Talk:Visit the Market Square (TDM/MHW)

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The idea behind the scene on this page is its supposed to:
The idea behind the scene on this page is its supposed to:
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A. Establish that dragons who jump to Illnora illegally are caught and sold as slaves.
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B. Establish that you (the main character) has a fascination with dragons.
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* Establish that dragons who jump to Illnora illegally are caught and sold as slaves.
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C. Establish and clarify that the main character wants to own at least one dragon of his own.
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* Establish that you (the main character) has a fascination with dragons.
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D. Establish that he is currently looking for a job and just so happens to stumble across junior positions that would allow him to work with dragons.
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* Establish and clarify that the main character wants to own at least one dragon of his own.
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* Establish that he is currently looking for a job and just so happens to stumble across junior positions that would allow him to work with dragons.
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Ideally, all the choices to proceed all involve the MC getting a job that will grant him the opportunity to buy, sell, own, and capture dragons. From there, the fun begins and the story can go in different directions.
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--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 09:47, 25 February 2019 (UTC)

Current revision as of 09:47, 25 February 2019

This page is a mess. would someone be willing to clean it up and flesh it out a bit more? Normally, my writing is okay, but my mind is all over the place and I am having trouble properly wording and describing the scene that I want to convey.

The idea behind the scene on this page is its supposed to:

  • Establish that dragons who jump to Illnora illegally are caught and sold as slaves.
  • Establish that you (the main character) has a fascination with dragons.
  • Establish and clarify that the main character wants to own at least one dragon of his own.
  • Establish that he is currently looking for a job and just so happens to stumble across junior positions that would allow him to work with dragons.

Ideally, all the choices to proceed all involve the MC getting a job that will grant him the opportunity to buy, sell, own, and capture dragons. From there, the fun begins and the story can go in different directions. --Durzan 09:47, 25 February 2019 (UTC)

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