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Make her solve a math problem in front of the class

2017-09-03T02:19:57Z

AvengerOstrich:

"You seem to be spacing out. You know I don't allow that in my class," you scold her.

"S-sorry, Mr. Gaslight," answers the blonde just about to cry, still to confused over why she's come naked to class.

"Get over here and solve this problem on the whiteboard. That ought to focus you up. Come on, get up," you order sternly.

"I, um... I, uh... Mr. Gaslight, I...!"

"I said. Get. Up," you say in a tone of voice learned from hosts from dangerous areas of the underworld.

The undecided and confused teen stands up in fear, not knowing what else to do. Her hands still cover her shame and she can no longer hold the tears that start running down her face.

"Stand up straight!" you yell in a drill sergeant voice.

She does so without thinking, receiving plenty of whistles and expressions of both admiration from the boys and disdain by the girls, even a few coughing sounds of "Whore!" as both her hands stand at her side, revealing her pink little nipples standing proud and tall as to disagree with the shame of her owner and her closed, moist and tight vulva covered only with a handful of blonde small pubic hairs; too short still to be curvy.

"Walk up to the whiteboard, Miss!" you continue.

Her will broken, Daisy marches up the classroom to the front where she is given a black marker by your own hand as you point to a fairly simple but deviously laborious math problem you have placed in front of her.

"You may sit back down once you're done. I won't allow an 'I don't know' from you, young miss!"

The class has a perfect view of her round, petite ass; and those in front can even see the seductive split of flesh beneath her. From your advantageous possition, you can see her erect nipples in almost agony and between her legs a bit of honey is glistening the upper parts of the small, damp cave. In a very deep level, she is enjoying this, despite her tears. Then again, it might be the aftereffects of your own arousal when you were possessing her, it's been just a few seconds.

*[[Say you will forgive her if she she bends over and spreads her cheeks]]
*[[Make her suck your dick in front of the class]]
*[[Allowing her to solve this problem buck naked is good enough]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Erasmus Gaslight|Bald Middleaged Math Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Jump to Mr. Gaslight to see how little naked miss Valentine likes what you've done for her

2017-09-03T02:13:38Z

AvengerOstrich:

Making sure Daisy remembers every step of the way, you exit her body and swiftly switch your spirit to Mr. Gaslight. You hardly can hide your satisfaction as you look at the blonde naked girl's direction.

First, she has a smug smile on her face that you left her with. Suddenly, her conciousness switches on and she has a conflict between remembering everything that just happened to her and trying to somehow justify why she acted as you made her do. Her face changes to an expression of deep concern and from proudly showing her moist little open pussy, she slowly closses her legs and places her hands in front of her breasts.

You can almost read her mind just by watching the twitching of her facial muscles much to your delight as you proceed with your boring lecture, the one no one is paying attention to due to a bigger distraction going on in the classroom. She is wondering what in the world happened, and she's hovering between yelling as loudly as possible and running off in shame, or trying to play it cool to somehow salvage the situation.

Two long seconds go by since you exited her. As she is making up her mind about what is she now supposed to do, you call out to her.

"Miss Valentine."

"Y-yes?" she automatically answers as she jumps in her seat, now zealously cuddling her shapely tits with her right arm as her left jumps to her crotch.

She is undecided and lost, the perfect state of mind to receive orders.

*[[Say you can no longer tolerate her lack of shame, and send her out of your class]]
*[[Make her solve a math problem in front of the class]]
*[[Order her to get in front of the class, bend over and spread her cheeks]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Erasmus Gaslight|Bald Middleaged Math Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Proclaim yourself to be a proud, unashamed nudist

2017-09-03T02:10:34Z

AvengerOstrich:

"The fact that you lot are too insecure to be in your natural states does not concern me," you proudly state. "I am a nudist, I have a right to express my views; and whoever doesn't agree can call my Lawyer, Mr. Morrison at 555-453-5114," you say easily remembering the number of one of your past hosts.

The class is divided between those far too busy admiring your well-developed teenage breasts and looking expectantly at your crossed legs to care about anything you're saying - among which there is a surprising amount of girls - and those you've just impressed with your discourse.

"W-well," starts Mr. Gaslight, who positively winces at the mere mention of a lawyer, "it is true the school doesn't currently have a dress code, but everyone assumed no one would show up without actually wearing... never mind. Ms. Valentine, goodness knows the school doesn't need another lawsuit. I will discuss this with the principal later, until then... carry on, I suppose."

