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User talk:NathanielPatellis

2016-05-04T00:52:11Z

NathanielPatellis: Blanked the page

Tony Donovan,

2016-05-04T00:42:39Z

NathanielPatellis: Tony Donvan

You Tony Donovan the most popular and dangerous teenager in Don Carlos, you confident, sexy, down to earth and rich (not mentioning your huge trust fund) but non of does thing are the reason you're so popular you know the real reason.
15 years ago their was a killer a serial killer and you his youngest survivor. but even through others remember you don't, because you moved on, because you don't want to remember.

You finally reach your friends and as you notice the smiles it makes you smile. you stand in between you sister Tatum and cousin Alec. "Wat up guys" you greet everyone and everyone greets you back. every greets you back.

Tatum puts her arm over your shoulder with evil smirk, what do you do?

*[[Leave her hand]]

*[[Smirk back]]

*[[Push her hands off]]

Catch me if you can

2016-05-04T00:12:48Z

NathanielPatellis: Catch me if you can

"Bang" a lifeless body stumble upon a bloody rag. a Jack in the box plays in the background. the lifeless corps turns out to be a girl as her long gold blond hair is now covered entirely by blood.
a masked figure stands above her creepily looking at the corps.
the figure grabs her by the head and pulls her away slowly without a care.

A WEEK LATER

You step out of your car knowing that everyone is watching. "Being popular isn't easy, you don't even know why you are" thinking that thought you look around the school searching for your friends now are you a guy?

*[[Tony Donovan,]] 16 years old, brown hair, green eyes, African American (Bisexual)

*[[Alec Donovan,]] 17 years old, blond hair, deep blue eyes, Caucasian (Tony's adopted cousin and next friend, Alec has feelings for Tony but does Tony feel the shame way, (Homosexual)

*[[Shawn Mandel,]] 17 years old, black hair, brown eyes, Caucasian (is dating Nthabi, (Straight)

*[[Caleb Jones,]] 16 years old, brown hair, black eyes, Spanish (is Shawn's best friend and dating Tatum (bisexual)

or are you a girl

*[[Tatum Donovan,]] 16 years old, brown hair, gray eyes, African American (Tony's twin sister and is dating Caleb (straight)

*[[Kolbe Azukasi,]] 16 years old, gold brown hair, brown eyes, Asian (lives next the Donovan's and is in love with Tony (straight)

*[[Nthabeleng "Nthabi" Mnisi,]] 17 years old, black hair, black eyes, South African (is dating Shawn and best friends with Kolbe and Tatum (straight)

*[[Tessa Smiths,]] 17 years old, black hair, brown eyes, Caucasian ( best friends with Lea (lesbian)

*[[Lea Van Dyke,]] 16 years old, red hair, green eyes, English (Tessa's best friend (bisexual)

