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Head to the roof

2012-09-14T10:49:17Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'Jogging through the halls, avoiding any dead bodies, you come across a large staircase. You take a quick peek down, and greeted by a dozen SWAT members gearing up to catch you. L…'

Jogging through the halls, avoiding any dead bodies, you come across a large staircase. You take a quick peek down, and greeted by a dozen SWAT members gearing up to catch you. Luckily, they haven't seen you, so you make it to the roof with no trouble.

Shit. If you had done more research before blindly accepting this job, you might have figured out that the roof is basically a big loop, some great assassin you are. But you'll have to roll with the punches. A door near you slams open, and a SWAT member creeps out. You spin around to shoot him, but double over in pain as a bullet tears through your abdomen. You are thrown off your feet and onto the rough roof as another bullet slams into your shoulder. You were annoyed when that damn Secret Service agent ruined your shot, now you're fucking pissed. Quickly getting onto your feet, you shoot the SWAT guy in the side, missing the Kevlar vest and going through a few vital organs. Three more come stumbling up the stairwell through the door, and you shoot the lead in the head, sending his body falling backwards, taking another agent down with him. The last manages to avoid them, but you quickly shoot him in the throat. As the adrenaline starts to wear off, the reality starts to sink in. You're at the top of the White Hosie bleeding from two gunshot wounds, surrounded by SWAT, Secret Service, Police Officers, and all types of media.

The whole shitfest is accentuated by the sound of a shotgun being pumped.

Using the last of your strength, you turn around and come face to face with a SWAT member. A few seconds of dead silence occurs between the two of you, and it feels like hours as you slowly lose strength. Using your finger, you start to slowly push against the trigger, at a speed that he would not notice. At the last second you jam you finger back, pulling the trigger and shooting him in the eye. At the same time, you are hurled backwards as a shotgun shel hits you in the chest. Your chest flares in agoninzing pain, and you kniw exactly what was in the shotgun. "Rocksalt" you mange to mutter as your vision fades.

* Well....shit

[[Pass out and die]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Get to the oval office

2012-09-12T21:49:26Z

Abcdefg:

You sprint down the hallways, and slam into a Secret Service agent, who quickly dies after you put a bullet in his neck, and grab his assault rifle "who the hell carries an assault rifle?" you think. Whatever the case, you don't mind carrying it yourself, especially since there is an entire group of agents in front of you. Jogging forward you quickly spray and pray, and relived when no one has poped out to shoot you. Diving into a small alcove, you check for any other agents, only finding half a dozen bodies you just killed. Luckily, the only interference are a few agents you easily kill. Making it to the doors of the Oval Office, you kick it open greeted by the stocky agent from before. In a futile attempt to kill you, he raises his gun, and you pump a few round in his arm, causing him to fall to the ground in pain. The president, quickly runs past you into the hallway, and you stop him with an entire clip into his back. Your gun clicks as it runs out of ammo, and you have no more clips. As the stocky agent groans in pain, you notice his gun, a chrome revolver with a polished wood handle. Taking it, you grace the gun by blasting a hole in its owner's head. Killing the president and over a dozen Secret Service tends to draw attention, so you'll have to move fast.

* Do you

[[Head to the roof]]

[[Escape from the window]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Get to the oval office

2012-09-12T13:12:54Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'You sprint down the hallways, and slam into a Secret Service agent, who quickly dies after you put a bullet in his neck, and grab his assault rifle "who the hell carries an assau…'

You sprint down the hallways, and slam into a Secret Service agent, who quickly dies after you put a bullet in his neck, and grab his assault rifle "who the hell carries an assault rifle?" you think. Whatever the case, you don't mind carrying it yourself, especially since there is an entire group of agents in front of you. Jogging forward you quickly spray and pray, and relived when no one has poped out to shoot you. Diving into a small alcove, you check for any other agents, only finding half a dozen bodies you just killed. Luckily, the only interference are a few agents you easily kill. Making it to the doors of the Oval Office, you kick it open greeted by the stocky agent from before. In a futile attempt to kill you, he raises his gun, and you pump a few round in his arm, causing him to fall to the ground in pain. The president, quickly runs past you into the hallway, and you stop him with an entire clip into his back.