The boys cheer the teacher's decision while you smirk and change your crossing legs possitiong to allow anyone in front a glimpse of a tight and still virginal slit with a carpet that although still growing matches the drapes quite nicely.

With no other options, Ms. Gaslight is forced to start his class. Boys all over unashamedly glance at you as you wink back.

Do you:
*[[Start fingering in class]]
*[[Find an excuse to stand in front of the classroom]]
*[[Jump to Mr. Gaslight to see how little naked miss Valentine likes what you've done for her]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Daisy Valentine|Naked Blonde Girl]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

User talk:AvengerOstrich

2017-09-02T23:44:02Z

AvengerOstrich:

If you're going to post in one of my stories, please try to use proper grammar and punctuation. Pay attention to your verb tenses. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:14, 2 September 2017 (UTC)

I'm still figuring out how this place works. I hope you see this. I am very sorry about my mistakes in your story; I'll try to be more careful in the future. If you can take the time to read what I've added, it would mean a lot if you could tell me the situations I've described are in line about what you would expect out of your story, in both quality of the content and the content itself. [[User:AvengerOstrich|AvengerOstrich]]

User talk:AvengerOstrich

2017-09-02T23:42:42Z

AvengerOstrich:

User talk:AvengerOstrich

2017-09-02T23:42:12Z

AvengerOstrich:

User talk:Platypus

2017-09-02T23:17:07Z

AvengerOstrich:

----Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive6]]

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@Platypus, Thanks lad! --[[User:YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis|YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis]] 21:12, 22 May 2017 (UTC) // Reply was at 5:12 pm, Boston Time

@Platypus, I apologize for making my first entry here so sloppy. I occasionally write, but not all the time, resulting in a wobbly mess of a entry. With Sincerest Apologies, [[User:YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis|YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis]] // Reply was at 1:41 pm, Boston Time.

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my ([[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]) addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

@Platypus, understood. I will attempt my own story at some point. Thanks for the tips and the criticism. I'll aim to improve in future. --[[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]

@Platypus, really sorry and ashamed about my mistakes on editing your stories. I'll get right on reading the reccomendations you gave me. English is kind of my third language, but I promise it will get better. The story was so massive I didn't expect you minded if I filled up some of the blanks. If you believe my writting skills to be poor - as in, the situation I'm presenting is unappealing -, that I would also like to hear. -- [[User:AvengerOstrich|AvengerOstrich]]

== Fredhot16 ==
Is there a way to change the name of a story the easy way without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

Is it O.K to delete stories that have a few pages and that nobody has worked on for what seems like forever? Or at least move it to the pit? Update: O.K. Can I have permission to move stories to the Pit? And how do I that, if you're willing to give me permission?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:14 (Louisiana Time), 20 May 2017

Hey. Mind fixing the Main Page? Just reverting it should be enough.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:49 (Louisiana Time), 24 May 2017

Hey, do you have any suggestions for where I should put a section where people can put plot suggestions for the "Dungeons and Dragons" Adult Story?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2017

== Moving project ==

Hi Platypus,

Would you be interested in moving the project to its own domain and server? It's become painfully clear EditThis is not capable of supporting the project's infrastructure and is hindering the continued growth of the project. I've noticed several issues which are causing problems for CYOS:

* The throttling is disrupting both readers and writers from fully enjoying the stories.
* Excessive abuse filters are causing administrative issues for you.
* Lack of anti-abuse tools makes it extremely inefficient to counter abuse.
* Extremely outdated MediaWiki installation which hasn't been updated in nearly 8 years.

We can fix all of the above problems and implement a mass undo feature, a mobile version of the website, and do much more to create a modern CYOS-type website once we move to a new domain and server. Since CYOS doesn't allow user to user emails, could you perhaps contact me at floatingspace@protonmail.com to discuss specifics? Thanks. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 21:47, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

:Ya, it's just the actual lead administrator isn't reachable and appears to have abandoned the project years ago for you to run. There's really nothing stopping the members of the community from getting up and moving their stories and content to a new website that's actually managed and has the features CYOS needs. For example, I think an actual notification system (see the Echo extension available for MediaWiki) would be helpful for writers to keep track of new story developments. There are lots of useful features available to newer versions of MediaWiki. I think also thinking of a client-side story customization tool, which would allow readers to customize the names and other parameters of stories without changing the story for everyone else. In short, there's great potential in the project, but EditThis is hindering progress. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 16:27, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

