User talk:NeilPower - Revision history

Platypus at 01:08, 20 July 2012

Platypus — Fri, 20 Jul 2012 01:08:45 GMT

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	Try to keep your tenses straight. And try to punctuate your dialogue properly. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 17:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)		Try to keep your tenses straight. And try to punctuate your dialogue properly. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 17:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I'm getting really tired of having to edit every one of these lengthy pages of yours because you can't be bothered with proper English. So either you start learning proper grammar or you add to a story that I'm not as heavily involved with or I start deleting your work. I don't want to have to throw your pages away, but I also don't want stories that I've been working on cluttered with such poor English. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 01:08, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

Platypus at 17:46, 18 July 2012

Platypus — Wed, 18 Jul 2012 17:46:56 GMT

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	One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT)		One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT)
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		+	Try to keep your tenses straight. And try to punctuate your dialogue properly. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 17:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Platypus at 04:01, 9 October 2009

Platypus — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 04:01:36 GMT

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	Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)		Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)
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		+	One more time. Please learn the difference between present tense and past tense. And it's "your vaginal muscles", not "you vagina muscles". --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:01, 8 October 2009 (PDT)

Platypus: Reverted edit of Londonbirder75.141.195.98, changed back to last version by Platypus

Platypus — Thu, 19 Feb 2009 12:19:00 GMT

Reverted edit of Londonbirder75.141.195.98, changed back to last version by Platypus

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-	~~#REDIRECT~~ [[~~AXOLOTL.~~]]	+	Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)
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		+	Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)

Londonbirder75.141.195.98 at 05:35, 19 February 2009

Londonbirder75.141.195.98 — Thu, 19 Feb 2009 05:35:58 GMT

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-	~~Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --~~[[~~User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)~~	+	#REDIRECT [[AXOLOTL.]]
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-	~~Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus~~]] ~~21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)~~	+

Platypus: Reverted edit of Imperator Romanum, changed back to last version by Platypus

Platypus — Mon, 26 Nov 2007 23:55:39 GMT

Reverted edit of Imperator Romanum, changed back to last version by Platypus

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-	~~{{perv}}~~	+	Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)
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		+	Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)

Imperator Romanum at 23:49, 26 November 2007

Imperator Romanum — Mon, 26 Nov 2007 23:49:12 GMT

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-	~~Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)~~	+	{{perv}}
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-	~~Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)~~	+

Platypus at 01:04, 16 August 2007

Platypus — Thu, 16 Aug 2007 01:04:31 GMT

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	Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)		Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)

-	Would you mind terribly ~~use~~ the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)	+	Would you mind terribly using the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)

Platypus at 01:04, 16 August 2007

Platypus — Thu, 16 Aug 2007 01:04:21 GMT

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	Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)		Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)
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		+	Would you mind terribly use the present tense so your pages are like the rest of the story? --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 21:04, 15 August 2007 (EDT)

Platypus at 00:30, 15 August 2007

Platypus — Wed, 15 Aug 2007 00:30:12 GMT

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Just so you know, nearly all the stories here are presented in the present tense, not the past tense. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 20:30, 14 August 2007 (EDT)