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Grandluber at 23:35, 7 March 2013

Grandluber — Thu, 07 Mar 2013 23:35:23 GMT

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-	You walk to the next house, hoping it won't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens up.	+	You walk to the next house, hoping it won't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens.

	"Hi and-"		"Hi and-"

-	It's another girl. This time, it's a teenage-looking girl, ~~kind of like~~ your age. She is wearing pink ~~pyjamas~~ with pictures of clouds.	+	It's another girl. This time, it's a teenage-looking girl, around your age. She is wearing pink pajamas with pictures of clouds.

-	"Just looking for a place to sleep~~, lady~~," you say. "Can I stay here?"	+	"Just looking for a place to sleep," you say. "Can I stay here?"

-	"Uhh sure!" she ~~says and~~ leads you inside.	+	"Uhh, sure!" she leads you inside.
-		+
-	~~The house is very clean. She brings you to the lounge room. It's not as clean, but cleaner than most lounge rooms~~.	+

		+	The house is very clean. She brings you to an Lived-in lounge.

	"Want to watch TV?" the girl asks.		"Want to watch TV?" the girl asks.

Platypus at 11:22, 15 May 2009

Platypus — Fri, 15 May 2009 11:22:38 GMT

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-	You walk to the next house~~. Hoping~~ it ~~wouldn~~'t be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens up.	+	You walk to the next house, hoping it won't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens up.

	"Hi and-"		"Hi and-"

-	~~Its~~ another girl. This time, ~~its~~ a teenage looking girl, kind of like your age. She is wearing pink pyjamas with pictures of clouds.	+	It's another girl. This time, it's a teenage-looking girl, kind of like your age. She is wearing pink pyjamas with pictures of clouds.

-	"Just looking for a place to sleep lady."~~You~~ say."Can I stay here?"	+	"Just looking for a place to sleep, lady," you say. "Can I stay here?"

-	"Uhh sure!" ~~She~~ says and leads you inside.	+	"Uhh sure!" she says and leads you inside.

-	The house is very clean~~, she~~ brings you to the lounge room. ~~Its~~ not as clean, but cleaner than most lounge rooms.	+	The house is very clean. She brings you to the lounge room. It's not as clean, but cleaner than most lounge rooms.


-	"Want to watch TV?"~~The~~ girl asks.	+	"Want to watch TV?" the girl asks.

-	*[[No, I just want to go to bed]]	+	*"[[No, I just want to go to bed]]."
-	*[[That'll be great!]]	+	*"[[That'll be great!]]"

	[[Category: All Alone]]		[[Category: All Alone]]

Unkowhero23 at 10:09, 15 May 2009

Unkowhero23 — Fri, 15 May 2009 10:09:48 GMT

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You walk to the next house. Hoping it wouldn't be like the other 2 houses. You knock on the door and wait till somebody answers. The door opens up.

"Hi and-"

Its another girl. This time, its a teenage looking girl, kind of like your age. She is wearing pink pyjamas with pictures of clouds.

"Just looking for a place to sleep lady."You say."Can I stay here?"

"Uhh sure!" She says and leads you inside.

The house is very clean, she brings you to the lounge room. Its not as clean, but cleaner than most lounge rooms.

"Want to watch TV?"The girl asks.

*[[No, I just want to go to bed]]
*[[That'll be great!]]

[[Category: All Alone]]