User talk:Pepperdude - Revision history

Tiyc88 at 07:07, 5 November 2009

Tiyc88 — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 07:07:51 GMT

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-	Hey I'm ~~new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put~~ this~~. Anyway, I~~ just ~~wanted to say that I hope that~~ you're still working on ~~this. Surprisingly well written for~~ it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this. I forgot to mention that the whole status thing at the bottom with gender, height, weight, inventory, is completely new to me. Really innovative and a great idea, it definitely helps add to the realism and the idea of having choices and doing things. Also it's great to help for subtle hints down the road and to maybe make choices in the beginning matter more and easier to implement later on since you can use them as placeholders to remember what went on.	+	Hey I'm enjoying this story just wondering if you're still working on it.

Tiyc88 at 05:37, 5 November 2009

Tiyc88 — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 05:37:12 GMT

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-	Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this.	+	Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this. I forgot to mention that the whole status thing at the bottom with gender, height, weight, inventory, is completely new to me. Really innovative and a great idea, it definitely helps add to the realism and the idea of having choices and doing things. Also it's great to help for subtle hints down the road and to maybe make choices in the beginning matter more and easier to implement later on since you can use them as placeholders to remember what went on.

Tiyc88 at 05:23, 5 November 2009

Tiyc88 — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 05:23:51 GMT

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	Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.		Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.
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		+	Hey I'm new to using a wiki so I wasn't really sure where to put this. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I hope that you're still working on this. Surprisingly well written for it being a work of erotica. When writing erotic fiction people tend to have really clunky dialogues, or implausible scenarios that ruin the suspension of disbelief. You've done really well with threading the story together and making the characters seem at least plausible. Keep up the good work, and pretty please work on it more? It looks like you haven't been on for a while though so I'm not sure if you'll ever see this.

Pepperdude at 06:47, 19 January 2008

Pepperdude — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 06:47:25 GMT

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	Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.		Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.
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-	Chill out, Pepperdude. I have deleted none of your pages. Look at the notations in the deletion log and move log. I have MOVED certain pages to correct grammatical and punctuation errors in the titles.
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-	~~04:58, 19 January 2008 Platypus deleted "Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch" (correct punctuation)~~
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-	~~04:57, 19 January 2008 Platypus Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch moved to Fuck, this shit is way over my head, bitch (correct punctuation) (revert)~~
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-	~~See? The page still exists, but now the page name is correctly punctuated. Did you notice that my profile says that I'm a grammar Nazi?~~
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-	~~And you know that I hate sex and profanity? What leads you to believe that? I've written the most sexually explicit pages on the site! --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 01:40, 19 January 2008 (EST)~~

Platypus at 06:41, 19 January 2008

Platypus — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 06:41:09 GMT

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	Chill out, Pepperdude. I have deleted none of your pages. Look at the notations in the deletion log and move log. I have MOVED certain pages to correct grammatical and punctuation errors in the titles.		Chill out, Pepperdude. I have deleted none of your pages. Look at the notations in the deletion log and move log. I have MOVED certain pages to correct grammatical and punctuation errors in the titles.
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	04:58, 19 January 2008 Platypus deleted "Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch" (correct punctuation)		04:58, 19 January 2008 Platypus deleted "Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch" (correct punctuation)
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	04:57, 19 January 2008 Platypus Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch moved to Fuck, this shit is way over my head, bitch (correct punctuation) (revert)		04:57, 19 January 2008 Platypus Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch moved to Fuck, this shit is way over my head, bitch (correct punctuation) (revert)
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	See? The page still exists, but now the page name is correctly punctuated. Did you notice that my profile says that I'm a grammar Nazi?		See? The page still exists, but now the page name is correctly punctuated. Did you notice that my profile says that I'm a grammar Nazi?

	And you know that I hate sex and profanity? What leads you to believe that? I've written the most sexually explicit pages on the site! --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 01:40, 19 January 2008 (EST)		And you know that I hate sex and profanity? What leads you to believe that? I've written the most sexually explicit pages on the site! --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 01:40, 19 January 2008 (EST)

Platypus at 06:40, 19 January 2008

Platypus — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 06:40:41 GMT

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	Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.		Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.
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		+	Chill out, Pepperdude. I have deleted none of your pages. Look at the notations in the deletion log and move log. I have MOVED certain pages to correct grammatical and punctuation errors in the titles.
		+	04:58, 19 January 2008 Platypus deleted "Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch" (correct punctuation)
		+	04:57, 19 January 2008 Platypus Fuck, this shit is way over my head bitch moved to Fuck, this shit is way over my head, bitch (correct punctuation) (revert)
		+	See? The page still exists, but now the page name is correctly punctuated. Did you notice that my profile says that I'm a grammar Nazi?
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		+	And you know that I hate sex and profanity? What leads you to believe that? I've written the most sexually explicit pages on the site! --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 01:40, 19 January 2008 (EST)

Pepperdude at 05:04, 18 January 2008

Pepperdude — Fri, 18 Jan 2008 05:04:14 GMT

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Please drop me a message. Either commenting on my works, such as University Daze, or just say hello.