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She gives you a knowing smile. 'Maybe later.'
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She gives you a mischievous smile. 'Maybe later.'
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She takes you through to a large room with large chesterfields in leather arranged around an unlit fireplace. In the middle was a thick fur rug that must have cost at least a dozen bears. The French windows leading into the garden were open in spite of the rain, letting a breath of cool air into the hot summer night.
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She takes you through to a large room with large chesterfields in yellow leather arranged around an unlit fireplace. In the middle of the arrangement lies a thick fur rug that must have cost either a dozen mink or one very large bear. The French windows leading into the garden are open in spite of the rain, letting a breath of cool air into the hot summer night.
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'How about a drink?' she asks you.
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'How about a drink?' Blondie asks you.
'I could do with a drink,' you say. And you really could. It's been a long day and you're tired.
'I could do with a drink,' you say. And you really could. It's been a long day and you're tired.
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She mixes you a drink and takes one for herself. Then, sweeping across to the chesterfields she sits down on the one facing away from the garden and the open windows.
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She mixes you a scotch and soda and takes one for herself. Then, sweeping across to the chesterfields she sits down on the one facing away from the garden and the open windows.
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Revision as of 01:53, 19 September 2015

She gives you a mischievous smile. 'Maybe later.'

She takes you through to a large room with large chesterfields in yellow leather arranged around an unlit fireplace. In the middle of the arrangement lies a thick fur rug that must have cost either a dozen mink or one very large bear. The French windows leading into the garden are open in spite of the rain, letting a breath of cool air into the hot summer night.

'How about a drink?' Blondie asks you.

'I could do with a drink,' you say. And you really could. It's been a long day and you're tired.

She mixes you a scotch and soda and takes one for herself. Then, sweeping across to the chesterfields she sits down on the one facing away from the garden and the open windows.



Sit down on the same sofa

Sit down on the sofa opposite her

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