* Do you

[[Head to the roof]]

[[Escape from the window]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Take his suit and weapon, and get a good position

2012-09-12T13:06:19Z

Abcdefg:

Adjusting your tie, you kick your disguise into a small alcove, and drag the body into a janitor's closet. You walk briskly down the hall, and follow the distant sound of the president talking in the conference room, and come upon a small balcony where another Secret Service agent is watching. Taking your scalpel (small, efficient, and easy to cut) out of your pocket, you slash his throat, leaving him choking on his blood as you take his position. Aiming at the head of the president, you slowly breathe, not allowing your hands to slip or move at all. Your leg is nearly jerked out form under you, causing you to fire your gun in surprise. As time slows down, you don't even need to look down to know it was the dying Secret Service agent. The wall behind the president explodes in splinters on one spot as the bullet misses him, and a stocky agent scoops him up and escorts him out in a flash. You need to stop him from escaping.

* Do You

[[Chase after him by jumping off the balcony]]

[[Get to the oval office]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Take his suit and weapon, and get a good position

2012-09-12T12:57:21Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'Adjusting your tie, you kick your disguise into a small alcove, and drag the body into a janitor's closet. You walk briskly down the hall, and follow the distant sound of the pre…'

User talk:Platypus

2012-09-12T12:45:10Z

Abcdefg: /* Uncategorized pages */

Since this page has become rather cluttered, I've moved old discussions to the archive page below. Feel free to leave new messages here. I'll get back to you ASAP!

*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive1]]
*[[User talk:Platypus/Archive2]]

>Add new comments below. Do not add new comments to the archive.

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Great thanks. Yea, definitely let me know if you think of any stories that would be good for it. From the ones I've read, I think Heyoeveryone's Remember might be the best option. I'm probably going to record in about a week, so let me know before then if you think of any other good options. -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]

Hey. I have been a fan of this site for a while. I am an experienced actor and had the idea of adapting some of these stories to YouTube. Essentially, it would be an audiobook of the story where you click a link at the end of the video to make your choice (leading you to the next part of the story). You seem to be very active on and passionate about this site. I was wondering if you can help me find a well written CYOA story with lots of dialogue. I'd be willing to discuss this idea if you have any input. Thanks! -[[User:AlexCW|AlexCW]]

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Just wanted to ask what happened to the main page and the reason for it. I was gone for a week, then BAM! A template for the featured, only several stories available directly. What is the criterion for the stories to be displayed on the main page, anyways?
--[[User:Snowball|Snowball- The Anti-Adult-Content Resistance Leader]] 13:00, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

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thanks for the advice i'm a big fan of your work your a really big part of this website
Seth Xozen
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yo!! u just deleted my story!!!!!y???
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thank you!!! i should be able to do it. i'm just a terrible speller. did u make this website??? this should be my last post 'cuz i don't want annoy u any more than i have... :]

peeta.luvr
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i tried to catogorize a page on 'Vampires Vs. Werewolfs' but it didn't work... sorry once again :]
peeta.luvr
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Last thing, you respond Fast!!!!p.s i understand if want me to stop posting stuff, sorry 'bout that. :]

peeta.luvr again
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i have a question, my appologies for not asking before on my previous comment, but do you have to read All of the stories posted on this website?? :]

peeta.luvr
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i'm soooo sorry i ignored your first message!! i didn't know what it ment to "catagorize a page" and i still don't know, so i was wondering if you could help by telling me how to!!! please and thanks :]

peeta.luvr
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How exactly do you give your story a catoragory? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. Please forgive my spelling.
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I Apologize Mr. Platypus, I have realized you are indeed correct however I don't recall seeing this on the main page where was it? Sincerely Critic-AL P.S. I Hope we haven't got off on the wrong foot.
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I Have no clue what your saying Mr. Platypus I Made Medieval Life Myself I was only editing my own story. Unless you know of another medieval life adventure I Have no idea what your saying. More Sincerely this time Critic-AL
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That seems significantly easier; I'll use the move feature to fix the others. Thanks.

-- Fin
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Hey Mr. Platypus The only story I recall editing was my own called medieval life. So if you think i edited another one than how about telling me which one rather than Insulting me so i don't do it again. Not So Sincerely Critic-AL.
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Um... I discovered a better way to organize my story, but, unfortunately, a produced this blank page in the process: [[Verse/Luka=Answer_correctly| this little baby]]
I don't know if you'd have found it otherwise, but I also got a question: will you hate me if I "fix" the previous four pages? Changing the urls from /CYOA/<page> to /CYOA/Luka/<page>. I'll understand if you're opposed, considering it makes you have to do stuff (delete the old ones, I'm guessing), and I don't really mind if it stays like this but... it looks messy as it is, with the pages split. xD

Also: apologies; please don't hate me.

