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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Hello.''&lt;br /&gt;
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To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter twice.&lt;br /&gt;
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See, it helps properly space. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 28 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What does &amp;quot;writing branches&amp;quot; have to do with adding category? And, the front page shows both the [[Rules]] and the [[Tutorial]], so not sure why it matters if someone is new or not... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...  What she said.  I expect that however many or however few pages you post, each one will include the title of the story as a category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You can ask me anything you like on my talk page.  It isn't private, but I don't believe there should be any need for privacy here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:58, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Do not add things like &amp;quot;pink dildo&amp;quot; to the status template example. That is a template for everyone on this site, to see how to create one, not one for your use. It has been removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been there, tried that. Glad I did not succeed in committing suicide, since I am happy with my life now. If I had succeeded I would never have made it to this place, at this time, and I would have hurt everyone who does love me. Honestly, now I sort of feel it is rather selfish. I mean, have you ever thought about what happens after? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to hear that. You didn't break anything, did you? If so, you should probably splint it and see the doctor. As for the black eye, ice, and remember to half heartily chuckle when people ask what happened and you tell them &amp;quot;I got in a fight with a tree. You should see the tree.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:07, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you really want, you can do like my mom always recommended. &amp;quot;Why do you have a black eye?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I didn't like the way it looked at me in the mirror, so I bit it.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:08, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I just turned 24 this month. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:12, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't technically have abandoned stories, you can always try the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] though. If you know good pranks, you could always help with [[Prank War]]. Sadly, I am not the prank type of person. I recommend reading what I have to figure out how the loops work, and please remember to keep it PG-13. So no naughty pranks. Cruel pranks are fine as long as you keep it in the PG category. And don't add alot of pranks to one person and ignore the other person. If your grammar isn't perfect, no worries, just let me know (if I do not see it in the recent changes) and I can go in and tidy it up. I would love to see more pranks, but like I said, not something I am as great at. Unfortunately, the other stories I have not worked on much are either adult (If you are half my age, then you cannot really contribute to them. Sorry, I don't want to know if you are reading adult stories as a minor. Don't tell me, and don't edit my adult stories so I wouldn't know) or they would be hard unless you understand things about HTML or know how to speak Chinese. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:32, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Umm, you shouldn't start a story on your talk page...&lt;br /&gt;
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And, you did not add category to your [[I am male]] page. You need to include your category. Remember the warning you got about it. After 3 warnings, Platypus will ban you, so you need to go edit it and include it. Remember to go through the [[Tutorial]] about it if you don't remember how. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:07, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A damn story? A story about a dam?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;I sit here most days, just holding in the water. Sometimes the operators let me relieve myself, water flowing from my spout, and other days they make me hold it, sometimes for months at a time. Then the crack was noticed. The operators panicked, because below me was a sizable city. If the crack grew larger, if I started to break apart, the city would be flooded, lives would be lost, and people would cry. I didn't want people to cry, but I did not know what to do. I could not do anything by myself, but had to rely on the humans.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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'''A dam story!''' Great idea, to tell a story from the perspective of the dam, maybe include human perspective as they struggle to try to keep the dam from breaking and washing away the city. You can even include beavers!&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, you meant something else...&lt;br /&gt;
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In which case, you are aware that it doesn't matter if you just started a story. When you create a new story, first thing you should do is put the category. The page should never be saved without it. I try to just remind people about that before the system admin finds it, since after three warnings, the person will be banned. But, if you prefer me to just give you an official warning, making it the second one, then I can do that instead. I guess it is up to you... &lt;br /&gt;
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Next up: The ban story! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:49, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're going to treat this site as your personal joke, you will get banned.  If you actually want to write a story, read the [[tutorial]].  Do it right.  Your story can be as goofy or comedic as you like.  You can write the adventures of a pink dildo if you're so enchanted with pink dildos.  But you can't start a story on your talk page, and deliberately posting an uncategorized page that you know is crosslinked with other stories isn't funny. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The only way for you to hide a story is by not posting it until it is ready.  You can declare a story to be private, but that only means that you don't want anyone else to add to or edit it.  You can't keep people from reading it.  If you want to post a story on this site, you must follow the site rules.  If you refuse to follow site rules, you will be banned.  This means that all stories must have a title and that title must appear as a category on every page.  No exceptions. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:10, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well that was pretty dumb.-Reed 2020&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Hello.''&lt;br /&gt;
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To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter twice.&lt;br /&gt;
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See, it helps properly space. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 28 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What does &amp;quot;writing branches&amp;quot; have to do with adding category? And, the front page shows both the [[Rules]] and the [[Tutorial]], so not sure why it matters if someone is new or not... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...  What she said.  I expect that however many or however few pages you post, each one will include the title of the story as a category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You can ask me anything you like on my talk page.  It isn't private, but I don't believe there should be any need for privacy here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:58, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Do not add things like &amp;quot;pink dildo&amp;quot; to the status template example. That is a template for everyone on this site, to see how to create one, not one for your use. It has been removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been there, tried that. Glad I did not succeed in committing suicide, since I am happy with my life now. If I had succeeded I would never have made it to this place, at this time, and I would have hurt everyone who does love me. Honestly, now I sort of feel it is rather selfish. I mean, have you ever thought about what happens after? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to hear that. You didn't break anything, did you? If so, you should probably splint it and see the doctor. As for the black eye, ice, and remember to half heartily chuckle when people ask what happened and you tell them &amp;quot;I got in a fight with a tree. You should see the tree.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:07, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you really want, you can do like my mom always recommended. &amp;quot;Why do you have a black eye?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I didn't like the way it looked at me in the mirror, so I bit it.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:08, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I just turned 24 this month. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:12, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't technically have abandoned stories, you can always try the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] though. If you know good pranks, you could always help with [[Prank War]]. Sadly, I am not the prank type of person. I recommend reading what I have to figure out how the loops work, and please remember to keep it PG-13. So no naughty pranks. Cruel pranks are fine as long as you keep it in the PG category. And don't add alot of pranks to one person and ignore the other person. If your grammar isn't perfect, no worries, just let me know (if I do not see it in the recent changes) and I can go in and tidy it up. I would love to see more pranks, but like I said, not something I am as great at. Unfortunately, the other stories I have not worked on much are either adult (If you are half my age, then you cannot really contribute to them. Sorry, I don't want to know if you are reading adult stories as a minor. Don't tell me, and don't edit my adult stories so I wouldn't know) or they would be hard unless you understand things about HTML or know how to speak Chinese. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:32, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Umm, you shouldn't start a story on your talk page...&lt;br /&gt;
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And, you did not add category to your [[I am male]] page. You need to include your category. Remember the warning you got about it. After 3 warnings, Platypus will ban you, so you need to go edit it and include it. Remember to go through the [[Tutorial]] about it if you don't remember how. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:07, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A damn story? A story about a dam?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;I sit here most days, just holding in the water. Sometimes the operators let me relieve myself, water flowing from my spout, and other days they make me hold it, sometimes for months at a time. Then the crack was noticed. The operators panicked, because below me was a sizable city. If the crack grew larger, if I started to break apart, the city would be flooded, lives would be lost, and people would cry. I didn't want people to cry, but I did not know what to do. I could not do anything by myself, but had to rely on the humans.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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'''A dam story!''' Great idea, to tell a story from the perspective of the dam, maybe include human perspective as they struggle to try to keep the dam from breaking and washing away the city. You can even include beavers!&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, you meant something else...&lt;br /&gt;
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In which case, you are aware that it doesn't matter if you just started a story. When you create a new story, first thing you should do is put the category. The page should never be saved without it. I try to just remind people about that before the system admin finds it, since after three warnings, the person will be banned. But, if you prefer me to just give you an official warning, making it the second one, then I can do that instead. I guess it is up to you... &lt;br /&gt;
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Next up: The ban story! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:49, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're going to treat this site as your personal joke, you will get banned.  If you actually want to write a story, read the [[tutorial]].  Do it right.  Your story can be as goofy or comedic as you like.  You can write the adventures of a pink dildo if you're so enchanted with pink dildos.  But you can't start a story on your talk page, and deliberately posting an uncategorized page that you know is crosslinked with other stories isn't funny. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The only way for you to hide a story is by not posting it until it is ready.  You can declare a story to be private, but that only means that you don't want anyone else to add to or edit it.  You can't keep people from reading it.  If you want to post a story on this site, you must follow the site rules.  If you refuse to follow site rules, you will be banned.  This means that all stories must have a title and that title must appear as a category on every page.  No exceptions. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:10, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:User Pages]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well that was pretty dumb.&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Michaeltamayo96</name></author>	</entry>

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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Hello.&lt;br /&gt;
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This is me&lt;br /&gt;
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If you care pls make me a story&lt;br /&gt;
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ABOUT ANYTHING!&lt;br /&gt;
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Wandering in the woods or whatever you think!&lt;br /&gt;
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just do the story!&lt;br /&gt;
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The story is yours!&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe edit is mine but u dont have to worry.&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Status|Equipment=Story Creating Capsule(AKA SCC)|Health=9999|MP=SCC POWERS|Level=SCC CONTROLER}}&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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Cleaning areas infected.&lt;br /&gt;
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Error not enough Biotex-2&lt;br /&gt;
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Nova 12 spreading.&lt;br /&gt;
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|GUY WITHOUTBALLS]]&lt;br /&gt;
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.&lt;br /&gt;
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But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.&lt;br /&gt;
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They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.&lt;br /&gt;
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You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?&amp;lt;/font color&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.&lt;br /&gt;
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The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.&lt;br /&gt;
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Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.&lt;br /&gt;
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Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.&lt;br /&gt;
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I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.&lt;br /&gt;
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I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.&lt;br /&gt;
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But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on. &lt;br /&gt;
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You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss*  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.&lt;br /&gt;
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How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?&lt;br /&gt;
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100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit &amp;quot;How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem.&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.&lt;br /&gt;
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It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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How about &amp;quot;The Best New Breasts&amp;quot;? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;The Breast New Thing!&amp;quot; &amp;quot;Perfect For Breast Men!&amp;quot; &amp;quot;New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have not played any of the Fallout games.&lt;br /&gt;
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I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced. &lt;br /&gt;
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If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.&lt;br /&gt;
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Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==[[User:117|117]]==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D&lt;br /&gt;
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]&lt;br /&gt;
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016&lt;br /&gt;
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==&lt;br /&gt;
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The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'.  Yes, I think this one is very young.&lt;br /&gt;
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The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That penis is between you &amp;amp; Zenclair.  I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many.  I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&amp;amp;D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16==&lt;br /&gt;
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked  in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.&lt;br /&gt;
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Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA &amp;quot;Now you're a girl!&amp;quot;? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of &amp;quot;Kill myself by setting myself on fire&amp;quot; depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull!  ‎ &lt;br /&gt;
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Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.   &lt;br /&gt;
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Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as &amp;quot;small and perky&amp;quot;. Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.&lt;br /&gt;
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CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your &amp;quot;Winnie the Pooh&amp;quot; thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Alright, 4 things:&lt;br /&gt;
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A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?&lt;br /&gt;
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B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures? &lt;br /&gt;
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C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic &amp;quot;gril&amp;quot;. What if I am? Would it matter? &lt;br /&gt;
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D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.   &lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:44 (Louisiana Time), 14 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4.&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole &amp;quot;wiki&amp;quot; thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly.  --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--&lt;br /&gt;
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I read some of your stuff. You seem  like a fun girl.&lt;br /&gt;
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Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.--[[User:michaeltamayo|michael TAMAYO GUY&lt;br /&gt;
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.&lt;br /&gt;
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But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.&lt;br /&gt;
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They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.&lt;br /&gt;
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You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?&amp;lt;/font color&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.&lt;br /&gt;
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The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.&lt;br /&gt;
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Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.&lt;br /&gt;
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Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.&lt;br /&gt;
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I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.&lt;br /&gt;
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I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.&lt;br /&gt;
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But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on. &lt;br /&gt;
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You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss*  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.&lt;br /&gt;
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How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?&lt;br /&gt;
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100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit &amp;quot;How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem.&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.&lt;br /&gt;
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It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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How about &amp;quot;The Best New Breasts&amp;quot;? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;The Breast New Thing!&amp;quot; &amp;quot;Perfect For Breast Men!&amp;quot; &amp;quot;New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have not played any of the Fallout games.&lt;br /&gt;
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I read your blog, remember? I know the horrors you experienced. &lt;br /&gt;
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If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.&lt;br /&gt;
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Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==[[User:117|117]]==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D&lt;br /&gt;
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]&lt;br /&gt;
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016&lt;br /&gt;
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==&lt;br /&gt;
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The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'.  Yes, I think this one is very young.&lt;br /&gt;
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The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That penis is between you &amp;amp; Zenclair.  I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many.  I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&amp;amp;D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16==&lt;br /&gt;
You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked  in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.&lt;br /&gt;
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Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA &amp;quot;Now you're a girl!&amp;quot;? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of &amp;quot;Kill myself by setting myself on fire&amp;quot; depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull!  ‎ &lt;br /&gt;
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Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.   &lt;br /&gt;
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Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as &amp;quot;small and perky&amp;quot;. Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.&lt;br /&gt;
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CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 17:23 (Louisiana Time), 9 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your &amp;quot;Winnie the Pooh&amp;quot; thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Alright, 4 things:&lt;br /&gt;
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A. Random question: who do you like, Wolverine or Cyclops?&lt;br /&gt;
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B. Are the pictures you've put on your page pictures of you or just random pictures? &lt;br /&gt;
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C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic &amp;quot;gril&amp;quot;. What if I am? Would it matter? &lt;br /&gt;
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D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.   &lt;br /&gt;
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E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4.&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole &amp;quot;wiki&amp;quot; thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly.  --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--&lt;br /&gt;
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== Messages from Clara ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I read some of your stuff. You seem  like a fun girl.&lt;br /&gt;
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Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey I just got back here coz i havent been active for a while though. So far I cant write story without inspiration. Well I think I can move on from that except playing computer or CF.&lt;br /&gt;
== [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I know trans women don't generally get treated that way in real life, but I may be injecting a bit of my own fantasy into it. I mean, the whole thing started as my fantasies so lol. Surprisingly progressive rapists and burglars. In real life trans women struggle to get practically anyone who knows to accept them as a real woman.&lt;br /&gt;
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But they are real women, and unless it's really necessary to the story overall I'd rather not have it be a big huge thing every time I want to write a sex scene for her. The alternative is me writing Janet being beaten or tortured by the burglars for having a dick, and I don't want to do that. Not right there, at least. Maybe in another branch and done by someone else.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for your friend, I would ask them what to refer to them as. I'm betting she/her but it's better to ask and be sure. Then try to use those pronouns as often as possible as long as it's safe, even if they're not around. Like unless you would be revealing their transgender status to someone they want to keep it a secret to, it's best to keep using it. It may take some getting used to but it's worth it to show them you care enough about them.&lt;br /&gt;
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They'll likely face many people who, often intentionally, will call them by the wrong pronouns. Having someone consistently use the right pronouns and name is a huge boost in confidence.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll see what I can do for the cafe next. I've kinda been doing things as they occur to me :v --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:21, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Try not to think of it in terms of you feeling like a guy. Think of it like, you feel like yourself, a woman, but your birth certificate says male, your parents raised you as a boy, you have a penis (which is not always a problem, plenty of trans women don't have a problem having a penis, it's other people that have the problem with it,) and unless you got the hint early and everybody was okay with it, you've seen a guy in the mirror your whole life. There's a lot more to it but that's the gist.&lt;br /&gt;
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You want to look how you feel, you want people to acknowledge that you're a woman, you don't want to have the same conversations, the same questions every time someone finds out, you just went to be you, but all of this is difficult to accomplish.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry about Marie's story. I kind of used her branch as a dumping ground for my darker thoughts for some reason. I was remembering pretty dark times and wanted to get those out. I was considering adding a couple of other characters once I've got more done on the ones I have on there. I have some ideas. Happier ones. Keep an eye out for those :v. --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:53, 26 May 2016 (UTC) &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; p.s. the answer is yes, I am, but don't tell anyone plz?&amp;lt;/font color&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've considered getting a keyboard to use for my tablet, but the problem is we never have more than a couple dollars to spare. That, and my charger (which wasn't made for a tablet) uses the USB port and isn't very effective, so I have to keep it plugged in most of the time. If I had a replacement for the original charger this wouldn't be a problem, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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It would only be a quick fix, but I would swing it if I could. Having a laptop would open up a lot more options even if it was a cheap one, and I'm hoping I can get one soon, or get the one I have to function as more than a paperweight. This tablet just generally refuses to work for making digital art, for instance.&lt;br /&gt;
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The rules thing, I mean I can kinda understand because I guess they didn't even have a rules page for a while? But me personally I always try to find out just what's allowed somewhere before I put something up. I hate running into situations where I'm breaking rules or just generally fudging everything because I didn't know. Ran into that with the DeviantArt account I had made a long time ago for my explicit art. Which they don't allow. :v&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:52, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Bluetooth. So, I have a wireless mouse that I wanted to see if it would pair with my tablet. Idk if the mouse is bluetooth or not but I figured I'd give it a shot. Well, after searching all through my settings, it looks like my tablet might not even be capable of Bluetooth. So, that's out I guess.&lt;br /&gt;
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Having a chat based cyoa does sound like an interesting idea! --[[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 19:36, 29 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, the back of it says Nextablet and I think it's android 4.1. Beyond that I'm not sure what information is important.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've seen some terrible messages but I've never seen any quite that bad that I could still sorta tell what they were saying. I've seen some that were probably drunk at the time that, they were clearly typing something but fuck if I was ever going to learn what it was.&lt;br /&gt;
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Makes me think of those ciphers where you're supposed to read one letter as another letter, like cddc actually means abba or ere means bob, but if they did it with whole words instead of letters. Like idk fish means cat and tree means deepthroat or something.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you don't want to copy mine because you don't want to copy someone then it doesn't matter to me if you do. If you don't want to copy it because it's a huge pain in the ass then that's perfectly understandable, there's probably so many easier ways to do that and I just don't know them lol.&lt;br /&gt;
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I was initially going to do mine so it looked more like AIM or YIM, which was kind of how it ended up looking the first way I did it, but your words in bubbles gave me the idea to try to make it look more like Facebook Messenger app, so I fiddled with that til it looked more or less like I wanted. Thank you for sharing that :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:51, 30 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for making the template! I'll keep using that format for that conversation/that character's branch whenever chat comes up, but I think I may try something else for other characters/conversations.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm thinking something more along the lines of a box that looks kinda like a yahoo messenger window, especially if I can make it scroll vertically within the box. That seems like it'd be easier to reuse/make a template of, though I've never made one before personally.&lt;br /&gt;
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I really need to get back to writing in general but IRL stuff's been on my mind. Rent stuff. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 18:33, 6 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I will keep the offer in mind :v. I'm looking into a bunch of different things to hopefully keep this from happening again in the future. I completely understand not having anything left by the end of the month, not just from our current situation, pretty much my entire life has been like that with my family. We moved across the country because we couldn't afford the house we were living in. We were never able to keep a house longer than like a couple years, and we kept moving back in with my grandparents.&lt;br /&gt;
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But yeah, if we can get through this month we're going to do everything we can to keep it from getting to this point again. Editing/proofreading definitely falls within the realm of things I can do, thank you for offering :v. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 17:49, 13 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:Teejay|Teejay]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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E-mail sent. I was offline all day today, just now had a chance to pop on. &lt;br /&gt;
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You. You are my dirty nerdy girl. *blows kiss*  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I know zilch about programming. Strictly an applications guy.&lt;br /&gt;
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How many computer programmers does it take to change a light bulb joke?&lt;br /&gt;
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100. 1 to change the joke, and 99 to submit &amp;quot;How many programmers does it take to change a light bulb? Incorrect, that is a hardware problem.&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Email replied to. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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At least they tried, and despite a few typos, I thought they did a reasonable job. It's not the best I've ever read, but it's not anywhere near the worst either. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You could tell that the author was young and male. But with a bit more practice, they'll learn what words to avoid and their writing will mature.&lt;br /&gt;
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It took me a few years to get it down. This was my first successful effort: www.literotica.com/s/alexandra-1&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not easy to write from a woman's perspective if you're male, but it is doable. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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How about &amp;quot;The Best New Breasts&amp;quot;? -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know if I have such a hat, but I'll try.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;The Breast New Thing!&amp;quot; &amp;quot;Perfect For Breast Men!&amp;quot; &amp;quot;New Discovery -- Stay Abreast!&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll post one more option for The Exhibitionist, and hope it cheers you up. And I'll beam over nice thoughts.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to hear it. I'll still send over nice thoughts. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Send the rain over here, we could use it. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just reading that link made ME want to slice that teacher's throat. I can't stand when authority figures (of any gender) use their position to abuse vulnerable minors. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I know it's real. And you've been through things I don't even want to imagine. I hope you always have a loving, caring partner from now on who can help you keep what happened quelled. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just read what you posted in reply to Fredhot16. And now I feel ''really'' honored. You know very well why.&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. -- I think you're a beautiful person. And that has nothing to do with your looks (although you are nice looking.) You've been through so much, and somehow emerged without being totally shattered. You're a terrific writer and an amazing an courageous human being. Like I've said before, I wish you and your husband and child many years of happiness together as a family. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have not played any of the Fallout games.&lt;br /&gt;
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If I had met you while you were in high school, I would have taken you in and gotten you clean and sober. Or at least done everything possible to do so. I actually did that for the daughter of a friend when she went through her very rough high school years (both her parents were strung out on drugs.) This particular person is about 2-3 years older than you.&lt;br /&gt;
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Like I said, you're amazing. And awesome. I wouldn't wish what you went through on my worst enemy if I had one. Any you came through it, surviving somehow. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Sticking to the questions you asked: you did a fantastic job of writing that. I can't write 1/10 that well. (I suppose you're particularly good at writing scenes like that because you can draw on actual memories.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==[[User:117|117]]==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey there, got your message on my talk. Thanks for the compliments, didn't think anyone was reading, it made my day. Just remember, when you read my stories; it doesn't have to end in sex :D&lt;br /&gt;
Do you think you could leave a link or something on my story where I went wrong? I got lost trying to find the correct story branch that I was looking for. -- [[User:117|117]]&lt;br /&gt;
P.S: Still getting used to messaging people on here. 26 May 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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There we go. I've edited it and I think that's everything. Thanks for looking out. --[[User:117|117]] 27 May 2016&lt;br /&gt;
==[[User:Platypus|Platypus]]==&lt;br /&gt;
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The whole pink dildo thing makes me think of the thirteen-year-olds in science class snickering because the teacher said 'Uranus'.  Yes, I think this one is very young.&lt;br /&gt;
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The idea of an invisible story is kind of amusing, though. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:43, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That penis is between you &amp;amp; Zenclair.  I'm not touching it. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:57, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your fantasy is no stranger than many of the fantasies that make up SSR, and it's possibly more normal than many.  I'm sure I can find a place in SSR where it could be worked in. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:36, 1 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You new review idea looks like it's got potential, especially since the old reviewer seems to have permanently retired. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:46, 3 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've never played any of the Fallout games, although I was in a D&amp;amp;D campaign where we had to save Harry Potter from the threat of Nuka-Cola, with some help from the Men In Black. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:55, 16 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You might want to sit down and get comfortable. I know we haven' talked  in about a month so here's a month's worth of talking. (Note: This may seem incomplete but that's because my computer is a bit wonky and what I had previously wrote disappeared when I had to close the window. I'll finish it later.)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sex scenes: You know what...I don't necessarily DISAGREE with you.&lt;br /&gt;
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Think I've been here too long: Hey, remember the Adult Story CYOA &amp;quot;Now you're a girl!&amp;quot;? I found myself thinking about how the potential was wasted in the story as one could easily write the guy exploring his new body and it wouldn't even be too outlandish. The thought made me realize I've been hanging around the dark sections of Create Your Own Story for too long. And yet I can't...stop...looking... P.S The sheer scale of spelling and grammar mistakes on this website is just short of &amp;quot;Kill myself by setting myself on fire&amp;quot; depressing. Nobody even tried to double check their work and fix common mistakes. Spell checking isn't hard! Ah, well, guess there's only one thing to do: I call forth the power of Grammarskull!  ‎ &lt;br /&gt;
