Try to gather up the diaper

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The girl looks at you quizically "Is that yours?"
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The girl looks at you quizically. "Is that yours?"
You blush heavily and quickly try to gather up your diaper.
You blush heavily and quickly try to gather up your diaper.
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"Hey it's ok" the girl says "I won't tell anyone about this, my name's Erin." She reaches out and puts her hand on your shoulder to reasure you.
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"Hey, it's okay," the girl says. "I won't tell anyone about this.  My name's Erin." She reaches out and puts her hand on your shoulder to reasure you.
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"Uh, yeah that is mine" you say still very emberrassed "Thank you for promising not to tell Erin, I really appreciate it."
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"Uh, yeah, that is mine," you say, still very embarrassed. "Thank you for promising not to tell, Erin, I really appreciate it."
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"It's no problem, so what's your name I don't think I've met you before."
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"It's no problem.  So what's your name? I don't think I've met you before."
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You blank, you don't even know your own name "Stacy" you say without thinking "My name is Stacy" For some reason you feel this is the right response but you have no idea why.
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You blank.  You don't even know your own name. "Stacy," you say without thinking. "My name is Stacy." For some reason you feel this is the right response but you have no idea why.
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"Well Stacy, would you like to go grab some breakfast with me? I was about to head over to the dining hall."
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"Well, Stacy, would you like to go grab some breakfast with me? I was about to head over to the dining hall."
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*[[Sure let's eat]]
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*[[Sure.  Let's eat]]
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*[[No thanks I've got some work to do]]
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*[[No, thanks, I've got some work to do]]
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[[Category: A New Life]]

Current revision as of 04:17, 23 March 2008

The girl looks at you quizically. "Is that yours?"

You blush heavily and quickly try to gather up your diaper.

"Hey, it's okay," the girl says. "I won't tell anyone about this. My name's Erin." She reaches out and puts her hand on your shoulder to reasure you.

"Uh, yeah, that is mine," you say, still very embarrassed. "Thank you for promising not to tell, Erin, I really appreciate it."

"It's no problem. So what's your name? I don't think I've met you before."

You blank. You don't even know your own name. "Stacy," you say without thinking. "My name is Stacy." For some reason you feel this is the right response but you have no idea why.

"Well, Stacy, would you like to go grab some breakfast with me? I was about to head over to the dining hall."

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