::So what's your verdict on moving? Individuals can of course move stories, but a mass organized effort would probably be better and help build an actual community on a new platform that's actually maintained. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 17:04, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

== DirtyMeStoryTime ==

Sorry Platypus, but I will let you deal with [[User talk:John Smith]] and his new SSR pages [[You must be mistaken]] and [[Rip open the Peace Corps girl's shirt]]. I thought about adding the category to those pages and sending him a warning, but since that is your story, I thought it would be better to just let you know and decide if you wanted to just fix them or delete them, and how you wanted to warn him. Anyways, just letting you know. Feel free to stop by my story and let me know what you think if you have the time ^.^ Working hard on it, but not sure if it is good to go into the details that I am. btw, the story is [[Masochist me]]. Well, the one I am working on currently. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:55, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have asked Teejay, but, he isn't really that strong in critiquing. I have been trying to write my Masochist me, and been hung up on my training. I am enjoying writing it alot, and trying to make sure that the reader actually understand sex, as opposed to some of the stuff that ends up in the stories on here. But, I was thinking. I am wondering, should I even bother writing this? I mean, the entire story, while it will have some vanilla sex in it, and might use a little of the current material I am writing as fodder, it is not really "the story". I realize that there are many stories here that have inconsistencies, and go off on some side thing that have nothing to do with the plot, but I am wondering if there is any use in all this research and writing. It helps, slightly, to highlight the main character, show the reader what she is like, what she is experiencing, and compares and contrasts some of the differences between her and a normal, vanilla woman, so I know it isn't completely pointless. I am also having fun researching the different steps in sex, and trying to teach the reader about human sexuality, but it is not an educational story either. Can you let me know your thoughts? Is my The teacher part of the story pointless, a waste of time, etc? Will readers even care about this part, since they are probably coming to the story to read about a woman being slapped and hit, tied and bound, tortured and humiliated? I mean, to me, this feels needed, just to get the users to think about the world she is living in, and about who she is herself. But, well, I am not the other readers on this site. Am I going to far, and should stick to simple, "I moaned as the paddle fell across my ass, red welt left behind. He grabbed my hair, forcing my head up from across his knee, and held my gaze to his. "Are you going to be good now, or do you need more?" I shot him my best defiant look. "Well, in that case," with that, he stopped talking, shoved me back over his knee and brought the belt down over and over and over again. My ass was on fire, which only make me wetter, and forced me to moan and scream, cry and kick harder. God, I was about to climax from the sheer sweetness of the pain, mind wrapped in a blissful haze."

Also, is what I am writing on the teacher page any good? Is it redundant? Too long? Does it captivate, or just bore? Is the writing style okay? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:44, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, finished changing the ages in Hot & Horny on the Jessica path. All her pages should show her as 21 now. I was going to start the Miranda path, and I changed a few of the ages, but not up for reading them, and stopped making the changes. Some of the story lines just sound too much like the 6 year old that it originally was, and I find it creepy. Guess I will let you or someone else change her stuff. Sadly, the Josh stuff with Jessica was okay, but I didn't like the part where she goes into her parents bedroom. Not really something I am interested in, not with the tone and way the writer made it. I sort of lost it when I saw the "I'm about to pop an egg". Stopped reading and just edited the age only. I mean, I have seen stupid lines, but really? wtf is that? Wish the writers could at least try to "imagine" what a real woman might say... I mean, "Cum inside my womb and impregnate me" is bad enough, but really, "I'm about to pop an egg" I think may be the single, stupidest thing I have ever heard. I think it may have done permanent brain damage... I already feel stupider for having read it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

Sorry Platy, I will leave you to correct [[Special:Contributions/Mudcraft12]]'s stuff. I don't have enough time to add the category to every page he created... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:21, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

A new spammer: [[Special:Contributions/Wannaparty006]]. Since I cannot block him/her/it/them/things, not much I can do. Same since I can't really delete pages either. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

== Simple Question ==

Hey, Platypus, I seem to be having a rather strange issue, and since you seem to get around in this site, figured I would ask you. I'm working on my story [[Fallout: New Vegas]], and having a small issue with the category pages. More specifically, the page counter. On the "F" page, I tried to configure it like other stories to count the number of pages in the category "FNV". When I am logged out, the counter says one page. When I am logged in, it says the actual amount (still small, just starting), but I would like to figure out why this is and how to fix it. Anyways, whenever you get a chance if you could look at it or give me an answer it would be greatly appreciated.