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Too many ideas: I think the biggest problem I have is that I have too many story ideas to work on. There's about 5 CYOSs listed on my introduction page and I have about 15-17 story ideas outside of this website. The sheer amount of content I have planned for all of these ideas is truly staggering. That's why I haven't been able to pull my weight on the collaboration with Teejay over Anime School. Also, this is the month of Ramadan so I won't be able to touch any of the Adult CYOSs until July 7. Edit: Heh. You really want to compare? Just say the word.   &lt;br /&gt;
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Common descriptions in CYOS: I've noticed that common breast descriptions are either of the buxom variety or they are commonly described as &amp;quot;small and perky&amp;quot;. Are...are small and perky breasts really that popular? Also, the habit of describing breasts by band width and cup size like 52D or 42B is WAY too common around here. Writing is supposed to help you imagine what's been written. Using measurements as descriptions doesn't help visualize breasts as I don't think most people could quickly imagine what the size of the chest is by knowing the bandwidth and cup size like that. I mean, if you're using measurements in a profile, that's...possibly acceptable but it doesn't do to be in the actual narration.&lt;br /&gt;
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CYOS that needs some love: There's this CYOS called One Princess, Four Princes, Choices in the Mature Story section that's woefully without much content. Maybe you could give it some good old CYOS love?&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, if it makes you feel any better, I'd rather read about YOUR sexual adventures then the sexual adventures those fictional women with breasts the size of their heads. Also, I don't think they're really trying to learn how women work, just how ''BEWBS'' work. Eh, at least they're learning ''something''. I'll give them that. Edit: and by them learning, I was forced to learn it as well! And knowing is half the battle! The other half, apparently, is lots of rampant sex. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 01:17 (Louisiana Time), 11 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh. Ah, well, you see, I wasn't really-I can see why you would think that but-come on, I don't really think that you don't have a life! You look like the coolest OG, yo! You know...just lying on the couch...in a dress, gown, negligee, whatever... presumably sleeping off a hangover...well, your &amp;quot;Winnie the Pooh&amp;quot; thing under the pillow looks kinda neat. That definitely proves you have a life! Also, how long until you get a better internet connection?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:57 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey! How do you know I'm not a girl, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 16:28 (Louisiana Time), 12 June 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Alright, 4 things:&lt;br /&gt;
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C.Hmmm. Could be a girl. May be I'm just a anthropomorphic &amp;quot;gril&amp;quot;. What if I am? Would it matter? &lt;br /&gt;
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D. You know, I think you just might be one of-scratch that, the ''only'' writer on this website I have a inkling of respect for because you're the only writer who actually CARES about her work, who's trying to ''write''. You seem to put more effort in your writing then I've seen in 90% of adult CYOSs and for that, you have my regard.   &lt;br /&gt;
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E. Yeah, I'm a Fallout fan. I've played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, (both on the PC) and Fallout 4 on the PS4. I'm currently playing New Vegas, which I'm really liking, and just starting Fallout 4.&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I just wanted to thank you for the friendly help you offered me a few days ago, I am really new to writing stories in this format so it is taking me a while to get a handle on all the correct ways to link things together. It is really nice to have someone looking out for these thing. P.S. I only just figured out how to respond to a message so that's why it's taken me this long to thank you. I am really happy to take advice from people on how to do things, hope I am a good student. By the way I am not sure how the signature thing works so I hope this works... --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 13:38, 31 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I am over 18, I'll give some thought to your Exhibitionist story, no serious ideas right now but I am sure can think of something you would enjoy writing (; --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 08:02, 2 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I am not too sure how you want the option formatted, I left you an option under the link you have created on the stories front page. Hope you have fun.--[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:36, 2 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That is a rather interesting piece of information, I suppose the symbolism is something I could consider working into the story, the story is supposed to be location neutral (it could be in any country), so it does need to relate to a broad variety of cultures, and things like that can add depth. I hope you are enjoying the story so far. Glad someone is reading it. :) --[[User:Darkfry|Darkfry]] 10:57, 3 June 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm following basically the same rules as you but I decided to work from Z to A under the assumption a lot of people start moving things to the pit and give up way before they get to the end. I did find a story from 2011 with less than 20 pages somewhere under 'Y' I think. -- [[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 9:00 29 May 2016 GMT&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, I just wanted to say thank you for editing may talk/about me what so ever. I m just getting started with this whole &amp;quot;wiki&amp;quot; thing. ... And to prove it I nearly messed up your talk page. nearly.  --[[User:Zehir|Zehir]] 16:44, 6 June 2016 (UTC)--&lt;br /&gt;
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I read some of your stuff. You seem  like a fun girl.&lt;br /&gt;
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Like I said, I'm attracted to you either way. I know a sex site we could possibly chat, if you're interested. Or if you're scared I'm some weirdo, that's cool too.&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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Oh, to get the horizonal line, you do not need to type a horizontal line, just &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;----&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
See? Much easier and better looking xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:14, 27 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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Few years ago, I lost 30,000 men in the blink of an eye, and the world&lt;br /&gt;
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No shortage of patriots. I know you understand&lt;br /&gt;
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The more things change, the more they stay the same. Boundaries shift, new players step in, but power always finds a place to rest its head. We fought and bled along side the Russians. We shoulda' known they'd hate us for it. History is written by the victor, and here I a thinking we won. But you bring down one enemy and they find someone even worse to replace him. Locations change, the rationale, the objective. Yesterday's enemies are today's recruits. Train them to fight alongside you, and pray they don't eventually decide to *hate* you for it, too. &lt;br /&gt;
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We are the most powerful military force in the history of man. *Every* fight is our fight. Because what happens over here matters over there. We don't get to &amp;quot;sit one out&amp;quot;. Learning to use the tools of modern warfare is the difference between the prospering of your people, and utter destruction. We can't give you freedom, but we *can* give you the know-how on how to acquire it. And *that*, my friends, is worth more than a whole army base of steel. Sure, it matters who's got the biggest stick, but it matters a helluva lot more who's swinging it. This is a time for heroes. A time for legends. History is written by the victors. Let's get to work. &lt;br /&gt;
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This man Makarov is fighting his own war and he has no rules, no boundaries. He doesn't flinch at torture, human trafficking or genocide. He's not loyal to a country or a flag or any set of ideals. He trades blood for money. He's your new best friend. &lt;br /&gt;
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You know what they say about revenge, you'd better be ready to dig two graves. Go ahead, end it. It won't change anything. Hmph, I knew you couldn't do it. You're a good warrior, but you could never take that extra step to do what was absolutely necessary.&lt;br /&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Everything is not alike. Everyone is not the same. We must move on from the problems of the past. Create a new story of your timeline. Be creative as you can. Do not let others judge you&lt;br /&gt;
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Hello.''  To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter tw…'&lt;/p&gt;
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To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter twice.&lt;br /&gt;
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See, it helps properly space. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What does &amp;quot;writing branches&amp;quot; have to do with adding category? And, the front page shows both the [[Rules]] and the [[Tutorial]], so not sure why it matters if someone is new or not... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...  What she said.  I expect that however many or however few pages you post, each one will include the title of the story as a category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You can ask me anything you like on my talk page.  It isn't private, but I don't believe there should be any need for privacy here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:58, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Do not add things like &amp;quot;pink dildo&amp;quot; to the status template example. That is a template for everyone on this site, to see how to create one, not one for your use. It has been removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been there, tried that. Glad I did not succeed in committing suicide, since I am happy with my life now. If I had succeeded I would never have made it to this place, at this time, and I would have hurt everyone who does love me. Honestly, now I sort of feel it is rather selfish. I mean, have you ever thought about what happens after? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to hear that. You didn't break anything, did you? If so, you should probably splint it and see the doctor. As for the black eye, ice, and remember to half heartily chuckle when people ask what happened and you tell them &amp;quot;I got in a fight with a tree. You should see the tree.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:07, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you really want, you can do like my mom always recommended. &amp;quot;Why do you have a black eye?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I didn't like the way it looked at me in the mirror, so I bit it.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:08, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I just turned 24 this month. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:12, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't technically have abandoned stories, you can always try the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] though. If you know good pranks, you could always help with [[Prank War]]. Sadly, I am not the prank type of person. I recommend reading what I have to figure out how the loops work, and please remember to keep it PG-13. So no naughty pranks. Cruel pranks are fine as long as you keep it in the PG category. And don't add alot of pranks to one person and ignore the other person. If your grammar isn't perfect, no worries, just let me know (if I do not see it in the recent changes) and I can go in and tidy it up. I would love to see more pranks, but like I said, not something I am as great at. Unfortunately, the other stories I have not worked on much are either adult (If you are half my age, then you cannot really contribute to them. Sorry, I don't want to know if you are reading adult stories as a minor. Don't tell me, and don't edit my adult stories so I wouldn't know) or they would be hard unless you understand things about HTML or know how to speak Chinese. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:32, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Umm, you shouldn't start a story on your talk page...&lt;br /&gt;
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And, you did not add category to your [[I am male]] page. You need to include your category. Remember the warning you got about it. After 3 warnings, Platypus will ban you, so you need to go edit it and include it. Remember to go through the [[Tutorial]] about it if you don't remember how. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:07, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A damn story? A story about a dam?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;I sit here most days, just holding in the water. Sometimes the operators let me relieve myself, water flowing from my spout, and other days they make me hold it, sometimes for months at a time. Then the crack was noticed. The operators panicked, because below me was a sizable city. If the crack grew larger, if I started to break apart, the city would be flooded, lives would be lost, and people would cry. I didn't want people to cry, but I did not know what to do. I could not do anything by myself, but had to rely on the humans.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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'''A dam story!''' Great idea, to tell a story from the perspective of the dam, maybe include human perspective as they struggle to try to keep the dam from breaking and washing away the city. You can even include beavers!&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, you meant something else...&lt;br /&gt;
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In which case, you are aware that it doesn't matter if you just started a story. When you create a new story, first thing you should do is put the category. The page should never be saved without it. I try to just remind people about that before the system admin finds it, since after three warnings, the person will be banned. But, if you prefer me to just give you an official warning, making it the second one, then I can do that instead. I guess it is up to you... &lt;br /&gt;
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Next up: The ban story! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:49, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're going to treat this site as your personal joke, you will get banned.  If you actually want to write a story, read the [[tutorial]].  Do it right.  Your story can be as goofy or comedic as you like.  You can write the adventures of a pink dildo if you're so enchanted with pink dildos.  But you can't start a story on your talk page, and deliberately posting an uncategorized page that you know is crosslinked with other stories isn't funny. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The only way for you to hide a story is by not posting it until it is ready.  You can declare a story to be private, but that only means that you don't want anyone else to add to or edit it.  You can't keep people from reading it.  If you want to post a story on this site, you must follow the site rules.  If you refuse to follow site rules, you will be banned.  This means that all stories must have a title and that title must appear as a category on every page.  No exceptions. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:10, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Everything is not alike. Everyone is not the same. We must move on from the problems of the past. Create a new story of your timeline. Be creative as you can. Do not let others judge you&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;b&amp;gt; &amp;gt;Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above.  Do not add new comments to the archives. &amp;lt;/b&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Ok mr.platypus. im gonna say that my story is gdeleted by me and I am finding people who can contribute to my story &lt;br /&gt;
in my place(In my city actually) and then I will rewrite it. I may not include the title or category cause im still finding people who can help me with this&lt;br /&gt;
Since then I will not add choices to the I am male thinggy. I might as well not reply to people including you too. I may not be online too&lt;br /&gt;
Then after that I will make it a looong story. ps im removing &amp;quot;low priority&amp;quot; discussions from my discussion. pps my story I cant publish it in public first&lt;br /&gt;
Because many will put things in that. I must say that putting my story in my talk page is a kind of privacy which means only selected people or people who know me can read it because I dont talk to &amp;quot;Low priority&amp;quot; people. IT STAYS HIDDEN WHILE I MAKE IT. MR PLATYPUS.&lt;br /&gt;
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And a flower for Platypus! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:00, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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About rampage: You know, the way it is set up, why doesn't someone create subcategories for the currently possessed character? Like &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Category: Rampage:Black Cat]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? Then, the victim pages, like [[Ashley Duruma]], could just be category pages with the text on the page put in as the text of the category page. Just a though xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:42, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I have been trying to change the 6th grade girl in rampage to 12th grade girl, and I found something. The rancher part, with the horses and stuff, is making me feel rather nauseous... I think I will stop touching that story and let someone else change her to 12th grade...before I throw up... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 06:15, 17 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't want to sound picky but is there any way to get my pages that I wrote like that? I understand that there was a slight spelling error on one and I messed up use of the status bar, but I went on there this morning to correct the and the majority had been taken down. That was over an hours writing that I'm a little miffed about having to redo for a misunderstanding since it was my first time adding to one of these pages. It's very intimidating getting a message a few seconds after you step out and try to share something on here simply because you slightly misunderstood the  code. I'm new, and I am sorry about it, but I can't be perfect on my first post. Did I do something else wrong or do you really take people's post's down without giving them a chance to edit mistakes, because of my time zone this was the first chance I had to log on and check them. &lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, wanted to ask you a question about the new rules. Now that we're not allowed to write about underage characters a lot of the old stories have been deleted. Some of them were my favorites that I worked hard on. Are they gone forever or are they archived somewhere? I would love to transcribe them to the allthefallen stories site instead. Thanks! (Bellajones)&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, I have been with a guy who was &amp;quot;Well endowed&amp;quot;. He hurt, alot. Wish I had known about that ring thing before that. I would have made him use it. Instead, we only had sex one time. I never let him touch me again. Oh well, wasn't a serious thing anyways. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:14, 7 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for pointing out the mistake. I am seriously beginning to speak Chinglish. Think I even have a little bit of a Chinese-English accent now...&lt;br /&gt;
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So, what do you think of my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]]? I know they are making fun of people, but I am at least trying to keep them interesting enough that they are readable. Also, not sure about your thoughts on my [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]]. I had a bit of discussion with this with Teejay, but I also know it crosses from &amp;quot;Story&amp;quot; to &amp;quot;Bio&amp;quot;, so not sure if I should even put it here. Your thoughts? Basically, just trying to let those who like my writing know a bit about who I am. At least, in the areas that most people on here would care about, given most people on here are mostly [[All Adult Stories]] oriented. Guess it is more of a &amp;quot;Hey, do you wonder why I write mostly erotica? Here you go&amp;quot; thing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:02, 6 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Noted, I will apply to the others then, just wanted to check before I did too much. I will try to improve it, trying to figure out how to get them to line up, but at least it is another step towards a nicer, more graphic website for us all ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:38, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have tried to add a nice looking template to the family friendly section on the front page. If you do not like it, we can revert. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:55, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- [[User:Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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So I hope you don't mind me making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] in my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Njrsgg]]. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained &amp;quot;under age vagina&amp;quot;, but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and &lt;br /&gt;
4th grade&amp;quot; and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;Sniff&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; You haven't given me any options for [[The Exhibitionist]]. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What the hell is &amp;quot;shotgun-wielding&amp;quot; supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: &amp;quot;Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup.&amp;quot; Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Sup]]. Teejay reversed the damage. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Added a [[Rules]] page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, it's [[User:Vgybhu]]. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).&lt;br /&gt;
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I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Um, oops, I kind of got them mixed up its been a while since I wrote something. Did you edit it if not I will. And next time I will check my work more thoroughly. &lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry, think I overwhelmed the poor guy :o I was trying to help, not intimidate xD (hint check histories...) &lt;br /&gt;
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Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it. &lt;br /&gt;
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.&lt;br /&gt;
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I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not. &lt;br /&gt;
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]]. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user [[AllyG]] was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on [[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]?? Thanks, [[Whining Winnie]] Happy Easter Everyone!&lt;br /&gt;
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The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so &amp;quot;immature&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
. I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone&lt;br /&gt;
like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration &lt;br /&gt;
testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of&lt;br /&gt;
committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your&lt;br /&gt;
comment very rude and I was emotionally crushed than you would delete my pages because you think&lt;br /&gt;
I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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o.O What happened? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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When you come back, you might want to check [[Special:Contributions/Darth_nox]]. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of &amp;quot;too many conflicting changes&amp;quot;...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So&lt;br /&gt;
can you please keep to your self. [[H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. [[User:LilBitOfSpace|LilBitOfSpace]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? [[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't forget that [[CLM]] is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you move [[CLM]] to the [[Adult Stories]] section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? [[Whining Winnie]] 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)&lt;br /&gt;
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Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]] 31/01/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore?  [[User:Fort|Fort]] 05/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --[[User:Fort|Fort]] 5 February 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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I apologize for my &amp;quot;obsession with colons&amp;quot; when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... [[User:Shirasade|Shirasade]] 20/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 23/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 24/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a [[Talk:Continue fucking Kate|specific story talk page]]) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the &amp;quot;Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the &amp;quot;I'm Your Brother&amp;quot; choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - [[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm going to finish the above section in &amp;quot;Idea Pitches&amp;quot; in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is &amp;quot;Lords&amp;quot;. It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found &amp;quot;Aristocrats&amp;quot; to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that &amp;quot;feeling up&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time.  --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So to answer your question about[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a &amp;quot;dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, &amp;quot;dating sim&amp;quot; would be the closest one thought &amp;quot;slice of life&amp;quot; is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 8 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot; choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 10 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --[[QueenPrisme]] 7:43pm April 13, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 1:44am April 16, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 19 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Would you happen to be able to tell me if [[Leaving]] is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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For the record, what is the page maximum for the pit? The main page says 10 pages but iirc I've seen stories in the pit with more than 10 pages. Again I know it takes a while for something to drop into the pit, and I know I can get it back out again, but I thought I'd ask.&lt;br /&gt;
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I get paranoid cause I have a habit of unintentionally abandoning things and I'm still mildly worried about losing internet access soon. I'd like to get anything new I start past the point where it could fall into the pit just in case. -- [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:25, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== How to make my own story without disturbing the peace ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I just wana know how to make my own story&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Michaeltamayo96</name></author>	</entry>

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		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Michaeltamayo96</id>
		<title>User talk:Michaeltamayo96</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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Hello.''&lt;br /&gt;
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To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter twice.&lt;br /&gt;
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See, it helps properly space. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 28 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What does &amp;quot;writing branches&amp;quot; have to do with adding category? And, the front page shows both the [[Rules]] and the [[Tutorial]], so not sure why it matters if someone is new or not... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...  What she said.  I expect that however many or however few pages you post, each one will include the title of the story as a category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You can ask me anything you like on my talk page.  It isn't private, but I don't believe there should be any need for privacy here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:58, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Do not add things like &amp;quot;pink dildo&amp;quot; to the status template example. That is a template for everyone on this site, to see how to create one, not one for your use. It has been removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been there, tried that. Glad I did not succeed in committing suicide, since I am happy with my life now. If I had succeeded I would never have made it to this place, at this time, and I would have hurt everyone who does love me. Honestly, now I sort of feel it is rather selfish. I mean, have you ever thought about what happens after? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to hear that. You didn't break anything, did you? If so, you should probably splint it and see the doctor. As for the black eye, ice, and remember to half heartily chuckle when people ask what happened and you tell them &amp;quot;I got in a fight with a tree. You should see the tree.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:07, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you really want, you can do like my mom always recommended. &amp;quot;Why do you have a black eye?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I didn't like the way it looked at me in the mirror, so I bit it.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:08, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I just turned 24 this month. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:12, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't technically have abandoned stories, you can always try the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] though. If you know good pranks, you could always help with [[Prank War]]. Sadly, I am not the prank type of person. I recommend reading what I have to figure out how the loops work, and please remember to keep it PG-13. So no naughty pranks. Cruel pranks are fine as long as you keep it in the PG category. And don't add alot of pranks to one person and ignore the other person. If your grammar isn't perfect, no worries, just let me know (if I do not see it in the recent changes) and I can go in and tidy it up. I would love to see more pranks, but like I said, not something I am as great at. Unfortunately, the other stories I have not worked on much are either adult (If you are half my age, then you cannot really contribute to them. Sorry, I don't want to know if you are reading adult stories as a minor. Don't tell me, and don't edit my adult stories so I wouldn't know) or they would be hard unless you understand things about HTML or know how to speak Chinese. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:32, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Umm, you shouldn't start a story on your talk page...&lt;br /&gt;
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And, you did not add category to your [[I am male]] page. You need to include your category. Remember the warning you got about it. After 3 warnings, Platypus will ban you, so you need to go edit it and include it. Remember to go through the [[Tutorial]] about it if you don't remember how. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 04:07, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A damn story? A story about a dam?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;I sit here most days, just holding in the water. Sometimes the operators let me relieve myself, water flowing from my spout, and other days they make me hold it, sometimes for months at a time. Then the crack was noticed. The operators panicked, because below me was a sizable city. If the crack grew larger, if I started to break apart, the city would be flooded, lives would be lost, and people would cry. I didn't want people to cry, but I did not know what to do. I could not do anything by myself, but had to rely on the humans.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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'''A dam story!''' Great idea, to tell a story from the perspective of the dam, maybe include human perspective as they struggle to try to keep the dam from breaking and washing away the city. You can even include beavers!&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, you meant something else...&lt;br /&gt;
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In which case, you are aware that it doesn't matter if you just started a story. When you create a new story, first thing you should do is put the category. The page should never be saved without it. I try to just remind people about that before the system admin finds it, since after three warnings, the person will be banned. But, if you prefer me to just give you an official warning, making it the second one, then I can do that instead. I guess it is up to you... &lt;br /&gt;
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Next up: The ban story! --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:49, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you're going to treat this site as your personal joke, you will get banned.  If you actually want to write a story, read the [[tutorial]].  Do it right.  Your story can be as goofy or comedic as you like.  You can write the adventures of a pink dildo if you're so enchanted with pink dildos.  But you can't start a story on your talk page, and deliberately posting an uncategorized page that you know is crosslinked with other stories isn't funny. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 26 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Copying Platypus and creating archives! But please, don't leave me messages on my archive pages. Leave them here...&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Leave me a message. Naughty, nice, happy, sad, I love talking to people so want to hear from you!&lt;br /&gt;
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IM JUST STARTED CREATE A DAMN STORY!&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Michaeltamayo96</id>
		<title>User talk:Michaeltamayo96</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Pls add your message under the line==&lt;br /&gt;
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(This gap is going to redirect you to my secret story)&lt;br /&gt;
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* [[I am male]]&lt;br /&gt;
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* [[I am female]]&lt;br /&gt;
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* [[I want to go to Abyss]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter twice.&lt;br /&gt;
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See, it helps properly space. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 28 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What does &amp;quot;writing branches&amp;quot; have to do with adding category? And, the front page shows both the [[Rules]] and the [[Tutorial]], so not sure why it matters if someone is new or not... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...  What she said.  I expect that however many or however few pages you post, each one will include the title of the story as a category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You can ask me anything you like on my talk page.  It isn't private, but I don't believe there should be any need for privacy here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:58, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Do not add things like &amp;quot;pink dildo&amp;quot; to the status template example. That is a template for everyone on this site, to see how to create one, not one for your use. It has been removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been there, tried that. Glad I did not succeed in committing suicide, since I am happy with my life now. If I had succeeded I would never have made it to this place, at this time, and I would have hurt everyone who does love me. Honestly, now I sort of feel it is rather selfish. I mean, have you ever thought about what happens after? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to hear that. You didn't break anything, did you? If so, you should probably splint it and see the doctor. As for the black eye, ice, and remember to half heartily chuckle when people ask what happened and you tell them &amp;quot;I got in a fight with a tree. You should see the tree.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:07, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you really want, you can do like my mom always recommended. &amp;quot;Why do you have a black eye?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I didn't like the way it looked at me in the mirror, so I bit it.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:08, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I just turned 24 this month. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:12, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't technically have abandoned stories, you can always try the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] though. If you know good pranks, you could always help with [[Prank War]]. Sadly, I am not the prank type of person. I recommend reading what I have to figure out how the loops work, and please remember to keep it PG-13. So no naughty pranks. Cruel pranks are fine as long as you keep it in the PG category. And don't add alot of pranks to one person and ignore the other person. If your grammar isn't perfect, no worries, just let me know (if I do not see it in the recent changes) and I can go in and tidy it up. I would love to see more pranks, but like I said, not something I am as great at. Unfortunately, the other stories I have not worked on much are either adult (If you are half my age, then you cannot really contribute to them. Sorry, I don't want to know if you are reading adult stories as a minor. Don't tell me, and don't edit my adult stories so I wouldn't know) or they would be hard unless you understand things about HTML or know how to speak Chinese. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:32, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;Blanked the page&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;DFUQ IT DIDNT SAVE THE SPEECH! WUUTTTT?????&lt;br /&gt;
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KK JUST ACCEPT THIS STATUS BAR IVE PUT MUCH EFFORT&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Status|Equipment=''Pink Dildo''|Health=99999|MP=Unlimited|Level=Godlike!}}&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;DFUQ IT DIDNT SAVE THE SPEECH! WUUTTTT?????&lt;br /&gt;
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KK JUST ACCEPT THIS STATUS BAR IVE PUT MUCH EFFORT&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Status|Equipment=''Pink Dildo''|Health=99999|Mp=99999|level=Godlike!}}&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;Created page with 'DFUQ IT DIDNT SAVE THE SPEECH! WUUTTTT?????  KK JUST ACCEPT THIS STATUS BAR IVE PUT MUCH EFFORT    {{Status|Gender''Male''|Health=99999|armour=99999|level=lvl: GOD!}}'&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;DFUQ IT DIDNT SAVE THE SPEECH! WUUTTTT?????&lt;br /&gt;
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KK JUST ACCEPT THIS STATUS BAR IVE PUT MUCH EFFORT&lt;br /&gt;
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{{Status|Gender''Male''|Health=99999|armour=99999|level=lvl: GOD!}}&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<title>User talk:Michaeltamayo96</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Pls add your message under the line==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello.''&lt;br /&gt;
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To get spacing between sentences lines, you do not need to add &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Just make sure there is an extra line between the two lines, so, just hit enter twice.&lt;br /&gt;
