User talk:Wolvesatyourdoor - Revision history

Platypus at 23:42, 15 September 2016

Platypus — Thu, 15 Sep 2016 23:42:50 GMT

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	Wolvesatyourdoor: 19 August 2010		Wolvesatyourdoor: 19 August 2010
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		+	Please don't post in my stories unless you can use proper grammar and punctuation. You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 23:42, 15 September 2016 (UTC)

Wolvesatyourdoor at 05:57, 19 August 2010

Wolvesatyourdoor — Thu, 19 Aug 2010 05:57:09 GMT

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	Wolvesatyourdoor: 12 July 2010		Wolvesatyourdoor: 12 July 2010
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		+	Holy shit I've completely forgotten about this! I really need to get to work!
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Wolvesatyourdoor at 16:58, 12 July 2010

Wolvesatyourdoor — Mon, 12 Jul 2010 16:58:31 GMT

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	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:47, 12 July 2010 (UTC)		--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:47, 12 July 2010 (UTC)
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		+	Thanks for the help man ^^ I'm just trying to breath some life back into the topic, it's way to awesome in my opinion for it to just die off. I'm going to start spreading out my writing though, the main reason I've been doing the male feline is because I have a friend who's really into things like that and I've been doing it for him. Thanks again for your help.
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Platypus at 12:47, 12 July 2010

Platypus — Mon, 12 Jul 2010 12:47:22 GMT

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	I really liked how those two went as well; I've just gotten back from a trip to New York and I was going to start working on them again, I'll make sure to work on the foxes Wolvesatyourdoor: 7/11/10		I really liked how those two went as well; I've just gotten back from a trip to New York and I was going to start working on them again, I'll make sure to work on the foxes Wolvesatyourdoor: 7/11/10
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		+	I wouldn't say that your work sucks. That's a bit harsh. You do have things to learn, but you're on the right track, storywise. Once you've got some of the technical stuff down, I'm confident that you'll be doing some pretty good stuff. Be particularly careful about punctuating with dialogue. That seems to throw a lot of people.
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		+	He reaches down with a strong hand and tears your shirt off, leaving it in shreds on the floor, a small smirk appears on his face at the sight of your lean body "Not bad..." he said, poking your flat stomach, an action that makes you blush and look down at your feet "You don't work out much do you..." He takes his own shirt off, showing off his muscular body "Now you see...this is what you want..."
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		+	He reaches down with a strong hand and tears your shirt off, leaving it in shreds on the floor. A small smirk appears on his face at the sight of your lean body. "Not bad..." he says, poking your flat stomach, an action that makes you blush and look down at your feet. "You don't work out much do you?" He takes his own shirt off, showing off his muscular body. "Now you see... this is what you want..."
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		+	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:47, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Wolvesatyourdoor at 03:12, 12 July 2010

Wolvesatyourdoor — Mon, 12 Jul 2010 03:12:24 GMT

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	I'm not ordinarily into the whole furry thing but personally I was kinda interested in the male and female fox story lines. I'm not really the best person to advise on this sort of thing but the stuff of yours I have read seemed pretty decent. It probably could use a little polish but its better than some of the stuff I have seen.		I'm not ordinarily into the whole furry thing but personally I was kinda interested in the male and female fox story lines. I'm not really the best person to advise on this sort of thing but the stuff of yours I have read seemed pretty decent. It probably could use a little polish but its better than some of the stuff I have seen.
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		+	I really liked how those two went as well; I've just gotten back from a trip to New York and I was going to start working on them again, I'll make sure to work on the foxes Wolvesatyourdoor: 7/11/10

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I'm not ordinarily into the whole furry thing but personally I was kinda interested in the male and female fox story lines. I'm not really the best person to advise on this sort of thing but the stuff of yours I have read seemed pretty decent. It probably could use a little polish but its better than some of the stuff I have seen.