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			<title>Platypus at 21:48, 21 May 2012</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Sorry, I've tried to improve since your first comment, and looked at some other pages to kind of get an idea of what I needed to make sure to capitalize, and saw ''You'' capitalized in several spots, so I tried to use them as a guide when working on my own, it seems that was a mistake, but thank you for pointing these things out to me so that I can try to improve. [[User:Igniter|Igniter]] 09:57, 22 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Sorry, I've tried to improve since your first comment, and looked at some other pages to kind of get an idea of what I needed to make sure to capitalize, and saw ''You'' capitalized in several spots, so I tried to use them as a guide when working on my own, it seems that was a mistake, but thank you for pointing these things out to me so that I can try to improve. [[User:Igniter|Igniter]] 09:57, 22 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Mon, 21 May 2012 21:48:19 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Igniter</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Igniter at 16:57, 22 October 2009</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;''You'' is not a proper name.&amp;nbsp; ''You'' is a pronoun.&amp;nbsp; Do not capitalize pronouns in the middle of a sentence. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:45, 22 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;''You'' is not a proper name.&amp;nbsp; ''You'' is a pronoun.&amp;nbsp; Do not capitalize pronouns in the middle of a sentence. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 09:45, 22 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 22 Oct 2009 16:57:14 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Igniter</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Igniter</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 16:45, 22 October 2009</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please capitalize proper names. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:15, 21 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please capitalize proper names. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:15, 21 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 22 Oct 2009 16:45:04 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Igniter</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 13:15, 21 October 2009</title>
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&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please capitalize proper names. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 06:15, 21 October 2009 (PDT)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 13:15:05 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Igniter</comments>		</item>
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