Erotic life-boy

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You look at your reflection and smile.

You are a 15-year-old guy. You have a well toned body of a fair complexion.

You've been told you're very handsome, with attractive features.

You gaze at the mirror when a honk disrupts your daydream.

The bus is here, which means you're running late.

Your moms shouts from downstairs, "C'mon Jimmy! You're late! Get a move on!".

Do you:

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-you look at yourself with pleasure.
+You look at your reflection and smile.
-you are a boy of age 15 with a well toned body of a fair complexion.
+You are a 15-year-old guy. You have a well toned body of a fair complexion.
-your are also a very handsome boy with attractive features.
+You've been told you're very handsome, with attractive features.
-you gaze at the mirror when a honk disrupts your dream.
+You gaze at the mirror when a honk disrupts your daydream.
-the bus is here, and your running late.
+The bus is here, which means you're running late.
-your hear your moms shouts from downstairs, "c'mon jimmy! your late! get a move on!".
+Your moms shouts from downstairs, "C'mon Jimmy! You're late! Get a move on!".
 Do you: