Go inside the large mansion

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-	Moving closer to the mansion you notice that it was full of people in black. Walking into the mansion entrance you see rows of flowers and the scent of strong perfume in the air. Where had your sister gone and where were your parents?
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		+	You enter through the main entrance. It was crowded with people talking here and there. No sign of your family however.
		+	Then someone began waving a bell and yelling that it was about to begin. Everyone moved towards the door to the right. You didn't want to be left behind do you? So you also walked following the crowd.
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	ENTRANCE HALL		ENTRANCE HALL
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-	Pushing through the crowds you see more people in black both children and adults you walk past them and into the what looks like a small cathedral.	+	Everybody was wearing black then you see somebody waving at you. Your sister was there and so were your parents.
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	CATHEDRAL HALL		CATHEDRAL HALL
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		+	The Father(Priest) voice echoed through the crowd. "We are gathered here to pay respects to a great man------" 30 mins later and the funeral ended
-	Adriane your sister was here with your dad and your mother. They all sat in chairs in the front.	+	Who's Jacob??
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-	The room had a strong odor of perfume and a coffin lay in the front with an old photograph with the words "In Memory of %$#@$ %$#@$"	+
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-	Who's &*^% %#$$?	+
	[[Walk towards your family]]		[[Walk towards your family]]

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Revision as of 01:56, 28 October 2009

You enter through the main entrance. It was crowded with people talking here and there. No sign of your family however. Then someone began waving a bell and yelling that it was about to begin. Everyone moved towards the door to the right. You didn't want to be left behind do you? So you also walked following the crowd.

ENTRANCE HALL

Everybody was wearing black then you see somebody waving at you. Your sister was there and so were your parents.

CATHEDRAL HALL

The Father(Priest) voice echoed through the crowd. "We are gathered here to pay respects to a great man------" 30 mins later and the funeral ended

Who's Jacob??

Walk towards your family