-- Fin
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I don't know if you've received complaints from any other users recently about this, but there is a syntax error that comes up upon clicking the "Trolling in the Mall" page in SSR. Just a heads up.

-- Pterodactyl

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wow, i do not no what your problem is but you honestly need to calm down, big time....

i never did go into a different story and deliberately delete a different page, if it happened it was on accident and something that i did not mean to do or realize what was happening. i would assume that would be understood rather causing such anger towards me as i'm new here.

still don't see how it's even possible that i would have done something as you accuse me of doing when i only, and i repeat, only edited pages which i created for my story. if i did indeed delete somebody else's page as you claim i did than there is many other ways to handle it then calling me out in pure anger, acting as if i did it on purpose, and using caps as if you are yelling at me.

anyway, thank you for making my first experience on this website a bad one and i will keep that in mind as i come back(if i even bother returning now) and also when talking with other people.

-- pissed off and ready to never come back, Hailey
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I just recieved my second warning about not catergorizing pages correctly or pre-empting them with the story title. However, if I did so with the last few entries I've made within any stories, it was a complete accident. I made every attempt to comply. Your message resounded loud and clear, and to be completely honest, you sound like an impudent asshole with severe control issues who prefers to emphasize tone over content. I'll make no more entries, I assure you. In the future, perhaps treat your writers with a little less insolent rudeness and you might not end up with so many endless pages of half-written drivel. (I'm sure you'll erase this message to eradicate the perceived insult, but at least consider what I've said.) [[User:DickingCream]]

: I've gotten a message like this as well. The story was tagged, as far as I could tell - as it was a story ending, I made sure that it linked back to the original story. What exactly did I forget to do? [[User:Wonder Boy]]

Platypus,

I'vev been writing my first CYOA (the transformation laboratory) and I made a ending page and i got a warning, it was in the right categorys so I'm very confused. -supersmew

Hey Platypus,

I'm working on starting The House on Horny Hill. I neglected to save an intermediate page and so some later ones were deleted as orphaned. Could those be recovered so I only have to re-write the page that I forgot to save earlier?
--[[User:DickHardy|DickHardy]] 23:11, 3 April 2012 (UTC)

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Whoa ^^ I get the feeling you're way stricter than my English teacher xp. My spelling and grammar skills are little more than readable I'm afraid. I'm not native English or anything so.. I'll try ^^ (it's only my third language)

It took me over 15 minutes to even figure out what you'd changed on some of those pages ^^, after figuring that out I was left stupefied as to what was wrong with it in the first place -_-. Looks like my grammar may remain beneath your expectations for quite a while yet.. (completely hopeless)

--[[User:Zoroastra|Zoroastra]]

What do you mean 'title of the story?'

-- Apollo.

Playtpus my man {or bird if you are female}
Great place that you have here and fantastic stories going down but l have a slight problem here.
Whenever l try to edit Smutty Sex Romp then this comes up "Permission error...users and bureaucrats allowed."
What in the NINE HELLS does that mean?

-- Apollo

Platypus, sorry i've been no here for a while.....just tell me what ''Choose your own adventure'' are you? I mean what category are you?

Starforce

Ah, OK. But what do you mean by title?

--Starforce

I just made Category: Randy Orton good now?

--Starforce

Then all my pages have the category, if not, example the Pokemon Trainer Academy is PKMN PTA not Pokemon Adventure, it's not my fault it's the creator fault.

--Starforce

--MaxJose

DUDE DID YOU DELETE A BUNCH OF MY STORY PLEASE RESPOND I NEED TO KNOW THIS AND IF YOU DID WHY.

--MaxJose

dude i was wondering if you can find out who did it or if you can get it back i really need this.

== Re: deleteme ==

Oh shit, I guess that makes a lot more sense now that I think about it. Whoops.

