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		<title>User talk:Don'tmindme - Revision history</title>
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			<title>Platypus at 19:40, 19 February 2016</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Final warning.&amp;nbsp; I'd hate to have to delete your work, because your pages are fundamentally sound, but I don't want to have to edit every page you post before you can't be bothered to punctuate properly. Either get it right or post in someone else's story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:13, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Final warning.&amp;nbsp; I'd hate to have to delete your work, because your pages are fundamentally sound, but I don't want to have to edit every page you post before you can't be bothered to punctuate properly. Either get it right or post in someone else's story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 22:13, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 19 Feb 2016 19:40:37 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Don%27tmindme</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 22:13, 12 February 2016</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Seriously.&amp;nbsp; Grammar matters.&amp;nbsp; Random punctuation and capitalization will get your pages deleted.&amp;nbsp; Also, consider not using ''started to'' when it's unnecessary.&amp;nbsp; Don't make the characters start to begin to do things.&amp;nbsp; Just have them do them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:25, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Seriously.&amp;nbsp; Grammar matters.&amp;nbsp; Random punctuation and capitalization will get your pages deleted.&amp;nbsp; Also, consider not using ''started to'' when it's unnecessary.&amp;nbsp; Don't make the characters start to begin to do things.&amp;nbsp; Just have them do them. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 18:25, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 12 Feb 2016 22:13:01 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Don%27tmindme</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 18:25, 12 February 2016</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please make sure to use proper grammar if you're going to post in one of my stories.&amp;nbsp; You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&amp;nbsp; Commas and capitalization should not be random! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:23, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Please make sure to use proper grammar if you're going to post in one of my stories.&amp;nbsp; You may want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]].&amp;nbsp; Commas and capitalization should not be random! --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 13:23, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 12 Feb 2016 18:25:44 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Don%27tmindme</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 13:23, 12 February 2016</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:25, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:25, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 12 Feb 2016 13:23:43 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Don%27tmindme</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus:&amp;#32;Created page with '{{warn1}}--~~~~'</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;{{warn1}}--~~~~&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;{{warn1}}--[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:25, 12 February 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Fri, 12 Feb 2016 12:25:10 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Don%27tmindme</comments>		</item>
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