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TheElderOnes: Minor re-writing and spelling. Mezzo, feel free to revert this if you prefer the old version.

TheElderOnes — Sun, 06 Nov 2011 06:34:43 GMT

Minor re-writing and spelling. Mezzo, feel free to revert this if you prefer the old version.

←Older revision		Revision as of 06:34, 6 November 2011
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-	~~you~~ wake up.~~.. it~~ was morning, ~~however~~ you didn't feel that powerful... ~~you felt like you normally do~~	+	You wake up. It was morning, but you didn't feel that powerful. You felt... normal.

-	~~you~~ found an envelope on your bedside table ~~you~~ tear it open ~~and read the letter~~	+	You found an envelope on your bedside table. You tear it open, pulling a folded sheet of paper out.

-	"Time Stopping ~~for dummys~~" you read aloud	+	"Time Stopping For Dummies" you read aloud.

-	"Real mature" you say rolling your eyes	+	"Real mature" you say, rolling your eyes as you unfolded the paper.

-	"Stopping time ~~can be done easily by snapping~~ your fingers.~~.. in~~ the event you have no fingers please contact Cronus"	+	"Stopping and resuming time is simple! Just snap your fingers and do what you please. (In the event you have no fingers please contact Cronus)"

-	~~"Whilst time is stopped you will have complete control over the enviroment~~... ~~any pain inflicted to a frozen persons body will be immediatly felt after restarting time (by snapping fingers again)~~.~~.. please note that if you wish for someone to join in a time stop than all you have to do is press your thumb against thier forehead."~~	+	Hmm... doesn't seem too hard.

-	"Interesting" you smile	+	"Whilst time is stopped you will have complete control over the environment. Any pain inflicted to a frozen person will immediately register after restarting time. Please note that if you wish for someone to join you in a time stop, all you have to do is press your thumb against their forehead."
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		+	"Interesting..." you smile.

	What will you do now?		What will you do now?

Mezzo at 13:52, 10 October 2011

Mezzo — Mon, 10 Oct 2011 13:52:00 GMT

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	"Real mature" you say rolling your eyes		"Real mature" you say rolling your eyes

-	"Stopping time can be done easily by snapping your fingers... in the ~~even~~ you have no fingers please contact Cronus"	+	"Stopping time can be done easily by snapping your fingers... in the event you have no fingers please contact Cronus"

	"Whilst time is stopped you will have complete control over the enviroment... any pain inflicted to a frozen persons body will be immediatly felt after restarting time (by snapping fingers again)... please note that if you wish for someone to join in a time stop than all you have to do is press your thumb against thier forehead."		"Whilst time is stopped you will have complete control over the enviroment... any pain inflicted to a frozen persons body will be immediatly felt after restarting time (by snapping fingers again)... please note that if you wish for someone to join in a time stop than all you have to do is press your thumb against thier forehead."

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you wake up... it was morning, however you didn't feel that powerful... you felt like you normally do

you found an envelope on your bedside table you tear it open and read the letter

"Time Stopping for dummys" you read aloud

"Real mature" you say rolling your eyes

"Stopping time can be done easily by snapping your fingers... in the even you have no fingers please contact Cronus"

"Whilst time is stopped you will have complete control over the enviroment... any pain inflicted to a frozen persons body will be immediatly felt after restarting time (by snapping fingers again)... please note that if you wish for someone to join in a time stop than all you have to do is press your thumb against thier forehead."

"Interesting" you smile

What will you do now?

*[[Time Stopper/School| Go to school... humiliate the people that have given you hell.]]

*[[Time Stopper/City|Head to the city and stir up its peaceful atmosphere.]]

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