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See, it helps properly space. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:42, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 28 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What does &amp;quot;writing branches&amp;quot; have to do with adding category? And, the front page shows both the [[Rules]] and the [[Tutorial]], so not sure why it matters if someone is new or not... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:45, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Uh...  What she said.  I expect that however many or however few pages you post, each one will include the title of the story as a category. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:20, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You can ask me anything you like on my talk page.  It isn't private, but I don't believe there should be any need for privacy here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:58, 29 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Do not add things like &amp;quot;pink dildo&amp;quot; to the status template example. That is a template for everyone on this site, to see how to create one, not one for your use. It has been removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:44, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have been there, tried that. Glad I did not succeed in committing suicide, since I am happy with my life now. If I had succeeded I would never have made it to this place, at this time, and I would have hurt everyone who does love me. Honestly, now I sort of feel it is rather selfish. I mean, have you ever thought about what happens after? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to hear that. You didn't break anything, did you? If so, you should probably splint it and see the doctor. As for the black eye, ice, and remember to half heartily chuckle when people ask what happened and you tell them &amp;quot;I got in a fight with a tree. You should see the tree.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:07, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, if you really want, you can do like my mom always recommended. &amp;quot;Why do you have a black eye?&amp;quot; &amp;quot;I didn't like the way it looked at me in the mirror, so I bit it.&amp;quot; --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:08, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I just turned 24 this month. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:12, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't technically have abandoned stories, you can always try the [[Pit of Abandoned Stories]] though. If you know good pranks, you could always help with [[Prank War]]. Sadly, I am not the prank type of person. I recommend reading what I have to figure out how the loops work, and please remember to keep it PG-13. So no naughty pranks. Cruel pranks are fine as long as you keep it in the PG category. And don't add alot of pranks to one person and ignore the other person. If your grammar isn't perfect, no worries, just let me know (if I do not see it in the recent changes) and I can go in and tidy it up. I would love to see more pranks, but like I said, not something I am as great at. Unfortunately, the other stories I have not worked on much are either adult (If you are half my age, then you cannot really contribute to them. Sorry, I don't want to know if you are reading adult stories as a minor. Don't tell me, and don't edit my adult stories so I wouldn't know) or they would be hard unless you understand things about HTML or know how to speak Chinese. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:32, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;+memo+ Yo Imma say that im half of ur age. And also I just want to ask if u have an abandoned story so il continue it. Yes continuations.&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
I should write more or not, probably not, but who knows. I think I edited out my mistakes, but who&lt;br /&gt;
no's because I am a speed typer.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other stories that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, rounded? It probably depends more on the writer's intent then anything else but, eh, it was a thought.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I just came up with an idea for your Short Bursts: a story about a man or woman who is continuously tormented by a mentally, emotionally, and physically sadistic &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; or, at best, a eldritch &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot;. The protagonist is put through harrowing trials that seem to be without any chance of success but as he or she goes through the task, he/she finds a little hope that allows them to keep going and, if he/she plays her cards right, can actually triumph...just before the &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; destroys everything and shows it up as an illusion and begins to cruelly taunt him/her on the choices he/she said made before wiping her/his memory and putting her/him through another different trial. However, there IS a way to escape or defeat this &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; and every iteration of the trials show a glimmer of such a way. Like it?  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:35, 04 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it's not really like Cabin in the Woods. CITW is a deconstructive parody of the cliche horror movie formula. This idea is more an exercise in despair, a tale of little hope. It might make a passable horror story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah. I understand. By the way, I don't mind you talking too much. I can be a bit talkative too. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, the whole &amp;quot;DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass&amp;quot; thing is understandable. Most of those stories are made not as actual stories with plot, characters, and the like but with the sole intention of wanking off. They all have sexually desirable woman so as to get their rocks off. Problem is, they're just so...empty. The stories are exercises in hedonism, focused on sex. The characters, protagonist included, are barely one-dimensional and the protagonist often strikes me as the type of creep that I wouldn't so much cross the street to avoid but throw bodily into traffic. There are many morally questionable choices that don't feel as though we should consider them morally questionable in these type of stories and that's ignoring the frequency of the choices that have the protagonist actually RAPE someone or getting raped. I get the whole wank-material thing but the rape thing is not something that should found as often as I do in these type of stories.&lt;br /&gt;
P.S describing a woman's chest size by mentioning their cup size is not really &amp;quot;sexy&amp;quot;. It's like describing a apple by say how big it is in inches. My opinion, anyway. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a little question: which type of CYOS protagonist do you like or prefer: a protagonist who is a blank slate but you have plenty of choices to &amp;quot;fill in&amp;quot; him or her by giving him/her personality, hobbies, and clothing styles of your own choice or a already developed protagonist with his/her own personality and interests? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do recommend that you take a good, long look at the &amp;quot;So You Want To&amp;quot; section of TV Tropes. I bet it will be a big help for you . Also, read a lot. From good authors like Agatha Christie. Learning from those books might help with your writing. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:15, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ever heard about a story called &amp;quot;Invisible&amp;quot;? By playing as the guy with no name or description, you see him possibly rape students, teachers, a woman at a church, or a attractive neighbor, or at the very least, masturbate into a girl's locker as petty revenge. And, yes, I meant what I said. Those are actual choices. Hell, Those seem to be the ONLY type of choices: rape, rape, or petty perverted pranks. Also, while I agree with you on the &amp;quot;good girl&amp;quot; thing and the fact that the writer done goofed up but... I don't think a &amp;quot;bad&amp;quot; girl would like the rape either. Rape is perhaps one of the most harrowing and devastating experiences a human being can have, a soul-rending perversion of one of the greatest physical experiences in life. It is something that should be written with as much gravity, seriousness, and maturity as you can muster and not used gratuitously or as something that protagonist does on a whim and even acknowledges it as rape! (Not unless the protagonist is supposed to be a reprehensible monster.) Now, my soapbox has just fallen through so now we can talk about where I can find this &amp;quot;Teejay&amp;quot;'s stuff. Want to recommend to me a story from him? His best, if you would kindly. There's also a story called &amp;quot;The Life of a Medieval Princess&amp;quot; that tries to make it clear that these are people with their own personalities. It's not the best job but at least it's a try which is more then I can say for the majority of Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Adult Story section actually did some good for me: the &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; story convinced me that Dungeons and Dragons seemed pretty cool and the &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; story gave me an idea that I want to write about. Working title is &amp;quot;Legacy of the Progenitors&amp;quot;. It was, initially, a CYOA (this was back when we were using the CYOA name) called &amp;quot;The Book of Darkness&amp;quot; in the &amp;quot;Mature Story&amp;quot; section but I gave up on both the title and on it being a CYOA. Someone else is using it now though I'm not impressed by the writing. Then again, I'm trying to about as good a writer as, well, Jim Butcher or George R.R. Martin so my standards might be a bit high. Pretty sure that ain't the case, though. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and one little thing: ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! imgur.com/gallery/sFT7p --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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AAAANNNNDDD you're right. I misread what you said and thought you were talking about somebody making the protagonist a sex slave and not the protagonist making her rapist the sex slave. Actually reminds me of a choice where a paladin in &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; can make a 14 year-old boy her own sex slave. The boy was part of the bandit group that tired to take her money and the group would have raped her if she lost. A PALADIN. The default Lawful Good class. Not even a Greyguard, a paladin who's more morally ambiguous then a normal paladin. Just a 18 year old who just left the order and no, I don't think there is an explanation for leaving. AAAAANNNNDDD I've just realized that this is turning into a tirade against Adult Story CYOSs then an actual conversation. Sorry for that. I wouldn't have such a grudge against Adult Story CYOSs if there weren't so many of them or if they weren't so focused on sex or if they were better written! I think that's the biggest problem with them: they're just not good. O.K, rant over.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to end on a mutually lighter note: thank you for making the template and putting it on my user page. The Hypnobutt will live on forever! ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! I can't tell if it's the butt or the smoothness of the gif that I like so much but it is, indeed, one of my favorite gifs next to Bollywood movie gifs. You should look that up. They're utterly hilarious in their disconnect from reality. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:14, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:06, 21 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So, is Context or Short Bursts going to get any more work on it? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:20, 22 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Testing, testing. One, two, three. Can you hear me? I'm going to repeat a earlier message so sorry for the repetition. Here it is: &amp;quot;Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.&amp;quot;--[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 27 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I snuck another option into [[The Exhibitionist]] yesterday. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your latest rant is making me want to reach through the screen, find the jackass who destroyed the female narrator and made her into nothing but a cum receptacle, and cast Avada Kedavra on them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Not the ones I write. Those feature strong, dominant women who have sex where, when and how ''they'' want. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your real-life experiences made me (a) want to take a shower to wash off the horrible feeling of my skin crawling (even though ''I'' already knew most of it... it doesn't make it any easier to process), and (b) wrap my arms around you and comfort you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Hopefully, the bad stuff in your past does not resurface, and you have a long, happy marriage and a successful life. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have no problem with you putting up your real-life experiences. If you're OK with sharing, that's awesome. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Mini-rant: it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website. (Thanks for letting me vent.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Come on over any time you need to be groped. I'll grope you anywhere you'd like. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If I had you in the stocks, I can think of quite a few things I'd want to do to y...um, ''for'' you. ;) Let's just say I can do other things with my tongue than produce sounds. And that would just be the start of things.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, in that case... there would definitely be lovemaking involved. And when I was done, I'd make you finish me with your mouth. (I'm sure there'd be other things, too...) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm always gentle. I'd gladly put you in stocks and use your pussy and mouth. -- [[User:Tee jay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Braless, of course. How are you supposed to show off your cleavage properly if you're wearing a bra? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the flower :) You're sweet. -- [[User:Tee jay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your 'buttons' for the Main Page look fine to me.  Maybe they'll be more eye catching this way. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:36, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, what Hellspawn's doing with Pokesex is taking a poorly planned story written by multiple poor writers and he's trying to hammer it into a decent shape.  The deleting is mostly because of pages that never had any point in existing at all. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the idea for an Exhibitionist scenario strikes me, I'll be sure to let you know.  But inspiration comes when it comes, not before then.  I'm sure an idea will occur to me sooner or later.  (Find an abandoned construction site and re-create Miley Cyrus' Wrecking Ball video?  No...  At an actual construction site, not a soundstage, that would just mean getting construction grit in all the wrong places...) --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry; I take the grammar in SSR seriously, but the plot, such as it is, is utterly unrealistic and is very much worthy of mockery.  In SSR, men and women are always ready for sex, and rape at worst provokes annoyance and never induces trauma.  It's pure fantasy, which may be part of why it's so popular. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:11, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No need to revert the family friendly section.  I think your template looks just fine. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:33, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The rants are somewhat amusing.  I think it’s good that you’re writing them.  There should be something around here that’s a bit more reality based, to serve as a counterpoint to the frequently laughable strictly fantasy depictions of sex.  I should point out that there really are some guys who are over-endowed, and they usually have to wear a device that looks like a rubber doughnut over their cocks to prevent them from penetrating their partners to the point of hurting them.  It’s rather like how, when you need to insert a screw that’s too long for the hole you’re inserting it into, you need a rubber washer.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should probably also point out that a man and a woman can measure the same penis with the same ruler and get different measurements.&lt;br /&gt;
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SSR does acknowledge that there are limits (at least it does on the pages I’ve written).  There’s a magical condom section with [[Ask for the elephant size]] where the female on the receiving end wants nothing to do with the thing.  And an unfortunate set of choices where one painful writer had to write the giant dick exploding the woman’s lower body.  Read it and cringe.&lt;br /&gt;
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Your IRL (mis)adventures may be more bio than story, but you IRL experiences are the foundation for your stories, and as such, I think it is appropriate for you to post it here, for those who want to ‘peek beneath the hood’, as it were, and get a sense of where your stories are coming from. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 6 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I feel your pain.  Blame GalaxyMage for leading girls to horses in the worst ways possible in every story he touches.  At least you didn't get to the part with the leeches. (Inside as well as outside). --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks you for the flower.  I am suitably impressed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:13, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I read your additions, thought them over and I like them. So you can rewrite whatever you think is needed.&lt;br /&gt;
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I think your a little confusing sometimes. Do revise, do not want to revise. Wants add some things, doesn't want to add. You are so confusing that I like you a lot :D (compliment for you and not a negative thought)&lt;br /&gt;
So see whatever you want to do or not, I'm ok with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me out with the page deletion thing --[[User:Hellspawn|I'm really beginning to regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for notifying, I realise that I probably shouldn't blank so many pages but I was blanking other peoples stuff rather than my own (actually that sounds worse). What I mean to say is that I'm trying to reorganise and fix up that story but it meant removing a bunch of poorly written and poorly planned pages (Some didn't have options, some didn't makes sense etc.). I've only started doing that after I got to grips with the format and the editing options and I'm now going to start adding more to the story than I've taken away from it. But seriously thanks for the heads up. 15 April 2016--[[User:Hellspawn|I still regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what, Platypus laid out what I was trying to do better than I did. Thanks for the input; I'm happy you're trying to help out novice users because that's not something everyone does on the internet. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 18:52 15 April 2016 (GMT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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thanks    for the help..    I am   pretty ccmputer illiterate.  :(&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah! gotcha.  thanks again.&lt;br /&gt;
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In response to what you said, I guess it because guys, honestly, just tend to like big boobs. Personally, there's plenty of girls I like in real life with small breasts, but in terms of looking to get horny, personality usually doesn't cut it for most. For me, body usually doesn't matter, especially on this site, where you can't see anything, as long as you can tell the story good enough to make me feel it. If you purely rely on the sex of it, then yeah, body proportions need to be larger, but in all honesty, the story leading up to and after sex is what really gets me turned on. I actually have trouble writing just sex scenes. So, for what you said, it's because people on here want all girls to be &amp;quot;large&amp;quot; in all ways so its easier to avoid actually seducing story and skip to sex. Its easier to make all girls unrealistically big and say all others aren't there yet so it leave the reader the sense that they could still be large one day and be used at some point.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Kyre's Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Haha, well, I just started, but I have to be a girl, so I can't really be a fair judge. I'll gladly look, though&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, that might work. I read some of the girls and it sounded good up to what I read.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, would you be interested in collaborating on my newest story, Fallout Shorts? If you've never played a Fallout game, you may not get it, but it pretty much sex in different situations, so I could fill you in. The best part is I made it specifically for one shots, like your bursts. You simply choose a base character, which you could make one, and write one story about them, then you never have to worry about that storyline again. I need someone mainly to help with the girl sex scenes. I can do the buildup and story, thats what I like, but I need a girls perspective on having sex in various, sometimes unusual ways. If not, no problem&lt;br /&gt;
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*smiling* You definetly seem like the girl for the job. I'd be happy to write some girl stories for build up, i have plenty of those ideas, but the sex areas are sometimes hard. sometimes i can do it, but not always. so you in?&lt;br /&gt;
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Any time you have will work. Nice to have a partner for once&lt;br /&gt;
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Please, go crazy. And like I said, I know a lot of girls into this stuff who've kinda explained their ways, so I can kinda write girl persepctive. And by all means, include whatever fetish you choose&lt;br /&gt;
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This is good. I'd say submit it, though you may have to make another Fallout 4 MILF-innocent character. I don't know the others would fit. Or it could be a random person, which works too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thats cool. Although, like I said, this is more of unjoined stories with no joining parts, just bursts so i don't have to try an figure out memory. And clothing thing is great and on my mind. As for the animal thing, I think only girls because of there scent from their member.&lt;br /&gt;
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Perhaps 200 years of sexual tension? I think maybe a time skip might be an okay idea too, gives you the chance to get over husband, build whatever settlement, amke connections and such, better starting point.&lt;br /&gt;
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I like the Pipboy. It's a little big, but it looks great. And I think I'm going to restart Fallout 4, with a different strategy. I just wasn't happy with how this one worked. And sorry it's taken so long. Been busy.&lt;br /&gt;
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== In The Worst Ways ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hope you like the option I added :v. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]]&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. hope I didn't completely overstep in just adding it directly to the page, cause when I did that I thought that's what I was supposed to do, but now I'm not so sure.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if it doesn't work out. I saw it on a blog of different sexual dares/challenges and it was the first thing that came to mind when you asked. Maybe I can get more ideas from there if I can ever find the page again :v.&lt;br /&gt;
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I love it! Thank you for writing it :v Keep up the good work! [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:33 am est 5/5/16&lt;br /&gt;
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What I've read of your rants story is pretty great :v. I tend to agree that those situations are annoying, though I've kinda just gotten used to them, you know? [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:13 am est 5/8/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I read the summaries :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:06, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Personally I always liked the idea of being stuck (intentionally or unintentionally, willingly or unwillingly) halfway through a wall pretty enjoyable. The person on the other side can only see me from the waist down and I can't see them at all. They can use me however they want (from the waist down) and walk away and I'm still stuck there for the next anonymous user. Then if I get out later, literally anyone I pass by on the street could have been one of them. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:39, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That's pretty amazing. I envy you for being able to do something like that. I would love to do something like that if I could :v. I got into talking about the through the wall thing because I saw you were talking about being locked in stocks. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:15, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I may take you up on that offer of information on those countries. But I do also want to leave it open for others to write in and I've already got a lot on my mind for it. I would really like to see other people's ideas for shenanigans in a world that suddenly has no police and no laws. Come to think of it, no police means nobody to arrest you for public nudity or sex, right :v? [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:28, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually hadn't been thinking about it, but I may implement through-the-wall or some other public use options in [[Leaving]] from different perspectives, and possibly in [[Global Anarchy]] in some way now that you mention it. I wasn't sure how to implement it but I've got some ideas now, thank you :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:28, 20 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh my god thank you, I'm definitely going to look into that and see what I can do, try to learn those things. I didn't know a lot of those things were even possible on here. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:19, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, easy or not, I'm the kind of person that, as long as it's for something stupid and irrelevant I will keep poking at it until it's perfect. Or at the very least, much, much longer than I have any reason to keep trying. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:10, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I completely forgot about hover text. It's been so long since I've had a mouse to hover with lol. I feel like I'm missing out now, especially considering things like xkcd and Paradox Space use hover text a lot. I'm not sure I'd use notes that often though because I don't want people getting into the habit of looking at the edit pages of every page. Would spoil a few things on a few of the pages I've already set up lol. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:47, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope this isn't terrible of me to say but I was silently hoping the person writing that family guy story was gonna get the boot when I saw the &amp;quot;Go on a Rape race&amp;quot; page didn't have a category. Every page of that is just, dear god why? &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt;I thought I could get away from Family Guy by not watching TV.&amp;lt;/font color&amp;gt; [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for the bunny and the flower, by the way! I went to bed and then I wasn't sure what to say about them. But those are pretty neat. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:50, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thank You!! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thnx for the comment.I'm really thankful,i haven't relly got the hang of it yet XD.My computer hasn't been working with me,(Thanks to my little sister -_-) but I'll manage, hopefully!Thanks again ^～^!&lt;br /&gt;
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== Jordon21 Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for adding that category. [[User:Jordon21 |Jordon21]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==SkylaTruffles' Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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For &amp;quot;negative criticism&amp;quot;, you delivered that message quite politely. :P But yeah, thanks for the info. I guess I'm not used to how Talk Pages operate - I hold more of a presence on chatrooms and back-and-forth messaging threads, you see. --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 19:18, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, trust me. Those are joke endings, made for petty amusement, if anything. I'll be sure to squeeze in more subtle ways to take a villainous route as I continue to update the story. --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]]  07:01, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. If you've seen the planning page for the story that I totally failed at squeezing in subtly, only one out of twelve endings for each character will be really dark, meaning that there'll only be a certain number of choices that allow you to be a prick. But to each their own, I guess. :P --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 11:07, 25 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;kk I have no time to specialize a talk but im not turning into a number. BTW thx for ur age. so u wont get suprised to see someone writing in the discussion page with no name. It was me. always. ps. if u want my name. i think u know it already. ma real name&lt;br /&gt;
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==GirlOnGirlFan!==&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other stories that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, rounded? It probably depends more on the writer's intent then anything else but, eh, it was a thought.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I just came up with an idea for your Short Bursts: a story about a man or woman who is continuously tormented by a mentally, emotionally, and physically sadistic &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; or, at best, a eldritch &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot;. The protagonist is put through harrowing trials that seem to be without any chance of success but as he or she goes through the task, he/she finds a little hope that allows them to keep going and, if he/she plays her cards right, can actually triumph...just before the &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; destroys everything and shows it up as an illusion and begins to cruelly taunt him/her on the choices he/she said made before wiping her/his memory and putting her/him through another different trial. However, there IS a way to escape or defeat this &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; and every iteration of the trials show a glimmer of such a way. Like it?  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:35, 04 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it's not really like Cabin in the Woods. CITW is a deconstructive parody of the cliche horror movie formula. This idea is more an exercise in despair, a tale of little hope. It might make a passable horror story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah. I understand. By the way, I don't mind you talking too much. I can be a bit talkative too. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, the whole &amp;quot;DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass&amp;quot; thing is understandable. Most of those stories are made not as actual stories with plot, characters, and the like but with the sole intention of wanking off. They all have sexually desirable woman so as to get their rocks off. Problem is, they're just so...empty. The stories are exercises in hedonism, focused on sex. The characters, protagonist included, are barely one-dimensional and the protagonist often strikes me as the type of creep that I wouldn't so much cross the street to avoid but throw bodily into traffic. There are many morally questionable choices that don't feel as though we should consider them morally questionable in these type of stories and that's ignoring the frequency of the choices that have the protagonist actually RAPE someone or getting raped. I get the whole wank-material thing but the rape thing is not something that should found as often as I do in these type of stories.&lt;br /&gt;
P.S describing a woman's chest size by mentioning their cup size is not really &amp;quot;sexy&amp;quot;. It's like describing a apple by say how big it is in inches. My opinion, anyway. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a little question: which type of CYOS protagonist do you like or prefer: a protagonist who is a blank slate but you have plenty of choices to &amp;quot;fill in&amp;quot; him or her by giving him/her personality, hobbies, and clothing styles of your own choice or a already developed protagonist with his/her own personality and interests? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do recommend that you take a good, long look at the &amp;quot;So You Want To&amp;quot; section of TV Tropes. I bet it will be a big help for you . Also, read a lot. From good authors like Agatha Christie. Learning from those books might help with your writing. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:15, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ever heard about a story called &amp;quot;Invisible&amp;quot;? By playing as the guy with no name or description, you see him possibly rape students, teachers, a woman at a church, or a attractive neighbor, or at the very least, masturbate into a girl's locker as petty revenge. And, yes, I meant what I said. Those are actual choices. Hell, Those seem to be the ONLY type of choices: rape, rape, or petty perverted pranks. Also, while I agree with you on the &amp;quot;good girl&amp;quot; thing and the fact that the writer done goofed up but... I don't think a &amp;quot;bad&amp;quot; girl would like the rape either. Rape is perhaps one of the most harrowing and devastating experiences a human being can have, a soul-rending perversion of one of the greatest physical experiences in life. It is something that should be written with as much gravity, seriousness, and maturity as you can muster and not used gratuitously or as something that protagonist does on a whim and even acknowledges it as rape! (Not unless the protagonist is supposed to be a reprehensible monster.) Now, my soapbox has just fallen through so now we can talk about where I can find this &amp;quot;Teejay&amp;quot;'s stuff. Want to recommend to me a story from him? His best, if you would kindly. There's also a story called &amp;quot;The Life of a Medieval Princess&amp;quot; that tries to make it clear that these are people with their own personalities. It's not the best job but at least it's a try which is more then I can say for the majority of Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Adult Story section actually did some good for me: the &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; story convinced me that Dungeons and Dragons seemed pretty cool and the &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; story gave me an idea that I want to write about. Working title is &amp;quot;Legacy of the Progenitors&amp;quot;. It was, initially, a CYOA (this was back when we were using the CYOA name) called &amp;quot;The Book of Darkness&amp;quot; in the &amp;quot;Mature Story&amp;quot; section but I gave up on both the title and on it being a CYOA. Someone else is using it now though I'm not impressed by the writing. Then again, I'm trying to about as good a writer as, well, Jim Butcher or George R.R. Martin so my standards might be a bit high. Pretty sure that ain't the case, though. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and one little thing: ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! imgur.com/gallery/sFT7p --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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AAAANNNNDDD you're right. I misread what you said and thought you were talking about somebody making the protagonist a sex slave and not the protagonist making her rapist the sex slave. Actually reminds me of a choice where a paladin in &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; can make a 14 year-old boy her own sex slave. The boy was part of the bandit group that tired to take her money and the group would have raped her if she lost. A PALADIN. The default Lawful Good class. Not even a Greyguard, a paladin who's more morally ambiguous then a normal paladin. Just a 18 year old who just left the order and no, I don't think there is an explanation for leaving. AAAAANNNNDDD I've just realized that this is turning into a tirade against Adult Story CYOSs then an actual conversation. Sorry for that. I wouldn't have such a grudge against Adult Story CYOSs if there weren't so many of them or if they weren't so focused on sex or if they were better written! I think that's the biggest problem with them: they're just not good. O.K, rant over.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to end on a mutually lighter note: thank you for making the template and putting it on my user page. The Hypnobutt will live on forever! ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! I can't tell if it's the butt or the smoothness of the gif that I like so much but it is, indeed, one of my favorite gifs next to Bollywood movie gifs. You should look that up. They're utterly hilarious in their disconnect from reality. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:14, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:06, 21 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So, is Context or Short Bursts going to get any more work on it? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:20, 22 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Testing, testing. One, two, three. Can you hear me? I'm going to repeat a earlier message so sorry for the repetition. Here it is: &amp;quot;Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.&amp;quot;--[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 27 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I snuck another option into [[The Exhibitionist]] yesterday. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your latest rant is making me want to reach through the screen, find the jackass who destroyed the female narrator and made her into nothing but a cum receptacle, and cast Avada Kedavra on them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Not the ones I write. Those feature strong, dominant women who have sex where, when and how ''they'' want. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hopefully, the bad stuff in your past does not resurface, and you have a long, happy marriage and a successful life. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have no problem with you putting up your real-life experiences. If you're OK with sharing, that's awesome. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Mini-rant: it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website. (Thanks for letting me vent.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Come on over any time you need to be groped. I'll grope you anywhere you'd like. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If I had you in the stocks, I can think of quite a few things I'd want to do to y...um, ''for'' you. ;) Let's just say I can do other things with my tongue than produce sounds. And that would just be the start of things.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, in that case... there would definitely be lovemaking involved. And when I was done, I'd make you finish me with your mouth. (I'm sure there'd be other things, too...) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Braless, of course. How are you supposed to show off your cleavage properly if you're wearing a bra? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the flower :) You're sweet. -- [[User:Tee jay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your 'buttons' for the Main Page look fine to me.  Maybe they'll be more eye catching this way. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:36, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, what Hellspawn's doing with Pokesex is taking a poorly planned story written by multiple poor writers and he's trying to hammer it into a decent shape.  The deleting is mostly because of pages that never had any point in existing at all. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the idea for an Exhibitionist scenario strikes me, I'll be sure to let you know.  But inspiration comes when it comes, not before then.  I'm sure an idea will occur to me sooner or later.  (Find an abandoned construction site and re-create Miley Cyrus' Wrecking Ball video?  No...  At an actual construction site, not a soundstage, that would just mean getting construction grit in all the wrong places...) --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry; I take the grammar in SSR seriously, but the plot, such as it is, is utterly unrealistic and is very much worthy of mockery.  In SSR, men and women are always ready for sex, and rape at worst provokes annoyance and never induces trauma.  It's pure fantasy, which may be part of why it's so popular. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:11, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No need to revert the family friendly section.  I think your template looks just fine. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:33, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The rants are somewhat amusing.  I think it’s good that you’re writing them.  There should be something around here that’s a bit more reality based, to serve as a counterpoint to the frequently laughable strictly fantasy depictions of sex.  I should point out that there really are some guys who are over-endowed, and they usually have to wear a device that looks like a rubber doughnut over their cocks to prevent them from penetrating their partners to the point of hurting them.  It’s rather like how, when you need to insert a screw that’s too long for the hole you’re inserting it into, you need a rubber washer.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should probably also point out that a man and a woman can measure the same penis with the same ruler and get different measurements.&lt;br /&gt;
