Uhh... no thanks

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Current revision as of 23:35, 7 March 2013

You walk to the next house, hoping it won't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens.

"Hi and-"

It's another girl. This time, it's a teenage-looking girl, around your age. She is wearing pink pajamas with pictures of clouds.

"Just looking for a place to sleep," you say. "Can I stay here?"

"Uhh, sure!" she leads you inside.

The house is very clean. She brings you to an Lived-in lounge.

"Want to watch TV?" the girl asks.

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-You walk to the next house, hoping it won't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens up.
+You walk to the next house, hoping it won't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens.
 "Hi and-"
-It's another girl. This time, it's a teenage-looking girl, kind of like your age. She is wearing pink pyjamas with pictures of clouds.
+It's another girl. This time, it's a teenage-looking girl, around your age. She is wearing pink pajamas with pictures of clouds.
-"Just looking for a place to sleep, lady," you say. "Can I stay here?"
+"Just looking for a place to sleep," you say. "Can I stay here?"
-"Uhh sure!" she says and leads you inside.
+"Uhh, sure!" she leads you inside.
-The house is very clean. She brings you to the lounge room. It's not as clean, but cleaner than most lounge rooms.
+The house is very clean. She brings you to an Lived-in lounge.
 "Want to watch TV?" the girl asks.