Well, thank you anyways for the help, it would have bugged me for a while.

Hola i need help creating a story but i dont know how to make a you choose story plz help me-Elementor11234
p.s. sorry for editing out your stuff.

== CREATING YOUR STORY ==

HELLO I NEED HELP ON CREATING MY OWN STORY WITHOUT JUST EDITING SOMEONE ELSES STORY NEED HELP IMMEDIATLY
--[[User:Elementor11234|Elementor11234]] 19:30, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234

== Wolfskin75 ==

Thank you for the heads up. I thought I had done it right. I don't want to mess up anyone's story. I will read up before adding stuff.

[[User:Wolfskin75|Wolfskin75]]

== ForgotPassword ==

I'm working on the pages I left as incomplete. I don't write often and, when I do, I'm battling a horde of technical issue with my computer, so I'm forced to leave the work unfinished until I'm back in the mood to write. I am, slowly, getting the pages done, so don't worry about it too much. Besides, I'm not the first person to leave pages unfinished. There's a few stories on here like that, just minus the [in progress] part I added... I just need some time to get around to writing pages again, so it won't be an issue for long. Honest. [[User:ForgotPassword|ForgotPassword]]

== Thanks ==

I noticed you went through and reorganised my character pages. Thanks for that. I'd been putting off fixing that myself for a while. --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 13:17, 3 August 2017 (UTC)

== THIS is Very important,please help me with this==

Ok so I'm making this story based on a book (warriors 'in to the wild' by Erin Hunter)
And I was thinking about useing a prologue,
It would look something like this

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Prologue text

*[[Adventure/Option 1]]>your adventure starts in 5/4/3/2/or 1

[[Category: WARRIORS Into the wild]]

----
Ok thanks 😀 :)

User talk:Platypus

2017-09-02T23:13:36Z

AvengerOstrich:

----Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive pages below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive3]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive4]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive5]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive6]]

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@Platypus, Thanks lad! --[[User:YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis|YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis]] 21:12, 22 May 2017 (UTC) // Reply was at 5:12 pm, Boston Time

@Platypus, I apologize for making my first entry here so sloppy. I occasionally write, but not all the time, resulting in a wobbly mess of a entry. With Sincerest Apologies, [[User:YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis|YouCouldMakeAReligionOutOfThis]] // Reply was at 1:41 pm, Boston Time.

@Platypus, you mentioned that I (@Oddbeach) forgot to include a category bar. Would you please tell me where I make this mistake? Thanks :)

@Platypus, in response to your reaction to my ([[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]) addition to you story; I was wondering whether it would be okay if I were to continue making additions and edits, or if you would prefer me to step back? Which I will happily do so.

@Platypus, understood. I will attempt my own story at some point. Thanks for the tips and the criticism. I'll aim to improve in future. --[[User:Rogan-thumb|Rogan-thumb]]

@Platypus, really sorry and ashamed about my mistakes on editing your stories. I'll get right on reading the reccomendations you gave me. English is kind of my third language, but I promise it will get better. The story was so massive I didn't expect you minded if I filled up some of the blanks. If you believe my writting skills to be poor - as in, the situation I'm presenting is unappealing -, that I would also like to hear.

== Fredhot16 ==
Is there a way to change the name of a story the easy way without having to change all the categories, too?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 8:40 (Louisiana Time), 6 March 2017

Is it O.K to delete stories that have a few pages and that nobody has worked on for what seems like forever? Or at least move it to the pit? Update: O.K. Can I have permission to move stories to the Pit? And how do I that, if you're willing to give me permission?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 15:14 (Louisiana Time), 20 May 2017

Hey. Mind fixing the Main Page? Just reverting it should be enough.--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 18:49 (Louisiana Time), 24 May 2017

Hey, do you have any suggestions for where I should put a section where people can put plot suggestions for the "Dungeons and Dragons" Adult Story?--[[User:Fredhot16|Fredhot16]] 12:16 (Louisiana Time), 19 June 2017

== Moving project ==

Hi Platypus,

Would you be interested in moving the project to its own domain and server? It's become painfully clear EditThis is not capable of supporting the project's infrastructure and is hindering the continued growth of the project. I've noticed several issues which are causing problems for CYOS:

* The throttling is disrupting both readers and writers from fully enjoying the stories.
* Excessive abuse filters are causing administrative issues for you.
* Lack of anti-abuse tools makes it extremely inefficient to counter abuse.
* Extremely outdated MediaWiki installation which hasn't been updated in nearly 8 years.