My apologies, man. --[[User:TheElderOnes|TheElderOnes]] 03:23, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Something has happened to my story. I keep trying to get my page back but it's blank. I clicked restore and it says it's done but the page still says it's been blanked. How or who did that? Was it when I was editing? Could you restore my page/s for me as I can't seem to find out how.
Continuation
*hi again. I know you fixed it but my page was blanked again. Could you tell me how it's happening. All I did was edit the first page of text. I didn't touch the catagory link or the options i only changed the dialog. Is it something I'm doing by mistake. If it happens again how do i fix it myself so i dont have to bother you. If you couldn't tell I'm new at this*

CaptainMorgan30

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Hello. I'm sorry for bothering you, but I have two questions.
1. Can you delete this page for me? http://editthis.info/choose_your_own_adventure/The_next_morning.._*Black_Dress_2%2BDuran%2BMercs*
Thank you very much. The title for the page doesn't fit with the rest of the story and I seemed to have failed at formatting it correctly which leads me to...

2. I'm a little more than confused at how to make the link appear at the top of the page (under the title of said page) which allows you to go back to a point in the story. I've read the tutorial page and stared at the coding for the page trying to figure it out, but I'm utterly perplexed at it. I'd be extremely grateful if you could shed some light on it for me. --[[User:Happyazngirl|Happyazngirl]] 05:46, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Platipus,i forgot to do that.Anyway,do you like how i edited your story?

== iWant Sex ==

Hey Platypus,
I'm new to choose your own adventures, and I really can't figure out anything to write about. However, I read your iWant Sex story, and I got many ways it could keep going. What I guess I'm saying, is this: would you mind if I added to iWant Sex?
Bight99

I'd like to thank you on the advice. I read most of the stuff on creating/editing posts. And I wasn't sure what categories meant, so I skipped adding it on my CYOA. Thank you, as in my first stages of this creation any help at all I appreciate. I'm still not sure if I did the right thing, but nevertheless, THANK YOU. :)

== The Neighbors ==

Hey, Platypus, I got your message about leaving a subject, or whatever, but I don't know how to do that. Could you show me exactly how to do what you said?

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== Oops! ==

Sorry... I just had an idea bubble up... I'll try to allocate at least an hour or two for you to push the story in a direction you like from now on. -- [[User:Teejay|Teejay]]

== Pokesex ==

Thanks for the heads up Platypus. I need to remember to add the title. xD
-- Ghengar
== Name of wiki changed ==

More info here:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/Wiki_Name_Change_Information

==Pokesex==
Thanks for the heads up about including the titles, I'll be sure to do that from now on. You might be able to see through my edit history (on pokesex) my many, many failed attempts at fixing the previous pages. How should I go about it?

Okay sorry, I will be posting complete pages from now on. It was my first time editing, so I wasn't sure how things worked.
-Thisisme

== Uncategorized pages ==

Sorry, this is my first story, and I down really know all about how to categorize pages besides putting category at the bottom-abcdefg

User talk:Platypus

2012-09-12T12:44:50Z

Abcdefg: /* Uncategorized pages */ new section

Sneak out to your car

2012-09-11T23:43:19Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'You slip out of the room, and sneak past agents running by, getting to the door. An agent yells at you to stop, freezing you in your tracks. You know he isn't playing games, he's…'

You slip out of the room, and sneak past agents running by, getting to the door. An agent yells at you to stop, freezing you in your tracks. You know he isn't playing games, he's going to either take you down or arrest you.

*Do you

[[Rush Him]]

[[Let him arrest you, then attack]]

Pass out and die

2012-09-11T23:42:20Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'It feels like years have passed in seconds as you hear voices, medical equipment, footsteps, too many to count. Your eyes open, greeted to a frost covered glass pane, which slowl…'

It feels like years have passed in seconds as you hear voices, medical equipment, footsteps, too many to count. Your eyes open, greeted to a frost covered glass pane, which slowly lifts up and into a small hole in the ceiling. Your vision is narrow, but you see several people in pods beside you, covered in the same glass as yours had. Two people in lab coats come in, an attractive blonde and a bored looking man. This is all overwhelming, you just died not even five minutes ago,a nd now you're in some place taken out of a shitty science fiction novel. You feel lightheaded as the doctor speaks about reviving you, and she prattles on about medical technology before saying something about 128 years. "Wait, what the hell is going on, what about 128 years!?". Seemingly shocked at your attitude, she says that you've been at this laboratory for that long mentioning your job as an assassin, and says that is excatky what your job is now. As you start to question her, the man shoves a needle in your arm, and you punch him in the face. But before you can fight more, a variety of images flash in front of you, a man, a house and address, a name, and a single message at the end "Kill him"

To be continued... Go ahead and contribute!

