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			<title>Yihman1 at 15:24, 24 September 2013</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Good writing is a combination of creative artistry and proper grammar/punctuation.&amp;nbsp; You've got a good enough handle on the creative side for me to welcome your contributions.&amp;nbsp; As for the technical side...&amp;nbsp; Bear in mind that the punctuation guidelines I've posted here aren't merely my choice of style.&amp;nbsp; With a little research, you should be able to easily confirm that they're the rules for the English language and anyone who wants to communicate effectively in English should learn those rules and conform to them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:08, 31 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Good writing is a combination of creative artistry and proper grammar/punctuation.&amp;nbsp; You've got a good enough handle on the creative side for me to welcome your contributions.&amp;nbsp; As for the technical side...&amp;nbsp; Bear in mind that the punctuation guidelines I've posted here aren't merely my choice of style.&amp;nbsp; With a little research, you should be able to easily confirm that they're the rules for the English language and anyone who wants to communicate effectively in English should learn those rules and conform to them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:08, 31 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Tue, 24 Sep 2013 15:24:41 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Yihman1</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Fadpool</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 12:08, 31 July 2013</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you want to post in one of my stories, you need to punctuate properly, not randomly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:54, 31 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;If you want to post in one of my stories, you need to punctuate properly, not randomly. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 00:54, 31 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 31 Jul 2013 12:08:30 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Fadpool</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 00:54, 31 July 2013</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I will keep this in mind.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I will keep this in mind.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 31 Jul 2013 00:54:04 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Fadpool</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Fadpool:&amp;#32;/* Thanks for the link */ new section</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;Thanks for the link:&amp;#32;&lt;/span&gt; new section&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&amp;nbsp; Your approach seems to be fairly random, sometimes correct and sometimes not. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:03, 21 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&amp;nbsp; Your approach seems to be fairly random, sometimes correct and sometimes not. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:03, 21 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sun, 21 Jul 2013 13:01:01 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Fadpool</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Fadpool</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Please review punctuation with dialogue.  Your approach seems to be fairly random, sometimes correct and sometimes not. --~~~~'</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;Please review &lt;a href=&quot;/Create_Your_Own_Story/Punctuation_with_dialogue&quot; title=&quot;Punctuation with dialogue&quot;&gt;punctuation with dialogue&lt;/a&gt;.  Your approach seems to be fairly random, sometimes correct and sometimes not. --~~~~&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please review [[punctuation with dialogue]].  Your approach seems to be fairly random, sometimes correct and sometimes not. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 02:03, 21 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Sun, 21 Jul 2013 02:03:14 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Fadpool</comments>		</item>
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