We can fix all of the above problems and implement a mass undo feature, a mobile version of the website, and do much more to create a modern CYOS-type website once we move to a new domain and server. Since CYOS doesn't allow user to user emails, could you perhaps contact me at floatingspace@protonmail.com to discuss specifics? Thanks. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 21:47, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

:Ya, it's just the actual lead administrator isn't reachable and appears to have abandoned the project years ago for you to run. There's really nothing stopping the members of the community from getting up and moving their stories and content to a new website that's actually managed and has the features CYOS needs. For example, I think an actual notification system (see the Echo extension available for MediaWiki) would be helpful for writers to keep track of new story developments. There are lots of useful features available to newer versions of MediaWiki. I think also thinking of a client-side story customization tool, which would allow readers to customize the names and other parameters of stories without changing the story for everyone else. In short, there's great potential in the project, but EditThis is hindering progress. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 16:27, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

::So what's your verdict on moving? Individuals can of course move stories, but a mass organized effort would probably be better and help build an actual community on a new platform that's actually maintained. [[User:Spider|Spider]] 17:04, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

== DirtyMeStoryTime ==

Sorry Platypus, but I will let you deal with [[User talk:John Smith]] and his new SSR pages [[You must be mistaken]] and [[Rip open the Peace Corps girl's shirt]]. I thought about adding the category to those pages and sending him a warning, but since that is your story, I thought it would be better to just let you know and decide if you wanted to just fix them or delete them, and how you wanted to warn him. Anyways, just letting you know. Feel free to stop by my story and let me know what you think if you have the time ^.^ Working hard on it, but not sure if it is good to go into the details that I am. btw, the story is [[Masochist me]]. Well, the one I am working on currently. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 08:55, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have asked Teejay, but, he isn't really that strong in critiquing. I have been trying to write my Masochist me, and been hung up on my training. I am enjoying writing it alot, and trying to make sure that the reader actually understand sex, as opposed to some of the stuff that ends up in the stories on here. But, I was thinking. I am wondering, should I even bother writing this? I mean, the entire story, while it will have some vanilla sex in it, and might use a little of the current material I am writing as fodder, it is not really "the story". I realize that there are many stories here that have inconsistencies, and go off on some side thing that have nothing to do with the plot, but I am wondering if there is any use in all this research and writing. It helps, slightly, to highlight the main character, show the reader what she is like, what she is experiencing, and compares and contrasts some of the differences between her and a normal, vanilla woman, so I know it isn't completely pointless. I am also having fun researching the different steps in sex, and trying to teach the reader about human sexuality, but it is not an educational story either. Can you let me know your thoughts? Is my The teacher part of the story pointless, a waste of time, etc? Will readers even care about this part, since they are probably coming to the story to read about a woman being slapped and hit, tied and bound, tortured and humiliated? I mean, to me, this feels needed, just to get the users to think about the world she is living in, and about who she is herself. But, well, I am not the other readers on this site. Am I going to far, and should stick to simple, "I moaned as the paddle fell across my ass, red welt left behind. He grabbed my hair, forcing my head up from across his knee, and held my gaze to his. "Are you going to be good now, or do you need more?" I shot him my best defiant look. "Well, in that case," with that, he stopped talking, shoved me back over his knee and brought the belt down over and over and over again. My ass was on fire, which only make me wetter, and forced me to moan and scream, cry and kick harder. God, I was about to climax from the sheer sweetness of the pain, mind wrapped in a blissful haze."

Also, is what I am writing on the teacher page any good? Is it redundant? Too long? Does it captivate, or just bore? Is the writing style okay? --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:44, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, finished changing the ages in Hot & Horny on the Jessica path. All her pages should show her as 21 now. I was going to start the Miranda path, and I changed a few of the ages, but not up for reading them, and stopped making the changes. Some of the story lines just sound too much like the 6 year old that it originally was, and I find it creepy. Guess I will let you or someone else change her stuff. Sadly, the Josh stuff with Jessica was okay, but I didn't like the part where she goes into her parents bedroom. Not really something I am interested in, not with the tone and way the writer made it. I sort of lost it when I saw the "I'm about to pop an egg". Stopped reading and just edited the age only. I mean, I have seen stupid lines, but really? wtf is that? Wish the writers could at least try to "imagine" what a real woman might say... I mean, "Cum inside my womb and impregnate me" is bad enough, but really, "I'm about to pop an egg" I think may be the single, stupidest thing I have ever heard. I think it may have done permanent brain damage... I already feel stupider for having read it... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:23, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