All Mature Stories

2016-05-03T23:13:34Z

NathanielPatellis: /* Mature Stories */

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''
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|Title||Pages||Notes
|-
|[[Masturbation]]||0||private, please do not edit unless asked
|-
|[[ 1968]]|| 0 || public WIP, Do Not Edit
|-
|[[ Awakened World: 7yrs Later]]|| 43 || Private WIP, Please Don't Edit
|-
|[[Alorias Glory]]|| WIP || public
|-
|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)
|-
|[[1943]]||35||Open
|-
|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)
|-
| [[Back in Time Again]]||100+||(Private, please don't edit)
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)
|-
|[[A New Persona]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball Z]]||1+||(private)
|-
|[[A YOUNG BOY'S NIGHT]] (GAY) ||89+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)
|-
|[[The Unsuspecting Adventurer]]|| 1 ||(Just starting it, please don't edit for now.)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Adventure through Mythology]]||20+||(WIP; Public; Please Don't Edit; First Story)
|-
|[[The Touch Of Fear]]|| WIP || (Private, Please do not edit)
|-
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 10+ || please do not edit
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
|-
|[[Aleron]]||16+ ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||50+
|-
|[[Am I Dreaming?]]|| 13+ || (WIP. Private)
|-
|[[Another Naruto Story]]|| 7+|| Private: My first attempt so please refrain from editing
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
|-
|[[Apocolyptia]]|| 4+ || (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)
|-
|[[Awake]] || 45
|-
|[[An Apocalypse Story]]|| 0 || private (feel free to edit grammar and spelling)
|-
|[[ Back To Freddy's]]|| 0 || private
|-
|[[Badassery]] || 20+
|-
|[[Batman vs Joker]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Batman vs Joker}} || W.I.P Private, Do NOT edit!
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 13+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Bio Wars]]|| WIP|| Public (Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit
|-
|[[Bleach: An RPG]]|| W.I.P || Public -Do NOT Edit!
|-
|[[ The blood disease]]|| 3 || (Please don't edit the story! I'm hopeless when it comes to coding though so if someone could help me with that, it would be great! I'm keeping an open mind though, and welcoming new ideas please ask before you add though!
|-
|[[Bloodshed]]||16+
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.
|-
|[[The Book of Darkness]]||0||(WIP- '''DO NOT EDIT.''' I am the writer so I make the story.)
|-
|[[Book of Satan]]||13+||WIP- Do not edit please
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Byzantium]]|| 0 || (W.I.P, Please don't edit.)
|-
|[[Carnage]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Cartoonish Chronicles]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| 16 ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[Catch me if you can]]||WIP. public (Free to edit but don't kill off any major characters without asking)
|-
|[[Choice of Arms]]||5||(Public)
|-
|[[Choose your own Naruto Adventure]]|| 200+ || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
|-
|[[Chronicle]]||0|| Work in Progress (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Chronicles of Darkness A.K.A New World of Darkness- First Edition]]||0|| Please refer to Idea Pitches before doing anything here.
|-
|[[City Life]]|| 12 ||
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress
|-
|[[ Collapse]]|| W.I.P. || private
|-
|[[College Wars]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Wars}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''
|-
|[[College of Killings]]||{{PAGESINCAT: College of Killings}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+
|-
|[[ The Conductor ]]|| 0 || Work in Progress Plx don't edit
|-
|[[Critical Control]]|| 5 (WIP) || Private Don't Edit [updated every weekend]
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| 11 ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Chronicles of Strange I.]]||200+||(W.I.P please do not edit)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+
|-
|[[ A day at high school]]|| 0 || Under construction.
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+
|-
|[[D-Day|D-Day 1944]]|| WIP || (Just started do not edit.)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| 8 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Dead Town]]|| 0 || Under Construction/DO NOT EDIT PLEASE
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| 25+ ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| 5 ||(Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| 8 ||(Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| 49 ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Dishonored]]||WIP||('''SPECIFIC EDITING RULES TO BE FOUND INSIDE.''')
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| 35 ||
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| 2 ||(WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| 5 ||(Public)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || 4 ||(Please Edit!)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball: your very own story]]||3+ ||(Do not edit, only play)
|-
|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 19+ ||WIP, NO EDITING
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+
|-
|[[Choose Your Own Adventure: Ravenloft ]]|| 0|| Public.
|-
|[[Encounter With Your Ex]]|| 3+ || Under Construction. Do Not Edit. Private
|-
|[[Escape from Syria]]|| 160+ || WIP, please don't edit
|-
|[[Exalted: Second Edition]]|| 0|| Please refer to Idea Pitches section before doing anything here.
|-
|[[Faction (Gay)]]|| WIP || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[F.R. Theory]]||20+||(WIP, for a school project. Please don't edit pages that are already up)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| 8 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+ |
|-
|[[ Game of Thrones]]|| 0 || (WIP, Private)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || 50+ ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Bringers of Chaos]] || 13+ || (Work In Progress)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || 7 ||(New story, under construction)
|-
|[[The Grey Manor]]|| 5+ || Under Construction. Please do not edit!
|-
|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )
|-
|[[Harry Potter: New Adventures at Hogwarts]]|| WIP || private
|-
|[[Hero's or Villains]] || 10 ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| 5 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[ Hetalia Days]]|| 0 || (WORK IN PROGRESS. Please Do NOT Edit!)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| 30+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
||[[High School Drama and Romance is Stupid]]|| 10+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[HighSchool]]|| WIP || (Just Started, please don't edit)
|-
|[[Hitman]]|| 11+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public
|-
|[[Hollywood U (based on the game)]]|| W.I.P || private for now, please don't edit
|-
|[[The horrors]]||10+||Work in progress. DO NOT edit or add new pages (but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| 4 ||(Under Construction)
|-
|[[Hunteria's Rising ]]||10+ ||Collaboration with Rwenmax and Michaltheanhur (Still Editing)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Identity Gun]]|| W.I.P|| (DO NOT EDIT please