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SSR does acknowledge that there are limits (at least it does on the pages I’ve written).  There’s a magical condom section with [[Ask for the elephant size]] where the female on the receiving end wants nothing to do with the thing.  And an unfortunate set of choices where one painful writer had to write the giant dick exploding the woman’s lower body.  Read it and cringe.&lt;br /&gt;
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Your IRL (mis)adventures may be more bio than story, but you IRL experiences are the foundation for your stories, and as such, I think it is appropriate for you to post it here, for those who want to ‘peek beneath the hood’, as it were, and get a sense of where your stories are coming from. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 6 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I feel your pain.  Blame GalaxyMage for leading girls to horses in the worst ways possible in every story he touches.  At least you didn't get to the part with the leeches. (Inside as well as outside). --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks you for the flower.  I am suitably impressed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:13, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I read your additions, thought them over and I like them. So you can rewrite whatever you think is needed.&lt;br /&gt;
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I think your a little confusing sometimes. Do revise, do not want to revise. Wants add some things, doesn't want to add. You are so confusing that I like you a lot :D (compliment for you and not a negative thought)&lt;br /&gt;
So see whatever you want to do or not, I'm ok with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me out with the page deletion thing --[[User:Hellspawn|I'm really beginning to regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for notifying, I realise that I probably shouldn't blank so many pages but I was blanking other peoples stuff rather than my own (actually that sounds worse). What I mean to say is that I'm trying to reorganise and fix up that story but it meant removing a bunch of poorly written and poorly planned pages (Some didn't have options, some didn't makes sense etc.). I've only started doing that after I got to grips with the format and the editing options and I'm now going to start adding more to the story than I've taken away from it. But seriously thanks for the heads up. 15 April 2016--[[User:Hellspawn|I still regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what, Platypus laid out what I was trying to do better than I did. Thanks for the input; I'm happy you're trying to help out novice users because that's not something everyone does on the internet. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 18:52 15 April 2016 (GMT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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In response to what you said, I guess it because guys, honestly, just tend to like big boobs. Personally, there's plenty of girls I like in real life with small breasts, but in terms of looking to get horny, personality usually doesn't cut it for most. For me, body usually doesn't matter, especially on this site, where you can't see anything, as long as you can tell the story good enough to make me feel it. If you purely rely on the sex of it, then yeah, body proportions need to be larger, but in all honesty, the story leading up to and after sex is what really gets me turned on. I actually have trouble writing just sex scenes. So, for what you said, it's because people on here want all girls to be &amp;quot;large&amp;quot; in all ways so its easier to avoid actually seducing story and skip to sex. Its easier to make all girls unrealistically big and say all others aren't there yet so it leave the reader the sense that they could still be large one day and be used at some point.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Kyre's Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Haha, well, I just started, but I have to be a girl, so I can't really be a fair judge. I'll gladly look, though&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, would you be interested in collaborating on my newest story, Fallout Shorts? If you've never played a Fallout game, you may not get it, but it pretty much sex in different situations, so I could fill you in. The best part is I made it specifically for one shots, like your bursts. You simply choose a base character, which you could make one, and write one story about them, then you never have to worry about that storyline again. I need someone mainly to help with the girl sex scenes. I can do the buildup and story, thats what I like, but I need a girls perspective on having sex in various, sometimes unusual ways. If not, no problem&lt;br /&gt;
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*smiling* You definetly seem like the girl for the job. I'd be happy to write some girl stories for build up, i have plenty of those ideas, but the sex areas are sometimes hard. sometimes i can do it, but not always. so you in?&lt;br /&gt;
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Any time you have will work. Nice to have a partner for once&lt;br /&gt;
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Please, go crazy. And like I said, I know a lot of girls into this stuff who've kinda explained their ways, so I can kinda write girl persepctive. And by all means, include whatever fetish you choose&lt;br /&gt;
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This is good. I'd say submit it, though you may have to make another Fallout 4 MILF-innocent character. I don't know the others would fit. Or it could be a random person, which works too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thats cool. Although, like I said, this is more of unjoined stories with no joining parts, just bursts so i don't have to try an figure out memory. And clothing thing is great and on my mind. As for the animal thing, I think only girls because of there scent from their member.&lt;br /&gt;
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Perhaps 200 years of sexual tension? I think maybe a time skip might be an okay idea too, gives you the chance to get over husband, build whatever settlement, amke connections and such, better starting point.&lt;br /&gt;
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I like the Pipboy. It's a little big, but it looks great. And I think I'm going to restart Fallout 4, with a different strategy. I just wasn't happy with how this one worked. And sorry it's taken so long. Been busy.&lt;br /&gt;
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== In The Worst Ways ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hope you like the option I added :v. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]]&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. hope I didn't completely overstep in just adding it directly to the page, cause when I did that I thought that's what I was supposed to do, but now I'm not so sure.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if it doesn't work out. I saw it on a blog of different sexual dares/challenges and it was the first thing that came to mind when you asked. Maybe I can get more ideas from there if I can ever find the page again :v.&lt;br /&gt;
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I love it! Thank you for writing it :v Keep up the good work! [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:33 am est 5/5/16&lt;br /&gt;
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What I've read of your rants story is pretty great :v. I tend to agree that those situations are annoying, though I've kinda just gotten used to them, you know? [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:13 am est 5/8/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I read the summaries :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:06, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Personally I always liked the idea of being stuck (intentionally or unintentionally, willingly or unwillingly) halfway through a wall pretty enjoyable. The person on the other side can only see me from the waist down and I can't see them at all. They can use me however they want (from the waist down) and walk away and I'm still stuck there for the next anonymous user. Then if I get out later, literally anyone I pass by on the street could have been one of them. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:39, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That's pretty amazing. I envy you for being able to do something like that. I would love to do something like that if I could :v. I got into talking about the through the wall thing because I saw you were talking about being locked in stocks. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:15, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I may take you up on that offer of information on those countries. But I do also want to leave it open for others to write in and I've already got a lot on my mind for it. I would really like to see other people's ideas for shenanigans in a world that suddenly has no police and no laws. Come to think of it, no police means nobody to arrest you for public nudity or sex, right :v? [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:28, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually hadn't been thinking about it, but I may implement through-the-wall or some other public use options in [[Leaving]] from different perspectives, and possibly in [[Global Anarchy]] in some way now that you mention it. I wasn't sure how to implement it but I've got some ideas now, thank you :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:28, 20 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh my god thank you, I'm definitely going to look into that and see what I can do, try to learn those things. I didn't know a lot of those things were even possible on here. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:19, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, easy or not, I'm the kind of person that, as long as it's for something stupid and irrelevant I will keep poking at it until it's perfect. Or at the very least, much, much longer than I have any reason to keep trying. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:10, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I completely forgot about hover text. It's been so long since I've had a mouse to hover with lol. I feel like I'm missing out now, especially considering things like xkcd and Paradox Space use hover text a lot. I'm not sure I'd use notes that often though because I don't want people getting into the habit of looking at the edit pages of every page. Would spoil a few things on a few of the pages I've already set up lol. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:47, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thank You!! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thnx for the comment.I'm really thankful,i haven't relly got the hang of it yet XD.My computer hasn't been working with me,(Thanks to my little sister -_-) but I'll manage, hopefully!Thanks again ^～^!&lt;br /&gt;
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== Jordon21 Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for adding that category. [[User:Jordon21 |Jordon21]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==SkylaTruffles' Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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For &amp;quot;negative criticism&amp;quot;, you delivered that message quite politely. :P But yeah, thanks for the info. I guess I'm not used to how Talk Pages operate - I hold more of a presence on chatrooms and back-and-forth messaging threads, you see. --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 19:18, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Mr fredhot16. I aint got time so pls send me your age. Im making a poll for ages PLs send me ur age ASAP.[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sorry. I'm a user as of yesterday and I was just trying to start a story of my own. Could the damage be reversed? --[ [User:Fredhot16]] 07:48, 3 May 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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I have already undone it, but did you seriously think selecting every single bit of text on a page, then suddenly seeing nothing BUT your story was the proper way to go? I know people can get intimidated trying new things, but don't just forget all common sense at the same time...&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I didn't think about that. I'm very sorry for the trouble. --[ [User:Fredhot16:Fredhot16]] 09:38, 3 May 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly is [[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] supposed to be?  If it's supposed to be a story, it needs choices and it needs a category.  Please don't post incomplete pages.  Incomplete pages will be edited or deleted. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 04:09, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Why are those choices in Darkness?  Because the story is open for anyone to edit and some people are desperate to read stories about copping a feel, no matter how story-inappropriate that choice is, and some people freak when they realize they've been reading a story from a female perspective and have to force the story into a male perspective, no matter how inappropriate it is given the story thus far. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 03:05, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One thing you may want to consider is that choices don’t necessarily have to seem logical.  Consider that following scenario: Your son hasn’t come home from school and you’re worried about him.  Do you: A) call the police? B) hire a private detective? C) search the neighborhood? D) get a rowboat and sail out to sea?  A, B, &amp;amp; C are obvious choices, but the ridiculously illogical choice D… is what Gepetto chose in the Adventures of Pinocchio.  And somehow that worked out. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:30, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're typing more than you need to...&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[ Ventrue|Ventrue]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; tells the wiki &amp;quot;Instead of displaying the link to the page titled 'Ventrue' as 'Ventrue', instead display it as 'Ventrue'.&amp;quot;  Kind of redundant, no?  The | is useful when you want the link to display as something ''different''.  For example &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Ventrue|Aristocrats]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; would send people to a page titled 'Ventrue', but the link would display as 'Aristocrats'. &lt;br /&gt;
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You could just place a note on the page such as &amp;quot;clan descriptions are copyright White Wolf Game Studio&amp;quot;. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:04, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Aren't you going to revise the story anymore?&lt;br /&gt;
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If you want to contribute to Darkness by adding more pages, fine.  If you want to rip out pages because you don't like certain choices, NOT FINE.  Leave those pages alone.  I wrote them and they are staying.  PERIOD. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:42, 5 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I know you know how to categorize your pages.  Categorize them!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:35, 8 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Categorizing is not something to be saved for 'later'.  Either the page is categorized when it's posted or the page gets deleted.  It's that simple.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you've read a significant amount of Darkness, and it seems that you have, then you should have some understanding of what kind of story it is.  If you don't understand it, I don't think that I can explain it any further. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:27, 8 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A discussion page exists for discussing the associated story page, so if you want to discuss the tropes that you feel are associated with that story page, it's appropriate to do so.  Been spending a bit of time over at tvtropes? --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:13, 15 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Your message ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not make the page 'Punish her' for the red head in slaves life. If you have a problem, message the people who edited it last.&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User talk:DirtyMeStoryTime|DirtyMeStoryTime]]'s talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
Do not delete an entire index and replace it with just your story again... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:27, 2 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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And, you should normally respond on the person's user page, not on your user page, or else they probably won't see it. But make sure is it User talk:, not User:. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:38, 3 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just to let you know, I alphabetized your stories in the mature section, so if you don't spot them, please note they are in a different location, not removed. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:37, 16 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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{{warn1}} --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 12:03, 17 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So, it has been a while since we last talked. I just wanted to stop in and say hi, and let you know I am looking for people to help me expand my story, [[The Exhibitionist]]. Just drop a couple options you would like me to write or something. A couple others have already been sweet and given me some options, but the more, the merrier! But, you don't need to, it is entirely optional (gogogogogogogogogo addadddadddaddadd) '''Thinks to herself, &amp;quot;are my subliminals working?''' Wait, did I say that outloud? So sorry :o Please forgive me. &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;beg beg beg beg&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;. Anyways, hope to see you there ^.^ --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:38, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, but it is an adult story. Yes, I know what you mean, I don't bother reading most of the stories. I do write stories other than adults, but I am not that good, to be honest. I draw on my experience to write my stories, and many of my past history consisted of 3 things: Drugs, sex, and physical/emotional pain. I have tried writing about my pain, but honestly, when I read it, it makes me feel like I come across as whiny. I have written sometimes about drugs, but honestly, it is hard to describe what it feels like to be high. So, that leaves me with sex...I would love to write fantasy, sci fi, mystery, crime, etc, but every time I try, at least when I read, it always sounds so cliche. I think maybe the only difference is, I write my erotica based on my real life, so I try to make it realistic. Sometimes I get carried away, but normally I try to make it believable. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:33, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Adding a little more: Yes, I have also written a couple of non-adult stories. You can check my user page for the stories I have written, but you can probably guess after looking at them that I do not do as good... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:35, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, yes, I talk too much. Even in real life. I have started a story, [[Context]], but unlike [[The Exhibitionist]], it is not a community driven story. For [[The Exhibitionist]]. I will only work on options given to me, and those ideas that spring from them during story mode. I do not create new paths. However, for [[Context]], I am trying something completely different, keyworks located in the story itself. I am still trying to figure out how to work it though. Mostly, I am aiming it at non-adult, but have categorized it as adult because I imagine at some point I will have some level of adult content, but thinking of making it more of a silly, strange, random, train of thought type of story. Anyways, I will STFU now...I know I talk too much, and type too much... I like interaction, not isolation... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:45, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, so, you want stories that are adult but not really sex stories like 99%? Want to try my [[Short Bursts]] story? Let me know what you think? Yes, I will have graphic sex in there, and graphic other things. lol, you will probably be able to tell once you read the first two I have completed. Anyways, just want to know what you think, since it seems like you are not one who is here only for the graphic sex stories, but for actual stories. Anyways, I would like it if you let me know what you think about them. Yes, I am a needy, insecure person, so like to hear if my stuff is good. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:37, 21 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hmm, where to start. I notice some of the things you have posted on Darky's talk page. Not saying I don't understand, or sympathize, but, are you sure this is really the correct way to go about it? I guess, he started the story, and while it seems that he should be able to do more than make it one of another, lots, of adult stories, are you sure criticizing him is really the way to go? It seems your view and his view are clashing, and I am not sure it is really that helpful at this point. Possibly you could make your own story that follows a vision you have? Not trying to get in the middle of it, but it just seems like many posts on his page are &amp;quot;Man, why would you even go there&amp;quot;. I have the feeling he has changed the path, like the feather tickling, mostly because of your feedback, but... I guess, like me, I try to make non-adult stories. I try to make something that is not in the realm of &amp;quot;naughty&amp;quot;, but I find most of the time when I try, I run out of story too quickly. I guess I am just better at erotica than I am at conventional stories. So, I sympathize with Darky too. But honestly, when the thing I see on the first page is &amp;quot;stunning girl with a nice butt and b-cup breasts&amp;quot;, well, I think that was always his direction. I mean, what does her butt and breasts have to do with being a barbarian? She has a butt, she has breasts, but when there is a need to highlight them, I guess there was already a set direction in the author's eyes. Is it really that constructive to keep bugging him about &amp;quot;Man, why go there&amp;quot;? The only way it could have screamed more adult is if there was also the guy's penis size. I guess I am saying it seems like you would have a better story by writing your own. Maybe &amp;quot;Sherry becomes a barbarian girl&amp;quot;, and run with it. Sorry, I know you are free to keep messaging him, but it just seems like it is only nagging about another author not meeting your expectations at this point. Just my opinion though. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:34, 29 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sigh, and yet another story with &amp;quot;DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass&amp;quot;... I swear, as I said above, I sympathize with you...every time I see something like this it makes me want to scream... Why do all women need to be unrealistically proportioned in like 90% of all the stories here, and why do they all need to have DD breasts unless someone is trying to create some under age style story? Seriously...it is frustrating... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:51, 29 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Loved that movie --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:31, 4 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries, I have not ignored your messages. Just, I suffer writers block frequently. Guess I get busy with other things and cannot really focus on writing. So, not ignoring, just not contributing anything right now because I am not sure what to contribute. That has always been one of my problems with writing, I start off okay, then end up losing my path completely for a while. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:26, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Honestly, blank or pre made are fine, depending on how it is done. I normally try to fill in details like with dreams, memories, etc. [[Dirty Me]] originally started mostly from my blog material, with some side options to make it a CYoS. Sometimes, I did better, when I used my own experience to write, other times, I did worse, especially when I was just trying to make an option to have an option, and when I was not really in a writing mood. &amp;quot;Okay, lets just put in some sex stuff for the readers to make them happy, and go work on something else&amp;quot;. Those are probably the worst paths. [[Too Graphic]] is a WIP, majorly. I need to actually put story in. Doing it more because on my blog people told me they liked pictures. So, figured, let me figure out my path, and put some pictures in, then tell a story based on those. But, it is very sexual. Again, the issue I have with being able to write based on my own experiences, without sounding like a whiny bitch. If you want to get what I mean by that, try reading this path on [[Dirty Me]]: [[Dirty Me/Go ahead and accept the party invitation]] -&amp;gt; [[Dirty Me/Sure, one beer can't hurt]] -&amp;gt; [[Dirty Me/Go home and try to forget this]] -&amp;gt; [[Dirty Me/Pretend like you have no idea what happened and that you would love to party with him]]. I wanted to put how I felt, but, not sure how most of the readers here will react. I assume though I am right: whiny bitch. Especially when you think about what you said some people post on here. Raping a girl and she magically likes it after. Like, I started reading this, [[The Sexual Adventures of You]], the female path, and it was okay, until the rapist. I mean, I shook my head at the &amp;quot;good girl randomly has sex with the army dude&amp;quot;, or has sex with her brother, or neighbor, or whatever. But, I read, until the rapist, and turning him into a sex slave. Yeah, just sort of threw up my hands and said okay, that is too much...get a female writer, or at least try, '''try''', to imagine what a &amp;quot;good girl&amp;quot; would do. I mean, if you want to put that stuff, then make her the bad girl...&lt;br /&gt;
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One thing I actually love about reading [[User:Teejay]]'s stuff. He makes the characters human. Not that I read all his stuff, he tried to follow the story line, but some that have good options he can write about. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 14:47, 8 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hmm, think you might be confused. I said on the good girl path, when the guy tries to rape the character, and he ends up in on the other end of his knife, the only option seems to be to turn him into a sex slave. I sort of liked the cut off his clothes and leave him there, but the author doesn't seem to be willing to let that happen, and keeps pushing towards keeping him as a sex slave. As for rape, did you read my path that I posted last time? That is exactly what it covers. I have been raped twice in real life, so I write from experience.&lt;br /&gt;
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btw, I changed your user page to the Index Link instead of Too Graphic Link. Mostly because I set up Index link for use on the main page, so it will not change much, but I cannot say the same thing for my too graphic link. After all, if I change it to pink, or red, are you sure you would want that? I just want to find a good color combination for it, and possibly see if I can use a background image in the future. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Going to add to them, but last week my brain just didn't want to think...I actually thought of something funny to do with [[Context]], with a misnamed news story. Now to put it into reality. Yeah, my projects tend to be hit or miss xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:30, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries, saw the first message, and the second=P I think part of my problem is, at the beginning you kept telling everyone &amp;quot;Hey, I put up a page, please go to this link, check these out, then write stuff for it&amp;quot;. It seemed more like you wanted others to write a story with your idea in mind. I noted Teejay had pointed out he would be willing to add, but wanted you to first so he could build on that. It is somewhat the same with me. I am more of the responder type than the initiator type normally. So, I guess it is good that you added some of the thoughts about what each character should be like. But, that is my other problem. I don't really feel anything when I read it. It doesn't spark anything that I really want to add. lol, Platypus just mentioned the same thing to me on my page xD When an idea strikes, sure, no problem adding, but hard to generate an idea from nothing. And sadly, you can sort of see what my writing moods have been lately, since I have been working more on [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants]], making fun of some of the stereotyped stories on here. Can you find the originals? The innocent path idea, [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for innocent girls]], was the recent family story someone worked on, like [[AAF - The talk]], [[&amp;quot;Ok, Scott. I trust you.&amp;quot;]], and [[AAF - It works.]]. All of these I removed the underage stuff. I mean, the writer had his 4th grade sister having sex with him...Notice how my innocent girl is 18, yet looks 10? Yeah, because I am making fun of that stuff. For a short time I started asking people on their talk page why everyone seemed to write that the girl was &amp;quot;DD&amp;quot;, which is why I created [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for DD]]. I am even making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] with [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]]. Once I finish the loop, the reader can just have the girl having sex forever, although they will only really have 8 options. I even added a new option to make fun of the [[Pokesex/Pokemon]], but I still need to put the story in. Not sure how I will write that. Even [[Context]], once I work on it, will have some options that will point out how absurd some writers paint women as on here. I am not really pointing at you, or at anyone specific. It is just me making fun of some common things I see on here. Like, sex with absolutely no story, although I must admit that I wrote a few things in [[Dirty Me]] simply to try to &amp;quot;fit in&amp;quot; and keep people wanting to read. One reason I sort of lost interest in working on it, when I found myself writing, not about my experiences, fantasies, or what I want to write about, but instead writing things just so more people would read, and falling into the same rut that many writers do on here. Anyways, think I have went on too long, and probably sound like a whiny bitch now...so I will stop typing. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 01:41, 28 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and I added a bit of an &amp;quot;about me&amp;quot;, well, about my real life experiences... if you are interested. [[User:DirtyMeStoryTime/IRL sex experiences]] --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;blockquote&amp;gt;You hear him yelling at you, but cannot grasp the meaning of the words. He jumps on you, yelling at you more, then you start feeling his hands. You feel him pulling your blouse, popping off buttons, ripping it off. His hand pulls at your pants, undoing them.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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His fist connects with your stomach, knocking the air out of you, leaving you trying to catch your breath. When you finally do, it hurts, trying to suck in breath.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You try to stop him again, and he punches you again, harder. You feel like throwing up, like your insides are hurt.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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He takes your pants the rest of the way off, now that you are no longer trying to stop him, then rips your panties off.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You suddenly understand what he is about to do as he starts undoing his pants.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You yell at him, scream at him, but it doesn't matter. He forces your legs apart and punches you once more as you try to keep your legs closed, try to stop what he is doing.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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He pushes in, and you scream, feeling him tearing your vagina, entering you dry. He ignores you, like a wild animal, and continues pushing himself in you, forcing himself deeper into you. You hurt so bad you cannot stop yourself from crying, sobbing, screaming. He pounds you for a short time before cumming inside you.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally, he stands up, doing up his pants, and looking down at you in disgust, and maybe even a little guilt. You don't know because it is hard to see, as you sob in pain.&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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Now, think about the way most people on here write about raping a girl. At first she is is all &amp;quot;eek, no Mr. don't do this to me&amp;quot; and then she is like &amp;quot;Oh god, I like your cock so much, I am glad you raped me&amp;quot;. Seriously, read how many authors read about it. Now, read what I wrote again. Can you imagine the broken girl, battered and raped, the pain she is feeling, how it feels to be her?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, this is one of those cases where I honestly think, heavier description makes it more real. Of course, I guess the next question is: Do most people who write on this site really want to read about that, to think that the woman would feel like this?&lt;br /&gt;
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Now, this one is a little long, so I will just leave you the link: dirtylittlemestories.blogspot.com/2013/09/slow-motion-love-final-polished-story.html&lt;br /&gt;
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Read that one. Can you feel the love with it? That was what I wrote about me and my husband being intimate. Doesn't it paint a better picture of our love making, and the feelings inside of me, than just &amp;quot;We made love, he was tender, it was good&amp;quot;?&lt;br /&gt;
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See, this is the problem. You read so many of these CYoS's that are just mindless &amp;quot;I want to imagine having sex with a woman like this&amp;quot; that I don't think you see the emotion. I think descriptions, while not always needed, nor always wanted, can pain the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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Or, take for example, me loosing my virginity here: [[Dirty Me/Dream of your first time]], doesn't that show the awkwardness of &amp;quot;the first time&amp;quot;? Yeah, I know, I fall into the same problems that others do on here, especially when I am just writing to make more story for people to read and not feeling it, but...&lt;br /&gt;
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See, when I write a sex scene, I close my eyes. I picture it in my head. I go through the motions. I use toys if needed, fingers, hands. Then, I write, then close my eyes, imagine more, write more. At least when I am doing it right. &lt;br /&gt;
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So, I do not completely agree that it does not help the story, if handled correctly. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:37, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User talk:Teejay|Teejay]]'s talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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If you could do a page or two on your new stories, just so I can get a feel for them, I'd be happy to contribute. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I will look at Anime School then. Thanks for suggesting it. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Anime School says &amp;quot;Do Not Edit.&amp;quot; -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Formality is definitely not necessary. I'm the casual type. :) I suppose if it's been a while, even though it says Do Not Edit... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I love collaborations! I did a nice one with [[User:AgentVincent|AgentVincent]] on a section of Rampage a couple years back. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;CAN U TELL ME UR AGE? PLS THIS IS A POLL IM MAKING PLS TELL UR AGE. -Michaeltamayo96 &lt;br /&gt;
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==GirlOnGirlFan!==&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
I should write more or not, probably not, but who knows. I think I edited out my mistakes, but who&lt;br /&gt;
no's because I am a speed typer.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other stories that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, rounded? It probably depends more on the writer's intent then anything else but, eh, it was a thought.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I just came up with an idea for your Short Bursts: a story about a man or woman who is continuously tormented by a mentally, emotionally, and physically sadistic &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; or, at best, a eldritch &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot;. The protagonist is put through harrowing trials that seem to be without any chance of success but as he or she goes through the task, he/she finds a little hope that allows them to keep going and, if he/she plays her cards right, can actually triumph...just before the &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; destroys everything and shows it up as an illusion and begins to cruelly taunt him/her on the choices he/she said made before wiping her/his memory and putting her/him through another different trial. However, there IS a way to escape or defeat this &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; and every iteration of the trials show a glimmer of such a way. Like it?  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:35, 04 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it's not really like Cabin in the Woods. CITW is a deconstructive parody of the cliche horror movie formula. This idea is more an exercise in despair, a tale of little hope. It might make a passable horror story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah. I understand. By the way, I don't mind you talking too much. I can be a bit talkative too. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, the whole &amp;quot;DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass&amp;quot; thing is understandable. Most of those stories are made not as actual stories with plot, characters, and the like but with the sole intention of wanking off. They all have sexually desirable woman so as to get their rocks off. Problem is, they're just so...empty. The stories are exercises in hedonism, focused on sex. The characters, protagonist included, are barely one-dimensional and the protagonist often strikes me as the type of creep that I wouldn't so much cross the street to avoid but throw bodily into traffic. There are many morally questionable choices that don't feel as though we should consider them morally questionable in these type of stories and that's ignoring the frequency of the choices that have the protagonist actually RAPE someone or getting raped. I get the whole wank-material thing but the rape thing is not something that should found as often as I do in these type of stories.&lt;br /&gt;