Sorry Platy, I will leave you to correct [[Special:Contributions/Mudcraft12]]'s stuff. I don't have enough time to add the category to every page he created... --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 05:21, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

A new spammer: [[Special:Contributions/Wannaparty006]]. Since I cannot block him/her/it/them/things, not much I can do. Same since I can't really delete pages either. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:39, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

== Simple Question ==

Hey, Platypus, I seem to be having a rather strange issue, and since you seem to get around in this site, figured I would ask you. I'm working on my story [[Fallout: New Vegas]], and having a small issue with the category pages. More specifically, the page counter. On the "F" page, I tried to configure it like other stories to count the number of pages in the category "FNV". When I am logged out, the counter says one page. When I am logged in, it says the actual amount (still small, just starting), but I would like to figure out why this is and how to fix it. Anyways, whenever you get a chance if you could look at it or give me an answer it would be greatly appreciated.

Well, thank you anyways for the help, it would have bugged me for a while.

Hola i need help creating a story but i dont know how to make a you choose story plz help me-Elementor11234
p.s. sorry for editing out your stuff.

== CREATING YOUR STORY ==

HELLO I NEED HELP ON CREATING MY OWN STORY WITHOUT JUST EDITING SOMEONE ELSES STORY NEED HELP IMMEDIATLY
--[[User:Elementor11234|Elementor11234]] 19:30, 10 April 2017 (UTC)Elementor11234

== Wolfskin75 ==

Thank you for the heads up. I thought I had done it right. I don't want to mess up anyone's story. I will read up before adding stuff.

[[User:Wolfskin75|Wolfskin75]]

== ForgotPassword ==

I'm working on the pages I left as incomplete. I don't write often and, when I do, I'm battling a horde of technical issue with my computer, so I'm forced to leave the work unfinished until I'm back in the mood to write. I am, slowly, getting the pages done, so don't worry about it too much. Besides, I'm not the first person to leave pages unfinished. There's a few stories on here like that, just minus the [in progress] part I added... I just need some time to get around to writing pages again, so it won't be an issue for long. Honest. [[User:ForgotPassword|ForgotPassword]]

== Thanks ==

I noticed you went through and reorganised my character pages. Thanks for that. I'd been putting off fixing that myself for a while. --[[User:Incubus|Incubus]] 13:17, 3 August 2017 (UTC)

== THIS is Very important,please help me with this==

Ok so I'm making this story based on a book (warriors 'in to the wild' by Erin Hunter)
And I was thinking about useing a prologue,
It would look something like this

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Prologue text

*[[Adventure/Option 1]]>your adventure starts in 5/4/3/2/or 1

[[Category: WARRIORS Into the wild]]

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Ok thanks 😀 :)

Make her solve a math problem in front of the class

2017-09-02T21:46:43Z

AvengerOstrich:

"You seem to be spacing out. You know I don't allow that in my class," you scold her.

"S-sorry, Mr. Gaslight," answers the blonde just about to cry, still to confused over why she's come naked to class.

"Get over here and solve this problem on the whiteboard. That ought to focus you up. Come on, get up," you order sternly.

"I, um... I, uh... Mr. Gaslight, I...!"

"I said. Get. Up," you say in a tone of voice learned from hosts from dangerous areas of the underworld.

The undecided and confused teen stands up in fear, not knowing what else to do. Her hands still cover her shame and she can no longer hold the tears that start running down her face.

"Stand up straight!" you yell in a drill sergeant voice.

She does so without thinking, receiving plenty of whistles and expressions of both admiration from the boys and disdain by the girls, even a few coughing sounds of "Whore!" as both her hands stand at her side, revealing her pink little nipples standing proud and tall as to disagree with the shame of her owner, and her closed, moist and tight vulva covered only with a handful of blonde small pubic hairs, too short still to be curvy.

"Walk up to the whiteboard, Miss!" you continue.

Her will broken, she marches up the classroom to the front where she is given a black marker by your own hand, as you point to a fairly simple, but deviously laborious math problem you have placed in front of her.

"You may sit back down once you're done. I won't allow an 'I don't know' from you, young miss!"

