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			<title>Durzan:&amp;#32;/* Regarding Three Sisters: Remastered... */</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;Regarding Three Sisters: Remastered...&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That being said... I would appreciate some additional help. If you'd like to do so, don't hesitate to let me know!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That being said... I would appreciate some additional help. If you'd like to do so, don't hesitate to let me know!&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 19:56, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 19:56, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Just talked with Platypus. Apparently characters just need to be of age, not neccesarily look or act like it.&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 21:03, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 21:03:24 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Durzan</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Durzan at 19:59, 16 June 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;== Regarding [[Three &lt;del class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;sisters&lt;/del&gt;: Remastered]]... ==&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;== Regarding [[Three &lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;Sisters&lt;/ins&gt;: Remastered]]... ==&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;... except for the current title page, which I created because the capitalization of the original title page was gnawing at my OCD&lt;/ins&gt;.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;As far as the character of Bayley being a 5th grader, I hope its now taken care of. I altered the main page to increase her age as well as the age of her sisters. As far as I could tell, that was the only place where their ages were directly addressed. Everything else is implied through her actions and naivety. Fixing that is going to be the hard part, as doing so probably would majorly fuck up the entire story... so I've been holding off on doing that until I was certain I got all the pages in the right category. &amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;As far as the character of Bayley being a 5th grader, I hope its now taken care of. I altered the main page to increase her age as well as the age of her sisters. As far as I could tell, that was the only place where their ages were directly addressed. Everything else is implied through her actions and naivety. Fixing that is going to be the hard part, as doing so probably would majorly fuck up the entire story... so I've been holding off on doing that until I was certain I got all the pages in the right category. &amp;nbsp;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 19:59:47 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Durzan</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Durzan at 19:57, 16 June 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;== &lt;del class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;Re: &lt;/del&gt;[[Three sisters Remastered]]... ==&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;== &lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;Regarding &lt;/ins&gt;[[Three sisters&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;: &lt;/ins&gt;Remastered]]... ==&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 19:57:44 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Durzan</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Durzan at 19:56, 16 June 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;== Re: [[Three &lt;del class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;Sisters &lt;/del&gt;Remastered]]... ==&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;== Re: [[Three &lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;sisters &lt;/ins&gt;Remastered]]... ==&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 19:56:59 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Durzan</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Durzan:&amp;#32;/* Re: Three Sisters Remastered... */ new section</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;== Re: [[Three Sisters Remastered]]... ==&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;That story actually isn't mine. Its an abandoned private story that the original author started as a revised version of the original story [[Three sisters]]. Since the original author was terrible at spelling and grammar, I've been working on pruning, editing, and streamlining the revised version. All those new pages I've been making it are really just copy and paste (mostly) from the original story. I haven't added a single page that contains new content for the story. Everything already existed.&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;As far as the character of Bayley being a 5th grader, I hope its now taken care of. I altered the main page to increase her age as well as the age of her sisters. As far as I could tell, that was the only place where their ages were directly addressed. Everything else is implied through her actions and naivety. Fixing that is going to be the hard part, as doing so probably would majorly fuck up the entire story... so I've been holding off on doing that until I was certain I got all the pages in the right category. &lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;The last thing I want to do is mess shit up without fully understanding everything I need to do in order to keep the story in tact, yet make sure it complies with the rules. I need to know what needs to be changed, where it needs to be changed, need to figure out how to change it etc... and thats a lot of work to try and do when your not even sure you have all the pages for the story in the same category.&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;That being said... I would appreciate some additional help. If you'd like to do so, don't hesitate to let me know!&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;--[[User:Durzan|Durzan]] 19:56, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 19:56:18 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Durzan</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>TheWatcher at 07:12, 16 June 2019</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 07:12:54 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>TheWatcher</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>TheWatcher:&amp;#32;/* test */ new section</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;test:&amp;#32;&lt;/span&gt; new section&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.&amp;nbsp; Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 07:12:12 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>TheWatcher</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with 'If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.  Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flu…'</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;If you&amp;#39;re going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices &amp;#39;&amp;#39;must&amp;#39;&amp;#39; be choices your character can make.  Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flu…&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you're going to post in one of my stories, be aware that all choices ''must'' be choices your character can make.  Your character cannot choose whether or not someone else flushes her. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:33, 16 June 2019 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 16 Jun 2019 06:33:01 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:TheWatcher</comments>		</item>
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