Time Vortex - Revision history

Platypus at 15:49, 9 June 2008

Platypus — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 15:49:01 GMT

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-	The year is ~~3000~~. you are ~~on Choose~~ your ~~own adventure~~. You ~~see~~ a ~~story called Time vortex~~.	+	The year is 2000, and today is your twelfth birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper. It is unmarked, but since it is your birthday, you assume that the gift must be for you.
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		+	"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design. Yet, as you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.
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		+	"I must just be imagining things," you tell yourself.
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		+	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you. Something seems terribly amiss. On the other hand, it could just be nothing. The watch does look very nice...
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		+	What do you do with the watch?
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	Do you:		Do you:
-	*[[Time Vortex/~~Click on Time Vortex~~\|~~Click on Time Vortex~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/go to ~~a different story~~\|go to ~~a different story~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/~~jump out a window~~\|~~jump out a window~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the ~~computer~~\|Destroy the ~~computer~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the watch]]
	[[Category:Time Vortex]]		[[Category:Time Vortex]]

Burrito19 at 15:28, 9 June 2008

Burrito19 — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 15:28:18 GMT

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-	The year is ~~2000, and today is your twelfth birthday~~. ~~After hours of parties, games and gift-giving,~~ you are ~~exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under~~ your ~~pillow~~. You ~~grope under your pillow; you find~~ a ~~small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper~~. ~~It is unmarked, but since it is your birthday, you assume that the gift must be for you.~~	+	The year is 3000. you are on Choose your own adventure. You see a story called Time vortex.
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-	"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design. Yet, as you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.	+
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-	~~"I must just be imagining things," you tell yourself.~~	+
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-	~~Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you. Something seems terribly amiss. On the other hand, it could just be nothing. The watch does look very nice...~~	+
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-	~~What do you do with the watch?~~	+
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	Do you:		Do you:
-	*[[Time Vortex/~~Fiddle with the hands~~\|~~Fiddle with the hands~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Click on Time Vortex\|Click on Time Vortex]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/~~Check~~ to ~~see if it's working~~\|~~Check~~ to ~~see if it's working~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/go to a different story\|go to a different story]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/~~Throw it in the bin~~\|~~Throw it into the bin~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/jump out a window\|jump out a window]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the ~~Watch~~\|Destroy the ~~watch~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the computer\|Destroy the computer]]
	[[Category:Time Vortex]]		[[Category:Time Vortex]]

Rachelune at 06:13, 4 January 2008

Rachelune — Fri, 04 Jan 2008 06:13:32 GMT

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-	The year is 2000, and today is your birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper. It is unmarked, but since it is your birthday, you assume that the gift must be for you.	+	The year is 2000, and today is your twelfth birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper. It is unmarked, but since it is your birthday, you assume that the gift must be for you.

Rachelune at 13:26, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:26:28 GMT

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-	The year is 2000, and today is your birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper.	+	The year is 2000, and today is your birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper. It is unmarked, but since it is your birthday, you assume that the gift must be for you.

Rachelune at 13:23, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:23:18 GMT

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-	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you. Something seems amiss~~, even dangerous~~. On the other hand, it could just be nothing.	+	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you. Something seems terribly amiss. On the other hand, it could just be nothing. The watch does look very nice...

Rachelune at 13:21, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:21:51 GMT

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-	"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design~~, and you seem mesmerized~~. As you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.	+	"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design. Yet, as you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.


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-	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you.	+	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you. Something seems amiss, even dangerous. On the other hand, it could just be nothing.

Rachelune at 13:20, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:20:32 GMT

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	*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]		*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]		*[[Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the ~~Watch~~]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the watch]]
	[[Category:Time Vortex]]		[[Category:Time Vortex]]

Rachelune at 13:19, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:19:52 GMT

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	*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]		*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]		*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it ~~into~~ the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the Watch]]		*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the Watch]]
	[[Category:Time Vortex]]		[[Category:Time Vortex]]

Rachelune at 13:17, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:17:40 GMT

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	The year is 2000, and today is your birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper.		The year is 2000, and today is your birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper.
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	"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design, and you seem mesmerized. As you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.		"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design, and you seem mesmerized. As you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.
		+

	"I must just be imagining things," you tell yourself.		"I must just be imagining things," you tell yourself.
		+

	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you.		Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you.
		+

	What do you do with the watch?		What do you do with the watch?
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	Do you:		Do you:

Rachelune at 13:16, 2 January 2008

Rachelune — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 13:16:42 GMT

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-	~~You have gotten a watch for your birthday.~~ The year is 2000. ~~Something~~ about ~~it feels~~ a ~~bit strange~~, ~~but~~ you think you ~~are~~ imagining it. What do you do with the watch?	+	The year is 2000, and today is your birthday. After hours of parties, games and gift-giving, you are exhausted, so you go to bed. Just as you were about to sleep, you feel that something is hidden under your pillow. You grope under your pillow; you find a small box enveloped in a colorful wrapper.
		+
		+	"Must be a gift from Dad and Mom," you think to yourself. You unwrap the gift; it's a watch with a retro design. Still, though it looks outdated, you marvel at the beauty of its design, and you seem mesmerized. As you stare at the watch, a haunting feeling creeps on your back. You shake your head, trying to shrug off the uncomfortable feeling.
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		+	"I must just be imagining things," you tell yourself.
		+
		+	Yet the strange feeling doesn't leave you.
		+
		+	What do you do with the watch?

	Do you:		Do you:
	*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]		*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]		*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin\|Throw it in the bin]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it into the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the Watch]]		*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the Watch]]
	[[Category:Time Vortex]]		[[Category:Time Vortex]]

←Older revision		Revision as of 13:19, 2 January 2008
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	*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]		*[[Time Vortex/Fiddle with the hands\|Fiddle with the hands]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]		*[[Time Vortex/Check to see if it's working\|Check to see if it's working]]
-	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it ~~into~~ the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]	+	*[[Time Vortex/Throw it in the bin\|Throw it into the bin]]
	*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the Watch]]		*[[Time Vortex/Destroy the Watch\|Destroy the Watch]]
	[[Category:Time Vortex]]		[[Category:Time Vortex]]