The class has a perfect view of her round, petite ass; and those in front can even see the seductive split of flesh beneath her. From your advantageous possition, you can see her erect nipples in almost agony and between her legs a bit of honey is glistening the upper parts of the small, damp cave. In a very deep level, she is enjoying this, despite her tears. Then again, it might be the aftereffects of your own arousal when you were possessing her, it's been just a few seconds.

*[[Say you will forgive her if she she bends over and spreads her cheeks]]
*[[Make her suck your dick in front of the class]]
*[[Allowing her to solve this problem buck naked is good enough]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Erasmus Gaslight|Bald Middleaged Math Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Jump to Mr. Gaslight to see how little naked miss Valentine likes what you've done for her

2017-09-02T21:36:05Z

AvengerOstrich:

Making sure Daisy remembers every step of the way, you exit her body and swiftly switch your spirit to Mr. Gaslight. You hardly can hide your satisfaction as you look at the blonde naked girl's direction.

First, she has a smug smile on her face that you left her with, suddenly, her conciousness switches on and she has a conflict between remembering everything that just happened to her and trying to somehow justify why she acted as you made her do. Her face changes to an expression of deep concern and from proudly showing her moist little open pussy, she slowly closses her legs and places her hands in front of her breasts.

You can almost read her mind just by watching the twitching of her facial muscles, much to your delight as you proceed with your boring lecture, the one no one is paying attention to due to a bigger distraction going on in the classroom. She is wondering what in the world happened, and she's hovering between yelling as loudly as possible and running off in shame, or trying to play it cool so she can go back to get her clothes.

Two long seconds go on since you exited her. As she makes up her mind what is she now supposed to do, you call out to her.

"Miss Valentine."

"Y-yes?" she automatically answers as she jumps in her seat, now zealously cuddling her shapely tits with her right arm as her left jumps to her crotch.

She is undecided and lost, the perfect state of mind to receive orders.

*[[Say you can no longer tolerate her lack of shame, and send her out of your class]]
*[[Make her solve a math problem in front of the class]]
*[[Order her to get in front of the class, bend over and spread her cheeks]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Erasmus Gaslight|Bald Middleaged Math Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Proclaim yourself to be a proud, unashamed nudist

2017-09-02T21:33:57Z

AvengerOstrich:

"The fact that you lot are too insecure to be in your natural states does not concern me," you proudly state. "I am a nudist, I have a right to express my views; and whoever doesn't agree can call my Lawyer, Mr. Morrison at 555-453-5114," you say easily remembering the number of one of your past hosts.

The class is divided between those far too busy admiring your well-developed teenage breasts and looking expectantly at your crossed legs to care about anything you're saying - among which there is a surprising amount of girls - and those you've just impressed with your discourse for several reasons.

"W-well," starts Mr. Gaslight, who positively winces at the mere mention of a lawyer, "it is true the school doesn't currently have a dress code, but everyone assumed no one would show up without actually wearing... never mind. Ms. Valentine, goodness knows the school doesn't need another lawsuit. I will discuss this with the principal later, until then... Carry on, I suppose."

The boys cheer the teacher's decision, while you smirk and change your crossing legs possitiong to allow anyone in front a glimpse of a tight and still virginal slit with a carpet that although still growing, matches the drapes quite nicely.

With no other options, Ms. Gaslight is forced to start his class. Boys all over unashamedly glance at you as you wink back.

Do you:
*[[Start fingering in class]]
*[[Find an excuse to stand in front of the class]]
*[[Jump to Mr. Gaslight to see how little naked miss Valentine likes what you've done for her]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Daisy Valentine|Naked Blonde Girl]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Make her solve a math problem in front of the class

2017-09-02T20:42:04Z

AvengerOstrich: Created page with '"You seem to be spacing out. You know I don't allow that in my class," you scold her. "S-sorry, Mr. Gaslight," answers the blonde just about to cry, still to confused to explain…'

"You seem to be spacing out. You know I don't allow that in my class," you scold her.

"S-sorry, Mr. Gaslight," answers the blonde just about to cry, still to confused to explain why she came naked to class.

"Get over here and solve this problem in the whiteboard. That ought to focus you up. Come on, get up," you order sternly.

"I, um... I, uh... Mr. Morrison, I...!"

"I said. Get. Up," you say in a tone of voice learned from hosts from dangerous areas of the underworld.

The undecided and confused teen stands up in fear, not knowing what else to do. Her hands still cover her shame and she can no longer hold the tears that start running down her face.

"Stand up straight!" You yell in a drill sargeant voice.