P.S describing a woman's chest size by mentioning their cup size is not really &amp;quot;sexy&amp;quot;. It's like describing a apple by say how big it is in inches. My opinion, anyway. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a little question: which type of CYOS protagonist do you like or prefer: a protagonist who is a blank slate but you have plenty of choices to &amp;quot;fill in&amp;quot; him or her by giving him/her personality, hobbies, and clothing styles of your own choice or a already developed protagonist with his/her own personality and interests? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do recommend that you take a good, long look at the &amp;quot;So You Want To&amp;quot; section of TV Tropes. I bet it will be a big help for you . Also, read a lot. From good authors like Agatha Christie. Learning from those books might help with your writing. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:15, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ever heard about a story called &amp;quot;Invisible&amp;quot;? By playing as the guy with no name or description, you see him possibly rape students, teachers, a woman at a church, or a attractive neighbor, or at the very least, masturbate into a girl's locker as petty revenge. And, yes, I meant what I said. Those are actual choices. Hell, Those seem to be the ONLY type of choices: rape, rape, or petty perverted pranks. Also, while I agree with you on the &amp;quot;good girl&amp;quot; thing and the fact that the writer done goofed up but... I don't think a &amp;quot;bad&amp;quot; girl would like the rape either. Rape is perhaps one of the most harrowing and devastating experiences a human being can have, a soul-rending perversion of one of the greatest physical experiences in life. It is something that should be written with as much gravity, seriousness, and maturity as you can muster and not used gratuitously or as something that protagonist does on a whim and even acknowledges it as rape! (Not unless the protagonist is supposed to be a reprehensible monster.) Now, my soapbox has just fallen through so now we can talk about where I can find this &amp;quot;Teejay&amp;quot;'s stuff. Want to recommend to me a story from him? His best, if you would kindly. There's also a story called &amp;quot;The Life of a Medieval Princess&amp;quot; that tries to make it clear that these are people with their own personalities. It's not the best job but at least it's a try which is more then I can say for the majority of Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Adult Story section actually did some good for me: the &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; story convinced me that Dungeons and Dragons seemed pretty cool and the &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; story gave me an idea that I want to write about. Working title is &amp;quot;Legacy of the Progenitors&amp;quot;. It was, initially, a CYOA (this was back when we were using the CYOA name) called &amp;quot;The Book of Darkness&amp;quot; in the &amp;quot;Mature Story&amp;quot; section but I gave up on both the title and on it being a CYOA. Someone else is using it now though I'm not impressed by the writing. Then again, I'm trying to about as good a writer as, well, Jim Butcher or George R.R. Martin so my standards might be a bit high. Pretty sure that ain't the case, though. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and one little thing: ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! imgur.com/gallery/sFT7p --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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AAAANNNNDDD you're right. I misread what you said and thought you were talking about somebody making the protagonist a sex slave and not the protagonist making her rapist the sex slave. Actually reminds me of a choice where a paladin in &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; can make a 14 year-old boy her own sex slave. The boy was part of the bandit group that tired to take her money and the group would have raped her if she lost. A PALADIN. The default Lawful Good class. Not even a Greyguard, a paladin who's more morally ambiguous then a normal paladin. Just a 18 year old who just left the order and no, I don't think there is an explanation for leaving. AAAAANNNNDDD I've just realized that this is turning into a tirade against Adult Story CYOSs then an actual conversation. Sorry for that. I wouldn't have such a grudge against Adult Story CYOSs if there weren't so many of them or if they weren't so focused on sex or if they were better written! I think that's the biggest problem with them: they're just not good. O.K, rant over.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to end on a mutually lighter note: thank you for making the template and putting it on my user page. The Hypnobutt will live on forever! ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! I can't tell if it's the butt or the smoothness of the gif that I like so much but it is, indeed, one of my favorite gifs next to Bollywood movie gifs. You should look that up. They're utterly hilarious in their disconnect from reality. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:14, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:06, 21 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So, is Context or Short Bursts going to get any more work on it? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:20, 22 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Testing, testing. One, two, three. Can you hear me? I'm going to repeat a earlier message so sorry for the repetition. Here it is: &amp;quot;Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.&amp;quot;--[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 27 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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So if I have a path that ends the story do I need to still put a link? I have seen others that didn't so wasn't sure. Also, I came to a point where I didn't need a page anymore, how to do I completely remove it? &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
==Teejay's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I snuck another option into [[The Exhibitionist]] yesterday. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your latest rant is making me want to reach through the screen, find the jackass who destroyed the female narrator and made her into nothing but a cum receptacle, and cast Avada Kedavra on them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Not the ones I write. Those feature strong, dominant women who have sex where, when and how ''they'' want. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your real-life experiences made me (a) want to take a shower to wash off the horrible feeling of my skin crawling (even though ''I'' already knew most of it... it doesn't make it any easier to process), and (b) wrap my arms around you and comfort you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Hopefully, the bad stuff in your past does not resurface, and you have a long, happy marriage and a successful life. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that sex shouldn't be hidden, and that the human body is a wonderful thing. &lt;br /&gt;
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I have no problem with you putting up your real-life experiences. If you're OK with sharing, that's awesome. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Mini-rant: it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website. (Thanks for letting me vent.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Come on over any time you need to be groped. I'll grope you anywhere you'd like. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If I had you in the stocks, I can think of quite a few things I'd want to do to y...um, ''for'' you. ;) Let's just say I can do other things with my tongue than produce sounds. And that would just be the start of things.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, in that case... there would definitely be lovemaking involved. And when I was done, I'd make you finish me with your mouth. (I'm sure there'd be other things, too...) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I get into similar moods myself on occasion. &lt;br /&gt;
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I'm always gentle. I'd gladly put you in stocks and use your pussy and mouth. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Braless, of course. How are you supposed to show off your cleavage properly if you're wearing a bra? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you want invisible text, the easy way is to change the font color to white.  &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your 'buttons' for the Main Page look fine to me.  Maybe they'll be more eye catching this way. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:36, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, what Hellspawn's doing with Pokesex is taking a poorly planned story written by multiple poor writers and he's trying to hammer it into a decent shape.  The deleting is mostly because of pages that never had any point in existing at all. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the idea for an Exhibitionist scenario strikes me, I'll be sure to let you know.  But inspiration comes when it comes, not before then.  I'm sure an idea will occur to me sooner or later.  (Find an abandoned construction site and re-create Miley Cyrus' Wrecking Ball video?  No...  At an actual construction site, not a soundstage, that would just mean getting construction grit in all the wrong places...) --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry; I take the grammar in SSR seriously, but the plot, such as it is, is utterly unrealistic and is very much worthy of mockery.  In SSR, men and women are always ready for sex, and rape at worst provokes annoyance and never induces trauma.  It's pure fantasy, which may be part of why it's so popular. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:11, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No need to revert the family friendly section.  I think your template looks just fine. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:33, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The rants are somewhat amusing.  I think it’s good that you’re writing them.  There should be something around here that’s a bit more reality based, to serve as a counterpoint to the frequently laughable strictly fantasy depictions of sex.  I should point out that there really are some guys who are over-endowed, and they usually have to wear a device that looks like a rubber doughnut over their cocks to prevent them from penetrating their partners to the point of hurting them.  It’s rather like how, when you need to insert a screw that’s too long for the hole you’re inserting it into, you need a rubber washer.&lt;br /&gt;
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SSR does acknowledge that there are limits (at least it does on the pages I’ve written).  There’s a magical condom section with [[Ask for the elephant size]] where the female on the receiving end wants nothing to do with the thing.  And an unfortunate set of choices where one painful writer had to write the giant dick exploding the woman’s lower body.  Read it and cringe.&lt;br /&gt;
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Your IRL (mis)adventures may be more bio than story, but you IRL experiences are the foundation for your stories, and as such, I think it is appropriate for you to post it here, for those who want to ‘peek beneath the hood’, as it were, and get a sense of where your stories are coming from. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 6 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I feel your pain.  Blame GalaxyMage for leading girls to horses in the worst ways possible in every story he touches.  At least you didn't get to the part with the leeches. (Inside as well as outside). --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks you for the flower.  I am suitably impressed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:13, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 01:55, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:28, 2 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:38, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
--[[User:Elerneron|Elerneron]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Uman]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think your a little confusing sometimes. Do revise, do not want to revise. Wants add some things, doesn't want to add. You are so confusing that I like you a lot :D (compliment for you and not a negative thought)&lt;br /&gt;
So see whatever you want to do or not, I'm ok with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me out with the page deletion thing --[[User:Hellspawn|I'm really beginning to regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for notifying, I realise that I probably shouldn't blank so many pages but I was blanking other peoples stuff rather than my own (actually that sounds worse). What I mean to say is that I'm trying to reorganise and fix up that story but it meant removing a bunch of poorly written and poorly planned pages (Some didn't have options, some didn't makes sense etc.). I've only started doing that after I got to grips with the format and the editing options and I'm now going to start adding more to the story than I've taken away from it. But seriously thanks for the heads up. 15 April 2016--[[User:Hellspawn|I still regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what, Platypus laid out what I was trying to do better than I did. Thanks for the input; I'm happy you're trying to help out novice users because that's not something everyone does on the internet. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 18:52 15 April 2016 (GMT)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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In response to what you said, I guess it because guys, honestly, just tend to like big boobs. Personally, there's plenty of girls I like in real life with small breasts, but in terms of looking to get horny, personality usually doesn't cut it for most. For me, body usually doesn't matter, especially on this site, where you can't see anything, as long as you can tell the story good enough to make me feel it. If you purely rely on the sex of it, then yeah, body proportions need to be larger, but in all honesty, the story leading up to and after sex is what really gets me turned on. I actually have trouble writing just sex scenes. So, for what you said, it's because people on here want all girls to be &amp;quot;large&amp;quot; in all ways so its easier to avoid actually seducing story and skip to sex. Its easier to make all girls unrealistically big and say all others aren't there yet so it leave the reader the sense that they could still be large one day and be used at some point.&lt;br /&gt;
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Haha, well, I just started, but I have to be a girl, so I can't really be a fair judge. I'll gladly look, though&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, would you be interested in collaborating on my newest story, Fallout Shorts? If you've never played a Fallout game, you may not get it, but it pretty much sex in different situations, so I could fill you in. The best part is I made it specifically for one shots, like your bursts. You simply choose a base character, which you could make one, and write one story about them, then you never have to worry about that storyline again. I need someone mainly to help with the girl sex scenes. I can do the buildup and story, thats what I like, but I need a girls perspective on having sex in various, sometimes unusual ways. If not, no problem&lt;br /&gt;
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*smiling* You definetly seem like the girl for the job. I'd be happy to write some girl stories for build up, i have plenty of those ideas, but the sex areas are sometimes hard. sometimes i can do it, but not always. so you in?&lt;br /&gt;
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Any time you have will work. Nice to have a partner for once&lt;br /&gt;
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Please, go crazy. And like I said, I know a lot of girls into this stuff who've kinda explained their ways, so I can kinda write girl persepctive. And by all means, include whatever fetish you choose&lt;br /&gt;
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This is good. I'd say submit it, though you may have to make another Fallout 4 MILF-innocent character. I don't know the others would fit. Or it could be a random person, which works too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thats cool. Although, like I said, this is more of unjoined stories with no joining parts, just bursts so i don't have to try an figure out memory. And clothing thing is great and on my mind. As for the animal thing, I think only girls because of there scent from their member.&lt;br /&gt;
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Perhaps 200 years of sexual tension? I think maybe a time skip might be an okay idea too, gives you the chance to get over husband, build whatever settlement, amke connections and such, better starting point.&lt;br /&gt;
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== In The Worst Ways ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hope you like the option I added :v. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]]&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. hope I didn't completely overstep in just adding it directly to the page, cause when I did that I thought that's what I was supposed to do, but now I'm not so sure.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if it doesn't work out. I saw it on a blog of different sexual dares/challenges and it was the first thing that came to mind when you asked. Maybe I can get more ideas from there if I can ever find the page again :v.&lt;br /&gt;
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I love it! Thank you for writing it :v Keep up the good work! [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:33 am est 5/5/16&lt;br /&gt;
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What I've read of your rants story is pretty great :v. I tend to agree that those situations are annoying, though I've kinda just gotten used to them, you know? [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:13 am est 5/8/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I read the summaries :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:06, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Personally I always liked the idea of being stuck (intentionally or unintentionally, willingly or unwillingly) halfway through a wall pretty enjoyable. The person on the other side can only see me from the waist down and I can't see them at all. They can use me however they want (from the waist down) and walk away and I'm still stuck there for the next anonymous user. Then if I get out later, literally anyone I pass by on the street could have been one of them. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:39, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That's pretty amazing. I envy you for being able to do something like that. I would love to do something like that if I could :v. I got into talking about the through the wall thing because I saw you were talking about being locked in stocks. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:15, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I may take you up on that offer of information on those countries. But I do also want to leave it open for others to write in and I've already got a lot on my mind for it. I would really like to see other people's ideas for shenanigans in a world that suddenly has no police and no laws. Come to think of it, no police means nobody to arrest you for public nudity or sex, right :v? [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:28, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually hadn't been thinking about it, but I may implement through-the-wall or some other public use options in [[Leaving]] from different perspectives, and possibly in [[Global Anarchy]] in some way now that you mention it. I wasn't sure how to implement it but I've got some ideas now, thank you :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:28, 20 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh my god thank you, I'm definitely going to look into that and see what I can do, try to learn those things. I didn't know a lot of those things were even possible on here. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:19, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, easy or not, I'm the kind of person that, as long as it's for something stupid and irrelevant I will keep poking at it until it's perfect. Or at the very least, much, much longer than I have any reason to keep trying. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:10, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I completely forgot about hover text. It's been so long since I've had a mouse to hover with lol. I feel like I'm missing out now, especially considering things like xkcd and Paradox Space use hover text a lot. I'm not sure I'd use notes that often though because I don't want people getting into the habit of looking at the edit pages of every page. Would spoil a few things on a few of the pages I've already set up lol. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:47, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thank You!! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thnx for the comment.I'm really thankful,i haven't relly got the hang of it yet XD.My computer hasn't been working with me,(Thanks to my little sister -_-) but I'll manage, hopefully!Thanks again ^～^!&lt;br /&gt;
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== Jordon21 Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for adding that category. [[User:Jordon21 |Jordon21]]&lt;br /&gt;
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For &amp;quot;negative criticism&amp;quot;, you delivered that message quite politely. :P But yeah, thanks for the info. I guess I'm not used to how Talk Pages operate - I hold more of a presence on chatrooms and back-and-forth messaging threads, you see. --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 19:18, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;kk il admit that the freakin branch broke so i freakin land with my face in dirt. Also its a high branch maybe just as tall as a normal truck. I hurt my fecking head. Now i have black eye. :V&lt;br /&gt;
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==GirlOnGirlFan!==&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
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no's because I am a speed typer.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other stories that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, rounded? It probably depends more on the writer's intent then anything else but, eh, it was a thought.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I just came up with an idea for your Short Bursts: a story about a man or woman who is continuously tormented by a mentally, emotionally, and physically sadistic &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; or, at best, a eldritch &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot;. The protagonist is put through harrowing trials that seem to be without any chance of success but as he or she goes through the task, he/she finds a little hope that allows them to keep going and, if he/she plays her cards right, can actually triumph...just before the &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; destroys everything and shows it up as an illusion and begins to cruelly taunt him/her on the choices he/she said made before wiping her/his memory and putting her/him through another different trial. However, there IS a way to escape or defeat this &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; and every iteration of the trials show a glimmer of such a way. Like it?  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:35, 04 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it's not really like Cabin in the Woods. CITW is a deconstructive parody of the cliche horror movie formula. This idea is more an exercise in despair, a tale of little hope. It might make a passable horror story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah. I understand. By the way, I don't mind you talking too much. I can be a bit talkative too. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, the whole &amp;quot;DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass&amp;quot; thing is understandable. Most of those stories are made not as actual stories with plot, characters, and the like but with the sole intention of wanking off. They all have sexually desirable woman so as to get their rocks off. Problem is, they're just so...empty. The stories are exercises in hedonism, focused on sex. The characters, protagonist included, are barely one-dimensional and the protagonist often strikes me as the type of creep that I wouldn't so much cross the street to avoid but throw bodily into traffic. There are many morally questionable choices that don't feel as though we should consider them morally questionable in these type of stories and that's ignoring the frequency of the choices that have the protagonist actually RAPE someone or getting raped. I get the whole wank-material thing but the rape thing is not something that should found as often as I do in these type of stories.&lt;br /&gt;
P.S describing a woman's chest size by mentioning their cup size is not really &amp;quot;sexy&amp;quot;. It's like describing a apple by say how big it is in inches. My opinion, anyway. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a little question: which type of CYOS protagonist do you like or prefer: a protagonist who is a blank slate but you have plenty of choices to &amp;quot;fill in&amp;quot; him or her by giving him/her personality, hobbies, and clothing styles of your own choice or a already developed protagonist with his/her own personality and interests? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do recommend that you take a good, long look at the &amp;quot;So You Want To&amp;quot; section of TV Tropes. I bet it will be a big help for you . Also, read a lot. From good authors like Agatha Christie. Learning from those books might help with your writing. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:15, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ever heard about a story called &amp;quot;Invisible&amp;quot;? By playing as the guy with no name or description, you see him possibly rape students, teachers, a woman at a church, or a attractive neighbor, or at the very least, masturbate into a girl's locker as petty revenge. And, yes, I meant what I said. Those are actual choices. Hell, Those seem to be the ONLY type of choices: rape, rape, or petty perverted pranks. Also, while I agree with you on the &amp;quot;good girl&amp;quot; thing and the fact that the writer done goofed up but... I don't think a &amp;quot;bad&amp;quot; girl would like the rape either. Rape is perhaps one of the most harrowing and devastating experiences a human being can have, a soul-rending perversion of one of the greatest physical experiences in life. It is something that should be written with as much gravity, seriousness, and maturity as you can muster and not used gratuitously or as something that protagonist does on a whim and even acknowledges it as rape! (Not unless the protagonist is supposed to be a reprehensible monster.) Now, my soapbox has just fallen through so now we can talk about where I can find this &amp;quot;Teejay&amp;quot;'s stuff. Want to recommend to me a story from him? His best, if you would kindly. There's also a story called &amp;quot;The Life of a Medieval Princess&amp;quot; that tries to make it clear that these are people with their own personalities. It's not the best job but at least it's a try which is more then I can say for the majority of Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Adult Story section actually did some good for me: the &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; story convinced me that Dungeons and Dragons seemed pretty cool and the &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; story gave me an idea that I want to write about. Working title is &amp;quot;Legacy of the Progenitors&amp;quot;. It was, initially, a CYOA (this was back when we were using the CYOA name) called &amp;quot;The Book of Darkness&amp;quot; in the &amp;quot;Mature Story&amp;quot; section but I gave up on both the title and on it being a CYOA. Someone else is using it now though I'm not impressed by the writing. Then again, I'm trying to about as good a writer as, well, Jim Butcher or George R.R. Martin so my standards might be a bit high. Pretty sure that ain't the case, though. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and one little thing: ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! imgur.com/gallery/sFT7p --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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AAAANNNNDDD you're right. I misread what you said and thought you were talking about somebody making the protagonist a sex slave and not the protagonist making her rapist the sex slave. Actually reminds me of a choice where a paladin in &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; can make a 14 year-old boy her own sex slave. The boy was part of the bandit group that tired to take her money and the group would have raped her if she lost. A PALADIN. The default Lawful Good class. Not even a Greyguard, a paladin who's more morally ambiguous then a normal paladin. Just a 18 year old who just left the order and no, I don't think there is an explanation for leaving. AAAAANNNNDDD I've just realized that this is turning into a tirade against Adult Story CYOSs then an actual conversation. Sorry for that. I wouldn't have such a grudge against Adult Story CYOSs if there weren't so many of them or if they weren't so focused on sex or if they were better written! I think that's the biggest problem with them: they're just not good. O.K, rant over.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to end on a mutually lighter note: thank you for making the template and putting it on my user page. The Hypnobutt will live on forever! ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! I can't tell if it's the butt or the smoothness of the gif that I like so much but it is, indeed, one of my favorite gifs next to Bollywood movie gifs. You should look that up. They're utterly hilarious in their disconnect from reality. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:14, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:06, 21 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So, is Context or Short Bursts going to get any more work on it? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:20, 22 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Testing, testing. One, two, three. Can you hear me? I'm going to repeat a earlier message so sorry for the repetition. Here it is: &amp;quot;Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.&amp;quot;--[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 27 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank you for reminding me.==&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I snuck another option into [[The Exhibitionist]] yesterday. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your latest rant is making me want to reach through the screen, find the jackass who destroyed the female narrator and made her into nothing but a cum receptacle, and cast Avada Kedavra on them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Not the ones I write. Those feature strong, dominant women who have sex where, when and how ''they'' want. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your real-life experiences made me (a) want to take a shower to wash off the horrible feeling of my skin crawling (even though ''I'' already knew most of it... it doesn't make it any easier to process), and (b) wrap my arms around you and comfort you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Hopefully, the bad stuff in your past does not resurface, and you have a long, happy marriage and a successful life. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have no problem with you putting up your real-life experiences. If you're OK with sharing, that's awesome. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Mini-rant: it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website. (Thanks for letting me vent.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Come on over any time you need to be groped. I'll grope you anywhere you'd like. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If I had you in the stocks, I can think of quite a few things I'd want to do to y...um, ''for'' you. ;) Let's just say I can do other things with my tongue than produce sounds. And that would just be the start of things.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, in that case... there would definitely be lovemaking involved. And when I was done, I'd make you finish me with your mouth. (I'm sure there'd be other things, too...) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm always gentle. I'd gladly put you in stocks and use your pussy and mouth. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Braless, of course. How are you supposed to show off your cleavage properly if you're wearing a bra? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your 'buttons' for the Main Page look fine to me.  Maybe they'll be more eye catching this way. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:36, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, what Hellspawn's doing with Pokesex is taking a poorly planned story written by multiple poor writers and he's trying to hammer it into a decent shape.  The deleting is mostly because of pages that never had any point in existing at all. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the idea for an Exhibitionist scenario strikes me, I'll be sure to let you know.  But inspiration comes when it comes, not before then.  I'm sure an idea will occur to me sooner or later.  (Find an abandoned construction site and re-create Miley Cyrus' Wrecking Ball video?  No...  At an actual construction site, not a soundstage, that would just mean getting construction grit in all the wrong places...) --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry; I take the grammar in SSR seriously, but the plot, such as it is, is utterly unrealistic and is very much worthy of mockery.  In SSR, men and women are always ready for sex, and rape at worst provokes annoyance and never induces trauma.  It's pure fantasy, which may be part of why it's so popular. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:11, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No need to revert the family friendly section.  I think your template looks just fine. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:33, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The rants are somewhat amusing.  I think it’s good that you’re writing them.  There should be something around here that’s a bit more reality based, to serve as a counterpoint to the frequently laughable strictly fantasy depictions of sex.  I should point out that there really are some guys who are over-endowed, and they usually have to wear a device that looks like a rubber doughnut over their cocks to prevent them from penetrating their partners to the point of hurting them.  It’s rather like how, when you need to insert a screw that’s too long for the hole you’re inserting it into, you need a rubber washer.&lt;br /&gt;
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I should probably also point out that a man and a woman can measure the same penis with the same ruler and get different measurements.&lt;br /&gt;
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SSR does acknowledge that there are limits (at least it does on the pages I’ve written).  There’s a magical condom section with [[Ask for the elephant size]] where the female on the receiving end wants nothing to do with the thing.  And an unfortunate set of choices where one painful writer had to write the giant dick exploding the woman’s lower body.  Read it and cringe.&lt;br /&gt;
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Your IRL (mis)adventures may be more bio than story, but you IRL experiences are the foundation for your stories, and as such, I think it is appropriate for you to post it here, for those who want to ‘peek beneath the hood’, as it were, and get a sense of where your stories are coming from. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 6 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I feel your pain.  Blame GalaxyMage for leading girls to horses in the worst ways possible in every story he touches.  At least you didn't get to the part with the leeches. (Inside as well as outside). --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks you for the flower.  I am suitably impressed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:13, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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Regarding your suicide attempts I can only sympathize with you, and can only imagine how low and depressed you must have been to even think of it as a way out.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 24th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the image, you should use Photoshop to edit it out.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I read your additions, thought them over and I like them. So you can rewrite whatever you think is needed.&lt;br /&gt;
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I think your a little confusing sometimes. Do revise, do not want to revise. Wants add some things, doesn't want to add. You are so confusing that I like you a lot :D (compliment for you and not a negative thought)&lt;br /&gt;
So see whatever you want to do or not, I'm ok with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me out with the page deletion thing --[[User:Hellspawn|I'm really beginning to regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for notifying, I realise that I probably shouldn't blank so many pages but I was blanking other peoples stuff rather than my own (actually that sounds worse). What I mean to say is that I'm trying to reorganise and fix up that story but it meant removing a bunch of poorly written and poorly planned pages (Some didn't have options, some didn't makes sense etc.). I've only started doing that after I got to grips with the format and the editing options and I'm now going to start adding more to the story than I've taken away from it. But seriously thanks for the heads up. 15 April 2016--[[User:Hellspawn|I still regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what, Platypus laid out what I was trying to do better than I did. Thanks for the input; I'm happy you're trying to help out novice users because that's not something everyone does on the internet. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 18:52 15 April 2016 (GMT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah! gotcha.  thanks again.&lt;br /&gt;
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In response to what you said, I guess it because guys, honestly, just tend to like big boobs. Personally, there's plenty of girls I like in real life with small breasts, but in terms of looking to get horny, personality usually doesn't cut it for most. For me, body usually doesn't matter, especially on this site, where you can't see anything, as long as you can tell the story good enough to make me feel it. If you purely rely on the sex of it, then yeah, body proportions need to be larger, but in all honesty, the story leading up to and after sex is what really gets me turned on. I actually have trouble writing just sex scenes. So, for what you said, it's because people on here want all girls to be &amp;quot;large&amp;quot; in all ways so its easier to avoid actually seducing story and skip to sex. Its easier to make all girls unrealistically big and say all others aren't there yet so it leave the reader the sense that they could still be large one day and be used at some point.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Kyre's Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Haha, well, I just started, but I have to be a girl, so I can't really be a fair judge. I'll gladly look, though&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, that might work. I read some of the girls and it sounded good up to what I read.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, would you be interested in collaborating on my newest story, Fallout Shorts? If you've never played a Fallout game, you may not get it, but it pretty much sex in different situations, so I could fill you in. The best part is I made it specifically for one shots, like your bursts. You simply choose a base character, which you could make one, and write one story about them, then you never have to worry about that storyline again. I need someone mainly to help with the girl sex scenes. I can do the buildup and story, thats what I like, but I need a girls perspective on having sex in various, sometimes unusual ways. If not, no problem&lt;br /&gt;
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*smiling* You definetly seem like the girl for the job. I'd be happy to write some girl stories for build up, i have plenty of those ideas, but the sex areas are sometimes hard. sometimes i can do it, but not always. so you in?&lt;br /&gt;
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Any time you have will work. Nice to have a partner for once&lt;br /&gt;
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Please, go crazy. And like I said, I know a lot of girls into this stuff who've kinda explained their ways, so I can kinda write girl persepctive. And by all means, include whatever fetish you choose&lt;br /&gt;
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This is good. I'd say submit it, though you may have to make another Fallout 4 MILF-innocent character. I don't know the others would fit. Or it could be a random person, which works too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thats cool. Although, like I said, this is more of unjoined stories with no joining parts, just bursts so i don't have to try an figure out memory. And clothing thing is great and on my mind. As for the animal thing, I think only girls because of there scent from their member.&lt;br /&gt;
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Perhaps 200 years of sexual tension? I think maybe a time skip might be an okay idea too, gives you the chance to get over husband, build whatever settlement, amke connections and such, better starting point.&lt;br /&gt;
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I like the Pipboy. It's a little big, but it looks great. And I think I'm going to restart Fallout 4, with a different strategy. I just wasn't happy with how this one worked. And sorry it's taken so long. Been busy.&lt;br /&gt;
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== In The Worst Ways ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hope you like the option I added :v. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]]&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. hope I didn't completely overstep in just adding it directly to the page, cause when I did that I thought that's what I was supposed to do, but now I'm not so sure.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if it doesn't work out. I saw it on a blog of different sexual dares/challenges and it was the first thing that came to mind when you asked. Maybe I can get more ideas from there if I can ever find the page again :v.&lt;br /&gt;
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I love it! Thank you for writing it :v Keep up the good work! [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:33 am est 5/5/16&lt;br /&gt;