All Mature Stories

2016-05-03T23:09:50Z

NathanielPatellis: /* Mature Stories */

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''
{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
|Title||Pages||Notes
|-
|[[Masturbation]]||0||private, please do not edit unless asked
|-
|[[ 1968]]|| 0 || public WIP, Do Not Edit
|-
|[[ Awakened World: 7yrs Later]]|| 43 || Private WIP, Please Don't Edit
|-
|[[Alorias Glory]]|| WIP || public
|-
|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)
|-
|[[1943]]||35||Open
|-
|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)
|-
| [[Back in Time Again]]||100+||(Private, please don't edit)
|-
|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)
|-
|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)
|-
|[[A New Persona]]||3+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball Z]]||1+||(private)
|-
|[[A YOUNG BOY'S NIGHT]] (GAY) ||89+||(WIP - Private, please do not edit.)
|-
|[[The Unsuspecting Adventurer]]|| 1 ||(Just starting it, please don't edit for now.)
|-
|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
|-
|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[Adventure through Mythology]]||20+||(WIP; Public; Please Don't Edit; First Story)
|-
|[[The Touch Of Fear]]|| WIP || (Private, Please do not edit)
|-
|[[The Adventures of CJ: Vol. 1]]|| 10+ || please do not edit
|-
|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
|-
|[[Aleron]]||16+ ||(W.I.P)
|-
|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
|-
|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
|-
|[[Amnesia]]||50+
|-
|[[Am I Dreaming?]]|| 13+ || (WIP. Private)
|-
|[[Another Naruto Story]]|| 7+|| Private: My first attempt so please refrain from editing
|-
|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
|-
|[[Apocolyptia]]|| 4+ || (W.I.P)
|-
|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)
|-
|[[Awake]] || 45
|-
|[[An Apocalypse Story]]|| 0 || private (feel free to edit grammar and spelling)
|-
|[[ Back To Freddy's]]|| 0 || private
|-
|[[Badassery]] || 20+
|-
|[[Batman vs Joker]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Batman vs Joker}} || W.I.P Private, Do NOT edit!
|-
|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
|-
|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
|-
|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 13+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Bio Wars]]|| WIP|| Public (Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit
|-
|[[Bleach: An RPG]]|| W.I.P || Public -Do NOT Edit!
|-
|[[ The blood disease]]|| 3 || (Please don't edit the story! I'm hopeless when it comes to coding though so if someone could help me with that, it would be great! I'm keeping an open mind though, and welcoming new ideas please ask before you add though!
|-
|[[Bloodshed]]||16+
|-
|[[Bloodsport:Menu|Bloodsport.]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Bloodsport.}} ||('''Just beginning, seeking other writers to add their own characters into the story.''')
|-
|[[Blood Sunrise]]|| 25+ || W.I.P.
|-
|[[The Book of Darkness]]||0||(WIP- '''DO NOT EDIT.''' I am the writer so I make the story.)
|-
|[[Book of Satan]]||13+||WIP- Do not edit please
|-
|[[Burning Leaves]] ||12||(Under construction, don´t edit!!)
|-
|[[The Bulletman]]||14||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[Byzantium]]|| 0 || (W.I.P, Please don't edit.)
|-
|[[Carnage]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Cartoonish Chronicles]]|| 1+ || (W.I.P. DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Catacombs]]|| 16 ||(WIP. you may edit, just stick to the story)
|-
|[[Catch me if you can]]|| WIP. public (Free to edit but don't kill off any major characters without asking)
|-
|[[Choice of Arms]]||5||(Public)
|-
|[[Choose your own Naruto Adventure]]|| 200+ || (W.I.P. Do not edit)
|-
|[[Chronicle]]||0|| Work in Progress (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Chronicles of Darkness A.K.A New World of Darkness- First Edition]]||0|| Please refer to Idea Pitches before doing anything here.
|-
|[[City Life]]|| 12 ||
|-
|[[City Life Manhattan]]||22+
|-
|[[Clock Tower: School of Devils]]|| 10+ || Work in progress
|-
|[[ Collapse]]|| W.I.P. || private
|-
|[[College Wars]]||{{PAGESINCAT:College Wars}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''
|-
|[[College of Killings]]||{{PAGESINCAT: College of Killings}}|| Work in progress. '''DO NOT EDIT THIS!'''