She does without thinking, receiving plenty of whistles and expressions of both admiration, even a few coughing sounds of "Whore!" as both her hands stand at her side, revealing her pink little nipples standing proud and tall as to disagree with the shame of her owner, and her closed and tight vulva covered only with a handful of blonde small pubic hairs, too short still to be curvy.

"Walk up to the whiteboard, miss!" You continue.

Her will broken, she marches up the classroom to the front where she is given a black marker by your own hand, as you point to a fairly simple, but deviously laborious math problem you have placed in front of her.

"You may sit back down once you're done. I won't allow an 'I don't know' from you, young miss!"

The class has a perfect view of her round, petite ass; and those in front can even see the seductive split of flesh beneath her. From your advantageous possition, you can see her erect nipples in almost agony. In a very deep level, she is enjoying this, despite her tears.

*[[Say you will forgive her if she she bends over and spreads her cheeks]]
*[[Make her suck your dick in front of the class]]
*[[Allowing her to solve this problem buck naked is good enough]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Lawrence Gaslight|Bald Middle Aged Math Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Jump to Mr. Gaslight to see how little naked miss Valentine likes what you've done for her

2017-09-02T20:21:18Z

AvengerOstrich: Created page with 'Making sure Daisy remembers every step of the way, you exit her body and swiftly switch your spirit to Mr. Gaslight. You hardly can hide your satisfaction as you look at the blon…'

Making sure Daisy remembers every step of the way, you exit her body and swiftly switch your spirit to Mr. Gaslight. You hardly can hide your satisfaction as you look at the blonde naked girl's direction.

First, she has a smug smile on her face that you left her with, suddenly, her conciousness switches on and she has a conflict between remembering everything that just happened to her and trying to somehow justify why she acted as you made her do. Her face changes to an expression of deep concern and from proudly showing her moist little open pussy, she slowly closses her legs and places her hands in front of her breasts.

You read her mind to your delight as you proceed with your boring lecture, the one no one is paying attention to due to a bigger distraction going on in the classroom. She is wondering what in the world happened, and she's between yelling as loudly as possible and running off in shame, or trying to play it cool so she can go back to get her clothes.

Two long seconds go on since you exited her. As she makes up her mind as in what in the world to do, you call out to her.

"Miss Valentine."

"Y-yes?" She automatically answers as she jumps in her seat, now zealously cuddling her shapely tits with her right arm as her left jumps to her crotch.

She is undecided and lost, the perfect state of mind to receive orders.

*[[Say you can no longer tolerate her lack of shame, and send her out of your class]]
*[[Make her solve a math problem in front of the class]]
*[[Order her to get in front of the class, bend over and spread her cheeks]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Lawrence Gaslight|Bald Middle Aged Math Teacher]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Proclaim yourself to be a proud, unashamed nudist

2017-09-02T19:51:35Z

AvengerOstrich:

"The fact that you lot are too insecure to be in your natural states does not concern me", you proudly state. "I am a nudist, I have a right to express my views; and whoever doesn't agree can call my Lawyer, Mr. Morrison at 555-45-54", you say easily remembering the number of one of your past hosts.

The class is divided between those far too busy admiring your well-developed teenage breasts and looking expectantly at your crossed legs to care about anything you're saying - among which there is a surprising amount of girls -, and those you've just impressed with your discourse for several reasons.

"W-well," started Mr. Gaslight, who possitively winced at the mere mention of a lawyer, "it is true the school doesn't currently have a dress code, but everyone assumed no one would show up... nevermind. Ms. Valentine, goodness knows the school doesn't need another lawsuit. I will discuss this with the principal later, until then... carry on, I suppose."

The boys cheer the teacher's decision, while you smirk and change your crossing legs possitiong to allow anyone in front a glimpse of a tight and still virginal slit with a carpet that although still growing, matches the drapes quite nicely.

With no other options, Ms. Gaslight is forced to start his class. Boys all over unashamedly glance at you as you wink back.

Do you:
*[[Start fingering in class]]
*[[Find an excuse to stand in front of the class]]
*[[Jump to Mr. Gaslight to see how little naked miss Valentine likes what you've done for her]]
{{RampageTemplate|who=[[Daisy Valentine|Naked Blonde Girl]]}}
[[Category: Rampage]]

Proclaim yourself to be a proud, unashamed nudist

2017-09-02T19:48:50Z

AvengerOstrich: Created page with '"The fact that you lot are too insecure to be in your natural states does not concern me", you proudly state. "I am a nudist, I have a right to express my views; and whoever does…'