User talk:Jealco - Revision history

Uman at 03:30, 26 December 2015

Uman — Sat, 26 Dec 2015 03:30:08 GMT

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	- Hope to see what you got to add, Uman on October 21st, 2015		- Hope to see what you got to add, Uman on October 21st, 2015
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		+	Alright so after a several month hiatus I am back with loads more contributions to [[The Humiliation of Katie]]. Just want to let you know and ask if you want to add a bit yourself, think of it as the New Year's Initiative - Uman on Dec 25th, 2015

Uman at 19:53, 21 October 2015

Uman — Wed, 21 Oct 2015 19:53:22 GMT

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	Don't really have many at the moment. Was just running with a vague idea of how to describe that particular outfit. I'm game for most anything, to be fair.		Don't really have many at the moment. Was just running with a vague idea of how to describe that particular outfit. I'm game for most anything, to be fair.
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		+	Hello there Jealco, Uman from the Humiliation of Katie. Glad to see someone so enthusiastic about the story XD. I pride myself on writing with good grammar and consistency with the plot. The other authors who contribute I have also found to be mainly the same way. I would really like it if you wanted to help patch the story (I am quite busy too, weekends are when I can do writing for the most part and I have been busy even on weekends as of late.)
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		+	So in answer to your questions.
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		+	1.) I'll take care of the mysterious bra of legend. Thanks for pointing that out, some things are missed when I crank out chapters.
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		+	2.) Yeah if you could perhaps go through and fix up chapters with the bad ages that would be great. Even if you only do one or so every couple days they should all be fixed up rather quickly. I am mainly concerned with her age 16 stuff, but I guess the age 13 stuff needs to be fixed too. I think we could just ret-con everything to being age 18 from those plot lines.
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		+	3.) I'll would really like to see your ideas for really any part of HoK (or any other story of mine for that matter.) I am willing to add onto people's ideas, I usually run off of the rule that I add one chapter for every one I see go up. Sometimes that doesn't happen, but I've had long enough of a break that I think I can get back into it for a while again. Part of the problem is that I am writing sci-fi novels on side, this more "erotic" work is really just practice for my serious stuff. I generally try to get all the ridiculousness, comedy, and sex out here.
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		+	- Hope to see what you got to add, Uman on October 21st, 2015

Jealco at 06:24, 9 June 2015

Jealco — Tue, 09 Jun 2015 06:24:27 GMT

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	What are your plans for this part of the smutty sex romp. I was thinking of contributing.		What are your plans for this part of the smutty sex romp. I was thinking of contributing.
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		+	Don't really have many at the moment. Was just running with a vague idea of how to describe that particular outfit. I'm game for most anything, to be fair.

Downboydown: /* Plans for Fuc Mi Hod */ new section

Downboydown — Mon, 08 Jun 2015 08:27:51 GMT

Plans for Fuc Mi Hod: new section

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	Adding a new choice ("Look for some new nightclothes") is '''not''' a minor edit. There's nothing wrong with the edit per se, but please don't mark such edits as minor. Thanks [[User:Anedwcan\|Anedwcan]] 17:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)		Adding a new choice ("Look for some new nightclothes") is '''not''' a minor edit. There's nothing wrong with the edit per se, but please don't mark such edits as minor. Thanks [[User:Anedwcan\|Anedwcan]] 17:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	== Plans for Fuc Mi Hod ==
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		+	What are your plans for this part of the smutty sex romp. I was thinking of contributing.

Platypus at 11:56, 2 July 2014

Platypus — Wed, 02 Jul 2014 11:56:53 GMT

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	Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)		Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I know you know how to categorize pages. You're still required to do so. So please, don't forget to include the category on the pages you're posting! --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 11:56, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

	== Minor Edits ==		== Minor Edits ==

Anedwcan: /* Minor Edits */ new section

Anedwcan — Mon, 29 Oct 2012 17:03:06 GMT

Minor Edits: new section

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	Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)		Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	== Minor Edits ==
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		+	You edited [[Visit the clothing department]], marking the edit as "minor".
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		+	* Checking the minor edit box signifies that the current and previous versions differ only superficially (typographical corrections, etc.), in a way that no editor would be expected to regard as disputable.
		+	* Any edit that changes the meaning of an article is not a minor edit, even if the edit concerns a single word, and it is improper to mark such an edit as minor.
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		+	Adding a new choice ("Look for some new nightclothes") is '''not''' a minor edit. There's nothing wrong with the edit per se, but please don't mark such edits as minor. Thanks [[User:Anedwcan\|Anedwcan]] 17:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)

Platypus at 12:20, 18 October 2012

Platypus — Thu, 18 Oct 2012 12:20:22 GMT

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	Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)		Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Also, the choices should be choices your character can make, not choices she can't. She can choose to kick her shoes off, but she can't choose where they land unless she's aiming. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 12:20, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Platypus at 09:17, 18 October 2012

Platypus — Thu, 18 Oct 2012 09:17:05 GMT

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	Please review [[Punctuation with dialogue]]. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)		Please review [[Punctuation with dialogue]]. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Please change the location listed in the status bar when your character changes locations. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 09:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Platypus: Created page with 'Please review Punctuation with dialogue. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --~~~~'

Platypus — Wed, 17 Oct 2012 23:12:06 GMT

Created page with 'Please review Punctuation with dialogue. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --~~~~'

New page

Please review [[Punctuation with dialogue]]. You're leaving out commas that you should be using. But otherwise, good contributions. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 23:12, 17 October 2012 (UTC)