Arrive at the party

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The sounds of drunken laughter and thumping music greeted Alice on her arrival. From what she could see of the crowd gathered around the entrance to the party, this seemed to definitely be THE event tonight. Alice smiled, excited by the prospect of pledging and forging the friendships that would shape the rest of her college life.  
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The sounds of drunken laughter and thumping music greet Alice upon her arrival. From what she can see of the crowd gathered around the entrance to the party, this seemed to definitely be THE event tonight. Alice smiled, excited by the prospect of pledging and forging the friendships that would shape the rest of her college life.  
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On the way in she couldn't help but eye off a group of what appeared to be freshman guys lounging about on the porch. One turned and interrupted her ogling; one of the taller ones with brown hair and striking blue eyes. She knew she would have looked exactly like a deer caught in headlights, but the guy smiled and easy smile and started to chuckle as he continued staring directly into her eyes. Alice allowed herself one flirtatious smile before she crossed the threshold into the party. This pledging business could turn out to be a lot of fun if she played her cards right...
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As she walks to the front door, she can't help but eye off a group of probably freshman guys standing about on the porch, trying to get in. One turns and interrupts her ogling, tall, with brown hair and striking blue eyes. She knows she has to look like a deer caught in headlights, but the guy smiles, an easy smile, as he continues staring directly into her eyes. Alice allows herself one flirtatious smile before turning away. ''This pledging business could turn out to be a lot of fun if she played her cards right.''
*[[A group of sorority girls greet her at the doorway]]
*[[A group of sorority girls greet her at the doorway]]
[[Category: Blue Mountain University]]
[[Category: Blue Mountain University]]

Revision as of 01:22, 31 January 2014

The sounds of drunken laughter and thumping music greet Alice upon her arrival. From what she can see of the crowd gathered around the entrance to the party, this seemed to definitely be THE event tonight. Alice smiled, excited by the prospect of pledging and forging the friendships that would shape the rest of her college life.

As she walks to the front door, she can't help but eye off a group of probably freshman guys standing about on the porch, trying to get in. One turns and interrupts her ogling, tall, with brown hair and striking blue eyes. She knows she has to look like a deer caught in headlights, but the guy smiles, an easy smile, as he continues staring directly into her eyes. Alice allows herself one flirtatious smile before turning away. This pledging business could turn out to be a lot of fun if she played her cards right.

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