|-
|[[Complete,Utter Randomness]]||12+
|-
|[[ The Conductor ]]|| 0 || Work in Progress Plx don't edit
|-
|[[Critical Control]]|| 5 (WIP) || Private Don't Edit [updated every weekend]
|-
|[[Critical Thoughts]]|| 11 ||(W.I.P.)
|-
|[[The Chronicles of Strange I.]]||200+||(W.I.P please do not edit)
|-
|[[Darkened Hope]]||30+
|-
|[[Dating Game]]|| 34+
|-
|[[ A day at high school]]|| 0 || Under construction.
|-
|[[A Day In The Life Of A Dangerous Hitman]]||24+
|-
|[[D-Day|D-Day 1944]]|| WIP || (Just started do not edit.)
|-
|[[Dead Reckoning]]|| 8 ||(WIP DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Dead Town]]|| 0 || Under Construction/DO NOT EDIT PLEASE
|-
|[[Death Comes Quickly]]|| 25+ ||(Under construction. NO PUBLIC EDITS.)
|-
|[[Demon Hunter]]|| 5 ||(Under construction)
|-
|[[Demon College]]|| 8 ||(Just started, Public)
|-
|[[Desperate Road Trip]]|| 49 ||(Under Construction. Do Not Edit!)
|-
|[[Dishonored]]||WIP||('''SPECIFIC EDITING RULES TO BE FOUND INSIDE.''')
|-
|[[Dogfight over Europe]]|| 35+
|-
|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[Don't Die]]|| 35 ||
|-
|[[Donut Factory]]|| 2 ||(WIP. Ask before editing)
|-
|[[Day In The Life: Vacation!!!]]|| 5 ||(Public)
|-
|[[The Deadly Creed]] || 4 ||(Please Edit!)
|-
|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
|-
|[[Doll House]]|| 40+ || Private (DO NOT EDIT)
|-
|[[ Dragon Ball Z:Quest]]|| 60+ ||Under Construction. Pls Do not Edit)
|-
|[[Dragon Ball: your very own story]]||3+ ||(Do not edit, only play)
|-
|[[Dragon ball ZT]] || 19+ ||WIP, NO EDITING
|-
|[[Duel fates]]|| 15+
|-
|[[Choose Your Own Adventure: Ravenloft ]]|| 0|| Public.
|-
|[[Encounter With Your Ex]]|| 3+ || Under Construction. Do Not Edit. Private
|-
|[[Escape from Syria]]|| 160+ || WIP, please don't edit
|-
|[[Exalted: Second Edition]]|| 0|| Please refer to Idea Pitches section before doing anything here.
|-
|[[Faction (Gay)]]|| WIP || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[F.R. Theory]]||20+||(WIP, for a school project. Please don't edit pages that are already up)
|-
|[[Fiddlers Green]]|| 8 ||(WIP)
|-
|[[Fogwood High: The Game]]|| 30+ |
|-
|[[ Game of Thrones]]|| 0 || (WIP, Private)
|-
|[[Gears of war time]] || 50+ ||(Under Construction, please don't edit)
|-
|[[The Bringers of Chaos]] || 13+ || (Work In Progress)
|-
|[[The Giant Building With A Million Rooms]] ||175+
|-
|[[The Girl Down the Street]] ||20
|-
|[[The Great War of Earth]] || 7 ||(New story, under construction)
|-
|[[The Grey Manor]]|| 5+ || Under Construction. Please do not edit!
|-
|[[Glorious Bloods]] || 2||(Work In Progress, PLEASE DO NOT EDIT )
|-
|[[Harry Potter: New Adventures at Hogwarts]]|| WIP || private
|-
|[[Hero's or Villains]] || 10 ||(Work In Progress, Don't Edit. Made by Critic-AL)
|-
|[[Hetalia:A Sleep Over At America's House]]|| 5 ||(WIP Please Don't Edit)
|-
|[[ Hetalia Days]]|| 0 || (WORK IN PROGRESS. Please Do NOT Edit!)
|-
||[[High School Blues]]|| 30+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
||[[High School Drama and Romance is Stupid]]|| 10+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[HighSchool]]|| WIP || (Just Started, please don't edit)
|-
|[[Hitman]]|| 11+ || (WIP Don't edit)
|-
|[[Hoboken Has Gone to Hell]]|| 25+ || Public
|-
|[[Hollywood U (based on the game)]]|| W.I.P || private for now, please don't edit
|-
|[[The horrors]]||10+||Work in progress. DO NOT edit or add new pages (but feel free to fix grammatical and spelling errors)
|-
|[[How I Became A Necromancer]]|| 4 ||(Under Construction)
|-
|[[Hunteria's Rising ]]||10+ ||Collaboration with Rwenmax and Michaltheanhur (Still Editing)
|-
|[[Identity Crisis]]|| 5 || (Do Not Edit)
|-
|[[Identity Gun]]|| W.I.P|| (DO NOT EDIT please

User talk:NathanielPatellis

2016-05-03T20:20:48Z

NathanielPatellis: Save my Soul

== Save my Soul ==

"It's been a week since Malina went missing, everyone says that's it okay that she's ran away before, she'll be back soon." you think that thought well looking at your self through your bathroom window.
You one of your schools most popular teenagers and you just can't help but use that to your advantage.
the small town of Don Carlos were everyone has a secret and everyone has a past. looking yourself in the eyes you just can't help to smirk as you almost know every one on them.
But anyway who are you.