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What I've read of your rants story is pretty great :v. I tend to agree that those situations are annoying, though I've kinda just gotten used to them, you know? [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:13 am est 5/8/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I read the summaries :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:06, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Personally I always liked the idea of being stuck (intentionally or unintentionally, willingly or unwillingly) halfway through a wall pretty enjoyable. The person on the other side can only see me from the waist down and I can't see them at all. They can use me however they want (from the waist down) and walk away and I'm still stuck there for the next anonymous user. Then if I get out later, literally anyone I pass by on the street could have been one of them. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:39, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That's pretty amazing. I envy you for being able to do something like that. I would love to do something like that if I could :v. I got into talking about the through the wall thing because I saw you were talking about being locked in stocks. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:15, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I may take you up on that offer of information on those countries. But I do also want to leave it open for others to write in and I've already got a lot on my mind for it. I would really like to see other people's ideas for shenanigans in a world that suddenly has no police and no laws. Come to think of it, no police means nobody to arrest you for public nudity or sex, right :v? [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:28, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually hadn't been thinking about it, but I may implement through-the-wall or some other public use options in [[Leaving]] from different perspectives, and possibly in [[Global Anarchy]] in some way now that you mention it. I wasn't sure how to implement it but I've got some ideas now, thank you :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:28, 20 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh my god thank you, I'm definitely going to look into that and see what I can do, try to learn those things. I didn't know a lot of those things were even possible on here. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:19, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, easy or not, I'm the kind of person that, as long as it's for something stupid and irrelevant I will keep poking at it until it's perfect. Or at the very least, much, much longer than I have any reason to keep trying. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:10, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I completely forgot about hover text. It's been so long since I've had a mouse to hover with lol. I feel like I'm missing out now, especially considering things like xkcd and Paradox Space use hover text a lot. I'm not sure I'd use notes that often though because I don't want people getting into the habit of looking at the edit pages of every page. Would spoil a few things on a few of the pages I've already set up lol. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:47, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thank You!! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thnx for the comment.I'm really thankful,i haven't relly got the hang of it yet XD.My computer hasn't been working with me,(Thanks to my little sister -_-) but I'll manage, hopefully!Thanks again ^～^!&lt;br /&gt;
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== Jordon21 Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for adding that category. [[User:Jordon21 |Jordon21]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==SkylaTruffles' Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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For &amp;quot;negative criticism&amp;quot;, you delivered that message quite politely. :P But yeah, thanks for the info. I guess I'm not used to how Talk Pages operate - I hold more of a presence on chatrooms and back-and-forth messaging threads, you see. --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 19:18, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Okay got no time to explain but i already read all of your sex experiences but i have to say. Im attempting suicide so thank you for coorections and things so bye now. Love ur self.:Michaeltamayo&lt;br /&gt;
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==GirlOnGirlFan!==&lt;br /&gt;
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I am glad you told me what I did wrong, I honestly was just typing and not looking over. I do not do that anymore.&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry, you were not intimidating, it was technically a rough copy, but I think it's fixed now and I wrote something better just now. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not nervous anymore, so I think I will do well now.&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree with Platypus, Breaking it up into little sections is better. I have no idea why I did not do that, maybe it's because I was a little nervous so I messed up alot. I guess I do not have to write my name you know who it is. Okay, one more page if it sucks he should just delete it, what's the big deal. Like I said I am not the best writer more of a reader, but I know good writing when I see it.&lt;br /&gt;
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I guess I will stop writing stuff, I mean I don't really think I am cut out for it. So goodbye!&lt;br /&gt;
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I did not check yet, but did you fix it?&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I would like you to edit it too, I bet there is lots of mistakes its the first copy. Like the debug model in programming a game.&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought the female playing point was for males like me who like girl on girl action, so I wrote in my perspective as a male seeing girl on girl action. Anyways, he is not replying to me whether&lt;br /&gt;
I should write more or not, probably not, but who knows. I think I edited out my mistakes, but who&lt;br /&gt;
no's because I am a speed typer.&lt;br /&gt;
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Okay, I will change things before it gets deleted. &lt;br /&gt;
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Do you like my writing out of curiosity? when I contributed to Platypus's work? I wonder if he will like it, I heard he is picky. Sorry this is in a weird place I do not know how to move it appropriately.  &lt;br /&gt;
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==H0rniWr1t3r's Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Sorry its just I get easily hurt cause my low self esteem and someone deleted my pages of bad writing made me want to kill myself. I know I do not look after what I write which is a bad habit probably why. I defiantly can relate to your cousin I done things like that for as long as I can remember, everyone always says I use to be a violent child. I remember my dad beating me up and me beating up the kids at school back then I got expelled . Things got better in high school because I got on medication its a miracle that I graduated.  [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not mean to say you said oh just try harder, everyone says that and when I explain to them its not that simple I struggled with borderline personality disorder ever since I was 14 and explain what I go through and they  still do not understand what I go through. Tomorrow is my first day of counseling I wonder what its like. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I did not write these directed towards you I ment to direct them to platypus. So I posted on my page because I did not want to mess anything up. I feel like you don't really understand me do you have hallucinations that scare the shit out of you every single day, people talking in your head that are not there, having no control of your emotions cause of bpd and people saying you do just cause they do, being told I am worthless everyday by your parents as a child and other stuff, fearing abandonment, not understanding people cause I have asd, worrying about everything, always telling yourself your useless everyday, having no control of facial expressions some times, sudden ups and downs sometimes I feel so happy and other times I feel depressed and everything everyone says hurts me, and more. I really did not mean to guilt trip anyone I was just telling the reality of things I was going to say that but I assume you would know.&lt;br /&gt;
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sigh it was useless trying to get people to empathize with me when all they say its try harder when they are not in by shoes. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am not trying to guilt trip no one, He honestly made me want to kill myself I though at least writing was something I am good at but no I am not!. So if you think I am trying to guilt trip then fuck you! And I am no child I'm 21. You do not know what its like to have borderline personality disorder meaning you have strong emotions with literally no control over then, fear abandonment etc learn more by researching. I feel bad by what you said oh just try harder to control you emotions will research bpd and you will see why I am like this. I do not have just bpd but severe bpd. I am pissed of by what you said about guilt tripping when its not true ugh so paranoid. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Fredhot16 Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Yo. It's been a long time since we talked. About two years, right? And it was over some stupid mistake. Makes me realize how much the site's grown. Probably. At the very least, in the Adult story section. Eh, what you going do? So, about your &amp;quot;The Exhibitionist&amp;quot; story: I'm not really that interested in it. I have no problem with it but there seems to be a absolute deluge of sex centered stories in the Adult story section. I'm not saying that's ''bad'', I'm saying that more stories that are not based on sex need to be in the Adult story section. Seriously, I'd love to read a good story in the Adult story that has sexual content but is not entirely based around boning and screwing. I'm not saying that I'm assuming that the story will be entirely centered around the little death, I'm just saying that I don't think I would be right for the story. I ''am'' going to make a few suggestions but they won't be sexual. 99.99% of the time. So it looks like your subliminal tactic worked. Clever girl. --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey. Want some help with writing other stories that aren't based around sex? I know a website. It's great. You probably haven't heard of it before. Here's the link: &lt;br /&gt;
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/SeeTheIndex --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:53, 18 March 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, here's some food for thought from someone who thinks too much about these things: do the choices you get in CYOSs the in-character choices for the person you're playing as (in that continuity, anyway)? Are they the choices that the character has the certain personality to do? Or does the characters start off as a &amp;quot;tabula rasa&amp;quot;, a blank slate, and the choices we choose fill in that character's personality, coloring him or her? Are the choices part of the character's personality or possible personality or are the choices merely the colors to make him or her more...well, rounded? It probably depends more on the writer's intent then anything else but, eh, it was a thought.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:19, 01 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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You know, I just came up with an idea for your Short Bursts: a story about a man or woman who is continuously tormented by a mentally, emotionally, and physically sadistic &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; or, at best, a eldritch &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot;. The protagonist is put through harrowing trials that seem to be without any chance of success but as he or she goes through the task, he/she finds a little hope that allows them to keep going and, if he/she plays her cards right, can actually triumph...just before the &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; destroys everything and shows it up as an illusion and begins to cruelly taunt him/her on the choices he/she said made before wiping her/his memory and putting her/him through another different trial. However, there IS a way to escape or defeat this &amp;quot;god&amp;quot; and every iteration of the trials show a glimmer of such a way. Like it?  --[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 07:35, 04 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, it's not really like Cabin in the Woods. CITW is a deconstructive parody of the cliche horror movie formula. This idea is more an exercise in despair, a tale of little hope. It might make a passable horror story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:25, 04 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah. I understand. By the way, I don't mind you talking too much. I can be a bit talkative too. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, the whole &amp;quot;DD cup breasts, and a round and firm ass&amp;quot; thing is understandable. Most of those stories are made not as actual stories with plot, characters, and the like but with the sole intention of wanking off. They all have sexually desirable woman so as to get their rocks off. Problem is, they're just so...empty. The stories are exercises in hedonism, focused on sex. The characters, protagonist included, are barely one-dimensional and the protagonist often strikes me as the type of creep that I wouldn't so much cross the street to avoid but throw bodily into traffic. There are many morally questionable choices that don't feel as though we should consider them morally questionable in these type of stories and that's ignoring the frequency of the choices that have the protagonist actually RAPE someone or getting raped. I get the whole wank-material thing but the rape thing is not something that should found as often as I do in these type of stories.&lt;br /&gt;
P.S describing a woman's chest size by mentioning their cup size is not really &amp;quot;sexy&amp;quot;. It's like describing a apple by say how big it is in inches. My opinion, anyway. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Here's a little question: which type of CYOS protagonist do you like or prefer: a protagonist who is a blank slate but you have plenty of choices to &amp;quot;fill in&amp;quot; him or her by giving him/her personality, hobbies, and clothing styles of your own choice or a already developed protagonist with his/her own personality and interests? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 7:41, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do recommend that you take a good, long look at the &amp;quot;So You Want To&amp;quot; section of TV Tropes. I bet it will be a big help for you . Also, read a lot. From good authors like Agatha Christie. Learning from those books might help with your writing. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 8:15, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ever heard about a story called &amp;quot;Invisible&amp;quot;? By playing as the guy with no name or description, you see him possibly rape students, teachers, a woman at a church, or a attractive neighbor, or at the very least, masturbate into a girl's locker as petty revenge. And, yes, I meant what I said. Those are actual choices. Hell, Those seem to be the ONLY type of choices: rape, rape, or petty perverted pranks. Also, while I agree with you on the &amp;quot;good girl&amp;quot; thing and the fact that the writer done goofed up but... I don't think a &amp;quot;bad&amp;quot; girl would like the rape either. Rape is perhaps one of the most harrowing and devastating experiences a human being can have, a soul-rending perversion of one of the greatest physical experiences in life. It is something that should be written with as much gravity, seriousness, and maturity as you can muster and not used gratuitously or as something that protagonist does on a whim and even acknowledges it as rape! (Not unless the protagonist is supposed to be a reprehensible monster.) Now, my soapbox has just fallen through so now we can talk about where I can find this &amp;quot;Teejay&amp;quot;'s stuff. Want to recommend to me a story from him? His best, if you would kindly. There's also a story called &amp;quot;The Life of a Medieval Princess&amp;quot; that tries to make it clear that these are people with their own personalities. It's not the best job but at least it's a try which is more then I can say for the majority of Adult CYOSs. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Adult Story section actually did some good for me: the &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; story convinced me that Dungeons and Dragons seemed pretty cool and the &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; story gave me an idea that I want to write about. Working title is &amp;quot;Legacy of the Progenitors&amp;quot;. It was, initially, a CYOA (this was back when we were using the CYOA name) called &amp;quot;The Book of Darkness&amp;quot; in the &amp;quot;Mature Story&amp;quot; section but I gave up on both the title and on it being a CYOA. Someone else is using it now though I'm not impressed by the writing. Then again, I'm trying to about as good a writer as, well, Jim Butcher or George R.R. Martin so my standards might be a bit high. Pretty sure that ain't the case, though. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, and one little thing: ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! imgur.com/gallery/sFT7p --[[User:Fredhot16]] 17:43, 09 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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AAAANNNNDDD you're right. I misread what you said and thought you were talking about somebody making the protagonist a sex slave and not the protagonist making her rapist the sex slave. Actually reminds me of a choice where a paladin in &amp;quot;Dungeons and Dragons&amp;quot; can make a 14 year-old boy her own sex slave. The boy was part of the bandit group that tired to take her money and the group would have raped her if she lost. A PALADIN. The default Lawful Good class. Not even a Greyguard, a paladin who's more morally ambiguous then a normal paladin. Just a 18 year old who just left the order and no, I don't think there is an explanation for leaving. AAAAANNNNDDD I've just realized that this is turning into a tirade against Adult Story CYOSs then an actual conversation. Sorry for that. I wouldn't have such a grudge against Adult Story CYOSs if there weren't so many of them or if they weren't so focused on sex or if they were better written! I think that's the biggest problem with them: they're just not good. O.K, rant over.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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And now to end on a mutually lighter note: thank you for making the template and putting it on my user page. The Hypnobutt will live on forever! ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOBUTT! I can't tell if it's the butt or the smoothness of the gif that I like so much but it is, indeed, one of my favorite gifs next to Bollywood movie gifs. You should look that up. They're utterly hilarious in their disconnect from reality. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:14, 11 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 13:06, 21 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So, is Context or Short Bursts going to get any more work on it? --[[User:Fredhot16]] 18:20, 22 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Testing, testing. One, two, three. Can you hear me? I'm going to repeat a earlier message so sorry for the repetition. Here it is: &amp;quot;Hey, are you busy? Me and Teejay are doing a collaboration on &amp;quot;Anime School&amp;quot; in the Adult Stories section. I was wondering if you would want to join the collaboration, too. If you do, I recommend starting on the sections that has no work on them whatsoever like some of the &amp;quot;female students&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;male students&amp;quot; sections or the field trip sections that some of them have and also look on Teejay's user talk section.&amp;quot;--[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 27 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Completionist Talk V2==&lt;br /&gt;
I hope you don't mind my editing of [[The Abandoned Adult Story]]. Just trying to help in the brainstorm, since this was seemingly (ironically?) becoming Abandoned as well. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 00:51, 5 January 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Heh, I absolutely forgot Smutty Sex Romp required a certain template on each page. Thanks for the reminder.&lt;br /&gt;
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==Trueroman's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for the advice. When I write I tend to jot everything down then go back and correct my spelling. Usually this isn't a problem when I right on Word then transfer it over to wherever I am posting it online. Since this website is linked based and I'm kind of just throwing ideas as I go along, I plan on going back to correct spelling and grammar when I get a decent amount written through a couple of path choices. &lt;br /&gt;
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I am still learning the site, I tried the tutorial and while it explains it well when it comes to computer terms I find it easier to experiment. I was clicking the Ab button on the tool bar to put the brackets, but I will start adding the * beforehand. Please share any other tips if you like :) &lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah I was fiddling with how you did that. I figured it out though, thanks. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Wassersaeufer's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for notifying me on the fact that the original creator of &amp;quot;Hot and Horny&amp;quot; has not been active for so long, but I knew that already. I just wanted to give him a fair chance of answering anyway, even if I don't think anything will ever come of it. I'll just wait about a month or so (I'm in no hurry) and then I'll create the spin-off-anyway. Thanks for noticing and answering though. -- [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 13:45, 23rd April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Finally I made time and took a look at Dirty Me, the story I mean. And damn, your writing is great, I really enjoy reading it. I'm normally into more perverse stuff, at least in stories, but I enjoy your style too much. Only thing which bothers me is, that your posts are so damn long. Not that it is a bad thing, it makes a great story, but I would just enjoy a few more options to choose how to proceed. Anyway, other than that, great writing, looking forward to more. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 15:55 19th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Wow, thanks for the compliment on me complimenting someone else, even though you weren't the one I complimented... well, now this sentence sounds really wrong *lol*. Anyway, thanks for noticing and keep up the good work. Though I have not yet read [[Dirty Me]], I will soon change that. - [[User:Wassersaeufer|Wassersaeufer]] 14:27 18th March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==MFCmaster123's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Making a link log page or a story notes page for your story is acceptable. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:48, 21 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==ArthurKung's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
I think your story &amp;quot;Dirty Me&amp;quot; is very interesting as of yet. I don't think I've ever read a CYOA involving elements of tragedy written from a realistic (&amp;quot;Not the fun fantasy stuff&amp;quot; as you wrote yourself) point of view, but yours looks very promising. I hope to see more of it, and wish you the best of luck with your writing!     --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 21:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Not all of it will be tragedy. I write erotica, as well as other things, and have some of my short works for sale. It will have alot of sex and sexuality in it. Sadly, many elements come from my own life, and I was not...the most well adjusted or confident person growing up. It will just be more realistic than much of the stuff on here. You try to walk around town naked in stories on here, you just get to have lots of sex. You try to walk around town naked in real life, you will end up in a jail cell, and probably with a record for the rest of your life. I want to keep it plausible, believable. I will sketch out background stories, these will not really branch, just &amp;quot;Dream about x, remember y&amp;quot; type of thing, that will actually have elements from my real life, either in part, or whole. I will probably include me being raped, not once, but twice, but not sure if I want the character to go through it, or remember it. I will probably have how I was molested, and how that lead to the character/me that you see here. I have been beaten, and will probably include issues around that also. At the heart, my story will be a growing up story with many of my specialty writing, erotica. I already have included how I/the character, ended up on probation, and my/the characters, first time having sex. There will be more of that. Some pleasant, some horrifying. I just hope people can connect to my stories, written here, my blog, for sale on Amazon, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 25 February 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're doing fine with the organizing, and you can move +Infinity to the I's if you want. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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To be honest, I haven't yet looked into your story. So I have no basis for an opinion. I will, however, look into it soon. I note that [[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] likes it, and he's usually a pretty good judge. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I haven't read any of the story yet, but read your informational page. First off, I'm very sorry about the bad things that have actually happened to you, and I hope your life turns out better in the future. Second, I'm happy you've had some fun and good experiences as well, and I hope you have more of them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OK, I've read what you have so far (I read very fast.) I'm quite impressed. You're an excellent writer. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads-up. Like I said, I'm just sorry that all those negative things happened to you. I know you don't want sympathy, but I will say that I hope from now on your life is filled with goodness, light, and a loving partner who cares about you. And that you have lots of loving, tender, consensual, enjoyable sexual experiences.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have seen some of the elements from your blog appear. I haven't done much additional commenting on it, but what is there to say that I haven't said already? I wish I could erase some of the really horrible stuff that happened to you, and I hope your husband is always warm and loving and kind and ensures you enjoy sweet, tender sex. (Women/girls being abused always has been a trigger of powerful emotions in me: anger at the abuser, and deep sorrow and an urge to comfort the woman who has been abused.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Nothing you haven't already heard. You're a very skilled writer and I'm enjoying your developing story. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Been there... just try to relax. Maybe read a different story for a few minutes to take your conscious mind off it, then when you feel inspired, return to the story... -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No, I actually was offline for a couple of days. It wasn't your imagination. I'll poke around your story and check out the new links. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I like Prank War. It's a cute little story and reminds me of being back in middle school. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the fact you take your time and post well-written stories. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You'd get warnings and stuff first if anyone was thinking of banning you... which they're not. Don't sweat it. You're a good writer and great about following the rules. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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This website's been known to have the occasional issue. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just spotted a comment you made. Congratulations on your baby boy. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I have two young 'uns myself, they're now 10 and 5 years old. It's amazing how quickly they steal your heart. The instant they're born and the doc puts them in your arms and they smile, it's over... you're wrapped around their finger. Best of luck to you and your husband and I hope your son grows up to be happy and successful. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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What exactly do you want me to say? You didn't ask a question. You made an observation. It's probably true. But it didn't seem like you were expecting a response. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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No problem. :) I'm always ready to listen and offer emotional support. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Still thinking about your new story. It's different from what I usually write. I'll try to come up with something soon. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm the same way. I don't come up with original ideas, but I expand on ones others have. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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That was my character being &amp;quot;mild&amp;quot;, kind of dipping a toe into the exhibitionist waters, being certain that at least on the first time barring something crazy you won't get arrested or raped or killed. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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And once you had me tied to the bed, what would you do? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You ''do'' know me well. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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The new, fully grown female character I just introduced has B-cup breasts. See, ''some'' of us actually do listen when you talk. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I snuck another option into [[The Exhibitionist]] yesterday. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your latest rant is making me want to reach through the screen, find the jackass who destroyed the female narrator and made her into nothing but a cum receptacle, and cast Avada Kedavra on them. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Not the ones I write. Those feature strong, dominant women who have sex where, when and how ''they'' want. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Reading your real-life experiences made me (a) want to take a shower to wash off the horrible feeling of my skin crawling (even though ''I'' already knew most of it... it doesn't make it any easier to process), and (b) wrap my arms around you and comfort you. &lt;br /&gt;
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Hopefully, the bad stuff in your past does not resurface, and you have a long, happy marriage and a successful life. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that sex shouldn't be hidden, and that the human body is a wonderful thing. &lt;br /&gt;
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I have no problem with you putting up your real-life experiences. If you're OK with sharing, that's awesome. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Mini-rant: it does sometimes seem that Platypus and I are the only sane men on this website. (Thanks for letting me vent.) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Come on over any time you need to be groped. I'll grope you anywhere you'd like. :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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If I had you in the stocks, I can think of quite a few things I'd want to do to y...um, ''for'' you. ;) Let's just say I can do other things with my tongue than produce sounds. And that would just be the start of things.  -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, in that case... there would definitely be lovemaking involved. And when I was done, I'd make you finish me with your mouth. (I'm sure there'd be other things, too...) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I get into similar moods myself on occasion. &lt;br /&gt;
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I'm always gentle. I'd gladly put you in stocks and use your pussy and mouth. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Braless, of course. How are you supposed to show off your cleavage properly if you're wearing a bra? :) -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==hidden text==&lt;br /&gt;
Don't mind me, just noticed by the changelog that it looked like you were looking for a way to essentially hide text that is only viewable through the edit window, correct? --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 09:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not sure what you want your hidden text template to do, but I can see where it's going wrong.  You're referencing hidden text within the code for the hidden text template, which is what's generating the loop error.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt; &amp;lt;font color=white&amp;gt; invisible &amp;lt;/font color=white&amp;gt; &amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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You can see the text by painting over it with your cursosr.&lt;br /&gt;
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Got it.  You're trying to build a collapsible, nested table.  I'm not sure how to build such a thing here.  The wiki markup language available is somewhat limited.  I'll play around some and see if I can't come up with something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:31, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, I see what you're going for. Like Platypus guessed, it sounds like a nested table with collapsible elements. Almost kinda &amp;quot;flowchart-y&amp;quot; in nature. I found the syntax for a nested table at an external wiki (Aberwiki, at their MediaWiki User's Guide: Using Tables page), but as far as collapsibility goes, there's a javascript extension/gadget that exists (Manual:Collapsible elements on the actual main Mediawiki site), but isn't implemented in CYOA's Common.js section. Like Platypus said, the markup around here is really barebones around here. I ''think'' it can be done, but it might require some playing with before it works. Sorry for the vagueness as to where the two syntax pieces I found are, it's impossible to post two external links in the same post without doing one, waiting 20 minutes, then doing the other. Tedious, but it does prevent spambots from flooding us as badly as they did before... --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 14:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Javascript matters should probably be brought up with Platypus, since he'd be the only one able to add your code into CYOA's Common.js page. o: --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 16:53, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, Javascript matters would have to go to RobKohr.  He doesn't have the daily presence here that I have, but he's the site administrator/owner.  I'm the sysop, which is a rank I own at RobKohr's discretion. He makes the decisions about site functionality and features.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Blazetempest==&lt;br /&gt;
It was nice of you to try cleaning up Blazetempest's poor writing, but given the overwhelming number of poor postings that show up in my stories, I feel I have to be firm with these writers.  If they can't read the warning that specifies that poor writing will be deleted, then they really shouldn't be posting. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 19:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==warnings==&lt;br /&gt;
If you spot someone leaving off the categories before I do, by all means, feel free to use the warning templates to remind them.  It is a relief to not have to do everything that needs doing around here. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:20, 12 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  'Funny' vandals usually only post once then disappear, but I'll give him a warning and if he makes another 'joke' edit, I'll block him. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:36, 13 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Nah, it's okay ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I respect your concern for the site, and i guess i was being slightly bitchy about it. People like you are the ones people respect in real life.&lt;br /&gt;
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Just here to say, that I read a bit of your story and I like it. Also, if this isn't too much to ask, I thought maybe you could help me with my writing skills, since I have close to zero experience about writing about sex and stuff. But if you don't want to, I understand. I'll try and read as much as I can on the rest of your story next time, and try to give you a full review. &lt;br /&gt;
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==Number of views==&lt;br /&gt;
It's true that the site used to automatically display the number of views on every page you pulled up.  It's just one of those things that stopped functioning.  It would be nice to have that back, since every user is always curious if their work is being read.  Site-functionality issues have to go to RobKohr, not me.  He's the only one who could restore that automatic function.&lt;br /&gt;
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I'll experiment with variations on &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{NUMBEROFVIEWS}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; and see if I can't come up something. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:35, 18 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I've been kicking around the idea of adding to the warn1 template to include those links, so I think we'll keep it with your amendment. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:26, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm sure there are ways that the look of the site could be improved.  The site ''is'' improved from some of the older formats that it had.  I promise to be openminded about any suggestions you might have.  Anything that would involve changing the underlying wiki code or wiki functionality would have to go through RobKohr, of course. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Platypus' other talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Are you doing fine?  No, you're doing better than that.  It's okay for some of your pages to be works in progress.  You've contributed a lot, not just to your own story (which is very well written, btw), but to the site as whole by assisting with some of the overdue cleanup.  Don't worry so much and keep on keeping on as you've been doing. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:48, 3 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd noticed that Gunior has taken over Smutty Sex Romp 2, and despite his blurb about using proper grammar and spelling, his writing leaves much to be desired.  You know something?  I'm going to let him run with it.  There's something about SSR that attracts an awful lot of truly awful writers.  Maybe it's the fact that I only allow the well-written pages to remain undeleted.  But maybe if I allow a poorly written knockoff to remain as is, unpoliced by me, the poor writers will flock there and leave the original SSR to be written by those of us who have an actual concept of grammar.  As long as SSR2's page are categorized, let them use poor grammar, worse spelling, and dead-end pages with missing options. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I really do appreciate all you've done to help clean up the site.  The backlog builds up so quickly around here!  It seems like only yesterday when we had all the stories on the site on the Main Page... and it was all good because we only had five stories! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 17:30, 24 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You're too new to know this, but this site was originally Choose Your Own Adventure, not Create Your Own Adventure.  The name had to be changed for legal purposes.  The thing is, when the site moved to the new name, the files were also moved to the new name.  The links in the pages ''weren't''.  It wouldn't have hurt the story any to cut the file link out, but all that needed doing was updating the word 'choose' in the link to 'create' and the link was fixed.  &lt;br /&gt;
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Look at those dates in the history.  I last wrote in that story back in 2007! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just so you know...  If someone's posted an uncategorized page, you can click on 'what links here' over to the left and find out what the previous page in story is.  Hopefully, it will be a page with a category on it.  It usually will be, unless the user is a newbie who's just posted page after page without reading the site rules first. &lt;br /&gt;
