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Platypus at 10:21, 9 March 2016

Platypus — Wed, 09 Mar 2016 10:21:24 GMT

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	What on Earth does that even mean? And make sure you know the difference between ''its'' and ''it's'' --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:20, 9 March 2016 (UTC)		What on Earth does that even mean? And make sure you know the difference between ''its'' and ''it's'' --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:20, 9 March 2016 (UTC)
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		+	Your writing is just not up to my standards. Please don't post in my stories anymore. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:21, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Platypus at 10:20, 9 March 2016

Platypus — Wed, 09 Mar 2016 10:20:04 GMT

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	Please pay attention to verb tense. Don't bounce back and forth between past tense and present. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:19, 2 March 2016 (UTC)		Please pay attention to verb tense. Don't bounce back and forth between past tense and present. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:19, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
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		+	I have never seen the dick once it's inside a girl before!
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		+	What on Earth does that even mean? And make sure you know the difference between ''its'' and ''it's'' --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:20, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Platypus at 10:19, 2 March 2016

Platypus — Wed, 02 Mar 2016 10:19:03 GMT

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	If you're going to post in one of my stories, make sure that the choices are choices your character can make. Since you can't decide how many children you're going to have, those aren't valid choices. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 00:41, 17 September 2015 (UTC)		If you're going to post in one of my stories, make sure that the choices are choices your character can make. Since you can't decide how many children you're going to have, those aren't valid choices. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 00:41, 17 September 2015 (UTC)
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		+	Please pay attention to verb tense. Don't bounce back and forth between past tense and present. --[[User:Platypus\|Platypus]] 10:19, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

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Platypus — Thu, 17 Sep 2015 00:41:13 GMT

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If you're going to post in one of my stories, make sure that the choices are choices your character can make. Since you can't decide how many children you're going to have, those aren't valid choices. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:41, 17 September 2015 (UTC)