User talk:SaylorTwift21 - Revision history

SaylorTwift21 at 07:34, 9 June 2021

SaylorTwift21 — Wed, 09 Jun 2021 07:34:49 GMT

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	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)		--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
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-	Thanks for the info. I've been previously told before by many people that my writing style is repetitive and counterproductive, and the grammar errors were more possibly from exhaustion and broken keyboard than me, but excuses are like assholes, everyone has one.
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-	~~I didn't even think about the actions that should just start, lacking in common sense in that department. Thanks.~~
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-	~~That should have made sense at the moment I wrote that, but oops.~~
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-	~~Truly they are demons, infinite power... But I do apologize for just making my demon a god.~~
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-	~~I am pretty new to the site, so any help you could offer me would be absolutely appreciated. Thanks, again!~~
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-	~~--[[User:SaylorTwift\|SaylorTwift21]] 00:10, 27 April 2020 (UTC)~~

SaylorTwift21 at 07:08, 27 April 2020

SaylorTwift21 — Mon, 27 Apr 2020 07:08:58 GMT

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	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)		--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
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		+	== Reply to [[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] ==
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		+	Thanks for the info. I've been previously told before by many people that my writing style is repetitive and counterproductive, and the grammar errors were more possibly from exhaustion and broken keyboard than me, but excuses are like assholes, everyone has one.
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		+	I didn't even think about the actions that should just start, lacking in common sense in that department. Thanks.
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		+	That should have made sense at the moment I wrote that, but oops.
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		+	Truly they are demons, infinite power... But I do apologize for just making my demon a god.
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		+	I am pretty new to the site, so any help you could offer me would be absolutely appreciated. Thanks, again!
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		+	--[[User:SaylorTwift\|SaylorTwift21]] 00:10, 27 April 2020 (UTC)

Platypus at 17:14, 26 April 2020

Platypus — Sun, 26 Apr 2020 17:14:52 GMT

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	All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower.		All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower.
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		+	The demon's power is taking over other people's bodies. It does not have the power to grow male genitals on female bodies!

	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)		--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Platypus at 17:12, 26 April 2020

Platypus — Sun, 26 Apr 2020 17:12:48 GMT

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	Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.		Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.

-	All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to ~~satay~~ last in the shower.	+	All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to stay last in the shower.

	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)		--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Platypus at 17:05, 26 April 2020

Platypus — Sun, 26 Apr 2020 17:05:24 GMT

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	Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.		Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.
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		+	All choices in my stories must be choices '''your character''' can make. You can't choose which other girl decides to satay last in the shower.
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	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)		--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Platypus at 16:42, 26 April 2020

Platypus — Sun, 26 Apr 2020 16:42:31 GMT

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	Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.		Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.
-	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)	+	--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Platypus: Created page with 'If you’re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. Also, don’t star…'

Platypus — Sun, 26 Apr 2020 16:42:01 GMT

Created page with 'If you’re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. You may want to review punctuation with dialogue. Also, don’t star…'

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If you’re going to post in one of my stories, please make sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].

Also, don’t start to begin to actions when your characters should just act. Don’t begin to sniff when the character should just sniff. Overusing ‘begin to’ and ‘start to’ simply bog down the action.
--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 16:42, 26 April 2020 (UTC)