Walk towards your family

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Moving towards the family you sit the mass was about to begin. It was dreadful serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd.
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Moving towards your family, you sit just as the mass was about to begin. It was dreadfully serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd.
The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.
The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.
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Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow we still have some business to take care of."
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Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow. We still have some business to take care of."
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He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here he motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.
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He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here. He motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.
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The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but the deeper you went you'd hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry to open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure was an odd mixture like a fun house.
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The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but as you go deeper inwards you hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry turned into open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure is an odd mixture, quite like a fun house.
You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway.
You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway.
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"This is your room" he points to your sister. You'll have another guest keep you company breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio.  
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"This is your room" he points to your sister. "You'll have another guest to keep you company and breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio."
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Your sibling opens the door and enters a glimpse inside another girl is there and the door shuts.
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Your sibling opens the door and enters. A limpse inside reveals another girl and then the door shuts.
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You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.
You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.
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It was a grand room able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room.
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It was a large room easily able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room.
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You head towards the empty bed and beginto unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.
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You head towards the empty bed and began to unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.
The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"  
The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"  

Current revision as of 11:20, 21 October 2011

Moving towards your family, you sit just as the mass was about to begin. It was dreadfully serious with ashen looking faces on the crowd. The Priest began "We are here to mourn the passing of Jacob......." You ignore the rest as you continue to stare at the coffin.


(After the Funeral)

Your father talks to you. "You two will follow Ian. We'll meet you for breakfast downstairs tomorrow. We still have some business to take care of." He turned and left both your parents talking with the other adults. Ian was the driver who drove you here. He motioned you over and you and your sister followed him into the manor.

The noise from the entrance was growing faint and the steps of your feet on stone was now echoing the halls. Sometimes you'd pass by another person but as you go deeper inwards you hardly see another soul. Grey hallways of stone and tapestry turned into open rooms decorated to be cozy and others elegant beyond compare with carpets and artworks lying on the wall. The manor sure is an odd mixture, quite like a fun house.

You get to the third floor and you reach a cozy hallway. "This is your room" he points to your sister. "You'll have another guest to keep you company and breakfast is at 7 downstairs in the patio." Your sibling opens the door and enters. A limpse inside reveals another girl and then the door shuts.


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A few rooms down the same hallway was your room. Ian said the same speech and walked away. You enter the room. Like your sister you had roommates a blond haired boy and a red haired freckled one stared at you.


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You spoke first "Someone told me I was sleeping here?" The other boys looked at each other before welcoming you into the room.

It was a large room easily able to fit 3 beds on one side. A working fireplace with a balcony view it was a lavish room. You head towards the empty bed and began to unpack your belongings. The other 2 looked like they were getting ready to go.

The boy with the red hair spoke, "Hey were gonna go look around you want to come?"

(((((The story diverges from now on so please choose your own adventure)))))

Go with them

Stay and go to sleep

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