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And sometimes you'll see that several pages, from different stories, link to the new page.  That can get messy to sort out.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 14:22, 28 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I have very low hopes for poor [[Family guy]].  Ugh! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations on getting through the Adult section.  That was quite a task you took on.  At least the other sections aren't nearly as overwhelmed with clutter as the Adult section. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:42, 8 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't mind doing a bit (or a lot) of deleting.  The site really does need to have these unstarted stories swept out every few years. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:49, 12 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The Hitchhiker's template works because it's the same image on every page.  If the image was a variable, then the page addressing the template would have to have the image link on it, invoking the edit limitations that you're trying to avoid.  Great pic though.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:52, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Single-use templates would allow you to edit the page where you're displaying the image without having to fight the edit limitations.  I wouldn't consider that spammy, since you have valid, story-oriented reasons for doing it.  I wouldn't worry about displaying anything too adult, either.  There's ''nothing'' that you can't find on display on the net these days, and if someone ignores the Adult warning and goes blind because of a pic you displayed, they have only themselves to blame.&lt;br /&gt;
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I've occasionally caught someone trying to edit pages describing sex with preteens to add years to the underage characters' ages, but these self-declared censors don't stick around long. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:06, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I do wish there was some way to remove restictions from established users.  Unfortunately, before the site had these restrictions, we were being bombarded with spam pages full of dangerous links and real pages were being vandalized to add spam links.  And as irritating as it is to keep reloading because of the 'load limit reached' thing, before the site was restricted, the bot traffic was so heavy that pages took as many as five minutes to load.  Yes, every page would load that slowly, because there were simply so many bots crawling the site.  It was an awful time. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I was thinking of retaining the one and only page that BigTR categorized correctly (as opposed to the pages where he put the word Category in bold type instead of putting it inside the double brackets), but it's probably not worth it.  Even if he did manage to get the category right on other pages, he was very transparently trying to rip off Smutty Sex Romp, and doing it poorly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I agree that that is a very nice pic.  And unfortunately, you're right to avoid posting pics of yourself on the web. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:57, 18 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to know I was missed.  I've just been getting over a really nasty cold.  Nasty enough that I've hardy been out of bed for days.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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On the one hand, I like looking at pictures as much as the next guy.  On the other hand, as a writer, I see no reason why words alone can't carry a story.  Describing clothing in detail can be difficult though and can really bog down a story, so if you feel those details are important, a picture might simply be the best shortcut.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, not exactly a definitive answer. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Glad to be back.  I was laid up in the hospital with pneumonia for over a week.  Not fun.  But I'm much better now. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 13 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Congratulations!  Glad to hear that you're still around.  And having a baby boy...  That's ''really'' creating your own adventure!  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:23, 5 June 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  The site's attracting way too many bad posters lately. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Welcome back! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 10:15, 9 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There has been some change to the site rules since you were last here.  Underage sex is no longer permissible.  You can read about the whole thing over here: https:  //encyclopediadramatica.se/Create_Your_Own_Story&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks to the new rules prohibiting underage sex, any existing page with the P-word in the title is blocked.  It cannot be displayed.  It cannot be deleted.  Any index page that would include a page with a forbidden title is blocked.  I've tried asking RobKohr to at least give sysops access to forbidden pages so I can edit or delete them.  I've gotten no response. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:19, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I'd considered the destructive potential too, as well as the damage it's already done.  I've altered many underage characters in Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage to barely legal status, but it's difficult when many index pages are perma-blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:29, 10 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up.  Scarlett moved the All Adult Stories page to the first page for her story, then wrote over the moved page.  The only way to restore it was to roll back the page, then move it back where it belonged.  --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:42, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the head up.  Thanks for maintaining some order while I've been hospitalized.--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:25, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I developed a hole in my colon.  It's just one of these things that can happen to someone.  But fixing the issue required major surgery and I've still got a lot of healing ahead of me. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:11, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Maybe you did overwhelm him.  I don't know.  Maybe he was looking to make me the incarnation of his demons and I wasn't cooperating.  The poor guy clearly was not well, and as I advised him, there's really only so much you or I could do for him.  I only hope he's getting the help he needs. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:55, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, ''that'' one.  No, I don't think you were too intimidating.  Smutty Sex Romp might not be the place for that one's writing either... --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:44, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Your 'buttons' for the Main Page look fine to me.  Maybe they'll be more eye catching this way. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:43, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up!--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:36, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Actually, what Hellspawn's doing with Pokesex is taking a poorly planned story written by multiple poor writers and he's trying to hammer it into a decent shape.  The deleting is mostly because of pages that never had any point in existing at all. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:28, 15 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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If the idea for an Exhibitionist scenario strikes me, I'll be sure to let you know.  But inspiration comes when it comes, not before then.  I'm sure an idea will occur to me sooner or later.  (Find an abandoned construction site and re-create Miley Cyrus' Wrecking Ball video?  No...  At an actual construction site, not a soundstage, that would just mean getting construction grit in all the wrong places...) --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:39, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't worry; I take the grammar in SSR seriously, but the plot, such as it is, is utterly unrealistic and is very much worthy of mockery.  In SSR, men and women are always ready for sex, and rape at worst provokes annoyance and never induces trauma.  It's pure fantasy, which may be part of why it's so popular. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:11, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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No need to revert the family friendly section.  I think your template looks just fine. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:33, 4 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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The rants are somewhat amusing.  I think it’s good that you’re writing them.  There should be something around here that’s a bit more reality based, to serve as a counterpoint to the frequently laughable strictly fantasy depictions of sex.  I should point out that there really are some guys who are over-endowed, and they usually have to wear a device that looks like a rubber doughnut over their cocks to prevent them from penetrating their partners to the point of hurting them.  It’s rather like how, when you need to insert a screw that’s too long for the hole you’re inserting it into, you need a rubber washer.&lt;br /&gt;
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SSR does acknowledge that there are limits (at least it does on the pages I’ve written).  There’s a magical condom section with [[Ask for the elephant size]] where the female on the receiving end wants nothing to do with the thing.  And an unfortunate set of choices where one painful writer had to write the giant dick exploding the woman’s lower body.  Read it and cringe.&lt;br /&gt;
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Your IRL (mis)adventures may be more bio than story, but you IRL experiences are the foundation for your stories, and as such, I think it is appropriate for you to post it here, for those who want to ‘peek beneath the hood’, as it were, and get a sense of where your stories are coming from. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:54, 6 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I feel your pain.  Blame GalaxyMage for leading girls to horses in the worst ways possible in every story he touches.  At least you didn't get to the part with the leeches. (Inside as well as outside). --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:10, 17 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks you for the flower.  I am suitably impressed. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 11:13, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Regarding your comments ==&lt;br /&gt;
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+Hi thank you for your recent criticisms regarding my IE story, I am using word to paste and check grammar however being English, the setting I use is English/UK not English/US these settings although they use the same language, spelling and grammar can vary wildly.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As regarding racial stereotypes, I find stories are always written to suit a specific audience, therefore people expect to read about well-endowed men having sexual relations with often naive women, whereas relationships of a more mature loving type would be best placed in the mature story category.&lt;br /&gt;
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+As for the shallow characters, it is sadly part of the limited story arc, as a simple choice in the story can discard a character arc this limits the depth of most characters, as there seems little point in go to in-depth on a character who may lost two story segments, if I was writing a novel I could round them out and make them more three dimensional people who you could grow to love and care about.&lt;br /&gt;
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+Don't mind the criticisms at all as it is the first time I've done any real writing in twenty years and I'm always looking for ways to improve my technique.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sympathy from the Devil (i.e Men). ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I find men to be a complicated bunch. Take mine for example when we're alone He is the sweetest, kindest man I've ever known, but when he's with his friends he's as crude and crass as the rest of them. Admittedly he is twenty years older than I am and from a different generation and culture, so I don't try to change, well not too much anyway, but when my oldest son makes similar remarks I come down on him like a ton of bricks.&lt;br /&gt;
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As for gaining sympathy or empathy from the male populace, it may work on some but again it’s about the target audience, all my stories will only have characters engaging in sex if they are above the age of consent (16 UK), and rape and death will be too a minimum and only as a result of bad choices or very bad luck, I won't avoid the subject because unfortunately it does happen.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the grammar edits! - Bojangler&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm not really sure how to post messages to others and I hope I'm doing it right. So thanks a lot for telling me how to get a line gap. I was searching for it myself. - countingStars&lt;br /&gt;
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== Defnota's Messages ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate you letting me know how to delete pages, but also for letting me know this wiki is still alive. I was writing for myself, as I have no idea how to tell how much traffic a wiki gets, but it's nice to know there are other people here.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's really nice of you, it's not too fun thinking you're in an empty community. Kind of isolating, even if just while you're on here.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; My message to Platypus was based on the assumption that he or she hosts the wiki, thus I could send them code to implement if they needed it.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; The message was also based on the assumption MediaWiki allows one to write their own code. As for cleaning the wiki, I would need to know what I'm cleaning, but of that I have no idea.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you for your knowledge of who hosts the wiki, turns out editthis.info has a features request.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I put in a request for admin's to be able to change the code, which might not do too much depending on how tech savvy the admins are, but it would at least give the option.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Also, how would I go about helping the clean-up and organization of the site?&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, crap, sorry about that, there was no intention to ignore. For some reason the message indicator didn't show up for any of those messages.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Nonetheless, should probably get some sleep, so I won't be on for a bit.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, I thought I'd give the main page a go, but as you probably already know: HTML is lots of trial and error.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;If you want practice doing HTML just make a practice page and copy one of the site's pages, then goof around with it.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; By the by, what do you think I should use for colours? The page is look rather bland at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 25th of March, 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Do think it would be okay if on the page [[How to create a page]], I changed the story format from &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;|[[ Your story]]|| 0 || public or private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; to &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;quot;[[Your Story]] || {{PAGESINCAT:Your Story}} Pages || Public or Private&amp;quot;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;? It's a little harder to write, but it is way more organized and means you don't have to update your page count.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:12, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Fair enough, but speaking of magic words, do you think that if one were to run the &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;__TOC__&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; magic word through&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; one of the alternate parsers (mediawiki.org/wiki/Alternative_parsers) into HTML, and then dissect it, that they could use it as a collapsible element?&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:30, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Oh, as an alternative, if one could link to an external stylesheet, or get the HTML &amp;lt;style&amp;gt; tags working to make an internal stylesheet,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; people could start using css3 instead of javascript to make collapsible elements. That would also mean we could use vector images and we could animate page elements.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 06:09, 26 March 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thanks, took a-lot of effort, but was definitely worth it.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Re-writing it, didn't plan it out at all, and there wasn't much for writing on any of the pages.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; The problem is that either your image or your template has a massive whitespace margin. This margin can't be changed with HTML.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;li&amp;gt;If the margin is in the template, there isn't much I can do for you.&amp;lt;/li&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 05:47, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Page Layout Two-&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; To do it without knowing very much HTML you could use positioning (w3schools.com/cssref/pr_class_position.asp),&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;but positioning tends to create a billion little problems. I emailed you a modified version of your image without the margins,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;I heavily recommend using that instead, and I could probably help you get the page set up then.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 23:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;h4&amp;gt;- Angst of Mass Destruction -&amp;lt;/h4&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; I'm somewhat alright, between writer's block frustrations and being angsty and dramatic I tend to do silly things sometimes.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; Such things as just deleting everything, everywhere, that's why I never end up writing much.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 22:52, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Minnie May Hopkin's talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for dealing with the sub category. I didn't find out yet how to do it myself. - MMH&lt;br /&gt;
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==Thank You For Your Message==&lt;br /&gt;
Hey! Thanks for welcoming me to this site. I've begun a fantasy adventure called Faire Isle Adventure. Hopefully I will be able to make it a good long story length despite my busy life. Good luck with your writing and have a good day! --[[User:Stargirlsnr5|Stargirlsnr5]] 11:54, 29 March 2014&lt;br /&gt;
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== WriterGhost talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for your thoughts regarding &amp;quot;Adventure at the TG Thriftshop.&amp;quot; The &amp;quot;Name&amp;quot; area has changed on paths already, with Craig becoming Kortney (Blonde Bikini Model) and Triss (Redheaded Clerk).&lt;br /&gt;
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== Completionist Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
As you probably already noticed, I'm new to the site so I haven't read much of the stories yet, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stories, too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Male perspective? Sounds pretty challenging. Let me try to come up with a brainstorm first and see where I get to. If it's passable for me to build upon, then it will be done. But if not, then I'll continue my brainstorming for that. For the meantime, thanks for the invite. --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 22:24, 14 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for organizing some of the links and making the subcategories. I've been meaning to do that but had trouble figuring out what and where to input it since the tutorial's directions were a little vague to me. Now it all makes sense and I'll try to remember doing that for the later stories as well.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 15:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, thanks for adding those categories in for me. I was originally planning on adding them later once I get around the branching of each story, but I guess doing those categories while editing helps too.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 02:22, 17 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I hope I'm doing well, then! lol. Feel free to add stuff and fix all those red-links, too! I trust your English (haha). It's never a one-person story!&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, personal or not, there is a line people simply cannot cross. That's why they added another category for those types that want to cross the line. I see how you did create that elaboration to detail on that page; to be honest I would not even have the will to think of the scenario and make a story on it. In the story's sense, I haven't read much on it, but I would assume a fantasy story would not lead to that kind of choice or outcome at all. I also hope that page would at least be re-edited for consistency...and better taste--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh, don't misunderstand. The last comment was more of a compliment than criticism. I see the elaboration there and the detail's strong and visual enough to catch someone's attention to fix it. I see the satirical aspect, I'm just shocked that you can find the courage to actually recreate the scenario in your head. If it was me, I'd just get nightmares from it lol--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 18:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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A bit coincidental, but I was suggesting a similar change to the Main Page to Platypus, too. I just didn't know we could revamp it ourselves haha.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:58, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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One more note, if possible. A quick suggestion about the stuff on the main page: Introduction first, followed by Tutorial as a separate section (to avoid people from overlooking it), then the To-Do list. Also, just an honest thought: I don't think we should add that P.S. about the adult section since it might tempt/encourage the little kids to scroll down to find them. Again, just an opinion. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:30, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah, good point. I'll just wait on his reply for that, then.  As for the welcoming thing, I guess I shall assume the mantle for now. Just for fun. Who knows, maybe someone would actually reply to me and stay for a bit haha. Hoping to create a mini-community somehow.&lt;br /&gt;
(Maybe add one of those chats on my page if I figure out how to embed it).--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:47, 21 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Right. It is too random and inconsistent. That said, those pages came from the original author / whoever last edited it (my edit was only to categorize the page; I'm still writing out the story for that branch fix). If you go to the main story's discussion page, I have those specific links under the &amp;quot;Clean-Up&amp;quot; section. I'm glad you're proofreading the story, though. Thanks for that. It's nice to see someone's reading the story. :)--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 16:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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As I previously said, I've been trying to find a way to rewrite that particular branching in the story that you've been talking about. And guess what? It's almost done! Feel free to critique and compare to the previous page done by the original author. [[TRTC/Cafe]]--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Also, I see that Abandoned Adult Story page haha. To be honest, I was going to move from family-friendly and head my way down once I finish this one completely. I even had an idea of linking all of them together in a big timeline! Mind if I try helping out? That section is a monster to do by yourself.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That sounds like a start of a big project. You might even need to recruit more people with dirty minds! I haven't read them, either, but I would suggest either separating them by scenarios, mostly. As far as gender goes, I would assume some kind of shape-shifting device for a quick change (i.e. potions, remote, machine, or trouble-making fairy right beside you). But like you said, we'll never know until we actually read what these stories are about.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 06:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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So I made a chat just to somehow make things more community-ish. I can't post outside links without angering the bots so if you want to try it out, feel free to visit my page. Well, that's it for now. Gotta tell the other users about it. Hopefully it works out ^_^ --[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 20:13, 26 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the fix. And thanks for telling me about how they read it. Anyway, just another quick reply. Hope we can get people into the chat, too... if ever needed.--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 05:35, 27 April 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Just saying a quick hi to show that I'm still alive (kinda)! Well, anyway, to another topic: how goes the Adult Abandoned Story? Feel free to reply either by usual post or that chat I setup (I would probably reply faster with this option). Just saying hi again!--[[User:Completionist|Completionist]] 04:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Realism ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Dirtyme,&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes I do realize what a cervix is capable/incapable of doing, but it is a fantasy story. I hope most people who have read my story know this, or else their SO might be in for a painful surprise! Thanks for the response. Happy writing!&lt;br /&gt;
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-Bojangles&lt;br /&gt;
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haha, Literally just noticed that and fixed the link before reading the message -JerryCraft&lt;br /&gt;
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== Sorry about that... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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First off I'm sorry for my actions. Let me just clarify... I didn't delete any of your content (I don't hate any of it, in contrast to your assumption), I simply broke off that particular page into two pages... since that particular idea I had required a choice in the middle of the actions detailed on that particular page. It was intrusion on my part and I am sorry, but since you flagged it as ''Public'' I thought you wouldn't mind. My sincerest apologies... --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1852 hrs, Tue 29 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It's fine... its fine really... I was ignorant. This was my first time trying to contribute to a story. I thought it was fine as long as I kept all the materials in there via branching. I shall find alternative methods to include the idea I had but until then I started creating new branches. :) I have learnt my lesson and won't repeat. --[[User:Renegade1412|R`1412]] 1234 hrs, Wed 30 Apr 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== --[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Been a while since i've been on this site so I used the wrong \, thx for the tips :-)&lt;br /&gt;
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== [[User:WCold|WCold]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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About trees.&lt;br /&gt;
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That's a table with border=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (you can't see all the cells) and cellspacing=&amp;quot;0&amp;quot; (lines between cells solid).&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The &amp;quot;connecting lines&amp;quot; is a cell's borders which I made visible. &lt;br /&gt;
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== Narutostory reply ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the heads up! I'll be completely revamping the entire &amp;quot;Invading the Cult&amp;quot; story over the next month or two so I plan on having a bit fall out of index for a bit but I'll fix it all at the end if I can. Checking for spelling, consistency, making it all sound better, adding stats/quests/abilities at the bottom. Anyways, thanks for the heads up, I'll have to remember to go back and fix that when I'm done.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Help - Defnota ==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Hey, you know that one time we emailed each other? Do you still have my email address? I locked myself out of my email and need to confirm that I'm spelling it correctly,&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; and you're the only person I've ever emailed.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;- [[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 21:21, 2 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; &amp;amp;nbsp; Thank you, you beautiful person! I thought someone had hijacked my email, but it turns out that my email address has a spelling error in it and I was spelling &amp;quot;definitely&amp;quot; properly these last few times.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; I am ever so grateful, thank you again for your help.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;-[[User:Defnota|Defnota]] 09:43, 4 July 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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==Elerneron talk==&lt;br /&gt;
Thanks for you encouragement on [[Primal Influence]].  It is very appreciated.  I was wondering if there is a way to change my way I do categories from the current - system to the / system without causing to much trouble, or is it going to create redundant pages no matter what I do?&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks for reminder  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me get started and for all the reminders. As you can see from all the previously missing links that I'm  still learning my way around the site. I may have inadvertently committed some infraction that I am working on avoiding in the future. Please bear with me, I think I'm starting to get the hang of things around this site.&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[User: Ubunto]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==Hey DirtyMe! Got a Quick Request==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey so I've had a ghost story [[The Ghost of the Mansion]] sitting around for a while, luckily recently chapters have been added, but with so few people writing it isn't expanding fast. I was wondering if you could help by perhaps adding a few chapters yourself if you are interested. I believe the story is relatively unique and has good potential. If you don't want to, I won't mind.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thanks dirtyme  ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Lol thank for telling me how to do this. Im a writer well try on fanfiction.net and i always wanted to make my own story on here and finally started lol but hope if i got questions i dont annoy you lol&lt;br /&gt;
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--[[user: Darky]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your feedback on my story so far. I'm aware of the last sentence. I'm also thinking of another way to put in line. Hope you will give me more feedback for the rest of the story. Maybe also for the parts that have been? *blush* ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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I understand what you mean. But I'm thankful for your grammatical changes. English is not my native language so sometimes I miss some expressions and words. Hope you will take a look sometimes and improve the grammar I'm happy ☺&lt;br /&gt;
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For your story I'd like to see you exposed in a live tv program. You have to do assignments, a failure makes you loose an article of clothing. So you are getting bare naked for millions of viewers. Do you think you can something with this. 😈 Love Darky&lt;br /&gt;
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Edit the page for you. As in the lines before, failure in assignmetns wil make you your clother, 1 item at the time, BUT..... you also have to put the article of clothing in a shredder. So naked is really naked with no possible way of return. Enjoy ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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The start of this is great. Better then I had imagined. But.... I'd Kill my master for that???? That needs a serious punishment :D ;)&lt;br /&gt;
Looking forward to the rest of your story. Maybe I will give you some more storylines if you'd like.&lt;br /&gt;
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You did a great job. Except for the killing. I thought you'd liked to be exposed. So why don't you tell me how I can punish you.&lt;br /&gt;
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I do understand your point of view. And I hope you (your character) has been really embarresed. As said before I really loved your storyline. Really good how your wrote my 'fantasy' in your words. I going to think of more story lines for you!&lt;br /&gt;
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I'am oke with you, if you add some additions. So I'am curious about your pov at the storyline. But if I do not like it, I hope you can accept that will turn things back ;)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I read your additions, thought them over and I like them. So you can rewrite whatever you think is needed.&lt;br /&gt;
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I think your a little confusing sometimes. Do revise, do not want to revise. Wants add some things, doesn't want to add. You are so confusing that I like you a lot :D (compliment for you and not a negative thought)&lt;br /&gt;
So see whatever you want to do or not, I'm ok with it.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for helping me out with the page deletion thing --[[User:Hellspawn|I'm really beginning to regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for notifying, I realise that I probably shouldn't blank so many pages but I was blanking other peoples stuff rather than my own (actually that sounds worse). What I mean to say is that I'm trying to reorganise and fix up that story but it meant removing a bunch of poorly written and poorly planned pages (Some didn't have options, some didn't makes sense etc.). I've only started doing that after I got to grips with the format and the editing options and I'm now going to start adding more to the story than I've taken away from it. But seriously thanks for the heads up. 15 April 2016--[[User:Hellspawn|I still regret my Username]]&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what, Platypus laid out what I was trying to do better than I did. Thanks for the input; I'm happy you're trying to help out novice users because that's not something everyone does on the internet. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 18:52 15 April 2016 (GMT)&lt;br /&gt;
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== RE: Untitled section ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I'd prefer discussions to be on one location rather than spread on multiple pages, but if you insist, okay then. Sorry about that, I didn't know that. --[[User:Stranger195|stranger195]] [[wikia:c:wikimarkup|&amp;lt;span title=&amp;quot;This user is a Wiki Markup Wiki user!&amp;quot; style=&amp;quot;color:blue; background-color:white; padding:2px; border-top:thin solid blue; border-left:thin solid blue; border-bottom:thin solid blue; border-right:thin solid blue; font-size:8pt;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;@WikiMarkupWiki&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] ([[User talk:Stranger195|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Stranger195|contribs]] • [[wikia:c:guestbook:User:AStranger195/Guestbook|guest]][[wikibooks:w:User:Stranger195/Guestbook|book]]) 12:59, 15 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I added a few different clothing options to each one. Is that what you meant?&lt;br /&gt;
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Your story is pretty good so far. Don't be afraid to try anything out of your comfort zone in it either. It could lead to new ideas for the story.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Short Bursts ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, I just had a look at your story (not sure what else to call it) [[Short Bursts]], it seems like an interesting concept to me. I didn't see it in the adult index though, is it public or private? [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:14, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:That basically answered it, and yeah, I noticed that the stories right now are &amp;quot;you are terrified and then you're dead&amp;quot; :') but they're still interesting to read! It just seems like a cool idea to choose what elements or whatever you want the story to have, and then read the story itself. So is the idea to have stories that have further options, after the &amp;quot;story bursts?&amp;quot; I kind of feel you on that helping you to become a better writer, I haven't actually mapped out a plot for my story yet, I just write pages as I think of interesting/funny ideas. I have a veeeeery vague idea of where a few of the threads are going, but that's all. Anyway, it's a cool idea, kind of outside the box! [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:42, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::Context seems like a neat idea too, are you basically cutting off the narrator at a certain point and choosing to respond to a certain word in the sentence? If you come up with more for it at some point I'd definitely be interested to have a look. And I actually have the opposite problem, my story is in the adult section but I'm pretty hopeless at writing anything erotic -.- depending on how my story goes I might just write out all the adult elements and move it to the mature section (for violence), but we'll see. My original idea was to keep my threads relatively clean and let other people add whatever they want, but I think I made my world a bit too complicated for other editors to jump in. [[User:Wannabe rockstar|Wannabe rockstar]] 03:52, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Broken Links ==&lt;br /&gt;
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No worries. I'm grateful you spotted it, actually. I'd forgotten it had a link since there was quite a few red links in that part of the story. That's what I get for editing in the early hours. --[[User:Neminis|Neminis]] 10:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== ... ==&lt;br /&gt;
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OK so like are you guys real people...? Or are you robots...? Cause like on all the websites I'm on has the guide as a freaking robot and so I'm always suspicious XD sorry...but anyway I have no idea how to make my own story, cause I have a great idea that doesn't involve sex.&lt;br /&gt;
~Amber Summers😐&lt;br /&gt;
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thanks    for the help..    I am   pretty ccmputer illiterate.  :(&lt;br /&gt;
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Ah! gotcha.  thanks again.&lt;br /&gt;
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In response to what you said, I guess it because guys, honestly, just tend to like big boobs. Personally, there's plenty of girls I like in real life with small breasts, but in terms of looking to get horny, personality usually doesn't cut it for most. For me, body usually doesn't matter, especially on this site, where you can't see anything, as long as you can tell the story good enough to make me feel it. If you purely rely on the sex of it, then yeah, body proportions need to be larger, but in all honesty, the story leading up to and after sex is what really gets me turned on. I actually have trouble writing just sex scenes. So, for what you said, it's because people on here want all girls to be &amp;quot;large&amp;quot; in all ways so its easier to avoid actually seducing story and skip to sex. Its easier to make all girls unrealistically big and say all others aren't there yet so it leave the reader the sense that they could still be large one day and be used at some point.&lt;br /&gt;
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== Kyre's Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Haha, well, I just started, but I have to be a girl, so I can't really be a fair judge. I'll gladly look, though&lt;br /&gt;
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Yeah, that might work. I read some of the girls and it sounded good up to what I read.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, would you be interested in collaborating on my newest story, Fallout Shorts? If you've never played a Fallout game, you may not get it, but it pretty much sex in different situations, so I could fill you in. The best part is I made it specifically for one shots, like your bursts. You simply choose a base character, which you could make one, and write one story about them, then you never have to worry about that storyline again. I need someone mainly to help with the girl sex scenes. I can do the buildup and story, thats what I like, but I need a girls perspective on having sex in various, sometimes unusual ways. If not, no problem&lt;br /&gt;