Grab his gun and shoot up the conference room

2012-09-11T23:18:36Z

Abcdefg: For some reason Die leads to a sex story so im changing it

Following a quick jog to the room, you reach the doors. You are nervous, it's not everyday you kill a president, sure you've killed at least 100 people in your short career, but it's like putting a pre schooler into college at the huge spike in difficulty. You pull the doors open, surprised no one noticed you yet. The president is now on the stage, and is beginning a speech about "Corruption in the government". You aim at the president, and fire. The bullet slams into his chest, knocking him down, and two agents near you follow suit. The crowd screams in fear, and you unload a few bullets into it, sending them all tumbling to the ground from either gunshots or fear. Feet stomp behind you, and you spin around, greeted by an agent with a shotgun. You put a bullet into his neck, and are thrown to the ground. You look around for the source, finding a giant gunshot wound in your stomach. "Shit" you manage to force out of your blood filled mouth, and stare at the crowd gathered around you.

Do the only thing you can do

[[Pass out and die]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Grab his gun and shoot up the conference room

2012-09-11T23:16:45Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'Following a quick jog to the room, you reach the doors. You are nervous, it's not everyday you kill a president, sure you've killed at least 100 people in your short career, but …'

Take out your camera and snap a few photos

2012-09-11T23:06:07Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'Loud gasps are followed by another hush along the crowd as soon as you ready your camera. Dressed in a blue tie and a black suit, a tall Asian man steps to th podium. You instant…'

Loud gasps are followed by another hush along the crowd as soon as you ready your camera. Dressed in a blue tie and a black suit, a tall Asian man steps to th podium. You instantly recognize him instantly, since you voted for him. The president addresses the crowd, washed in white camera flashes, and you almost feel guilty about what you're about to do, since all that he's done for country. Almost. The one billion dollars you're getting paid makes up for it, plus whatever old white Republican they put in office after couldn't fuck it up too much. You ready your camera, aim it towards the president, and take a picture. The president chokes for a second, holding his throat, and falls to the floor. As murmurs come from the crowd, you mingle into the growing crowd near the stage. As blood pours from the president's throat, you quietly mutter in pleasnt delight how you thought the gun wouldn't work. Your leg suddenly vibrates, and you check into your pocket for yor phone finding it with the simple message of "Money deposited" along with a picture of $1,000,000,000 added to your existing bank account.

Do you

[[Sneak out to your car]]

[[Stay and try to not arouse suspicion]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

710: Future Assassin

2012-09-11T22:48:57Z

Abcdefg:

Everything is blurry, and your head is pounding. You can't remember how you got this way, but you try to remember. Several thoughts pass through your head as your vision goes black.

$1,000,000,000,
Kill,
Gun,
President.

You gulp down your third cup of coffee, and get out of the car. Sliding your legs out of the car, you hop out and close the door, with the door automatically locking as soon as you pull your keys out. Ah, the future of technology, with pointless additions and gimmicks. You trip over the curb, and stumble into a heavy-set man who grunts in annoyance. A nearby guard snorts at your stumble. ''Good, I'm playing this well'' you think to yourself. Following security procedures, a muscular man jams your camera into your hands, which you "accidentaly" nearly drop, and push your glasses up after they start to fall. The large gate you had jus reached opens, and a meek-looking man greets you all with "Welcome to the White House!"

[[Follow the meek man inside, avoiding the mouth breathers around you]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

710: Future Assassin

2012-09-11T22:48:37Z

Abcdefg: PLEASE NOTE, JUST BECAUSE YOU DIE IN OPENING DOES NOT MEAN THAT IS THE END, KEEP GOING

Everything is blurry, and your head is pounding. You can't remember how you got this way, but you try to remember. Several thoughts pass through your head as your vision goes black.

