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'''== The Train Ride ==''' | '''== The Train Ride ==''' | ||
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There wasn't much to carry but the bag felt heavy everything felt heavy. | There wasn't much to carry but the bag felt heavy everything felt heavy. | ||
The train had arrived, and in the cold night the people were bundled up enjoying themselves. | The train had arrived, and in the cold night the people were bundled up enjoying themselves. | ||
| - | Things had changed 4 years ago, but looking at the station it | + | Things had changed 4 years ago, but looking at the station it all remained the same. |
| - | The revolution had come and gone inumerable lives were lost but nothing signifant had changed | + | The voice for revolution had come and gone inumerable lives were lost but nothing signifant had changed in return |
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| - | + | In the waiting area onlooking the boarding passangers your thoughts linger. | |
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| - | + | 1 DAY AGO | |
| - | + | The text read in clear words "Uncle Jirou was found dead" | |
| - | + | He was the father of your dead cousin Asao, the last you saw of him was after the war ended, your offered condolensces being unable to bring his son back. | |
| - | + | To the present | |
| + | The announcement had come "Final Boarding for Oceanic train 815" | ||
Picking up your belongings you head towards the train. | Picking up your belongings you head towards the train. | ||
| - | *[Fast Forward to the funeral] | + | *[[Fast Forward to the funeral]] |
(I know it looks very linear but bear with it, as it is important to create a mood. It will become more broad later on as I try to put in many folklore tales.) | (I know it looks very linear but bear with it, as it is important to create a mood. It will become more broad later on as I try to put in many folklore tales.) | ||
| + | [[Category:After Dark (Hyaku-Monogatari) 100 Ghost stories]] | ||
Current revision as of 23:12, 24 February 2012
== The Train Ride == There wasn't much to carry but the bag felt heavy everything felt heavy.
The train had arrived, and in the cold night the people were bundled up enjoying themselves. Things had changed 4 years ago, but looking at the station it all remained the same. The voice for revolution had come and gone inumerable lives were lost but nothing signifant had changed in return
In the waiting area onlooking the boarding passangers your thoughts linger.
1 DAY AGO The text read in clear words "Uncle Jirou was found dead"
He was the father of your dead cousin Asao, the last you saw of him was after the war ended, your offered condolensces being unable to bring his son back.
To the present The announcement had come "Final Boarding for Oceanic train 815" Picking up your belongings you head towards the train.
(I know it looks very linear but bear with it, as it is important to create a mood. It will become more broad later on as I try to put in many folklore tales.)