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*smiling* You definetly seem like the girl for the job. I'd be happy to write some girl stories for build up, i have plenty of those ideas, but the sex areas are sometimes hard. sometimes i can do it, but not always. so you in?&lt;br /&gt;
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Any time you have will work. Nice to have a partner for once&lt;br /&gt;
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Please, go crazy. And like I said, I know a lot of girls into this stuff who've kinda explained their ways, so I can kinda write girl persepctive. And by all means, include whatever fetish you choose&lt;br /&gt;
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This is good. I'd say submit it, though you may have to make another Fallout 4 MILF-innocent character. I don't know the others would fit. Or it could be a random person, which works too.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thats cool. Although, like I said, this is more of unjoined stories with no joining parts, just bursts so i don't have to try an figure out memory. And clothing thing is great and on my mind. As for the animal thing, I think only girls because of there scent from their member.&lt;br /&gt;
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Perhaps 200 years of sexual tension? I think maybe a time skip might be an okay idea too, gives you the chance to get over husband, build whatever settlement, amke connections and such, better starting point.&lt;br /&gt;
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I like the Pipboy. It's a little big, but it looks great. And I think I'm going to restart Fallout 4, with a different strategy. I just wasn't happy with how this one worked. And sorry it's taken so long. Been busy.&lt;br /&gt;
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== In The Worst Ways ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hope you like the option I added :v. [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]]&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. hope I didn't completely overstep in just adding it directly to the page, cause when I did that I thought that's what I was supposed to do, but now I'm not so sure.&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if it doesn't work out. I saw it on a blog of different sexual dares/challenges and it was the first thing that came to mind when you asked. Maybe I can get more ideas from there if I can ever find the page again :v.&lt;br /&gt;
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I love it! Thank you for writing it :v Keep up the good work! [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:33 am est 5/5/16&lt;br /&gt;
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What I've read of your rants story is pretty great :v. I tend to agree that those situations are annoying, though I've kinda just gotten used to them, you know? [[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 4:13 am est 5/8/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I read the summaries :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 06:06, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Personally I always liked the idea of being stuck (intentionally or unintentionally, willingly or unwillingly) halfway through a wall pretty enjoyable. The person on the other side can only see me from the waist down and I can't see them at all. They can use me however they want (from the waist down) and walk away and I'm still stuck there for the next anonymous user. Then if I get out later, literally anyone I pass by on the street could have been one of them. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 07:39, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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That's pretty amazing. I envy you for being able to do something like that. I would love to do something like that if I could :v. I got into talking about the through the wall thing because I saw you were talking about being locked in stocks. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 08:15, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I may take you up on that offer of information on those countries. But I do also want to leave it open for others to write in and I've already got a lot on my mind for it. I would really like to see other people's ideas for shenanigans in a world that suddenly has no police and no laws. Come to think of it, no police means nobody to arrest you for public nudity or sex, right :v? [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 20:28, 19 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually hadn't been thinking about it, but I may implement through-the-wall or some other public use options in [[Leaving]] from different perspectives, and possibly in [[Global Anarchy]] in some way now that you mention it. I wasn't sure how to implement it but I've got some ideas now, thank you :v. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:28, 20 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Oh my god thank you, I'm definitely going to look into that and see what I can do, try to learn those things. I didn't know a lot of those things were even possible on here. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 04:19, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Well, easy or not, I'm the kind of person that, as long as it's for something stupid and irrelevant I will keep poking at it until it's perfect. Or at the very least, much, much longer than I have any reason to keep trying. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:10, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I completely forgot about hover text. It's been so long since I've had a mouse to hover with lol. I feel like I'm missing out now, especially considering things like xkcd and Paradox Space use hover text a lot. I'm not sure I'd use notes that often though because I don't want people getting into the habit of looking at the edit pages of every page. Would spoil a few things on a few of the pages I've already set up lol. [[User:Intheworstways|In The Worst Ways]] 05:47, 24 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Thank You!! ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thnx for the comment.I'm really thankful,i haven't relly got the hang of it yet XD.My computer hasn't been working with me,(Thanks to my little sister -_-) but I'll manage, hopefully!Thanks again ^～^!&lt;br /&gt;
[[User:BlOoD_tHiRsTy]]&lt;br /&gt;
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== Jordon21 Talk ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for adding that category. [[User:Jordon21 |Jordon21]]&lt;br /&gt;
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==SkylaTruffles' Talk==&lt;br /&gt;
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For &amp;quot;negative criticism&amp;quot;, you delivered that message quite politely. :P But yeah, thanks for the info. I guess I'm not used to how Talk Pages operate - I hold more of a presence on chatrooms and back-and-forth messaging threads, you see. --[[User:SkylaTruffles|Skyla]] 19:18, 23 May 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Michaeltamayo96</name></author>	</entry>

	<entry>
		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Status_indicators</id>
		<title>Status indicators</title>
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				<updated>2016-05-23T10:40:58Z</updated>
		
		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;The genie nods. &amp;quot;A page with a status indicator looks very similar to any other page, but with an added line of code.&amp;quot;  He summons an image:&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;pre&amp;gt;&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Page text here&lt;br /&gt;
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Do you:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=''Equipment''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category: name of story you're working on]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/pre&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;On a page, the syntax will look like this:&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Page text here&lt;br /&gt;
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Do you:&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Adventure/Option 1]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Adventure/Option 2]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Adventure/Option 3]]&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{Status|Equipment=''Pink Dildo''|Health=#|MP=#|Level=#}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
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Category: [[name of story you're working on]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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The genie continues, &amp;quot;This is what a status indicator looks like without the magic.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;pre&amp;gt;&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;table width=&amp;quot;100%&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#LLCLL&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;100%&amp;quot; colspan=&amp;quot;3&amp;quot;&amp;gt; &amp;lt;b&amp;gt;Status&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#OOFOO&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;8%&amp;quot;&amp;gt; Health&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#DDFDD&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;8%&amp;quot;&amp;gt; #&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#GGFGG&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;84%&amp;quot; rowspan=&amp;quot;3&amp;quot;&amp;gt; Equipment:&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;i&amp;gt;Equipment&amp;lt;/i&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/p&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#OOFOO&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; MP&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#DDFDD&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; {{{MP}}}&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;tr&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#OOFOO&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; Level&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#DDFDD&amp;quot; valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; #&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/tr&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/table&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;/pre&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Although this may look complicated I can show you how to manipulate the parts that really matter.&amp;quot; The rest leave the same unless you are REALLY good at coding.&lt;br /&gt;
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Use the format as above to create a new template using double braces &amp;quot;{&amp;quot; &amp;lt;pre&amp;gt;&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;{{Sample Template}}&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/pre&amp;gt; will look like {{Sample Template}}. Rename it and create the template page.&lt;br /&gt;
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Use the numbers as references in these lines of code:&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#LLCLL&amp;quot;[1]valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;100%&amp;quot; colspan=&amp;quot;3&amp;quot;&amp;gt; &amp;lt;b&amp;gt;Status&amp;lt;/b&amp;gt;[2]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#OOFOO&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;8%&amp;quot;&amp;gt; Health[3]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#DDFDD&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;8%&amp;quot;&amp;gt; # [4]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#GGFGG&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot; width=&amp;quot;84%&amp;quot; rowspan=&amp;quot;3&amp;quot;&amp;gt; Equipment:[5]&amp;lt;p&amp;gt;&amp;lt;i&amp;gt;Equipment&amp;lt;/i&amp;gt;[6]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#OOFOO&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; MP[7]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#DDFDD&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt;# [8]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#OOFOO&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; Level[9]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/td&amp;gt;&amp;lt;td bgcolor=&amp;quot;#DDFDD&amp;quot;[1] valign=&amp;quot;top&amp;quot;&amp;gt; #[10]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
Notes&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[1] This is a color. Use the Hex triples, or values beginning with a &amp;quot;#&amp;quot; from [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_colors]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[2] This will be the title of your status bar.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[3] This will be the name of the first row.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[4] This will be the value of the first row.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[5] This will be the name of the remainding space&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[7] This will be the value of the remainding space.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[8] This will be the value of the second row.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[9] This will be the name of the third row.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[10] This will be the value of the third row.&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;Ready for your next leasson?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;That's a lot to take in, but I think I get it so far,&amp;quot; you say.&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[Status indicators]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Advanced linking]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Create a category page]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Multiple Categories]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Advanced formatting techniques]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category:  Tutorial]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Michaeltamayo96</name></author>	</entry>

	<entry>
		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Sandbox</id>
		<title>Sandbox</title>
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				<updated>2016-05-13T13:08:25Z</updated>
		
		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;If you wish to play in sand, please do so on this page.  After you are done, please revert this page so others may use it.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you do not revert this page, it will be reverted for you. If you intend to use this page to start a story, please read the instructions in the [[Tutorial]] and follow the directions to start a story properly.  This page is for experimentation only and nothing posted on this page will remain here permanently.&lt;br /&gt;
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P L E A S E  T U R N  T H E  L I G H T S  O F F&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Category:System Pages]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Michaeltamayo96</name></author>	</entry>

	<entry>
		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Platypus</id>
		<title>User talk:Platypus</title>
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				<updated>2016-04-29T12:59:23Z</updated>
		
		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;b&amp;gt; &amp;gt;Add new comments below by clicking on the 'edit' button above.  Do not add new comments to the archives. &amp;lt;/b&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- [[User:Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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So I hope you don't mind me making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] in my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Njrsgg]]. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained &amp;quot;under age vagina&amp;quot;, but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and &lt;br /&gt;
4th grade&amp;quot; and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;Sniff&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; You haven't given me any options for [[The Exhibitionist]]. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What the hell is &amp;quot;shotgun-wielding&amp;quot; supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: &amp;quot;Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup.&amp;quot; Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Sup]]. Teejay reversed the damage. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Added a [[Rules]] page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, it's [[User:Vgybhu]]. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).&lt;br /&gt;
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I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it. &lt;br /&gt;
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I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not. &lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]]. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user [[AllyG]] was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on [[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]?? Thanks, [[Whining Winnie]] Happy Easter Everyone!&lt;br /&gt;
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The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so &amp;quot;immature&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
. I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone&lt;br /&gt;
like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration &lt;br /&gt;
testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of&lt;br /&gt;
committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your&lt;br /&gt;
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I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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o.O What happened? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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When you come back, you might want to check [[Special:Contributions/Darth_nox]]. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of &amp;quot;too many conflicting changes&amp;quot;...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. [[User:LilBitOfSpace|LilBitOfSpace]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? [[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't forget that [[CLM]] is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you move [[CLM]] to the [[Adult Stories]] section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? [[Whining Winnie]] 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)&lt;br /&gt;
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Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]] 31/01/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore?  [[User:Fort|Fort]] 05/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --[[User:Fort|Fort]] 5 February 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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I apologize for my &amp;quot;obsession with colons&amp;quot; when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... [[User:Shirasade|Shirasade]] 20/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 23/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 24/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a [[Talk:Continue fucking Kate|specific story talk page]]) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the &amp;quot;Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the &amp;quot;I'm Your Brother&amp;quot; choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - [[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm going to finish the above section in &amp;quot;Idea Pitches&amp;quot; in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is &amp;quot;Lords&amp;quot;. It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found &amp;quot;Aristocrats&amp;quot; to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that &amp;quot;feeling up&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time.  --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So to answer your question about[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a &amp;quot;dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, &amp;quot;dating sim&amp;quot; would be the closest one thought &amp;quot;slice of life&amp;quot; is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 8 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot; choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 10 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --[[QueenPrisme]] 7:43pm April 13, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 1:44am April 16, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 19 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Would you happen to be able to tell me if [[Leaving]] is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.&lt;br /&gt;
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Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- [[User:Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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So I hope you don't mind me making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] in my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Njrsgg]]. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained &amp;quot;under age vagina&amp;quot;, but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and &lt;br /&gt;
4th grade&amp;quot; and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;Sniff&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; You haven't given me any options for [[The Exhibitionist]]. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What the hell is &amp;quot;shotgun-wielding&amp;quot; supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: &amp;quot;Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup.&amp;quot; Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Sup]]. Teejay reversed the damage. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Added a [[Rules]] page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, it's [[User:Vgybhu]]. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).&lt;br /&gt;
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I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry, think I overwhelmed the poor guy :o I was trying to help, not intimidate xD (hint check histories...) &lt;br /&gt;
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Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it. &lt;br /&gt;
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.&lt;br /&gt;
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I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not. &lt;br /&gt;
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]]. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user [[AllyG]] was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on [[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]?? Thanks, [[Whining Winnie]] Happy Easter Everyone!&lt;br /&gt;
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The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so &amp;quot;immature&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
. I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone&lt;br /&gt;
like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration &lt;br /&gt;
testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of&lt;br /&gt;
committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your&lt;br /&gt;
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I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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o.O What happened? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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When you come back, you might want to check [[Special:Contributions/Darth_nox]]. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of &amp;quot;too many conflicting changes&amp;quot;...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. [[User:LilBitOfSpace|LilBitOfSpace]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? [[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't forget that [[CLM]] is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you move [[CLM]] to the [[Adult Stories]] section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? [[Whining Winnie]] 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)&lt;br /&gt;
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Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]] 31/01/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore?  [[User:Fort|Fort]] 05/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --[[User:Fort|Fort]] 5 February 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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I apologize for my &amp;quot;obsession with colons&amp;quot; when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... [[User:Shirasade|Shirasade]] 20/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 23/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 24/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a [[Talk:Continue fucking Kate|specific story talk page]]) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the &amp;quot;Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the &amp;quot;I'm Your Brother&amp;quot; choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - [[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm going to finish the above section in &amp;quot;Idea Pitches&amp;quot; in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is &amp;quot;Lords&amp;quot;. It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found &amp;quot;Aristocrats&amp;quot; to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that &amp;quot;feeling up&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time.  --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So to answer your question about[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a &amp;quot;dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, &amp;quot;dating sim&amp;quot; would be the closest one thought &amp;quot;slice of life&amp;quot; is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 8 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot; choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 10 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --[[QueenPrisme]] 7:43pm April 13, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 1:44am April 16, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 19 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Would you happen to be able to tell me if [[Leaving]] is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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&lt;div&gt;Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below.  Feel free to leave new messages here.  I'll get back to you ASAP!&lt;br /&gt;
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Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --[[User:Michaeltamayo96|Michaeltamayo96]]&lt;br /&gt;
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So I hope you don't mind me making fun of [[Smutty Sex Romp]] in my [[DirtyMeStoryTime Rants/Horny for sluts]] path. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 11:51, 27 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Njrsgg]]. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained &amp;quot;under age vagina&amp;quot;, but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and &lt;br /&gt;
4th grade&amp;quot; and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;Sniff&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;*&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; You haven't given me any options for [[The Exhibitionist]]. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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What the hell is &amp;quot;shotgun-wielding&amp;quot; supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: &amp;quot;Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup.&amp;quot; Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--[[User:Fredhot16]] 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please check [[Special:Contributions/Sup]]. Teejay reversed the damage. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Added a [[Rules]] page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey Platypus, it's [[User:Vgybhu]]. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).&lt;br /&gt;
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I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.[[User:GirlOnGirlFan!]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not. &lt;br /&gt;
From [[GirlOnGirlFan!]] to Platypus.&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi Platypus, it's [[Whining Winnie]]. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user [[AllyG]] was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on [[Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga]]?? Thanks, [[Whining Winnie]] Happy Easter Everyone!&lt;br /&gt;
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The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so &amp;quot;immature&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
. I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone&lt;br /&gt;
like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration &lt;br /&gt;
testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of&lt;br /&gt;
committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.[[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your&lt;br /&gt;
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I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. [[User:H0rniWr1t3r]] &lt;br /&gt;
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I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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o.O What happened? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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When you come back, you might want to check [[Special:Contributions/Darth_nox]]. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of &amp;quot;too many conflicting changes&amp;quot;...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So&lt;br /&gt;
can you please keep to your self. [[H0rniWr1t3r]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. [[User:LilBitOfSpace|LilBitOfSpace]] &lt;br /&gt;
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Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( [[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? [[User:Gr1mm|Gr1mm]] 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Don't forget that [[CLM]] is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Whining Winnie]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Could you move [[CLM]] to the [[Adult Stories]] section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? [[Whining Winnie]] 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)&lt;br /&gt;
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Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. [[User:CodeSoldier|CodeSoldier]] 31/01/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore?  [[User:Fort|Fort]] 05/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --[[User:Fort|Fort]] 5 February 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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I apologize for my &amp;quot;obsession with colons&amp;quot; when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... [[User:Shirasade|Shirasade]] 20/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 23/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. [[User:Slk350|Slk350]] 24/02/16&lt;br /&gt;
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I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a [[Talk:Continue fucking Kate|specific story talk page]]) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the &amp;quot;Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the &amp;quot;I'm Your Brother&amp;quot; choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - [[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]]&lt;br /&gt;
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I'm going to finish the above section in &amp;quot;Idea Pitches&amp;quot; in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is &amp;quot;Lords&amp;quot;. It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found &amp;quot;Aristocrats&amp;quot; to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --[[User:Fredhot16]] 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that &amp;quot;feeling up&amp;quot; choice in &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot;. Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time.  --[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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So to answer your question about[[My Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure]] (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a &amp;quot;dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, &amp;quot;dating sim&amp;quot; would be the closest one thought &amp;quot;slice of life&amp;quot; is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 8 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the &amp;quot;Darkness&amp;quot; choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--[[User:Fredhot16]] 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)&lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --[[User:Hellspawn|Helpless Newbie]] 10 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --[[QueenPrisme]] 7:43pm April 13, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 1:44am April 16, 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --[[User:Hellspawn|Hellspawn]] 19 April 2016&lt;br /&gt;
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Would you happen to be able to tell me if [[Leaving]] is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. --[[User:Intheworstways| In The Worst Ways]] 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Ongoing_Story/Take_Lauren_along_and_make_it_a_fivesome</id>
		<title>Ongoing Story/Take Lauren along and make it a fivesome</title>
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&lt;div&gt;You and Lauren goes down to get some hot, Really big asses.&lt;br /&gt;
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And by the time you were having much fun orgasms are spreading in the room, The front door opens.&lt;br /&gt;
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Who do you think it is?&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Your Girlfriend?]]&lt;br /&gt;
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OR&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Lauren's Mom?]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<title>Ongoing Story/Call the shots so you can get your dick into them</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;==Chapter 9: The way panties should be removed==&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;quot;That's it.&amp;quot; You say. &amp;quot;Madeline.... peel off Megan's knickers with your teeth.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
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Megan seems a little shocked by this request, but Madeline obeys. She lowers down to her knees and pulls out the elastic of her sister's lacey panties with her finger. She then clamps her teeth around the elastic and begins to pull them down using her mouth. &lt;br /&gt;
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Your dick swells even more as Megan's panties slide down her smooth sexy body. Her cute blonde pussy is now uncovered and her tight ass bare. Madeline allows the panties to fall from her teeth and they drop down to Megan's ankles. She steps out of them and looks your way nervously. &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Now do the same for Madeline.&amp;quot; You prompt Megan. &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;No.&amp;quot; She says, &amp;quot;I can't do that. It's way too strange.&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;Do it!&amp;quot; &lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;quot;No! I won't.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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What do you do now?&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Ongoing Story/Get angry with Megan|Get angry with Megan]]&lt;br /&gt;
*[[Ongoing Story/Remain patient with Megan|Remain patient with Megan]]&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Ongoing Story]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Michaeltamayo96</name></author>	</entry>

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		<title>Pick a pink dress</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Michaeltamayo96:&amp;#32;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;div&gt;CONGRATS. YOU ARE NOW A CREEPY PASTA&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Becoming a creepypasta]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt; TIME TO KILL.&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;[[KILL POODS]]&amp;lt;br&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
[[KILL SLENDER MAN]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<title>Pick a pink dress</title>
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&lt;div&gt;CONGRATS. YOU ARE NOW A CREEPY PASTA&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Becoming a creepypasta]]&lt;br /&gt;
TIME TO KILL.&lt;br /&gt;
[[KILL POODS]]&lt;br /&gt;
[[KILL SLENDER MAN]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Becoming_a_creepypasta</id>
		<title>Becoming a creepypasta</title>
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&lt;div&gt;You stand in a long dark corridor. &amp;quot;Hickory Dickory Dock the mouse ran up the clock.&amp;quot; A giggling voice whispers by your ear. You clench your fists and shut your eyes. &amp;quot;When the clock turned one, the mouse was done, Hickory Dickory Dock.&amp;quot; Warm breath tickled your ear and you shout into the inky darkness, &amp;quot;Show yourself you coward!&amp;quot; Lightning flashed at the end of the corridor and you see a brief glimpse of a tall man wearing a black suit. Relief floods your systems and you run towards him. &amp;quot;Oh thank god! Someone is with me!&amp;quot; You gasp. You stop abruptly as the man turns to face you. He has no face. All that covers his head is smooth pale skin. ''Join me...Join me and the others'' You scream and scramble backwards. There seems to be glass between you two and he writes on it in a red substance. Blood. ''North ridge Creepypasta mansion. You will join us. It is your destiny.'' You sit upright in your bed in a cold sweat. You quickly write the address on your hand and look it up on the internet. A photo shows a large black mansion with a little boy and girl standing in front of it. The boy had elfish clothes on and his blonde hair peeked out of his green hat and the girl had long brown hair and was holding a teddy bear. You look at where it is and realize its in walking distance. &lt;br /&gt;
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You run down the side walk in a black t-shirt, blue jeans, and white converse. You accidently bump into a boy with a white hoodie on and his black hair hanging over his eyes. You notice there is blood on his hoodie and you slowly back away from him. &amp;quot;I'm not going to hurt you (your full name).&amp;quot; He croaked. &amp;quot;Who are you? And how do you know my name?&amp;quot; You demand and he laughed like a maniac. &amp;quot;(Your first name) we know everything about you. I was sent here to escort you. My name is Jeff.&amp;quot; He walks with you to the mansion without making eye contact or speaking. As you walk up the cool black pavement, Jeff stays by the porch. &amp;quot;Good luck.&amp;quot; He whispers and vanishes. When you look back at the door a boy with yellow tinted glasses and a orange scarf that covered his mouth was standing there. &amp;quot;Welcome. I'm Toby, but everyone calls me Ticci Toby.&amp;quot; He beacons you to come inside. The inside of the mansion was HUGE! Marble walls and columns shined and the black chandelier that hung from the ceiling shone with a sinister red glow. Two rows of stairs elegantly climbed up the wall on both sides and a tall woman with long black hair, pale skin, and red eyes descended the stairs gracefully. &amp;quot;I am Jane,&amp;quot; her voice had a heavy Russian accent. &amp;quot;Welcome to the Creepypasta mansion. Slenderman will speak with you in his studies. Come, I take you there.&amp;quot; She spoke with absolutely no emotion and ascended the stairs as her long black dress draped over the blood red carpet on the stairs. She takes you to a library where the man from your dreams sits there. You aren't surprised that he has no face and that a boy is standing next to him, kind of looking like Ash from pokemon- but with no arms and crying blood from pitch black eyes. &amp;quot;Thank you Lost Silver. That will be all.&amp;quot; The man said yet, he didn't say it. He turns to look at you. &amp;quot;Ah (Your full name) welcome to my mansion. I am here to offer you a place as a new creepy pasta. Will you accecpt?&amp;quot; You ask what a creepy pasta is. they are killers, rejects from society, some are trained as a living weapon or others were just born that way. Some of us are completely insane, and the bloodthirsty side of us needs to be quenched.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;
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Do you accecpt?&lt;br /&gt;
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[[I will join you.]]&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Hell no! I'm outta here]]&lt;br /&gt;
[[Category:Becoming a creepypasta]]&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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		<id>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/Sandbox</id>
		<title>Sandbox</title>
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&lt;div&gt;If you wish to play in sand, please do so on this page.  After you are done, please revert this page so others may use it.&lt;br /&gt;
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If you do not revert this page, it will be reverted for you. If you intend to use this page to start a story, please read the instructions in the [[Tutorial]] and follow the directions to start a story properly.  This page is for experimentation only and nothing posted on this page will remain here permanently.&lt;br /&gt;
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hey yo im just experimenting&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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