$1,000,000,000
Kill
Gun
President

You gulp down your third cup of coffee, and get out of the car. Sliding your legs out of the car, you hop out and close the door, with the door automatically locking as soon as you pull your keys out. Ah, the future of technology, with pointless additions and gimmicks. You trip over the curb, and stumble into a heavy-set man who grunts in annoyance. A nearby guard snorts at your stumble. ''Good, I'm playing this well'' you think to yourself. Following security procedures, a muscular man jams your camera into your hands, which you "accidentaly" nearly drop, and push your glasses up after they start to fall. The large gate you had jus reached opens, and a meek-looking man greets you all with "Welcome to the White House!"

[[Follow the meek man inside, avoiding the mouth breathers around you]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Exit the room

2012-09-11T22:43:40Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'Leaving the room, you walk down a few corridors, surprised by the lack of security, but considering the great state of 'Muricah sent multi-million dollars missiles that blew ever…'

Leaving the room, you walk down a few corridors, surprised by the lack of security, but considering the great state of 'Muricah sent multi-million dollars missiles that blew every terrorist leader to kingdom come, the lull in domestic terrorism following the deaths of them all would lead anyone to relax. Your thoughts are interrupted when you slam into a Secret Service Agent, and he profusely apologizes, but then stops. "Shit, there goes my cover" you think. The man brings out his gun, but you grab his arm and slam it into a wall. Grabbing his throat, you throw him against the ground, and stomp on his neck, ending with a loud" CRACK". ''Trained professionals my ass''.

Do you

[[Take his suit and weapon, and get a good position]]

[[Grab his gun and shoot up the conference room]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

Follow the meek man inside, avoiding the mouth breathers around you

2012-09-11T22:34:49Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'You are all led into a big conference room, with various journalists like yourself setting up big cameras, writing notes, and other things. The crowd is extremely talkative, and …'

You are all led into a big conference room, with various journalists like yourself setting up big cameras, writing notes, and other things. The crowd is extremely talkative, and after the man that led you in comes onto the stage, they all quiet down. Saying some bullshit about the President being int he room soon, you get up out of your chair, and walk to the door.

Do you

[[Exit the room]]

[[Take out your camera and snap a few photos]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

710: Future Assassin

2012-09-11T22:30:05Z

Abcdefg:

You gulp down your third cup of coffee, and get out of the car. Sliding your legs out of the car, you hop out and close the door, with the door automatically locking as soon as you pull your keys out. Ah, the future of technology, with pointless additions and gimmicks. You trip over the curb, and stumble into a heavy-set man who grunts in annoyance. A nearby guard snorts at your stumble. ''Good, I'm playing this well'' you think to yourself. Following security procedures, a muscular man jams your camera into your hands, which you "accidentaly" nearly drop, and push your glasses up after they start to fall. The large gate you had jus reached opens, and a meek-looking man greets you all with "Welcome to the White House!"

[[Follow the meek man inside, avoiding the mouth breathers around you]]

[[Category: 710: Future Assassin]]

710: Future Assassin

2012-09-11T22:29:23Z

Abcdefg: ANY EDIT BY ME IS GOING TO BE IN ANNOYING CAPS LOCK, SORRY-The creator

710: Future Assassin

2012-09-11T22:28:06Z

Abcdefg: CREATOR EDIT:DO NOT EDIT AT ALL, OPENING PART OF STORY

All Mature Stories

2012-09-11T22:17:34Z

Abcdefg: /* Mature Stories */ Added my new story, first time so sorry if I got it wrong

==Mature Stories==
'''Content normally found in R-rated movies, no explicit sexual content or sadistic violence:'''

{| class="wikitable sortable" style="width:100%"
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! Story !! Number Of Pages !! Note
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|[[101st]]||10||(Open!)
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|[[1943]]||35||Open
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|[[710: Future Assassin]]||10+||(Open, but do not edit opening)
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|[[5,000 B.C.]]||15||(Public)
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|[[1st Day Of Highschool]]||31||(WIP)
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|[[A Distress Signal]]||14||(WIP; stick to story if you edit)
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|[[Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf]]||13||(WIP; Please Don't Edit)
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|[[Adventures of Ty (or Others)]]|| 13+ || Work In Progress; Public; Please Contribute
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|[[Assassins of the CIA]]||6||(don't edit!)
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|[[An Actual Awesome Adventure]]||21 ||Under Construction, only edittable by [[User:Jakeinator]]
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|[[Aftermath]]||25 ||(By Falar: Just started- its public. If you're gonna write in it, please do it well =/)
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|[[Agent Black]]||70 ||(New Story. Now public)
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|[[Amnesia]]||50+
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|[[Another Pointless Story]] (The Ultimate Showdown)|| 101+
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|[[Awake]] || 45
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|[[Badassery]] || 20+
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|[[The Battle for the Earth]] || 10+ || open for editing
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|[[Battle Royale]] || 200+ || Public Story, Help Work On It!
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|[[Beta Experiment: DNA Death Match]] || 1+ ||(Under Construction, Do Not Edit)
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|[[Black and White Backpack]]||6||please do not edit
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|[[Bloodshed]]||2
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[[Category:System Pages]]

