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| + | Hello Kazakom, I recently finished reading your story [[My kind of Neighborhood]] and saw that you were open for feedback: | ||
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| + | It's a great story as of yet, I really like the idea of it revolving around a single neighborhood with its different neighbors and such (assuming that's the base concept). There's a few spelling errors, but they don't really disturb anything and your writing as a whole has a nice flow to it, especially when it comes to describing the various surroundings. The story and the idea of splitting it into two different "paths" both sound really interesting, but the thing I love the most is how you describe the different ''residences'': the amount of detail you've put into writing the scenes really bring out the neighbor's different personalities and relationships, which is very entertaining to read. I wish you the best of luck when writing it, and really look forward to reading more. --[[User:ArthurKung|ArthurKung]] 22:37, 7 September 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Hello Kazakom, I recently finished reading your story My kind of Neighborhood and saw that you were open for feedback:
It's a great story as of yet, I really like the idea of it revolving around a single neighborhood with its different neighbors and such (assuming that's the base concept). There's a few spelling errors, but they don't really disturb anything and your writing as a whole has a nice flow to it, especially when it comes to describing the various surroundings. The story and the idea of splitting it into two different "paths" both sound really interesting, but the thing I love the most is how you describe the different residences: the amount of detail you've put into writing the scenes really bring out the neighbor's different personalities and relationships, which is very entertaining to read. I wish you the best of luck when writing it, and really look forward to reading more. --ArthurKung 22:37, 7 September 2014 (UTC)
