User talk:Maniac - Revision history

Platypus at 17:33, 9 April 2015

Platypus — Thu, 09 Apr 2015 17:33:11 GMT

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	And again, try to watch the excessive ''began to''s and make sure to use necessary commas and apostrophes. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:32, 12 March 2015 (UTC)		And again, try to watch the excessive ''began to''s and make sure to use necessary commas and apostrophes. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:32, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
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		+	The penis is STILL not a gland! --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 17:33, 9 April 2015 (UTC)

Platypus at 20:32, 12 March 2015

Platypus — Thu, 12 Mar 2015 20:32:01 GMT

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	- Thank you, all advice is appreciated. [[User:Maniac\|Maniac]]		- Thank you, all advice is appreciated. [[User:Maniac\|Maniac]]
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		+	The penis is not a gland. The head, however, may be referred to as the ''glans''.
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		+	Asking involves questions. When someone barks an order, they are not asking. They are telling or ordering.
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		+	And again, try to watch the excessive ''began to''s and make sure to use necessary commas and apostrophes. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 20:32, 12 March 2015 (UTC)

Maniac at 12:11, 9 March 2015

Maniac — Mon, 09 Mar 2015 12:11:56 GMT

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	Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)		Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

-	Thank you, all advice is appreciated.	+	- Thank you, all advice is appreciated. [[User:Maniac\|Maniac]]

Maniac at 12:10, 9 March 2015

Maniac — Mon, 09 Mar 2015 12:10:53 GMT

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	Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)		Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
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		+	Thank you, all advice is appreciated.

Platypus at 15:42, 8 March 2015

Platypus — Sun, 08 Mar 2015 15:42:46 GMT

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	Instead of ''Soon, your balls start feeling full and you begin to spray your seed down her throat and into her stomach. "Thank you very much sir! My husband has a dick like a baby, he's never fucked me this good." she says'', how's about ''Soon, your balls feel full and you spray your seed down her throat and into her stomach. "Thank you very, much sir! My husband has a dick like a baby. He's never fucked me this good," she says''.		Instead of ''Soon, your balls start feeling full and you begin to spray your seed down her throat and into her stomach. "Thank you very much sir! My husband has a dick like a baby, he's never fucked me this good." she says'', how's about ''Soon, your balls feel full and you spray your seed down her throat and into her stomach. "Thank you very, much sir! My husband has a dick like a baby. He's never fucked me this good," she says''.

-	Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)	+	Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].--[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

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Platypus — Sun, 08 Mar 2015 15:32:41 GMT

Created page with 'Please, let actions happen. Don't begin to start to let actions happen. Use ''began to'' to signify ongoing actions, such as ''it began to rain'', or interrupted actions, such …'

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Please, let actions happen. Don't begin to start to let actions happen. Use ''began to'' to signify ongoing actions, such as ''it began to rain'', or interrupted actions, such as ''I began to open the door, but then...''

Instead of ''Soon, your balls start feeling full and you begin to spray your seed down her throat and into her stomach. "Thank you very much sir! My husband has a dick like a baby, he's never fucked me this good." she says'', how's about ''Soon, your balls feel full and you spray your seed down her throat and into her stomach. "Thank you very, much sir! My husband has a dick like a baby. He's never fucked me this good," she says''.

Yes, also remember to use commas and period properly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 15:32, 8 March 2015 (UTC)