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		<title>User talk:Asdf1234 - Revision history</title>
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			<title>Platypus at 12:23, 14 December 2016</title>
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		&lt;td colspan='2' style=&quot;background-color: white; color:black;&quot;&gt;←Older revision&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I recommend proofreading your writing and making sure your writing is good enough before adding to Smutty Sex Romp. It is the admin's personal story, and he gets growly when others add to it when they make lots of mistakes. I have corrected your mistakes for you, but I recommend you to either be very careful when adding to it, or to not write in it. Not sure if he will accept after my corrections, but it is the best I can do. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 14 December 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #eee; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;I recommend proofreading your writing and making sure your writing is good enough before adding to Smutty Sex Romp. It is the admin's personal story, and he gets growly when others add to it when they make lots of mistakes. I have corrected your mistakes for you, but I recommend you to either be very careful when adding to it, or to not write in it. Not sure if he will accept after my corrections, but it is the best I can do. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 14 December 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot;&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class='diff-marker'&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background: #cfc; color:black; font-size: smaller;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;ins style=&quot;color: red; font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;&quot;&gt;Yes, please, don't post in my stories unless you can write using proper grammar and punctuation.&amp;nbsp; You might want to review [[punctuation with dialogue]]. --[[User:Platypus|Platypus]] 12:23, 14 December 2016 (UTC)&lt;/ins&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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			<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2016 12:23:49 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>Platypus</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Asdf1234</comments>		</item>
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			<title>DirtyMeStoryTime:&amp;#32;Note</title>
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&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;I recommend proofreading your writing and making sure your writing is good enough before adding to Smutty Sex Romp. It is the admin's personal story, and he gets growly when others add to it when they make lots of mistakes. I have corrected your mistakes for you, but I recommend you to either be very careful when adding to it, or to not write in it. Not sure if he will accept after my corrections, but it is the best I can do. --[[User:DirtyMeStoryTime|Dirty Me]] 07:48, 14 December 2016 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</description>
			<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2016 07:48:35 GMT</pubDate>			<dc:creator>DirtyMeStoryTime</dc:creator>			<comments>http://72.14.177.54/Create_Your_Own_Story/User_talk:Asdf1234</comments>		</item>
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