wild". He's only in his mid-30's (36, to be exact) and looks it.

Before the final class, you search your host's memory and find that he has a bit of a crush on an English teacher, Tina Houston, who's an adorable lady in her mid-40's. She hasn't yet clued in to the hints he's dropped. He also is sweet on a pretty African-American waitress in her late 20's, Violet Hill, at the local cafe. Violet is aware of his crush and has been teasing him, sending mixed signals for the past 6 months.

*[[Go to the faculty lounge and chat with Miss Houston]]
*[[Head for the cafe and flirt with Violet the waitress]]
*[[Wait and prepare for your final class]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Shift into Mr. Rembert the science teacher

2015-07-21T22:04:41Z

Oneoffire:

You slide from the sixth-grader into the teacher. Brandon looks confused momentarily, but you flash him an encouraging smile. "You did pass the test," you tell him. "Now hustle along."

"Okay, Mr. R.," Brandon replies. He departs and you proceed to teach for the rest of the school day.

Your new host isn't bad-looking, especially for a science teacher. He's not Mr. Muscles but he's got a decently toned body, doesn't need glasses, and has straight red hair down to his shoulders and a slightly scruffy beard that women find attractive, as it makes him look just a bit "wild". He's only in his mid-30's (36, to be exact) and looks it.

Before the final class, you search your host's memory and find that he has a bit of a crush on an English teacher, Tina Houston, who's an adorable lady in her mid-40's. She hasn't yet clued in to the hints he's dropped. He also is sweet on a pretty African-American waitress in her late 20's, Violet Hill, at the local cafe. Violet is aware of his crush and has been teasing him, sending mixed signals for the past 6 months.

*[[Go to the faculty lounge and chat with Miss Houston]]
*[[Head for the cafe and flirt with Violet the waitress]]
*[[Wait and prepare for your final test]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Tim Rembert|Science Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]