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QueenPrisme at 15:12, 13 April 2016

QueenPrisme — Wed, 13 Apr 2016 15:12:20 GMT

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-	Hey, I'm QueenPrisme and find your story very intriguing and would love to help it along. Also, ~~posting~~ a comment so i'm really not sure if I'm doing this correctly. April 13	+	Hey, I'm QueenPrisme and find your story very intriguing and would love to help it along. Also, I've never posted a comment so i'm really not sure if I'm doing this correctly. April 13

QueenPrisme — Wed, 13 Apr 2016 15:11:09 GMT

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-	Hey, I'm QueenPrisme and find your story very intriguing and would love to help it along. Also, posting a comment so i'm really not sure if I'm doing this correctly.	+	Hey, I'm QueenPrisme and find your story very intriguing and would love to help it along. Also, posting a comment so i'm really not sure if I'm doing this correctly. April 13

QueenPrisme — Wed, 13 Apr 2016 15:09:07 GMT

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		+	Hey, I'm QueenPrisme and find your story very intriguing and would love to help it along. Also, posting a comment so i'm really not sure if I'm doing this correctly.

Mewfeuille — Wed, 19 Feb 2014 10:23:26 GMT

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	Fred is a teenager mage (at first he can't cast any spell, but now he can) that escape from his home to explore Glacia. Everything was alright at first, but suddenly it changed when the family wants him back (the family hid him from the outside since he can't cast any spell, it makes lots of people don't know if he is a member of the Fiedlerson). He doesn't want to go back to the house where he was kept away from the outside. It causes "the cat and mouse game" between the family and him.		Fred is a teenager mage (at first he can't cast any spell, but now he can) that escape from his home to explore Glacia. Everything was alright at first, but suddenly it changed when the family wants him back (the family hid him from the outside since he can't cast any spell, it makes lots of people don't know if he is a member of the Fiedlerson). He doesn't want to go back to the house where he was kept away from the outside. It causes "the cat and mouse game" between the family and him.

		+	It should be evil sounding. This is my suggestions:
	*Seven Deadly Soldiers		*Seven Deadly Soldiers
	*The Exiles		*The Exiles

	[[User: Mewfeuille]] 19 Feb		[[User: Mewfeuille]] 19 Feb

Mewfeuille — Wed, 19 Feb 2014 10:22:09 GMT

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	Fred is a teenager mage (at first he can't cast any spell, but now he can) that escape from his home to explore Glacia. Everything was alright at first, but suddenly it changed when the family wants him back (the family hid him from the outside since he can't cast any spell, it makes lots of people don't know if he is a member of the Fiedlerson). He doesn't want to go back to the house where he was kept away from the outside. It causes "the cat and mouse game" between the family and him.		Fred is a teenager mage (at first he can't cast any spell, but now he can) that escape from his home to explore Glacia. Everything was alright at first, but suddenly it changed when the family wants him back (the family hid him from the outside since he can't cast any spell, it makes lots of people don't know if he is a member of the Fiedlerson). He doesn't want to go back to the house where he was kept away from the outside. It causes "the cat and mouse game" between the family and him.
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		+	*Seven Deadly Soldiers
		+	*The Exiles

	[[User: Mewfeuille]] 19 Feb		[[User: Mewfeuille]] 19 Feb

Mewfeuille — Wed, 19 Feb 2014 10:09:27 GMT

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		+	Fred is a teenager mage (at first he can't cast any spell, but now he can) that escape from his home to explore Glacia. Everything was alright at first, but suddenly it changed when the family wants him back (the family hid him from the outside since he can't cast any spell, it makes lots of people don't know if he is a member of the Fiedlerson). He doesn't want to go back to the house where he was kept away from the outside. It causes "the cat and mouse game" between the family and him.
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		+	[[User: Mewfeuille]] 19 Feb

Mewfeuille — Tue, 18 Feb 2014 08:55:25 GMT

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	[[User: Mewfeuille]] 17 Feb		[[User: Mewfeuille]] 17 Feb
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		+	Okay. I'll work on Fred's story. Sorry for having no much progress, but I'm very busy right now. I hope I can make 1 or 2 pages per day.
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Mewfeuille — Mon, 17 Feb 2014 09:19:45 GMT

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	*The Ancient Cave of Rolent/ Eastern Cave (Somewhere in Rolent)		*The Ancient Cave of Rolent/ Eastern Cave (Somewhere in Rolent)
	*The Haunted Hideout/ Southern Hideout (Somewhere in Cray)		*The Haunted Hideout/ Southern Hideout (Somewhere in Cray)
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		+	I haven't found any good names for passageways, sorry. How about making Zuellni lays on the top of mountain? It's better to use 2nd point of view.
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Mewfeuille — Mon, 17 Feb 2014 09:17:47 GMT

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	*Priddy Woods (West of Zuellni, near west gate of Zuellni)		*Priddy Woods (West of Zuellni, near west gate of Zuellni)
	*Ravenwood Forest (Between Lenheim and Carmichael)		*Ravenwood Forest (Between Lenheim and Carmichael)
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		+	Cave:
		+	Known as "The Quadruplets"
		+	*Northern Hole (Somewhere in Carmichael)
		+	*Western Den (Somewhere in Crossbell)
		+	*The Ancient Cave of Rolent/ Eastern Cave (Somewhere in Rolent)
		+	*The Haunted Hideout/ Southern Hideout (Somewhere in Cray)

Mewfeuille — Mon, 17 Feb 2014 09:10:16 GMT

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	Fred is nice, outgoing, and sensitive person. [[User: Mewfeuille]] 13 Feb		Fred is nice, outgoing, and sensitive person. [[User: Mewfeuille]] 13 Feb
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		+	Sorry for answering late. Here they are:
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		+	Forest:
		+	*Jade Forest (West of Landen, near east gate of Zuellni)
		+	*The Forest of Thorns (South of Elfead, near the junction)
		+	*Achyn Forest (Between Satera and Shayford)
		+	*Withered Woods (Between Albarea and Crossbell)
		+	*Hayady Woods (Between Soddon and Rolent)
		+	*Rotted Woods (Between Reinford and Albarea)
		+	*Ilanwrtyw Forest (South of Shayford, near north gate of Zuellni)
		+	*Priddy Woods (West of Zuellni, near west gate of Zuellni)
		+	*Ravenwood Forest (Between Lenheim and Carmichael)