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			<title>Teejay at 15:02, 26 May 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I see you have taken interest in my story, creating an index for players and such, is that some thing I was supposed to handle and over looked? --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 25 May 2011&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I see you have taken interest in my story, creating an index for players and such, is that some thing I was supposed to handle and over looked? --[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 25 May 2011&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 26 May 2011 15:02:38 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Teejay</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Cannon</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Blackdragon25 at 03:50, 26 May 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up.&amp;nbsp; That's one more link spammer blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:27, 8 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up.&amp;nbsp; That's one more link spammer blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:27, 8 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;-&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #ffa; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I see you have taken interest in my story, creating an index for players and such, is that some thing I was supposed to handle and over looked?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I see you have taken interest in my story, creating an index for players and such, is that some thing I was supposed to handle and over looked? &lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;--[[User:Blackdragon25|Blackdragon25]] 25 May 2011&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 26 May 2011 03:50:50 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Blackdragon25</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Cannon</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Blackdragon25 at 03:48, 26 May 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up.&amp;nbsp; That's one more link spammer blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:27, 8 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Thanks for the heads up.&amp;nbsp; That's one more link spammer blocked. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 21:27, 8 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Thu, 26 May 2011 03:48:47 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Blackdragon25</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Cannon</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 21:27, 8 January 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I admit I haven't paid much attention to the Feature Stories.&amp;nbsp; That section wasn't my idea, but I haven't had any objections to having it, so it's stayed.&amp;nbsp; But you're certainly right about Inuyasha's fantasy lands.&amp;nbsp; It's so bad it's almost comical.&amp;nbsp; So I notated on the Previously Featured Stories page that that's exactly what it is: an example of how ''not'' to write a story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:40, 7 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I admit I haven't paid much attention to the Feature Stories.&amp;nbsp; That section wasn't my idea, but I haven't had any objections to having it, so it's stayed.&amp;nbsp; But you're certainly right about Inuyasha's fantasy lands.&amp;nbsp; It's so bad it's almost comical.&amp;nbsp; So I notated on the Previously Featured Stories page that that's exactly what it is: an example of how ''not'' to write a story. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:40, 7 January 2011 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Sat, 08 Jan 2011 21:27:24 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Cannon</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Platypus at 12:40, 7 January 2011</title>
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Hey, just wanted to say that if you still keep editing the [[Invisible]] story, instead of making the links like &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Invisible/Guy/School|Walk to the school.]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; do them like this: &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Invisible/Guy: School|Walk to the school.]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; So just the &amp;quot;title&amp;quot; of the page after &amp;quot;Invisible/Guy: &amp;quot;, otherwise the links become unnecessarily long. --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 17:05, 3 May 2010 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;Hey, just wanted to say that if you still keep editing the [[Invisible]] story, instead of making the links like &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Invisible/Guy/School|Walk to the school.]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; do them like this: &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Invisible/Guy: School|Walk to the school.]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; So just the &amp;quot;title&amp;quot; of the page after &amp;quot;Invisible/Guy: &amp;quot;, otherwise the links become unnecessarily long. --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 17:05, 3 May 2010 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jan 2011 12:40:06 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Cannon</comments>		</item>
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			<title>Dreama:&amp;#32;Created page with 'Hey, just wanted to say that if you still keep editing the Invisible story, instead of making the links like &lt;nowiki&gt;Walk to the school.&lt;/nowiki&gt; do …'</title>
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			<description>&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;#39;Hey, just wanted to say that if you still keep editing the &lt;a href=&quot;/Create_Your_Own_Story/Invisible&quot; title=&quot;Invisible&quot;&gt;Invisible&lt;/a&gt; story, instead of making the links like &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;&lt;a href=&quot;/Create_Your_Own_Story/?title=Invisible/Guy/School&amp;amp;action=edit&amp;amp;redlink=1&quot; class=&quot;new&quot; title=&quot;Invisible/Guy/School (page does not exist)&quot;&gt;Walk to the school.&lt;/a&gt;&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; do …&amp;#39;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;Hey, just wanted to say that if you still keep editing the [[Invisible]] story, instead of making the links like &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Invisible/Guy/School|Walk to the school.]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; do them like this: &amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Invisible/Guy: School|Walk to the school.]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt; So just the &amp;quot;title&amp;quot; of the page after &amp;quot;Invisible/Guy: &amp;quot;, otherwise the links become unnecessarily long. --[[User:Dreama|Dreama]] 17:05, 3 May 2010 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 03 May 2010 17:05:33 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Dreama</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Cannon</comments>		</item>
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