That electric toothbrush looks good

2012-08-21T05:31:59Z

Abcdefg: How Do you add categories?

You grab the toothbrush off the counter, and proceed to unbuckle your pants and pull them down. You roughly stick the tooth brush up your asshole, stopping every few moments due to the pain. You get it in until the start button is barely showing, and click down. The vibrations are powerful, and the invading object in your bowels give this feeling as though you have to shit, but ignore it. Grabbing your stiff cock, you jerk it up and down, letting the vibrations take you. The sounds of skin slapping together and the distant buzzing of the toothbrush are the only sounds you can hear. You feel on edge, and with one last push, you jam the toothbrush almost all the way up your ass with an enthusiastic "Ugh!" and cum, sending spurts of your seed over your legs. You get up, and slip, sending the tooth brush completely up your asshole. You get up in pain, and realize you can't get it out.

Do you
*[[Go to the hospital]]
*[[Try to shit out the toothbrush]]
*[[Call your kinky but helpful boyfriend for help]]

{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Apartment]]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}

Head back to your apartment for some relaxation

2012-08-21T05:23:59Z

Abcdefg: I do not know how to add categories, please add them

You head to your apartment, and fall on the bed, wondering what to do for your aching erection.

You Notice
*[[That electric toothbrush looks good]]
*[[Your bag of sex toys]]
*[[That weird vase you got at your birthday last year...]]
{{SexRompStatus|Location=''[[Downtown]]''|Health=Horny|MP=0|Level=1}}

Go Downtown to go boy-watching

2012-08-21T05:20:35Z

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You shower up, then head Downtown in your 1998 Ford Focus. It's a nice day and there isn't a cloud in the sky. Once you get downtown, you park in a parking structure and then step out of your car.

Do you:
*[[Go get some pizza]]
*[[Go to the gym to pump iron and work off that sexual tension]]
*[[Stroll down to the poor town to check out some rent boys]]
*[[Go to a local hook up bathroom]]
*[[Go to the park and take a seat on a bench]]
*[[Find the back door to the Nuclear War gay joint?|Find the back door to the Nuclear War gay joint]]
*[[Take a stroll around town]]

Or
*[[Head back to your apartment for some relaxation]]
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[[Category: Smutty Sex Romp]]

Storm out, tell your father you were raped, and press charges

2012-08-17T19:00:47Z

Abcdefg:

You make it home, and your father is angered at what he hears. He goes over to his house, as you fall asleep crying. You wake up in the morning to knocks at the door. It's policemen, and you learn your father beat him nearly to death, before bringing him to the station. Throughout the following weeks, you get a rape test that shows that he did rape you, and he is convicted to 25 years to life. Due to the brutality, the whole school sympathizes with you and you appear on talk shows, even getting a book deal. Then one day out of the blue, you get a letter, apparently your rapist got into a fight with some prisoners, and they beat him to death. You smile, justice has been served.

THE END

Storm out, tell your father you were raped, and press charges

2012-08-17T19:00:19Z

Abcdefg: Created page with 'You make it home, and your father is angered at what he hears. He goes over to his house, as you fall asleep crying. You wake up in the morning to knocks at the door. It's police…'

You make it home, and your father is angered at what he hears. He goes over to his house, as you fall asleep crying. You wake up in the morning to knocks at the door. It's policemen, and you learn your father beat him nearly to death, before bringing him to the station. Throughout the following weeks, you get a rape test that shows that he did rape you, and he is convicted to 25 years to life. Due to the brutality, the whole school sympathizes with you and you appear on talk shows, even getting a book deal. Then one day out of the blue, you get a letter, apparently your rapist got into a right with some prisoners, and they beat him to death. You smile, justice has been served.

THE END